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iYiyo

Naotoshi wrote:

late never is too late

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00:21:019 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - having jumps on the part where the main guitar seems to stop seems weird to me. Imo it doesn't look weird just because it seems to change guitar. Also the beats are fairly supported by single circle ~ jumps so yeah
00:36:448 (1,3) - imo this visual spacing is kinda weird cuz you dont use stuff this close together normally fixed into something better~
00:40:519 (4,1,2) - pretty strange wide angle jump imo yup, fixed
00:41:483 (6,1) - nazi but can you line up the slider path of 1 a bit better with the stream? something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7772905 I tried xd
00:45:019 (1,1,1) - all sound like same sound but followed differently o.o followed differently? o.o I use 2 sliders rhythm but then 00:47:590 (3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6) - here I use circles in order to follow vocals better.
00:59:590 (3,4) - can u line this up lol sure
01:51:019 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - i don't really like the design of this stream since you have jumps with angle changes on 01:51:448 - and 01:52:090 - which aren't particularly different from the rest of the drums to me They're emphasizing the NC change which occur every half of a downbeat.
Idk... I don't see these as "jumps" so they don't really make people missread or something imo

03:11:805 (7) - imo remove all of these and follow the double based rhythm in the guitar properly, it will be a lot more interesting.
same in the ending. you arent following the constant 1/4 drums for 04:56:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - so there isn't a reason to switch back to it for 04:57:126 (6,7,8,9) - . Aaa I don't really like double based rhythm tbh. Yeah, doing so would follow "better" the guitar, but honestly speaking I find it more enjoyable and more intuitive to play streams instead, so deleting 03:11:805 (7) - wouldn't help based on that. Also for the ending, I'm doing the same as before, which is following guitar + I don't really want to map every single drum right there cause it will raise sr quite a bit D:
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Thanks Nao! :3
Nao Tomori
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00:48:448 (1) - what i mean when comparing to 00:50:162 (1) - . basically same guitar sound but different slider rhythms

main thing:
03:11:483 (5,6,7,8,9) - this rhythm. main reason i think it is bad is because 03:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - follows the guitar but then 03:11:698 (6,7,8,9) - randomly switches to quiet drums. a rhythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776122 would make the guitar clickable for the entire time and this would also make the map follow the song a lot better and feel more unique rather than just circles placed on a metronome. i highly, highly suggest doing this. very highly. your current rhythm just feels out of place and unfitting to me and is something i think is a serious issue. especially cuz stuff like 03:22:733 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - also clearly follows the guitar melody. making it intuitive just makes it bland and imo incorrect rhythm.
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yea we discussed stuff and it looks fine now, #1
Topic Starter
iYiyo

Naotoshi wrote:

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00:48:448 (1) - what i mean when comparing to 00:50:162 (1) - . basically same guitar sound but different slider rhythms ooo you were talking about that other slider xd Yep fixed, my bad xp

main thing:
03:11:483 (5,6,7,8,9) - this rhythm. main reason i think it is bad is because 03:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - follows the guitar but then 03:11:698 (6,7,8,9) - randomly switches to quiet drums. a rhythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7776122 would make the guitar clickable for the entire time and this would also make the map follow the song a lot better and feel more unique rather than just circles placed on a metronome. i highly, highly suggest doing this. very highly. your current rhythm just feels out of place and unfitting to me and is something i think is a serious issue. especially cuz stuff like 03:22:733 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - also clearly follows the guitar melody. making it intuitive just makes it bland and imo incorrect rhythm.
Alright, I asked a few person about the rhythm and I ended up by adding sliders 03:10:733 - here. Thought I didn't add 03:17:590 - nor 04:54:447 - here because the music get way more intense so I think little streams would fit better than 1/4 sliders.
I Must Decrease
since i never got around to rebubbling:



GL!~

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Topic Starter
iYiyo
Yay! Thanks both of you! <3
Gero
~ Approved (Qualified) ~
Irohas
wow finally, gratz yiyo!!
Haruto
Grats Yiyo! now rank Baton road :)
Hazu-
gratz xd
Topic Starter
iYiyo
Wuhuu :D thanks everyone!!
-NanoRIPE-
gratz!!
IamKwaN
i want pp and cute girls, you have some?
-Sh1n1-
Gratz bro
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Reason: Change BG
Topic Starter
iYiyo
Thanks Irre, and sorry for the inconvenients



BG and Combo colors changed.
I Must Decrease
Guess I'll rebubble?
Nao Tomori
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Gero
~ Approved (Qualified) ~
Monstrata
Gerobaka...
Topic Starter
iYiyo
Thanks guys! Hopefully there aren't any more problem now.
Cris-
Regrats Yiyo c:
Monstrata
Grats~

inb4 unranked because Gero qualified the map before the 24 hour rule was up
Topic Starter
iYiyo
Yay finally ranked \:D/

Thanks Monstrata and Cris!
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