Ereedon wrote:

Lazy Sloth Mod, lmao too fast lmao
[Beginner]

00:15:719 (15719|6,16053|4,16386|2,16719|0) - I'd change this part to more "pitch-following" part Rearranged
01:04:051 (64051|0) - Isn't that high pitch?
01:05:718 (65718|3,66051|5,66384|4) - move one column -->
from 01:06:717 - to 01:10:717 - <- this part needs to be fixed (pitch issue)
01:49:716 - to 01:52:383 - <--- PITCH
I don't want to map too pitch relevance, but just hand balance

01:56:383 - add note?
01:57:716 - ^
01:59:049 - ^
I wanna use single note only at this part

etc etc (to this moment: 02:07:049 - ) :o

not necessary changes (which means you can ignore this stuff over here):
00:07:386 - maybe add note to 7?
00:09:053 - add 4?
00:09:386 - add 5?
00:15:386 - add somewhere (try to hear the pitch)
00:17:053 - add note
00:17:386 - add note
00:23:386 - ^
I used LN for 1/2 main melody structure that sound isn't 00:23:886

Maybe add some long notes here? (just like you did here 00:50:052 (50052|3) - )
00:43:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:44:719 - (delete 00:44:052 (44052|4) - )
00:45:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:46:718 - ^ (delete notes between that time)
00:47:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:48:718 - ^
already seems fine tho

SV SUGGESTION:
Maybe you should make little teleports here? between 01:41:716 - and 01:42:216 -
01:42:216 - and 01:42:549 -
01:42:549 - and 01:42:883 - etc.
to this moment 01:44:383 -
only for last diff

[Hyper]
00:34:719 (34719|0) - move to 3 (but you would have to change part after 00:34:886 - somehow just a little bit :p) looks fine to me, keep this
01:09:384 (69384|1) - move to 1 (lack of notes in first column) overall this section, first column already take adequate part

[Another]
00:52:552 (52552|4) - I would change this somehow ._. (Maybe try to move those short lns? for example pattern like this: 3256) hmm but seems fine to me and diff

I really like this song. This map looks great, those hitsounds are marvelous. Good job, awesome beatmap! =DD

Thx for mod :3

Ereedon wrote:

Lazy Sloth Mod, lmao
[Wonki's Normal]
00:25:719 (25719|5) - Maybe you should make this long note longer? (from 00:25:719 - to 00:26:719 - , but in this way move 00:26:719 (26719|5) - this note somewhere else)

not necessary changes:
00:47:885 (47885|3,48052|4,48218|5) - move one column to the right
01:27:716 - I suggest this pattern



I really like this song. This map looks great, those hitsounds are marvelous. Good job, awesome beatmap!

thanks

okay I'm back and just pointing out something I[ve been feel weird lately when playing this beatmap bcz u no reply PM plz
sayakather
name diff is bms-ish while the map itself LN-ish <_<
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00:04:553 (4553|2) - to 5
00:05:553 (5553|2) - to 5
00:09:553 (9553|3) - to 5
00:18:719 (18719|0) - to 3?
00:26:053 (26053|6) - http://puu.sh/uvCu7/325401b32b.jpg
00:35:136 (35136|1,35219|2,35219|5,35303|4) - the.. electro sound emphaszie? http://puu.sh/uvCyP/f81bf05984.jpg
00:36:136 (36136|4,36219|1,36219|5,36303|2) - ^ http://puu.sh/uvCBl/b697b75edb.jpg
00:46:219 (46219|4,46219|2,46219|1,46302|5,46302|3,46302|0) - awkward imo, how about http://puu.sh/uvCMd/41e92b0d2c.jpg
00:50:052 (50052|0,50052|4,50052|3,50163|5,50163|4,50163|1,50274|5,50274|6,50274|2,50385|0,50385|3,50385|1,50496|1,50496|4,50496|2,50607|2,50607|3,50607|5) - this is seriously not hard, but I feel uncomfortable, I remember you say you want to keep jack, how about http://puu.sh/uvCXR/e9d9d8fe62.png (I feel a lot better when play)01:00:718 (60718|3,60718|4,60801|1,60801|2) - http://puu.sh/uvD7C/24078e64b7.png
01:13:051 (73051|0,73134|1) - ctrl+j play better for me (for me)
01:14:384 (74384|6,74467|5) - ^
01:15:717 (75717|0,75801|1) - ^
01:18:967 (78967|5,78967|3,79051|6,79051|4) - ^
01:22:384 (82384|4,82550|4,82717|4) - hmm jack here is not really fun to play really .. how about http://puu.sh/uvDi6/5d5b8cbaaa.jpg don't you think it's flows better? you can also do this when doing that flow nicely with music http://puu.sh/uvDkp/5623dfa3fc.jpg
01:25:966 (85966|0,86050|1) - ctrl+j?
01:30:883 (90883|5) - to 4? for visual
01:31:383 (91383|0,91549|6) - you can make 1/8 or 1/4 LN here for cymbal finish emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDwt/adad0ebc21.png
01:31:883 (91883|6,92216|0) - ^
01:32:716 (92716|6,93049|6,93383|6,93716|6) - ^
01:41:549 (101549|1) - to 4?
you can make 01:52:383 (112383|0,112883|5) - a 1/2 but cut like this for melody long (the long synth) emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDLP/cdc2409655.jpg or the 2nd can be changed to 01:52:883 (112883|2) - instead
01:53:383 (113383|6) - ^
01:58:883 (118883|2) - ctrl+h flow better
02:01:216 (121216|4,121216|5,121383|5,121383|4) - different sound, how about http://puu.sh/uvDYy/61b3319cb4.png also the note before need 1 more note because the same sound with note after
02:02:716 (122716|2) - to 2

kkk no kudosu this is as thanks doing irc many times with me ;;

ArcherLove wrote:

okay I'm back and just pointing out something I[ve been feel weird lately when playing this beatmap bcz u no reply PM plz
sayakather
name diff is bms-ish while the map itself LN-ish <_< sayaka good girl
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00:04:553 (4553|2) - to 5 I want them to feel like playing a piano, when playing those notes
00:05:553 (5553|2) - to 5 ^
00:09:553 (9553|3) - to 5 ^
00:18:719 (18719|0) - to 3? Rearranged
00:26:053 (26053|6) - http://puu.sh/uvCu7/325401b32b.jpg change to LN, and not add note
00:35:136 (35136|1,35219|2,35219|5,35303|4) - the.. electro sound emphaszie? http://puu.sh/uvCyP/f81bf05984.jpg I don't want to put LN at this part
00:36:136 (36136|4,36219|1,36219|5,36303|2) - ^ http://puu.sh/uvCBl/b697b75edb.jpg ^
00:46:219 (46219|4,46219|2,46219|1,46302|5,46302|3,46302|0) - awkward imo, how about http://puu.sh/uvCMd/41e92b0d2c.jpg I think it's fine
00:50:052 (50052|0,50052|4,50052|3,50163|5,50163|4,50163|1,50274|5,50274|6,50274|2,50385|0,50385|3,50385|1,50496|1,50496|4,50496|2,50607|2,50607|3,50607|5) - this is seriously not hard, but I feel uncomfortable, I remember you say you want to keep jack, how about http://puu.sh/uvCXR/e9d9d8fe62.png (I feel a lot better when play) Awesome!
01:00:718 (60718|3,60718|4,60801|1,60801|2) - http://puu.sh/uvD7C/24078e64b7.png It's not bad to me
01:13:051 (73051|0,73134|1) - ctrl+j play better for me (for me) lmao but keep this
01:14:384 (74384|6,74467|5) - ^ ^
01:15:717 (75717|0,75801|1) - ^ ^
01:18:967 (78967|5,78967|3,79051|6,79051|4) - ^ ^
01:22:384 (82384|4,82550|4,82717|4) - hmm jack here is not really fun to play really .. how about http://puu.sh/uvDi6/5d5b8cbaaa.jpg don't you think it's flows better? you can also do this when doing that flow nicely with music http://puu.sh/uvDkp/5623dfa3fc.jpg Thx for suggestion! I take first one
01:25:966 (85966|0,86050|1) - ctrl+j? Keep this
01:30:883 (90883|5) - to 4? for visual Good!
01:31:383 (91383|0,91549|6) - you can make 1/8 or 1/4 LN here for cymbal finish emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDwt/adad0ebc21.png I don't want to put LN at this part
01:31:883 (91883|6,92216|0) - ^ ^
01:32:716 (92716|6,93049|6,93383|6,93716|6) - ^ ^
01:41:549 (101549|1) - to 4? Good!
you can make 01:52:383 (112383|0,112883|5) - a 1/2 but cut like this for melody long (the long synth) emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDLP/cdc2409655.jpg or the 2nd can be changed to 01:52:883 (112883|2) - instead Sorry but keep this
01:53:383 (113383|6) - ^ ^
01:58:883 (118883|2) - ctrl+h flow better Oki
02:01:216 (121216|4,121216|5,121383|5,121383|4) - different sound, how about http://puu.sh/uvDYy/61b3319cb4.png also the note before need 1 more note because the same sound with note after piano is different but I want to show organ piano-like sound
02:02:716 (122716|2) - to 2 Same reason with above

kkk no kudosu this is as thanks doing irc many times with me ;;

Really Big Thanks Archer love you <3

Hello Garalulu! M4M

[SayaKather]
00:08:886 (8886|4,9053|2) - you should switch notes here, because the second note is higher PR compared to previous?

00:09:553 (9553|3) - in that case, also move this note to col 2 because of a lot lower pitch.

00:10:886 - why single note?

00:15:219 - 00:23:219 - 00:16:886 - 00:17:219 - I recommend you to make this triple note so that the chord pattern you try to make here can signify the piano sound better.. since from the way i see it is that it's 4 note 2 note pattern with lack of diversity for the moment.

For some of the mod above, you may apply on lower diff as well.

00:24:719 - well, i will suggest you try to use this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497908 , it signifies the pitch rising sound better here, and it gives symmetry and complement the pattern you make at 00:25:719 - , which gives double advantages.

00:26:386 (26386|4,26469|5,26553|3,26636|4) - this kind of sound can be made into jack to complement the same snare sound here.. i recommend move 00:26:386 (26386|4,26553|3) - to col 6 and col 5 here, it fit the sound better. or you can arrange to fit the jack there..

00:32:886 - 00:33:219 - this triple is kinda questionable imo, there isn't any piano sound that you follow for 3 notes sound at 00:31:553 - 00:31:886 - ,etc .. makes the double?

00:40:719 - should be 5 notes chord if following what you want at 00:41:053 -

00:41:719 - the bracket stream seem focused on right hand which kinda unnecessary imo.. i think you can spread it a bit more to provide bracket balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497976

00:43:052 (43052|5,43052|4,43052|6,43052|2) - This chord should be Ctrl+H'ed mainly because it's lower pitch chord that should be accented with left hand chord, and it provide variation with 00:44:052 - too.

01:06:217 (66217|1,66551|0,66717|1) - i believe you can make it more symmetrical by make it 1-2-1 , it will mirrored the pattern at 01:05:718 (65718|6,65884|6,66051|6) -

01:16:217 (76217|5,76217|1,76301|4,76301|2) - you miss out the potential sound that can be made jack.

01:20:051 - i find the svs here kinda hard to manage since you make them in the middle of harsh and dense chord, probably you can nerfed the svs?

01:31:383 (91383|6,91549|6,91716|6,91883|6,92049|6,92216|6,92383|6) - please avoid the anchor..

01:41:383 - you can add another note for finish sound, i don't think it will be too hard when it's finish sound..

[Another]

00:33:719 - I find the pattern to be not symmetrical enough, how about try this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498275

00:54:385 - well this one has 2 note + 1 LN while the one at 00:52:385 - have 3 note + 1 ln, might wanna make them consistent.

01:01:051 - i suggest to reduce the chord into double to differentiate with other finish sound.

01:23:216 (83216|2,83300|0,83383|1) - not make this col 2,3,1? will be more symmetrical and easier to hit.

01:32:049 - its worth to be added another note for piano i think..

01:42:216 - i suggest differentiate the chord with 01:42:549 - 01:41:716 - because of different pitch.

01:49:049 - 01:49:383 - 01:49:716 - felt underemphasized, you can probably add another note for each of the timeline here..

[Hyper]

00:33:386 - Instead of making them the same as 00:31:886 - , how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498323 ? give symmetry and other pattern too.

01:00:551 - shouldn't this be double to make it consistent like 01:00:884 - ?

01:22:717 (82717|4,82800|3,82884|2,82967|1) - I prefer this to be trill to differentiate with stair sound from before, it won't be too hard either ..

01:31:716 - 01:32:049 - I sort of hope you make this into single instead to differentiate from strong sound like 01:32:216 - , kinda awkward they have same note chord.. it will be consistent with 00:26:386 - too..

01:52:883 - Random double imo, not kick sound..

Have no time to mod all for a while.. hope this will be suffice :3

This map is quite interesting for me, but I still have my doubt over the SV in hardest diff, which sometimes kinda over the top for me and kinda forced in the middle of dense pattern.. i will watch this one for a while, but if you can tone down the sv / show proof that the SVs are alright, then i can help you push this i think

Maxus wrote:

Hello Garalulu! M4M

[SayaKather]
00:08:886 (8886|4,9053|2) - you should switch notes here, because the second note is higher PR compared to previous? Fixed

00:09:553 (9553|3) - in that case, also move this note to col 2 because of a lot lower pitch. Fixed

00:10:886 - why single note? it's not double piano sound

00:15:219 - 00:23:219 - 00:16:886 - 00:17:219 - I recommend you to make this triple note so that the chord pattern you try to make here can signify the piano sound better.. since from the way i see it is that it's 4 note 2 note pattern with lack of diversity for the moment. Fixed. make 3 3 pattern

For some of the mod above, you may apply on lower diff as well. applied

00:24:719 - well, i will suggest you try to use this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497908 , it signifies the pitch rising sound better here, and it gives symmetry and complement the pattern you make at 00:25:719 - , which gives double advantages. Fixed

00:26:386 (26386|4,26469|5,26553|3,26636|4) - this kind of sound can be made into jack to complement the same snare sound here.. i recommend move 00:26:386 (26386|4,26553|3) - to col 6 and col 5 here, it fit the sound better. or you can arrange to fit the jack there.. I don't want to put a jack at this part

00:32:886 - 00:33:219 - this triple is kinda questionable imo, there isn't any piano sound that you follow for 3 notes sound at 00:31:553 - 00:31:886 - ,etc .. makes the double? Thx for suggestion!

00:40:719 - should be 5 notes chord if following what you want at 00:41:053 - Oki

00:41:719 - the bracket stream seem focused on right hand which kinda unnecessary imo.. i think you can spread it a bit more to provide bracket balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497976 Fixed

00:43:052 (43052|5,43052|4,43052|6,43052|2) - This chord should be Ctrl+H'ed mainly because it's lower pitch chord that should be accented with left hand chord, and it provide variation with 00:44:052 - too. Oki

01:06:217 (66217|1,66551|0,66717|1) - i believe you can make it more symmetrical by make it 1-2-1 , it will mirrored the pattern at 01:05:718 (65718|6,65884|6,66051|6) - Good

01:16:217 (76217|5,76217|1,76301|4,76301|2) - you miss out the potential sound that can be made jack. Rearranged

01:20:051 - i find the svs here kinda hard to manage since you make them in the middle of harsh and dense chord, probably you can nerfed the svs?
change SV 2.0 0.67 -> 1.8 0.73. I think player will not confuse with this sv because svs already appear with strong drum sound, so they can understand why svs are here, play well this part.

01:31:383 (91383|6,91549|6,91716|6,91883|6,92049|6,92216|6,92383|6) - please avoid the anchor.. move 01:31:716 (91716|6,92049|6) - to 6

01:41:383 - you can add another note for finish sound, i don't think it will be too hard when it's finish sound.. Added

[Another]

00:33:719 - I find the pattern to be not symmetrical enough, how about try this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498275 Oki

00:54:385 - well this one has 2 note + 1 LN while the one at 00:52:385 - have 3 note + 1 ln, might wanna make them consistent. add one note

01:01:051 - i suggest to reduce the chord into double to differentiate with other finish sound. fixed

01:23:216 (83216|2,83300|0,83383|1) - not make this col 2,3,1? will be more symmetrical and easier to hit. nice point

01:32:049 - its worth to be added another note for piano i think.. I don't add that piano sound at this part

01:42:216 - i suggest differentiate the chord with 01:42:549 - 01:41:716 - because of different pitch. main piano is same pitch so keep this.

01:49:049 - 01:49:383 - 01:49:716 - felt underemphasized, you can probably add another note for each of the timeline here.. Fixed

[Hyper]

00:33:386 - Instead of making them the same as 00:31:886 - , how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498323 ? give symmetry and other pattern too. rearranged

01:00:551 - shouldn't this be double to make it consistent like 01:00:884 - ? add note at 01:00:884 - 01:01:218 -

01:22:717 (82717|4,82800|3,82884|2,82967|1) - I prefer this to be trill to differentiate with stair sound from before, it won't be too hard either .. rearranged

01:31:716 - 01:32:049 - I sort of hope you make this into single instead to differentiate from strong sound like 01:32:216 - , kinda awkward they have same note chord.. it will be consistent with 00:26:386 - too.. Fixed

01:52:883 - Random double imo, not kick sound.. 01:52:549 with melody sound so it's double

Have no time to mod all for a while.. hope this will be suffice :3

This map is quite interesting for me, but I still have my doubt over the SV in hardest diff, which sometimes kinda over the top for me and kinda forced in the middle of dense pattern.. i will watch this one for a while, but if you can tone down the sv / show proof that the SVs are alright, then i can help you push this i think

SV will effect to emphasize chart structure, it won't exaggerate it tho. I emphasize kick/crash structure more strong to use SV. It'll be problem if that has LN in SV part, it's clearly stream pattern. Players already recognize the pattern of chart before passing that SV section. It's different as each player's skill, what I said before (recognizing pattern and passing that), It's not any problem. As RC, Problem will be appeared that SV used at part where can't feel to add any SV. I don't have enough skill to pass this chart perfectly, I had many testers already so it'll be not problem by my opinion and their opinion.
Please think about it one more! and Thx for modding :3

Well, I understand your elaboration about the SVs, i didn't really ask to delete it or anything, but just asked for it to be nerfed a bit if you want it.. but if top players find it fine, i am fine with it.

anyway, here's the rest of mod.

[Wonki's Normal]

Note: If you apply my add notes mod, please don't forget to also put the HS..

00:02:719 - I get that you want to make your own variation of the opening, but this still feels too empty around here... i suggest you change 00:02:719 (2719|6,6719|2,9719|1) - to LN at the very least.. don't forget to shorten 00:08:719 - to 00:09:719 - if you apply.

00:48:052 - this part feels inconsistent with 00:44:052 - ... :/

01:18:051 (78051|0,78717|5,79384|6) - it would be really great if you can turn these into 1/1 LN emphasizing the synth BG sound.

01:21:051 - make this double for consistency with 01:20:051 -

01:32:716 - Should be double too according to 01:32:216 -

01:34:049 - Should be 2 notes according to 01:23:050 - and apparently you forgot F HS here.

01:46:716 - add another note for consistency with 01:46:383 - , don't forget to add HS cym_4dW


[Beginner]
00:41:386 - i kinda wonder why is this double while at 00:42:053 - it's double with no F sound tbh..

01:02:384 - I think you can expressed Pitch better here with https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7505219

01:14:051 (74051|2) - move to col 5? the left hand movement a bit too hard for beginner imo.

01:16:717 (76717|4) - also move to col 3 if you agree with above, since i know you try to mirror this.

02:00:049 (120049|2,120383|0) - move to col 2 and col 4? i find that col 2 doesn't have a note for a while there, and emphasis at 02:00:383 - can be expressed better with the note being at col 4.

02:06:383 (126383|2,126716|3) - I find these to be a lot more fit in col 7 and col 5.. it mirroring the end part at 02:07:049 - which musically fit and good imo.

Well, Please recheck all the hitsound in case there's unused / wrong HS, because it's really important, thank you :3
Call me back if you already done.

Maxus wrote:

Well, I understand your elaboration about the SVs, i didn't really ask to delete it or anything, but just asked for it to be nerfed a bit if you want it.. but if top players find it fine, i am fine with it.

anyway, here's the rest of mod.

[Wonki's Normal]

Note: If you apply my add notes mod, please don't forget to also put the HS..

00:02:719 - I get that you want to make your own variation of the opening, but this still feels too empty around here... i suggest you change 00:02:719 (2719|6,6719|2,9719|1) - to LN at the very least.. don't forget to shorten 00:08:719 - to 00:09:719 - if you apply. I want to keep this

00:48:052 - this part feels inconsistent with 00:44:052 - ... :/ lol

01:18:051 (78051|0,78717|5,79384|6) - it would be really great if you can turn these into 1/1 LN emphasizing the synth BG sound. Fixed

01:21:051 - make this double for consistency with 01:20:051 - Fixed

01:32:716 - Should be double too according to 01:32:216 - Fixed

01:34:049 - Should be 2 notes according to 01:23:050 - and apparently you forgot F HS here. then i put 1note 01:23:050 - here

01:46:716 - add another note for consistency with 01:46:383 - , don't forget to add HS cym_4dW Fixed

Call me back if you already done.

done

Maxus wrote:

Well, I understand your elaboration about the SVs, i didn't really ask to delete it or anything, but just asked for it to be nerfed a bit if you want it.. but if top players find it fine, i am fine with it.

anyway, here's the rest of mod.

[Beginner]
00:41:386 - i kinda wonder why is this double while at 00:42:053 - it's double with no F sound tbh.. I used double at drum roll like 00:40:719 - 00:41:053 - 00:42:053 - 00:42:719 - to emphasize them.

01:02:384 - I think you can expressed Pitch better here with https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7505219 Fixed

01:14:051 (74051|2) - move to col 5? the left hand movement a bit too hard for beginner imo. Oki

01:16:717 (76717|4) - also move to col 3 if you agree with above, since i know you try to mirror this. Good

02:00:049 (120049|2,120383|0) - move to col 2 and col 4? i find that col 2 doesn't have a note for a while there, and emphasis at 02:00:383 - can be expressed better with the note being at col 4. I don't want to add note more, so just moved

02:06:383 (126383|2,126716|3) - I find these to be a lot more fit in col 7 and col 5.. it mirroring the end part at 02:07:049 - which musically fit and good imo. Rearranged

Well, Please recheck all the hitsound in case there's unused / wrong HS, because it's really important, thank you :3
Call me back if you already done.

Rechecked all HS and applied!
Removed tp1_48.wav

I find it fine now :3
Good luck lulu

Maxus wrote:

I find it fine now :3
Good luck lulu

Thank you >w <)//

shot star!

Thanks for advice

ascended to madoka

ArcherLove wrote:

ascended to madoka

ascension to chex

Hi, sorry for the huge delay
just a little stuff before qualify

Beginner
- 00:15:053 (15053|3) - instead of long note, how about use 1/2 note pattern here? i think it would be better
- 00:16:719 (16719|0) - 00:23:053 (23053|3) - same goes to here ^ suggest to add note at white line here instead of LN
- 00:56:718 (56718|3,56718|1) - move to the left by 1?
- 01:49:049 (109049|0,109383|2,109716|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/vqfFO/77ae8c3b5c.png , similiar idea with 01:46:383 (106383|4,106716|2,107049|0,107049|6) -

Wonki's Normal
- 00:25:386 (25386|1) - move to 1? it would make a much neater pattern
- 00:41:886 - better not to miss a note for 1/2 stream (1/4 sound)

Another
- 01:21:300 - why not add a note here? there is still 1/4 sound.

Sayakather
- 00:44:219 (44219|3) - move to 5 to reduce the tension on thumb finger
- 00:48:218 (48218|3) - move to 2 same reason like before, i find it would be hard for later pattern on 00:48:385 (48385|3,48385|0,48385|5,48385|6,48441|2,48496|4,48552|6,48552|3,48552|0,48593|5,48593|1,48635|2,48635|4,48677|3,48718|6,48718|5,48718|0,48718|1) - should give a little spacing before the excecution
- 01:00:218 (60218|3) - move to 3 could be much comfortable to play
- 01:00:551 (60551|3) - suggest to move to 3

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi, sorry for the huge delay
just a little stuff before qualify


Wonki's Normal
- 00:25:386 (25386|1) - move to 1? it would make a much neater pattern
- 00:41:886 - better not to miss a note for 1/2 stream (1/4 sound)

All fixed!

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi, sorry for the huge delay No problem!
just a little stuff before qualify

Beginner
- 00:15:053 (15053|3) - instead of long note, how about use 1/2 note pattern here? i think it would be better
- 00:16:719 (16719|0) - 00:23:053 (23053|3) - same goes to here ^ suggest to add note at white line here instead of LN
I didn't put note only with this sound 00:14:886. so I could make 1/1 pattern. there is melody at 1/2, so I want to express with LN.
- 00:56:718 (56718|3,56718|1) - move to the left by 1? Fixed
- 01:49:049 (109049|0,109383|2,109716|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/vqfFO/77ae8c3b5c.png , similiar idea with 01:46:383 (106383|4,106716|2,107049|0,107049|6) - Good! Fixed

Another
- 01:21:300 - why not add a note here? there is still 1/4 sound. added

Sayakather
- 00:44:219 (44219|3) - move to 5 to reduce the tension on thumb finger
- 00:48:218 (48218|3) - move to 2 same reason like before, i find it would be hard for later pattern on 00:48:385 (48385|3,48385|0,48385|5,48385|6,48441|2,48496|4,48552|6,48552|3,48552|0,48593|5,48593|1,48635|2,48635|4,48677|3,48718|6,48718|5,48718|0,48718|1) - should give a little spacing before the excecution
all fixed
- 01:00:218 (60218|3) - move to 3 could be much comfortable to play oki!
- 01:00:551 (60551|3) - suggest to move to 3 I want to make 01:00:384 (60384|6,60384|0,60384|3,60551|0,60551|3,60551|6) - this position with SV, so keep this.

Thx CS nyan! >w<

alright everything is good to go!
nyan

Critical_Star wrote:

alright everything is good to go!
nyan

XD Really big thanks about it!!!! 'W'w'W'

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