Kibbleru wrote:

i think the easier fix is just to get somebody to edit your mp3. as long as u can pinpoint the problems, it should be easy for whoever can do it (meyrink, pishifat, monstrata)

Yuii- wrote:

hold if bonsai doesn't bubble

Bonsai wrote:

I'm just listing a few examples here as I haven't looked through the entire map / don't plan on checking it

03:53:751 (3,4,5,6) - too many clickable notes when this is super calm, would consider something different, pace of the song is ruined by all these notes
- I think that pattern is have not problem cause i want emphasis vocal sound and i used many circles only in there and 03:56:251 (1,2,3) - there
if i use slider in there it become to boring rhythm

04:38:334 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm seems weird during these section. personally i wouldn't omit something so important like 04:38:751 - nor
mapping 04:38:542 (3,4) - as simiar objects (same slider shapes) when they are completely different (or should be) according to the music,
what about http://i.imgur.com/HJz1auV.jpg instead?
- i changed that rhythm thx!

Yuii- wrote:

hello! i've been clearing other reqs :d sorry sorry sorry

hi enon!

K i A i
00:01:251 - 00:15:834 - hitsounds are completely inaudible here, you'll have to bump the volume a little bit to make it rankable i increased volume overall
03:33:542 (2,3) - i'm not entirely sure if it's unrankable, but it does look pretty bad if you ask me, could you ctlr+g the placement of (2)? i also not sure if it's unrankable. but i would keep it if it isn't since the flow is really nice to follow the song.

Reol
00:19:376 (3,1) - 00:22:709 (4,1) - any reason for them to be so inconsistent? they are litearlly the same that seem different thing for me though.. because 00:22:709 (4,1) - here is like starting a new part? but, 00:19:376 (3,1) - here is just like contiune the current part... i don't know how to explain this.
00:28:334 (2) - would be nice if you would move this further in order to achieve a special effect with the sliderpoints. current pattern has only 1 point from 00:27:084 (1) - to (2), so moving it to x100 y296 would be nice: http://i.imgur.com/VfXrkQr.jpg
i would also probably add hitsounds to 00:27:084 (1,2,3,4) - because the violin is p audible right there, and there's no kind of feedback right now ok i added some whistle and clap there.
03:16:251 (1) - perfect case to make a jump and you placed it on 03:16:459 (2) - that's sad well there are many way to emphasize song, not making jump there is also make sense imo.. 01:49:584 (1) - also didn't try to make jump
03:20:209 (2) - correct me if i'm wrong, but isn't this the only note stacked under a slider? if yes, then consider unstack could i hear the reason? because it's absolutely fine for me.
03:22:501 (4,5,1) - vs 03:24:167 (2,3,1) - w, what are you talking about...?
03:50:417 (1,2,1,2) - there's no feedback here, unfortunately, you'll have to add some more volume as i answered at above, overall voulum was increased.

Enon
00:47:605 (2) - p sure this should be snapped to 1/6 instead of the current placement. also extending it until 00:47:917 - would make more sense because vocals are there still aaaand there is a very audible hit fixed
02:44:584 (4) - soft-whistle here too? or a hitsound, something to add there please!! added!

C u r i
02:26:251 (1) - wouldn't a soft-whistle be more appropriate for the piano hit instead of the clap? yeah, i think so.
02:34:584 (1) - how come there's no hitosund at all here? ooops

Leaf
04:57:084 (3) - sohuld be 1/6 and 04:57:501 (4) - 1/32... although 1/32 isn't a thing in the editor, so you'll probably have to finish it on the 1/6 as well for consistency with the previous slider fixed

Monstrata wrote:

hihi~

KiAi
00:11:667 (5,6,1,2,3) - This arrangement looks a bit inconsistent with stacking enabled. Are you sure you want this spacing? I guess he wants to make there a shape.

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03:34:167 (4) - NC, and NC more often, like 03:37:917 (4) - etc... Your section is the only section where you NC very infrequently and it's causing it to be inconsistent with other members of the collab.

Cellina
01:12:709 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - Blankets can be improved here.

Enon
02:39:167 (4,1) - 02:41:042 (4,1) - Having a jump or something here would be nice. Right now you don't map any emphasis at all which makes it a bit weird transitioning to Leaf's part afterwards since they map jumps and sutff.

Leaf/Curi
03:02:500 (4,1) - Beginning the kiai on a stack instead of a jump feels kinda weak. Do a jump instead for more momentum?

Reol
03:16:667 (3,4) - Clicking on 4 is really weird since it's not supported in the music. Feels like an overmap. Use a slider instead? It's really low though I can hear* something at there. I think it's fine :O

Moa
03:56:251 (1,2,3) - Sounds overmapped imo. Use sliders instead cuz imo clicking here isn't well supported by vocals unlike the previous section.
04:42:501 (4,5) - How about making a triangle here? Creates a nicer flow going into the slider

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Leaf
04:57:084 (3,4) - Imo, don't use jumps here when you're also switching to 1/3 rhythm. The added slider-end makes it harder to snap to the head of slider 4 without accidentally breaking too.

Yuii- wrote:

Get a Tier 1 BN, Enon. I will qualify it after you get them!

Enon wrote:

Yuii- wrote:

Get a Tier 1 BN, Enon. I will qualify it after you get them!

I got a BN though, I think it needs one more BN.... it...is....for...approved....

1. 00:42:501 (3,1) - The sliders are too close, 1,77 spacing like you did with 00:42:917 (1,2) - would be better for the visuals
2. 00:54:584 (1) - move this to x:52 y:160, so the pattern looks better
3. 00:57:709 (4) - a 1/4 slider would sounds better with the hold vocal sound, also is a bit weird that you ignored the beat at 00:57:917 - (if you do then pls add a hitsound o 00:57:917 -)
4. 01:12:501 (4,5) - a slider would fit the music better, since you guys are following mostly vocals, that's why 5 sounds outplace atm
5. 02:18:542 (4,1) - the overlap looks so ugly and let's be honest guys this map is so clean stuff like this doesn't fit the map IMO
6. 02:47:501 (3,1) - same, the overlap looks ugly
7. 03:32:501 (7,1) - this is touching the HP bar, just move the pattern a bit down, overlapping the game elments in a super clean map like this one is a no for me.
8. 03:40:209 (2,4) - stack them? for a better design
9. 03:42:084 (6) - it's posible to avoid overlapping the accuracy meter? you just need to move it a bit up
10. 04:38:751 (4,1) - man this overlap looks really bad and doesn't fit the overall style of the map, can you do something else there?
11. 04:56:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - the spacing between the 1/6s and 1/4s looks the same, can you make them different, either by reducing the spacing a 1/6s (which I prefer( or adding more spacing to the 1/4s-
12. 05:02:084 (3,6) - stack them so the pattern looks cleaner? also almost the full mapset use stacking..
13. 05:03:751 (3,1) - 05:10:626 (4,1) - same as above

Natsu wrote:

diff

1. 00:42:501 (3,1) - The sliders are too close, 1,77 spacing like you did with 00:42:917 (1,2) - would be better for the visuals ok
2. 00:54:584 (1) - move this to x:52 y:160, so the pattern looks better i was suck.............
3. 02:47:501 (3,1) - same, the overlap looks ugly fixed
4. 03:32:501 (7,1) - this is touching the HP bar, just move the pattern a bit down, overlapping the game elments in a super clean map like this one is a no for me. i tried to fix it.
5. 03:40:209 (2,4) - stack them? for a better design i guess he would keep it and it seems fine for me
6. 03:42:084 (6) - it's posible to avoid overlapping the accuracy meter? you just need to move it a bit up i guess he wanted to make a blanket. you can see the tail of that slider and 03:40:417 (3) -
7. 04:38:751 (4,1) - man this overlap looks really bad and doesn't fit the overall style of the map, can you do something else there? tried to fix it.
8. 04:56:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - the spacing between the 1/6s and 1/4s looks the same, can you make them different, either by reducing the spacing a 1/6s (which I prefer( or adding more spacing to the 1/4s- fixed
9. 05:02:084 (3,6) - stack them so the pattern looks cleaner? also almost the full mapset use stacking.. fixed
10. 05:03:751 (3,1) - 05:10:626 (4,1) - same as above fixed

let me know

1. 00:57:709 (4) - a 1/4 slider would sounds better with the hold vocal sound, also is a bit weird that you ignored the beat at 00:57:917 - (if you do then pls add a hitsound o 00:57:917 -)
2. 02:18:542 (4,1) - the overlap looks so ugly and let's be honest guys this map is so clean stuff like this doesn't fit the map IMO

1. 01:12:501 (4,5) - a slider would fit the music better, since you guys are following mostly vocals, that's why 5 sounds outplace atm

Yuii- wrote:

03:14:584 (1) - 03:57:917 (1) - 04:04:584 (1) - 05:07:917 (1) - add hitsound done
03:54:167 (5,6) - would use slider instead because song doesn't really support both clickables done
04:16:251 (1,2) - spacing looks really, really low for a 1/2 pattern, can easily be misread i think it's fine because here is a silence part. using low space at a silence part would be fine
04:29:584 (1) - would have loved to see a jump here http://i.imgur.com/eFJ6VeP.jpg done
04:51:980 (4) - this is so overmapped lol i am sure that there are sounds that is supposed to be mapped.

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