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[ A v a l o n ]
hitsounded + ganti diff name juga http://puu.sh/qMgXs/55de5388cf.rar
lel diff punya mu aja blum dikasi HS . . . atau nunggu w ?
XD

Adot wrote:

Avalon's
00:16:578 - add 1 kek ini 00:20:328 - oh sengaja itu 00:16:343 - 00:20:093 - 00:23:843 - buat variasi dikit

00:36:031 - missing sound? ada, tapi low bgt, cukup fokus ke LN buat gitarnya aja dlu

hmmm... diff nya keren bgt uwu thanks owo
thanks dot owo
Dellvangel
Hai, mod as requested :)

1|2|3|4
[Avalon's Touch]
  1. 00:16:578 - add note? sama kayak 00:16:109 (16109|3,16109|2) - dll sound nya, dan di 00:20:328 - , 00:27:828 - dll 2 note juga. kalo di add salah satu HS nya di pindah ke note baru, terus 00:16:461 - salah satu di add HS 'C' kayak 00:20:211 (20211|0) - .
[Hyper]
  1. 01:28:297 (88297|0) - delete? biar lebih unik gitu di main, bisa reference diff tersulit untuk lebih jelasnya.
  2. 01:48:453 (108453|0) - sengaja di cover 1 LN? but imo ini harusnya 2 LN karena ada 2 pitch, pisahin di 01:48:687 - , mungkin coba edit jadi gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5929823 sekalian nge-balance jack di 01:50:093 (110093|1,110328|1) - .
  3. 01:52:203 (112203|3) - ini juga seharusnya 2 LN karena ada 2 pitch, mungkin ganti jadi gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5929836 .
  4. 01:55:953 (115953|0) - ^ .
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:297 (58297|0) - dipanjangin sampai 01:00:172 - juga gapapa imo, malah lebih unik di main, ga susah kok buat diff normal.
  2. 01:22:672 - add note, cymbal.
  3. 01:48:336 (108336|1) - , 01:55:836 (115836|1) - agak ragu ngeliat note ini di diff normal, nge-hold 1/2 beat LN dan ada 1/4 nya.
[BANGKE's Beginner]
  1. 00:16:812 - , 00:20:562 - 00:24:312 - dll yg ada kick nya coba di add, daripada boring di main 1/1 beat terus.
  2. 01:22:437 - add note, kick kayak 01:18:687 (78687|2) - .
  3. 01:57:359 (117359|3) - move ke col 3? biar lebih unik gitu feel kick nya sama kayak 01:56:890 (116890|2) - .
Sorry cuma dikit, good luck! :)
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Dellvangel wrote:

Hai, mod as requested :)

1|2|3|4
[Hyper]
  1. 01:28:297 (88297|0) - delete? biar lebih unik gitu di main, bisa reference diff tersulit untuk lebih jelasnya.
  2. 01:48:453 (108453|0) - sengaja di cover 1 LN? but imo ini harusnya 2 LN karena ada 2 pitch, pisahin di 01:48:687 - , mungkin coba edit jadi gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5929823 sekalian nge-balance jack di 01:50:093 (110093|1,110328|1) - .
  3. 01:52:203 (112203|3) - ini juga seharusnya 2 LN karena ada 2 pitch, mungkin ganti jadi gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5929836 .
  4. 01:55:953 (115953|0) - ^ .
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:297 (58297|0) - dipanjangin sampai 01:00:172 - juga gapapa imo, malah lebih unik di main, ga susah kok buat diff normal.
  2. 01:22:672 - add note, cymbal.
  3. 01:48:336 (108336|1) - , 01:55:836 (115836|1) - agak ragu ngeliat note ini di diff normal, nge-hold 1/2 beat LN dan ada 1/4 nya.
Sorry cuma dikit, good luck! :)
all applied , thanks del mod nya :D
Critical_Star
Hello, mod as requested

1 2 3 4


BANGKE's Beginner
00:13:297 (13297|3,13297|2) - i think single note is fine since the sound is the same here too like 00:13:765 (13765|2,14234|2) -
00:28:297 (28297|0,28297|2) - same like above ^
00:56:890 (56890|1,57125|2) - maybe CTRL+H to make right to left pattern variation, something like 00:53:140 (53140|1,53375|2,53843|3,54078|0) -
01:56:422 (116422|1,116890|2,117359|3) - move to the left by 1? seems easier to play

Normal
00:07:203 (7203|1) - move to 1? make a mirror pattern of 00:03:922 (3922|1,4390|2,4859|0,5328|3) -
00:26:422 - should double here too since the sound is just the same like 00:26:890 (26890|0,26890|3,27359|0,27359|1,27828|2,27828|0) -
00:35:328 (35328|0) - move to 3?
01:28:297 (88297|1) - how about remove this note? is just an echo sound here

Hyper
00:28:531 - 00:29:000 - u could add a note here too for the main sync
01:52:437 (112437|2) - instead long note here about remove it and add at note at 01:52:554 - ?

Avalon's Touch
00:21:851 (21851|3) - 00:26:070 - pretty sure is a ghost note or just echo sound here
00:49:156 (49156|1) - 00:52:906 (52906|1) - remove it to make a flow like 00:45:406 - ? also the sound are really soft at this timing, i suggest to use LN to cover here
01:03:453 - 01:10:953 - add a note? i see you did add for each white tick here
01:13:297 - 01:13:765 - 01:14:234 - 01:14:703 - add for tick?



map seems good to me, nothing much i could found 8-)
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Critical_Star wrote:

Hello, mod as requested

1 2 3 4


BANGKE's Beginner
00:13:297 (13297|3,13297|2) - i think single note is fine since the sound is the same here too like 00:13:765 (13765|2,14234|2) - for emphasize, so no change owo
00:28:297 (28297|0,28297|2) - same like above ^ ^
00:56:890 (56890|1,57125|2) - maybe CTRL+H to make right to left pattern variation, something like 00:53:140 (53140|1,53375|2,53843|3,54078|0) - seems no big problem and still comfort to play that pattern. rejected this too
01:56:422 (116422|1,116890|2,117359|3) - move to the left by 1? seems easier to play

Normal
00:07:203 (7203|1) - move to 1? make a mirror pattern of 00:03:922 (3922|1,4390|2,4859|0,5328|3) - emm.. nope, still comfort with my current pattern xD
00:26:422 - should double here too since the sound is just the same like 00:26:890 (26890|0,26890|3,27359|0,27359|1,27828|2,27828|0) -
00:35:328 (35328|0) - move to 3?
01:28:297 (88297|1) - how about remove this note? is just an echo sound here

Hyper
00:28:531 - 00:29:000 - u could add a note here too for the main sync
01:52:437 (112437|2) - instead long note here about remove it and add at note at 01:52:554 - ? just removed that note


map seems good to me, nothing much i could found 8-)
Good Luck~
bangke was told me for handle his diff xD because his account got Restricted (Again) :(

no reply means Accept

Thanks you so much CS! :D
Surono
hi capital of #javanese mapper, ez rank. gl
[ A v a l o n ]

Dellvangel wrote:

Hai, mod as requested :)
[Avalon's Touch]
  1. 00:16:578 - add note? sama kayak 00:16:109 (16109|3,16109|2) - dll sound nya, dan di 00:20:328 - , 00:27:828 - dll 2 note juga. kalo di add salah satu HS nya di pindah ke note baru, terus 00:16:461 - salah satu di add HS 'C' kayak 00:20:211 (20211|0) - done, thank you
Thanks Dell ! qwq satu bulan

Critical_Star wrote:

Avalon's Touch
00:21:851 (21851|3) - 00:26:070 - pretty sure is a ghost note or just echo sound here i can really sure there's have a sound ._.
00:49:156 (49156|1) - 00:52:906 (52906|1) - remove it to make a flow like 00:45:406 - ? also the sound are really soft at this timing, i suggest to use LN to cover here i removed the first one, and change it with LN . . . but not with second one cuz it have different song feeling uwu
01:03:453 - 01:10:953 - add a note? i see you did add for each white tick here done
01:13:297 - 01:13:765 - 01:14:234 - 01:14:703 - add for tick? i'm gonna focus to background synth sound only for this time
Thank you CS owo/

Update ==> http://puu.sh/rpT0W/ca8cabb37a.rar
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-
updated
Rivals_7
sup'
1|2|3|4

[Avalon's Touch]

  1. 00:29:468 (29468|0) - dunno. normal have F but this diff not? reference - 00:14:468
  2. 01:02:281 - try this one?
    https://puu.sh/uHDKp/b930b2046e.jpg
    since your current pattern doesnt seem to correlate pitch correctly (doesnt seem to be intended anyways)
  3. 01:17:281 (77281|1,77281|0,77398|3,77398|2,77750|0,77750|2,77867|3,77867|1) - cant really catch whats the specialty of this double. i thik you only use doubles before claps for this kind of noise that you mapped at - 01:19:625 (79625|3,79625|2,79742|1,79742|0) - and so on. would probably better to delete since its add unecessary diff spike there
  4. 01:39:312 (99312|1,99312|2,99429|3,99547|0,99547|1) - 01:39:781 (99781|2,99898|3,100015|1,100015|2,100015|0) - same noise sequence, different density?
  5. 01:42:125 (102125|2,102125|1,102242|0,102359|2,102359|3,102593|1,102711|2,102828|3,102828|0,102828|1) - same as above i think
  6. whilst i understand the usage of an LN and an SN to be pressed in the same time on - 01:45:875 (105875|3,105875|1) - is to emphasize the noise, however - 01:45:172 (105172|1,105406|3) - doesnt seem to have "hard instrument" or special emphasize involved so this structure is kinda awkward to feel. might want to remove that.
[Hyper]

  1. 00:22:086 (22086|2) - C
  2. 00:29:468 (29468|0) - same as avalon
  3. 01:16:343 (76343|2) - col 4 LN should end here? and this note should be an LN. i hear another pitch of long noise apparently
  4. 01:39:547 (99547|0,99781|0,100015|0) - looks like an unecessary tiple stack here. try moving - 01:39:781 (99781|0,100250|3) - to 4|1
[Normal]

  1. 00:30:875 (30875|1,31578|2) - ctrl+j.pitch
  2. 00:37:672 (37672|2,38375|1) - same ^
neat

[BANGKE's Beginner]

  1. 00:30:172 (30172|2) - move to 2 for a proper balance
  2. 00:33:922 (33922|3,34625|0,35328|2) - 2|4|1 for pitch i guess
  3. 00:37:672 (37672|1,38375|3,39078|2) - 1|2|4 ^
song is pretty simple to follow so yea
Crosscheck the HS before we go fuhrer further
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Rivals_7 wrote:

sup'
1|2|3|4

[Hyper]

  1. 00:22:086 (22086|2) - C oops my bad
  2. 00:29:468 (29468|0) - same as avalon consider to add F there
  3. 01:16:343 (76343|2) - col 4 LN should end here? and this note should be an LN. i hear another pitch of long noise apparently fixed
  4. 01:39:547 (99547|0,99781|0,100015|0) - looks like an unecessary tiple stack here. try moving - 01:39:781 (99781|0,100250|3) - to 4|1 hmm.. okay
[Normal]

  1. 00:30:875 (30875|1,31578|2) - ctrl+j.pitch changed
  2. 00:37:672 (37672|2,38375|1) - same ^ ^
neat

[BANGKE's Beginner]

  1. 00:30:172 (30172|2) - move to 2 for a proper balance good
  2. 00:33:922 (33922|3,34625|0,35328|2) - 2|4|1 for pitch i guess yep
  3. 00:37:672 (37672|1,38375|3,39078|2) - 1|2|4 ^ move to 2|3|4 instead
song is pretty simple to follow so yea
Crosscheck the HS before we go fuhrer further


Thanks for check Rivals :) and also i did some selfmod on my diffs, waiting for Avalon :)
D arc_old
rip bangke ea
[ A v a l o n ]
I will reply this later

edited

Rivals_7 wrote:

sup'
1|2|3|4

[Avalon's Touch]

  1. 00:29:468 (29468|0) - dunno. normal have F but this diff not? reference - 00:14:468 already
  2. 01:02:281 - try this one?
    https://puu.sh/uHDKp/b930b2046e.jpg
    since your current pattern doesnt seem to correlate pitch correctly (doesnt seem to be intended anyways) okay
  3. 01:17:281 (77281|1,77281|0,77398|3,77398|2,77750|0,77750|2,77867|3,77867|1) - cant really catch whats the specialty of this double. i thik you only use doubles before claps for this kind of noise that you mapped at - 01:19:625 (79625|3,79625|2,79742|1,79742|0) - and so on. would probably better to delete since its add unecessary diff spike there deleted
  4. 01:39:312 (99312|1,99312|2,99429|3,99547|0,99547|1) - 01:39:781 (99781|2,99898|3,100015|1,100015|2,100015|0) - same noise sequence, different density? added a note then
  5. 01:42:125 (102125|2,102125|1,102242|0,102359|2,102359|3,102593|1,102711|2,102828|3,102828|0,102828|1) - same as above i think ok
  6. whilst i understand the usage of an LN and an SN to be pressed in the same time on - 01:45:875 (105875|3,105875|1) - is to emphasize the noise, however - 01:45:172 (105172|1,105406|3) - doesnt seem to have "hard instrument" or special emphasize involved so this structure is kinda awkward to feel. might want to remove that. it doesn't really matter, the sound itself is hard enough to be give a little more pressure . . . it's more awkward if you only use a note for those instrument i feel
thanks for check
update here http://puu.sh/uNYEl/0151d269de.rar

ps : bg nekonya buat diff saya aja yaaa
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-
ok. updated!
Rivals_7
*ding*
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-
Thanks Rivals :D
Maxus
Sorry for the delays, univ things kinda a bit exploding.

[Sentuhan Avalon]
Wah balik lagi ni ke osu wwkkw

00:13:765 (13765|2) - I felt you can accenting the loud drum better if you make this note at col 4 instead, the stack will be much more emphasized that way.

00:15:640 (15640|1,15875|0,16109|1) - Try make this 1-2-1? it would alleviate the col 2 biases to be more balance, since i felt the diff patterning is around comfortability too.

00:44:234 - Kinda wish you want to add another LN for the rising sound occured here, similar to what you did at 00:59:703 (59703|0) -

01:50:328 (110328|2,111734|2) - I'm not sure if this LNs contain synth kind of sound here.. changing it to normal note seems more fit with the current instrument.

01:52:203 - Although I know the double LN want to follow additional BG effect sound at the back, but it feels didn't suit the pattern structure somehow because of the "suddenly appear" feeling.. i think you can follow the arrangement like http://puu.sh/uXC3h/be997072dd.png , the reason i also make 01:52:672 - a LN is because it's actually the same sound as 01:45:172 (105172|2,105406|0) -

01:54:781 (114781|2,115015|3) - Switch column here? it will fit a lot more in terms of PR.

01:56:890 - should be added another note to follow low cymbal layering at 01:57:359 - 01:57:828 - ,etc.

[Hyper]

00:48:922 - Feels like this kinda breaks the LN flow considering the one that you make at 00:52:672 - 00:56:422 - which all is LN stairs, I suggest you also make it like http://puu.sh/uXD6O/783c3e8c95.png , the Pitch also ascending higher here anyway..

01:00:172 - Don't see the reason why is this single, if it's because of avalon's diff also use single, his diff avoid 1/2 shield for that, but in this diff, you don't avoid the shield, so make this double will be more fit.

01:04:859 (64859|1,65093|2,65328|1) - I recommend make these 3-2-3 column here, this way you will got 3-4 double at 01:05:328 - which mirroring 01:03:922 (63922|1,63922|0) - to form better structure.

01:06:968 (66968|3,67203|0) - Also it's better to switch column here , the current flow feels really awkward tbh..

01:20:797 - I recommend you try http://puu.sh/uXG6j/48c1847e4e.png this, because this section only has 2 jack, while the section at 01:17:047 - have 3 jack, which kinda inconsistent.

01:33:336 (93336|3,93453|1) - you should switch column here, so you got the same pattern as 01:32:750 - , similar to how you did at 01:36:500 - 01:36:968 - , and 01:40:250 - 01:40:718 -

01:54:547 - feels like this breaks the PR things which kinda awkward imo, suggest https://puu.sh/uXGj4/1054f5c3f3.png

01:57:125 (117125|2,117359|1) - Also switch column here, so you can accent the PR differences with 01:57:828 (117828|2) -

[Normal]

00:23:843 (23843|2) - pretty sure this note shouldn't exist if following how you layer at 00:16:343 - 00:20:093 -

01:45:172 (105172|0,106109|0,106578|0,107047|0,107515|0,107984|0,108453|0,108922|0,109859|0) - Felt unnecessary.. I think you can try http://puu.sh/uXGJh/8a6ca5ccb7.png instead (it starts from 01:47:281 - )

01:48:453 (108453|0) - you might also want to make 1/2 LN seeing how you also make one at 01:55:953 (115953|3) - (you might want to tweak a bit of my suggestion before)

[BANGKE's Easy]

00:26:422 (26422|2,26890|0,27359|1) - You might want to make this 1-4-1 , the drum becoming more prominent here, it's awkward to having the same structure as the pattern before.

00:59:234 (59234|1) - Don't understand with this LN have different start from other diff, since i don't really hear any special sound starting here

01:18:453 (78453|1,78687|2,79859|1,80328|2,81265|1,81734|2,83140|1,83609|2,84547|1,85015|2) - Felt this got repeated too many times.. suggesting that at 01:19:390 - , you make it like http://puu.sh/uXH4d/4bb9b7555d.png to also mirroring at 01:24:078 -

01:39:078 (99078|1,99547|2) - Feels like switching column here will be much better to mirroring 01:35:797 (95797|0,96265|1,96734|2,97203|3) -

01:41:422 (101422|3) - it's better to move this to col.2 , so that it will also neutralize biases for the jack at the 4th column that occured after this pattern.

Call me back.
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Maxus wrote:

Sorry for the delays, univ things kinda a bit exploding.

[Hyper]

00:48:922 - Feels like this kinda breaks the LN flow considering the one that you make at 00:52:672 - 00:56:422 - which all is LN stairs, I suggest you also make it like http://puu.sh/uXD6O/783c3e8c95.png , the Pitch also ascending higher here anyway.. okay fixed

01:00:172 - Don't see the reason why is this single, if it's because of avalon's diff also use single, his diff avoid 1/2 shield for that, but in this diff, you don't avoid the shield, so make this double will be more fit. added

01:04:859 (64859|1,65093|2,65328|1) - I recommend make these 3-2-3 column here, this way you will got 3-4 double at 01:05:328 - which mirroring 01:03:922 (63922|1,63922|0) - to form better structure. it's better right now, thanks!

01:06:968 (66968|3,67203|0) - Also it's better to switch column here , the current flow feels really awkward tbh.. haha switched

01:20:797 - I recommend you try http://puu.sh/uXG6j/48c1847e4e.png this, because this section only has 2 jack, while the section at 01:17:047 - have 3 jack, which kinda inconsistent. hnn.. oki, love it!

01:33:336 (93336|3,93453|1) - you should switch column here, so you got the same pattern as 01:32:750 - , similar to how you did at 01:36:500 - 01:36:968 - , and 01:40:250 - 01:40:718 - got it. switched

01:54:547 - feels like this breaks the PR things which kinda awkward imo, suggest https://puu.sh/uXGj4/1054f5c3f3.png nice suggest, accepted :3

01:57:125 (117125|2,117359|1) - Also switch column here, so you can accent the PR differences with 01:57:828 (117828|2) - got it!

[Normal]

00:23:843 (23843|2) - pretty sure this note shouldn't exist if following how you layer at 00:16:343 - 00:20:093 - deleted

01:45:172 (105172|0,106109|0,106578|0,107047|0,107515|0,107984|0,108453|0,108922|0,109859|0) - Felt unnecessary.. I think you can try http://puu.sh/uXGJh/8a6ca5ccb7.png instead (it starts from 01:47:281 - ) nice suggest, accepted!

01:48:453 (108453|0) - you might also want to make 1/2 LN seeing how you also make one at 01:55:953 (115953|3) - (you might want to tweak a bit of my suggestion before) oh nice for consistency

[BANGKE's Easy]

00:26:422 (26422|2,26890|0,27359|1) - You might want to make this 1-4-1 , the drum becoming more prominent here, it's awkward to having the same structure as the pattern before. fixed

00:59:234 (59234|1) - Don't understand with this LN have different start from other diff, since i don't really hear any special sound starting here oki fixed

01:18:453 (78453|1,78687|2,79859|1,80328|2,81265|1,81734|2,83140|1,83609|2,84547|1,85015|2) - Felt this got repeated too many times.. suggesting that at 01:19:390 - , you make it like http://puu.sh/uXH4d/4bb9b7555d.png to also mirroring at 01:24:078 - nice suggest, accepted

01:39:078 (99078|1,99547|2) - Feels like switching column here will be much better to mirroring 01:35:797 (95797|0,96265|1,96734|2,97203|3) - yep oki

01:41:422 (101422|3) - it's better to move this to col.2 , so that it will also neutralize biases for the jack at the 4th column that occured after this pattern. woah nice catch

Call me back.
woah thanks maxus for your mod, really nice mod i got here ;) waiting for Avalon's turn
[ A v a l o n ]

Maxus wrote:

Sorry for the delays, univ things kinda a bit exploding.

[Sentuhan Avalon]
Wah balik lagi ni ke osu wwkkw hanya sekedar ngisi waktu luang sekarang wkwk

00:13:765 (13765|2) - I felt you can accenting the loud drum better if you make this note at col 4 instead, the stack will be much more emphasized that way. okay

00:15:640 (15640|1,15875|0,16109|1) - Try make this 1-2-1? it would alleviate the col 2 biases to be more balance, since i felt the diff patterning is around comfortability too. okay

00:44:234 - Kinda wish you want to add another LN for the rising sound occured here, similar to what you did at 00:59:703 (59703|0) - but i feel the previous one is not really clear enough to map

01:50:328 (110328|2,111734|2) - I'm not sure if this LNs contain synth kind of sound here.. changing it to normal note seems more fit with the current instrument. removed the first one, but not with second LN cuz i still can hear a clear sound on that

01:52:203 - Although I know the double LN want to follow additional BG effect sound at the back, but it feels didn't suit the pattern structure somehow because of the "suddenly appear" feeling.. i think you can follow the arrangement like http://puu.sh/uXC3h/be997072dd.png , the reason i also make 01:52:672 - a LN is because it's actually the same sound as 01:45:172 (105172|2,105406|0) - no, that's not really special anymore . . . i just want to make this part felt special with double LNs (cuz the long impact too)

01:54:781 (114781|2,115015|3) - Switch column here? it will fit a lot more in terms of PR. okay

01:56:890 - should be added another note to follow low cymbal layering at 01:57:359 - 01:57:828 - ,etc. not feels really good, but added
Thanks Dixon for check !
Update here ==> http://puu.sh/uYZ4h/20fd993c89.rar

Topic Starter
erlinadewi-
updated! ;)
Maxus
Looking Good, Qualified!
Grats!
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-
Thaaaaanks Maxus <3
D arc_old
who is bangke
Stjpa
Really enjoyable Hyper diff! Keep it up :>
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Stjpa wrote:

Really enjoyable Hyper diff! Keep it up :>
aww.. thanks mate :>
Pachiru
Congratz bro ! Very nice song choice :)
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