2017-02-03 12:36 Ambient: poke :>
2017-02-03 12:38 -himei: im busy rn, will reply in 2-3 hours
2017-02-03 12:38 Ambient: no worries man, no rush.
2017-02-04 13:24 -himei: hey
2017-02-04 13:24 -himei: are u free
2017-02-04 13:25 Ambient: heya
2017-02-04 13:25 -himei: i got 35 mins free, we could take a look on ur map
2017-02-04 13:25 Ambient: i sure am
2017-02-04 13:25 Ambient: yep im down
2017-02-04 13:25 -himei: np it
2017-02-04 13:26 Ambient: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1070620 Demetori - Genshi no Yoru ~ Ghostly Eyes [Collab]]
2017-02-04 13:28 -himei: ok im pretty sure its misstimed
2017-02-04 13:28 -himei: sec
2017-02-04 13:29 Ambient: wat, oh boy
2017-02-04 13:30 -himei: i think the offset is 1072
2017-02-04 13:30 -himei: i just got like many 100s when i was pretty sure i was hitting right
2017-02-04 13:31 -himei: if u are not sure about the timing try to ask some qat or something
2017-02-04 13:31 Ambient: hmmm
2017-02-04 13:31 Ambient: yeah i might do
2017-02-04 13:31 -himei: i mean
2017-02-04 13:32 -himei: the starting point is somewhere between 00:01:059 - and 00:01:081 -
2017-02-04 13:32 -himei: because it starts faster than metronome
2017-02-04 13:32 -himei: if u listen closely
2017-02-04 13:33 -himei: alright so shud i report everything i see or u want me to focus on some certain things
2017-02-04 13:33 -himei: ?
2017-02-04 13:33 Ambient: yah i see what you mean
2017-02-04 13:33 Ambient: entirely up to you, im fine either way
2017-02-04 13:33 -himei: ok
2017-02-04 13:34 -himei: well.. hm putting the slider end on sounds like this is kinda weird 00:01:933 -
2017-02-04 13:34 -himei: these sounds are too strong and unique
2017-02-04 13:34 Ambient: make it clickable?
2017-02-04 13:34 -himei: and also u emphasized them by adding custom hs
2017-02-04 13:34 -himei: well i guess so
2017-02-04 13:35 -himei: 00:04:660 - same here
2017-02-04 13:35 -himei: aesthetics are good here so i would suggest some global things
2017-02-04 13:35 -himei: 00:01:592 (3) - it can be 3/4 (on s-end on blue tick)
2017-02-04 13:35 -himei: 00:01:592 (3) - and this clockable
2017-02-04 13:36 Ambient: ah yup totally agree
2017-02-04 13:37 -himei: 00:06:194 - these sounds are the same as 00:04:831 - here i guess?
2017-02-04 13:37 -himei: add custom hs there too?
2017-02-04 13:37 Ambient: wtf how'd i miss that
2017-02-04 13:38 -himei: 00:07:387 - ok fix all these places, i wont metion it again
2017-02-04 13:38 -himei: 00:11:137 (3,4,5) - i guess it should be similar to 00:11:819 (7,8,1) -
2017-02-04 13:39 -himei: i sould stack 2 1/4 on the sliderend
2017-02-04 13:39 -himei: and then spread them
2017-02-04 13:39 -himei: kinda inconsistent
2017-02-04 13:39 -himei: or stack the 00:11:819 (7,8,1) -
2017-02-04 13:39 -himei: works too
2017-02-04 13:40 Ambient: yup yup
2017-02-04 13:41 -himei: 00:16:081 (1,3) - make them paralell
2017-02-04 13:41 -himei: 00:25:285 - i wouldnt skip this beat
2017-02-04 13:41 -himei: it can be reverse slider
2017-02-04 13:41 -himei: due to the melody
2017-02-04 13:42 Ambient: yup that can work
2017-02-04 13:42 -himei: 00:28:268 - skipped beat
2017-02-04 13:43 -himei: that shouldnt be skipped in my opinion
2017-02-04 13:43 -himei: cuz it emphasizes the start on new interval
2017-02-04 13:43 Ambient: okie should do
2017-02-04 13:44 -himei: 00:30:740 - same thing with reverse slider
2017-02-04 13:44 -himei: 00:36:194 -
2017-02-04 13:44 Ambient: yeah i'll get on em
2017-02-04 13:44 -himei: hmm
2017-02-04 13:45 -himei: why not to make a small zig zag jumps on these sounds 00:35:853 - 00:36:024 - 00:36:194 - 00:36:365 -
2017-02-04 13:45 -himei: it think it would be complementing the melody
2017-02-04 13:45 -himei: cuz they are all the same kinda
2017-02-04 13:45 Ambient: ah yup i getcha, will consider
2017-02-04 13:46 -himei: i guess my suggetion about reverse slider is bad
2017-02-04 13:46 -himei: so yea..
2017-02-04 13:47 Ambient: its alright dude
2017-02-04 13:47 Ambient: i'll consider everything anyways
2017-02-04 13:47 -himei: 00:43:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - hm i dont really like the ds change here and the whole pattern seems weird and out of place
2017-02-04 13:47 -himei: idk what to suggest tho
2017-02-04 13:48 Ambient: literally anything you think could be improved/changed/swapped
2017-02-04 13:48 Ambient: free kds so
2017-02-04 13:49 -himei: well u can listen to the melody here closely
2017-02-04 13:49 -himei: sec
2017-02-04 13:49 Ambient: at the moment its kds worthy
2017-02-04 13:50 -himei: 00:44:120 - 00:44:206 - 00:44:376 - 00:44:546 - most palpable sounds there
2017-02-04 13:50 -himei: but u didnt emphasize first 2
2017-02-04 13:50 -himei: so that why it looks weird imo
2017-02-04 13:52 -himei: 00:50:171 (1,2,3) - u kinda glued this pattern together
2017-02-04 13:52 -himei: which isnt that good cuz
2017-02-04 13:52 -himei: 00:50:512 - its a new interval
2017-02-04 13:52 -himei: with different sounds
2017-02-04 13:53 -himei: 00:50:171 - and this is the ending of the previous interval
2017-02-04 13:54 -himei: 00:53:240 - here u showed how it should be
2017-02-04 13:54 Ambient: oo i see
2017-02-04 13:54 -himei: 00:56:819 (5,6,1) - no need to do things like this in 2017
2017-02-04 13:55 -himei: osu is using stacking so they will be in top of each other any ways
2017-02-04 13:55 -himei: so just stack them i guess
2017-02-04 13:55 Ambient: rip moph
2017-02-04 13:55 -himei: 00:59:632 (6) - it is not precisely centered inbetween s-end and s-star of these sliders
2017-02-04 13:56 -himei: 01:01:933 (5,6,1) - distance here seems inconsistent
2017-02-04 13:57 -himei: also he is using 01:01:677 (3,4) - a lot so... yea maybe its better to leave it as it is
2017-02-04 13:57 -himei: 01:04:660 (5,6,1) - ^
2017-02-04 13:58 -himei: 01:07:813 (8) - :thinking:
2017-02-04 13:58 -himei: fix it^
2017-02-04 13:59 -himei: 01:14:035 (4,5,6) - i would suggest this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/72314962017-02-04 13:59 Ambient: r i p
2017-02-04 14:00 -himei: 01:23:495 (3) - not centered
2017-02-04 14:02 -himei: 01:41:819 (6) - i would suggest this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7231514 and consider to fix the folowwing section of sliders
2017-02-04 14:03 -himei: 01:42:331 (2,3,4) - triggered
http://puu.sh/tNXo8/c9fd89e9f0.jpg2017-02-04 14:04 Ambient: :>
2017-02-04 14:04 -himei: 01:47:785 (2,3,4) - yea u shud fix these triplets
2017-02-04 14:04 -himei: the x/y change shud be consistent
2017-02-04 14:05 -himei: i mean theres a lot of similar places
2017-02-04 14:05 -himei: 01:47:785 (2,3,4,7,8,1) - :thinking:
2017-02-04 14:05 -himei: you either stack or spread
2017-02-04 14:06 Ambient: yah it adds variation
2017-02-04 14:06 -himei: hmmm
2017-02-04 14:06 -himei: well i wouldnt do that so w/e i guess
2017-02-04 14:06 -himei: damn i got to go, ill finish it once i come back
2017-02-04 14:07 -himei: in 4-5 hours
2017-02-04 14:07 Ambient: alrighty sounds good,
2017-02-04 14:07 Ambient: i'll save the log for now
2017-02-04 14:07 Ambient: i'll be asleep by then anyways
2017-02-04 14:07 -himei: alright
2017-02-05 00:25 -himei: yo i got few mins free
2017-02-05 00:25 -himei: we can continue
2017-02-05 00:25 Ambient: yup sure thing
2017-02-05 00:27 -himei: 01:53:240 (2,3,4) - fix triplet
2017-02-05 00:28 -himei: 02:10:200 - it shud be double with 02:10:285 - this sound
2017-02-05 00:28 -himei: listen closely
2017-02-05 00:28 -himei: rhythm here is weird
2017-02-05 00:28 -himei: i mean ^ that place
2017-02-05 00:29 -himei: hmmm
2017-02-05 00:29 -himei: uh its like the entire section is kinda fucked
2017-02-05 00:29 -himei: but i guess its ure style or something
2017-02-05 00:29 -himei: but i dont like it
2017-02-05 00:30 Ambient: its a bit all over the place i'll admit
2017-02-05 00:30 Ambient: i'll see what i can do
2017-02-05 00:31 -himei:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7237581 structure here is messed up i think
2017-02-05 00:31 -himei: 02:13:353 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - u could improve it somehow
2017-02-05 00:32 -himei: 02:22:570 (1,2,3,4) - it is really hard to say whether its doubles or kicksliders
2017-02-05 00:32 -himei: i'd suggest to increase sv for a bit
2017-02-05 00:33 -himei: 02:26:831 (4,5) - not linear xdddd
2017-02-05 00:34 -himei: yea moph is more focused on strucutre
2017-02-05 00:34 -himei: cuz the following section is more structured than previous
2017-02-05 00:36 -himei: 02:54:955 (2) - 290 157
2017-02-05 00:36 -himei: 02:55:126 (3) - 176 171
2017-02-05 00:36 -himei: 02:55:637 (6) - 313 294
2017-02-05 00:37 -himei: 02:55:637 (6) - these sliders that he put thru this section are kinda weird
2017-02-05 00:37 -himei: cuz they are straigh which means the structure shud use 45 or 90* angles
2017-02-05 00:38 -himei: i dont really like that choice
2017-02-05 00:38 -himei: it such sliders are usually used in old/symmetrical maps
2017-02-05 00:38 -himei: which isnt about this map
2017-02-05 00:40 -himei: i mean theres a clear difference inbetween ur parts and his parts
2017-02-05 00:40 -himei: u should rework some aesthetics to make the transition more smoth
2017-02-05 00:40 -himei: smooth
2017-02-05 00:40 Ambient: yeah fair enough, we're both quite different in mapping styles
2017-02-05 00:42 -himei: 03:37:910 (5) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/72376582017-02-05 00:43 -himei: 03:57:342 (1,2,3) - ;w;
2017-02-05 00:43 -himei: 03:58:705 (1) - hmm make it more readable
2017-02-05 00:43 -himei: ppl will get confused
2017-02-05 00:44 Ambient: shall do
2017-02-05 00:45 -himei: 04:44:728 (1,2,3,4,1) - make them parallel at least
2017-02-05 00:46 -himei: alright... well i mentioned most of the issues already
2017-02-05 00:46 -himei: so theres not must left after initial mod
2017-02-05 00:46 -himei: so yea gl on this
2017-02-05 00:47 -himei: but theres still lots of work are left >_>
2017-02-05 00:47 Ambient: yah there's alot to do
2017-02-05 00:47 Ambient: just post it on the thread and i'll give some kds
2017-02-05 00:47 -himei: ok