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Lilyanna

ezek wrote:

ok let's see NO KUDOS let's see if they finally drop me from the bng with less activity xp

[General]
  1. First BPM line is actually 74 BPM~ checked more bpm with few people including Bonsai and its 74 so fixed


[HB's Insane]
  1. 01:26:825 (6) - touches the score on 4:3 resolutions fixed


I can't pass the last diff, which is demotivating for me to check this in more depth since I'm not allowed to nominate diffs I can't pass xp (and I usually check sets when I'm interested in nomination)

well, good luck! ;w;
ty ;w; updated
Zero__wind
recheck, no kd

General
Clear.

Easy
the map generally feels fine but I'm quite fed up with the hitsounding in the kiai tbh. I can see that you have made the hitsounds consistent in a way, but it's not matching with the music and it really doesn't sound that nice.
since the rhythm is sticked to 1/1 in this Easy, all you need to do is to use soft whistle on the 1st and 3rd white tick of every stanza like 00:49:443 - and 00:50:071 -
, while using soft clap for the 2nd and 4th white tick of every stanza instead, like 00:49:757 - and 00:50:386 - . in this way, your hitsounds can match with the music more accurately.
take some examples of what you need to fix:
00:49:443 (1) - soft whistle instead of clap at its end
00:50:700 (2) - ^
00:50:386 (2,1) - ^
00:54:469 (1) - soft whistle at the reversing point instead
00:56:354 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
00:56:668 (1) - soft clap instead of whistle for both its head and end
00:57:611 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
and on...

so you actually need to change quite some stuff if you agree on the reasoning, just be sure to make the whole kiai consistent if you decide to change

HB's Insane
00:38:448 (2) - missing clap
01:03:265 (1,2) - I think they're too close to each other can you move 2 to somewhere else to make the spacing more fitting? maybe something like this
01:17:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to switch order like this to make the flow to 01:18:187 (1) - smoother?
01:22:428 (2) - should use soft clap on head for consistency
01:23:056 (5) - and probably remove the whistle on head for consistency

Normal and Hard are fine to me so this should be all

call me back
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

Zero__wind wrote:

recheck, no kd

General
Clear.

Easy
the map generally feels fine but I'm quite fed up with the hitsounding in the kiai tbh. I can see that you have made the hitsounds consistent in a way, but it's not matching with the music and it really doesn't sound that nice.
since the rhythm is sticked to 1/1 in this Easy, all you need to do is to use soft whistle on the 1st and 3rd white tick of every stanza like 00:49:443 - and 00:50:071 -
, while using soft clap for the 2nd and 4th white tick of every stanza instead, like 00:49:757 - and 00:50:386 - . in this way, your hitsounds can match with the music more accurately.
take some examples of what you need to fix:
00:49:443 (1) - soft whistle instead of clap at its end
00:50:700 (2) - ^
00:50:386 (2,1) - ^
00:54:469 (1) - soft whistle at the reversing point instead
00:56:354 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
00:56:668 (1) - soft clap instead of whistle for both its head and end
00:57:611 (2) - soft whistle instead of clap
and on...

so you actually need to change quite some stuff if you agree on the reasoning, just be sure to make the whole kiai consistent if you decide to change
changed

HB's Insane
00:38:448 (2) - missing clap fixed
01:03:265 (1,2) - I think they're too close to each other can you move 2 to somewhere else to make the spacing more fitting? maybe something like this well i changed it but not like u said cuz will create big jump after also there is another object under it so i moved it up u will see
01:17:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to switch order like this to make the flow to 01:18:187 (1) - smoother? aww fixed xd
01:22:428 (2) - should use soft clap on head for consistency oups is cuz i copy pasted the slider i forgot to fix hitsound fixed
01:23:056 (5) - and probably remove the whistle on head for consistency yep fixed

Normal and Hard are fine to me so this should be all

call me back
thank u >w<
Zero__wind
feels much better now
Rebubbled.
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
Thank you />w</
Nao Tomori
placeholdered like i promised
_handholding

Naotoshi wrote:

placeholdered like i promised
thnx for your additional placeholders, you're my favourite bn
Starset

Kisses wrote:

you're my favourite bn
Kaitjuh

Kisses wrote:

thnx for your additional placeholders, you're my favourite bn
i dont even know why this is becoming a thing
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
i dont get it o_o what happening
Log Off Now

Lilyanna wrote:

i dont get it o_o what happening
a meme my dear, a meme
Nao Tomori
we irc mod about rhythm and changed a pixel off blanket
Stjpa

Kisses wrote:

Naotoshi wrote:

placeholdered like i promised
thnx for your additional placeholders, you're my favourite bn
Namki
congrats <3
_handholding
I should GD all of lily's maps cos they all get ranked
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
lol kisses
Nao Tomori
i should convert all of kisses maps to taiko cuz they only follow drums /me runs
Jakomo73
Grats lilyanna :D
Haruto
aaand you rank this song before me LUL

Congrats anyway~
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
sorry Haruto and ur set is cool and more famous
and thx everyone
Kyouren
Gratzz but are you sure about metadata? I mean it's just different in intro

http://sayuri-web.com/sp/#!/discography ... sen-season

3. 平行線 -アニメ「クズの本懐」ED ver.-
IamKwaN
Different intro, why would we use another marker for the song then?
Kyouren
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
o now i understand what you mean lol well still any cut made in the song doesnt change the metadata lol i think as long as its still same song
Meowcenaries
congrats, cute song.
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
ty owo
pkhg
gratz on bn
CyberX
Cgtz
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