[General]
- Imo, BG is a bit low quality and seems like it's from an unrelated anime or something like that. Instead, might try this https://puu.sh/w8jhU.jpg
- Lots of empty silence at the end of soft-hitclap, here's the fix https://puu.sh/w8juk.wav
- Could reduce the file size of soft-hitnormal https://puu.sh/w8JXL.wav
- soft-hitwhistle is pretty quiet, here's the same sample but with the audio boosted a little https://puu.sh/w8K2u.wav
- Might consider using HP 7 for the basic since there's quite a few 1/1 notes with short 1/2 bursts present, so you might not want to make it too mashable
- I'm not well versed with how some games name their difficulties, but I thought reflec beat used Basic instead of beginner? Again, I'm unsure, so I'm just questioning it now.
[Wonderful]
00:08:453 (8453|0,8612|0) - Not really that sure about why this stack is here. It doesn't seem like you use stacks at all in this intro section, so I would suggest moving the first note to 3, or the second note to 3 to avoid the stack
00:10:846 (10846|2) - I would suggest shortening this LN to end at 00:11:006 - so that you can make room for a triple at 00:11:165 - for the crash
00:11:325 - 00:12:282 - I'm unsure of why these notes are jumps when there is no clear pattern or sound that you are following. It seems as if they were just added randomly simply to have them. I would change them to singles for consistency.
00:15:155 - Pattern here feels a bit unnatural at places due to some direction turns at places like 00:15:234 (15234|2,15314|1,15394|2) - , so I'd do this instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824575800:24:729 - There's a kick here in the music, so I would add another note here, preferably in 4 to avoid a possible 3 note stack in col 3
00:28:320 (28320|2,28320|3) - I don't think that the sound here is strong enough to be deserving of a jump. Instead, I would just use a single and turn this into a simple roll like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824577900:28:718 (28718|1) - Consider moving this to col 1 since the sounds are similar at 00:28:559 (28559|0,28718|1) - and stacking them would get that feeling of repetition through
00:28:878 (28878|3) - If the above is accepted, move this to 2 to avoid a stack with 00:28:718 (28718|3) -
00:31:272 - Consider adding an LN here for the reverse cymbal, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824580600:35:899 (35899|1,35899|0) - The sound here is just a bell(?) or something similar, I would only use a single here for it. Perhaps remove the note in 1
00:36:218 (36218|2,36218|0) - As for this, I would recommend adding a 3/2 LN for the bass that begins here and ends on the downbeat of the next measure
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824583400:38:931 (38931|2,39091|3) - Since the pitch descends here, I think it'd be nice to flip the order of the columns so the short LN is in 3 and the longer LN in 4
00:43:399 (43399|2,43559|2,43639|3,43718|2) - A bit too straining on the right hand. I'd try to balance it out a bit more like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824584401:00:314 (60314|2) - Move this to 2 to avoid a 3 note stack in column 3
01:02:229 - I would add another note in col 1 here for the piano and also because it starts a new slow section, so it would serve to kind of end off the previous section imo.
01:04:144 (64144|3,64463|2,65421|3) - I would remove these notes since they don't have the piano layered on top of them. Having them here kind of removes the emphasis you would get from the notes such as 01:04:782 - in this slow section
01:06:218 - I'd vary the pattern from the beginning since they're the same right now
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824590601:08:453 (68453|3) - It'd be ok to end this off at 01:09:729 - and add a note in 4 at 01:09:889 - for the triple
01:16:750 (76750|3,76830|2,76990|2,77070|3,77149|2) - this pattern made me cry a bit lol. It's due to all the direction changes within it that make it kind of difficult to execute
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824592001:17:468 - Going off the above though, I'm pretty sure you're missing a note here
01:20:101 - This measure is inconsistent with how you mapped previously at 00:18:825 - because you didn't overlap the LNs the first time it came around.Try this instead, it keeps the same general structure as before and reduces a few of the stacks
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824596101:21:777 (81777|2,81937|2,82096|2,82256|2) - Unneeded stack imo, I'd try to rearrange the notes a bit and make them more directional to avoid it, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824597601:27:123 (87123|2,87123|1,87203|3,87282|2,87282|1,87362|3) - this pattern makes me sad because of how heavily weighted it is on the right hand compared to left. I would try to break it up (especially the jumps) in different arrangements like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824604401:31:431 (91431|2,91431|1) - I'd suggest ending one of these off a bit earlier at 01:32:229 - and then adding another LN for the reverse cymbal, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8246054Hitsounds00:13:240 (13240|1) - I think you mean to make this a finish and a whistle as opposed to a clap since there's a crash and kick in the music. This applies for all places throughout the rest of the song and in the other difficulties, so I won't mention them now.
00:14:835 (14835|0) - add c
00:17:389 (17389|2) - add w
00:21:857 (21857|2,22176|0,23453|2,23772|2,24410|1,24729|1) - and so on. You're missing tons of whistles in this section for the kicks, so you should probably recheck this in all your difficulties
00:26:006 (26006|2) - add w
00:28:399 (28399|1) - ^
00:30:155 (30155|1,30474|0,30793|0) - ^
00:40:208 (40208|2,40687|1,41165|2) - ^
01:20:101 (80101|1) - ^
01:29:676 (89676|2) - remove w, there's no kick here
01:32:867 (92867|0) - add f
[Hyper]
00:02:628 (2628|2,2708|1) - I'd suggest control H and shifting it one column to the left to make the pattern a bit more balanced across both hands
00:07:734 (7734|1,7814|2) - Same thing as the above but shift it one column to the right instead, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824607300:08:293 (8293|1,8453|0) - I would combine these two LNs into one since the reverse cymbal is just one singular sound. As for the piano sound or whatever, you can just add a note at 00:08:453 - like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824608100:11:325 (11325|2,11325|0) - 00:12:282 (12282|1,12282|2) - Similar to what I mentioned in the wonderful diff, I don't really see the reason for these sounds to be jumps. I assume they're not really following anything emphasized because if it were to follow the piano for example, you would be missing notes at 00:12:921 - 00:17:070 - 00:18:027 - and so on
00:13:240 - 00:14:835 - 00:15:793 - and so on. For places like these where there are short crashes, I think it's ok to add another note and make these triples since they stand out a lot in the music.
00:48:506 (48506|3,48665|2,48825|3,48984|2,49144|3) - this whole pattern is very right hand heavy. I would try to spread the notes out a bit more evenly like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824611700:58:718 (58718|0,58878|1,59038|0,59197|1,59357|0) - Same thing as above, it's much more straining on the left hand than it is the right, so I would try a rearrange
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824612501:13:559 (73559|1,73718|2,73718|0,73878|3) - Control H to make the pattern a bit more even across both hands
01:14:038 - if the above is accepted, try rearranging the next few notes a bit like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824613601:16:431 (76431|2,76591|1,76591|3,76750|2,76910|1,76910|3) - needlessly heavy on the right hand now :/
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8246142[Normal]
00:02:389 - to 00:02:708 - might just use an LN here instead to represent the 1/4 since the 1/2 notes don't really stand out from the rest of the measure
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824623600:04:942 - A single LN here feels too slow and boring imo. I'd try to have some fun with the releases and holds to better keep the player's attention, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824625300:15:314 - 00:15:633 - I like the change in feeling here to represent those 1/4 notes in the harmony, but I think that the density should remain about the same, if not increase a little since there's more things happening in the music, so I would add jumps on the downbeats to be consistent with that aspect of this section, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824626600:23:293 - to 00:24:889 - rip column 2. I'd try to balance out the columns a bit more like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824627400:38:931 - 00:39:091 - Add notes in col 2 and 3 respectively because the piano run still continues from 00:38:293 - and I don't think it makes much sense to only map half of it and stop straight in the middle.
00:41:165 (41165|1) - I'd turn this into a 2/1 ln for the reverse cymbal which can act as a transition between the two different musical phrases
01:06:218 - Would suggest something similar to the first suggestion here, but simplified a bit more because there's only 3 columns in use
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824635101:16:591 - 01:16:910 - same thing I mentioned at 00:15:314 - 00:15:633 -
01:35:421 - I'd do something similar to what you did in the wonderful and hyper diffs by just adding the 3 1/2 notes, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8246394[Beginner]
00:08:612 (8612|0,9250|0) - I don't really know why you would stack these notes when their pitches (assuming the vocal here) are different. Instead I'd move it to 3, and then move 00:10:367 (10367|2) - to 1.
01:09:889 (69889|3,70527|3) - ^
00:17:548 (17548|3) - I would either remove this note or move it up to 00:17:708 - to be consistent with how the rest of the 1/2 crashes like 00:14:676 (14676|2,14835|3) - or 00:13:080 (13080|3,13240|0) - are mapped.
00:26:006 (26006|0) - Might be cool to make this into a 3/2 LN for the bass that leads into the downbeat of the next measure
00:31:272 - Similarly, would add an LN in 3 for the reverse cymbal and lead into the next measure at 00:31:591 -
00:41:165 (41165|1) - ^. I might also add another note in 3 for the crash in the same place
00:33:825 - 00:33:984 - Same thing I mentioned in the normal diff, I would rather you map the full 1/2 piano run here as opposed to just half of it since the music clearly continues with the 1/2 despite the chart not reflecting that
00:38:931 - 00:39:091 - ^
00:42:123 - to 00:44:676 - column 2 oppression reeee. I'd try to balance out your notes a bit more so you don't accidentally leave columns empty for entire measures
00:54:250 (54250|0,54889|0,55527|0) - I don't really understand the point of this three note stack. You could easily move some of them over to col 4 which isn't used from 00:53:931 - to 00:56:165 -
00:57:123 (57123|3,57442|3) - I don't think this needs to be stacked either since there's no emphasis you're getting at here. I'd move this to a different column to avoid it in that case.
01:35:421 (95421|3) - I would end this at 01:37:974 - instead so it ends on a clear downbeat and also at the same place that the final 3 1/2 notes are.