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Rie Murakawa - Asuiro (TV size)

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-Atri-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年1月10日 at 16:57:51

Artist: Rie Murakawa
Title: Asuiro (TV size)
Source: エスカ&ロジーのアトリエ
Tags: 黄昏の空の錬金術士 Escha & Logy no Atelier: Tasogare no Sora no Renkinjutsushi A15 Alchemists of the Dusk Sky opening KuranteMelodii krt Suzuki_1112 LowComboFC LCFC Moecho Moeri Pata-mon Asuka_-
BPM: 185
Filesize: 18633kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. 1112's Another (4.98 stars, 352 notes)
  2. Asuka_-'s Normal (2.27 stars, 203 notes)
  3. Collab Easy (1.58 stars, 114 notes)
  4. Existence (5.4 stars, 375 notes)
  5. Moecho's Insane (4.58 stars, 299 notes)
  6. Pata-Mon's Hard (3.44 stars, 246 notes)
Download: Rie Murakawa - Asuiro (TV size)
Download: Rie Murakawa - Asuiro (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Banner by me

Beatmap Pack #607

3rd ranked mapset

2014 Spring anime opening

Shitty full ver: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/627636

Easy:Me and LowComboFC
Normal: Asuka_-
Hard: Pata-mon
Insane: Moecho
Another: Suzuki_1112
Existence: Me


Sorry, this map is impossible to FC with DT.

Ending: Shimotsuki Haruka - Fuyumidori (TV size) by Lanturn

timemon
Hello, M4M from your queue

[Existence]
00:01:982 (2) - the red tick is louder. This one should be clickable object, just make it 2 circles.
00:07:982 (4,5) - stack
00:11:874 (5) - move it a little so you could blanket it with the slider
00:13:496 - why not map the vocal as well? it will make it exactly 1/1 gap
00:19:009 (4,5) - this one should be a triplet
00:46:577 (5,3,4,5) - blanket is off
00:52:901 (5,6) - I think you could make these sliders look symmetrical

where are the other diffs lol

Good luck with your mapset
Topic Starter
-Atri-

timemon wrote:

Hello, M4M from your queue

[Existence]
00:01:982 (2) - the red tick is louder. This one should be clickable object, just make it 2 circles.
00:07:982 (4,5) - stack
00:11:874 (5) - move it a little so you could blanket it with the slider :arrow: No, i like the triangle pattern
00:13:496 - why not map the vocal as well? it will make it exactly 1/1 gap :arrow: Sudden stop on the instrument
00:19:009 (4,5) - this one should be a triplet :arrow: I wanted to follow the piano here
00:46:577 (5,3,4,5) - blanket is off
00:52:901 (5,6) - I think you could make these sliders look symmetrical

where are the other diffs lol

Good luck with your mapset
Other fixed
Thanks for the mod~
Milan-
saw this on your queue for m4m, so my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/617721

the only diff:
-00:13:172 (4) - drum whistle sounds cooler imo
-00:17:226 (1,2) - these dont feel complementary to each other.. like you go wub into a linear slider with linear flow, maybe something more circular?
-00:19:496 (7,8) - as slider sounds better, the piano ends on (7) so keeping using circles doesnt fit too nicely
-00:26:955 (1) - clap on this calm section sounds out of place, using normal sampleset would be better i think
-00:38:469 (2,3,4) - considering you have these 1/2 circles spaced everywhere in the section, it may be better doing the same here as well
-00:43:172 (1,2) - could do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259284 xd
-00:44:631 (2) - i'd use 1/4 slider here. you use a high sv but all the momentum stops with this circle, in addition that there's a drum track in the background
-00:55:009 (2,3) - swapping these would be neat, so there's more movement in the cursor and it doesnt stop at the slider's end
-00:55:658 (1) - also consider extending this slider till 00:56:063 - . like you ignore drums and vocals by not mapping 00:55:820 - , it makes sense to extend it in this case. or even triple like 01:16:415 (1,2) - i guess it works
-01:00:685 (4,5,1) - shouldnt (1) be more spaced than (5)? because downbeat and higher pitch voice
-01:20:307 (4,1) - for the ~aesthetics~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259341
-01:22:091 - dont start the volumen change here, it's so disorienting when the crash in the music is louder than the crash on the hitsounds ><
-01:26:955 (7,1) - stack on the last note is kinda underwhelming imo, maybe place (1) in the middle of your triangle? would be nice

you s hould take pkhg's diff from his mapset xd
Topic Starter
-Atri-

Milan- wrote:

saw this on your queue for m4m, so my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/617721

the only diff:
-00:13:172 (4) - drum whistle sounds cooler imo :arrow: Let's give it a shot
-00:17:226 (1,2) - these dont feel complementary to each other.. like you go wub into a linear slider with linear flow, maybe something more circular? :arrow: Interestingly, those kind of flow transition plays well imo
-00:19:496 (7,8) - as slider sounds better, the piano ends on (7) so keeping using circles doesnt fit too nicely :arrow: Tru
-00:26:955 (1) - clap on this calm section sounds out of place, using normal sampleset would be better i think :arrow: sure
-00:38:469 (2,3,4) - considering you have these 1/2 circles spaced everywhere in the section, it may be better doing the same here as well :arrow: Changed, since i don't think there's a reason to keep this one, too
-00:43:172 (1,2) - could do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259284 xd :arrow: Sure
-00:44:631 (2) - i'd use 1/4 slider here. you use a high sv but all the momentum stops with this circle, in addition that there's a drum track in the background :arrow: Sure, as but can emphasize those heavy notes
-00:55:009 (2,3) - swapping these would be neat, so there's more movement in the cursor and it doesnt stop at the slider's end :arrow: After lots of testing, changed as your suggestion makes easier to get 300's
-00:55:658 (1) - also consider extending this slider till 00:56:063 - . like you ignore drums and vocals by not mapping 00:55:820 - , it makes sense to extend it in this case. or even triple like 01:16:415 (1,2) - i guess it works :arrow: Changed, although the consistency with 01:16:091 (3,1) - is questionable
-01:00:685 (4,5,1) - shouldnt (1) be more spaced than (5)? because downbeat and higher pitch voice :arrow: I prefer the consistent spacing of Large-small spacing with 00:58:091 (4,5,1) - ,thus, i can't think out any solution of this one without making those slider ugly and awkward
-01:20:307 (4,1) - for the ~aesthetics~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259341 :arrow: ok
-01:22:091 - dont start the volumen change here, it's so disorienting when the crash in the music is louder than the crash on the hitsounds >< :arrow: Yeah i forgot it
-01:26:955 (7,1) - stack on the last note is kinda underwhelming imo, maybe place (1) in the middle of your triangle? would be nice :arrow: I prefer stacking it as there's a pause before that

you s hould take pkhg's diff from his mapset xd
Thanks for the nice mod~
Seolv
shit mod, M4M from your queue :3


00:02:226 - Spinner maybe? or make previous circle some kind of cool slider art, idk xd
00:13:172 (4) - Make it a little bit more emphasized with spacing, since there's a emphasized sound there
00:24:361 (2) - This might confuse a lot of players, maybe use different rhythm, something along the lines of this
00:25:009 (6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - This part is overall very calm and calmer than the previous parts, maybe try to use less spacing for your jumps or less density to reflect the music bette
00:55:658 (1) - Would be cool if this was the same slider shape as the sliders before it, just a suggestion
00:56:063 (2) - There's no sound on this tick.

Short mod, there really wasn't much to say overall but it's good for now.
My ability of modding higher diffs isn't very good and I know that, I'm sorry if this mod was bad but I was really trying my best, here's the map for M4M: t/584974/start=0
Thanks~
Topic Starter
-Atri-

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

shit mod, M4M from your queue :3


00:02:226 - Spinner maybe? or make previous circle some kind of cool slider art, idk xd :arrow: imo i don't hear a supportable sound to do that
00:13:172 (4) - Make it a little bit more emphasized with spacing, since there's a emphasized sound there :arrow: It's emphasized enough though, by adding a stronger whistle and ignoring the vocal at 00:13:496 -
00:24:361 (2) - This might confuse a lot of players, maybe use different rhythm, something along the lines of this :arrow: Nope, switching instruments :p
00:25:009 (6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - This part is overall very calm and calmer than the previous parts, maybe try to use less spacing for your jumps or less density to reflect the music better :arrow: No, i really like this part, besides, the distance has been smaller compared to the previous parts
00:55:658 (1) - Would be cool if this was the same slider shape as the sliders before it, just a suggestion :arrow: I prefer the current asthetics
00:56:063 (2) - There's no sound on this tick. :arrow: Extended the previous slider
Short mod, there really wasn't much to say overall but it's good for now.
My ability of modding higher diffs isn't very good and I know that, I'm sorry if this mod was bad but I was really trying my best, here's the map for M4M: t/584974/start=0
Thanks~
Thanks for the mod~
Mei
我很抱歉,我剛才
Topic Starter
-Atri-

Mei wrote:

我很抱歉,我剛才
和愛絲卡醬上床了
Otosaka-Yu
gee
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:アスイロ
Artist:Rie Murakawa
ArtistUnicode:村川梨衣
Creator:Firis Mistlud
Version:1112's Another
Source:エスカ&ロジーのアトリエ~黄昏の空の錬金術士~
Tags:Escha & Logy no Atelier: Tasogare no Sora no Renkinjutsushi A15 Alchemists of the Dusk Sky opening KuranteMelodii krt Suzuki_1112 LowComboFC LCFC Moecho Moeri Pata-mon Asuka_-
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Topic Starter
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Chatlog with Sophie sensei
2017-06-10 01:37 Firis Mistlud: Hi Sophie sensei
2017-06-10 01:40 SophieNM: oh Firis
2017-06-10 01:40 SophieNM: sry for late
2017-06-10 01:40 SophieNM: busy doing alchemy stuff
2017-06-10 01:41 Firis Mistlud: Can i ask you for a testplay?
2017-06-10 01:41 SophieNM: np
2017-06-10 01:41 Firis Mistlud: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1261245 Rie Murakawa - Asuiro]
2017-06-10 01:47 SophieNM: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1261245 Rie Murakawa - Asuiro]
2017-06-10 01:47 SophieNM: fking internet in Kirchen Bell
2017-06-10 01:47 SophieNM: 仆街網速
2017-06-10 01:47 Firis Mistlud: lol
2017-06-10 01:47 Firis Mistlud: Ertona is no better ah
2017-06-10 01:49 Firis Mistlud: Nice sophie
2017-06-10 01:49 Firis Mistlud: Almost FC
2017-06-10 01:50 SophieNM: diu
2017-06-10 01:50 SophieNM: on9 shitmiss
2017-06-10 01:50 Firis Mistlud: Better then me
2017-06-10 01:50 Firis Mistlud: I can't pass ah
2017-06-10 01:51 SophieNM: hmmmmmmmmm
2017-06-10 01:52 SophieNM: 00:14:145 (3,4,5) -
2017-06-10 01:52 SophieNM: .
2017-06-10 01:52 Firis Mistlud: ?
2017-06-10 01:52 SophieNM: 3/4 slider then triple
2017-06-10 01:52 SophieNM: almost miss D:
2017-06-10 01:52 Firis Mistlud: This part is so fine
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: Easy to read
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: I asked someone about this
2017-06-10 01:53 SophieNM: 00:25:009 - pro la firis
2017-06-10 01:53 SophieNM: when teach
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: No you teach me
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: Your alchemy better than me
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: orz
2017-06-10 01:54 SophieNM: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
2017-06-10 01:55 SophieNM: 01:22:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - -.-
2017-06-10 01:55 Firis Mistlud: lol
2017-06-10 01:55 Firis Mistlud: Monstrata jumps
2017-06-10 01:55 SophieNM: other than that, nice map
2017-06-10 01:56 Firis Mistlud: Your map is better than me ah sophie
2017-06-10 01:56 Firis Mistlud: So does your alchemy skills
2017-06-10 01:56 SophieNM: no i am noob
2017-06-10 01:56 SophieNM: when take alchemy exam ah
2017-06-10 01:56 Firis Mistlud: lol
2017-06-10 01:57 Firis Mistlud: Next week :p
2017-06-10 01:58 SophieNM: .
2017-06-10 01:58 SophieNM: go study la dllm
2017-06-10 01:58 SophieNM: or i will slap you in your butt
2017-06-10 01:58 SophieNM: D:<
2017-06-10 01:58 Firis Mistlud: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
_Yiiiii
Existence
  1. 00:04:253 (1) - 这个感觉好快啊,一下子让人反应不过来,可以在滑条头那里折一下,这样从开头比较慢的部分过度过来会自然一点。
  2. 哇你日常开DS,这段开DS感觉好别扭啊,小心被搞。
  3. 00:24:361 (2) - 换个更突然点的方式出这个圈吧,现在这样不适合那下镲的音,可以试试这样
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  4. 01:00:685 (4,5) - 真心觉得这间距大了。
  5. 01:01:334 (1) - flow再暴力一点吧,换一个别手点的弧形吧。
  6. 01:21:442 (4,5,6,7) - 这个角度的四方很别扭,再斜一点。
  7. 01:26:955 (7,1) - 别叠了,用大间距吧,空的那一拍一直是有音的,这样有点别扭。
1112's Another
  1. 00:35:063 (2,3) - DS???????等死吧
  2. 00:40:739 (2,1) - 擦边
  3. 00:40:577 (1,2,3,1) - 这个变距打着很不爽。
  4. 00:52:901 (1,2) - 这俩之间几乎直线flow再加这么打间距打起来一点感觉都没有,弄那么大间距除了骗人掉个cb以外没任何作用。
  5. 01:01:172 (4,1,2) - flow不好,滑条别扭了,找个合适位置放个弧就得了。
Moecho's Insane
  1. 00:33:928 (4,5) - 为什么要这么大间距?还是直着过去的... 00:34:334 (5,1) - 把圈叠在这个尾上大概会好点,不过可能对于spread来说不太合适。
  2. 00:34:415 (1,3) - 包好
萌球这个风格好西方化啊orz 无话可说
再往下懒得摸了
Otosaka-Yu

_Yiiiii wrote:

1112's Another
  1. 00:35:063 (2,3) - DS???????等死吧 你是不是只有那么几句台词
  2. 00:40:739 (2,1) - 擦边 没关系
  3. 00:40:577 (1,2,3,1) - 这个变距打着很不爽。 你这么说我就没办法了,我觉得还好。不爽不要玩
  4. 00:52:901 (1,2) - 这俩之间几乎直线flow再加这么打间距打起来一点感觉都没有,弄那么大间距除了骗人掉个cb以外没任何作用。改近点了,直线有什么问题?掉cb的人让他们不爽不要玩
  5. 01:01:172 (4,1,2) - flow不好,滑条别扭了,找个合适位置放个弧就得了。
谢摸
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Topic Starter
-Atri-

_Yiiiii wrote:

Existence
  1. 00:04:253 (1) - 这个感觉好快啊,一下子让人反应不过来,可以在滑条头那里折一下,这样从开头比较慢的部分过度过来会自然一点。 :arrow: 感覺都是刪除了好些
  2. 哇你日常开DS,这段开DS感觉好别扭啊,小心被搞。其實我沒有用DS只不過是複製貼上
  3. 00:24:361 (2) - 换个更突然点的方式出这个圈吧,现在这样不适合那下镲的音,可以试试这样 :arrow: 用了別的方法去改
    code
    448,120,23712,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    448,120,23874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    278,245,24036,2,0,B|162:238|162:238|202:262,1,156.750004783631
    305,245,24361,1,4,1:2:0:0:
  4. 01:00:685 (4,5) - 真心觉得这间距大了。 :arrow: 這種順flow的滑條的話不易斷
  5. 01:01:334 (1) - flow再暴力一点吧,换一个别手点的弧形吧。 :arrow: 換了另個滑條
  6. 01:21:442 (4,5,6,7) - 这个角度的四方很别扭,再斜一点。 :arrow: 不,覺得現在的美觀好些
  7. 01:26:955 (7,1) - 别叠了,用大间距吧,空的那一拍一直是有音的,这样有点别扭。 :arrow: ok
謝摸~
Topic Starter
-Atri-
Added hard and ready for mod
scanter
hello everyone o/ sorry in advance if my english is shit

General
  1. volume seems too low. it should be turned up 10~20% degrees
  2. insane AR 9, Another AR 9.3, but extra is 9?
Collab Easy
  1. AR 3~3.5? normal is 5, but easy is 2?
  2. 00:29:550 - useless green line
  3. 00:30:361 - looks like an incorrect timing line
  4. 00:43:172 (1) - finish + clap or finish seems better imo
  5. 01:22:253 - 01:22:415 - 01:22:577 - 01:24:199 - 01:24:361 - 01:24:523 - 01:25:496 - 01:25:820 - 01:26:793 - 01:26:955 - same as 00:29:550
Asuka_-'s Normal
  1. 00:02:955 - useless green line
  2. 00:44:874 - 00:45:685 - same as 00:02:955
  3. 01:05:388 - rhythm seems too empty compared with before.
  4. 01:22:577 - 01:23:874 - 01:25:496 - 01:25:820 - 01:26:469 - same as 00:02:955
  5. 01:27:280 - NC?
Pata-Mon's Hard
  1. 01:12:036 - normal sampleset
  2. 01:19:496 (1) - the distance seems too large compared with before.
  3. 01:22:091 - finish
Moecho's Insane
  1. AR 9.3 seems better to play, because you used 1/4 jumps many
  2. 00:13:820 (1,2) - actually clap isn't 00:14:145 here, but 00:14:307 here.
  3. 00:18:847 (1) - it seems too 1/4 rhythm. what about increase the distance more?
  4. 00:20:631 (5) - what about changing 2 circles or other patterns? the slider at the end of clap isn't good for play imo.
  5. 00:30:199 (1,1) - rhythm was pulled forward.
  6. 01:19:172 - 01:27:280 - that hitsounds lol
1112's Another
  1. 00:06:685 (6) - it seems a little uncomfortable to play. the route is almost linear. what about at least move 00:06:685 (6) to x:294, y:27?
  2. 00:28:577 - what about adding a circle here? you followed almost vocals here and I can hear nani kaga ma at te iru yo lol
  3. 00:40:577 (1) - seems a little close. what about spread the distance more?
  4. 01:11:063 (4,5) - reverse rhythm? the slider at the end of clap isn't good for play imo.
  5. 01:22:415 - 01:27:118 - hitsounds feel so empty.
Existence
  1. 00:13:496 - add a circle? feels so empty
  2. 00:24:523 (4) - what about changing 2 circles? feels too uncomfortable, because there is clap in slider's end.
  3. 00:34:901 (2,3,4) - distance seems too short. you approximately kept distance x2.0 before calmed down part, but here is x0.8? it seemed 1/4 when I played.
  4. 00:45:118 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - suggestion. what about add new combo each circle?
  5. 01:05:875 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - same
  6. 01:21:036 (2) - reverse mark is so invisible. it should be moved different place.
good luck \o/
Topic Starter
-Atri-

scanter wrote:

hello everyone o/ sorry in advance if my english is shit

General
  1. volume seems too low. it should be turned up 10~20% degrees :arrow: Not sure which part you meant
  2. insane AR 9, Another AR 9.3, but extra is 9? :arrow: fixed
Collab Easy
  1. AR 3~3.5? normal is 5, but easy is 2? :arrow: AR 3
  2. 00:29:550 - useless green line
  3. 00:30:361 - looks like an incorrect timing line
  4. 00:43:172 (1) - finish + clap or finish seems better imo
  5. 01:22:253 - 01:22:415 - 01:22:577 - 01:24:199 - 01:24:361 - 01:24:523 - 01:25:496 - 01:25:820 - 01:26:793 - 01:26:955 - same as 00:29:550


    :arrow: all fixed
Existence
  1. 00:13:496 - add a circle? feels so empty :arrow: I prefer having it empty here as i wanted to have a better instrumental transition here, keep.
  2. 00:24:523 (4) - what about changing 2 circles? feels too uncomfortable, because there is clap in slider's end. :arrow: Tried to emphasize the clap differently, using 2 circles is too overwhelming imo
  3. 00:34:901 (2,3,4) - distance seems too short. you approximately kept distance x2.0 before calmed down part, but here is x0.8? it seemed 1/4 when I played. :arrow: This is kinda tricky here, I asked some players from previous testplayers i don't see that's really misleading there, thus, That would be too big for a 1/4 as before that part the largest DS on a triplet is 00:14:469 (1,2,3) - so i don't see there's anything that will hint this as an 1/4 instead of an 1/2
  4. 00:45:118 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - suggestion. what about add new combo each circle? :arrow: nah that will be weird
  5. 01:05:875 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - same :arrow: ^
  6. 01:21:036 (2) - reverse mark is so invisible. it should be moved different place. :arrow: It should be fine, but fixed as i am quite worried too
good luck \o/
Topic Starter
-Atri-
Fucking osu web
Asuka_-

scanter wrote:

Asuka_-'s Normal
  1. 00:02:955 - useless green line
  2. 00:44:874 - 00:45:685 - same as 00:02:955
  3. 01:05:388 - rhythm seems too empty compared with before.
  4. 01:22:577 - 01:23:874 - 01:25:496 - 01:25:820 - 01:26:469 - same as 00:02:955
  5. 01:27:280 - NC?
all fixed! thanks!
upd
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Topic Starter
-Atri-
Moecho's reply

Moecho wrote:

_Yiiiii wrote:

Moecho's Insane
  1. 00:33:928 (4,5) - 为什么要这么大间距?还是直着过去的... 00:34:334 (5,1) - 把圈叠在这个尾上大概会好点,不过可能对于spread来说不太合适。
    原本為了對比度,但是發現好像去掉比較好,改了。
  2. 00:34:415 (1,3) - 包好
    太nazi了吧,這個是為了00:34:415 (1) - 的形狀,感覺沒必要改。
萌球这个风格好西方化啊orz 无话可说
不知道啊,我根本沒有很喜歡西方麻婆的圖qaq

scanter wrote:

hello everyone o/ sorry in advance if my english is shit

General
  1. volume seems too low. it should be turned up 10~20% degrees
  2. insane AR 9, Another AR 9.3, but extra is 9?
Moecho's Insane
  1. AR 9.3 seems better to play, because you used 1/4 jumps many
    I reduced the pre-kiai and inter-kiai sections' kick slider jump distances, should be fine now. AR9 is for spread.
  2. 00:13:820 (1,2) - actually clap isn't 00:14:145 here, but 00:14:307 here.
    Fixed~
  3. 00:18:847 (1) - it seems too 1/4 rhythm. what about increase the distance more?
    I think it's fine as it is, I indicated to watch out with the NC as well.
  4. 00:20:631 (5) - what about changing 2 circles or other patterns? the slider at the end of clap isn't good for play imo.
    For me it's an interesting rhythm to play, and I'm following the piano there. It's a mixture of instrument choice there which is fun to click to and makes sense.
  5. 00:30:199 (1,1) - rhythm was pulled forward.
    I can't ignore the vocal, if you try to move it 1/4 back, it would sound really strange. I had to cover the vocal. Sicne the vocal is so loud, it blends the background sound that I wanted to follow well, so you don't really notice if it starts there or not, but the next one doesn't have loud vocal to cover so I had to follow it as it was.
  6. 01:19:172 - 01:27:280 - that hitsounds lol
    Added some claps on the very last part
good luck \o/
updated both
Otosaka-Yu

scanter wrote:

hello everyone o/ sorry in advance if my english is shit

1112's Another
  1. 00:06:685 (6) - it seems a little uncomfortable to play. the route is almost linear. what about at least move 00:06:685 (6) to x:294, y:27? fixed
  2. 00:28:577 - what about adding a circle here? you followed almost vocals here and I can hear nani kaga ma at te iru yo lol lol okay
  3. 00:40:577 (1) - seems a little close. what about spread the distance more? okay
  4. 01:11:063 (4,5) - reverse rhythm? the slider at the end of clap isn't good for play imo. Feeling is not very comfortable...
  5. 01:22:415 - 01:27:118 - hitsounds feel so empty. add more whistle
good luck \o/
oh thank you~

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Easy
  1. 00:21:118 (3,4) - This rhythm doesn't really follow anything and feels a bit forced because of that. Turning 00:21:118 (3) into a 3/2 reverse slider would nicely follow the vocals
  2. 01:22:091 (1) - Increase volume of timing points, no need for it to be this low, can barely hear any feedback.
  3. Tbh I don't get the hitsound pattern at all, you have whistles and normal sampleset that appear in some places but not others and feels rather inconsistent that way. For example why doesn't 00:47:063 (2) have normal sampleset on the head when 00:47:712 (3,1) both do

Pata mon
  1. 00:24:685 (3,4,1) - this is quite messy, it would be better to avoid this
  2. 00:25:009 (1) to 00:34:415 (1) - I really can't tell what you're trying to follow tbh, the rhythm feels very forced. It's like you made up your own rhythm instead of following the song
  3. 00:39:280 (3,4) - This would follow the vocals better imo http://puu.sh/wu0qJ/d38f4d601c.jpg

Moecho
  1. 00:14:550 (3,1) - imo this pattern would be fine if it were stacked. The NC on 00:14:631 (1) would indicate it's a downbeat and I'm sure a lot of players would therefore read
  2. 00:23:631 (6,1) - A bit nazi but the stack is off
  3. 00:18:847 (1,1,1) - I'm not entirely sure what you're going for the SV decreases but imho it would be fine without them at all. I don't feel it appropriate to have the section 00:19:820 (1,2,3,4,5) a lower SV than 00:15:928 (1,2,3,4) when they pretty much sound and play the same. tl;dr I think it would be ideal to have one main SV for the whole verse instead of using several different ones
  4. 00:20:145 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing can throw people off a bit here. This is because the spacing between 4 and 5 is similar to 2 and 3. One way you could make it more readable is to try a pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8436729 .
  5. 01:19:982 (1,1) - a bit subjective but I feel this would play a lot smoother rhythmically if these were 1/2 sliders
  6. 01:22:091 (1) - This felt a bit lackluster with the lack of spacing emphasis on such a predominant beat

All diffs
  1. 01:22:091 - I don't like how the volume for this timing point is so low. It makes a lot of the objects barely audible. Try 50% at least
[]GL!
Shunao
hey!~

m4m

  • General
  1. remove widecreen in all diffs except Easy diff
  2. can you change a combo color it would be good to highlight the hair of the girl with pink
  • Collab easy
  1. 00:08:793 (3) - Can you less round off it a little for better fluidity (flow) when you playing? http://i.imgur.com/0QWrq3R.jpg?1
  2. 00:25:658 (2) - add a finish it's sound good imo
  3. 00:33:928 (3,1) - should be nice if there are similar https://puu.sh/wtXKC/8604e08631.jpg
  4. 00:49:982 (3) - curve it like you did at 00:48:361 (1) - because after you have 3 similar sliders straight 00:50:955 (1,2,3) - be consistent with aesthetic lul
  5. 00:54:685 (3) - tbh i think the finish on the head and the tail of the slider sound too loud here too (on the head) 00:55:334 (4) - so it would be preferable to replace them by whistle, it sound very well
  6. 01:15:442 (3,4) - ^
  7. 01:16:091 (4) - finish on the red tick but not here 00:55:334 (4)
  8. 01:22:739 (2,1,2,3) - any drums? It's bad because hears them well
  • Asuka's Normal
  1. 00:02:469 (5) - don't you think that the volume should be decreased?
  2. 00:17:712 (2,4) - blanket
  3. 00:24:685 (7) - add clap for emphasis drums
  4. 00:25:658 (3) - finish sound good tbh
  5. 01:22:740 (2,3,4,5,6) - no drums?
  • Pata-Mon's Hard
  1. 00:35:712 - 00:35:874 - better to map it's sound off when you finish with a 1/2 slider and more you can emphasis some vocals and be better able to follow long sliders imo
  2. 00:37:496 - 00:37:658 - here too
  3. 00:37:658 - 00:39:766 - ^
  4. 00:37:982 (1,2,3) - add some whistle for emphasis the piano
  5. 00:55:820 (5) - replace them by 2 note like you did at 01:16:577 (5,6)
  6. 01:05:063 (1) - remove nc, no reason to add it because there is the same density here 01:03:928 (1,2,3)
  7. 01:11:712 (1) - on the tail you forgot to put sampleset normal if you want to be consistent with 00:50:955 (1,2)
  8. 01:23:063 (4,6) - stack them
  • 1112' Another
  1. 00:24:685 - should be clickable for drums
  2. 00:46:415 (1,2) - need to be similar to 01:07:172 (1,2,3) - and spacing too because here 01:07:496 (3,1) - spacing is more high that 00:46:739 (2,1)
  3. 00:51:928 (3,1) - spacing should be the same with 01:12:685 (3,1)
  4. 00:55:658 (1,1) - ^ 01:16:415 (1,1) -
  5. 00:58:739 (1,3) - stack them
gl!~
lcfc

ShogunMoon wrote:

  • Collab easy
  1. 00:08:793 (3) - Can you less round off it a little for better fluidity (flow) when you playing? http://i.imgur.com/0QWrq3R.jpg?1 you got it
  2. 00:25:658 (2) - add a finish it's sound good imo
  3. 00:33:928 (3,1) - should be nice if there are similar https://puu.sh/wtXKC/8604e08631.jpg (not my part but I'm pretty sure firis wanted to make the symmetrical pattern here 00:35:388 (1,2,3,4) - lol)
  4. 00:49:982 (3) - curve it like you did at 00:48:361 (1) - because after you have 3 similar sliders straight 00:50:955 (1,2,3) - be consistent with aesthetic lul okies
  5. 00:54:685 (3) - tbh i think the finish on the head and the tail of the slider sound too loud here too (on the head) 00:55:334 (4) - so it would be preferable to replace them by whistle, it sound very well
  6. 01:15:442 (3,4) - ^
  7. 01:16:091 (4) - finish on the red tick but not here 00:55:334 (4)
  8. 01:22:739 (2,1,2,3) - any drums? It's bad because hears them well
Thanks for the mod! Anything not replied is Firis' part or hitsounds lol

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TitleUnicode:アスイロ
Artist:Rie Murakawa
ArtistUnicode:村川梨衣
Creator:Firis Mistlud
Version:Collab Easy
Source:エスカ&ロジーのアトリエ~黄昏の空の錬金術士~
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354,316,53550,6,0,B|396:308|396:308|420:279|420:279|458:268,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,182,54361,1,0,1:0:0:0:
493,95,54685,2,0,L|416:76,1,80,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,35,55334,2,0,P|278:42|221:62,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,124,56145,6,0,P|145:181|170:234,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,270,56955,1,0,1:0:0:0:
327,225,57280,2,0,L|460:248,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,157,58091,2,0,L|359:143,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,84,58739,6,0,L|181:104,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,66,59550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
45,132,59874,2,0,P|31:189|56:242,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,225,60685,2,0,P|181:231|219:242,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,295,61334,6,0,P|348:292|404:269,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,192,62145,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,130,62469,2,0,P|386:70|409:14,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,3,63280,2,0,P|281:9|243:20,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,83,63928,6,0,B|121:90|121:90|68:63,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,122,64739,1,4,0:0:0:0:
40,201,65063,2,0,L|23:324,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,375,65874,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,355,66199,1,2,0:0:0:0:
261,335,66523,6,0,P|317:349|389:335,2,120,4|0|8,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,272,67820,2,0,P|192:211|202:181,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,133,68469,2,0,P|322:127|352:137,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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426,155,70415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,69,70739,2,0,L|487:57,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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13,182,75118,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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455,241,77712,1,0,1:0:0:0:
406,314,78036,2,0,P|344:329|298:285,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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324,52,79496,6,0,P|286:67|195:61,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,38,80307,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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160,118,85658,1,0,2:0:0:0:
231,169,85982,2,0,P|307:188|389:165,1,160,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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kanor
M4M
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/480945
[Genal]
SB\AsuiroDB - 僔儑乕僩僇僢僩.lnk 这是啥

[Easy]
00:55:334 (4) - 这里不打算跟00:55:658 - 这个提琴的音吗,感觉有点突兀,后面01:16:091 (4) - 这里就这么跟 了,最好统一一下吧
01:03:280 (4) - 这个挨到血线了

[Normal]
HP=AR=OD大丈夫?
这个normal有点太难了吧.....advanced的单点数都没它多,spread会不太好吧

[Moecho]
00:18:523 (1,1,2,1,1) - 感觉这么摆用上渐变SV效果不太好,不是很直观,看起来就像突然加了一堆NC
00:31:415 (1) - 这个应该是不小心按偏了吧
00:50:955 (1,2) - 这里不能直接用滑梯带过去吗?感觉这里突然塞个二连比起前面的有点突兀欸
01:11:712 (1,2) - ^
kai都是1.0-1.5,01:22:091 - 结尾却变成0.75,我大概知道你的想法,不过感觉有点太慢了,那种逐渐加强的鼓点感觉还没表现出来就结束了,稍微提高一点sv试试看?

[1112]
没啥特别想说的,感觉摆放还是有点随机
实际上根本没有上一个diff难

[猪腩肚]
难点在滑条,撑星的却是PP跳,真是心机(

GL
Topic Starter
-Atri-

Kisses wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:21:118 (3,4) - This rhythm doesn't really follow anything and feels a bit forced because of that. Turning 00:21:118 (3) into a 3/2 reverse slider would nicely follow the vocals :arrow: Talked with LCFC, who i follow his vocal rhythm on the previous part, and we do agree that we can adjust this slider and move 00:23:550 (1) - before the downbeat to follow the vocal better
  2. 01:22:091 (1) - Increase volume of timing points, no need for it to be this low, can barely hear any feedback. :arrow: fixed, not sure why this happened
  3. Tbh I don't get the hitsound pattern at all, you have whistles and normal sampleset that appear in some places but not others and feels rather inconsistent that way. For example why doesn't 00:47:063 (2) have normal sampleset on the head when 00:47:712 (3,1) both do
felt a bit lackluster with the lack of spacing emphasis on such a predominant beat :arrow: Fixed all missing normal samplesets, hitsound copier problems[/list][/notice]

All diffs
  1. 01:22:091 - I don't like how the volume for this timing point is so low. It makes a lot of the objects barely audible. Try 50% at least :arrow: imo I really wanted the progression of the volume here, 50% is too loud for this kind of trick imo which doesn't make the progression effect go well imo
[]GL!

ShogunMoon wrote:

hey!~

m4m

  • General
  1. remove widecreen in all diffs except Easy diff :arrow: Fixed in Existence diff, i'll let GDers to change themselves
  2. can you change a combo color it would be good to highlight the hair of the girl with pink :arrow: I wanted to use the main color of the BG instead of Escha's hair color, keep.
  • Collab easy
  1. 00:25:658 (2) - add a finish it's sound good imo :arrow: imo whistles sounds better.
  2. 00:33:928 (3,1) - should be nice if there are similar https://puu.sh/wtXKC/8604e08631.jpg :arrow: nope, symmetry
  3. 00:54:685 (3) - tbh i think the finish on the head and the tail of the slider sound too loud here too (on the head) 00:55:334 (4) - so it would be preferable to replace them by whistle, it sound very well :arrow: I don't think it's too loud as they're quite strong so finish fits better
  4. 01:15:442 (3,4) - ^ :arrow: ^
  5. 01:16:091 (4) - finish on the red tick but not here 00:55:334 (4) :arrow: Unfortunately i can't fix this one though, as LCFC desired to land it's slider end on white tick since he wanted to emphasize the vocals there, which is different from my part, which all lands on white tick, so it might make this kind of inconsistencies, well, i might add finish here if LCFC wish to fix this one time
  6. 01:22:739 (2,1,2,3) - any drums? It's bad because hears them well :arrow: True but i prefer to follow vocals here

Thanks for the mod~
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