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nano - MY LIBERATION

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Topic Starter
Irohas
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 25 février 2017 at 15:04:02

Artist: nano
Title: MY LIBERATION
Source: チェインクロニクル~ヘクセイタスの閃~
Tags: mugiwarasekai karia paraiso album chain chronicle hekuseitasu haecceitas no hikari op cut ver
BPM: 190
Filesize: 2685kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,6 stars, 108 notes)
  2. Hard (3,45 stars, 253 notes)
  3. Karia's Insane (4,38 stars, 308 notes)
  4. Normal (2,17 stars, 179 notes)
  5. Reviving (5,06 stars, 343 notes)
Download: nano - MY LIBERATION
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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insane - karia | mp3 - irohas
Kalibe
nano!!!!!111!
21:06 Irohas: dude dude!! can i have your opinon/testplay about https://osu.ppy.sh/s/566537 please ;w;
21:06 Kalibe: dude dude!!
21:06 Kalibe: ofc
21:06 Kalibe: LOL
21:06 Irohas: xDD
21:06 Kalibe: the same song
21:06 Irohas: thank you :D
21:07 Irohas: oh? you're mapping the same?
21:07 Kalibe: milan style?
21:07 Irohas: dunno :o
21:09 Kalibe: NICE
21:09 Irohas: almost..
21:09 Kalibe: ya
21:09 Kalibe: ;w;
21:09 Irohas: thanks :3
21:09 Kalibe: 00:14:006 (3,4,5) - these patterns
21:09 Kalibe: reminds me of milan style
21:09 Kalibe: xd
21:10 Kalibe: 00:50:637 (6,1) -
21:10 Irohas: I didn't really study his style but maybe o:
21:10 Kalibe: somehow i almost misread it
21:10 Kalibe: i though it's just a circle xd
21:11 Irohas: arf I think you're right
21:11 Irohas: stack leniency: 3
21:11 Kalibe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7208959
21:11 Kalibe: ?
21:12 Irohas: mmh i don't know since i wanted to have a similar spacing than 00:48:743 (1,2) -
21:13 Kalibe: at least do 00:51:269 (1) - sliderpath visible
21:14 Irohas: sure!
21:14 Kalibe: don't want to map start?
21:15 Irohas: I don't know how to map D:
21:17 Kalibe: 00:53:006 (1) - why nc?
21:17 Kalibe: kinda useless
21:17 Kalibe: :c
21:18 Kalibe: and that's all
21:21 Irohas: oops D:
21:21 Irohas: thank you !!
21:21 Irohas: you can post in thread if you want kd :3
21:23 Kalibe: ok
Topic Starter
Irohas
HabiHolic
t/552060

lololol
Topic Starter
Irohas

HabiHolic wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/552060

lololol
xd
Hikomori
kul maep dud eksdee
Topic Starter
Irohas

[A L P H A] wrote:

kul maep dud eksdee
thx eksdee
Topic Starter
Irohas
ready for mods
JoaoGMR
#modreq
Sorry for bad English

Reviving
01:08:164 (1,1) - i think. If you did like Akatsuki Zukuyo? like
yeah.. it's only this.. The rest stayed perfect (for me)
and its the only "extra" map because.. i only modded Extra maps.. sorry ;-;
Topic Starter
Irohas

JoaoGMR wrote:

#modreq
Sorry for bad English

Reviving
01:08:164 (1,1) - i think. If you did like Akatsuki Zukuyo? like
yeah.. it's only this.. The rest stayed perfect (for me)
and its the only "extra" map because.. i only modded Extra maps.. sorry ;-;
ok wtf dud
SrSkyPlayer
General
fine

Reviving
AiMod
*00:04:058 (4) - If you add NC here should be better since you will be matching with what you did before like this 00:00:743 (1,1) - then you can remove this one 00:04:532 (5) -
*00:20:321 (4) - same as above, but here I think you can just add NC to match with what you have here 00:22:848 (1) -. Like, I know that this sound isn't really in affluence here 00:20:321 (4) - but it kinda appears and is good to emphasize
*00:56:637 (1) - the NC here is kinda unnecessary, I would just remove it to make your pattering 1-4 more reasonable
*00:58:532 (1) - missing NC here?
*01:11:637 (2,6) - I think you can stack them without problems (this is not a problem at all, just a suggestion)

Karia's Insane
*00:05:243 - this sound is kinda triggering me, I mean there's nothing really reasonable to that 3/4 tick, I would just add an inherit point with like 15% on vol. or something to silence that
*00:53:400 (4) - what? you were following the instrumental then you just put this reverse slider on ticks where it just fits to the vocal or something, I think you know it's tricky and a bit awful, I recommend you to pull it to the red tick 00:53:400 (4) - I mean 1 tick before.

Hard
AiMod
disable widescreen support
*00:45:900 (5,1) - any reason to stack them? I mean you were doing things like these more spaced and I think you should keep it since there's also a strong sound on (1) which can be more audible with the vocal. Consider to make them also spaced as you've made here 00:47:164 (4,1) -

Normal
AiMod
disable widescreen support
Cool difficulty

Easy
AiMod
disable widescreen support
Nothing really relevant to say here

overall is good
good luck!
lolia
@SrSkyPlayer : Fixed all, thansk for modding!

SPOILER
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:MY LIBERATION
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:Irohas
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:チェインクロニクル~ヘクセイタスの閃~
Tags:mugiwarasekai karia paraiso album chain chronicle hekuseitasu haecceitas no hikari op cut ver
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Sonnyc
Reviving.
00:02:006 (1,2,3) - I'm not really sure about using a 1/4 jump in this calm section. Just using a 1/1 slider on (2) would fit more in this section imo. Besides, the spacing didn't felt to be properly indicating the rhythms in the current design.
00:05:321 (1) - You'll want to double think about using an extended slider towards a spinner. Since spinner technically isn't a clickable object, the slider end somewhat has a stronger emphasis than 00:05:795. Just using a 3/2 slider would make more sense imo.
00:36:743 (3,4,1,2) - There is a strong increase of volume this section in the song. The way you've expressed this part felt a bit too weak to properly reflect the song. There was a volume change, but it quite felt not enough.
01:22:848 (1) - Since the drum ends at 01:22:690, I don't think ending your rhythm here was a good idea along the song. If you want to express the vocals, fully expressing the ones at 01:23:164 - 01:23:321 - 01:23:637 would've reflect the song better than just mapping the start of the vocal.
01:26:637 - Here exists an intrument sound unlike 01:24:111. You'll want to express the difference in your map to properly reflect the song.
Topic Starter
Irohas

SrSkyPlayer wrote:

General
fine

Reviving
AiMod fixed
*00:04:058 (4) - If you add NC here should be better since you will be matching with what you did before like this 00:00:743 (1,1) - then you can remove this one 00:04:532 (5) - I think NC on 00:04:532 (5) - is necessary since the SV is not the same
*00:20:321 (4) - same as above, but here I think you can just add NC to match with what you have here 00:22:848 (1) -. Like, I know that this sound isn't really in affluence here 00:20:321 (4) - but it kinda appears and is good to emphasize it's more an inconsistency with 00:12:743 (5,6) - so fixed this one
*00:56:637 (1) - the NC here is kinda unnecessary, I would just remove it to make your pattering 1-4 more reasonable it's to show the emphasis of the song
*00:58:532 (1) - missing NC here? oops
*01:11:637 (2,6) - I think you can stack them without problems (this is not a problem at all, just a suggestion) okay

Hard
AiMod
disable widescreen support okay
*00:45:900 (5,1) - any reason to stack them? I mean you were doing things like these more spaced and I think you should keep it since there's also a strong sound on (1) which can be more audible with the vocal. Consider to make them also spaced as you've made here 00:47:164 (4,1) - emphasis is on 00:45:743 (4) - not on (5)

Normal
AiMod
disable widescreen support
Cool difficulty thanks!

Easy
AiMod
disable widescreen support
Nothing really relevant to say here

overall is good
good luck!
thanks!
Topic Starter
Irohas

Sonnyc wrote:

Reviving. sonnyc big fan
00:02:006 (1,2,3) - I'm not really sure about using a 1/4 jump in this calm section. Just using a 1/1 slider on (2) would fit more in this section imo. Besides, the spacing didn't felt to be properly indicating the rhythms in the current design. for sure, fixed
00:05:321 (1) - You'll want to double think about using an extended slider towards a spinner. Since spinner technically isn't a clickable object, the slider end somewhat has a stronger emphasis than 00:05:795. Just using a 3/2 slider would make more sense imo. okay stopped it on the downbeat, i think it should be better
00:36:743 (3,4,1,2) - There is a strong increase of volume this section in the song. The way you've expressed this part felt a bit too weak to properly reflect the song. There was a volume change, but it quite felt not enough. i tried to make the spacing between 00:37:374 (1,2) - bigger cause i don't really want to make a jump in that kind of part imo
01:22:848 (1) - Since the drum ends at 01:22:690, I don't think ending your rhythm here was a good idea along the song. If you want to express the vocals, fully expressing the ones at 01:23:164 - 01:23:321 - 01:23:637 would've reflect the song better than just mapping the start of the vocal. good point, fixed this one, made a slider which stop at 01:22:769 - to express more the intensity of the clap
01:26:637 - Here exists an intrument sound unlike 01:24:111. You'll want to express the difference in your map to properly reflect the song. There's no really sound on it imo, I do prefer to keep this one since I didn't make this sound clickable in the first part, as 00:20:953 - for example.
thanks :d
Silky
some minor suggestions
my english is fking bad lol

Easy
  1. 00:05:795 (1) - You should give at least a full measure space after spinner. current one is unrankable.
  2. 01:25:689 (3) - clap
Normal
  1. 00:03:111 (1) - is this nc really necessary? I'd like to remove this... or 00:02:795 (5,1) - switch nc? for more emphasis coming to piano sounds
  2. 00:30:585 (6,1) - 00:33:111 (6,1) - 00:35:637 (6,1) - I think these red-tick rhythms are really uncomfortable for beginners... please try this
    (also I think following vocal is fine)
  3. 01:08:164 (5) - convert to 2 circle? it'll be more fit to sound
  4. 01:12:427 - clap
Hard
  1. 00:10:216 (3) - I'd like to ctrl+G it for better flow
Karia
  1. 00:53:400 (4) - aa... is this intentional? tbh this blue tick slider is really weird for me, I recommended move it to 00:53:321 -
Insane
  1. 00:02:321 (2,3) - can you half-stack them? I couldn't read that it's 3/4+circle at first play
rest is fine for me :3
gl!
lolia
@Kanau : Maybe my diff hasn't been updated yet. I fixed it in previous modding ww
lolia
wrong posting orz
Topic Starter
Irohas
all fixed thanks for the mod + star, kanau :d
@karia i think kanau didn't update my map that's why there's some suggestions you're already fixed o:
Pachiru
Comme demandé voici mon mod, je vais mod en Français, comme ça ce sera plus simple pour toi pour comprendre et surtout plus simple pour moi de m'exprimer! :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:05:795 (1) - Ce que je vais dire, je suis pas vraiment sur, mais je crois qu'un spinner doit avoir un espacement d'au moins 2 mesures (je sais pas vraiment si ça s'appelle comme ça, mais tu vois ce que je veux dire :p) entre le spinner et la prochaine note. Du coup, ce que je peux te proposer, c'est de terminer ton spinner ici (seulement si ce que je dis est vrai bien sur!): 00:07:532 - ou alors ici: 00:07:374 - comme tu l'as fais sur la Normal, pour rester assez consistant au niveau des diffs.
  2. 00:19:690 - Je ne sais pas si c'est moi, mais je sens que ce beat devrait être clickable, plutôt que d'être en fin de slider, tu ne penses pas? Disons que si tu fais ça, tu devras retirer 00:20:006 (3) - et mettre ce son en beat non clickable. Après ce n'est qu'un avis personnel, je trouve juste que ce passage sonne bizarre a l'oreille ! o/
  3. 00:24:111 (2) - Pareil pour ce pattern du coup o/
  4. N'oublie pas de supprimer les timing points inutilisés, je vais te les lister pour que tu puisses plus facilement les supprimer, il y en a pas beaucoup, donc ne t'inquiète pas ;)
    00:00:743 - 00:02:321 - 01:08:400 - 00:57:821 - 00:58:137 - 00:58:216 - 00:58:453 - 00:58:532 - 01:08:479 - 01:08:716 -

    Je t'ai noté la première, celle-ci: 00:00:743 - parce qu'au cas ou tu ne le sais pas (même si je pense que tu le sais), celle-la est inutile tant que tu ne changes pas la vitesse de SV vu que pour les Hitsounds Volume/Sample, la BPM timing point se charge de ça :)
[Normal]
  1. Ce n'est qu'un avis perso, mais sachant que cette partie: 00:28:532 - est une partie calme, je pense que tu devrais supprimer les notes ici: 00:30:427 (5) - 00:32:953 (4) - etc. Pour que ça reste dans le style assez calme, sachant que même pour la partie active, tu gardes un peu des doublets comme ça, et puis surtout ça permettrait aux joueurs débutants de pouvoir récupérer pour enchainer sur la suite de la map qui peut être dure pour certains joueurs, qu'en penses-tu ?
  2. La aussi, n'oublie pas de supprimer les timings points, je te les listes: 00:00:743 - 00:02:321 - 00:57:821 - 00:58:137 - 00:58:216 - 00:58:453 - 00:58:532 -
    Il y en a d'autres que je n'ai pas listé, sur la Easy également, c'est des timing points qui sont sur les tick bleus, j'ai préféré ne pas les toucher, pour ne pas casser la map, mais si tu sens qu'ils sont inutiles, ne te gène pas pour les supprimer :)
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:637 (2,3) - Je voudrais pointer ça, pour essayer de trouver un moyen de différencier ces deux slider, parce qu'ils ne font pas la même durée, et pourtant ils se ressemble vraiment, et pour me part, je pense que ça peut mener le joueur a l'erreur, je sais pas comment tu pourrais modifier ça, peut-être avec le NC, ou un truc du genre, non?
  2. 00:20:006 (2,3) - Je trouve que ce pattern casse un peu le flow, pourquoi ne pas essayer de changer ça, pour le rendre un peu plus simple a jouer, je veux dire au niveau du déplacement du curseur, que penses-tu d'un pattern comme ça: https://puu.sh/tUkB4/c38d93a1c4.png ? Vu que le combo ne change pas, je trouve ça dommage de casser le flow comme ça ;w;
  3. Oublie pas les timing points inutiles ici: 00:57:900 - → 00:58:532 -
  4. 00:59:164 (2,3,4) - Cette fois-ci, je trouve aussi que le flow n'est pas terrible, j'ai pensé a quelque chose, pour que ça passe mieux, enfin c'est mon avis, mais je trouve vraiment que ça se suit bien mieux comme ça, en fait, pour arranger ce TOUT PETIT manque de flow selon moi pour cette partie, j'ai inversé le sens de ce slider: 00:59:479 (3) - et je l'ai descendu un peu. Dis-moi ce que tu en penses ;)
  5. 01:06:743 (2) - Honnêtement, ce n'est pas si dérangeant, mais je le note au cas ou, tu aurais envie de le changer et de le stacker sur cette note: 01:05:795 (3) -
  6. 01:22:216 (3,4) - Pour être honnête avec toi, je verrai plus un pattern dans ce style la, pour mettre en valeur l'accélération du rythme de la musique, je te conseillerai plus un pattern dans ce style la: https://puu.sh/tUlOG/05faa14651.png
C'est un super bon mapset, j'aime beaucoup le style que tu as utilisé, je trouve que c'est vraiment agréable a jouer, donc je te souhaite bon courage pour la rank, même si je pense que tu n'auras pas trop de problèmes avec ça :)
Si tu as besoin d'explications ou quoi, n'hésite pas a venir me demander en PV!
Topic Starter
Irohas

Pachiru wrote:

Comme demandé voici mon mod, je vais mod en Français, comme ça ce sera plus simple pour toi pour comprendre et surtout plus simple pour moi de m'exprimer! :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:05:795 (1) - Ce que je vais dire, je suis pas vraiment sur, mais je crois qu'un spinner doit avoir un espacement d'au moins 2 mesures (je sais pas vraiment si ça s'appelle comme ça, mais tu vois ce que je veux dire :p) entre le spinner et la prochaine note. Du coup, ce que je peux te proposer, c'est de terminer ton spinner ici (seulement si ce que je dis est vrai bien sur!): 00:07:532 - ou alors ici: 00:07:374 - comme tu l'as fais sur la Normal, pour rester assez consistant au niveau des diffs. okay!
  2. 00:19:690 - Je ne sais pas si c'est moi, mais je sens que ce beat devrait être clickable, plutôt que d'être en fin de slider, tu ne penses pas? Disons que si tu fais ça, tu devras retirer 00:20:006 (3) - et mettre ce son en beat non clickable. Après ce n'est qu'un avis personnel, je trouve juste que ce passage sonne bizarre a l'oreille ! o/ à vrai dire, je l'ai fait pour la consistency avec 00:08:164 (1,2) -, et je trouve que les représenter les beats avec un reverse rend bien!
  3. 00:24:111 (2) - Pareil pour ce pattern du coup o/ ^
  4. N'oublie pas de supprimer les timing points inutilisés, je vais te les lister pour que tu puisses plus facilement les supprimer, il y en a pas beaucoup, donc ne t'inquiète pas ;)
    00:00:743 - 00:02:321 - 01:08:400 - 00:57:821 - 00:58:137 - 00:58:216 - 00:58:453 - 00:58:532 - 01:08:479 - 01:08:716 - fixed

    Je t'ai noté la première, celle-ci: 00:00:743 - parce qu'au cas ou tu ne le sais pas (même si je pense que tu le sais), celle-la est inutile tant que tu ne changes pas la vitesse de SV vu que pour les Hitsounds Volume/Sample, la BPM timing point se charge de ça :)
[Normal]
  1. Ce n'est qu'un avis perso, mais sachant que cette partie: 00:28:532 - est une partie calme, je pense que tu devrais supprimer les notes ici: 00:30:427 (5) - 00:32:953 (4) - etc. Pour que ça reste dans le style assez calme, sachant que même pour la partie active, tu gardes un peu des doublets comme ça, et puis surtout ça permettrait aux joueurs débutants de pouvoir récupérer pour enchainer sur la suite de la map qui peut être dure pour certains joueurs, qu'en penses-tu ? je pense que les rendre clickable serait plus lisibles pour les débutants, parce que comme j'ai commencé par suivre le whistle rhythm juste avant je me dois de le faire ici aussi également, donc je pense que les garder serait meilleur
  2. La aussi, n'oublie pas de supprimer les timings points, je te les listes: 00:00:743 - 00:02:321 - 00:57:821 - 00:58:137 - 00:58:216 - 00:58:453 - 00:58:532 - yep!
    Il y en a d'autres que je n'ai pas listé, sur la Easy également, c'est des timing points qui sont sur les tick bleus, j'ai préféré ne pas les toucher, pour ne pas casser la map, mais si tu sens qu'ils sont inutiles, ne te gène pas pour les supprimer :) yep ils sont inutiles en normal xD
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:637 (2,3) - Je voudrais pointer ça, pour essayer de trouver un moyen de différencier ces deux slider, parce qu'ils ne font pas la même durée, et pourtant ils se ressemble vraiment, et pour me part, je pense que ça peut mener le joueur a l'erreur, je sais pas comment tu pourrais modifier ça, peut-être avec le NC, ou un truc du genre, non? mmh ouais peut-être bien!
  2. 00:20:006 (2,3) - Je trouve que ce pattern casse un peu le flow, pourquoi ne pas essayer de changer ça, pour le rendre un peu plus simple a jouer, je veux dire au niveau du déplacement du curseur, que penses-tu d'un pattern comme ça: https://puu.sh/tUkB4/c38d93a1c4.png ? Vu que le combo ne change pas, je trouve ça dommage de casser le flow comme ça ;w; ça pourrait être cool, mais je prefère garder pour la consistency avec 00:08:164 (1,2,3) -
  3. Oublie pas les timing points inutiles ici: 00:57:900 - → 00:58:532 - yep
  4. 00:59:164 (2,3,4) - Cette fois-ci, je trouve aussi que le flow n'est pas terrible, j'ai pensé a quelque chose, pour que ça passe mieux, enfin c'est mon avis, mais je trouve vraiment que ça se suit bien mieux comme ça, en fait, pour arranger ce TOUT PETIT manque de flow selon moi pour cette partie, j'ai inversé le sens de ce slider: 00:59:479 (3) - et je l'ai descendu un peu. Dis-moi ce que tu en penses ;) je préfère keep le DS dessus D:
  5. 01:06:743 (2) - Honnêtement, ce n'est pas si dérangeant, mais je le note au cas ou, tu aurais envie de le changer et de le stacker sur cette note: 01:05:795 (3) - cet overlap est voulu o:
  6. 01:22:216 (3,4) - Pour être honnête avec toi, je verrai plus un pattern dans ce style la, pour mettre en valeur l'accélération du rythme de la musique, je te conseillerai plus un pattern dans ce style la: https://puu.sh/tUlOG/05faa14651.png mmh je sais pas trop, je verrais si ça gêne trop!
C'est un super bon mapset, j'aime beaucoup le style que tu as utilisé, je trouve que c'est vraiment agréable a jouer, donc je te souhaite bon courage pour la rank, même si je pense que tu n'auras pas trop de problèmes avec ça :)
Si tu as besoin d'explications ou quoi, n'hésite pas a venir me demander en PV!
merci :d
Dilectus
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Reviving

00:03:585 (2,3) - I'd suggest just using the same spacing anyways since there's nothing here to indicate an increase of spacing
(this will emphasize 00:04:532 (1) - much better aswell)

00:04:532 (1,1) - Fix this blanket. That was probably your intention?
00:14:795 (2,4) - ^
00:34:216 (3,1) - ^
00:38:637 (1,2) - ^
01:00:111 (1,2) - ^
01:15:269 (1,3) - ^
01:16:374 (1,2) - ^
01:18:269 (1,2) - ^ (slightly)

00:10:058 (3,4,5,6) - Star pattern is slightly off. Move (6) to x196 y285 and (5) to x279 y129
00:12:111 (1,2,3,4) - ^ can also be polished here

00:16:374 (4,5) - Should be CTRL+G but then you'd have to adapt next couple of notes to that. But since you've put huge emphasize on the lead guitar
during this part, I'd consider fixing it.
00:26:479 (4,5) - ^

00:28:058 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Move the stream to x217 y355 to polish triangle pattern (00:27:743 (2,3,4) - )

00:31:374 (2,4) - Move 2 up a bit to avoid overlap

00:48:032 (3,4) - Kind of a weird spike in that flow. Ctrl+H?

00:56:637 (1,2) - Rotate -3 clockwise and adjust them to finish the aestetics you've built up here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7287775

During the last part you could've gone with the same rhythm you used during the intro (since you're somewhat following the lead guitar here aswell)
01:26:637 - Missing beat
01:28:058 - ^

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Karia's Insane

00:03:111 (1,2) - Here you can just overlap (2) to distinguish the rhythms visually (to follow the 1/2 gap you used here 00:00:743 (1,1) - )
since 00:05:006 (2,1) - are also stacked.

00:25:848 (1) - How about making all 3 beats clickable with a back and forth motion like you did at 00:27:269 (1,2,3) - ? It would follow the lead guitar perfectly.
01:26:479 (1) - ^

00:35:637 (2,1) - Blanket with (2) sliderend?

00:41:400 (2,3) - Doesn't look to good imo. Just make it straight and diagonal with (1)?

00:42:348 (7) - Fix blanket

00:46:848 (3) - Should be a note into a slider (or another note) to make things consistent as you've done so on these sounds. (00:44:321 (3,4) - , 00:45:585 (3,4) - )

00:48:743 (1,2) - I think you can make these simular as they're literally the same sounds. Just that (2) is a bit lower volume.
00:51:269 (1,2) - ^
01:15:585 (3,1) - ^

01:06:743 (4,1) - This overlap can be avoided by angleing the triangle pattern you created here a little bit anti-clockwise.

01:15:585 (3,1) - This looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7287990

01:28:690 (2) - Move to x95 y38

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Hard

00:12:269 - Since you emphasized majorly on the lead guitar, missed a beat here.
00:22:374 - ^
00:26:006 - ^
01:26:637 - ^
01:28:058 - ^

00:45:900 (5,1) - You've emphasized every strong beat in this part. Should probably do that on these aswell.

00:56:953 (3,4,5,1) - You could boost the spacing of all of these by just selecting all of them and moving them down a bit further because I feel it's a bit too weak for being
very loud drum beats.

01:28:690 (1) - NC to keep consistency with the other diffs?

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Normal

00:05:164 (2) - Move this slider back to red tick. No idea why you wouldnt follow vocals here

00:07:374 - You missed a 5% volume green tick here.

00:29:795 (4,6) - Blanket is off

01:28:532 (1) - NC to keep consistency with the other diffs?

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Easy

00:07:374 - You missed a 5% volume green tick here.

00:08:953 (2,3) - Blanket is off
00:11:479 (2,3) - ^ (slightly)
00:38:637 (1,2) - ^

00:38:637 (1,2) - How about forming a diamond pattern here? Would just make this part look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7288166

01:20:953 (1) - Move the slider slightly to the right to fix the triangle formed by these three 01:19:690 (2,3,1) -

01:28:532 (1) - NC to keep consistency with the other diffs?

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Nice set of difficulties. Good luck on rank!
Topic Starter
Irohas

DavidEd wrote:

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Reviving

00:03:585 (2,3) - I'd suggest just using the same spacing anyways since there's nothing here to indicate an increase of spacing
(this will emphasize 00:04:532 (1) - much better aswell) yeah i think 00:03:585 (2,3) - deserves to have a bigger spacing imo

00:04:532 (1,1) - Fix this blanket. That was probably your intention? rip blankets
00:14:795 (2,4) - ^
00:34:216 (3,1) - ^
00:38:637 (1,2) - ^
01:00:111 (1,2) - ^
01:15:269 (1,3) - ^
01:16:374 (1,2) - ^
01:18:269 (1,2) - ^ (slightly)

00:10:058 (3,4,5,6) - Star pattern is slightly off. Move (6) to x196 y285 and (5) to x279 y129 okay
00:12:111 (1,2,3,4) - ^ can also be polished here ^

00:16:374 (4,5) - Should be CTRL+G but then you'd have to adapt next couple of notes to that. But since you've put huge emphasize on the lead guitar
during this part, I'd consider fixing it. i'm not following guitar from 00:15:743 (1) - i think it's fine if i keep
00:26:479 (4,5) - ^ ^

00:28:058 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Move the stream to x217 y355 to polish triangle pattern (00:27:743 (2,3,4) - ) okay

00:31:374 (2,4) - Move 2 up a bit to avoid overlap okay

00:48:032 (3,4) - Kind of a weird spike in that flow. Ctrl+H? i think it's not as bad imo

00:56:637 (1,2) - Rotate -3 clockwise and adjust them to finish the aestetics you've built up here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7287775 okay

During the last part you could've gone with the same rhythm you used during the intro (since you're somewhat following the lead guitar here aswell)
01:26:637 - Missing beat it's not more important than i skipped in the intro imo
01:28:058 - ^ ^

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Hard

00:12:269 - Since you emphasized majorly on the lead guitar, missed a beat here. mmh don't know i'll see with more opinions
00:22:374 - ^
00:26:006 - ^
01:26:637 - ^
01:28:058 - ^

00:45:900 (5,1) - You've emphasized every strong beat in this part. Should probably do that on these aswell. strong beat is on 00:45:743 (4) -

00:56:953 (3,4,5,1) - You could boost the spacing of all of these by just selecting all of them and moving them down a bit further because I feel it's a bit too weak for being mmh i prefer keep the spacing, cause i did it in the whole diff, it'd be inconsistent if i fix that
very loud drum beats.

01:28:690 (1) - NC to keep consistency with the other diffs? only on insane and extra, i think it's better if i don't nc here

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Normal

00:05:164 (2) - Move this slider back to red tick. No idea why you wouldnt follow vocals here i thought follow these whistles behind would be more readable xd

00:07:374 - You missed a 5% volume green tick here. sound is audible here

00:29:795 (4,6) - Blanket is off fixed

01:28:532 (1) - NC to keep consistency with the other diffs? same as hard

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Easy

00:07:374 - You missed a 5% volume green tick here. same as normal

00:08:953 (2,3) - Blanket is off fixed all
00:11:479 (2,3) - ^ (slightly)
00:38:637 (1,2) - ^

00:38:637 (1,2) - How about forming a diamond pattern here? Would just make this part look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7288166 ok lol

01:20:953 (1) - Move the slider slightly to the right to fix the triangle formed by these three 01:19:690 (2,3,1) - okay

01:28:532 (1) - NC to keep consistency with the other diffs? same as hard

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Nice set of difficulties. Good luck on rank!
thanks!
lolia

DavidEd wrote:

Karia's Insane

00:03:111 (1,2) - Here you can just overlap (2) to distinguish the rhythms visually (to follow the 1/2 gap you used here 00:00:743 (1,1) - )
since 00:05:006 (2,1) - are also stacked. I don't want it for my visual style. Also it's enough to distinguish them by NC imo
00:25:848 (1) - How about making all 3 beats clickable with a back and forth motion like you did at 00:27:269 (1,2,3) - ? It would follow the lead guitar perfectly. 1/2 slider is fine for weak guitar sounds. Also I don't want many notes cuz this diff is not higher insane.
01:26:479 (1) - ^ ^
00:35:637 (2,1) - Blanket with (2) sliderend? It's not my style
00:41:400 (2,3) - Doesn't look to good imo. Just make it straight and diagonal with (1)? This is pretty to me
00:46:848 (3) - Should be a note into a slider (or another note) to make things consistent as you've done so on these sounds. (00:44:321 (3,4) - , 00:45:585 (3,4) - ) Basically I don't mind about consistent rhythm but they don't need to have same rhythm cuz the vocals are not same.
00:48:743 (1,2) - I think you can make these simular as they're literally the same sounds. Just that (2) is a bit lower volume. (1) follows a vocal but (2) follows a guitar. They don't need to have same shape.
00:51:269 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:15:585 (3,1) - ^ I don't understand what this means..
01:06:743 (4,1) - This overlap can be avoided by angleing the triangle pattern you created here a little bit anti-clockwise. This overlap is almost invisible in playing
01:15:585 (3,1) - This looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7287990 This is just my preference flow.
01:28:690 (2) - Move to x95 y38 There's no reason about that spacing imo
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Thanks for modding

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Topic Starter
Irohas
reDL please, changed the .mp3
Lasse
rev
00:07:681 (1,2,3,1) - remake this manual stack, it's kinda broken and will throw people off. even on my third play it still confused me lol
2-3 are actually nearly perfectly stacked while the others are normal manual stacks. think a 4 px vertical stack would work well http://i.imgur.com/WLjzrpY.jpg
00:10:049 (3,4,5,6) - things like this just feel a bit bland, a nearly even spaced star, so everything feel pretty evenly emphasized, though the guitars on 00:10:365 (5,6) - stand out so much :c
00:12:102 (1,2,3,4) - this one fits a bit better
00:10:681 (1,3,1) - minor, but equal overlap spacing and direction would feel much more structured
00:12:734 (1) - 00:12:891 - stands out so much in the song, but not in the map //00:22:839 (1) - and similar ones
00:24:891 (2) - think having this a bit more like http://i.imgur.com/DTBPUCx.jpg would be cute
00:26:470 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - if you are going to suddenly overlap things, at least have them more consistent visually so it looks less random (( similar on other spots like 01:02:312 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
00:28:523 (1) - perfect spot for a 1/1 gap http://i.imgur.com/65ONy2a.jpg would make a much nicer transition
00:37:997 (1,2,1) - I'd just use perfect stacks here or overlap more so it's not the same as the 1/2 on 00:07:681 (1,2,3) - lol
00:58:602 - don't think a kick hitsound fits here. how about just having 00:58:523 (1) - tail and head as soft whistles to fit the strings?
00:58:681 - aww why only 1x sv when you already had that on 00:08:155 -
00:59:155 (2) - most things here seem to follow vocals alright, but this is drum head and vocal tail suddenly. // 01:09:260 (2) -
01:03:102 - similar here, how about http://i.imgur.com/wMyjiUq.jpg
01:03:891 (1) - slider starting on much weaker sound than it ends doesn't really fit here I think. maybe http://i.imgur.com/6p5FVAb.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/AXiSqPz.jpg could work

karia
why no whistles o:
think it would be great, especially for parts like 00:08:786 - where you map offbeat guitars and stuff. right now hitsounding on slidertail is much stronger than on sliderhead
00:12:734 (4) - how about putting nc on these so they stand out more cause special sound? // 00:22:839 (4) - and all similar ones
00:20:629 (5,1) - you don't really overlap any other similar pattern, so why here?
00:39:023 (2) - would add drum finish here // 00:41:391 (2) -
00:59:155 (2) -01:09:260 (2) - 01:03:891 (1) - see top diff
01:14:470 (2) - might be nicer to stack under 1 instead to get the jump for vocal/stronger beat

hard
00:04:997 (2) - why not something like http://i.imgur.com/p1ffI3K.jpg instead of mapping the last slider to start on something barely audible
00:17:944 (1) - I don't think nc does anything here, also having it right after a 1x repeat without ever introducin a rhythm like this might throw people off. think you could undermap a bit here to get something like http://i.imgur.com/dnFdmCX.jpg
00:27:970 - guess having this repeat overmapped to simplify rhythm is alright here, but I'd at least have a drum finish on it cause having this the only not hitsounded one sounds weird
00:28:523 (1) - similar to top diff
00:45:576 (3,4,5,1) - think stacking like http://i.imgur.com/AlTNEvG.jpg would make more sense emphasis wise

normal
00:05:155 (2) - why this rhythm lol. red tick stand out much more here, just move this 1/2 earlier or maybe http://i.imgur.com/d8eIaCJ.jpg
00:28:523 (1) - why no different sv or at least spacing for this part :c
00:37:997 (4) - intentional sliderwhistle?

easy
00:04:523 (1) - would extend by 1/2 cause vocals stand out much more
00:05:786 (1,1) - doesn't look like this has enough recovery time
Topic Starter
Irohas

Lasse wrote:

rev
00:10:681 (1,3,1) - minor, but equal overlap spacing and direction would feel much more structured mmh i think it's fine if i keep this one
00:12:734 (1) - 00:12:891 - stands out so much in the song, but not in the map //00:22:839 (1) - and similar ones i think NC shows it
00:24:891 (2) - think having this a bit more like http://i.imgur.com/DTBPUCx.jpg would be cute pretty like my current shape so keep for now
00:28:523 (1) - perfect spot for a 1/1 gap http://i.imgur.com/65ONy2a.jpg would make a much nicer transition both works imo
00:37:997 (1,2,1) - I'd just use perfect stacks here or overlap more so it's not the same as the 1/2 on 00:07:681 (1,2,3) - lol overlaps looks cool to me D:
00:58:681 - aww why only 1x sv when you already had that on 00:08:155 - mmh, i guess it's fine that SV cause the intro looks a bit as a kiai part
00:59:155 (2) - most things here seem to follow vocals alright, but this is drum head and vocal tail suddenly. // 01:09:260 (2) - i guess it's fine if i prioritize drum?
01:03:102 - similar here, how about http://i.imgur.com/wMyjiUq.jpg both works here aswell
01:03:891 (1) - slider starting on much weaker sound than it ends doesn't really fit here I think. maybe http://i.imgur.com/6p5FVAb.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/AXiSqPz.jpg could work i guess it could work if i follow vocals

hard
00:17:944 (1) - I don't think nc does anything here, also having it right after a 1x repeat without ever introducin a rhythm like this might throw people off. think you could undermap a bit here to get something like http://i.imgur.com/dnFdmCX.jpg don't really want skip the sound on the blue tick, and NC is here to show that's different than the previous
00:28:523 (1) - similar to top diff
00:45:576 (3,4,5,1) - think stacking like http://i.imgur.com/AlTNEvG.jpg would make more sense emphasis wise i didn't emphasize the sound at 00:45:891 (5) - cause i didn't make it previously and i guess the sound to emphasize is on (4) not on (5)

normal
00:28:523 (1) - why no different sv or at least spacing for this part :c cause i think it'll feel weird to have a spacing change here D:
00:37:997 (4) - intentional sliderwhistle? there's no sliderwhistle here

easy
00:04:523 (1) - would extend by 1/2 cause vocals stand out much more I'd like to keep this, cause the rhythm is not as complicated and i think the whistle rhythm behind is enough easy being readable for beginners (i hope you understand)
00:05:786 (1,1) - doesn't look like this has enough recovery time i don't know where should I stop that spinner xD
no reply=fixed
thanks!
lolia

Lasse wrote:

karia
00:20:629 (5,1) - you don't really overlap any other similar pattern, so why here? Because I wanted to distinguish this from 00:19:682 (1,2) - this pattern
Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for modding!

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281,225,84418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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