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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on April 4, 2017 at 8:57:31 PM

Artist: Linked Horizon
Title: Shinzou o Sasageyo! [TV Size]
Source: 進撃の巨人
Tags: revo Attack on Titan shingeki no kyojin season 2 two dedicate all your hearts heart snk aot Haruto haruto_aizawa armin arlert levi erin jaeger mikasa ackerman survey corps opening one theme song sound
BPM: 160
Filesize: 30701kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.46 stars, 115 notes)
  2. Hard (3.19 stars, 263 notes)
  3. Haruto's Insane (4.52 stars, 392 notes)
  4. Insane (4.4 stars, 379 notes)
  5. Light Insane (4.21 stars, 355 notes)
  6. Normal (2.04 stars, 159 notes)
  7. Titan (5.37 stars, 407 notes)
Download: Linked Horizon - Shinzou o Sasageyo! [TV Size]
Download: Linked Horizon - Shinzou o Sasageyo! [TV Size] (no video)
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Insane by Haruto
Hitsounds by Kalibe
mp3 by Doormat
Video by Shad0w1and


Doormat
fast
Kalibe
go go power titans
puxtu
I smell a speedranking
Sotarks

puxtu wrote:

I smell a speedranking
Kuron-kun
first
Doormat
quick metadata check

http://shingeki.linked-horizon.com/news ... /1126.html -> official Linked Horizon website
http://shingeki.tv/season2/music/op.php -> official anime website

Artist: Linked Horizon
Title: 心臓を捧げよ! [TV Size]
Romanized Title: Shinzou o Sasageyo! [TV Size]
Source: 進撃の巨人

"Season 2" technically isn't included in any of the official sources I can find (it's written as 「進撃の巨人」Season 2) which is why I left it out of the source, but the brackets should be square brackets instead.
Natsu
wdf so fast lol :oops:
Logic Agent
i just want to be on the first page
dunois
naruto opening 75
Haruto
sao season 3 opening 1
Gero
Placeholder.

Great.

Log
22:27 Gero: Hey
22:27 Monstrata: yoo
22:27 Gero: do you still need help with it?
22:28 Monstrata: ya~ just going through easy and normal now
22:28 Monstrata: for blankets and stuff haha
22:28 Gero: sure
22:28 Gero: let's do it xD
22:28 Monstrata: alright xD
22:28 Monstrata: oh uh
22:28 Monstrata: 01:14:060 - 01:18:372 -
22:28 Monstrata: on Titan
22:28 Monstrata: u think the rhythm is okay?
22:29 Gero: let me check
22:30 Gero: 01:14:435 - 01:15:935 - 01:17:528 - I don't know why, but seems like the triples are in from the white to red ticks
22:31 Gero: for me they're okay as it is, but it's probably that people gonna complain about it
22:32 Gero: okay let's do an IRC mod instead, can I start or are you still checking them by yourself?
22:33 Monstrata: hmm
22:33 Monstrata: okay updating
22:33 Monstrata: just finished checking
22:33 Monstrata: rip 11% glitch
22:33 Monstrata: brb
22:33 Gero: sure
22:36 Monstrata: kk updated :D
22:36 Monstrata: i guess ill try and rework the rhythm for those 3 seconds since the triplets are on white to red
22:36 Gero: sure
22:39 Gero: 00:01:122 (3,3) - For Titan, they're not stacked in a proper way, check them out and you'll see that
22:42 Monstrata: oh
22:42 Monstrata: that i dont think i can fix
22:42 Monstrata: cuz its stacking with 00:01:497 (4) - 's slider end instead
22:43 Gero: alright~
22:43 Gero: 00:01:497 (4,5) - I guess you want to keep it unstacked as well right? xD
22:45 Gero: ayways 01:10:685 (3,4) - I want to ask you if there's a special reason to break your consistent regarding to the previous pattern? I mean, there's nothing to highlight or anything at this part of the song, 01:10:872 (4,1) - it's more understandable here but in this case the spacing is really lower than the other one
22:46 Gero: 01:09:560 (1,2) - The same goes for this
22:47 Monstrata: 01:10:685 (3,4,1) - felt like it needed more emphasis so i broke from the pattern a bit and used higher spacing to emphasize those two notes
22:47 Monstrata: 01:10:872 (4) - moved this slightly to create better structure tho
22:48 Monstrata: 01:09:560 (1,2) - this one imo is just a jump into another pattern. ppl compalined about it earlier which is why i moved 01:08:810 (1,2,3,4) - around
22:49 Gero: got it~
22:49 *Gero is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1256136 Linked Horizon - Shinzou o Sasageyo! [TV Size] [Insane]]
22:49 Gero: 00:23:997 (4,3) - Stack?
22:49 Monstrata: btw i fixed the rhythm i mentioned. it was a simple fix anyways. want me to update so you can see? or later
22:49 Gero: later, when we finished to check all diffs~
22:50 Monstrata: fixed stack
22:50 Monstrata: eww actually blanket is off
22:51 Gero: keep it as you want, don't worry
22:51 Gero: it's not a big deal anyways
22:52 Monstrata: k fixed
22:54 Gero: 01:15:185 (5,6,7,5,6,7) - Something I just noticed right now is that you've mapped the triples while in the harder insane you ignored them completely, are you sure about that?
22:55 Monstrata: oh yea
22:55 Monstrata: for the Insane I wanted to focus more on the jumps
22:55 Gero: I thought so, just wasn't sure if that was intentional or not
22:55 Monstrata: since I already use a lot of 1/4, i felt like the first section could focus more on aim
22:56 Monstrata: okay, sweet haha
22:56 Gero: Hard is okay as it is~
22:56 Monstrata: i know some ppl really want consistency between diffs, but sometimes its nice to map things differently on different difficulties, so you don't get bored of mapping haha
22:56 Monstrata: sweet :D
22:57 Gero: 00:51:560 (1,2,1,2) - Symmetry <3
22:58 Monstrata: oh
22:58 Monstrata: this part
22:58 Monstrata: on Hard
22:58 Monstrata: i really like the symmetry there haha
22:58 Monstrata: its pretty cool imo
22:58 Monstrata: cuz it crosses back into the other side slightly haha
22:58 Monstrata: but anyways yea symmetry <3
22:59 Gero: alright, I've checked all of them and they're ready for me~
22:59 Gero: update it
22:59 Gero: :D
23:00 Gero: Metadata was checked already right?
23:00 Monstrata: riiiip
23:00 Monstrata: 11 % glitch again
23:00 Monstrata: why does this ekep happening lol
23:00 Monstrata: and ya
23:00 Gero: take it easy xD
23:00 Gero: haha
23:00 Monstrata: ill link it to you one sec
23:03 Monstrata: okay updated~ check the rhythm i did for titan :D
23:03 Monstrata: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5916941
23:03 Monstrata: metadata btw^
23:05 Gero: alright, everything's good to go for me~
23:05 Gero: I'll post the log now
23:05 Monstrata: sweet :D
23:05 Monstrata: im ready too~ just checked modding assistant and aibat and stuff, everything looks good
23:06 Gero: okay
23:06 Gero: :D
23:06 Gero: HYPE
23:06 Monstrata: HYPEEE
23:06 Monstrata: AAAAH
23:06 Monstrata: ><3
Turquoise-
i fuckin called it

i knew monstrata would be first
Chromoxx
did some irc on titan and insane, talked over it a bit in discord too

log
2017-03-21 04:41 Chromoxx: listening to the tasteful edit now xD
2017-04-02 02:53 Chromoxx: titan
2017-04-02 02:53 Chromoxx: 00:38:622 - movement to this feels kinda weird, it's a pretty intense sound so i feel like the spacing could be increased
2017-04-02 02:56 Chromoxx: 01:16:122 - i feel like the movement to this isn't emphasized enough because it's a very strong sound yet the movement is very linear and not far
2017-04-02 02:56 Chromoxx: i feel like you could emphasize it a bit better by spacing it slightly further and making the sliderr go in the opposite direction
2017-04-02 02:57 Chromoxx: 01:17:810 - this one is better
2017-04-02 02:57 Chromoxx: nice diff tho :D
2017-04-02 03:00 Chromoxx: insane
2017-04-02 03:00 Chromoxx: 00:02:247 (2,3,4) - i feel like you could have these sliders going in the other direction
2017-04-02 03:00 Chromoxx: would make for more balanced movement imo
2017-04-02 03:02 Chromoxx: 00:04:122 (3,5) - i feel like you could differentiate the angles of these sliders a bit more since you differentiated pretty distinctively for the other ones in this section
2017-04-02 03:03 Chromoxx: rest seems good :D
2017-04-02 03:05 Monstrata: angle is for consistency with 2/7
2017-04-02 03:05 Monstrata: fixed 01:16:122 (3) -
2017-04-02 03:06 Monstrata: made it a lot bigger
2017-04-02 03:06 Monstrata: 00:38:622 (4) - fixed this too
2017-04-02 03:06 Monstrata: made it bigger
2017-04-02 03:06 Monstrata: other ones i think mine are better
-Latias-

Sotarks wrote:

puxtu wrote:

I smell a speedranking
Shad0w1and
damn if I do not mod it now I cannot find any more stuff to mod later lol.
so basically nazi mod, no need to reply reasons since none of them really matter:

[Titan]
00:04:685 - I can hear triple drum beat so maybe this is better 00:11:247 - vocal beat
01:08:060 (1,2) - compare your 01:06:560 (1,2) - 01:07:310 (1,2) - the build up, should have higher spacing maybe
[Insane]
00:15:466 - vocal fill maybe
00:16:872 - strong vocal beat can give a click 00:35:716 - fill vocal with 1/4 sliderend or click?
00:41:716 - better leave this unmapped, 00:41:622 - is a vocal "i (-ta)" 00:48:185 (4) - unnecessary sv change, also 00:48:466 - vocal
[Hard]
delete green lines will be good
fine
Sarah Katsuki
Amazing!! i love the insane diff :)
Atsuro
I tried

Last diff
  1. 00:19:872 (6) - Makes more sense to me to use new combo here judging by how the vocal's rhythm goes. Same here 00:22:872 (6) - and etc
  2. 00:20:247 (2) - Soft whistle?
  3. 00:41:060 (1) - I'd silence the slider end, i know there is a (pretty unaudible) beat there but it sounds weird having a kick hitsound there and not clicking it. At least remove the hitsound or reduce it's volume :p
  4. 01:10:872 (4) - Clap?
  5. 01:13:310 (1,2) - May want to give this more spacing, this can be confused with a 1/4 gap since you used this same spacing previously with 1/4 (it made me drop acc so fix it aaaa)
  6. 01:14:060 (1) - Dude nice hitsound, i'm stealing it, although it might lack that emphasis that a regular finish gives since it sounds soft
  7. 01:14:247 (2,3,4,5) - This felt a bit underwhelming since the songs intensity doesn't go down that much (imo it doesn't go down). Try having more movement here. Also it's overmapped but who cares xd
Bye
-Sh1n1-
that was fast xDD, GL
Shad0w1and
I have no idea how to map at this speed and keep quality x.x
fk I suck so hard
MaestroSplinter

Dunois wrote:

naruto opening 75
more like naruto opening 500 :^)
ErunamoJAZZ
Very fast...
Personal opinion
I hope BNs dont rush this set. Keep time to people complain about stuffs before qualify pls >.<

EDIT:

irc
23:26 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1256295 Linked Horizon - Shinzou o Sasageyo! [TV Size] [Hard]]
23:27 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:33:560 (1,2) - this is boring, music change but you keep the same patter
23:28 Monstrata: hmm true
23:30 Monstrata: fixed :D
23:30 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1256135 Linked Horizon - Shinzou o Sasageyo! [TV Size] [Easy]]
23:30 ErunamoJAZZ: this have a lot of blankets to improve xD
23:30 ErunamoJAZZ: and hotaru diff have some circles very at bottom
23:31 ErunamoJAZZ: and... I hate speed ranks >.<
23:31 *ErunamoJAZZ runs away
23:32 ErunamoJAZZ: o/
23:33 Monstrata: circles at the bottom? what do you mean xD
23:33 Monstrata: btw feel free to post if you wand a kd lol
Izzywing
Hey there, my backspace and p keys randomly don't work so forgive me for any errors.

[Easy]

00:06:560 (1,2) - This blanket looks super lazy, do this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7717198
^Now use that thickness for the rest of these, things like 00:09:560 (1,2) - 00:17:810 (3,1), etc. If you get this to be a uniform thickness (something like the left half of 00:12:560 (1,2) - but be sure to fix that blanket too lol)

I know you're fully aware of the whole "consistent visual spacing" aesthetic concept, basically that. tl;dr fix blanket kds pls

00:15:560 (4) - NC should be here, right?
00:32:810 (4,5) - use this spacing for 00:31:685 (2,1) - too? symmetry would look cool here if you could pull it off

Your typical easy diff i guess. The blanket fix thing is more than just "fix blanket" as I think the inconsistent gaps caused by the messed up blankets actually are a big detriment to the map's overall aesthetics.

[Normal]

00:27:372 (6,1) - fix stack
01:00:560 (1) - huge spike in density right before the kiai, best to keep this stuff in the kiai during the high energy sections imo. id nerf this pattern.
01:04:122 - wouldnt skip the vocal, its pretty important in the music. idk what hes saying exactly but whatever sounds like "sa ge yo" should all be clickable. its what a new player would hear the most when playing the song.
01:05:622 - ^and etc.

good!

[Hard]

This diff could have had active 1/4 in it, consider the abundance in the insane. Insane has long 1/4 streams but this diff just has like a kickslider and some reverse sliders.

00:03:747 (2,3) - bit confused as to why these get this big spacing but then 00:04:497 (4) - is small again when they're all the same in the music.

00:06:372 - should be clickable, based on this entire red tick rhythm that is setup in this and the last measure. maybe make 00:05:997 - a kickslider until 00:06:278 - and then make 00:06:372 - a circle?

00:15:560 (1,2,3,4) - why'd you switch to 1/2 sliders here like this instead of continuing a vocal focused rhythm? it might be ok but i cant tell why you did it
00:29:060 (1,2,3,4) - is clearly more intense than 00:17:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in the music but that isnt represented in the gameplay. In fact, 00:17:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels pretty overmapped now that I think about it, better to make that 4 1/2 sliders instead/
01:13:122 - feel like this should be mapped in someone since its the ending of the vocal that is clicked on 01:12:560 -

[Insane]

fix these stacks
00:05:153 (2,3) -
00:16:122 (3,4,5) -
00:38:622 (4,5,1) -
01:05:810 (5,1) -
01:11:810 (1,3,4,5,6,1) -

00:09:185 (4) - pretty intense sounds here so a reverse slider is underwhelming. why not em all clickable with a triplet?
00:14:810 (3,4) - my only possible explanation for you switching to white tick 1/2 sliders is to follow that piano sound that's introduced in the background? Even if you are following that, the piano has a sound on 00:15:091 - so regardless the rhythm seems incorrect here
00:17:060 (1,2,3,4) - silence tails? you did it here 00:29:060 (1,2) -
00:41:716 (4) - dont silence this? seems to be a remnant of copied hitsounds
00:48:185 (4) - remove clap from tail? not sure what that's for
00:53:060 (5) - NC
00:56:060 (1) - there's an audible drum on the red tick of this slider. Consider splitting this into circle+1/2 slider.
01:09:372 (4) - fits better as 2 circles due to the intensity of the music? triplet would be better here imo. or otherwise, space the kickslider out more.
01:13:122 - Similar thing as the hard, id map this since its the finishing of the vocal started on 01:12:560
01:20:060 (1) - unsnapped tail

[Haruto]

im not too anal on note spread, but the literal entire top right of the map isnt used at all lol

00:05:247 (1,3) - try stacking these two objects? looks neater that way
00:17:060 (1,2,1,2) - silence tails?
00:41:716 (4) - unsilence?
00:56:247 (2) - add a hitsound here for the clap

really like this map, well done!

[titan]

fix these stacks
00:10:872 (4,5,1) -
01:01:216 (4,1) -

00:09:560 (8) - NC should be here, same with 00:15:560 (7) -
01:05:622 (5) - unsnapped tail
00:11:247 - vocal in the middle of this slider, would be better to map it instead of ignoring it
00:25:778 (6) - overmapped? seems like an unnecessary burst anyway
00:41:341 - silence tail?
00:56:247 - would definitely map this drum here. similar to how haruto does it.
01:11:060 (1,2,3) - not really a fan of this, the emphasis should be on 01:11:060 (1), but it's 01:11:247 (2,3) - that gives the straight when playing becuase of the super awkward angle you have to make to reach it while then flowing into 01:11:435 (4) -
01:14:997 - should be clickable, yeah? It's the high pitched "ahh" vocal sound that's been clickable pretty much everywhere else. Same for 01:16:310 (5) -

Overall you've got some fun maps, and im very jealous of your motivation. Good luck!
Hollow Delta
From #modreqs

Titan
01:05:622 (5) - Unsnapped object
00:05:060 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here is incorrect. The emphasis is only on 2 and 4. Replacing 3 with a circle shows better contrast.
01:10:872 (4) - There's nothing supporting the increase of distance here.

Insane
00:33:091 - Unused line
00:33:466 - ^
01:20:060 (1) - Unsnapped

Haruto's Insane
00:24:185 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is more exaggerated than 00:23:435 (3,4,5,6,7) - so it should be slightly longer.
00:30:185 (3,4,1) - I think This jump here is slightly larger than it needs to be.

Hard
01:10:310 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - You see how the pattern doesn't complete a full circle before switching directions? This will tire out the player, and I don't see any reasons to keep a pattern like this in. Simple fix would be to bring 01:11:435 (2) - lower so it's under 1 and adjust 01:11:810 (1,2) - so they go clockwise as well.

Normal
00:11:621 (4) - Unsnapped note
01:09:560 (1,2,1) - There's no feedback on the ends of these sliders, yet there's an audible sound on each one.

Easy
On the sliders that last 2 1/2 full ticks have a tick that is easily heard in some parts. I don't know if this will pose problems for the player, but definitely something to keep in mind in case this is brought up again.
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