[General]
- 03:22:892 - i dont like when a spinner is used on strong beats such as this one. id prefer a circle here and moving the spinner like u did on dreamer
- 01:15:892 (3) - anything that makes the white tick cickable would be a better rhythm cuz vocals are kinda strong imo
- 03:22:892 - i dont like when a spinner is used on strong beats such as this one. id prefer a circle here and moving the spinner like u did on dreamer
- 00:26:892 (1,2,3) - that sudden shift to blue ticks is a bit misleading also 00:27:725 (2) - this seems to be following vocals and as i can see the map isnt built around vocals. id go with something like 00:24:225 (1,2,3,4) - or http://puu.sh/uVkkQ/d200f5626b.jpg
- 01:01:559 (1) - id remove that nc
- 01:33:559 (1) - idk if the whistle on body is intentional but i dont think it fits
- 02:18:892 (1) - i dont think this is following anything at all. music is the same as 02:24:559 (2,3,4,5,6) - yet you skipped a lot of mappable stuff just to make that pattern. it looks cool but id prefer something that follows the music properly
- 00:32:225 (1) - very strong beat so should be emphasized like u did with 00:31:392 (2,3) - theres also others like 01:36:059 (7,8,1) - but i think the triple gives them enough emphasis
- 01:25:559 (1) - ^
- 02:38:225 (3) - nice1
- last 2 kiais had a bit better aesthetics, i liked them