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The 4th - As One feat.Yukacco (Original Mix) [Taiko]

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Gemu-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 05 de julio de 2017 at 12:31:24 p.m.

Artist: The 4th
Title: As One feat.Yukacco (Original Mix)
Tags: The 4th EP Happy Hardcore Kors k Ryu☆ Electronic Dance Music
BPM: 175
Filesize: 6084kb
Play Time: 05:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Together (5,58 stars, 2156 notes)
Download: The 4th - As One feat.Yukacco (Original Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beatmap to Approval!


Mapset:

Together: 100% By: Me


Bubble by: Surono

Approval by: tasuke912

Desqualified by: alacat

Re-Bubble by: Surono

Re-Approval by: tasuke912



Thanks to:

Cosmolade For help in the diff name.
xfraczynho For Mod and 1 Star!
Surono For IRC Mod and 2 Stars!
Akemi_Homura For Mod and 1 Star!
DarkVortex For Mod!
Hitsu For Mod and 1 Star!
JessiChan For Mod!
Ulqui For Mod!
yuzu__rinrin
komasy For Mod!
-Sh1n1- For Mod and 2 Stars!
R For Mod!
Surono For BN Check!
tasuke912 for BN Check!
alacat For Check The Metadata!
qoot8123 For Check The Offset and the Kiai Settings!
Skylish For Check and Support to qoot8123 about The Offset and The Kiai Settings!
Surono For BN Re-Check!
Aisha
Holah o/, disculpa la tardanza, te expliqué eso :(, espero que te sirva, son todos consejos y opiniones (como todos) así que espero que alguno pueda ayudarte :D

k = kat = azul
d = don = rojo

[General]
  1. Sugiero un HP=5 o 4, al ser maratón
  2. El fondo es 1365x768, podrías intentar agrandarlo a 1366x768 (no tengo mucha experiencia con esto la verdad), como la mayoría de los maps ranked
  3. Yukacco no va en tags? También me enredo un poquito con esto
[Together]

  • Kiais:
  1. Si bien 00:44:970 - suena bonito para un kiai, encuentro que es demasiado pronto, podrías deletearlo y dejar los otros :3
  2. 02:34:599 Sacaste el kiai repentinamente, actívalo!
  3. 04:25:685 - ^

    Compose:
  4. movería 00:03:656 (11) - a 00:04:685 (14) - sólamente por consistencia en el inicio
  5. 00:06:570 (21) - K no suena mejor?
  6. lo mismo que te mencioné en lo primero para 00:09:142 (31) -
  7. 00:11:542 (41) - remove? prueba ese quiebre, tal vez te guste :3
  8. lo mismo que lo primero para la parte que viene
  9. no te gusta este patrón en 00:20:114 (81) - ?
  10. 00:27:056 (141) - borraría esa nota para no quitarle consistencia (los dobles fillean bien al menos)
  11. 00:33:999 (197,198) - ctrl+g y el kat con finisher (sacarle al otro)
  12. 00:38:028 (232) - lo mismo que la otra
  13. 00:44:970 (291) - siento que esta parte podría ser un poco recorregida, suena bien como a harto uso de dobles especialmente borrar notas como esta: 00:45:313 (294) - , pruébalo :D (por ejemplo estas: 00:51:142 (347,348,349,350) - )
  14. 01:32:970 (26,27,28) - hazlos d d k, le das un mejor énfasis a la nota más fuerte (la tercera)
  15. 01:38:456 (31,32,33) - ^
  16. 01:43:942 (36,37,38) - k d k suggest
  17. el mismo comentario del primer kiai para el segundo, el mapa da para eso, igual es tu estilo de mappeo así que lo dejo para ti!
  18. 02:53:885 (550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566) - sugiero k k k k d d d d k k d d k k d d k (pruébalo al 25%, suena bien)
  19. 03:01:770 (584) - le agregaría un d, siguiendo la línea anterior
  20. 03:17:542 (679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687) - no sé que pensar de eso, suena bien y todo, pero es muy repentino quizás? te la dejo como comentario :3
  21. mismos comentarios para los kiai, pero en estos quedan mejor los triplets, ni idea el por qué, sólo pasa xD
  22. 03:59:285 (977,978) - ctrl+g
  23. 04:58:685 (1508,1509) - K d
  24. 05:14:970 (1621) - delete y 05:14:799 (1620) - d
  25. 05:31:770 (1) - para el último spinner podrías hacer un descenso de volumen, si no el último golpe suena muy fuerte
Eso sería todo, espero que esto te sirve mucho y espero verla rankeada! el mapa está entretenido y me gustan este tipo de mapas, goodluck!
Topic Starter
Gemu-

xfraczynho wrote:

Holah o/, disculpa la tardanza, te expliqué eso :(, espero que te sirva, son todos consejos y opiniones (como todos) así que espero que alguno pueda ayudarte :D Hola! tranquilo >w<

k = kat = azul
d = don = rojo

[General]
  1. Sugiero un HP=5 o 4, al ser maratón Lo cambién a 5
  2. El fondo es 1365x768, podrías intentar agrandarlo a 1366x768 (no tengo mucha experiencia con esto la verdad), como la mayoría de los maps ranked Lo tenía en 1920x1080 y se redució a 1365x768 lol gracias por avisarme, lo cambié a 1366x768
  3. Yukacco no va en tags? También me enredo un poquito con esto Puede ser, pero la tengo en el título así que no sería muy necesario, cualquier cosa contactaré con un BN o QAT para que me aconseje sobre eso.
[Together]

  • Kiais:
  1. Si bien 00:44:970 - suena bonito para un kiai, encuentro que es demasiado pronto, podrías deletearlo y dejar los otros :3
  2. 02:34:599 Sacaste el kiai repentinamente, actívalo!
  3. 04:25:685 - ^
    No apliqué ninguna, los kiais que tengo me gustan mucho ;w; pero si otro modder me manda a quitarlo te agradeceré por esa sugerencia.
    Compose:
  4. movería 00:03:656 (11) - a 00:04:685 (14) - sólamente por consistencia en el inicio Consistencia es que dos secciones iguales tenga notas iguales o similares, en este caso su sugerencia corta la consistencia, por esa razón no lo aplico.
  5. 00:06:570 (21) - K no suena mejor? Hecho
  6. lo mismo que te mencioné en lo primero para 00:09:142 (31) - Lo que expliqué primero de consistencia
  7. 00:11:542 (41) - remove? prueba ese quiebre, tal vez te guste :3 Nop
  8. lo mismo que lo primero para la parte que viene Lo que expliqué primero de consistencia
  9. no te gusta este patrón en 00:20:114 (81) - ? Hermoso, hecho
  10. 00:27:056 (141) - borraría esa nota para no quitarle consistencia (los dobles fillean bien al menos) No me gusta mucho, ya que no quiero repetir el mismo ritmo anterior y quierod ejarlo proque hace un buen ritmo con 00:26:885 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152) -
  11. 00:33:999 (197,198) - ctrl+g y el kat con finisher (sacarle al otro) Hecho
  12. 00:38:028 (232) - lo mismo que la otra No, misma razón en la parte similar.
  13. 00:44:970 (291) - siento que esta parte podría ser un poco recorregida, suena bien como a harto uso de dobles especialmente borrar notas como esta: 00:45:313 (294) - , pruébalo :D (por ejemplo estas: 00:51:142 (347,348,349,350) - ) Tienes razón, a parte otra razón para cambiarlo (personal) la canción en esta parte tiene menos intensidad de ritmo comparada con las demás, así que reducirla un poco me parece bien.
  14. 01:32:970 (26,27,28) - hazlos d d k, le das un mejor énfasis a la nota más fuerte (la tercera) Hecho
  15. 01:38:456 (31,32,33) - ^ Hecho
  16. 01:43:942 (36,37,38) - k d k suggest Hecho
  17. el mismo comentario del primer kiai para el segundo, el mapa da para eso, igual es tu estilo de mappeo así que lo dejo para ti! En este caso quiero dejarlo así, el sonido y el ritmo son altos, se escuchan variedades de sonidos y de gran intensidad y quiero reflejar eso.
  18. 02:53:885 (550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566) - sugiero k k k k d d d d k k d d k k d d k (pruébalo al 25%, suena bien) Hecho
  19. 03:01:770 (584) - le agregaría un d, siguiendo la línea anterior Hecho
  20. 03:17:542 (679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687) - no sé que pensar de eso, suena bien y todo, pero es muy repentino quizás? te la dejo como comentario :3 Lo veo bien, me gusta como está
  21. mismos comentarios para los kiai, pero en estos quedan mejor los triplets, ni idea el por qué, sólo pasa xD La misma explicación en los anteriores kiais xD
  22. 03:59:285 (977,978) - ctrl+g Hecho
  23. 04:58:685 (1508,1509) - K d Hecho
  24. 05:14:970 (1621) - delete y 05:14:799 (1620) - d Nop, cortaría un tono agudo que se escucha claramente.
  25. 05:31:770 (1) - para el último spinner podrías hacer un descenso de volumen, si no el último golpe suena muy fuerte Vale
Eso sería todo, espero que esto te sirve mucho y espero verla rankeada! el mapa está entretenido y me gustan este tipo de mapas, goodluck!

Muchas gracias por su mod! se lo agradezco mucho >w<

Updated
Surono
though this song are good for 2016 mapping style such X.u ( Nishizumi please ) but this map is really good and fun to play!

irc mod ( yeah, irc is the best ever to improve map! X"D )
21:21 Surono: my connection hate me.
21:21 *Surono is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1247509 The 4th ft.Yukacco - As One [Together]]
21:23 game rock: I see the message don't worry :3
21:26 Surono: 00:10:856 (37) - better to emphasize this as don for 00:10:685 (36,37,38) - similar vocal? and 00:11:713 (42) - don this bcus dkd are enough such this sounds. kkd are for high drum in next pattern right?
21:27 Surono: 00:20:971 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - kdkkddkdk to emphasize vocal effects, yeah in here are just monotone drum.. but your current pattern are monotone too..
21:28 game rock: ok, fixed all
21:30 Surono: 00:42:056 (265,266,267) - kdk, 00:42:485 (270,271) - swap,00:42:742 - kat because 00:42:056 (265,267,270,273) - these sounds are accurate to follow
21:31 Surono: monotone drum, more accurate to follow instrumen
21:34 Surono: 01:01:427 - from here, follow instrument like before and 01:02:456 (447,448,449,450,451) - kkddk these then 01:02:799 - from here follow instrument again until 01:03:570 -
21:36 Surono: 01:50:370 (46) - just kat this to emphasize other dons, for 01:50:285 (45,47) - these drum.
21:36 game rock: Fixed
21:37 game rock: right, fixed
21:38 Surono: 02:08:456 (132,133,134) - not ddk? because in this part are many kats XD 02:08:627 (134) - this should be kat for reason lol
21:38 game rock: hahahaha xDD sure sure
21:39 Surono: 02:40:856 - lol this loooong stream, this fun XDDD
21:39 game rock: 02:09:827 (141,142) - I change these too to d xD
21:39 Surono: good ~w~)b
21:39 game rock: hahahahaha thank you <ww<
21:41 Surono: 02:55:342 - too pity if this sounds are skipped, maybe spinner?
21:42 game rock: ok :3
21:44 Surono: 03:17:713 (682,683,684) - will hurts non-kddk player ;w; kat these for instrument emphasize, thats why taiko mapping is special lol ( also for good playable )
21:45 game rock: So is better put kats?
21:45 Surono: yes, dddkkkd
21:45 Surono: more easier to play
21:45 game rock: 1/4 or 1/6?
21:45 Surono: 1/6 not problem
21:46 game rock: Ok, fixed >w<
21:47 Surono: 03:49:770 - 03:50:456 - 03:51:142 - add notes? since 03:49:770 - in here have new synth sounds
21:47 Surono: 03:54:056 (928,929,930) - like before
21:47 Surono: 03:58:342 - ;w; this pattern are mindblow... I cant hit these lol
21:48 Surono: wait, I will think for good pattern..
21:49 game rock: Fixed owo
21:49 game rock: the pattern is fine?
21:49 Surono: wait.. because it just monotone drum, I will give ScreenShot of unique pattern
21:50 Surono: from 03:58:342 - here change like this http://puu.sh/v7X8F/ca73500f1c.jpg
21:50 Surono: wait, wrong ScreenShot.. ;w;
21:51 Surono: *bad screenshot
21:51 game rock: ok don't worry xD :3
21:51 Surono: https://puu.sh/v7XdF/cc5044f838.jpg oke it just same, but more detail from begining until end XD
21:52 Surono: 02:55:427 - spinner?
21:52 Surono: wrong link XDDDd
21:53 Surono: 03:59:885 - here
21:53 game rock: XDDD
21:54 Surono: 04:02:456 (985,986,987,988,989,990,991,992,993,994,995,996,997) - wrong emphasize, change http://puu.sh/v7Xkj/ceec556e5f.jpg like it
21:54 game rock: fixed
21:55 game rock: amazing!!!
21:55 game rock: fixed *-*
21:55 Surono: 04:43:427 (1385,1386,1387,1388,1389,1390,1391,1392,1393,1394,1395) - kkddkddkddk more accurate and ez to read and hit for me :3
21:56 Surono: 05:09:485 - kat this? I dont hear different 05:09:313 (1591,1592) - with these XD
21:57 game rock: ok :3
21:57 Surono: done to mod your map. I just lazy and do irc is better to improve map. ;3 Posting, Good Map =w=)b

the problem just about emphasizing sounds in long pattern but overall really good map esspesially in kiai, I love it. :3

Good Luck
Topic Starter
Gemu-

Surono wrote:

though this song are good for 2016 mapping style such X.u ( Nishizumi please ) but this map is really good and fun to play!

irc mod ( yeah, irc is the best ever to improve map! X"D )
21:21 Surono: my connection hate me.
21:21 *Surono is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1247509 The 4th ft.Yukacco - As One [Together]]
21:23 game rock: I see the message don't worry :3
21:26 Surono: 00:10:856 (37) - better to emphasize this as don for 00:10:685 (36,37,38) - similar vocal? and 00:11:713 (42) - don this bcus dkd are enough such this sounds. kkd are for high drum in next pattern right?
21:27 Surono: 00:20:971 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - kdkkddkdk to emphasize vocal effects, yeah in here are just monotone drum.. but your current pattern are monotone too..
21:28 game rock: ok, fixed all
21:30 Surono: 00:42:056 (265,266,267) - kdk, 00:42:485 (270,271) - swap,00:42:742 - kat because 00:42:056 (265,267,270,273) - these sounds are accurate to follow
21:31 Surono: monotone drum, more accurate to follow instrumen
21:34 Surono: 01:01:427 - from here, follow instrument like before and 01:02:456 (447,448,449,450,451) - kkddk these then 01:02:799 - from here follow instrument again until 01:03:570 -
21:36 Surono: 01:50:370 (46) - just kat this to emphasize other dons, for 01:50:285 (45,47) - these drum.
21:36 game rock: Fixed
21:37 game rock: right, fixed
21:38 Surono: 02:08:456 (132,133,134) - not ddk? because in this part are many kats XD 02:08:627 (134) - this should be kat for reason lol
21:38 game rock: hahahaha xDD sure sure
21:39 Surono: 02:40:856 - lol this loooong stream, this fun XDDD
21:39 game rock: 02:09:827 (141,142) - I change these too to d xD
21:39 Surono: good ~w~)b
21:39 game rock: hahahahaha thank you <ww<
21:41 Surono: 02:55:342 - too pity if this sounds are skipped, maybe spinner?
21:42 game rock: ok :3
21:44 Surono: 03:17:713 (682,683,684) - will hurts non-kddk player ;w; kat these for instrument emphasize, thats why taiko mapping is special lol ( also for good playable )
21:45 game rock: So is better put kats?
21:45 Surono: yes, dddkkkd
21:45 Surono: more easier to play
21:45 game rock: 1/4 or 1/6?
21:45 Surono: 1/6 not problem
21:46 game rock: Ok, fixed >w<
21:47 Surono: 03:49:770 - 03:50:456 - 03:51:142 - add notes? since 03:49:770 - in here have new synth sounds
21:47 Surono: 03:54:056 (928,929,930) - like before
21:47 Surono: 03:58:342 - ;w; this pattern are mindblow... I cant hit these lol
21:48 Surono: wait, I will think for good pattern..
21:49 game rock: Fixed owo
21:49 game rock: the pattern is fine?
21:49 Surono: wait.. because it just monotone drum, I will give ScreenShot of unique pattern
21:50 Surono: from 03:58:342 - here change like this http://puu.sh/v7X8F/ca73500f1c.jpg
21:50 Surono: wait, wrong ScreenShot.. ;w;
21:51 Surono: *bad screenshot
21:51 game rock: ok don't worry xD :3
21:51 Surono: https://puu.sh/v7XdF/cc5044f838.jpg oke it just same, but more detail from begining until end XD
21:52 Surono: 02:55:427 - spinner?
21:52 Surono: wrong link XDDDd
21:53 Surono: 03:59:885 - here
21:53 game rock: XDDD
21:54 Surono: 04:02:456 (985,986,987,988,989,990,991,992,993,994,995,996,997) - wrong emphasize, change http://puu.sh/v7Xkj/ceec556e5f.jpg like it
21:54 game rock: fixed
21:55 game rock: amazing!!!
21:55 game rock: fixed *-*
21:55 Surono: 04:43:427 (1385,1386,1387,1388,1389,1390,1391,1392,1393,1394,1395) - kkddkddkddk more accurate and ez to read and hit for me :3
21:56 Surono: 05:09:485 - kat this? I dont hear different 05:09:313 (1591,1592) - with these XD
21:57 game rock: ok :3
21:57 Surono: done to mod your map. I just lazy and do irc is better to improve map. ;3 Posting, Good Map =w=)b

the problem just about emphasizing sounds in long pattern but overall really good map esspesially in kiai, I love it. :3

Good Luck

Thank you so much Surono >w< You're pro <3

Updated
Akemi_Homura
Hi~!! ><

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [Together]
  1. 00:06:570 (21) - change to D~? (I think it's same sound with 00:01:085 and 00:12:056. :3)
  2. 00:22:685 (105) - change to D. (consistent with 00:44:627(291), and 02:12:399 (170).)
    If you don't like d d D, we can change 00:22:513 (104) - k. then sound is better~ :)

  3. 02:01:427 - add k here. and add d 02:01:599. so make kkd. then we can express eletronic sound~
  4. 02:33:142 - just suggestion~ maybe we can express electronic sound continuously. like this. '-'
  5. 02:37:599 (389) - change to k this.(electonic accompaniment here.)
  6. 03:27:656 (213) - chage to k~? (I feel k sound is cut here.)
  7. 03:41:885 (338) - k (consistent with 01:30:227.)
  8. 03:43:256 (339) - d (consistent with 01:31:599.)
  9. 03:45:313 (341, 342) - Ctrl + g. so make d k.
  10. 04:24:227 - same suggstion. with 02:33:142. ><

sorry for short mod. I can't find problem anymore.
It's really Nice map already.
I hope this ranked soon. GL~~~! >w</
Topic Starter
Gemu-

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~!! ><

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [Together]
  1. 00:06:570 (21) - change to D~? (I think it's same sound with 00:01:085 and 00:12:056. :3)
  2. 00:22:685 (105) - change to D. (consistent with 00:44:627(291), and 02:12:399 (170).)
    If you don't like d d D, we can change 00:22:513 (104) - k. then sound is better~ :)

  3. 02:01:427 - add k here. and add d 02:01:599. so make kkd. then we can express eletronic sound~
  4. 02:33:142 - just suggestion~ maybe we can express electronic sound continuously. like this. '-'
  5. 02:37:599 (389) - change to k this.(electonic accompaniment here.)
  6. 03:27:656 (213) - chage to k~? (I feel k sound is cut here.)
  7. 03:41:885 (338) - k (consistent with 01:30:227.)
  8. 03:43:256 (339) - d (consistent with 01:31:599.)
  9. 03:45:313 (341, 342) - Ctrl + g. so make d k.
  10. 04:24:227 - same suggstion. with 02:33:142. ><


    All fixed exept 02:01:427 - add k here. and add d 02:01:599. so make kkd. then we can express eletronic sound~ This is a calm part, so if I put kkd it can change very soon the calm of the patterns.

sorry for short mod. I can't find problem anymore.
It's really Nice map already.
I hope this ranked soon. GL~~~! >w</
Thank you very much for your nice mod and your star! >w<


Updated
DarkVortex
Heyho o/

[General]
You could make better use of the volume settings. The intro and the calm parts between the kiais should be much quieter imo to give the kiais more impact.

[Together]
00:11:370 (40) - Here's not a clicking sound so a don fits better
00:17:542 (67) - kat instead to match the upcoming kat-only part?
00:28:342 (153,154,155) - A kkd pattern for the high pitch here?
00:42:913 (275) - This kat should be 1/4 later imo
01:55:770 (67,68,69) - Actually I hear a k k k d (1/2) pattern
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - ^

Nice variations and fun patterns during the kiai times. Nothing to say there, good luck with your map! :)
Topic Starter
Gemu-

DarkVortex wrote:

Heyho o/

[General]
You could make better use of the volume settings. The intro and the calm parts between the kiais should be much quieter imo to give the kiais more impact.

[Together]
00:11:370 (40) - Here's not a clicking sound so a don fits better Fixed
00:17:542 (67) - kat instead to match the upcoming kat-only part? No because many k can cause confusing and tt can be annoying.
00:28:342 (153,154,155) - A kkd pattern for the high pitch here? Very nice! Fixed
00:42:913 (275) - This kat should be 1/4 later imo No, is better the stream to make very fun the song and to variate a bit.
01:55:770 (67,68,69) - Actually I hear a k k k d (1/2) pattern Fixed
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - ^ No because the note 90 have a low drum.

Nice variations and fun patterns during the kiai times. Nothing to say there, good luck with your map! :)

Thank you so much for you mod! Wait for my mod please ;;


Updated
Snowy Heat
hi there
here's my m4m part
hope it will help

Together

00:29:113 (160) - imo this note should be k since it's similar to 00:29:027 (159). And 00:29:799 (166) should be d since pitch is decreased on it.
00:30:999 - if i were you i'd actually added a note here to fill a bit strange imo gap.
00:37:599 (229,230,231,232,233,234) - this seems to be inconsistent with all of the previous patterns you've used in this part. If this is for variety it still is really strange because it's the only one throughout all this part.
00:48:142 (318,319) - ctrl+g to follow the pitch correctly? In other reasons i don't understand why this should be a kd. Same for 00:49:513 (329,330). And this 00:50:885 (343,344) too for the same reason.
00:52:342 (356) - pitch is increased on this note, set is as k. Also on 00:53:113 (362) pitch is decreased so d is better.
00:59:114 (414,415) - ctrl+g for the same i've written before.
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - rhythm on these is not right. It should be smth like this.
Just a comment but i like this 02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444) part since it reminds me of climbb's taiko maps :cries:

Dunno but all other seems to be fine i think.
Random lul. Actually i wanna your tokyo soda to be approved so do it pls :DDD
I will sprinkle it with starssssssss
Topic Starter
Gemu-

Hitsu wrote:

hi there
here's my m4m part
hope it will help

Together

00:29:113 (160) - imo this note should be k since it's similar to 00:29:027 (159). And 00:29:799 (166) should be d since pitch is decreased on it. Fixed
00:30:999 - if i were you i'd actually added a note here to fill a bit strange imo gap. No. It's better as it is
00:37:599 (229,230,231,232,233,234) - this seems to be inconsistent with all of the previous patterns you've used in this part. If this is for variety it still is really strange because it's the only one throughout all this part. I really like it, sounds very nice with the song
00:48:142 (318,319) - ctrl+g to follow the pitch correctly? In other reasons i don't understand why this should be a kd. Same for 00:49:513 (329,330). And this 00:50:885 (343,344) too for the same reason. Fixed
00:52:342 (356) - pitch is increased on this note, set is as k. Also on 00:53:113 (362) pitch is decreased so d is better. Fixed
00:59:114 (414,415) - ctrl+g for the same i've written before. Fixed
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - rhythm on these is not right. It should be smth like this. No. It's better as it is
Just a comment but i like this 02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444) part since it reminds me of climbb's taiko maps :cries: EDIT: I really like that part *O* This streamis really amazing and surprising! Thanks :3


Dunno but all other seems to be fine i think.
Random lul. Actually i wanna your tokyo soda to be approved so do it pls :DDD Thanks! I will try owo
I will sprinkle it with starssssssss

Thank you so much for your mod Hitsu! >w<
Snowy Heat
I really like that part ;www; This streamis really amazing and surprising! I will not change it sorry ;uu;
i said that i like it too xDDDD
don't worry

< random kudosu smbd please deny :DDD
Topic Starter
Gemu-

Hitsu wrote:

I really like that part ;www; This streamis really amazing and surprising! I will not change it sorry ;uu;
i said that i like it too xDDDD
don't worry
Wrong color XDDD Thanks :D


My knowledge in English is really bad sorry ;w;
Snowy Heat

game rock wrote:

Wrong color XDDD Thanks :D


My knowledge in English is really bad sorry ;w;
aaa, np with that
i have to deal with many people irl with the same problem :x
can't say my knowledge is really good or smth, i make a lot of mistakes too
JessiChan
Hola gemu, mi corazón. uwu ♥

Together


  1. 00:11:713 (42) - Podrías cambiarlo a k, no sonaría nada mal.
  2. 00:51:999 (352,353,354,355,356) - Este patrón podría ser dkkdk así hace combinación con este: 00:50:627 (340,341,342,343,344) -
  3. 01:56:285 (69,70) - Sonaría muchísimo mejor si le haces ctrl + g
  4. Corre esta nota: 02:01:513 (89) - para aca: 02:01:427 - y agrega nota aca: 02:01:599 - Preferiblemente azul
  5. 02:23:971 (269) - Podrías cambiarlo a azul, si quieres

    Y eso es todo amigos(?) Está muy bien hecho. D: Te amo(?) ♥ Que tengas mucha suerte.
Ulqui
:c mod pobre...
Together
02:01:513 - prueba moviendola a 02:01:427 - porque como está al jugarlo se siente muy engañoso. parecido a lo que puso jessi :c
02:01:599 - si aplicas la de arriba, prueba poniendo una nota ahí.

04:02:627 - borra esa(? 04:03:142 (13) - y esa(? , pienso que el stream es demasiado precipitado al lado de esas notitas que habían antes, por lo que el dk dkddk dkkd le da como una subida de intensidad(?

el mapa está muy bueno, los streams y los patrones son muy interesantes, me gusta mucho como interpretas la canción también uwu.
m a s t e r p i e c e.
Topic Starter
Gemu-

JessiChan wrote:

Hola gemu, mi corazón. uwu ♥ Mi vida ♥ >//<

Together


  1. 00:11:713 (42) - Podrías cambiarlo a k, no sonaría nada mal.
  2. 00:51:999 (352,353,354,355,356) - Este patrón podría ser dkkdk así hace combinación con este: 00:50:627 (340,341,342,343,344) -
  3. 01:56:285 (69,70) - Sonaría muchísimo mejor si le haces ctrl + g
  4. Corre esta nota: 02:01:513 (89) - para aca: 02:01:427 - y agrega nota aca: 02:01:599 - Preferiblemente azul
  5. 02:23:971 (269) - Podrías cambiarlo a azul, si quieres

    Y eso es todo amigos(?) Está muy bien hecho. D: Te amo(?) ♥ Que tengas mucha suerte.

Apliqué todo >w< Excelentes sugerencias :33 gracias baby ♥ Yo también Te amo (?) ^w^


Ulqui wrote:

:c mod pobre... Claro que no uwu
Together
02:01:513 - prueba moviendola a 02:01:427 - porque como está al jugarlo se siente muy engañoso. parecido a lo que puso jessi :c
02:01:599 - si aplicas la de arriba, prueba poniendo una nota ahí. Vale :3

04:02:627 - borra esa(? 04:03:142 (13) - y esa(? , pienso que el stream es demasiado precipitado al lado de esas notitas que habían antes, por lo que el dk dkddk dkkd le da como una subida de intensidad(? No ya que se escucha fuertes sonidos más a fondo

el mapa está muy bueno, los streams y los patrones son muy interesantes, me gusta mucho como interpretas la canción también uwu.
m a s t e r p i e c e.

Muchísimas gracias Ulqui >ww<


Updated
yuzu__rinrin
hi~ :3/
request from forum PM

[Together]
  1. 00:20:114 (81,82,83) - kkd~~~~? consistent with 00:18:742 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ?

  2. 00:49:942 (333) - k? Because the high pich sound is continuing so far.
  3. 01:00:914 (429) - ^?

  4. 01:55:770 (67,68,69,70) - I think this rhythm is strange ...
    for example (center lane 01:56:113 - )

  5. 02:07:085 (125) - k? 02:04:170 (102,103,104,105,106) -

  6. 02:11:456 (161) - delete. The rhythm sounds clear.

  7. 02:13:685 (178,179) - dk?

  8. 02:16:770 (203) - delete. I feel unnecessary.
  9. 02:22:256 (252) - delete
  10. 02:27:742 (301) - delete

  11. 02:38:885 (403,404) - move to 02:38:970 -

  12. 02:45:227 (468) - d
  13. 02:45:313 (469,470,471,472) - ctrl+g
    Make cymbals sound stand out 02:45:656 (473) -

  14. 03:21:142 (149) - d. consistent with03:26:627 (203,204,205) -
  15. 03:32:113 (256) - ^

  16. 03:39:227 (328) - move to 03:39:056 -

  17. 04:02:970 - 1/6? wwwww
short mod sorry ;w;
good song , god mapper game rock >w<
good luck for rank~ owo/
Topic Starter
Gemu-

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

hi~ :3/
request from forum PM

[Together]
  1. 00:20:114 (81,82,83) - kkd~~~~? consistent with 00:18:742 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ? Fixed

  2. 00:49:942 (333) - k? Because the high pich sound is continuing so far. Fixed
  3. 01:00:914 (429) - ^? Fixed

  4. 01:55:770 (67,68,69,70) - I think this rhythm is strange ...
    for example (center lane 01:56:113 - ) No, It's better as it is

  5. 02:07:085 (125) - k? 02:04:170 (102,103,104,105,106) - Fixed

  6. 02:11:456 (161) - delete. The rhythm sounds clear. I delete 02:11:285 - for consistency with 00:43:599 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291) -

  7. 02:13:685 (178,179) - dk? Fixed

  8. 02:16:770 (203) - delete. I feel unnecessary. No owo
  9. 02:22:256 (252) - delete No owo
  10. 02:27:742 (301) - delete No owo

  11. 02:38:885 (403,404) - move to 02:38:970 - No owo

  12. 02:45:227 (468) - d Fixed
  13. 02:45:313 (469,470,471,472) - ctrl+g Fixed
    Make cymbals sound stand out 02:45:656 (473) -

  14. 03:21:142 (149) - d. consistent with03:26:627 (203,204,205) - Fixed
  15. 03:32:113 (256) - ^ Fixed

  16. 03:39:227 (328) - move to 03:39:056 - No owo

  17. 04:02:970 - 1/6? wwwww No, It can be very surprising with the low notes 04:01:085 (1,2,3,4) -
short mod sorry ;w; Dw <3
good song , god mapper game rock >w< Thaaaanks!! *u*
good luck for rank~ owo/

Thank you very much yuzu!! >w<




Updated
komasy
hi! m4m

I'm really sorry that I was late for a long time...

mod
[Together]
00:47:542 (313,314) - kd or dd? following pitch. 00:53:027 (361,362,363) - is kdk

00:58:514 (409,410) - same

01:06:913 - ~ 01:50:456 - I think that is good to slow down the SV. Because the density is low, players may feel tired.So we aim to slow the SV and increase the visual density.And I think you can take more vocals.Even if it is a rest area, I feel a little unsatisfactory.

02:04:342 - d? This area seems to have a little k proportion too much...

02:06:913 - same

02:11:456 - change to k and move to 02:11:285 - ? you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better.

02:12:913 (170,171,172,173,174) - I think that the pattern beginning with k should be better.Because the other parts are like that.

02:12:742 (169) - If you accept the above suggestion, it is preferable to make this a D

02:20:285 (235,236) - ctrl+g? contrast with 02:21:656 (246,247,248,249) -

02:23:885 (268,269,270,271,272) - ^^^

02:34:856 (362,363,364,365,366) - same... high pitch sound ringing here 02:34:856 -

02:40:342 (416) - same

02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443) - It is very unbalanced here. I recommend placing d according to kick, or placing d according to the melody.

02:45:827 (473,474) - ctrl g hith pitch sound ringing here 02:45:827 -

03:19:856 - k and 03:21:227 - d following pitch

03:25:342 - 03:26:713 - same

03:30:827 - 03:32:199 - same

03:39:227 - change to k and move to 03:39:056 - you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better.

03:40:513 - ~ I feel that the density is a little low and not enough.

04:03:827 - D and 04:03:998 (21,22,23,24,25) - high pitch sound ringing here 04:03:999 -

04:14:970 (126,127,128,129,130) - same

04:20:970 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - It is very unbalanced here too.

Outro looks good
Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
Gemu-

komasy wrote:

hi! m4m Hii

I'm really sorry that I was late for a long time... Dw :3

mod
[Together]
00:47:542 (313,314) - kd or dd? following pitch. 00:53:027 (361,362,363) - is kdk Fixed to kdk

00:58:514 (409,410) - same Fixed

01:06:913 - ~ 01:50:456 - I think that is good to slow down the SV. Because the density is low, players may feel tired.So we aim to slow the SV and increase the visual density.And I think you can take more vocals.Even if it is a rest area, I feel a little unsatisfactory. Ok, fixed

02:04:342 - d? This area seems to have a little k proportion too much... Sound the same

02:06:913 - same same ^

02:11:456 - change to k and move to 02:11:285 - ? you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better. I want consistency in that parts with the others, but i hear a sound here 02:11:456 - so for now i don't apply it

02:12:913 (170,171,172,173,174) - I think that the pattern beginning with k should be better.Because the other parts are like that. No becasue beginning with a d and then with a k 02:14:285 (181) -

02:12:742 (169) - If you accept the above suggestion, it is preferable to make this a D ^

02:20:285 (235,236) - ctrl+g? contrast with 02:21:656 (246,247,248,249) - Fixed

02:23:885 (268,269,270,271,272) - ^^^ ^^^

02:34:856 (362,363,364,365,366) - same... high pitch sound ringing here 02:34:856 - I want variate a bit because many k can be tired

02:40:342 (416) - same Fixed

02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443) - It is very unbalanced here. I recommend placing d according to kick, or placing d according to the melody. No, I really love this stream ;;

02:45:827 (473,474) - ctrl g hith pitch sound ringing here 02:45:827 - I want to follow the melody 02:47:199 (486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495) -

03:19:856 - k and 03:21:227 - d following pitch Fixed

03:25:342 - 03:26:713 - same ^

03:30:827 - 03:32:199 - same ^

03:39:227 - change to k and move to 03:39:056 - you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better. No for the similar reason previously.

03:40:513 - ~ I feel that the density is a little low and not enough. You're right, fixed

04:03:827 - D and 04:03:998 (21,22,23,24,25) - high pitch sound ringing here 04:03:999 - No, in the finish D the sound is very high but not low, and about the high pitch i want to variate a bit and to leep consistency with the previous parts.

04:14:970 (126,127,128,129,130) - same ^

04:20:970 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - It is very unbalanced here too. No, I really love this stream ;;

Outro looks good
Good Luck :)

Thank you so much for you mod!



Updated
-Sh1n1-
IRC con mi baka
Click me!
2017-05-13 21:52 -Sh1n1-: holly suena muy bien
2017-05-13 21:53 game rock: Gracias >ww<
2017-05-13 21:54 game rock: Me alegro mucho que te guste :33 lo que quiero es que le gusten a los players y se sientan comodos, no que me guste a mi ya que debo pensar en los demás, porque ellos son los que van a jugarlo
2017-05-13 22:01 game rock: me fascina es la parte kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkd
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: siiii
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: muchos misearan ahi
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: xDD
2017-05-13 22:01 game rock: XDDDDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: yo muy raro las misseo
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: xD
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: orz yo podri pasarla pero hay un 1/6 por ahi que me bajo la autoestima
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: xDDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: D:
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: XDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: culpa la song (???)
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: ACTION runs
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: sep
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: por cierto
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: xDD
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: hay un doble ddk ddk
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: que no se siente muy natural que sigamos
2017-05-13 22:03 game rock: donde?
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: en varias partes como
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:570 (119,120,121,122,123,124) -
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: aun estoy testeando para saber que parte cambiar
2017-05-13 22:03 game rock: ah vale owo
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: orz
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: maldita laptop
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: se me reinicia a cualquier momento
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: aaah ya vi el ddk ddk
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: pero no solo es el ddk
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: osea
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: solamente está al principio y al final
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: por la consistencia
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: si
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: pero a lo que voy es
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: que 00:24:056 (114,115,116,117,118) - esta overmapeado
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: que eso pudo haber ido en
2017-05-13 22:08 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:742 -
2017-05-13 22:08 -Sh1n1-: y los dos tripletes pudieron estar atras
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo no se si te guste
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: mover
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:142 (115) - hacia 00:23:970 -
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:656 (120) - hacia 00:24:827 -
2017-05-13 22:10 -Sh1n1-: y cambiar esa ultima nota a k
2017-05-13 22:10 game rock: suena bien :3
2017-05-13 22:12 -Sh1n1-: luego de eso
2017-05-13 22:12 game rock: 00:35:199 - aqui lo aplique igual
2017-05-13 22:12 -Sh1n1-: en 00:25:856 -
2017-05-13 22:13 -Sh1n1-: nice baka, lo que em encanta es nuestros estilos son parecidos pero me has superado por mucho
2017-05-13 22:13 -Sh1n1-: yo normalmente no podria hacer un mapa asi
2017-05-13 22:13 game rock: claro que no te he superado e.e
2017-05-13 22:13 game rock: tu eres pro
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: yo no soy pro
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: baka
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: bueno
2017-05-13 22:14 game rock: que hago en 00:25:856 - ?
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: aaa
2017-05-13 22:14 game rock: si lo eres, baka
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: esque
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:742 (120,121,122,123,124,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) -
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: se siente demasiado repetitivo (respecto a los quintuplets
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: por lo que si eliminas 00:25:856 (130) -
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: suena mucho mejor tbh
2017-05-13 22:15 -Sh1n1-: eso seria todo en esa seccion
2017-05-13 22:15 game rock: eso te iba a decir xDD
2017-05-13 22:15 -Sh1n1-: xD
2017-05-13 22:16 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:16 game rock: 00:36:827 - la quite igual allí
2017-05-13 22:16 -Sh1n1-: sip, tu ya sabes como es la consistencia <3
2017-05-13 22:18 game rock: cual es el siguiente?
2017-05-13 22:18 game rock: shi<3
2017-05-13 22:21 -Sh1n1-: mmm
2017-05-13 22:21 -Sh1n1-: joder mapeaste muy bien
2017-05-13 22:21 game rock: baka, no se si es mejor que me dejes mod, debo irme en minutos ;;
2017-05-13 22:21 game rock: es tarde acá
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: :c
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: resiste un poco baka
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: no es que pueda encontrar mucho
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: como consejo
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: te podria decir que
2017-05-13 22:22 game rock: vale baka disculpa si te estoy apresurando
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: 00:45:142 (292,293,294,295) - agregar variedad con esos dobles
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: noo te preocupes baka
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: esque esta bien
2017-05-13 22:23 game rock: como que variedad? le agregue notas?
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: nop
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: osea
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: tu sabes que la consistencia tmb puede trabajarse en secciones verdad
2017-05-13 22:23 game rock: aja?
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: jodeeeeer maldita laptoppppp
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-05-13 22:24 game rock: XDDD
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: como seguia diciendo
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: ese dk dk 00:45:142 (292,293,294,295) -
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: se siente demasiado repetitivo en todo el kiai
2017-05-13 22:25 game rock: podría hacerle un Ctrl G
2017-05-13 22:25 game rock: no?
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: ajam
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: al principio
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: dk dk
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: luego kd kd
2017-05-13 22:26 -Sh1n1-: y luego dk kk
2017-05-13 22:26 -Sh1n1-: algo de tres o 4 variedades y luego repetirlo todo denuevo
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo tu kiai esta dividido en 3 partes
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: listo
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: primero dk dk
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: okas
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: luego?
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: luego dk kd
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: kk dk
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: kd dk
2017-05-13 22:28 game rock: 00:51:142 (343,344,345,346) - en estas partes igual debo hacerlo verdad?
2017-05-13 22:29 -Sh1n1-: ajam la siguiente seccion depende a como vaya tu consistencia
2017-05-13 22:30 game rock: hecho
2017-05-13 22:30 -Sh1n1-: listo
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: alguna otra parte que guardaste consistencia ahi?
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: los otros kiais?
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: por lo visto no
2017-05-13 22:31 game rock: nop
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: los otros tienen sonidos diferentes
2017-05-13 22:31 game rock: Sip
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: 01:00:742 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466) -
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: esta muy bonito pero
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: como es largo
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: me parece que lo comenzaste muy antes
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo el death stream debio empezar mas o menos en 01:01:427 -
2017-05-13 22:33 -Sh1n1-: asi que 01:01:342 - y 01:01:170 - no creo que deberian tener nota
2017-05-13 22:35 game rock: hecho bakita :3
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: 02:09:913 (143) - igual ahi
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: no lo siento tan necesario
2017-05-13 22:36 game rock: vale
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: y 02:09:827 (142) - podria seguir con el k
2017-05-13 22:38 -Sh1n1-: no es que me vuelva picky xd pero que sigues en 02:06:313 - 02:06:485 - ?
2017-05-13 22:38 game rock: yupi xDD :3
2017-05-13 22:39 game rock: quise variedad xd
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: con?
2017-05-13 22:40 game rock: pero si quieres los elimino
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: no es por mi gusto, solo que se siente sobremapeado para una parte tan calmada
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: sobretodo porque 02:06:742 (121,122,123,124,125) - es mas prominente
2017-05-13 22:41 -Sh1n1-: pero 02:06:056 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - tiene mas notas cuando no hay muchas baterias prominentes
2017-05-13 22:41 -Sh1n1-: si me dejo entender xd
2017-05-13 22:41 game rock: si xD
2017-05-13 22:42 game rock: las elimino
2017-05-13 22:42 game rock: sha owo
2017-05-13 22:43 game rock: y en el kiai no te preocupes ya varie esto 02:13:427 (172,173,174,175) -
2017-05-13 22:44 -Sh1n1-: si me di cuenta
2017-05-13 22:44 -Sh1n1-: (y) baka
2017-05-13 22:46 -Sh1n1-: 03:17:542 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - hay como odio eso
2017-05-13 22:46 -Sh1n1-: xDD
2017-05-13 22:48 game rock: XDDDD JAJAJA
2017-05-13 22:50 -Sh1n1-: 04:24:056 - ahi no quieres usar 1/6?
2017-05-13 22:52 game rock: Nop, no lo quiero complicar mucho ewe
2017-05-13 22:52 game rock: aparte no me gusta mucho el 1/6 tampoco xD
2017-05-13 22:52 -Sh1n1-: <3
2017-05-13 22:52 -Sh1n1-: mis dedos te lo agradecen
2017-05-13 22:53 game rock: jajajaja <3
2017-05-13 22:54 -Sh1n1-: bueno creo que eso es todo
2017-05-13 22:56 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: entonces posteo
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: el irc
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: suerte baka
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: dale baka, te aagradezco un miilon de gracias :D/
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: te debo una grande
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: no me debes nada baka
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: <3
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: para eso estamos
Topic Starter
Gemu-

-Sh1n1- wrote:

IRC con mi baka
Click me!
2017-05-13 21:52 -Sh1n1-: holly suena muy bien
2017-05-13 21:53 game rock: Gracias >ww<
2017-05-13 21:54 game rock: Me alegro mucho que te guste :33 lo que quiero es que le gusten a los players y se sientan comodos, no que me guste a mi ya que debo pensar en los demás, porque ellos son los que van a jugarlo
2017-05-13 22:01 game rock: me fascina es la parte kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkd
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: siiii
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: muchos misearan ahi
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: xDD
2017-05-13 22:01 game rock: XDDDDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: yo muy raro las misseo
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: xD
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: orz yo podri pasarla pero hay un 1/6 por ahi que me bajo la autoestima
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: xDDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: D:
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: XDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: culpa la song (???)
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: ACTION runs
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: sep
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: por cierto
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: xDD
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: hay un doble ddk ddk
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: que no se siente muy natural que sigamos
2017-05-13 22:03 game rock: donde?
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: en varias partes como
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:570 (119,120,121,122,123,124) -
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: aun estoy testeando para saber que parte cambiar
2017-05-13 22:03 game rock: ah vale owo
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: orz
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: maldita laptop
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: se me reinicia a cualquier momento
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: aaah ya vi el ddk ddk
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: pero no solo es el ddk
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: osea
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: solamente está al principio y al final
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: por la consistencia
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: si
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: pero a lo que voy es
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: que 00:24:056 (114,115,116,117,118) - esta overmapeado
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: que eso pudo haber ido en
2017-05-13 22:08 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:742 -
2017-05-13 22:08 -Sh1n1-: y los dos tripletes pudieron estar atras
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo no se si te guste
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: mover
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:142 (115) - hacia 00:23:970 -
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:656 (120) - hacia 00:24:827 -
2017-05-13 22:10 -Sh1n1-: y cambiar esa ultima nota a k
2017-05-13 22:10 game rock: suena bien :3
2017-05-13 22:12 -Sh1n1-: luego de eso
2017-05-13 22:12 game rock: 00:35:199 - aqui lo aplique igual
2017-05-13 22:12 -Sh1n1-: en 00:25:856 -
2017-05-13 22:13 -Sh1n1-: nice baka, lo que em encanta es nuestros estilos son parecidos pero me has superado por mucho
2017-05-13 22:13 -Sh1n1-: yo normalmente no podria hacer un mapa asi
2017-05-13 22:13 game rock: claro que no te he superado e.e
2017-05-13 22:13 game rock: tu eres pro
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: yo no soy pro
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: baka
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: bueno
2017-05-13 22:14 game rock: que hago en 00:25:856 - ?
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: aaa
2017-05-13 22:14 game rock: si lo eres, baka
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: esque
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:742 (120,121,122,123,124,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) -
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: se siente demasiado repetitivo (respecto a los quintuplets
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: por lo que si eliminas 00:25:856 (130) -
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: suena mucho mejor tbh
2017-05-13 22:15 -Sh1n1-: eso seria todo en esa seccion
2017-05-13 22:15 game rock: eso te iba a decir xDD
2017-05-13 22:15 -Sh1n1-: xD
2017-05-13 22:16 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:16 game rock: 00:36:827 - la quite igual allí
2017-05-13 22:16 -Sh1n1-: sip, tu ya sabes como es la consistencia <3
2017-05-13 22:18 game rock: cual es el siguiente?
2017-05-13 22:18 game rock: shi<3
2017-05-13 22:21 -Sh1n1-: mmm
2017-05-13 22:21 -Sh1n1-: joder mapeaste muy bien
2017-05-13 22:21 game rock: baka, no se si es mejor que me dejes mod, debo irme en minutos ;;
2017-05-13 22:21 game rock: es tarde acá
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: :c
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: resiste un poco baka
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: no es que pueda encontrar mucho
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: como consejo
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: te podria decir que
2017-05-13 22:22 game rock: vale baka disculpa si te estoy apresurando
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: 00:45:142 (292,293,294,295) - agregar variedad con esos dobles
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: noo te preocupes baka
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: esque esta bien
2017-05-13 22:23 game rock: como que variedad? le agregue notas?
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: nop
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: osea
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: tu sabes que la consistencia tmb puede trabajarse en secciones verdad
2017-05-13 22:23 game rock: aja?
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: jodeeeeer maldita laptoppppp
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-05-13 22:24 game rock: XDDD
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: como seguia diciendo
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: ese dk dk 00:45:142 (292,293,294,295) -
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: se siente demasiado repetitivo en todo el kiai
2017-05-13 22:25 game rock: podría hacerle un Ctrl G
2017-05-13 22:25 game rock: no?
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: ajam
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: al principio
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: dk dk
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: luego kd kd
2017-05-13 22:26 -Sh1n1-: y luego dk kk
2017-05-13 22:26 -Sh1n1-: algo de tres o 4 variedades y luego repetirlo todo denuevo
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo tu kiai esta dividido en 3 partes
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: listo
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: primero dk dk
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: okas
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: luego?
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: luego dk kd
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: kk dk
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: kd dk
2017-05-13 22:28 game rock: 00:51:142 (343,344,345,346) - en estas partes igual debo hacerlo verdad?
2017-05-13 22:29 -Sh1n1-: ajam la siguiente seccion depende a como vaya tu consistencia
2017-05-13 22:30 game rock: hecho
2017-05-13 22:30 -Sh1n1-: listo
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: alguna otra parte que guardaste consistencia ahi?
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: los otros kiais?
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: por lo visto no
2017-05-13 22:31 game rock: nop
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: los otros tienen sonidos diferentes
2017-05-13 22:31 game rock: Sip
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: 01:00:742 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466) -
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: esta muy bonito pero
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: como es largo
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: me parece que lo comenzaste muy antes
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo el death stream debio empezar mas o menos en 01:01:427 -
2017-05-13 22:33 -Sh1n1-: asi que 01:01:342 - y 01:01:170 - no creo que deberian tener nota
2017-05-13 22:35 game rock: hecho bakita :3
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: 02:09:913 (143) - igual ahi
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: no lo siento tan necesario
2017-05-13 22:36 game rock: vale
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: y 02:09:827 (142) - podria seguir con el k
2017-05-13 22:38 -Sh1n1-: no es que me vuelva picky xd pero que sigues en 02:06:313 - 02:06:485 - ?
2017-05-13 22:38 game rock: yupi xDD :3
2017-05-13 22:39 game rock: quise variedad xd
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: con?
2017-05-13 22:40 game rock: pero si quieres los elimino
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: no es por mi gusto, solo que se siente sobremapeado para una parte tan calmada
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: sobretodo porque 02:06:742 (121,122,123,124,125) - es mas prominente
2017-05-13 22:41 -Sh1n1-: pero 02:06:056 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - tiene mas notas cuando no hay muchas baterias prominentes
2017-05-13 22:41 -Sh1n1-: si me dejo entender xd
2017-05-13 22:41 game rock: si xD
2017-05-13 22:42 game rock: las elimino
2017-05-13 22:42 game rock: sha owo
2017-05-13 22:43 game rock: y en el kiai no te preocupes ya varie esto 02:13:427 (172,173,174,175) -
2017-05-13 22:44 -Sh1n1-: si me di cuenta
2017-05-13 22:44 -Sh1n1-: (y) baka
2017-05-13 22:46 -Sh1n1-: 03:17:542 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - hay como odio eso
2017-05-13 22:46 -Sh1n1-: xDD
2017-05-13 22:48 game rock: XDDDD JAJAJA
2017-05-13 22:50 -Sh1n1-: 04:24:056 - ahi no quieres usar 1/6?
2017-05-13 22:52 game rock: Nop, no lo quiero complicar mucho ewe
2017-05-13 22:52 game rock: aparte no me gusta mucho el 1/6 tampoco xD
2017-05-13 22:52 -Sh1n1-: <3
2017-05-13 22:52 -Sh1n1-: mis dedos te lo agradecen
2017-05-13 22:53 game rock: jajajaja <3
2017-05-13 22:54 -Sh1n1-: bueno creo que eso es todo
2017-05-13 22:56 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: entonces posteo
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: el irc
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: suerte baka
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: dale baka, te aagradezco un miilon de gracias :D/
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: te debo una grande
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: no me debes nada baka
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: <3
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: para eso estamos


Muchísimas gracias baka >ww< te agradezco mucho :3 >//<


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[R]
yo

[Mod]
00:20:199 - change kat ?

00:47:542 - maybe change note like this to don to make consistency with 00:46:170 - (also a good mirror)
00:53:027 - ^
00:58:513 - ^

how about delete 01:56:027 (68,69) - and place note in 01:55:942 - | 01:56:113 - sounds more important here
03:15:827 - pattern doesn't friendly to hit at this point, maybe try place kkkdddkkkdddkkddk

03:58:342 - same reason ^, try mirror the pattern kkdkkdkkdkk instead dkkkdkkkdkkkd

05:14:285 - change kat ?

that's all from me
good luck
Topic Starter
Gemu-

[R] wrote:

yo

[Mod]
00:20:199 - change kat ? Fixed

00:47:542 - maybe change note like this to don to make consistency with 00:46:170 - (also a good mirror) No, I want to variate a bit and keep the melody.
00:53:027 - ^ ^
00:58:513 - ^ ^

how about delete 01:56:027 (68,69) - and place note in 01:55:942 - | 01:56:113 - sounds more important here I add a k 01:55:942 - and a d 01:56:113 -
03:15:827 - pattern doesn't friendly to hit at this point, maybe try place kkkdddkkkdddkkddk Amazing!, Fixed

03:58:342 - same reason ^, try mirror the pattern kkdkkdkkdkk instead dkkkdkkkdkkkd No, I better leave it as it is.

05:14:285 - change kat ? Sure

that's all from me
good luck

Thank you so much >ww<


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