Hanazawa Kana wrote:

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-Haise wrote:

awesome map <3

Pentori wrote:

hi

00:57:256 (2,1,2,3) - 01:02:179 (2,1,2) - rhythms are quite awkward here, you have the strong snare mapped to the slider end 00:57:564 . a rhythm like 00:59:872 (1,2) - is much nicer cos you can click this beat √ find~ i have changed it and re some rhythms and flow
01:33:564 (1,2) - can be pretty confusing tbh, the snapping changes but the pattern looks the same as everything else. maybe try increasing spacing? or use a rhythm like 02:11:718 (1,2,3) - to make the change easy to read √ because 01:33:667 - here no rhythm point so i can't make it same as 02:11:718 -so i think i can use 1/2 slider at there01:33:872 -
02:35:410 (1,2) - why put the jump? stacking would make more sense with what u did previously 02:34:179 (2,3) - 02:36:641 (2,3) . also u can remove nc √ but 02:36:641 - here i will not NC，i will nc at02:35:410 -
02:43:564 (1) - really hard to read this slider, cause its covered by 02:43:102 (1) - and 02:43:333 (2) - points in the general direction toward 02:43:718 (1) . √ del the slider and use circle
03:00:333 (4,5,1) - triplet doesnt work here, the snare on 03:00:333 (4) - is really strong so that should be emphasised. a rhythm like http://puu.sh/vdhMq/17aed97a1f.jpg could work i del the triplet and try your way，but i feel something strange cause i think 03:00:487 - here is a more important begin than03:00:333 - so no change
03:15:102 (2,1,2,3) - 03:20:026 (2,1,2,3) - same as mentioned before √
03:24:641 (1) - 03:27:102 (1) - dont think u need nc? 03:23:410 (2) - and 03:24:026 (2) - dont have ncs √
04:20:949 (1) - doesn't really address the 1/3 change that well either √

at last ，i have little change at 04:59:410 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - ，this will make its flow more easy than the previous flow
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Kencho wrote:

[General]

1. BG分辨率1366x874並不是16:9，我幫你重新剪了一下 √
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[Rhythm Crisis]

1. 00:02:641 (2) - 好像歪了，要往下和往右移1像素 √
2. 00:09:102 (1) - ^往下1像素 √
3. 00:41:718 (2) - 感覺放太左了，00:41:256 (1,2,1,2) - 可以弄個平行四邊形的形狀 https://puu.sh/vng9r/d401ca423c.jpg √
4. 00:40:949 (2,1) - 沒疊好 √
5. 01:10:179 - 這個地方重音我覺得用圓圈比較好，所以也許把01:09:872 (1) - 改成1/2滑條然後01:10:179 - 用圓圈 这里我还是保留吧，主要是想体现那段电音
6. 03:03:102 (1) - 有點太擠的感覺，我不建議滑條頭和滑條尾overlap，你可以把滑條尾拉右邊一點 https://puu.sh/vnguE/a7dd4b7507.jpg √
7. 04:20:949 (1) - 和04:22:179 (1) - 也許可以疊好點 √

终于能飞了，谢谢仙球啦~~

[ Abhor ] wrote:

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妙芙SENSEI请教我作图!

Cellina wrote:

wow