thx Mir
Mir wrote:
From my queue.~
[ General]
- Timing!
- 03:49:181 - 122 bpm. it is actually 127
- 03:50:164 - 134 bpm. o true
- 03:53:755 - 127 bpm. it is already 127 but thx
- 03:54:699 - Snap the 130bpm properly to this point. lol no it sounds wrong
- 05:05:385 - Conflicting timing lines. Make sure both points have the kiai enabled/disabled. o fixed
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[ Tanuki]Some stuff above just keeps repeating in the map so find them yourself. Most of the things I mentioned above happen more than once in the difficulty and it'd be a waste of space to point out every one of them to you.
- 00:01:231 - 00:06:790 - Shorten break extensions? yes!
- 00:17:828 - Skipping this for some reason? Should map it and nerf the spacing between 00:17:605 (3,1) - since for the entirety of the previous section you've mapped this sound. no i dont want
- 00:22:939 (6) - Rotate -5 degrees looks better imo. noo
- 00:25:828 (5,6) - Pretty big jump. There's nothing to emphasize this heavily, I recommend nerfing this. not big imo
- 00:32:939 (6,7) - I think this is kinda weird to play. Usually you don't have triples under slider ends, so try extending the slider to the red tick where (7) is. it fits music
- 00:40:272 (7,8,9,10) - Difficult wide-angle flow here for some pretty weak sounds. You could make the angles sharper. Something like: http://i.imgur.com/B64jef0.png maybe. no i'll keep mine
- 00:40:939 (10,1) - This is a pretty big jump too for a weak sound. I recommend nerfing this. why is it big in your opinion i'm fine with it
- 00:52:494 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with your previous NC patterning? true
- 01:08:377 (2,3) - Suddenly stacked while 01:06:234 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - are spaced. Space this one too for consistency? but it is different
- 01:11:084 (6,7,8) - Could be hard to read. Offset the last note by a bit? http://i.imgur.com/ZWDIXXS.png no i like how it is now
- 01:13:452 (1,2,3,4) - Considering you use fairly close 1/4 slider end gaps, this is kind of overdone. You could shorten these all to 1/2 or make it go counter-clockwise like so: http://i.imgur.com/CoVlRzn.png it plays naturally and fits music
- 01:23:377 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overdone spacing. Nerf this to about this distance: http://i.imgur.com/0cDYdnA.png it's way too high as it is. noo its ok
- 01:30:369 (5,6,7,8) - Again overdone spacing. Nerf to something like this: http://i.imgur.com/lywV4G5.png ? it is not overdone
- 01:44:579 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Mentioned this before, overdone.
- 01:46:158 (5,6,7,8,9) - Stack these like you did for 01:40:745 (5,6,7,8) - ? variety is fun
- 01:51:572 (6,7,8,9) - Mentioned this earlier too.
- 01:56:309 (3) - NC should be here imo. Downbeat and strong note. then it looks bad
- 01:59:241 (5) - Slider end has a pretty strong note. Maybe two circles here instead? nah
- 02:01:722 (3,4) - Maybe make this a kickslider to distinguish the two drumrolls? i like how it looks and dont want to break it
- 02:06:702 (1) - Skips a triple at the end. I think this rhythm could be made more interesting overall. Try this: http://i.imgur.com/Z4akEZa.png i love undermapping sometimes
- 02:09:964 (1) - Shorten to red tick and add a note on the blue. Skipping a vocal here. vocals not that strong here imo and i like how (2) slider works with previous on that 1/12 or 1/16 piano or whatever
- 02:13:572 (4,5,6) - Also overdone. Nerf it to something like: http://i.imgur.com/7D1vl3Y.png
- 02:15:715 (6,7,8) - Mentioned this before as well.
- 02:42:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why is this different than 02:46:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ? They're both pretty much the same, and you can ignore the lead vocal completely because it's held. because i want them to be different
- 03:02:520 (8) - This is 1/6. true
- 03:06:805 - 03:17:181 - Really high rhythm density for such a slow part. Literally only streams. Make some reverses too, even the kiai has less rhythm density than here. i dont like reverse sliders
- 04:02:272 (1,2,3,4) - Space these visually similarly? no then i'll break concept
- 04:05:881 (1) - Shorten to blue tick for vocals. no it will sound strange
- 04:24:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing is suddenly really small here compared to everywhere else? Buff this slightly to keep the difficulty of this part consistent. i like it
- 04:33:118 (1) - This rhythm could be following the vocals better if you wanted it to: http://i.imgur.com/UsJYXNc.png I think it'd be more interesting. it is really nice and i like this suggestion but what i did is also nice and is build upping for next section so i'll keep O_о
Good luck.~ thank