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Camellia feat. Nanahira - PAPAYAPA BASS

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Mir
osu! Alumni
2,151 posts
Joined July 2016
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Mir
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, August 18, 2017 at 2:19:29 PM

Artist: Camellia feat. Nanahira
Title: PAPAYAPA BASS
Source: beatmania IIDX 24 SINOBUZ
Tags: mondo groove basshouse vocal Konami bemani Japanese Lasse LMT
BPM: 147
Filesize: 3483kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lasse's Another (4.26 stars, 546 notes)
  2. LMT's Hyper (3.27 stars, 368 notes)
  3. Normal (1.84 stars, 182 notes)
  4. Papayapa! (5.18 stars, 600 notes)
Download: Camellia feat. Nanahira - PAPAYAPA BASS
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Papayapa!

Mania set by CommandoBlack.
Old diff here.

Done.

Hard by LMT
Insane by Lasse
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Background
Last edited by Mir , edited 196 times in total.
Jakomo73
203 posts
Joined June 2013
Jakomo73
nazi mod uwu
21:25 Jakomo73: 00:30:007 (7) - whistle here seems kind of random and dont remember hearing others later, but i may be wrong
21:25 Miryle: eh?
21:25 Jakomo73: tfw people get salty at the #modhelp mods :^(
21:25 Miryle: whistle?
21:25 Miryle: i don't have a whistle tehre
21:25 Miryle: o-o
21:25 Jakomo73: oh wtf i mustve misclicked or something
21:26 Miryle: yeah xD
21:28 Miryle: be as nazi as you want
21:28 Miryle: literally point out
21:28 Miryle: every single thing that bothers you
21:28 Miryle: even if it's just preference
21:28 Jakomo73: kk, sorry i just dont like being nazi usually cause i know most people hate it :P
21:29 Miryle: i for one appreciate it lol
21:29 Jakomo73: 01:57:762 (4,5,6) - this should have a smaller ds since you used that pattern of gradually smaller ds a lot earlier
21:29 Jakomo73: and you should make it straight using same x axis then curve it D:
21:30 Miryle: o right
21:31 Jakomo73: 00:18:783 (6) - i got triggered the end wasnt on the same location as either 2 or 3
21:31 Miryle: okay changed both
21:31 Miryle: eh why not
21:31 Miryle: fixed
21:31 Miryle: 00:17:966 (3,5) - also made these parallel
21:32 Miryle: or rather the same line
21:32 Jakomo73: 00:31:436 (2) - should rotate this more imo to point upwards towards next note
21:32 Miryle: kk done that
21:33 Jakomo73: 00:20:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - these should be rotated a tiny bit to make the beginning of 1 more natural feeling (aka straighter), as the player puts power backwards yada yada
21:34 Jakomo73: 00:24:089 (1,5) - should put these on same location imo unless you think it would hinder reading
21:35 Miryle: for :20 i rotated and repositioned some stuff
21:35 Miryle: looks better, plays better
21:35 Jakomo73: kk :)
21:35 Miryle: agreed to last point too, fixed~
21:36 Jakomo73: 00:37:762 (4,5,6) - not straight line again :P (rotate -7 degrees to get them in a line)
21:36 Miryle: not supposed to be a straight line :3
21:36 Miryle: would look weird if it were imo
21:36 Miryle: 00:38:170 (7,8,9) - spaced this out a bit further from there tho
21:37 Miryle: it's basically overlapping lol
21:37 Jakomo73: 00:40:823 (1,2) - should make these same slider but ctrl g imo
21:37 Jakomo73: 00:42:660 (4,5,6) - feel like this is too sharp of a curve (maybe putting 5 in more?)
21:37 Miryle: done
21:38 Miryle: fixed
21:38 Miryle: 00:42:864 (6,7) - also made blanket
21:38 Jakomo73: 00:47:354 (1,2) - imo you should do [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6502197 this] instead for ~flow~
21:38 Jakomo73: (sorry i like really circular flow lol)
21:39 Miryle: why not
21:39 Miryle: fix
21:39 Miryle: ed
21:40 Jakomo73: 00:49:803 (1) - also use an approach circle to make this slightly more circular (plus free blanket spot if you need it :P)
21:40 Jakomo73: 01:11:231 (6,2) - triggered tbh
21:41 Miryle: https://puu.sh/s7VAs/658056e350.png mastery
21:41 Miryle: I am blanket master
21:41 Miryle: thank yukiyo
21:41 Miryle: also moved the 2
21:42 Jakomo73: i use 2 points instead of 1 for those bezier sliders, so hard to get otherwise lol
21:42 Jakomo73: 01:20:823 (4) - should put directly onto 1's path imo
21:42 Jakomo73: 01:25:211 (5) - this is offscreen
21:42 Miryle: done
21:42 Miryle: eh?
21:42 Miryle: no it isn't o.o
21:42 Miryle: it's smack in the middle
21:43 Jakomo73: ahhh i mightve messed something up again lol
21:43 Miryle: xD
21:43 Jakomo73: yep i did xd
21:43 Jakomo73: 01:25:211 (5,6,7) - i would have 6 and 7 ctrl + g cause ~circular~ but just preference
21:44 Jakomo73: 01:42:048 (9) - i like this btw
21:45 Jakomo73: ok thats like all the remotely nazi things i can find :P
21:45 Miryle: changed the first
21:45 Miryle: and ty for liking the slider
21:45 Miryle: LOL
21:45 Jakomo73: i really like the map alltogether <3
21:45 Miryle: yay
21:46 Miryle: idk post on thread and get kudos
21:46 Miryle: i might make a mapset
21:46 Jakomo73: if i dont overwork myself with sb stuff i might make a gd if u do ^^
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,151 posts
Joined July 2016
Topic Starter
Mir

Jakomo73 wrote:

nazi mod uwu
21:25 Jakomo73: 00:30:007 (7) - whistle here seems kind of random and dont remember hearing others later, but i may be wrong
21:25 Miryle: eh?
21:25 Jakomo73: tfw people get salty at the #modhelp mods :^(
21:25 Miryle: whistle?
21:25 Miryle: i don't have a whistle tehre
21:25 Miryle: o-o
21:25 Jakomo73: oh wtf i mustve misclicked or something
21:26 Miryle: yeah xD
21:28 Miryle: be as nazi as you want
21:28 Miryle: literally point out
21:28 Miryle: every single thing that bothers you
21:28 Miryle: even if it's just preference
21:28 Jakomo73: kk, sorry i just dont like being nazi usually cause i know most people hate it :P
21:29 Miryle: i for one appreciate it lol
21:29 Jakomo73: 01:57:762 (4,5,6) - this should have a smaller ds since you used that pattern of gradually smaller ds a lot earlier
21:29 Jakomo73: and you should make it straight using same x axis then curve it D:
21:30 Miryle: o right
21:31 Jakomo73: 00:18:783 (6) - i got triggered the end wasnt on the same location as either 2 or 3
21:31 Miryle: okay changed both
21:31 Miryle: eh why not
21:31 Miryle: fixed
21:31 Miryle: 00:17:966 (3,5) - also made these parallel
21:32 Miryle: or rather the same line
21:32 Jakomo73: 00:31:436 (2) - should rotate this more imo to point upwards towards next note
21:32 Miryle: kk done that
21:33 Jakomo73: 00:20:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - these should be rotated a tiny bit to make the beginning of 1 more natural feeling (aka straighter), as the player puts power backwards yada yada
21:34 Jakomo73: 00:24:089 (1,5) - should put these on same location imo unless you think it would hinder reading
21:35 Miryle: for :20 i rotated and repositioned some stuff
21:35 Miryle: looks better, plays better
21:35 Jakomo73: kk :)
21:35 Miryle: agreed to last point too, fixed~
21:36 Jakomo73: 00:37:762 (4,5,6) - not straight line again :P (rotate -7 degrees to get them in a line)
21:36 Miryle: not supposed to be a straight line :3
21:36 Miryle: would look weird if it were imo
21:36 Miryle: 00:38:170 (7,8,9) - spaced this out a bit further from there tho
21:37 Miryle: it's basically overlapping lol
21:37 Jakomo73: 00:40:823 (1,2) - should make these same slider but ctrl g imo
21:37 Jakomo73: 00:42:660 (4,5,6) - feel like this is too sharp of a curve (maybe putting 5 in more?)
21:37 Miryle: done
21:38 Miryle: fixed
21:38 Miryle: 00:42:864 (6,7) - also made blanket
21:38 Jakomo73: 00:47:354 (1,2) - imo you should do [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6502197 this] instead for ~flow~
21:38 Jakomo73: (sorry i like really circular flow lol)
21:39 Miryle: why not
21:39 Miryle: fix
21:39 Miryle: ed
21:40 Jakomo73: 00:49:803 (1) - also use an approach circle to make this slightly more circular (plus free blanket spot if you need it :P)
21:40 Jakomo73: 01:11:231 (6,2) - triggered tbh
21:41 Miryle: https://puu.sh/s7VAs/658056e350.png mastery
21:41 Miryle: I am blanket master
21:41 Miryle: thank yukiyo
21:41 Miryle: also moved the 2
21:42 Jakomo73: i use 2 points instead of 1 for those bezier sliders, so hard to get otherwise lol
21:42 Jakomo73: 01:20:823 (4) - should put directly onto 1's path imo
21:42 Jakomo73: 01:25:211 (5) - this is offscreen
21:42 Miryle: done
21:42 Miryle: eh?
21:42 Miryle: no it isn't o.o
21:42 Miryle: it's smack in the middle
21:43 Jakomo73: ahhh i mightve messed something up again lol
21:43 Miryle: xD
21:43 Jakomo73: yep i did xd
21:43 Jakomo73: 01:25:211 (5,6,7) - i would have 6 and 7 ctrl + g cause ~circular~ but just preference
21:44 Jakomo73: 01:42:048 (9) - i like this btw
21:45 Jakomo73: ok thats like all the remotely nazi things i can find :P
21:45 Miryle: changed the first
21:45 Miryle: and ty for liking the slider
21:45 Miryle: LOL
21:45 Jakomo73: i really like the map alltogether <3
21:45 Miryle: yay
21:46 Miryle: idk post on thread and get kudos
21:46 Miryle: i might make a mapset
21:46 Jakomo73: if i dont overwork myself with sb stuff i might make a gd if u do ^^
is good mod changed most things and stuff yay
Yukiyo
425 posts
Joined June 2014
Yukiyo
osu! needs more nazimods
2016-11-07 00:15 Miryle: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123616 Camellia - Papayapa Bass feat. Nanahira]
2016-11-07 00:21 Yukiyo: 00:04:089 (4,1) -  BLANKET
2016-11-07 00:21 Yukiyo: 00:05:721 (2,1) - ^
2016-11-07 00:21 Yukiyo: 00:08:783 (6,1) - ^
2016-11-07 00:21 Yukiyo: 00:09:395 (1,2) - ^
2016-11-07 00:22 Yukiyo: 00:14:293 (1,2) - ^
2016-11-07 00:22 Miryle: 00:09:803 (2) -
2016-11-07 00:22 Yukiyo: 00:09:395 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:23 Yukiyo: 00:15:007 (5,6) - 
2016-11-07 00:23 Yukiyo: 00:15:925 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:23 Yukiyo: 00:16:946 (5) - NC?
2016-11-07 00:23 Yukiyo: 00:17:864 (2,5) - BLANKET
2016-11-07 00:24 Yukiyo: 00:19:191 (1,2) - ????
2016-11-07 00:24 Yukiyo: 00:19:191 (1,4) - Ü
2016-11-07 00:24 Yukiyo: *
2016-11-07 00:24 Yukiyo: 00:20:823 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:25 Yukiyo: 00:22:456 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:25 Yukiyo: 00:23:272 (4,6) - 
2016-11-07 00:25 Yukiyo: 00:24:293 (2,4) - 
2016-11-07 00:26 Yukiyo: 00:24:089 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:26 Yukiyo: 00:24:089 (1,4) - touching
2016-11-07 00:26 Yukiyo: 00:23:680 (6,3) - stack
2016-11-07 00:26 Yukiyo: 00:25:517 (6,1) -  HOYL PLS
2016-11-07 00:27 Yukiyo: 00:29:701 (6,7) -  Why not same slider???? for gud blanket
2016-11-07 00:28 Yukiyo: 00:37:150 (1,2) -  BLANKET
2016-11-07 00:28 Yukiyo: 00:44:803 (5,6) - blanket?
2016-11-07 00:29 Yukiyo: 00:45:619 (2,6) - Pixelblanket
2016-11-07 00:29 Yukiyo: 00:46:538 (7,1) - blanket
2016-11-07 00:30 Yukiyo: 00:47:558 (2,5) - 
2016-11-07 00:30 Yukiyo: ?
2016-11-07 00:30 Yukiyo: 00:48:374 (6,1) - pixel
2016-11-07 00:30 Yukiyo: 00:48:578 (1,3) - touching?
2016-11-07 00:31 Yukiyo: 00:14:293 (1,2) - 1/4 gap 00:15:007 (5,6) - 1/2 gap but same blanket distance
2016-11-07 00:33 Yukiyo: 00:52:048 (2) -  Three sounds here xd
2016-11-07 00:35 Miryle: 00:53:374 (8) -
2016-11-07 00:35 Miryle: THIS IS YOUR GHIMMICK
2016-11-07 00:35 Yukiyo: "GHIMMICK"
2016-11-07 00:35 Miryle: typo ok
2016-11-07 00:35 Miryle: fuck off
2016-11-07 00:35 Yukiyo: 01:00:007 (1,2) -  
2016-11-07 00:36 Yukiyo: 01:03:272 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:36 Yukiyo: 01:07:762 (5,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: 01:05:721 (4,5) -  fix distance
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: ver yhard to hit
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: even fo rme
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: also not representing the real rhythm 
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: by distance
2016-11-07 00:38 Yukiyo: 01:08:170 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:38 Yukiyo: 01:12:456 (4,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:39 Yukiyo: 01:17:048 (8,1) - pls
2016-11-07 00:39 Yukiyo: keep same distance?
2016-11-07 00:39 Yukiyo: 01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,1) - HW?
2016-11-07 00:39 Yukiyo: 01:24:497 (1,5) - stack?
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:31:027 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:32:660 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:34:293 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:35:517 (6,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:44:293 (2,4) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:47:354 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:41 Yukiyo: 01:50:619 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:41 Yukiyo: 01:52:252 (1,3,5) -  same blanket spacign
2016-11-07 00:41 Miryle: 01:17:048 (8,1) -
2016-11-07 00:41 Yukiyo: 01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: 01:52:252 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: 01:53:476 (7,8) - ?
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: 01:56:742 (7,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: 01:59:089 (1,2,1,2) -  BLUE TICK °^°//
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: I love it
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: done
2016-11-07 00:43 Yukiyo: ima post
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,151 posts
Joined July 2016
Topic Starter
Mir

Yukiyo wrote:

osu! needs more nazimods
2016-11-07 00:15 Miryle: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123616 Camellia - Papayapa Bass feat. Nanahira]
2016-11-07 00:21 Yukiyo: 00:04:089 (4,1) -  BLANKET
2016-11-07 00:21 Yukiyo: 00:05:721 (2,1) - ^
2016-11-07 00:21 Yukiyo: 00:08:783 (6,1) - ^
2016-11-07 00:21 Yukiyo: 00:09:395 (1,2) - ^
2016-11-07 00:22 Yukiyo: 00:14:293 (1,2) - ^
2016-11-07 00:22 Miryle: 00:09:803 (2) -
2016-11-07 00:22 Yukiyo: 00:09:395 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:23 Yukiyo: 00:15:007 (5,6) - 
2016-11-07 00:23 Yukiyo: 00:15:925 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:23 Yukiyo: 00:16:946 (5) - NC?
2016-11-07 00:23 Yukiyo: 00:17:864 (2,5) - BLANKET
2016-11-07 00:24 Yukiyo: 00:19:191 (1,2) - ????
2016-11-07 00:24 Yukiyo: 00:19:191 (1,4) - Ü
2016-11-07 00:24 Yukiyo: *
2016-11-07 00:24 Yukiyo: 00:20:823 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:25 Yukiyo: 00:22:456 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:25 Yukiyo: 00:23:272 (4,6) - 
2016-11-07 00:25 Yukiyo: 00:24:293 (2,4) - 
2016-11-07 00:26 Yukiyo: 00:24:089 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:26 Yukiyo: 00:24:089 (1,4) - touching
2016-11-07 00:26 Yukiyo: 00:23:680 (6,3) - stack
2016-11-07 00:26 Yukiyo: 00:25:517 (6,1) -  HOYL PLS
2016-11-07 00:27 Yukiyo: 00:29:701 (6,7) -  Why not same slider???? for gud blanket
2016-11-07 00:28 Yukiyo: 00:37:150 (1,2) -  BLANKET
2016-11-07 00:28 Yukiyo: 00:44:803 (5,6) - blanket?
2016-11-07 00:29 Yukiyo: 00:45:619 (2,6) - Pixelblanket
2016-11-07 00:29 Yukiyo: 00:46:538 (7,1) - blanket
2016-11-07 00:30 Yukiyo: 00:47:558 (2,5) - 
2016-11-07 00:30 Yukiyo: ?
2016-11-07 00:30 Yukiyo: 00:48:374 (6,1) - pixel
2016-11-07 00:30 Yukiyo: 00:48:578 (1,3) - touching?
2016-11-07 00:31 Yukiyo: 00:14:293 (1,2) - 1/4 gap 00:15:007 (5,6) - 1/2 gap but same blanket distance
2016-11-07 00:33 Yukiyo: 00:52:048 (2) -  Three sounds here xd
2016-11-07 00:35 Miryle: 00:53:374 (8) -
2016-11-07 00:35 Miryle: THIS IS YOUR GHIMMICK
2016-11-07 00:35 Yukiyo: "GHIMMICK"
2016-11-07 00:35 Miryle: typo ok
2016-11-07 00:35 Miryle: fuck off
2016-11-07 00:35 Yukiyo: 01:00:007 (1,2) -  
2016-11-07 00:36 Yukiyo: 01:03:272 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:36 Yukiyo: 01:07:762 (5,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: 01:05:721 (4,5) -  fix distance
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: ver yhard to hit
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: even fo rme
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: also not representing the real rhythm 
2016-11-07 00:37 Yukiyo: by distance
2016-11-07 00:38 Yukiyo: 01:08:170 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:38 Yukiyo: 01:12:456 (4,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:39 Yukiyo: 01:17:048 (8,1) - pls
2016-11-07 00:39 Yukiyo: keep same distance?
2016-11-07 00:39 Yukiyo: 01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,1) - HW?
2016-11-07 00:39 Yukiyo: 01:24:497 (1,5) - stack?
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:31:027 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:32:660 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:34:293 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:35:517 (6,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:44:293 (2,4) - 
2016-11-07 00:40 Yukiyo: 01:47:354 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:41 Yukiyo: 01:50:619 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:41 Yukiyo: 01:52:252 (1,3,5) -  same blanket spacign
2016-11-07 00:41 Miryle: 01:17:048 (8,1) -
2016-11-07 00:41 Yukiyo: 01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: 01:52:252 (1,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: 01:53:476 (7,8) - ?
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: 01:56:742 (7,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: 01:59:089 (1,2,1,2) -  BLUE TICK °^°//
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: I love it
2016-11-07 00:42 Yukiyo: done
2016-11-07 00:43 Yukiyo: ima post
voice chat fixed all blankets and that screwed up stream was changed ty bae <3
Yukiyo
425 posts
Joined June 2014
Yukiyo
FOR THE RECORDS NO KDS
2016-11-07 00:54 Yukiyo: 00:28:170 (2,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:54 Yukiyo: 00:30:211 (3,1) - pixel
2016-11-07 00:54 Yukiyo: 00:36:742 (3,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:54 Yukiyo: 00:36:742 (3,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:54 Yukiyo: 00:37:966 (2,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:54 Yukiyo: 00:38:783 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:55 Yukiyo: 00:39:599 (2,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:55 Yukiyo: 00:43:272 (3,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:55 Yukiyo: 00:44:905 (3,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:55 Yukiyo: 00:46:129 (2,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:55 Yukiyo: 00:46:946 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:55 Yukiyo: 00:50:619 (2,3) - 
2016-11-07 00:55 Yukiyo: 00:50:619 (2,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:55 Yukiyo: 00:51:844 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:55 Yukiyo: 01:00:007 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:56 Yukiyo: 01:13:068 (1,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:56 Yukiyo: 01:21:231 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:57 Yukiyo: 01:28:987 (3,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:57 Yukiyo: 01:30:211 (2,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:57 Yukiyo: 01:30:211 (2,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:57 Yukiyo: 01:35:925 (1,2) - 
2016-11-07 00:57 Yukiyo: 01:36:844 (1,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:57 Yukiyo: 01:48:170 (2,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:57 Yukiyo: 01:49:803 (2,1) - 
2016-11-07 00:58 Yukiyo: 01:51:436 (2,1) -
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,151 posts
Joined July 2016
Topic Starter
Mir
For the record the above mod is strictly blankets.
C00L
1,078 posts
Joined September 2014
C00L
Im gya
2016-11-06 21:54 Miryle: roast my map pls
2016-11-06 21:55 C00L: you have to give me it first
2016-11-06 21:55 Miryle: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123616 Camellia - Papayapa Bass feat. Nanahira]
2016-11-06 21:55 Miryle: roast it super hard
2016-11-06 21:55 C00L: o
2016-11-06 21:55 C00L: dat bg doe
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: *ROASTED*
2016-11-06 21:56 Miryle: LOL
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: 100:01:232 (1) - 
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: 00:01:232 (1) - 
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: not even on even cooridnated
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: *ROASTED*
2016-11-06 21:56 Miryle: LMAO
2016-11-06 21:56 Miryle: im not monstrata ok
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: 00:24:293 (2,4) - 
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: not even blanket weeb
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: 00:24:293 (2,4) - 
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: *ROASTED*
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: 00:26:129 (2,3) - 
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: ugly overlap
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: kys
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: *ROASTED*
2016-11-06 21:58 C00L: did you map this btw?
2016-11-06 21:58 Miryle: no that's totally not my name as creator
2016-11-06 21:58 C00L: i mean
2016-11-06 21:58 Miryle: blanket fixed btw ty <3
2016-11-06 21:58 C00L: it could be gd
2016-11-06 21:58 C00L: xd
2016-11-06 21:58 Miryle: no it's
2016-11-06 21:58 Miryle: all mine
2016-11-06 21:59 C00L: looking good
2016-11-06 21:59 C00L: looks like shiirns bumfucking u is doing its job :3
2016-11-06 21:59 Miryle: he literally
2016-11-06 21:59 Miryle: hasn't even lectured me yet
2016-11-06 21:59 Miryle: LOL
2016-11-06 21:59 C00L: o
2016-11-06 21:59 Miryle: HE JUST SAID SOME RANDOM THINGS
2016-11-06 22:00 Miryle: HE MAPPED LIKE 3 SONGS
2016-11-06 22:00 Miryle: I'm just here like
2016-11-06 22:00 Miryle: "so there's this mentorship program"
2016-11-06 22:00 C00L: d
2016-11-06 22:00 C00L: 01:12:660 (5) - 
2016-11-06 22:00 Miryle: nah jk he's pretty cool
2016-11-06 22:00 C00L: rotate by -70
2016-11-06 22:00 C00L: he seems cool tbh
2016-11-06 22:01 C00L: b
2016-11-06 22:01 C00L: r
2016-11-06 22:01 C00L: b
2016-11-06 22:01 Miryle: o
2016-11-06 22:01 Miryle: k
2016-11-06 22:01 Miryle: also rotated
2016-11-06 22:04 C00L: diff looking good
2016-11-06 22:04 C00L: in advance try to keep constant ds
2016-11-06 22:04 C00L: 00:04:089 (3) - 
2016-11-06 22:04 C00L: d
2016-11-06 22:05 Miryle: wtf
2016-11-06 22:05 Miryle: didn't mean for that
2016-11-06 22:05 Miryle: i did intend for constant ds tho
2016-11-06 22:07 Miryle: all ds errors fixed yay
2016-11-06 22:07 C00L: yay
2016-11-06 22:08 Miryle: same for normal some weird mis-timed note lel
2016-11-06 22:08 Miryle: is that really it tho
2016-11-06 22:08 Miryle: i expected more roasting wtf
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: yea
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: i like the diff
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: also
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: well
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: the only thing i would change is just polish up some flow
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: ie
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: rotate stuff
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: can i ask
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: where
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: cuz imo map flows pretty nicely
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: idk where to check for changes
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: ugh
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: sure
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: it does flow well
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: you don't have to ;-;
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: im not saying it doesnt
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: its just to make it :ok_hand:
2016-11-06 22:10 Miryle: oh ok
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: 00:20:211 (5,6) - 
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: like
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: here for example
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: the slider (5) is pointing towards the sldier end 
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: which is eh
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: imo
2016-11-06 22:10 Miryle: is blanket tho
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510241
2016-11-06 22:10 Miryle: ;-;
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: so like a small change like that would fix 
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: yea
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: but
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: flow>blanket dawgh
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: ruins aesthetic ;-;
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: blanket > everything :^)
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: -yukistrata 2k20
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: it doesnt ruin aethetics what
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: ikr
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: anything besides things like that tho
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: i'd rather keep it ;-;
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: "could you point out
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: xddddddddddd
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: well i mean
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: 00:23:680 (6,7) -
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: like this maybe
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: 00:28:783 (5) - 
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: ctrl gslider end ends on other side
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: so naiz flow
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: d
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: no real strong beat
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: so no need for jump
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: :D
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: o
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: i like
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: changed
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: 00:32:048 (5) - 
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: u could move this up
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: by like
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: a little
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510264
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: done
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: idk why but done lel
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: as in slider end
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: oh
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: becuz
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: like
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: flow
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: i ctrl+g because
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: d
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: flow
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: no
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: dont ctrl g
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: since theres strong sound on next slider
2016-11-06 22:14 Miryle: oh okay
2016-11-06 22:14 Miryle: oh yeah true
2016-11-06 22:14 Miryle: okay just moved it up
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: 00:45:109 (6) - 
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: you could make this 2 1/8 sliders
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: to make sounds stand out more
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: except using the same repeat slider 
2016-11-06 22:15 C00L: for the same sound as 00:44:599 (4) - 
2016-11-06 22:15 C00L: which is different
2016-11-06 22:15 C00L: blah blah
2016-11-06 22:15 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510283
2016-11-06 22:15 Miryle: k done
2016-11-06 22:16 C00L: 00:53:374 (8) - 
2016-11-06 22:16 C00L: dont end sliders on strong beats :(
2016-11-06 22:16 C00L: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510298
2016-11-06 22:16 Miryle: originally i didn't
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: but adding a circle would be weird
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: hm
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: why would it be weird?
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L:  its not werid trust me
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: idk
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: changed
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: LOL
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: ;0
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: i don't have a good enough reason ._.
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: so i'll take your suggestion
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: XD
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: 01:05:721 (4) - 
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: make this face 5
2016-11-06 22:18 Miryle: done
2016-11-06 22:18 C00L: 01:19:599 (1) - 
2016-11-06 22:18 C00L: wy no make long repeat slider
2016-11-06 22:18 C00L: except of 2 circles
2016-11-06 22:18 C00L: would be funner to play
2016-11-06 22:19 C00L: rather than delay
2016-11-06 22:19 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510308
2016-11-06 22:19 C00L: quick slider you could make it more interesting
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: that i disagree with
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: this is gonna sound
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: gya as fuck
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: but it sounds like a "chu" kissy sound
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: so I just want
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: small taps
2016-11-06 22:20 C00L:  huh
2016-11-06 22:20 C00L: o shit
2016-11-06 22:21 C00L: yukiyo is mapping same song as u
2016-11-06 22:21 C00L: what a copycat
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: i got him to blanket mod it
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: he liked the song
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: so he's mapping a gimmick map
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: also savelog
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: post it for kds
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: m8
Mir
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Topic Starter
Mir

C00L wrote:

Im gya
2016-11-06 21:54 Miryle: roast my map pls
2016-11-06 21:55 C00L: you have to give me it first
2016-11-06 21:55 Miryle: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123616 Camellia - Papayapa Bass feat. Nanahira]
2016-11-06 21:55 Miryle: roast it super hard
2016-11-06 21:55 C00L: o
2016-11-06 21:55 C00L: dat bg doe
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: *ROASTED*
2016-11-06 21:56 Miryle: LOL
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: 100:01:232 (1) - 
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: 00:01:232 (1) - 
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: not even on even cooridnated
2016-11-06 21:56 C00L: *ROASTED*
2016-11-06 21:56 Miryle: LMAO
2016-11-06 21:56 Miryle: im not monstrata ok
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: 00:24:293 (2,4) - 
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: not even blanket weeb
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: 00:24:293 (2,4) - 
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: *ROASTED*
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: 00:26:129 (2,3) - 
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: ugly overlap
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: kys
2016-11-06 21:57 C00L: *ROASTED*
2016-11-06 21:58 C00L: did you map this btw?
2016-11-06 21:58 Miryle: no that's totally not my name as creator
2016-11-06 21:58 C00L: i mean
2016-11-06 21:58 Miryle: blanket fixed btw ty <3
2016-11-06 21:58 C00L: it could be gd
2016-11-06 21:58 C00L: xd
2016-11-06 21:58 Miryle: no it's
2016-11-06 21:58 Miryle: all mine
2016-11-06 21:59 C00L: looking good
2016-11-06 21:59 C00L: looks like shiirns bumfucking u is doing its job :3
2016-11-06 21:59 Miryle: he literally
2016-11-06 21:59 Miryle: hasn't even lectured me yet
2016-11-06 21:59 Miryle: LOL
2016-11-06 21:59 C00L: o
2016-11-06 21:59 Miryle: HE JUST SAID SOME RANDOM THINGS
2016-11-06 22:00 Miryle: HE MAPPED LIKE 3 SONGS
2016-11-06 22:00 Miryle: I'm just here like
2016-11-06 22:00 Miryle: "so there's this mentorship program"
2016-11-06 22:00 C00L: d
2016-11-06 22:00 C00L: 01:12:660 (5) - 
2016-11-06 22:00 Miryle: nah jk he's pretty cool
2016-11-06 22:00 C00L: rotate by -70
2016-11-06 22:00 C00L: he seems cool tbh
2016-11-06 22:01 C00L: b
2016-11-06 22:01 C00L: r
2016-11-06 22:01 C00L: b
2016-11-06 22:01 Miryle: o
2016-11-06 22:01 Miryle: k
2016-11-06 22:01 Miryle: also rotated
2016-11-06 22:04 C00L: diff looking good
2016-11-06 22:04 C00L: in advance try to keep constant ds
2016-11-06 22:04 C00L: 00:04:089 (3) - 
2016-11-06 22:04 C00L: d
2016-11-06 22:05 Miryle: wtf
2016-11-06 22:05 Miryle: didn't mean for that
2016-11-06 22:05 Miryle: i did intend for constant ds tho
2016-11-06 22:07 Miryle: all ds errors fixed yay
2016-11-06 22:07 C00L: yay
2016-11-06 22:08 Miryle: same for normal some weird mis-timed note lel
2016-11-06 22:08 Miryle: is that really it tho
2016-11-06 22:08 Miryle: i expected more roasting wtf
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: yea
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: i like the diff
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: also
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: well
2016-11-06 22:08 C00L: the only thing i would change is just polish up some flow
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: ie
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: rotate stuff
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: can i ask
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: where
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: cuz imo map flows pretty nicely
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: idk where to check for changes
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: ugh
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: sure
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: it does flow well
2016-11-06 22:09 Miryle: you don't have to ;-;
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: im not saying it doesnt
2016-11-06 22:09 C00L: its just to make it :ok_hand:
2016-11-06 22:10 Miryle: oh ok
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: 00:20:211 (5,6) - 
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: like
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: here for example
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: the slider (5) is pointing towards the sldier end 
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: which is eh
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: imo
2016-11-06 22:10 Miryle: is blanket tho
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510241
2016-11-06 22:10 Miryle: ;-;
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: so like a small change like that would fix 
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: yea
2016-11-06 22:10 C00L: but
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: flow>blanket dawgh
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: ruins aesthetic ;-;
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: blanket > everything :^)
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: -yukistrata 2k20
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: it doesnt ruin aethetics what
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: ikr
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: anything besides things like that tho
2016-11-06 22:11 Miryle: i'd rather keep it ;-;
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: "could you point out
2016-11-06 22:11 C00L: xddddddddddd
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: well i mean
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: 00:23:680 (6,7) -
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: like this maybe
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: 00:28:783 (5) - 
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: ctrl gslider end ends on other side
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: so naiz flow
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: d
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: no real strong beat
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: so no need for jump
2016-11-06 22:12 C00L: :D
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: o
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: i like
2016-11-06 22:12 Miryle: changed
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: 00:32:048 (5) - 
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: u could move this up
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: by like
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: a little
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510264
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: done
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: idk why but done lel
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: as in slider end
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: oh
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: becuz
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: like
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: flow
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: i ctrl+g because
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: d
2016-11-06 22:13 Miryle: flow
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: no
2016-11-06 22:13 C00L: dont ctrl g
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: since theres strong sound on next slider
2016-11-06 22:14 Miryle: oh okay
2016-11-06 22:14 Miryle: oh yeah true
2016-11-06 22:14 Miryle: okay just moved it up
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: 00:45:109 (6) - 
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: you could make this 2 1/8 sliders
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: to make sounds stand out more
2016-11-06 22:14 C00L: except using the same repeat slider 
2016-11-06 22:15 C00L: for the same sound as 00:44:599 (4) - 
2016-11-06 22:15 C00L: which is different
2016-11-06 22:15 C00L: blah blah
2016-11-06 22:15 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510283
2016-11-06 22:15 Miryle: k done
2016-11-06 22:16 C00L: 00:53:374 (8) - 
2016-11-06 22:16 C00L: dont end sliders on strong beats :(
2016-11-06 22:16 C00L: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510298
2016-11-06 22:16 Miryle: originally i didn't
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: but adding a circle would be weird
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: hm
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: why would it be weird?
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L:  its not werid trust me
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: idk
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: changed
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: LOL
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: ;0
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: i don't have a good enough reason ._.
2016-11-06 22:17 Miryle: so i'll take your suggestion
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: XD
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: 01:05:721 (4) - 
2016-11-06 22:17 C00L: make this face 5
2016-11-06 22:18 Miryle: done
2016-11-06 22:18 C00L: 01:19:599 (1) - 
2016-11-06 22:18 C00L: wy no make long repeat slider
2016-11-06 22:18 C00L: except of 2 circles
2016-11-06 22:18 C00L: would be funner to play
2016-11-06 22:19 C00L: rather than delay
2016-11-06 22:19 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6510308
2016-11-06 22:19 C00L: quick slider you could make it more interesting
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: that i disagree with
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: this is gonna sound
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: gya as fuck
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: but it sounds like a "chu" kissy sound
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: so I just want
2016-11-06 22:19 Miryle: small taps
2016-11-06 22:20 C00L:  huh
2016-11-06 22:20 C00L: o shit
2016-11-06 22:21 C00L: yukiyo is mapping same song as u
2016-11-06 22:21 C00L: what a copycat
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: i got him to blanket mod it
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: he liked the song
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: so he's mapping a gimmick map
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: also savelog
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: post it for kds
2016-11-06 22:21 Miryle: m8
fixed blankets and some flow changes, rotated some stuff and got roasted a couple times

11/10 mod
Zunv
113 posts
Joined October 2014
Zunv
Its dangerous to go alone. Here take that star with you!
Mir
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Topic Starter
Mir

Zunv wrote:

Its dangerous to go alone. Here take that star with you!
-treasures it-

Thank you!~
miradzin
240 posts
Joined April 2015
miradzin
Insane

  1. 00:37:150 (1) - End the slider at 00:37:354 - and add a circle after it.
  2. 00:38:374 (9) - This slider should end here 00:38:578 - with the vocal.
  3. 00:38:783 (1) - Same here, make slider shorter and add a circle
  4. 00:39:599 (5,6) - What about this? http://puu.sh/sb0sF/5681747ba5.jpg
The rest seems good.

Papayapa!

  1. 00:26:129 (2,3) - Blanket can be better
  2. 00:29:599 (5,6) - Try this: http://puu.sh/saZQh/f0c7508789.jpg
  3. 00:42:354 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Beginning from here, try this: http://puu.sh/saZai/b6caec77ae.jpg
  4. 00:43:680 (1) - Try ending this slider here 00:43:885
  5. 00:46:946 (1) - and this here 00:47:150
  6. 00:49:191 (4,5) - Slider comes first and then the circle.
  7. 01:19:599 (1) - You can make that distance for the end of the stream, but can be prettier, maybe here? 308 104
And that's it, map seems great :)
Mir
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Topic Starter
Mir

miradzin wrote:

Insane

  1. 00:37:150 (1) - End the slider at 00:37:354 - and add a circle after it. - Done!~
  2. 00:38:374 (9) - This slider should end here 00:38:578 - with the vocal. - Done!~
  3. 00:38:783 (1) - Same here, make slider shorter and add a circle. - Done!~
  4. 00:39:599 (5,6) - What about this? http://puu.sh/sb0sF/5681747ba5.jpg – Kinda wanna keep the same rhythm going, I know it’s more than one sound, but I’m content with skipping it.
The rest seems good. - Yay!

Papayapa!
  1. 00:26:129 (2,3) - Blanket can be better – Yes it can.~
  2. 00:29:599 (5,6) - Try this: http://puu.sh/saZQh/f0c7508789.jpg – Vocals start on blue tick, so keeping it how it is.
  3. 00:42:354 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Beginning from here, try this: http://puu.sh/saZai/b6caec77ae.jpg - asdfasdfasdf changed a lot of this section.
  4. 00:43:680 (1) - Try ending this slider here 00:43:885 – I think it’s fine how it is atm.
  5. 00:46:946 (1) - and this here 00:47:150 – ^
  6. 00:49:191 (4,5) - Slider comes first and then the circle. - I don’t think so, sorry. Keeping it as it is.
  7. 01:19:599 (1) - You can make that distance for the end of the stream, but can be prettier, maybe here? 308 104 – It’s fine how it is. It’s continuing the curve so I’d rather keep it a consistent curve.
And that's it, map seems great :)
Thank you for your mod!~
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Vivyanne
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Joined December 2013
Vivyanne
for the mania diff, like the 4* one orz (called insane right?)

overall the usage of the jacks in the wub section felt really overdone due to there being no sound that is exactly the same as the one before, eventhough it might be the one wub sample, since the pitches change maybe the patterns should too.


okbye
CommandoBlack
258 posts
Joined September 2015
CommandoBlack

HighTec wrote:

for the mania diff, like the 4* one orz (called insane right?)

overall the usage of the jacks in the wub section felt really overdone due to there being no sound that is exactly the same as the one before, eventhough it might be the one wub sample, since the pitches change maybe the patterns should too.


okbye
They're good no worries ;) To the vocal & bass. I have them there to be fun & comfortable
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
lol, metadata gold
It's all WRONG.

I guess you don't know about music genre stuffs, because not all Camellia's songs are dubstep
so this is a metadata help:

Artist: かめりあ feat. ななひら
Romanised Artist: Camellia feat. Nanahira
Title: PAPAYAPA BASS
Romanised Title: PAPAYAPA BASS

Source: beatmania IIDX 24 SINOBUZ

Tags: also wrong, remove "dubstep j-core"
Add: MONDO GROOVE BASSHOUSE
More tags: KONAMI BEMANI

In-game srceenshot:



With that sum-ed up, good luck then.
Mir
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Topic Starter
Mir

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

lol, metadata gold
It's all WRONG.

I guess you don't know about music genre stuffs, because not all Camellia's songs are dubstep
so this is a metadata help:

Artist: かめりあ feat. ななひら
Romanised Artist: Camellia feat. Nanahira
Title: PAPAYAPA BASS
Romanised Title: PAPAYAPA BASS

Source: beatmania IIDX 24 SINOBUZ

Tags: also wrong, remove "dubstep j-core"
Add: MONDO GROOVE BASSHOUSE
More tags: KONAMI BEMANI

In-game srceenshot:



With that sum-ed up, good luck then.
Metadata was never my strongest suit, so thanks for correcting it. Hopefully it's fixed now.
deadpon3
531 posts
Joined April 2013
deadpon3
Hey, m4m :3

Insane:


00:01:232 (1,2) - This is really not intuitive to play because white tick is skipped by the slider end, and then you force player to continue from blue tick. Below I posted a proper fix that does not make any problems with consistency, 00:01:232 (1) - need to end on blue tick, 00:01:742 (2) - has to go from white tick and add a note on 00:01:946 - to complete the pattern
Here's how it's done

00:14:803 (3) - What's with this spacing? You followed the vocals that doesn't get such a drastic change to force you to use such a big spacing difference. It's 2,73x on previous slider and 0,99x on the note. All three objects are 1/4 without longer breaks or anything :/ Also I don't really know if that 00:14:803 (3,4) - overlap looks good ~~

00:24:089 (1,2) - They are too close to each other, break between them might not be noticed with such a small spacing

00:26:129 (2) - NC here (it's right after SV change)

00:37:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The flow here is a problem. During this pattern player does not really go anywhere during a pretty intese song's part, I suggest not to stack them, but to keep the flow going right direction with every object.

00:39:599 (6,7,8) - Now this is unreadable, 00:39:599 (6,7) - is a 1/4 pattern without any gaps, and then there comes 00:40:007 (8) - with one 1/4 tick gap, and spacing between these 3 is equal, move 00:39:803 (7) - closer to 00:39:599 (6) - so people know there is a pause.

01:05:721 (4,5,6,7) - Triple and slider need some more space here, right now it looks like
that

01:23:476 (3) - I know it looks cool with the wobble, but it would look even better if you made a blanket here! :D Flip this slider the way shown below, curve the slider's tick I left an arrow on on the screenshot and blanket it with 01:24:089 (5) - I think it would look really nice :3
da screenshot

01:46:538 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like this flow, maybe move 01:46:844 (5,6) - to the left direction so the flow keeps moving?
:3

That's it, GL c:
Mir
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Mir

deadpon3 wrote:

Hey, m4m :3

Insane:


00:01:232 (1,2) - This is really not intuitive to play because white tick is skipped by the slider end, and then you force player to continue from blue tick. Below I posted a proper fix that does not make any problems with consistency, 00:01:232 (1) - need to end on blue tick, 00:01:742 (2) - has to go from white tick and add a note on 00:01:946 - to complete the pattern
Here's how it's done

Fixed the above.~

00:14:803 (3) - What's with this spacing? You followed the vocals that doesn't get such a drastic change to force you to use such a big spacing difference. It's 2,73x on previous slider and 0,99x on the note. All three objects are 1/4 without longer breaks or anything :/ Also I don't really know if that 00:14:803 (3,4) - overlap looks good ~~ - I think I fixed it.~

00:24:089 (1,2) - They are too close to each other, break between them might not be noticed with such a small spacing – Fixed!

00:26:129 (2) - NC here (it's right after SV change) – NC’d 00:26:946 (1) – instead, I like the NC there.

00:37:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The flow here is a problem. During this pattern player does not really go anywhere during a pretty intese song's part, I suggest not to stack them, but to keep the flow going right direction with every object. - Changed.~

00:39:599 (6,7,8) - Now this is unreadable, 00:39:599 (6,7) - is a 1/4 pattern without any gaps, and then there comes 00:40:007 (8) - with one 1/4 tick gap, and spacing between these 3 is equal, move 00:39:803 (7) - closer to 00:39:599 (6) - so people know there is a pause. Fixed!~

01:05:721 (4,5,6,7) - Triple and slider need some more space here, right now it looks like
that

Fixed the above!~

01:23:476 (3) - I know it looks cool with the wobble, but it would look even better if you made a blanket here! :D Flip this slider the way shown below, curve the slider's tick I left an arrow on on the screenshot and blanket it with 01:24:089 (5) - I think it would look really nice :3
da screenshot


Trivial matter, but okay.~

01:46:538 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like this flow, maybe move 01:46:844 (5,6) - to the left direction so the flow keeps moving?
:3

Did something else, ctrl+g’d 01:46:844 (5,6) – and made it move backwards. Is better now I think.~

That's it, GL c:
Yay! Useful mod. :3 Thanks!
Frans Bauer
60 posts
Joined May 2013
Frans Bauer
Crappy mod inc, brace urselves

Papayapa!

00:46:742 (8) - pls move it down a bit for better flow, it already isn't stacked on the slider so it overlaps atm anyways.
01:07:354 (3,4,5,6) - Place like this, flows better imo.
01:18:987 (8,1) - place spaced stream more to the right for better flow, this feels choppy
01:59:905 (1) - would nc this

Insane

Most of this is flow
00:02:456 (2) - place few pixels to the left
00:02:660 (3) - place at x426, y304
^flows better imo
00:26:129 (2) - nc?
01:04:905 (1) - remove nc and nc here 01:05:109 (2) - ?
01:59:089 (2,3,1,2) - would place these at x480, 748 / x456 y296 / x83 y121 / x384, y304 respectively, seems more fun and flows better imo

This was my crappy mod gl on map :D
Renumi
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904 posts
Joined July 2012
Renumi
thanks for modding duvet~
i'll reply when everyone else replies >.<

good map so this is going to be a super nitpick mod
how dare you provide an .mp4 example what a god


[ Normal]
such low settings for a normal, hp:2 and od:2~3 would bee good for this diff (altough they don't really make a gigantic difference in playing lol)
  1. 00:10:211 (4) - I'd ctrl+h to make this to make it alike to the other patterns since right now it looks kind of weird but ADSA overlap
  2. 00:26:129 (2) - sv changes is lower diffs (especially this since it's literally the easiest diff in the map) miiight raise some red flags, just imo
  3. 00:28:170 (2) - by doing this you're breaking your own ds and it just looks inconsistent with the rest of your patterns.
  4. 00:32:252 (1) - i'd recommend anchoring this slider down a bit, since how it is now is just kiiiinda weird how they almost touch. plus it'd have no playbility issue so why not? ;w;
    Suggestion
  5. 00:39:599 (2,1) - this blanket is kill (it's imperfect my fake ocd man blanket this smoother)
    Suggestion
  6. 00:49:395 (2,1,2,3) - the rhythm choice in this just sounds... poor. this is due to the fact that the slider ends on a white tick when there's definitely a loud and "should-be-clickable" sound. i think this would sound better than what you have now IMO
    Suggestion
  7. 01:00:823 (2,2) - this overlap adsagfdsa pls make smth cuter
    Suggestion
  8. 01:20:823 (1) - to be honest this would sound better if it was placed to the vocal.
    [box=Suggestion
    [/centre]]
01:26:946 (2) - imperfect with 01:26:129 (1). My recommendation would be to ctrl c v and h 01:26:129 (1) - this slider to replace the missaligned one. 01:29:395 (1,1) - dead ;-; 01:30:211 (2,1) - these two don't blanket all that well by just a tiny bit /:
Suggestion
move blue to x:140|y:232?
01:57:150 (1,2) - also misalinged by JUST A TEENY TINY BIT (the pixels trigger me) ctrl c v and h the '1'
[ Advanced]
advanced diffs aren't really my forte so >.<
  1. 00:03:885 (2) - nc? this is a weird one but it's such a gap ;w;
  2. 00:03:885 (2,3,4,1) - unless intentional i think these could be arranged better IMO IDK
    Suggestion
  3. 00:21:640 (2,1) - not a perfect blanket, also i don't like how 00:20:823 (1,2) - these kind of almost touch xwx
    Suggestion
  4. 00:21:640 (3,1) - flow here is just //////////////: make the '3' slider flow into the '1'?
  5. 00:49:803 (3,1) - custom slider shapes are neat and all but rlly this just looks kinda awkward. a normal curve would do ;w;
  6. 01:13:680 (2,3,4) - i think a curved line (not a zigzag) between these sliders would look neater
  7. 01:25:721 (4) - playfield on this is kind of concerning but should be fine i think I THINK
  8. 01:25:721 (4,1) - blanke tasdad
    Suggestion
  9. 01:41:640 (3,1) - just barely touching omg
  10. 01:57:150 (1,1) - blanket on second slider is too loose, make tighter?

i'll mod the rest of the difficulties tomorrow im super tired zz sorry
Mir
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Topic Starter
Mir

Renumi wrote:

thanks for modding duvet~ Yay!~
i'll reply when everyone else replies >.<

good map so this is going to be a super nitpick mod
how dare you provide an .mp4 example what a god


[ Normal]
such low settings for a normal, hp:2 and od:2~3 would bee good for this diff (altough they don't really make a gigantic difference in playing lol) – I’ve never mapped a normal so I don’t know the settings, but I changed them to these. :3

  1. 00:10:211 (4) - I'd ctrl+h to make this to make it alike to the other patterns since right now it looks kind of weird but ADSA overlap – Did something, made a triangle, I think it looks okay now.
  2. 00:26:129 (2) - sv changes is lower diffs (especially this since it's literally the easiest diff in the map) miiight raise some red flags, just imo – It’s REALLY small, like just enough to be noticed, but not enough to screw over a new player. If I have to change it I will, but I'd rather not.
  3. 00:28:170 (2) - by doing this you're breaking your own ds and it just looks inconsistent with the rest of your patterns. - How did this even happen? Fixed.~
  4. 00:32:252 (1) - i'd recommend anchoring this slider down a bit, since how it is now is just kiiiinda weird how they almost touch. plus it'd have no playbility issue so why not? ;w; - Sure, done.~
    Suggestion
  5. 00:39:599 (2,1) - this blanket is kill (it's imperfect my fake ocd man blanket this smoother) – I tried my best!~
    Suggestion
  6. 00:49:395 (2,1,2,3) - the rhythm choice in this just sounds... poor. this is due to the fact that the slider ends on a white tick when there's definitely a loud and "should-be-clickable" sound. i think this would sound better than what you have now IMO – asdasd I wanted that growl but I agree this is bad rhythm choice.
    Suggestion

  7. 01:00:823 (2,2) - this overlap adsagfdsa pls make smth cuter – omw triggered me too. Done.~
    Suggestion
  8. 01:20:823 (1) - to be honest this would sound better if it was placed to the vocal. - Fixed!
    [box=Suggestion
    [/centre]]
01:26:946 (2) - imperfect with 01:26:129 (1). My recommendation would be to ctrl c v and h 01:26:129 (1) - this slider to replace the missaligned one. - I tried my best! ;w; 01:29:395 (1,1) - dead ;-; - asdasdas idek how I didn’t get that ;w; totally, completely, 100% fixed. 01:30:211 (2,1) - these two don't blanket all that well by just a tiny bit /: - Changed with the above.~
Suggestion
move blue to x:140|y:232?
01:57:150 (1,2) - also misalinged by JUST A TEENY TINY BIT (the pixels trigger me) ctrl c v and h the '1' – Fixed!
[ Advanced]
advanced diffs aren't really my forte so >.<
  1. 00:03:885 (2) - nc? this is a weird one but it's such a gap ;w; - Sure, why not.~
  2. 00:03:885 (2,3,4,1) - unless intentional i think these could be arranged better IMO IDK – Fixed! ;w;
    Suggestion
  3. 00:21:640 (2,1) - not a perfect blanket, also i don't like how 00:20:823 (1,2) - these kind of almost touch xwx – Fixed both~ =w=
    Suggestion
  4. 00:21:640 (3,1) - flow here is just //////////////: make the '3' slider flow into the '1'? - Yesh, done.~
  5. 00:49:803 (3,1) - custom slider shapes are neat and all but rlly this just looks kinda awkward. a normal curve would do ;w; - asdasda >///<
  6. 01:13:680 (2,3,4) - i think a curved line (not a zigzag) between these sliders would look neater – I tried. ;w;
  7. 01:25:721 (4) - playfield on this is kind of concerning but should be fine i think I THINK – Is okay! I hope!
  8. 01:25:721 (4,1) - blanke tasdad – Fixed ;w;
    Suggestion
  9. 01:41:640 (3,1) - just barely touching omg - Fixed. ;w;
  10. 01:57:150 (1,1) - blanket on second slider is too loose, make tighter? - Yesh.~

i'll mod the rest of the difficulties tomorrow im super tired zz sorry – I shall be waiting.~

marty45 wrote:

Crappy mod inc, brace urselves

Papayapa!

00:46:742 (8) - pls move it down a bit for better flow, it already isn't stacked on the slider so it overlaps atm anyways.
01:07:354 (3,4,5,6) - Place like this, flows better imo.
01:18:987 (8,1) - place spaced stream more to the right for better flow, this feels choppy
01:59:905 (1) - would nc this

Insane

Most of this is flow
00:02:456 (2) - place few pixels to the left
00:02:660 (3) - place at x426, y304
^flows better imo
00:26:129 (2) - nc?
01:04:905 (1) - remove nc and nc here 01:05:109 (2) - ?
01:59:089 (2,3,1,2) - would place these at x480, 748 / x456 y296 / x83 y121 / x384, y304 respectively, seems more fun and flows better imo

This was my crappy mod gl on map :D
I forgot to respond to this but I changed almost everything. Thanks!~
_Stan
Beatmap Nominator
767 posts
Joined June 2012
_Stan
Hey from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

CommandoBlack's Normal
  1. 00:00:619 - I suggest you make there like you did here 00:03:885 - , cuz col [1] seem so blank and keep same is good~ xD.
  2. 00:05:721 (5721|1) - move this to col [1] , avoid double hit
  3. 00:12:150 (12150|1) - move this to col [1] ro avoid col [1] so blank here
  4. 00:19:803 (19803|1) - ^
  5. 00:56:334 (56334|1) - I think this note is ghost note
  6. 00:59:599 (59599|2) - ^
  7. from 01:05:823 - to 01:11:027 - col [1] have no note, it's distribution off balance
CommandoBlack's Hard
  1. 00:01:232 (1232|1) - I do not think double hit here is good idea, and you not did here 00:07:558 (7558|2,7762|0,7762|1) - , but music and rhythm is same
  2. 00:08:170 (8170|2,8170|0) - I suggest not do this, for a heavy beats, it not comfortable, how about
    pic
  3. 00:53:680 (53680|1) - how about move this to col [4]
  4. 00:56:334 (56334|1) - might ghost like Normal
  5. 01:11:844 (71844|3) - I suggest move this to col [2] to avoid double hit
CommandoBlack's Insane
  1. 00:30:211 (30211|2) - I suggest not do 4 jacks here even if have fast bass sound here, you can 00:30:313 (30313|2) - move this to col [4]
  2. 00:43:374 (43374|2) - ^
great map and I like this song so much!! like camellia so much !!! :)

GOOD LUCK
Vivyanne
1,215 posts
Joined December 2013
Vivyanne
1diff mod xd

papayapa
2016-11-10 20:12 Miryle: oi
2016-11-10 20:12 Miryle: https://puu.sh/sdNtE/d1173687d7.png
2016-11-10 20:12 Miryle: mod my map pls
2016-11-10 20:12 Miryle: <3
2016-11-10 20:48 HighTec: ?
2016-11-10 20:48 HighTec: fukin
2016-11-10 20:48 HighTec: marty
2016-11-10 20:48 HighTec: aaa
2016-11-10 20:49 Miryle: friend said to request a mod from you LOL
2016-11-10 20:49 Miryle: I was like "fuck it"
2016-11-10 20:49 HighTec: i could
2016-11-10 20:49 HighTec: after my test week is 
2016-11-10 20:49 HighTec: o v e r
2016-11-10 20:49 Miryle: :ok_hand:
2016-11-10 20:49 HighTec: so like this weekend or wednesday <3
2016-11-10 20:49 Miryle: Aww you're so nice <3
2016-11-10 20:51 HighTec: not rly
2016-11-10 20:51 HighTec: i just want kd for bn <3
2016-11-10 20:51 Miryle: waaaaaaaw
2016-11-10 20:51 Miryle: might as well irc quickmod and get it over with
2016-11-10 20:51 Miryle: :^)
2016-11-10 20:51 HighTec: z
2016-11-10 20:51 HighTec: irc mods
2016-11-10 20:51 HighTec: take me longer most of the times
2016-11-10 20:51 HighTec: than forum mods lol
2016-11-10 20:51 Miryle: o
2016-11-10 20:51 Miryle: fair enough
2016-11-10 20:51 HighTec: becus in irc
2016-11-10 20:52 HighTec: im picky \o/
2016-11-10 20:52 Miryle: LOL
2016-11-10 20:52 Miryle: irc is more fun tho imo
2016-11-10 20:52 HighTec: kinda
2016-11-10 20:52 Miryle: real-time feedback and stuff
2016-11-10 20:52 HighTec: yea
2016-11-10 20:52 HighTec: interaction between mapper / modder
2016-11-10 20:53 HighTec: makes up for a better discussion and makes ur point more clear
2016-11-10 20:53 HighTec: anyways wat even has to be modded
2016-11-10 20:53 Miryle: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123616 Camellia feat. Nanahira - PAPAYAPA BASS]
2016-11-10 20:53 Miryle: remember
2016-11-10 20:53 Miryle: jackhammers
2016-11-10 20:53 Miryle: LOL
2016-11-10 20:53 Miryle: your choice on what to mod tho
2016-11-10 20:53 HighTec: r
2016-11-10 20:54 HighTec: lets talk about the most diverse diff
2016-11-10 20:54 HighTec: so the hardest
2016-11-10 20:54 Miryle: etooo
2016-11-10 20:54 Miryle: okay o-o
2016-11-10 20:55 HighTec: i still dont agree on ar9,2 but thats just me
2016-11-10 20:55 HighTec: i feel like ar9 fits the bpm wayy better
2016-11-10 20:55 Miryle: but the wub parts
2016-11-10 20:55 Miryle: are really quick
2016-11-10 20:55 HighTec: yea but
2016-11-10 20:55 HighTec: ar9 makes it
2016-11-10 20:55 HighTec: easier
2016-11-10 20:55 HighTec: i tested it
2016-11-10 20:56 Miryle: asdasd
2016-11-10 20:56 Miryle: 9.1
2016-11-10 20:56 HighTec: SeemsGood
2016-11-10 20:56 Miryle: ayyy
2016-11-10 20:56 HighTec: 00:01:742 (4) - i get where u r coming from with these kind of sliders
2016-11-10 20:56 HighTec: but having them end on beats you otherwise made clickable it a bit..
2016-11-10 20:56 HighTec: weird
2016-11-10 20:57 Miryle: hmm
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: that one I can't really changed
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: change*
2016-11-10 20:58 HighTec: 00:03:476 (2) - also nc this instead of 00:02:864 (1) - becus (2) has a funky sound on it
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: because vocal ends on a blue
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: and i don't want a 1/4 slider
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: and i don't want a stream
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: but I also don't want a jump ;-;
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: nc'
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: d
2016-11-10 20:58 HighTec: yea it is just weird i know
2016-11-10 20:58 HighTec: but it's still
2016-11-10 20:58 HighTec: weird if u get me xd
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: yeah I getcha m8
2016-11-10 20:58 HighTec: most ppl do it and it triggers me lol
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: not gonna change it, it'll be the gimmick of the map
2016-11-10 20:58 Miryle: lmao
2016-11-10 20:59 Miryle: ACTION runs
2016-11-10 20:59 HighTec: 00:06:129 (1,2) - switch nc here too to keep it consistent with last changeg
2016-11-10 20:59 Miryle: i did change
2016-11-10 20:59 HighTec: 00:06:742 (2,3) - fuk dis kindof shit
2016-11-10 20:59 Miryle: 00:02:864 -
2016-11-10 20:59 Miryle: do be slider to red and blue is circle
2016-11-10 20:59 HighTec: SLIDEREND STREAM AA
2016-11-10 20:59 HighTec: o
2016-11-10 20:59 HighTec: g
2016-11-10 20:59 HighTec: ood
2016-11-10 21:00 Miryle: IM SORRY
2016-11-10 21:00 Miryle: IT IS ON THE RIGHT BEATS THO
2016-11-10 21:00 HighTec: 00:08:578 (1,2,3) - feel like dis can be spaced out more to have more emphasis on the beats and to make the rythm more clear
2016-11-10 21:01 HighTec: 00:10:619 (5,4) - stack slider tail more pefectly okok
2016-11-10 21:01 Miryle: done
2016-11-10 21:01 Miryle: holy shit
2016-11-10 21:01 Miryle: done
2016-11-10 21:01 Miryle: ;-;
2016-11-10 21:02 HighTec: 00:14:293 (1) - https://gabepower.s-ul.eu/VQdHw8y5 is better flow
2016-11-10 21:02 HighTec: also fix the blanket then u had before
2016-11-10 21:02 Miryle: done
2016-11-10 21:02 Miryle: also done
2016-11-10 21:03 HighTec: 00:20:211 (5) - ctrl+h'ing this slider would make it have a much bigger impact tbh
2016-11-10 21:03 HighTec: also now it just curves to nowhere and that looks silly
2016-11-10 21:03 HighTec: so having it aimed nowhere new note is actually better \o/
2016-11-10 21:04 Miryle: it curves to 6 tho
2016-11-10 21:04 Miryle: as blanketto
2016-11-10 21:04 HighTec: yea and that looks dubm
2016-11-10 21:04 Miryle: I could rotate 6
2016-11-10 21:04 Miryle: so that it points straight at the head
2016-11-10 21:04 HighTec: wait
2016-11-10 21:04 HighTec: 00:20:211 (5,3) - stack these tails ?
2016-11-10 21:05 Miryle: yeah
2016-11-10 21:05 HighTec: idk if that would break ur intentions but
2016-11-10 21:05 HighTec: it'd look more logical to me xd
2016-11-10 21:05 Miryle: I wanted it to stack
2016-11-10 21:05 Miryle: but the thing is if i change 5
2016-11-10 21:05 Miryle: it would ruin the stack there
2016-11-10 21:05 Miryle: ._.
2016-11-10 21:06 HighTec: tru
2016-11-10 21:06 HighTec: 00:20:415 (6,1) - imo these sliders could be more.. symmetrical
2016-11-10 21:06 HighTec: like perfect y axis symmetry
2016-11-10 21:06 HighTec: https://gabepower.s-ul.eu/Ht0OqNXE like so
2016-11-10 21:06 Miryle: would ruin 5's blanket LOL
2016-11-10 21:06 Miryle: but i get it
2016-11-10 21:06 HighTec: u dont rly have to move
2016-11-10 21:06 HighTec: 00:21:231 (3) - 
2016-11-10 21:07 HighTec: because you get https://gabepower.s-ul.eu/ONH4OB9P
2016-11-10 21:07 HighTec: which should still flow nicely
2016-11-10 21:07 Miryle: but blanket
2016-11-10 21:07 HighTec: f u k b l a n k e t s
2016-11-10 21:07 HighTec: 00:21:538 (5,2) - stack
2016-11-10 21:08 Miryle: changed it to be symmetrical
2016-11-10 21:08 Miryle: but i moved 00:20:211 (5) - instead
2016-11-10 21:08 Miryle: so i can keep the blanket 00:20:823 (1,3) -
2016-11-10 21:08 HighTec: o sure
2016-11-10 21:08 Miryle: also stacked
2016-11-10 21:08 HighTec: 00:23:680 (6,3) - ur stacking sucks lol
2016-11-10 21:09 Miryle: you know
2016-11-10 21:09 Miryle: i swear it was stacked at some point
2016-11-10 21:09 HighTec: osu is gay
2016-11-10 21:09 Miryle: yeah
2016-11-10 21:09 Miryle: ficksd
2016-11-10 21:10 HighTec: 00:30:619 (1) - imo this slider couldve been given a way more unique shape
2016-11-10 21:10 HighTec: instead of just a hard curve
2016-11-10 21:10 HighTec: because the sound is rather unique here
2016-11-10 21:10 HighTec: so making a unique form is cooleer 
2016-11-10 21:11 Miryle: asdasda
2016-11-10 21:11 HighTec: 00:34:293 (1,2) - same slidershape pls i mean like song is still in the same state
2016-11-10 21:12 Miryle: sorry fixed
2016-11-10 21:12 Miryle: i wanna keep the circle though
2016-11-10 21:13 HighTec: 00:44:599 (4) - uh on what tick is this ending
2016-11-10 21:13 HighTec: maybe ending it on a 1/4 tick somewhere would make it more consistent with the reset of the map
2016-11-10 21:13 HighTec: even if its not what the songs asking ofr
2016-11-10 21:14 Miryle: orz that moment when i changed the slider velocity and it fucked snapping
2016-11-10 21:14 HighTec: rip
2016-11-10 21:14 Miryle: fixu desu
2016-11-10 21:14 HighTec: 00:48:783 (2,3) - alignment lol
2016-11-10 21:15 Miryle: fixed
2016-11-10 21:15 HighTec: 00:53:476 (1) - https://gabepower.s-ul.eu/kZZviYcU ?
2016-11-10 21:15 HighTec: to give it crazy impact
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: that
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: is a 1/8 tho
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: LOL
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: THAT WOULD BE RIDICULOUS
2016-11-10 21:16 HighTec: I KNOW
2016-11-10 21:16 HighTec: BUT ITS LOW BPM
2016-11-10 21:16 HighTec: SO FUCK PLAYERS
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: IS STILL RIDICULOUS
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: IM NOT SHIIRN
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: OK
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: I DON'T DO SHIT LIKE THAT
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: BU
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: T
2016-11-10 21:16 Miryle: I did this https://puu.sh/sdRoS/c313de974f.png
2016-11-10 21:17 HighTec: g.
2016-11-10 21:17 Miryle: ok c00l
2016-11-10 21:18 HighTec: 01:07:762 (5,1) - i wanna blanket but its actually off
2016-11-10 21:18 HighTec: u can see with lower ar
2016-11-10 21:18 Miryle: fixed
2016-11-10 21:18 Miryle: just move it on the timeline lmao
2016-11-10 21:18 HighTec: 01:15:109 (2) - https://gabepower.s-ul.eu/HXIHoRZk triangular effect B)
2016-11-10 21:19 Miryle: sure why not
2016-11-10 21:19 Miryle: done~
2016-11-10 21:19 HighTec: 01:23:476 (3) - no sv change for emphasis ?:(
2016-11-10 21:20 Miryle: hmmmmmmmmmmm
2016-11-10 21:21 Miryle: sure
2016-11-10 21:21 HighTec: 01:41:231 (3,6) - make same slidershape and for 01:41:436 (4,5,6) - https://gabepower.s-ul.eu/63B2oyAL for a more natural flow
2016-11-10 21:21 HighTec: i guess just repetitive things for the rest of the map
2016-11-10 21:22 Miryle: done both
2016-11-10 21:22 HighTec: now that i notice it
2016-11-10 21:22 HighTec: >takes hp5.9 instead of 6.9
2016-11-10 21:22 Miryle: should i do
2016-11-10 21:22 Miryle: 6.
2016-11-10 21:22 Miryle: 9
2016-11-10 21:22 HighTec: YES
2016-11-10 21:23 HighTec: fuk players they should be able to stay alive .
2016-11-10 21:23 HighTec: also memes
2016-11-10 21:23 Miryle: fair enough
2016-11-10 21:23 Miryle: changed
2016-11-10 21:23 HighTec: that shud do it
2016-11-10 21:24 HighTec: now gib me da kd
CommandoBlack
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Joined September 2015
CommandoBlack

_Stan wrote:

Hey from my queue

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CommandoBlack's Normal
  1. 00:00:619 - I suggest you make there like you did here 00:03:885 - , cuz col [1] seem so blank and keep same is good~ xD. ok
  2. 00:05:721 (5721|1) - move this to col [1] , avoid double hit ok
  3. 00:12:150 (12150|1) - move this to col [1] ro avoid col [1] so blank here ok
  4. 00:19:803 (19803|1) - ^ ok
  5. 00:56:334 (56334|1) - I think this note is ghost note ok
  6. 00:59:599 (59599|2) - ^ ok
  7. from 01:05:823 - to 01:11:027 - col [1] have no note, it's distribution off balance
ok

CommandoBlack's Hard
  1. 00:01:232 (1232|1) - I do not think double hit here is good idea, and you not did here 00:07:558 (7558|2,7762|0,7762|1) - , but music and rhythm is same ok
  2. 00:08:170 (8170|2,8170|0) - I suggest not do this, for a heavy beats, it not comfortable, how about
    pic
    ok
  3. 00:53:680 (53680|1) - how about move this to col [4] ok
  4. 00:56:334 (56334|1) - might ghost like Normal it does go with a sound but i removed it on normal as it wasnt as apparent to what was being mapped there
  5. 01:11:844 (71844|3) - I suggest move this to col [2] to avoid double hit
ok

CommandoBlack's Insane
  1. 00:30:211 (30211|2) - I suggest not do 4 jacks here even if have fast bass sound here, you can 00:30:313 (30313|2) - move this to col [4]
  2. 00:43:374 (43374|2) - ^
These two are fine as they are

great map and I like this song so much!! like camellia so much !!! :)

GOOD LUCK
Thx for mod. especially on Normal

Update File
http://puu.sh/sdSpw.zip I am having some glitches in this song folder due to various name changes in the chart. This may cause problems with your folder. Make a backup in case this happens
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