FiddleBlue wrote:

Hello from #modreqs.
I'm still kinda new to modding.

[General]

Hitsounds in all difficulty are very random and the volume isn't right. I suggest you add them 15%. And reading tutorial about hitsounding. Here's a great one.

They are seriously weird sliders placement on the map and tons of triplets that don't really emphasize the music. I suggest you look at maps with the same song or any map for inspiration.

If you need help in mapping in a certain situation, Pishifat and -Mo- have videos on their channel about things like pattern, spacing, overmap, etc.
Pishifat's Channel
-Mo-'s Channel -ill check it out when im in trouble lol, im still learning about mapping so yeah

Ok, now that's that. Let's start with the song setup.

The artist and the title are is the wrong spot. They are romanised, which should be put in the romanised column. The artist and title column should be in Japanese characters.
Artist: 三月のパンタシア
Title: はじまりの速度
Same goes to the source. Japanese character: キズナイーバー
You can add Kiznaiver in the tag.
And maybe an anime tag? - fixed except title and about the tags (i already put kiznaiver in the tag)

[Normal]
01:27:600 (1) - Make spinner last until the next white tick. Also, remove finish hitsound, it seems out of place as the music is gradually fading out.-le done

Bad at modding normal and easy (currently). Sorry. -its fine hehe

[Hard]
00:06:423 (3) - It doesn't really suit landing in the blue tick. The white tick before is preferable.-lol wat, this was an editing error forgot to fix lol
00:10:659 (5,6) - Maybe made these as a slider as I think it follows the vocal.-fixed
00:11:894 (4,5) - Instead of slider starting from the red tick, it should start from the white tick. While the circle should be on the red tick instead. (And I don't mean just ctrl+G it lol)-fixed and i definitely did not ctrl+G
00:12:776 (1,2) - Maybe make these two sliders into circles instead?made 2 into the circles
00:19:835 (1,2) - This two full beat sliders ruins the song dynamic (you can feel it louder than before), perhaps changing them to 3 1/2 sliders all starting on white tick.-fixed, it does seem better
00:21:247 (5,6,7,8) - This can be adjusted. Perhaps make it like this? -fixed i guess
00:24:600 (2) - Instead of a full beat slider. Make it a circle and a 1/2 slider.-much better
00:28:835 - A circle here, perhaps? Maybe overlapping either the slider before or after. Or just simply put between them.- ill leave it as it is for now
00:29:541 - ^-^
00:36:247 (4,5) - Reverse this order. The slider is more suitable starting from the white tick where it landed. And the circle move the red tick before.-fixed
00:40:129 (2) - Instead of a full beat. Make it a repeating 1/2 slider instead.-fixed
00:42:776 (4) - ^^
00:57:776 - Maybe a circle here?-another editing error lol
01:05:718 (7,8) - Make slider before the circle. I think it suits more.-fixed
01:20:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps instead of this, you can delete circle 2-5, and make the 1/2 repeating slider into a 1/4 landing in the same tick as the 1/2 slider.-fixed
01:27:600 (1) - Spinner stops at the next white tick suits better.-fixed

[Insane]
00:02:188 (4) - This slider doesn't suit the instrument and nor the vocal. You can perhaps follow the vocal like this:
Which involve the slider before.
Or the beat: -fixed, thanks for this
00:09:953 (1) - Instead of a 1/4 slider, make it into 2 circles. Perhaps underlapping the next slider.-fixed, forgot about this part
00:11:188 (5) - ^ Underlapping the next circle or wherever places you seems to be good.-made into a normal 1/2 slider instead
00:12:070 (5) - This slider could use a little more spacing from the last circle.-fixed
00:14:188 (1) - Perhaps make this 2 circles instead of a slider.-fixed, and it does sound better
00:14:718 (3,4) - Combine these to make a slider. I think it follows the vocal and beat.-fixed i guess
00:18:070 (6) - Why is the spacing shorter than in 00:17:365 (2,4) - ? I think it should be the same thing as the two circles. So instead of it being on 352 on the x-axis, it should be on 384.-editing error
00:19:129 (3) - NC
00:19:129 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You can add another circle on 00:19:747 - . Make a stream that will continue until the next one. Like this, perhaps: -fixed
00:22:218 - The same issue like the one above. You can make a full beat stream here, ending the last one with a slider.^
00:26:894 (1) - Instead of a 1/4 slider, how about make it just a circle or a 1/2 slider instead?-forgot about this
00:29:012 (2) - Is this supposed to be symmetry? If so, it's at the wrong angle and coordinates. You can copy the slider before and flip it horizontally for an identical angle and coordinate. You can adjust the y-axis to find your fulfill need.-honestly dont know what happened here, but fixed
00:29:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - Actually the drums start at 00:29:541 - , you can move the stream to start at that point instead-thanks, fixed. And in 00:29:806 (4) - , a little bit overmapped as they are no sound here. You may delete if you want.- i can hear feedback sounds
00:30:423 (6) - This full beat slider is really weird, as the red tick in the middle indeed has a sound. I think a repeated 1/2 slider here is better.-slightyl changed
Also, I think the section from 00:29:541 - to 00:31:129 - look better in this:

00:34:747 (6) - There's no sound here. 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - You can make this section a jump section.-fixed
00:35:806 - There's a sound here. You can continue the stream until the next slider.-okiedokie
00:37:218 (3) - No sound.-editing woopsies
00:41:718 (5) - Maybe a little spacing from the last circle.-fixed
00:48:070 (1) - Maybe curve this slider as I think a sharp turn makes a bad flow from the one before to the after.-fixed
01:00:776 - You forgot a circle here.
01:15:247 (3,4,5) - These sliders aren't really suitable for this part. I suggest doing this:
With a higher slider velocity.-fixed
01:18:335 - Now you can add a circle here and make a triplet stream here.-hmm i guess no
01:18:953 - A sound here. You can either make a 1/2 slider from the circle before or just a circle here. Or you can leave it.
01:20:894 (4) - Slider head actually doesn't have a sound. 01:21:423 (5) - So is this. The only sounds that are available in this section are on 01:21:070 - and 01:21:247 - . I suggest you put a circle on both overlapping since it's a calm part (I guess).-kind of changed
01:22:129 (2,3,4) - Perhaps make the sliders start from a white tick rather than the red.-fixed
01:27:070 (5,6) - These feels wrong here as there's the drum sound. Since this is an insane difficulty, you can add the streams here, or at least a repeating 1/4 sliders.-lol forgot about this, made into a 1/4 repeat instead
If you agree, then the streams should start from 01:27:070 - to 01:27:600 - . You can make the spinner start from the blue tick, as spinners don't give out sound from the beginning.
01:27:600 (1) - Make spinner last until the next white tick. Also, remove finish hitsound, it seems out of place as the music is gradually fading out.

[Pain]
00:02:541 (6,1) - I think a bit of spacing from both is better.-fixed
00:18:423 (1) - and 00:18:688 (2) - feels not suitable. There isn't any sound on 00:18:512 - . And why does the slider start from the blue tick? Try to do something like this: -fixed
You can make a stream from 00:22:129 - to 00:22:659 - . You can make the stream end with the 00:22:659 (1) - slider.-much better thanks
00:36:953 (2,3) - Perhaps make these sliders start from the white tick they end with?-fixed
00:48:335 (4) - There's no sound here.-fixed aswell
00:58:482 - Stream can start from here. It's an insane difficulty anyway.- you have a point lol
01:10:129 (5) - Perhaps make this slider start on 01:09:953 - instead. You can add a circle later on 01:10:306 - .-fixed
01:14:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A bit of overmapped. The only sound here are: -fixeddd
01:27:247 (7,8,9) - Only three? You can start the stream from 01:27:070 - to 01:27:600 - . Spinner can start on the blue tick.-kind of changed
01:27:600 (1) - Meh, you probably know what I'm talking about anyway.hehe sorry bout that

Hope this help!-Big help, thanks dude!!
Good luck on your mapset!

TequilaWolf wrote:

mod

Pain-

00:00:423 (3) - since 'ki' starts on 00:00:600 (4) - I would suggest stacking 00:00:071 (1,2,3) - together-might keep it like this until others say to change it

00:05:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - make distance spacing completely equal here, looks and plays much better if you just use 1.5 for all-fixed

00:07:129 (1) - place further away from 00:06:953 (6) - , because you want to emphasize this new sound-fixed

00:12:070 (3,4,5,6) - pattern looks very random, try using ctrl+shift+d to make diamonds if you want-fixed, might adjust it a bit as well

00:14:894 (3,4,5) - irregular spacing again. you want to emphasize (put jumps) for sounds like these 00:16:306 (3) - -changed some sliders to circles

00:24:070 (1,2,3,4) - not as pretty as it can be, don't you think these look better? http://puu.sh/ukiTr/e1544e3f52.jpg-seems better

00:24:776 (5,6) - when making slider patterns like these it's better to just copy the first one (5) and rotate/adjust using ctrl+shift+r/ctrl+g/h/j so that they have exact same shape-thanks for this

00:31:129 (1,2) - ctrl+gmade 1 further away from slider instead

00:33:953 (1) - should be further away from slider (maybe ctrl+g with 3)-changed a bit

00:46:659 (1) - further away from 7-fixed

00:49:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - make spacing constant. you never changed stream spacing anywhere else in the map why here-fixed

01:18:423 (3,4) - not pretty/neat. either you stack right on top of the sliderend or http://puu.sh/ukj8b/2a3e634112.jpg, or just move the whole slider so that the end overlaps with the circle-editing error, fixed

#

davidminh0111 wrote:

mod:
Hard:
-00:09:070: Don't stack them-why though, it seems fine for me
-00:09:953: Smaller hitsounds- lowered volume

DendyMudak wrote:

H e l l o T h e r e! -hi

Pain

00:05:012 (4,5) - if you following the vocal on (which is the main sound here) you can replace it to a slider.-keep
00:05:012 (4,5,4,5) - ^^
00:06:953 (7,1) - make it a bit closer to the slider, so it will be much readable for the player-adjusted
00:07:129 (1,2) - same vocal, this is my suggestion how you can put it http://prntscr.com/eltiek-sounds better thanks
00:09:953 (1) - it's making no sense to me, you hearing 1 sound of the piano, but u putting the reverse arrow, it's confusing and destroying the structure of the map.-keeping until further notice
00:09:953 (1,5,6) - slider?
00:27:600 (4,5) - ^-not much of a difference
01:00:423 (4,5) - ^^
00:53:718 (1,4) - overlap-not needed, following a blanket pattern here
00:27:600 (4,5,8,9) - you can hear the stream-might consider
01:14:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - even when you can hear that vocal is slowed down, you still have sounds on red and white tick.- keep for now
01:27:070 (6,7,8,9,10) - stream is going until white tick-fixed, idk why there isnt a note there

This difficulty very confusing because of its structure and sounds, you changing between vocal and instrument too often.
I suggest you need to recheck or even remap some sections of the map. -might remap the first bit before the chorus

gl in further mapping -thanks for the mod, appreciate it

Asuka_- wrote:

Im not good at english.
no kds

If the mapping has already finished, please move to Pending state
https://gyazo.com/8825d3763259fe0892db43ee7fa044ca.png

Meta
Title : はじまりの速度
Tag : remove "anime" (It will be added automatically when ranking)
add "みあ" "Mia" "ARCHITECT"
hitsoinds : please try to use custom hitsound https://puu.sh/uReJ7/e6453f1cde.rar -THANK YOU FOR THIS : DDDDDDDDDD
https://i.gyazo.com/6772852c233981cc3a7 ... f2cdd5.png
BG : Only 4:3 can be used. you have to adjust it.


Normal

check Aimod(ctri + shift + A)

You should not use slider velocity if possible. It is hard for bigginer.

Normal
Manipulating slider velocity is discouraged. Slider velocity should only be changed for sections of music with different pacings and should not be drastically variable. from std ranking criteria

- i used appropriate slider velocity changes
01:06:070 - wat sound you follow? i think nothing here. try → https://gyazo.com/d959db22590157f059aac917ce67fa74.png-fixed
01:25:835 (2,3,4,5,6) - why changed DS? plz keep (x0.9)-idk what happened here
01:20:365 - 01:20:894 - remove green line
-all fixed lmao

NC

00:15:600 (1,3) - swap NC
00:18:423 (1) - remove NC
00:22:659 (6,1) - swap NC
00:26:894 (1) - remove NC
00:32:541 (1,3) - swap NC
00:36:776 (3) - NC
00:46:659 (1) - remove NC
00:57:953 (1) - remove NC
01:05:012 (7) - NC
01:12:070 (1) - remove NC

Hard

check Aimod -i swear those weren't there befoire lol
00:33:070 (4) - you cannot follow sound here imo, change to like 00:31:659 (4,5,6) - ?? (same sound. you had better unify them.)- agree, idk why i did that lol
00:40:306 - clickable?-changed pattern
00:47:718 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - bad overlap xd there is more. plz check and fix them.-ffixed,but cant do anything with 4
01:02:894 - clickable?-changed pattern
01:07:835 (6,7,8) - ctrl+g (object)-hopefully fixed
01:10:659 (1,5) - overlap-check
01:18:600 (4) - should start in 01:18:776 - try https://gyazo.com/98597748afea15c412faedecf4444463.png^^

NC

00:03:600 (3) - or 00:04:482 (4) - NC
00:29:012 (1) - remove NC
00:15:776 (4) - NC
00:18:423 (5) - NC
00:26:894 (5) - NC
00:26:894 (5) - NC
00:52:306 (4) - NC
00:56:541 (5) - NC
01:00:776 (4) - NC
01:07:835 (6) - NC
01:11:894 (6) - NC
01:14:894 (5) - NC
01:26:188 (6) - NC

Insane

00:10:306 - 00:10:659 - 00:11:012 - should be clickable. try this → https://gyazo.com/88cf4c2f2b986720d7dc1a0e338377be.png-fixed
00:21:070 (7,1) - i think bad flow. need more distance than 00:20:894 (6,7) - because 00:21:247 (1) - is stromg sound.^^
00:22:306 (8,3) - stack?-ok
00:38:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change to like 00:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (same sound)-fixedddd
00:39:953 (2) - change to 2 circles? because i think should follow 00:40:129 - -fixed i guess
00:39:600 (1,3) - stack or avoid overlap-was changed
00:45:953 (4,2) - overlap-fixed
00:58:747 - circle-changed to become stream
01:23:718 (3,6) - why use 1/4slider? should use 1/2slider if no reason-editing error didnt see it ^^


Pain

00:05:012 (4,5,6) - bad flow https://gyazo.com/cc4b35b034684de484a6d666feee6139.png
please fix (6) -fixed
00:15:070 (5,1) - overlap -fixed
00:17:012 (1,4) - overlap-ill keep it as it is
00:17:365 (2,3,4) - bad flow https://gyazo.com/b6a9e24de1da6195dcac1afc882bd2a5.png
please try this https://gyazo.com/3fb504ab3c6d6c1ec3584661bdab0f32.png -i didnt see this lol, fixed
00:19:835 (1,4) - stack?-got ya
00:26:365 (4,5) - ctrl+g (object) because 00:25:835 (2,3) - and 00:26:365 (4,5) - are the same sound. unify better.-fixed
00:35:982 - sound here-keep
00:45:776 (4,5) - bad flow. please more distance.-added distance
00:47:718 (6,7,1) - stream part? xd-lol made didnt hear that part, fixed
00:49:747 (2,3,4,5) - stream part? xdxd-? lol
00:52:659 (2,3,4) - bad flow. https://gyazo.com/79c3be1af6fe2b689a93c756bdb86995.png
try this https://gyazo.com/44579ffa0902a65d5771e81e02ae008a.png-fixed
00:59:718 (2) - change to like 01:01:129 (2,3) - ?-changed
01:02:718 (4,5) - more distance!!- ok lol
01:11:894 (7,1) - ^
01:15:600 - i think should not put circle. 01:15:600 (4) - move to 01:15:953 - better-removed instead, i cant hear a sound at 01:15:953
01:19:129 (5) - NC-ok
01:16:306 (1,2,3) - https://gyazo.com/74d4728f9ca18ef8f24d2877177cf161.png-fixed lol

Nice Song and Mapset. plz Rank xD <3333333333333333333333
Good Luck!!

1. mapping advice.
2. end sliders on equally or less powerful sounds than they start.
3. avoid overlaps when they aren't neat or part of a pattern, concept, or gimmick - they look ugly to most people. (eg 00:21:600 (4,2) - on normal diff)
4. create good structure by arranging your objects in symmetrical patterns, using parallel lines, having consistent slider shapes (like having all straight sliders tilted a certain degree unless otherwise required by a pattern), equidistance, and arranging objects in regular polygons (generic triangles, squares, pentagons et al)
5. avoid skipping important beats through sliders (like 00:00:600 (4) - on hard)
6. make your patterns consistent
7. prioritize one rhythm at a time, not all of them
8. these are more or less what you need to do in your map

1. lack of structure (refer to general) in this diff tbh
2. turn up distance snap a bit so the hitobjects dont overlap, right now they overlap a bit (like only their outer borders) so it kinda looks ugly. i'd recommend 1.0x but ds is up to you
3. 00:05:365 (3) - youre ending the slider on a more important sound than where it currently starts. for future reference i'd suggest ending sliders on equally strong or less strong sounds since pressing a slider gives more emphasis than releasing it, and more emphasis = stronger sounds.
4. 00:15:600 (4,1) - ugly overlap
5. 00:20:541 (2,3) - could be blanketed
   00:21:600 (4) - "this object is too far from the previous object!"
6. 00:21:600 (4,2) - ugly overlap
7. 00:25:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - could be pentagon
8. 00:27:247 (6) - basically same as 00:05:365 (3) -. you're ending the slider on the vocal, and starting it on some background instrument. because you're prioritizing vocals in your rhythm, the vocal is stronger and thus is the one that should be clickable.
9. 00:30:070 (3,4,1,2,3) - also pentagon
10. 00:35:365 (1,2,1) - could be triangle
11. 00:36:776 (1,2,3) - nice use of symmetry here but it's not actually symmetrical, nudge 2 a bit to the right to fix
12. 00:36:776 (1,4) - ugly overlap. move 4 in the path of 3 to avoid this and also to change flow so that the overlap with 00:38:188 (3,1) - goes away
13. the main things wrong with your map are what i listed above - fix all instances of these in the map and i think it would take a leap in quality. there are still things like this throughout the rest of the diff i didn't mod (since if i did write them down it would make for an even bigger wall of text xdddddd) so i suggest that you find and fix them yourself as an exercise.

1. the structure problems i mentioned in the normal apply here too, you should fix them
2. 00:00:600 (4) - skipping vocal on white tick. focus on one instrument at once instead of all at once for a coherent rhythm.
3. 00:01:482 (1,2) - should be a slider instead - you're giving 2 (which is a less important sound) the same amount of importance as 1 (which is more important). by making this a slider, you give the sound on 1 more importance than the sound on 2, which is what you should be doing
4. 00:01:659 (2,3,4) - triangle like what you did on 00:01:482 (1,2,3) -
5. 00:01:835 (3,4) - fix blanket whether or not you do that
6. 00:03:600 (3) - skipping vocals again
7. 00:07:835 (5) - yeah i think you get it
8. 00:11:365 (1,2,3,4) - equidistance (this is really more of a problem in higher diffs)
9. 00:14:012 (6,1) - blanket
10. 00:17:012 (1,3,1) - this is a nice example of parallelism.
11. 00:31:129 (1,2,3,4,5) - lack of structure
12. 00:32:541 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
13. main problems with this diff are: structure, ignoring prioritized sounds (basically trying to map all things instead of just one thing at once), and blankets. as before, find and fix them.

1. problems in the above diffs apply here too, especially prioritizing rhythm
2. 00:00:423 (3) - i think you can spot what's wrong with this after reading the above
3. 00:00:776 (4) - ^
4. 00:05:541 (7) - stack on 6 instead for consistency with the previous stacks

1. if youve read the above mods and advice, you should be able to spot what's wrong with this map

newton- wrote:

hi, from queue
ok so your flow is mostly fine, it's your aesthetics and rhythm that i'm worried about
have some aesthetics/rhythm tips for free in the general header!
(also, the stuff i point out in a diff is present in more or less the entire diff. identify what's wrong, find it everywhere you can, then fix all of the stuff you found wrong.)

[general]

1. mapping advice.
2. end sliders on equally or less powerful sounds than they start.
3. avoid overlaps when they aren't neat or part of a pattern, concept, or gimmick - they look ugly to most people. (eg 00:21:600 (4,2) - on normal diff)
4. create good structure by arranging your objects in symmetrical patterns, using parallel lines, having consistent slider shapes (like having all straight sliders tilted a certain degree unless otherwise required by a pattern), equidistance, and arranging objects in regular polygons (generic triangles, squares, pentagons et al)
5. avoid skipping important beats through sliders (like 00:00:600 (4) - on hard)
6. make your patterns consistent
7. prioritize one rhythm at a time, not all of them
8. these are more or less what you need to do in your map

[ normal]

1. lack of structure (refer to general) in this diff tbh
2. turn up distance snap a bit so the hitobjects dont overlap, right now they overlap a bit (like only their outer borders) so it kinda looks ugly. i'd recommend 1.0x but ds is up to you -increased it to 1.1x
3. 00:05:365 (3) - youre ending the slider on a more important sound than where it currently starts. for future reference i'd suggest ending sliders on equally strong or less strong sounds since pressing a slider gives more emphasis than releasing it, and more emphasis = stronger sounds. -changed
4. 00:15:600 (4,1) - ugly overlap-fixed
5. 00:20:541 (2,3) - could be blanketed-slider 3 changed to circle
   00:21:600 (4) - "this object is too far from the previous object!"-nothing wrong in AiMod
6. 00:21:600 (4,2) - ugly overlap-fixed
7. 00:25:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - could be pentagon -made pentagon
8. 00:27:247 (6) - basically same as 00:05:365 (3) -. you're ending the slider on the vocal, and starting it on some background instrument. because you're prioritizing vocals in your rhythm, the vocal is stronger and thus is the one that should be clickable.-fixed
9. 00:30:070 (3,4,1,2,3) - also pentagon-was modified
10. 00:35:365 (1,2,1) - could be triangle-fixed?
11. 00:36:776 (1,2,3) - nice use of symmetry here but it's not actually symmetrical, nudge 2 a bit to the right to fix- sadlyit wont look nice as it would be originally was since ds change, but i did move it still lol
12. 00:36:776 (1,4) - ugly overlap. move 4 in the path of 3 to avoid this and also to change flow so that the overlap with 00:38:188 (3,1) - goes away -fixed
13. the main things wrong with your map are what i listed above - fix all instances of these in the map and i think it would take a leap in quality. there are still things like this throughout the rest of the diff i didn't mod (since if i did write them down it would make for an even bigger wall of text xdddddd) so i suggest that you find and fix them yourself as an exercise.

[ hard]

1. the structure problems i mentioned in the normal apply here too, you should fix them
2. 00:00:600 (4) - skipping vocal on white tick. focus on one instrument at once instead of all at once for a coherent rhythm.-fixed
3. 00:01:482 (1,2) - should be a slider instead - you're giving 2 (which is a less important sound) the same amount of importance as 1 (which is more important). by making this a slider, you give the sound on 1 more importance than the sound on 2, which is what you should be doing-fixed
4. 00:01:659 (2,3,4) - triangle like what you did on 00:01:482 (1,2,3) - -kind of adjusted
5. 00:01:835 (3,4) - fix blanket whether or not you do that
6. 00:03:600 (3) - skipping vocals again-fixed
7. 00:07:835 (5) - yeah i think you get it-vocals here
8. 00:11:365 (1,2,3,4) - equidistance (this is really more of a problem in higher diffs)
9. 00:14:012 (6,1) - blanket-fixed
10. 00:17:012 (1,3,1) - this is a nice example of parallelism.
11. 00:31:129 (1,2,3,4,5) - lack of structure-modified
12. 00:32:541 (1,2,3,4,5) - same^
13. main problems with this diff are: structure, ignoring prioritized sounds (basically trying to map all things instead of just one thing at once), and blankets. as before, find and fix them.

[ insane]

1. problems in the above diffs apply here too, especially prioritizing rhythm
2. 00:00:423 (3) - i think you can spot what's wrong with this after reading the above- got ya
3. 00:00:776 (4) - ^-yes
4. 00:05:541 (7) - stack on 6 instead for consistency with the previous stacks*^^]

[ pain]

1. if youve read the above mods and advice, you should be able to spot what's wrong with this map

if stuff is still unclear for you feel free to pm me either ingame or thru forums and i can explain stuff to you. -thank for you time, thanks for the mod

good luck!

-Aqua wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs

[Normal]

1. 00:05:718 (4,3) - Kinda disturbing overlap.-did slight change
2. 00:11:365 (1) - End on white tick?-sounds better
3. 00:53:718 (1,4) - Stack-editing mistake
4. 01:00:423 (2,1) - ^^
5. 01:05:012 (1) - The clap here sounds weird. -another editing mistake, forgot to change this
6. 01:13:129 (6,2) - Stack ^
7. 01:27:600 (1) - Spinner came in too fast? -keep, seems doable
8. Hitsound can be improved. Like a Finish on this sliderhead 00:36:776 (1) - to emphasize the start of kiai and etc etc. -hitsounding was finished, but since there was some changes i'll have to redo it again, forgot about editing it awhile ago

[Hard]

1. 00:06:423 (3) - Better if you end on white tick-seems better
2. 00:07:659 (4) - NC and remove nc on 00:08:541 (1) - -why though
3. 00:14:012 (6,1) - Blanket.-well it was, but tried my best to fix it
4. 00:15:247 (3,7) - Stack.-check
5. 00:20:894 (4,1) - Blanket.-fixed
6. 00:24:776 (3,4) - Improve flow.-fixed
7. 00:26:894 (1,2) - Switch nc
8. 00:42:070 (10,1) - Improve flow.-fixed
9. 00:56:541 (5,6,7) - Improve blanket.-donzo
10. 00:58:659 (5,6) - Spacing inconsistency? Also improve flow.-fixed
11. 01:00:070 (3) - What is this. It's offbeat.-lol wat, my mistake, fixed
12. 01:01:482 (4,4) - Stack-this will make the spacing inconsistent
13. 01:05:541 (6,8,4) - ^
14. 01:16:306 (1,3) - Atleast make them symmetrical.-woops fixed
15. 01:27:600 (1) - Spinner came too fast?-keep
16. Improve hitsound.

Only 2 diffs, I'm lazy lmfao. -lol its fine thanks

Goodluck!

Dubturt wrote:

-Aqua wrote:

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[Hard]

1. 00:07:659 (4) - NC and remove nc on 00:08:541 (1) - -why though - Because downbeat
   
2. 00:26:894 (1,2) - Switch nc - Same here

Goodluck!

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  [Normal]

1. 00:00:071 (1,2,3) - Your mapping looks very complicated
   I will make symmetry like image
   
   image

   
2. 00:06:423 (1,2,3) - Objects are very close together
   
   this is better

   
3. 00:08:541 (4,5) - ^
4. 00:10:306 (2) - This should pick up only the sound of the piano
   00:10:659 - add Circle
5. 00:11:365 (1,4) - overlap
6. 00:14:188 (1,2,4) - ^
7. 00:33:953 (2) - 00:32:541 (6) - Copy reversal is better
8. 00:36:776 (1,3) - overlap
9. 01:07:835 (1,2,3) - bad is flow
10. 01:17:718 (2) - The object is beyond the frame

Yasaija 714 wrote:

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• 
  [Normal]

1. 00:00:071 (1,2,3) - Your mapping looks very complicated
   I will make symmetry like image
   
   image

   
2. 00:06:423 (1,2,3) - Objects are very close together
   
   this is better

   
3. 00:08:541 (4,5) - ^
4. 00:10:306 (2) - This should pick up only the sound of the piano
   00:10:659 - add Circle
5. 00:11:365 (1,4) - overlap
6. 00:14:188 (1,2,4) - ^
7. 00:33:953 (2) - 00:32:541 (6) - Copy reversal is better
8. 00:36:776 (1,3) - overlap
9. 01:07:835 (1,2,3) - bad is flow
10. 01:17:718 (2) - The object is beyond the frame

Good luck!

Kaifin wrote:

Normal

1. 00:08:541 (4,5) - blanket is off, its askew like diagonally
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:10:659 (2,3,1) - this flow is super super super confusing for normal player: first the overlap of 00:09:953 (1,1) - is super cluttered and messy, second the doubling back motion of 00:11:012 (3,1) - is simply too complex for a low diff player especially when this is the lowest diff in the set: here is a suggestion for a potential new pattern (change to your taste)
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:13:482 (4,2) - this is also mindmeltingly complex for a normal player: the overlap of the slider bodies makes it basically unreadable and unfair for the player at this level: if there's one major rule you should be following when making lower diffs, its to keep things as SIMPLE as possible
4. 00:23:718 (2,3) - these objects overlap the HP bar, which is inadvisable in lower diffs as the player 110% has it on and is probably paying attention to it most of the time, it makes your diff look cluttered and messy
5. okay: so it's pretty clear from this diff that you are a new mapper, at least new to mapping lower diffs, so i'm just going to go over a couple points that you can apply to the rest of the diff because i think that would help you a lot more than specifics
   
6. NCs: your NC structure is kind of broken, generally you NC once every amount of bars (once every 4 bars aka every big white tick 00:29:718 - 00:28:306 - for examples of big white tick or another amount) which you do not do here, that is a general rule for NCing that's pretty easy to follow except in cases where you are NCing for emphasis
7. Keeping flow simple: pretty self explanatory, use the point i pointed out as an example: you want things to be incredibly basic and very very easy to understand for the player, making it always clear where the next object should be
   
   you have distance snapping down and your patterning is okay, but your aesthetics are messy and confusing + unclear

Hard

1. i'm going to use this diff to illustrate another mapping concept: patterning
   
2. this map has next to no patterns in it, despite clearly having a lot of objects, some of which are kind of related to each other
   
3. here is an example of a successfully executed pattern: 00:40:659 (4,5,6,7,8) - it is simple, just a pentagon but it works for this analogy, as taken together, this makes a clear, concise pattern and shape
   
4. now, here is an example of notes that just aren't a pattern: 00:00:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - when you highlight this, do you see a certain shape? do the notes relate to each other in any way? no, they're just kind of notes that have been placed on the timeline with no real distinct pattern or relation to one another: this applies to basically every pattern in this map barring the literal shapes
   
5. note that patterns dont HAVE to be shapes, they just have to be notes that have some sort of relation to each other in other to make some sort of whole combined entity when they are all placed: patterns can be several combos/bars of notes long or just 3 or 2 notes, it is just relative to what the song requires and what kind of mapping style you use
   
6. the number one issue with this diff is the lack of patterns, focusing on this will improve your structure, how fun your maps are, and most importantly make you a better mapper

from looking at your other diffs: this complaint about patterning is definitely the #1 thing you need to focus on right now

sorry i could not provide a more indepth mod for your map because it's simply not ready for modding: use this map as a learning experience and the next map you make will be 1000x better

don't give up! i hope this mini mapping lesson was helpful, if you want more help pm me in game

Weber wrote:

yo

Normal

00:11:012 (3) - Personally I think having (2,3,4) be a perfect straight line is a really nice aesthetic, consider nudging this over slightly.

00:15:600 (4,5) - Not really important, but consider making these a perfect blanket

00:27:600 (1) - I can kind of understand why you have NC on 00:28:306 (1,1,1) - because of the heavy notes in the music it kind of fits, but those heavy notes don't actually start until 00:28:306 (1) - which makes the decision to have your NC spam start on 00:27:600 (1) - questionable. Unless there's something i'm missing, I would remove NC from this.

01:07:835 (1,3) - Really wouldn't recommend having these stacked, as it may confuse players around this level to think that the first slider is continuing while also having another note off to the side.

Hard

00:00:776 (5) - Consider bringing this up slightly to make the pentagon form look a little better: https://puu.sh/vAGqs/131b7b5890.png

00:07:129 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm assuming your idea here was to have continually increasing spacing between each notes, but I don't think constant 1/2 differences in spacing is appropriate for hard, considering players around this level are only JUST starting to get experience in playing things without consistent distance snap, I would just make this a normally spaced pentagon pattern like you did previously in the map.

(Just now looking through the rest of this diff, I noticed most of the pentagon patterns you used are pretty inconsistent, i'm assuming you did most of these by hand? Consider going through the difficulty and using Create Polygonal Circles (Ctrl+Shift+D) to make some of these a bit more consistent with each other.)

00:26:894 (5,1,2,3) - The rhythm here seems a bit iffy, consider replacing it with this: https://puu.sh/vAGE2/66dc238e6a.png

01:20:365 (1) - Shorten this repeat by 2 repeats, it only needs to repeat once for the piano.

Good luck!

• 
  General
  
  You need an advanced to fill in the gap between normal and hard, it is too large. I can do an advanced gd if needed since I like this song so much. ( Do not worry I have improved a lot since that gd)
  
  Normal
  
  00:02:894 (5) should be nc to match song new phrase and erase next note's nc.
  00:09:600 (6) since you are treating this normal as an easy, this is too difficult.
  00:12:776 (2,3,4) I recommend changing to something like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8032111
  00:16:306 (5) ^ as first comment
  00:19:129 (4,5) Delete the note in front and extend slider to white tick, sorta confusing
  01:03:953 (5) placement not nice, bad flow and confusing. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8032132 fix to this maybe
  01:11:365 ^ fix plz by making geometrical triangle.
  01:14:894 (3,4) cannot suddenly put pattern like that. Copy and paste next slider onto the area which I am talking about and do control + j
  
  
  Hard
  
  Beginning jumps more fit for an insane. . Plz make smaller. Actually all your pentagons are sorta large
  00:05:012 nc and delete subsequent nc
  00:11:894 ^
  00:16:306 ^
  Move slider at 00:21:776 (2) to blue tick to match rhythm
  Slider at 00:23:718 take previous slider and copy and paste it to this spot. Than Control + h this time.
  00:30:423 nc
  Note at 0:39:423 stack on top of next slider?
  Move note at 00:56:365 to left a bit?
  Four notes at 01:02:188 sudden change in pattern, maybe something like a square?
  Note at 01:16:129 delete over map