Hey !
[A Universe Without Stars]
Consider reducing note volumes at circles like 00:04:002 (1,2) -, 00:05:602 (1,2) - etc. They really sound too loud.
00:06:002 (3,4,5) - 00:04:402 (3) - Having so much difference in terms of intensity in such short amount of time to map the same thing can be really annoying. Compare how you mapped them in each case : they sound the same in the music but 1st pattern is a reversed slider and 2nd pattern is 3 1/2 sliders. It feels really inconsistent and unnecessarily hard.
00:07:202 (6) - This feels really overmapped since it doesn't follow vocals.
00:53:402 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - The amount of 1/2 is maybe too big, not sure of what you're following.
00:55:402 (5,1) - A spacing increase could describe the song better.
01:21:002 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same. They feel like a spike for no real reason.
01:38:402 - Having this clickable rather than the red tick could have been more interesting gameplay-wise, since you're focusing on vocals.
01:51:602 (1,2) - Same issue as earlier. Consider using some 1/1 sliders to keep the emphasis 01:50:002 (1,2,3,4,5) - proper.
02:15:802 (1,2,3) - That 1/1 slider indicates to the player that you focus vocals so 02:16:402 (2) - this should be 2 circles to follow them accurately.
02:22:002 - Inconsistency. Please make that tick clickable so it follows the same instrument as earlier/later and is consistent with the rest. You did it at 02:24:802 (4,1) - .
02:28:002 (4) - Same.
02:34:402 (6) - same. etc
02:44:002 (2) - I suppose you wanted this to work as a fake click but it doesn't work since there is a spinner right after. Please add a circle at 02:44:402 - .
02:59:602 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So many circles in a row... does the song really support it ?
03:18:402 (2,3,4,5) - Global spacing feels really high compared to the rest here.
04:46:602 (2,3) - CTRL+H ?
04:58:402 (1) - Same as earlier !
05:05:602 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 05:14:802 (7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Spacing is really Inconsistent which really makes the latter pattern feel like a spike.
05:24:002 (4) - Same
05:32:802 (6,7,8) - That low spacing and density really feel like an annoying gap among all those 1/2 filled patterns.
05:36:002 (2,3) - 05:36:802 (4,5) - Spacing should differ.
05:40:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well, the pattern is cool but it really feels like you did it just to make something impressive... that 1.8x speed is not reasonable since you never mapped vocals like that before... it's too inconsistent. Same goes for 05:43:602 (1,2,3,4,5) -
The map is pretty cool overall but I really can't agree with the last patterns.
Good luck !