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Inori Minase - Yume no Tsubomi

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hvick225
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年11月21日 at 上午 09:27:25

Artist: Inori Minase
Title: Yume no Tsubomi
Source: アニメマシテ
Tags: nathan dream of bud 絵伊子 Eiko 渡部チェル Watanabe Cheru sukiNathan VINXIS mishima yurara SnowWhite
BPM: 188
Filesize: 8709kb
Play Time: 05:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. NathanZhanKamal225's Blossom (5.35 stars, 1292 notes)
Download: Inori Minase - Yume no Tsubomi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Collab with Nathan and Kamal

Nathan wrote:

00:06:364 - zhan
00:34:450 - Nathan "sukiNathan" Tran
00:54:875 - prolapse
01:15:301 - zhan
01:27:907 - Nathan "sukiNathan" Tran
01:48:333 - prolapse
02:08:918 - zhan
02:37:003 - Nathan "sukiNathan" Tran
02:49:609 - prolapse
03:10:035 - zhan
03:30:620 - Nathan "sukiNathan" Tran
03:51:045 - prolapse
03:59:822 - zhan
04:20:247 - Nathan "sukiNathan" Tran
04:40:833 - prolapse

metadata source btw
Syph
mada mada mada
VINXIS
WTF r those tags
Lami
senpai
captin1
disgusting ramp dragon playr
VINXIS

captin1 wrote:

disgusting ramp dragon playr
Nathan
Nightshiftt
prolapsed anus :d
Sharu
hi good map but why this triple 01:51:684 (3,4,5) - is the only one starting on a white tic, can you move to a red tic plz
mariojudah
good
-Atri-
Tags:
PROFESSIONAL PROLAPSED ANUS BED-RIDDEN MAPPER OMAR KAMAL 1?1?1?1?
:thinking:
Flask
Tags: shadowverse master nathan tran PROFESSIONAL PROLAPSED ANUS BED-RIDDEN MAPPER OMAR KAMAL 1?1?1?1?
Gaia
Gratz
Kalibe
Thanks
Sing
1v1 me in shadowverse
VINXIS
y does evry1 have sht taste....
saiyuri
1?
xLolicore-
im gay Lol
scanter
nice diff name 8-)
BeatofIke
Hori hvick owo
jonathanlfj
need 12 sp tho

[Mada Mada Mada]
01:37:641 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - feels like this should be an increase in intensity (sv) instead of a decrease
01:47:056 - hmm i wouldn't have skipped this beat due to how prominent it is in the music
01:58:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same as 01:37:641 (1,2,3,1,2,3)
02:25:833 (3) - based on how you patterned 02:25:513 (1,2), NC should be on this note instead of 02:25:992 (1)
02:59:503 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - found this pattern really hard to play due to the angle change required to land on 02:59:822 (5,6,1), perhaps you can make these curve to apply a more natural circular flow
03:33:971 (4) - due to rhythm change here a NC would be good
03:54:237 (1,2,3) - on sight read its really easy to mistaken 03:54:556 (2) as a slider and misaim 03:54:716 (3) due to how the overlap is setup, an easy fix is to make 03:54:237 (1) two circles
04:18:811 (1,2) - doesn't play very well with the music here, a more intuitive rhythm would be this http://puu.sh/yoqHH.jpg
04:59:412 (4,5) - pretty easy to misread here, a NC on the slider or enlarging the spacing would fix it nicely
05:01:197 (5,1) - this was really hard to play due to the drastic bpm change. Somehow spliting 05:01:197 (5) into 2 1/4 sliders helps a lot with this
VINXIS
04:59:412 (4,5) - dont think the nc makes it better 2 play Tbh plus it make it look UGLIER ; / dont know how else u could read it aside for 1/2 anyway considering the stack leniency
Nathan
01:37:641 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I disagree cause the pitch decreases here, but I changed the placement a bit to reflect it more

regarding 01:47:056 - 04:18:811 (1,2) -, I hear what you mean, but I'd rather keep greater emphasis on what the 3/4s are mapped to since they're the peak of their respective melodies

I don't find the red ticks as noticeable, and they almost sound more like ties rather than definitive stand alone notes

everything else fixed (including hvick's parts)
ryanwithanR
01:06:365 - these straight sliders randomly break the curve spam you had going on with no change in the music
02:02:375 (1) - could lessen this curve a bit, looks like too much imo
03:04:450 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - dont see why these speed up when in every other case they slow down
04:01:418 - linear placement seems pretty out of place
04:15:939 (1,2,3) - improve blanket
00:46:577 (3,4) - why did you make the spacing so small here
03:33:971 - this section feels overly sharp
Dymond
(´・◡・`)
  1. 01:23:439 (3,1) - 04:00:779 (6) - fix stack pls
  2. 01:14:982 (1) - add finish here maybe? 02:36:684 (1) - here too
  3. 04:35:567 (4,1) - this spacing is kinda weak for such a strong note
  4. 04:54:729 (1) - pretty sure this is missing a snare
  5. 01:16:896 (1,1,1) - you have whistles here but not 02:38:599 (1,1,1) - here?
  6. 01:26:630 (1,2,3) - a wide angle feels awkward for the peak of this section
(´・◡・`)
Nathan
nishana
00:46:577 (3,4) - i made the spacing small here for the calm piano notes

dymond
01:14:982 (1) - 02:36:684 (1) - ehh if I add them here I'll have 3 in a row, don't wanna overuse them or they lose value

fixed everything else and for hvick/vinxis too
Elira
mada mada mada
jonathanlfj
hvick logged in for this
Djulus
finally
Topic Starter
hvick225
thanks
Doormat
yo

[general]
  1. explain.
  2. 00:21:688 - 00:22:963 - 00:23:602 - unsnapped green lines, you should probably fix that
[overly complicated collab name]
  1. 02:38:599 (1,1,1) - different svs from 01:16:896 (1,1,1) - ? right now 02:38:918 (1) - 02:39:237 (1) - are both using 0.8x sv when the first 01:17:216 (1) - 01:17:535 (1) - has 0.9x -> 0.8x SV drop
  2. why do people like putting so many breaks during bookmark parts it just bloats the file size lol
  3. 05:01:581 (1,2,3) - could make this an equilateral triangle for aesthetics
popping because of extra mp3 file, fix and either me or lfj can rebubble
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