yo i kinda forgot xd, m4ticket (can i use that now pls? xd, link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/565367)
i love songs like this
[General]
maaaaybe ar7? 7.3 feels a bit quick for a song like this at such low bpm
[death]
01:00:645 (3) - maybe give these types of sounds more spacing emphasis? since they're a big contrast to how the rest of the song sounds at this point
01:07:045 (3) - ya
01:34:245 (1) - this note deserves more spacing emphasis imo, its the start of a new section but has less spacing than the previous 3 notes
01:34:245 (1,2) - i'm not exactly sold on overlaps like this, i would either make it not overlap or make it overlap a little bit more for better looking aesthetics
01:35:845 (4,5) - ya
01:46:245 (4,5,1) - this wide angle (almost linear) motion is a little bit strange to me when the drums here are playing such different sounds on each note, maybe make a zigzag movement instead to better represent these sounds? maybe like this?
02:00:445 - i kinda want a spinner here to follow the super nice vocal here
02:31:445 (5) - make perfect stack on 4, idk what warrents an offstack here in the music
02:34:645 (5) - ya
02:38:245 (1) - ya
02:49:445 (3) - move this a bit lower for a perfect arrow line coming off of 02:48:645 (2) -
02:56:245 (5) - i was expecting another slight upwards motion here because of the previous 3 notes, the linear flow feels kind of strange to play coming off of sharp angles, maybe move this a bit upwards to help ease the player into the next slider? maybe like this?
03:00:645 (1) - any reason why you don't use a 3/4 slider for the vocal here? its inconsistent with the surrounding 3 vocals
03:10:245 (1) - same as 02:31:445 (5) -
03:27:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think these are snapped wrong, if you listen on 25% volume, the main impact of the drum sound on 03:27:845 (1) - starts around here? might want some more checks on this
04:55:045 (6) - i think spacing can be reduced a bit here, this has bigger spacing than the big vocal switch here 04:55:045 (6) -
05:15:045 (1) - make this the same shape as 05:13:445 (5,6) - for visual consistency?
05:30:245 (1) - remove nc, if you want to nc this little drum fill, it should be nc'd here 05:29:645 (6) - instead
05:44:445 - same spinner thing as here 02:00:445 - super cute vocal to follow :d
gl!
i love songs like this
[General]
maaaaybe ar7? 7.3 feels a bit quick for a song like this at such low bpm
[death]
01:00:645 (3) - maybe give these types of sounds more spacing emphasis? since they're a big contrast to how the rest of the song sounds at this point
01:07:045 (3) - ya
01:34:245 (1) - this note deserves more spacing emphasis imo, its the start of a new section but has less spacing than the previous 3 notes
01:34:245 (1,2) - i'm not exactly sold on overlaps like this, i would either make it not overlap or make it overlap a little bit more for better looking aesthetics
01:35:845 (4,5) - ya
01:46:245 (4,5,1) - this wide angle (almost linear) motion is a little bit strange to me when the drums here are playing such different sounds on each note, maybe make a zigzag movement instead to better represent these sounds? maybe like this?
02:00:445 - i kinda want a spinner here to follow the super nice vocal here
02:31:445 (5) - make perfect stack on 4, idk what warrents an offstack here in the music
02:34:645 (5) - ya
02:38:245 (1) - ya
02:49:445 (3) - move this a bit lower for a perfect arrow line coming off of 02:48:645 (2) -
02:56:245 (5) - i was expecting another slight upwards motion here because of the previous 3 notes, the linear flow feels kind of strange to play coming off of sharp angles, maybe move this a bit upwards to help ease the player into the next slider? maybe like this?
03:00:645 (1) - any reason why you don't use a 3/4 slider for the vocal here? its inconsistent with the surrounding 3 vocals
03:10:245 (1) - same as 02:31:445 (5) -
03:27:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think these are snapped wrong, if you listen on 25% volume, the main impact of the drum sound on 03:27:845 (1) - starts around here? might want some more checks on this
04:55:045 (6) - i think spacing can be reduced a bit here, this has bigger spacing than the big vocal switch here 04:55:045 (6) -
05:15:045 (1) - make this the same shape as 05:13:445 (5,6) - for visual consistency?
05:30:245 (1) - remove nc, if you want to nc this little drum fill, it should be nc'd here 05:29:645 (6) - instead
05:44:445 - same spinner thing as here 02:00:445 - super cute vocal to follow :d
gl!