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arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!
Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

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[Lv.6]

SPOILER

00:14:872 (14872|1) - move to 3 for transition from right to left
00:16:267 (16267|4,16500|2) - move to 5 and 7 then..
00:16:732 (16732|1,16965|3) - ctrl H and move to 1 and 3 for the pitch at acoustic guitar
00:27:895 (27895|5) - move to 5 and..
00:28:128 (28128|4) - move to 7 for pitch
00:46:035 - add note to 7 for the strong sound:cymbals.
00:51:616 - add note to 2 as its strong sound with impact. It wouldnt hurt for lv.6 since its just on the same columns and symmetrical.
00:51:849 - ^
00:52:081 - ^
01:08:360 - add note to 6 strong start
01:23:244 - add notes to 2 and 6. Strong sound:cymbals with impact. and to fill emptiness at this part Follow Vocal Only
01:23:709 - add note to 5 for the beat sound and to fill emptiness Follow Vocal Only
01:24:174 - add note to 3. ^Follow Vocal Only
01:24:639 - add note to 5. ^Follow Vocal Only
Others All Fixed

[Lv.12]
Kool~! I like this diff~!

SPOILER

00:44:872 - add note to 3 or 4. Strong sound:guitar string.
00:46:035 - add note to 1 or 4 or 7 for strong start and sound: cymbals.
01:04:639 - add note to 6 for the strong sound:cymbals.
01:08:360 - add note to 5 or 7 for strong start and for beatsound.
01:10:221 - add note to 1 or 3. ^
01:16:267 (76267|4,76267|1) - move to 3 and 6. lower pitch than 01:15:802 (75802|1,75802|4) X
01:16:732 (76732|1,76732|4) - ^ and to give way for 01:16:965 (76965|4,76965|1,76965|6)
01:23:244 - add note to 2 or 7 for the strong sound:cymbals
Fixed Almost

[Lv.19]
Too complicated for me to mod (common usage of 3-noted notes and 4-noted notes). But I will still point few.

SPOILER

00:01:384 - add note to 4 since its a strong start OK
00:05:802 (5802|6) - remove. as its not strong or no impact as the 4-noted sound at intro and 00:08:360 X(8360|3,8360|5,8360|1,8360|0)
00:17:430 (17430|4) - move to 3 for hand balance. OK
00:19:058 (19058|1) - move to 5. ^ OK
00:49:446 (49446|4) - what is this note for? remove. I dont hear sound on it @.@ X
00:51:151 - suggesting: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1443487 Change Some
• same columns for the roll
• same columns and symmetrical starting at 00:51:616

[Overall]
Cool Map indeed from Sir S.Star~! Here's a star~ >w<)~~*. Thank you for requesting and good luck~!

Reat wrote:

Hi, S.Star. first, Sorry for my realllly late.. and my low quality mania mod.

column 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

[Lv.6]
I can't found any problems.

[Lv.11]
00:05:802 (5802|6,5802|0) - why double here? It'll be better remove one note following previous pattern. Have other sound
00:20:686 (20686|2,20686|0) - ^ same Have other sound
00:22:546 (22546|5,22546|4) - ^ Have other sound

[Lv.17]
00:03:477 (3477|2,3709|0,3942|5) - why lns? If you following guitar, change that notes to short notes.Um..
00:20:686 - remove 1 note. X
00:49:446 (49446|4) - why on 1/6? I think 00:49:407 - is right for players, and for music. X
00:53:244 - 01:08:128 - same pitch but different pattern and hitsound? why don't you fix little? Fixed
01:19:058 - how about add note at 1 ? ( because keep the coherent pattern.Fixed (for the player's feel))
01:19:290 - how about add note at 2 ? ^Fixed

Sorry for my shorttt mod.. T^T

and.. Good luck S.Star!

- R u m i a - wrote:

rank pls!

[Lv.6]
00:15:570 - try like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1492608
00:50:686 (50686|4) - move to 3
00:51:151 (51151|2) - move to 4
00:56:267 (56267|4) - move to 4
01:15:337 (75337|3) - move this to 01:15:570
01:23:244 - oo too empty , i suggest you follow 1 instrument also ok d Um..
Others All Fixed

[Lv.11]
00:35:337 (35337|4) - move to 2? X
00:38:360 (38360|5) - move to 7
00:38:593 - add a note? like you did this 00:43:942 (43942|4,43942|2,43942|6) -
01:02:779 - add a note X
01:13:477 - add a note
01:16:500 - add a note
01:18:709 - add a note at 3
Others All Fixed

[Lv.17]
00:03:709 - add a note ,quite strong beat i heard here X
00:04:407 (4407|1) - move to 6?
00:21:383 - add a note
00:28:709 - add a note
00:29:174 (29174|5) - delete
00:29:872 (29872|0) - move to 2?
00:30:104 - add a note , there is beat here ,1 note is enough to highlight the instrument.
00:30:221 (30221|3) - move to 2 , hand balance
00:42:779 (42779|5) - move to 7
00:44:872 (44872|4) - move to 6?
00:45:453 (45453|3) - how about place this at 7 ?
00:46:500 (46500|0) - previous part you highlighted blue tick beat
00:49:446 (49446|4) - move this to 4?
01:00:104 - add a note
01:01:732 - add a note
01:08:128 (68128|5,68128|2,68205|4,68283|3) - slap you why snare , ugly sound lolol
01:16:500 - add a note , there is a hi hat here
01:19:523 (79523|2,80686|1,80802|3) - how about making them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1492599
Others All Fixed

good luck s.star
<3
diu my friend

[ M o m o ] wrote:

Hi S.star o/ Sorry, sorry and sorry for late ;_;
Well, I'm bad in mods, sorry for at short xD
lv. 6 and 11 it's nice for me
7K lv.17
Columns 0|1|2|3|4|5|6
00:02:314 (2314|3) - move to 6 and 00:02:546 (2546|2) move to 3
00:04:407 (4407|5) - move to 3
From 00:06:500 - 00:08:360 - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1493659
00:11:846 (11846|2) - Move to 1 / 00:12:081 (12081|3) - move to 2 / 00:12:317 (12317|0) - move to 3 / 00:12:546 (12546|2) - Move to 1
00:34:639 (34639|3) Move to 6
From 00:46:500 - 50:686 - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1493827 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1493829 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1493832
01:26:500 - Delete this and 01:26:732 (86732|1) - Move to 3
Not much to add, this map is awesome and very fun, go for rank , good luck o/

MioAkiyamaKeion wrote:

I like this beatmap.

LV.17
I think its better to add some piano notes (with holding pattern) on 00:36:980

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

I wonder why it's not ranked yet o.o Chart checked, there are no any problems! Bubbled ^w^