那一天
人類終於回想起了
曾經一度被他們所支配的Gee
還有被囚禁於鳥籠中的那份Fy[Geeneral]
-There's an alternative BG with 1366x768, you may consider to use this =>
http://puu.sh/soj8W/17cf0f8121.png-Close widescreen support
-Tags that may considered to add: television, gee
[Easy]
-00:43:130 (1) - The red anchor seems awkward since it didn't change the shape a lot and the flow the tail is not smooth and weird :/ Maybe a simple curved slider or straight slider would fit here
-01:21:648 (1) - Same......
-02:45:722 (1) - NC and make it a bit oblique (? =>
http://puu.sh/soyof/58b3eb45db.png-Why so many 01:21:648 (1) - slider in the map
For me they are really awkward and strange...
[Normal]
-00:34:241 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Nah This is too messy. You may change 00:35:722 (1,2,3) - to
this-00:41:648 (1,2,3) - Same :thinking:
-01:00:537 (3,4) - Maybe convert them to slider since they look awkward when playing, also, notes in right down corner is hard to play for newbie
-01:11:648 (1,2,3) - I don't think those is needed to be emphasized, maybe use a simple reverse slider to deal with the sound =>
http://puu.sh/soxFf/a835a4acf5.png-01:14:241 (1,2) - Maybe change the pattern since the current is too messy... =>
http://puu.sh/soxHt/4711cc04f3.png And there is my solution:
http://puu.sh/soxLd/8b8ce9070c.png-01:31:463 (6) - Maybe ignore this beat since you are following the rhythmic instrument(idk name(rip my music knowledge)) but not the drum. And the pattern that you are using is kinda messy so maybe ignore this beat =>
http://puu.sh/soxTv/1443ed2e72.png-01:39:426 (1) - Don't stack them to improve the readability
-01:45:352 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The sound is too dense...Try to make the simpler just like what I've provided above
-01:54:611 (1) - This slider looks awkward ._. Maybe try another shape just like =>
http://puu.sh/soy8E/f4219bb4e8.png-02:06:093 (1,2,3) - , 02:12:759 (3,4) - Separate them to make it more readable
[Hard]
-OD6 maybe, OD7 is too high for Hard, unless your map has a extreme bpm
-00:54:982 (1) - The blanket can be improved
-01:02:389 (1) - The current one is so monotonous and tui, try this =>
http://puu.sh/sokKn/d5fe84d10c.png-01:15:722 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit messy for me :/ Why not =>
http://puu.sh/soxe9/d0482915dc.png-01:23:871 (4) - So tui, try =>
http://puu.sh/soxjO/3519a28388.png-01:29:056 (1,2,3,4) - As well. This kind of pattern is messy, and too old style
-01:31:278 (4) - So tui again, =>
http://puu.sh/soxkx/2529fb4033.png-02:04:611 (1,2,3,4) - You may consider using other pattern, you know, 02:05:722 (4) - , so gee
-02:09:426 (2) - Blanket 02:09:056 (1) -
[No. Gee]
-00:38:315 (7) - Maybe only for me, you can place the slider further to fit what distance you did in 00:43:871 (6,7,8,9) - and 01:22:389 (3,4) -
-00:39:611 (1) - Remove NC
-00:40:167 (1,2) - The circle is suddenly too close compared with 00:34:241 (1,2) -
-01:00:908 (1) - The note should be placed further to match the distance that you developed in 01:00:167 (3,4,5,6) -
-01:02:759 (5) - Maybe set a green line here with vol 60 since the sound is starting intense
-01:12:389 (3) - Seem you missed a lot sound here, maybe use a stream to replace the slider
http://puu.sh/sok6w/b7294b7281.png-01:15:722 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand the spacing of these slider :thinking: You make a relatively large spacing in 00:37:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - but you didn't make the same thing here :/
-01:18:130 (1) - Remove NC
-01:17:389 (2,3) - Maybe ctrl g these notes to make a bigger contrast with 01:17:945 (5,1,2) -
-01:18:130 (1) - Remove NC
-01:35:537 (3) - The shape is a bit awkward, try this =>
http://puu.sh/sokkH/92ad252cca.png-01:37:019 (3) - Same =>
http://puu.sh/sokmO/4cea9e977f.png-01:51:093 (6) - Using notes can emphasize the sudden stop feeling better
-01:54:982 (2,3) - Not really suggesting using this spacing in such quiet part. Maybe you can reverse the slider to express the sound instead of using this pattern here
-02:18:685 (1,2,1,2,1) - Are you serious man? These notes are so ugly orzzzzzzzz Making a star shape stream looks a lot better!
http://puu.sh/sokxD/03db81f53e.png And btw the NC is not necessary :/
-02:43:500 (3) - x=210, y=236 and 02:43:685 (4) - x=274, y=124 can make a perfect square
-PP map confirmed :^)
Thank me