1. Level 5 (5.72 stars, 1511 notes)
2. Level 7 (7.28 stars, 1665 notes)

1. You should use custom Hitcircle / Slider Combos colors!
2. Disable CountDown.
3. Add "DnB" or "Drum and Bass" to the Tags list, this is the real genre of this song not "Dubstep" "Techno".

1. 00:20:597 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - DS.
2. 00:42:764 (5) - I think you should end the slider in blue tick. http://prntscr.com/edsnh0.
3. 00:47:347 - Blanket.
4. 00:48:096 (1,2,3) - DS.
5. 00:59:430 (3,4,5,6) - Please, handmade sliders seems to be really awkward.
6. 00:59:430 (3,4,5,6) - ^
7. 01:02:096 (1,2,3,4,1) -
8. 01:04:763 (5,6,7,8) - ^
9. 01:00:096 (1,2,5,6) - Please you're killing us with these jumps.
10. 01:01:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - DS
11. 01:06:596 (6) - NC
12. 01:08:096 (7,1) - So far away these sliders, solve this please.
13. 01:16:930 (1,2,1,2) - Why this 1,2 1,2?
14. 01:21:346 - Blanket.
15. 01:22:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Man, this is just 180 bpm map, this kind of jumps are really awkward.
16. 01:26:929 - I don't know why you add a break here? You can add some hitcircles / sliders there.
17. 01:40:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - DS.
18. 02:32:762 (5,6) - This kind of flow isn't easy to read, try to keep the pattern flow.
19. 02:35:096 (4,5) - ^
20. 02:43:429 (3,4) - ^
21. 02:45:429 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Please, don't do this 1,2 spam.
22. 02:51:346 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Tbh spaced sliders are not necessary, the music keeps slow and doesn't match with song rhythm.
23. 02:53:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Wow, this is really annoying to read, also hard to cookiezi tbh, you should do more closer the hitcircles between each one, man I think this kind of jumps are unrankeable.
24. Most parts of the rest of the maps, are also the same as I told you.

Seiji wrote:

Hey, good song ^^ M4M ♥

General

1. You should use custom Hitcircle / Slider Combos colors!
2. Disable CountDown.
3. Add "DnB" or "Drum and Bass" to the Tags list, this is the real genre of this song not "Dubstep" "Techno".

Level 7

1. 00:20:597 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - DS. I think its fine
2. 00:42:764 (5) - I think you should end the slider in blue tick. http://prntscr.com/edsnh0. Which blue tick? The slider tail is already ending on the blue tick on 00:44:014 -
3. 00:47:347 - Blanket. There's no note there but if you mean 00:47:430 (5) - then sure thing
4. 00:48:096 (1,2,3) - DS. Done!
5. 00:59:430 (3,4,5,6) - Please, handmade sliders seems to be really awkward. I don't think so. It doesn't seem awkward to me.
6. 00:59:430 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
7. 01:02:096 (1,2,3,4,1) - What about that part? lol
8. 01:04:763 (5,6,7,8) - ^ That part looks fine to me.
9. 01:00:096 (1,2,5,6) - Please you're killing us with these jumps.I have shorten the distance for 01:00:263 (2) - a little
10. 01:01:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - DS Changed distance a little.
11. 01:06:596 (6) - NC okie
12. 01:08:096 (7,1) - So far away these sliders, solve this please. Looks fine imo
13. 01:16:930 (1,2,1,2) - Why this 1,2 1,2? I have no idea why i did that. I removed the NC from 01:17:263 (1) -
14. 01:21:346 - Blanket. I actually remapped this part from 01:20:930 (1) - to 01:21:430 (5) -
15. 01:22:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Man, this is just 180 bpm map, this kind of jumps are really awkward. I'm not going to change it because that part is supposed to be more intensifying
16. 01:26:929 - I don't know why you add a break here? You can add some hitcircles / sliders there. I added breaks on 01:26:764 - and 03:13:430 - because it is the calmest section. The kiai time shows intensity through the song and calms down during this part 01:25:430 (10) -
17. 01:40:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - DS. Done!
18. 02:32:762 (5,6) - This kind of flow isn't easy to read, try to keep the pattern flow. Keeping it for now
19. 02:35:096 (4,5) - ^ ^
20. 02:43:429 (3,4) - ^ ^
21. 02:45:429 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Please, don't do this 1,2 spam. Why not?
22. 02:51:346 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Tbh spaced sliders are not necessary, the music keeps slow and doesn't match with song rhythm. 02:52:096 (11) - I put this slow slider here because the strong beat begins on 02:52:429 (1) - so I use a fast slider due to that. The spaced streams a necessary because the music and the sounds are still the same.
23. 02:53:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Wow, this is really annoying to read, also hard to cookiezi tbh, you should do more closer the hitcircles between each one, man I think this kind of jumps are unrankeable. Tbh, I think it's fine.
24. Most parts of the rest of the maps, are also the same as I told you.

Good luck with your map ^^

Did all the suggestions on general! Thanks for the Mod!

Hobbes2 wrote:

Placeholder, sorry for late

[level 5]

Map can use a lot of work on aesthetics, I'll give some examples of things that can be improved.

00:04:597 (2,3) - theres a clear space between these two here, but not 00:10:097 (3,4). Make that consistent Fixed
00:20:597 (2,3) - slight overlaps like this look pretty bad when playing. cleaning these up goes a lot way in improving your map Fixed
00:23:597 (5,2) - ^, 00:31:430 (3,1) - ^, 00:34:097 (5,1) - ^, etc etc. Generally if the overlaps aren't intentional they probably won't look good. Fixed, i'll also fix other overlapping parts as well


00:34:097 (5,1) - NC for slidery velocity change I don't think there is a slider velocity change there, but ill NC other parts like 03:12:097 (9) - and etc..
00:47:264 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - not the best rhythm, what you do now gives emphasis to 00:47:597 (7) - bit because of the movement, and not a lot on 00:47:764 (9) - which is the clap. probably better to make 00:47:264 (4) - a five note burst instead and then make 00:47:764 (9) - a circle. Got it.
00:48:847 - audible drum here, so it's better to map this. At the same time, 00:49:180 (8) - isn't a necessary note. I agree
00:49:430 (1) - For this measure, hear the synths? there's one on 00:49:430, 00:49:764, 00:50:264 - and 00:50:597, so why not make these clickable? you can do something like this https://puu.sh/vd56M/575287ddcb.jpg Yeah, I heard it. I'll change it
01:18:347 (7) - delete this? it lowers the emphasis on the sounds here, 3 1/2 circles would fit a lot better Alrighty!

EDIT - dont kds yet, still need to finish Take your time~

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

From WORLD'S BIGGEST M4M QUEUE oh man I wish that title was larger

(owo)

In general, jump movements should be as least cluttered as possible. Avoid overlapping notes on top of each other. This is normally done by avoiding objects from staying in the same general area.
For example, all of 00:44:597 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is more or less in one small area, so that pretty much results in cluttered clusters. Oh.. you're right. I need to fix a lot of it. Thanks for catching that!
Sometimes, it causes it to be more difficult to read, and in pretty much most of the time, it simply makes it more irritating to the eye (in the sense it's painful rather than infuriating) to look at so many objects in one location True, and it is also hard for EZ mod players to enjoy the map.
Interestingly, your jump patterns towards the end are much neater and less clustered, but this is largely because of the spacing. You can still avoid clustering without too much spacing if the direction of movement is changed
[Level 5]
00:21:930 (4) - Should probably move this farther from 00:21:264 (3) - so that it's clearer to see as a 1/1 Done! Made them both at 1x distance spacing.
00:22:764 (1,2) - you should extend 00:22:764 (1) - to 00:23:097 - since having two 1/4s here doesn't work: there's nothing to emphasize on 00:23:097 - . Take into comparison 00:23:597 (5,6) - where there is a sound on 00:23:930 - to map to so this pattern works there. I agree.
00:29:430 (2,4,1,2,3) - Most of the objects are crowding up in this area. You should move some of them away from each other so that it's not cluttered. My suggestion is moving the whole 00:29:264 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Rearranged.
00:30:764 (1,2,3) - You should also keep these from touching each other and change the movement as well. You see, the movement from 00:30:764 (1) - to 00:31:097 (2) - is weird, and the movement of 00:30:764 (1,2,3) - as a whole doesn't really connect well to 00:31:764 (1,2,3) - You can clean up the whole 00:30:764 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - like this: http://puu.sh/viAhx/85d30b598e.jpg http://puu.sh/viAid/0d10d9a518.jpg fixed!
00:41:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to spread this pattern out a bit as it current looks crowded Sure thing.
00:42:764 (9) - NC d
00:45:430 (3) - Move to x56 y224 and it'll have better movement no its fine now because 00:45:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I have edited the distancing for these sections on your first suggestion where the notes were all cluttered
00:46:930 (2,3) - You should space these away from 00:45:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:47:930 (10) - move it away from 00:48:430 (3) - [color=#00BF00FF]ok[/color]
00:50:097 (3,4,5,6) - you can move this pattern a bit further to the right kk
01:06:930 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't think you should've mapped that many 1/4s in this area. Yes, there's that whole 1/4 continuous sound thing in the background, but I really don't think it ever warrants a lot of 1/4s like this. Chopping up the stream pretty much means you're trying to emphasize something specific in the song but there isn't anything such here, so I don't think it works out well. I'm being a bit more lenient with the other triplets and groups of five considering its Drum n Bass, but with this much in a small area I think it just doesn't work. okay, i'll try to remove 01:07:347 (2,3,5) - so the only thing that is important are both 01:07:264 (1,4) - they will both be 1/1 apart from each other while still in the same area.
01:12:680 (4) - should probably delete I'm keeping it. If i delete it, its going to be confusing for players.
01:21:430 (7) - NC, and remove NC on 01:21:764 (1) - d
01:48:097 (2) - NC d
02:20:097 (1) - You should probably move this a little farther away. Right now it's covered by most of 02:19:430 (3,5) - so it just looks weird Yeah because the overlay there looks pretty bad. I tried doing the best i could lol
02:23:847 (9) - I don't quite see a reason for this random double here, so I guess you should do something else here It's to keep balance with the rhythm, thats why im keeping it.
02:31:764 (8) - should move this above: http://puu.sh/viOOO/6f77e2f4ba.jpg d
02:33:430 (1,2,3) - Should move this elsewhere I think its fine
02:37:430 (6) - NC, remove NC on 02:37:930 (1) - d
02:38:764 (7) - NC, remove NC on 02:39:264 (1) - d
03:34:764 (2) - NC d
03:45:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should space these out a bit or at least move them in different directions so they're not overlapping each other all over d
03:58:597 (1) - remove NC, NC on 03:58:764 (2) - , considering your NC patterns on this section 02:09:430 - d
04:00:930 (1) - Remove NC, NC on 04:01:264 (4) - d
04:17:430 (3) - NC d
04:38:764 (6) - NC d

I'd comment a bit on the direction of jumps but I can't exactly make something better in the same style and most of them seem to work out fine anyway.

Hope this helps /w\

-Roz wrote:

From my queue

Throughout the map the visuals are messy in some areas. This will be a pretty big problem to BN's. I would use more blankets and fix up some of the slightly overlapping notes (as said above, wrote this before looking ;w;) to tidy everything up a little. Yeah. I'll fix all of them in no time.

Level 7

00:25:930 (4,5,6,7) - These are representing the same sound 00:23:264 (2,3,4,5) is, but are spaced with jumps instead of overlaps. Either make the earlier notes jump instead of overlap, or make these overlapped I don't think its true. I'd like to keep it a different pattern. Both sounds are different because of the pitch at 00:26:597 (4,5,6,7) - (Note: i just deleted 00:25:264 because i thought there was a note there).

00:28:597 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ keeping because I don't want to destroy the pattern.
00:31:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really know how to explain this, but these sound slightly off the rhythm. Maybe one circle then 1/2 sliders on the white ticks? I do agree. The vocal pitch seems to be different there too. But instead, i made 00:31:430 (2) - into a 1/2 reversing slider.

00:33:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - I like these. They are similar to the sounds earlier, but you gave it a progressive feel, showing the song is advancing. Indeed, I do like these patterns as well because they have a very clear emphasis for these parts and a understandable rhythm. Good sense of flow.. I think i might change 00:27:097 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - these parts because they don't fit with the calm feel of the song. I need to include some sliders to create a nice relaxing flow. 00:36:097 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same with here.. But i'll probably make some 1/1 sliders instead.

00:39:930 (3,4) - Replace with a circle then 1/2 slider on white tick, it goes against the rhythm before this I'll make it 1/2 reversing slider instead.

00:41:097 (7,1) - I'd replace these with circles instead, might fit better with the vocals in the background d

00:44:097 to 01:05:430 - The rhythm feels really odd with this and a lot of the map. Usually in DnB songs you want to use repeated patterns to represent the hard kicks and snares, but in this section nothing is really repeated. For instance, you might make a slider with a high spaced jump after to emphasize a snare sound. There were times in this section that follow this, but there's also a lot of times it breaks it. This makes the whole section feel finicky and unstructured. I wish I could explain this better! x.x I don't think its odd imo. I wish I can explain my reasoning behind this better for this section. My mapping style for this kind of song is very different compared to other mappers. 00:50:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Like for this section here. I used jumps because this part feels like it is ascending and then will eventually change and become more intense at 01:04:763 - 01:25:263 . Distance spacing for this part increases as it is repeating and etc. When it comes to DnB songs, I don't usually like to repeat patterns and etc.. It makes the whole map feel boring imo. For example, if you take a look at 02:30:764 - 02:52:097, I used some repeated patterns but i end up trying to follow the vocals more and made some notes into jumping patterns because they feel stronger. Then at 02:52:430 - 03:12:097 the vocal feels the strongest there.

01:25:430 (10) - Imo this seems like a little TOO slow, but I get what you were doing. Yeah. Its a super calm part there. This will remain unchanged.

01:41:429 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These groups of four should be replaced to more long lines of 8 like 01:40:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Because each pitch
is repeated 8 times, but the notes give it the feeling that the pitch changes every 4. Yeah, but i actually remapped that part since i noticed that it doesn't feel right. I changed them to some 1/2 sliders, and a little bit of circles to only hit the vocals.

02:08:097 (1,2,3) - These would better fit spaced out Nah, I think its fine.

02:54:764 (1) - This whole jump set should be changed to fit the sections before. It does follow the rhythm of the song, but it's a big difficulty spike in both stamina and aiming without the song supporting the spike. No because i'm trying to emphasize the parts for this section.

03:27:431 (1) - Why is this note here? To keep rhythm, but i deleted 03:27:930 (9) - for stability

03:32:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like these could be reworked for better rhythm. 03:32:764 (2,4) - Yeah I could make these into 1/2 sliders

03:54:764 (1,2,3) - Space these too keep

04:12:097 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Love these sliders Yeah! I want to keep these sliders because the beats there feel like 1/2 notes but its better to have 1/4 slider since the part is about to get streamy.

All jumps around 04:49:430 - Again, this seems like boring and extreme jumps for an otherwise unique section to the song. Again, i explained why i used these jumps. I'm mainly following the vocals there.

05:15:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Replace this with what you did before at 05:12:930 (1) keeping

05:18:097 (3,4) - ^ keep

05:21:430 to 05:32:097 - The sliders all seem to have different curve then one another, the section would be better both flow wise and visually if all the sliders were the same curve I tried to make it look prettier ;p

05:52:930 (4,5,6) - Space this farther from the triple before, or overlap d

05:55:930 (3,4,5) - These don't follow the song well, maybe some sliders?Trying to follow the pattern

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[level7]
01:05:764 (2) - NC d
02:12:098 (3,4) - don't stack since you didn't stack at 02:10:764 (2,3) - d
03:06:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 03:09:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - overspacing looks bad. I made it look better now. Decreased the spacing just a lil though.

GL Thanks for the mod!

1. 02:28:097 (1,2,3,4) - slider ends aren't snapped
2. 00:12:930 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix spacing
3. 00:15:597 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix spacing here too
4. 00:23:930 (5) - remove object
5. 00:23:597 (4) - extend slider to red tick
6. 01:49:264 (4,1,2) - should be equaly spaced
   
   
   overall the map flows quite nicely but i think you need to fix how the jumps are spaced and organised
   first time posting a mod on forum, gl!:D

Mewe wrote:

[REMAP]

1. 02:28:097 (1,2,3,4) - slider ends aren't snapped
2. 00:12:930 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix spacing
3. 00:15:597 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix spacing here too
4. 00:23:930 (5) - remove object
5. 00:23:597 (4) - extend slider to red tick
6. 01:49:264 (4,1,2) - should be equaly spaced
   
   
   overall the map flows quite nicely but i think you need to fix how the jumps are spaced and organised
   first time posting a mod on forum, gl!:D

Miraie wrote:

Just wanted to say thanks for all the hard works/efforts everyone put into this! (not sure if this is a good place to say tho)
I'm in love with the map style, along with the DnB remix by Kotonohouse