1. Ayo's Muzukashii!! (2.81 stars, 449 notes)
2. Futsuu!! (2.2 stars, 301 notes)
3. Inner Oni!! (4.95 stars, 759 notes)
4. Kantan!! (1.48 stars, 173 notes)
5. Oni!! (3.97 stars, 615 notes)

Annadine wrote:

im@s ampaz

game rock wrote:

Hi!

Request from Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

• [ Kantan]

1. You have the same pattern here 00:24:682 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - , 00:30:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I recommend you change and move somes notes to keep variation, so I suggest you Change to d or k 00:31:016 (3) - and move to 00:31:682 - Then change to k 00:32:016 (5) - Ctrl G here 00:32:682 (6,7) - and change to k here 00:33:682 (8) - With this can you have a flow with the voice and manifest a bit more the rhythm. i'm sure, i wanna make lower diffs without variation. low diffs needs more consistency even for the beginner. i did it on all of my lower diffs
   
   
2. Excelent Diff! The patterns and the drums are very good. Nice work!, Just a recommendation is follow more the similar rhythm "Clap" changing to k, for example 00:28:349 (23) - , 00:37:016 (5) - , 00:33:682 (8) - , 00:40:349 (11) - , 01:03:682 (6) - , 01:33:016 (37) - , 01:35:682 (42) - and other similar parts because a d in those parts sounds weird...a k is better in that's parts but in some can be a exepcion, but is recommendable put in those parts. pay more attention to structure than the sound on lower diffs

• [ Futsuu]

1. 00:36:349 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can I give you a idea to density a bit with the rhythm and to keep a coordination with the voice, also to follow more the rhythm and the voice , so Ctrl G here 00:36:349 (2,3) - , change to k those notes 00:37:016 (4,5) - and Ctrl G here 00:37:682 (7,8) - It's sound very good, the drums and the voice are more coordinated. I hope you like it. changed some color of these notes by myself
2. 01:11:682 (7) - Change to k, sounds very good. changed to k on (6) instead of (7)
3. 01:24:849 (2,4) - Change to k to keep a nice combination with the rhythm with 01:25:682 (5,6,7) - nope, i prefer to make basic pattern here (like ddk kkd or something else)
4. 01:28:682 (13) - Change to k to keep a sequence k d k d k d 01:29:349 (15,16,17,18,19) - it will ruin the consistency
5. 01:39:349 (1) - Change to k If you apply the previous suggestion to keep a consistency with 01:40:016 (3,5,6,7,8) - similar as above

• [ Oni]

1. 00:44:349 (211) - Change to k, sounds very good here with 00:43:682 (207,208,209,210) - , 00:44:682 (213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223) - yes
2. 01:14:682 - You need a note here to flow this pattern 01:12:932 (381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - please change to k 01:14:848 (394) - and move 01:14:682 - no, it would ruin the consistency
3. 01:45:515 (598,599) - Change those notes to k, sounds very nice. 01:45:599 - moved 01:45:432 - instead of making kkd on there

• [ Inner Oni]

1. 00:22:349 (81) - Change to k, sounds very good with 00:22:516 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - ups, changed
2. 00:34:516 (171) - Change to k and Ctrl G 00:34:599 (172,173) - to best the streams, here is a image looks bad flows for me, even (173) has to be kat for cohere with (174)-->
3. 01:03:682 (20) - Change to k to keep the sequence and the keep the rhythm you're doing 01:02:349 (9,11,15,17) - i intended to make a variation without using d k d k d k d k continuously on 1/2 snap. but..well, let's try
4. 01:14:349 (110) - Change to k to keep consistency with the previous suggestion. sure

I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!

game rock wrote:

Hi!

Request from Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

• [ Muzukashii]

1. 00:21:183 (36,37,38) - Personally I don't like the ddk in Muzukashii, Is better a kkk. i will change it to ddd instead of kkk
2. 00:23:849 (48,49,50) - Same, change to ddd. This time i will use kkk
3. 00:28:349 (70) - Change to k to keep ma bit more rhythm and the voice tt manifests itself better with 00:28:516 (71,72,73,74) - Fixed
4. 00:33:682 (95) - Change to k to the rhythm and the voice can have sense and can flow with the sound. Ok.
5. 00:34:849 (101,102,103) - Change to kkk. kkk seems weird. I will keep this.
6. This is disrupting the flow and the emphasis of finish D 00:35:516 (105) - I suggest you move to 00:35:182 - Okay
7. 00:45:849 (152,153,154) - Change to kkk. Again, kkk seems weird. Keep.
8. 00:48:182 (163) - Change to k to agree with the rhythm 00:48:349 (164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - Fixed
9. 01:12:599 (60,61) - Change to k. Fixed
10. 01:02:349 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - Apply this here please 01:13:016 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - to keep conssitency in both parts. Okay
11. 01:22:182 (108,109,110) - Change to ddd. Fixed.
12. 01:23:682 (118) - Change to k to make kkk. Fixed.
13. 01:25:849 (129,130,131) - Change to ddd. Fixed.
    
    
    You need to follow the rhythm from here so, I suggest you this:
    
    
14. 01:30:682 (154) - Change to k. Okay
15. 01:32:516 (163) - Same ^ Low sound here. Keep.
16. 01:32:849 (164) - Same ^ Okay
17. 01:34:016 (169,172) - Same ^ ^
18. 01:36:016 (179,180,181) - Change to k these notes. No, because low sound and they're fit with don except Note 181, so keep.
19. 01:36:516 (182,183,184) - change to ddd. Okay
20. 01:37:182 (186,188) - Change to k. Low sounds.
21. 01:38:349 (192) - Change to k. Okay
22. 01:39:849 (200) - Move to 01:40:016 - Okay
23. 01:41:349 (207) - Change to k. Okay
24. 01:43:182 (216) - Same ^ Low sound.
    01:45:182 (225,226,227) - Change to kkk. kkk seems weird (3)
    01:46:016 (229) - Change to k. Okay
    01:46:682 (233,234,235) - Change to kkk. Okay

I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!

Smallwu wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue (Sorry for late :3)
[General]
Nothing wrong >3< >3<

[Oni!!]
01:24:182 - Add d ? Here has drum, but I think keep this pattern is also fine x_x yep, i want to give a bit break here

01:24:516 (460) - Remove this because here no sound there is a sound, but sounds faint
[Inner Oni!!]
00:33:932 (164) - Nice stream, but I think don't need this note because no sound here there is synth sound, similar as (163)

01:05:432 - Add d or k I don't know I just think that will be better :3
Because 01:04:682 - 01:06:349 - You use ddk*3. This is Inner Oni, I think harder is Ok nope, repetitive pattern is better here, since synth sound says the same

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well I think those are too less, but I cant find another mistake :3
sorry and good luck!

Smallwu wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue (Sorry for late :3)

[Ayo's Muzukashii!!]

00:08:516 ｜Add k Because only 00:08:683 (24) is very strange, and do this can keep consistency maybe
00:06:016 - 00:08:516 ｜ or you can do this It also follow vocal, but it less strange I think Okay, that patterns are really good for me

00:09:683 (25,26) - Ctrl+G to Follow pitch Fixed.

00:22:349 - Add k Here has very loudly drum Okay

00:22:683 (43) - d Because here no high pitch like 00:22:349 or 00:23:016 Fixed.

00:23:349 - Add d or k (I like k) Because here has very loudly piano :3 I like the kat too :3

00:58:849 (213) - k Because I think (213) = (214) (Sound pitch) Yeah, fixed.

well I think those are too less, but I cant find another mistake :3
sorry and good luck!

Invective wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue (sorry for delay, I've been lazy).

mod

Nice set. Thanks
Nothing to note in Kantan or Futsuu.

Oni!!
00:56:182 (284) - Delete? For emphasis on the vocal sound. i'll focus on the synth
00:57:682 (293) - Change to k? Maintain alternating k and K on the white ticks. but...it sounds similar as (292)

Inner Oni!!
01:28:182 (26) - Change to d? Matches with the 1/2 kd_dk drum sound that occurs every bar. hmm, actually for consistent to 01:04:182
01:34:349 (71,72) - If you change the above, ctrl+g these notes (following the same idea for consistency), and change 01:34:849 (75) to d. same as above, but consistent to 01:10:349 - since d k d k d k on 1/2 snap continuously looks bored
01:35:349 (79,80,81) - Change from kkd to ddk? imo it matches with the drum sounds better. 01:35:516 (81, 82, 83) - should be ddk (low to high pitch) that's why i did kkd
01:38:848 (112) - Change to d? Same idea as 01:28:182 (26). same :/

Hope it helps

Invective wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue (sorry for delay, I've been lazy).

mod

Ayo's Muzukashii!!

00:04:849 (9,10) - Ctrl+g? Given that there's no change in the sustained vocal, I think it'd be better to keep the d's consistent with the drum sounds. The first note isn't really needed either, given that there's no other audible sound. Ah, okay.
00:33:849 (97) - Move to 00:34:682 or delete? Makes a break for emphasis on the vocals. Moving to 00:34:682 just fills in the gap because there's a drumroll sound, but it's not necessary if you want a break before the 1/4. Deleted.
01:06:182 (29) - Move to 01:06:016? For consistency with 01:16:682, the note seems more fitting on the drum sound while the vocal sound isn't changing. Okay.
01:23:349 (115) - Add a finisher here? I like normal don better than finisher don in this part.
01:25:682 (128,129,130,131) - Maybe change to a xxx_x rhythm like kkk D? So you can add a finisher to the end of the kiai/start of the next section. Added with ddd K[/color]

Hope it helps

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1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  Looks Good.

• 
  
  00:21:349 - change to k.I think high sound.
  
  00:30:682 - change to d.I think little low.
  
  00:37:016 - remove.00:35:349 - 00:40:682 - This part have two 1/1-quintuplets.I prefer one quintuplets for consistency
  
  01:03:016 - del. & 01:11:016 - del. & 01:13:682 - del. & 01:20:016 - del. & 01:21:682 - del. 01:45:682 - del.I think 1/1-quintuplets is too many.I think hard to Kantan player.

• 
  
  Looks Good.but,I think 1/2-quintuplets is hard to Futsuu player...

• 
  
  00:22:516 - del.
  
  00:23:183 (45,46) - swap & 00:23:516 - add don. 00:23:683 - change to k & 00:24:182 - add don.I think more goog pattern.
  
  01:01:516 - del.for emphasized to next 01:01:682 (5,6,7) -

• 
  
  Looks Good.

• 
  
  01:12:016 (88,89,90,91) - I prefer ddkd.

Charlotte wrote:

Hi via m4m

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  Looks Good.

[ Kantan]

• 
  
  00:21:349 - change to k.I think high sound. i know, but i prefer drum here
  
  00:30:682 - change to d.I think little low. for consistent to previous pattern, also current pattern is better flow i guess
  
  
  00:37:016 - remove.00:35:349 - 00:40:682 - This part have two 1/1-quintuplets.I prefer one quintuplets for consistency oh yea .-. changed to own variation
  
  01:03:016 - del. & 01:11:016 - del. & 01:13:682 - del. & 01:20:016 - del. & 01:21:682 - del. 01:45:682 - del.I think 1/1-quintuplets is too many.I think hard to Kantan player. i think it's not a problem since the bpm isn't fast enough

[ Futsuu]

• 
  
  Looks Good.but,I think 1/2-quintuplets is hard to Futsuu player... reason same as kantan

[ Oni]

• 
  
  Looks Good. :D

[ Inner Oni]

• 
  
  01:12:016 (88,89,90,91) - I prefer ddkd. no, (88) should be kat for the drum

Nice mapset Shoooot☆ Good luck

1. 00:20:683 (71) - Should be removed due to consistency with 00:17:516 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54)
2. 00:24:016 - There isn't a reason for this uninheriting section to be here. Just keep the one at 00:24:683
3. 01:01:682 (5,6) - You're skipping vocal, and it'd sound nicer if you changed it to k k d k d

Taikocracy wrote:

NM on my queue. Sorry for being late, I've been a bit sick recently.

[Inner Oni!!]

1. 00:20:683 (71) - Should be removed due to consistency with 00:17:516 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54) yes, deleted
2. 00:24:016 - There isn't a reason for this uninheriting section to be here. Just keep the one at 00:24:683 nope, i put it because...barline should only at 00:24:682 -. checklist omit barline at 00:24:016 - for removing this barline
3. 01:01:682 (5,6) - You're skipping vocal, and it'd sound nicer if you changed it to k k d k d i prefer to focusing on the synth

That's all. This is a fairly polished map as it is.

Gl w/ rank

Charlotte wrote:

Hi via m4m

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ Muzukashii]

• 
  
  00:22:516 - del. Deleted.
  
  00:23:183 (45,46) - swap & 00:23:516 - add don. 00:23:683 - change to k & 00:24:182 - add don.I think more goog pattern. Most of them fixed.
  
  01:01:516 - del.for emphasized to next 01:01:682 (5,6,7) - Keep. I like this part.

Nice mapset Shoooot☆ Good luck

Hitsu wrote:

Hi~ There's your req from the topic t/551902~

Ayo's Muzukashii!!

Soo one modder of my map said to me that in muzu better be only ddd and kkk (personally i hate it because difference between muzu and oni because of this can be very-very huge and that's just unbelievable) so i'll make suggestion to change all patterns that don't mark that criteria.

00:34:849 (100,101,102) - so this one goes with the d in the end + with this would be better if it'll be k. Okay
00:41:016 (130) - k maybe? I hear pretty loud drum sound here. I don't hear a really loud drum sound here.
00:42:349 (136) - ^. It's loud. but D d k seems... not really nice to me...
00:43:016 (139) - ^. Okay.
01:45:349 (227) - d. Fixed.
01:47:016 (236) - high pitch, better k here. Okay.

Nyan wrote:

[Muzukashii]

00:23:016 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - k d d _ k kkk Sounds good.
01:35:349 - add a don Okay.
01:39:349 (197,198,199,200) - k _ d d k Fixed.

Nyan wrote:

[Futsuu]

01:26:349 - add a don nope, giving 4/1 break is better after finishing kiai

[Oni]

01:39:349 (197,198,199,200) - add a don i don't know what you mean
01:26:682 (473,474,475,476) - kkd k nope, consistent to the start kiai pattern
01:37:348 (545,546,547,548) - kkd k ^

[Inner Oni]

01:24:682 (201,202,203,204,205,206) - d ddkkk or d ddkkkk better to emphasizing this drum or whatever this by giving two triplets

Jerry wrote:

Banner by taiko_maniac1811

hai wow hai

• You're missing a few tags, add these:

1. Starlight Stage - The im@s mobile game that has this song
   
   
2. 滝澤俊輔 & Shunsuke Takizawa - he's the composer. His music production team name is "TRYTONELABO", you should add that in as well.
   
   
3. 森由里子 & Yuriko Mori, the lyricist
   
   
   Source

   

1. Simple and clean Kantan :3

1. Nothing to point out on this one as well, nice :d

1. 00:23:349 (45) - Move this over to 00:23:183 - so that you'll have a consistently strong rhythm with the kd dk at 00:21:683 -
   
   
2. 01:19:016 (93) - kat for this note? It accompanies the vocals better

1. 00:42:682 - I recommend adding a kat here, and then swapping the two notes at 00:42:849 (201,202) - to k d. This way, you'll have a nice consistent rhythm with the part before at 00:41:349 (192,193,194,195) - i think it's too long for oni diff. also 00:42:849 - this don is cpntinuing from 00:42:516
   
   
2. 00:23:349 - Remove this, this part sounds 'stronger' with the music when kept consistent with xx_x pattern that you did at 00:21:683 -. oh agree
   
   
3. 00:23:599 - Add a don here to make it a triplet? It acts as a good transition towards the heavy single beats at 00:24:016 - better to emphasize 00:23:516
   
   
4. Starting from 00:46:016 - onwards to 00:54:016 -, you ignored most of the strong main tick beats. Examples being 00:48:016 - and 00:50:682 -. Although I understand that it's necessary to leave some break gaps between patterns, I recommend you shift the gaps and place them right after the strong tick beats, instead of placing the gaps on them. Here are my suggestions based on this idea:
   
   Suggestions!!

   00:48:182 - Move to 00:48:016 -, change to kat
   
   00:50:849 - Move to 00:50:682 -, change to kat
   
   00:53:516 - Move to 00:53:349 -, change to kat
   rearranged by myself :c
   
   
5. 01:20:182 - Move this over to 01:20:016 - and change it to kat? Matches the rhythm of the song better imo i still want to prioritize the drum or whatever it is...instead of the synth
   
   
6. 01:33:516 - ^Same for this, move it over to 01:33:349 -. It matches the beat of the song more accurately same
   
   
7. 01:41:515 - ^Same, move to 01:41:349 - and change to kat. ^
   
   
8. 01:44:182 - ^Same, move to 01:44:016 - and change to kat ^

1. 00:49:849 (291,292) - CTRL+G? The sound in the music at 00:50:016 - feels more solid with a kat imo, and it'll also be consistent with the kats that you placed later on at places like 00:50:682 - and 00:51:349 - i'll keep with d k k d 1/2 at the first after smallbreak like 00:38:849 - 00:41:516 - as i said, i'll prioritize the drum or whatever it is.
   
   
2. 00:52:516 (312,313) - ^ Same, CTRL+G to maintain the kat rhythm that you've set on the white line like you did before for 00:50:682 -, 00:51:349 -, and 00:52:016 - the reason why i put don at 00:52:682 - is..i don't want to make boring pattern (1/2 beatsnap continuously) so i'd better to start from k d to avoid longer boringness
   
   
3. 00:49:349 - Add a kat here? Feels weird for a blank to be here when there's a loud 'tick' sound in the music imo, especially since you've added a note on top of every similar beat at 00:46:682 -, 00:47:349 -, 00:48:016 -, and 00:48:682 - i know, but smallbreaks are more important than you've to follow the music
   
   
4. 01:09:349 (63,64) - Remove these two notes so that you have a nice consistent rhythm and pattern with what you did before for this at 01:07:516 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56) -? considering this..but let's try for now although i'm not sure bout this
   
   
5. 01:18:682 - I highly suggest not having a blank here, instead try extending the ddk at 01:18:849 - into a 5-plet pattern, it helps alot with the buildup along with the upcoming kkkdk pattern towards the final long stream at the end nice, i fully agree with you.

That's all from me, good luck :3

Jerry wrote:

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1. 00:23:349 (45) - Move this over to 00:23:183 - so that you'll have a consistently strong rhythm with the kd dk at 00:21:683 - Sounds good
   
2. 01:19:016 (93) - kat for this note? It accompanies the vocals better Kay.

That's all from me, good luck :3

Stefan wrote:

Anastasia > everything

[Inner Oni]
00:15:766 - you may add a green line with 0.95x SV so it's a smoother transistion to the 1.00x line. i don't think so, i even look this more confusing x_x since before this speed up, they emphasizing that big don by giving speed up. consistent speed would be better
00:33:932 (163,164) - wouldn't kdkkk.. sound better if you pay attention to the vocals? The stream itself is good, though I find the start could be changed. ok rearranged by myself :/
00:58:016 (354,355) - if you ask me it's a pity you left out 00:58:016 (354) - being a big note, I don't find you need to connect it with the stream combo. Make (354) as big note whole (355) is removed. oh nice
01:35:932 (86,87,88) - I don't think you need to enforce kkdkk here, unless you really prefer that rhythm. You could change 01:35:932 (86,87,88) - to dkk. yeah you know that. i prefer that drum or whatever it is.

[Muzukashii]
AIMod reports difference in the tags between Muzukashii and the rest of the mapset. fixed

[Futsuu]
00:13:849 (19,22) - Any thoughts of changing them to Big Notes too? You probably didn't make them to Big Notes yet because it could be too hard to hit them properly at this beat, so I understand if you disagree with me at this point. yeah you know that. also, i don't want to give too many big notes to lower diffs because it looks odd to make many emphasize with less note.
01:02:349 (2,6,8) - I think you need to choose what exactly you're doing here: (2,7) have the cymbal sound while I find you should swap them since the vocals on 01:03:682 (7) - goes down and 01:02:349 (2) - goes up. 01:04:016 (8) - afterwards should be k to emphasize the vocals properly.
01:13:016 (2,8,9) - ^ change every (2) in kiai to kat. i want to make good structure, so i won't change the (7).

Kantan and Oni were fine, nothing to poke at them. Something that bothered me a lot is how Muzukashii is designed, compared to the rest. Muzukashii has a very clear focus on the vocals while the rest is quite mixed between BGM/Vocals. I am unsure about the move from Futsuu to Muzukashii. Anyways, that should be decided by the BNs. Good luck!

Stefan wrote:

Anastasia > everything


[Muzukashii]
AIMod reports difference in the tags between Muzukashii and the rest of the mapset.

00:01:350 - 00:10:683 - It feels weird you somewhat have a higher density compared to Oni here. I would remove 00:04:849 (9) - Okay, change 00:06:016 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - to this. Fixed by myself, not from your suggestion.
00:41:016 (130) - I don't think you should leave it as d when the cymbal sound definitely tends to k. Whoops. Okay
01:28:349 (142,143,144) - I'd choose between: removing (143) to emphasize (142) much better or to make (143) to k since 01:28:516 (143,144) - are pretty much the same. I prefer the second option
01:39:016 (195,196,197) - That part works the same so you should apply to the change above (if happening). What?

Kantan and Oni were fine, nothing to poke at them. Something that bothered me a lot is how Muzukashii is designed, compared to the rest. Muzukashii has a very clear focus on the vocals ;w;)b Sorry i'm a vocal mapper while the rest is quite mixed between BGM/Vocals. I am unsure about the move from Futsuu to Muzukashii. Anyways, that should be decided by the BNs. Good luck!