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00:47:542 (313,314) - kd or dd? following pitch. 00:53:027 (361,362,363) - is kdk
Fixed to kdk00:58:514 (409,410) - same
Fixed01:06:913 - ~ 01:50:456 - I think that is good to slow down the SV. Because the density is low, players may feel tired.So we aim to slow the SV and increase the visual density.And I think you can take more vocals.Even if it is a rest area, I feel a little unsatisfactory.
Ok, fixed02:04:342 - d? This area seems to have a little k proportion too much...
Sound the same02:06:913 - same
same ^02:11:456 - change to k and move to 02:11:285 - ? you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better.
I want consistency in that parts with the others, but i hear a sound here 02:11:456 - so for now i don't apply it02:12:913 (170,171,172,173,174) - I think that the pattern beginning with k should be better.Because the other parts are like that.
No becasue beginning with a d and then with a k 02:14:285 (181) - 02:12:742 (169) - If you accept the above suggestion, it is preferable to make this a D
^02:20:285 (235,236) - ctrl+g? contrast with 02:21:656 (246,247,248,249) -
Fixed02:23:885 (268,269,270,271,272) - ^^^
^^^02:34:856 (362,363,364,365,366) - same... high pitch sound ringing here 02:34:856 -
I want variate a bit because many k can be tired02:40:342 (416) - same
Fixed02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443) - It is very unbalanced here. I recommend placing d according to kick, or placing d according to the melody.
No, I really love this stream ;;02:45:827 (473,474) - ctrl g hith pitch sound ringing here 02:45:827 -
I want to follow the melody 02:47:199 (486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495) -
03:19:856 - k and 03:21:227 - d following pitch
Fixed03:25:342 - 03:26:713 - same
^03:30:827 - 03:32:199 - same
^03:39:227 - change to k and move to 03:39:056 - you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better.
No for the similar reason previously.03:40:513 - ~ I feel that the density is a little low and not enough.
You're right, fixed04:03:827 - D and 04:03:998 (21,22,23,24,25) - high pitch sound ringing here 04:03:999 -
No, in the finish D the sound is very high but not low, and about the high pitch i want to variate a bit and to leep consistency with the previous parts.04:14:970 (126,127,128,129,130) - same
^04:20:970 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - It is very unbalanced here too.
No, I really love this stream ;;Outro looks good