2nd part
So...imo diffs are nice, but i think they are lacking in aesthetics and spacing. Patterns are sometime kinda random or without nice pattern. Rhythm choice is very decent, tho.
Good luck on getting this ranked~~
[Insane]
- ar9? It's 185bpm anyways
- 00:22:073 (6,7,8) - aesthetics here is really bad imo,
- 00:25:560 (10) - overmapped
- 00:39:263 (5,1,2,3,4) - make some constant angles for these objects.
- 00:46:560 (2,4) - can stack 2 with 4 tbh,this can emphasise downbeat 00:46:722 (3) -
- 00:59:046 (8) - use a 1/2 slider as well to keep consistency?
- 01:04:398 (4,1) - supposed to be a bigger spacing judging from music
- 01:21:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - the stream seems too long tbh, in hard diff you dont even put 5 circles in a row but here there are like 13 or more..
- 01:47:857 (1,2) - why ds is sooo small?01:48:019 - should be emphasised anyways...
- 03:03:911 (1) - id break it into slider and circle tbh, you are following vocal.
- 03:19:479 (1) - same as above,btw 03:22:236 (1,1,1,1) - why NC spam?
Im not a fan of old style mapping...but map is fine, hardly can i see an insane w/e big jumps nowadays. I still think it needs more aesthetics for 2017 mapping
[Extra]
- hp8...it's definitely too much, i'd say at most 6.5 for hp.
- 00:11:209 (1,2) - triggers me when i see they are not the same
- 00:12:830 (1,2) - in extra you can, and i recommend that you use a bigger ds. This is more like ds in hard. For extras bigger ds can present the diff better.
- 00:15:100 (7,1) - while some 1/2 gaps have very small spacing this is unreasonably too big.
- 00:17:857 (9,1) - probably swap NC
- 00:17:857 (9,1,2) - as you can see ds varies A LOT for same music intensity and 1/2 gap. This happens a lot in your map so i strongly feel you should tackle the problem.
- 00:45:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - get some ds between them? stacked doesnt seem comfortable
- 01:01:479 (3,1,2) - not wise to use a small spacing for 01:01:803 (1,2) -
- 01:11:371 (1) - ctrl+G. You didnt even emphasise 1/2 for 01:10:884 (1,1) - ...sounds like 1/4 to me
- 01:43:803 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda messy imo
- 02:58:722 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 1/2 slider spam isn't nice here, can change to better patterns that represent music.
- 03:03:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - hoyl why no spacing with slider end??
- 03:03:911 (5,1,2,3,4) - another typical example of the spacing problem i mentioned.
- 03:19:479 (5) - NC
- 03:40:722 (3,4,1) - confusing ds lol
So...imo diffs are nice, but i think they are lacking in aesthetics and spacing. Patterns are sometime kinda random or without nice pattern. Rhythm choice is very decent, tho.
Good luck on getting this ranked~~