ok. First block contains things that I find generally more troublesome, second block I just think should be changed as personal opinion.
00:42:535 (138,139,140,141,142) - This (and the same one in the last kiai) are the only times where the 1/8 bass is mapped as 1/8 while in all other appearances (e.g. 01:01:309 - ) it's 1/6. Personally, I wouldn't miss the 1/6 7-plets at all and would actually like to see 5-plet 1/8 there instead (including 01:05:373 (316,317,318,319,320,321,322) - with other colors of course), but it would also make sense if the 1/8 bass is mapped as 1/6 instead, because personally it doesn't ruin the flow.
> 01:33:631 (517,518,519,520,521,522) - Is 1/8+1/4. This is what the wrong 1/6 mapping leads to: Completely odd things.
> 02:38:663 (243,244,245,246,247,248) - ^ Tho this is mintong's part which makes it slightly more ok to have it like this.
01:46:405 (94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) - While I don't like the other short streams like this either (mentioned later), I strongly believe this one is a mistake. It's rhythm is not featured in the song in any way, compared to the other short streams which mostly do.
02:00:341 - Why is the 2nd crash on a lower volume? Seems pointless to me.
02:06:534 - Both streams don't make sense at all to me. There's nothing in song suggesting a stream, or 1/6. It feels more intense than actually intense parts of this song, it makes other 1/6 more irrelevant since it's mapped to nothing/ 1/3 sounds. Drum rolls or spinners would just make much more sense to me.
Part from 02:12:728 - to 02:23:566 - : Seems randomly mapped to me as well. It starts of with random rhythms like 02:13:502 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - , ends with "normal" snap 02:19:696 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - . Beginning of each bar seems random, too: Sometimes it's with a doublet on blue tick, a quad, or a triplet starting on red tick. Quads and triplets share the spots where they appear in (2nd, 4th, 6th, 8th bar) but the system behind them doesn't become apparent regardless, neither behind the rhythms mentioned first.
Next part features structure oddities like 02:27:437 (162,163,164) - vs. 02:33:825 (208,209,210,211,212,213) - as well.
02:57:631 - I don't wanna complain since I don't like them anyway, but: Why is there no stream here?
03:35:566 (28) - Also don't really get why this wasn't mapped as kat like the rest of the 3rd white ticks in this part.
> 03:46:405 (82) - ^ (tbh the 1/4 feels random too)
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00:02:955 (2) - Gives the map more speed than it should. The song is just starting, this is a rather calm intro and you are starting it off with a 1/4 doublet that is normally used to break boring structure and make the map feel more upbeat. This is too early for that, in my honest opinion and you should reconsider these.
> This also includes 00:07:406 (25) - 00:09:148 (31) - 00:11:858 (46) - 00:12:632 (51) - 00:13:406 (56) -
00:16:600 (73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - And as promised, my complaints about all the long streams. There are two things I dislike about them other than their sometimes odd rhythm: They really don't fit the song. Again there's no sound they are following, but that's a secondary issue for me. My main problem is that it actually disturbs it a lot as well, and there's one main suspect for this: 00:17:471 (82) - This very note. It connects two phrases that shouldn't be connected like this because it washes away their importance. 00:17:374 (81) - This is where one ends, 00:17:568 (83) - this is where one starts. Connecting them feels odd because of this as they should not be connected.
> What I also don't get is why this is a long stream even outside kiai while 00:20:761 - is missing.
<insert suggested color changes for 1/8 stream here>
01:01:115 (299,300,301,302,303,304,305) - As mentioned in above part I think this should instead be a 1/8 5-plet starting from 01:01:309 - with a single note 01:01:115 - here. Doesn't make sense to start the 1/6 this early imo.
01:08:664 (331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - These patterns don't make sense to me. They, too, cover up the vocals too much for me and the rhythm is seemingly random. It's also, luckily, not repeated 01:11:760 - here.
> also applies to 01:14:857 (375,376,377,378,379,380,381) -
01:24:728 (439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455) - Another stream that appears randomly to me, but..
01:29:373 - ...this one tops it off. With its random rhythm changes (oxxoxxo, then oxooxoxx) and no relation to song except "long notes" (long notes aren't several single notes), it ends as one of the bigger problems I personally have with the map while not being an as large issue as ones mentioned in the first block.
Mintong's part. Same things as mentioned in first block. I just fail to see a structure in many spots and when I believe I do it's overthrown two seconds later. I would just love more insight in sudden doublet rhythms or color usages because I can't fit them to drums, background instruments, or vocals (example being 02:50:082 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - where vocals on 02:51:147 - are ignored)
<Insert stuff here that repeats several times in the song like 1/6 or the short streams>
Here's hoping it doesn't cause unnecessary drama, good luck with the map.