1. Desolated (3.49 stars, 379 notes)
2. Easy (0.9 stars, 120 notes)
3. Hard (2.02 stars, 305 notes)
4. Normal (1.1 stars, 184 notes)

1. 03:28:070 - tbh it feels really empty here , even tho its an easy diff it wouldnt hurt if u put a not here cuz its only and only 68 bpm and also i have ranked easy diffs with 1/2 beats distance between the note and spinner
2. 03:58:953 (2) - holy http://puu.sh/rJTmt/cab1b82794.png is this real life xd

1. Good stuff

1. Is also fine but i m not kinda sure about 03:14:173 (4,5,1) - since this is the only place where u use this kinda of pattern and theres a high chance that newbies will click 03:14:835 (1) - too early thinking that its still a 1/4

1. 00:15:938 (2) - Maybe do a repeat slider here like 00:19:247 (2) - since both are almost the same sounds
2. 00:45:497 (4) - This sounds really really early , maybe try stacking it the next 1/8th tick (yellow tick b4 white tick) like we did stuff in dope xdd while 00:49:026 (3) - Sounds good
3. 00:53:218 (5) - maybe silent this slider's end cuz it sounds unnecessarily loud since the song is really calm here
4. 01:24:541 (5,7) - aa i know i m not supposed to do this but THIS overlap looks really bad , Atleast imo ~ moving it like 2 pixel will prevent hundreds of people from getting triggered xdd
5. 02:18:144 (7,1) - i dont agree with this stack tho cuz the head of 02:18:365 (1) - has a really intense vocal and the cymbal sound and stacking it under another note gives it no spacing emphasis at all
6. 03:13:732 (4,5,6) - Anti-DT triple xdd
7. 04:14:835 (1) - Delete this NC? u didnt put it here in any other diff so yeah

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

[Easy]

1. 03:28:070 - tbh it feels really empty here , even tho its an easy diff it wouldnt hurt if u put a not here cuz its only and only 68 bpm and also i have ranked easy diffs with 1/2 beats distance between the note and spinner nyeh alright
2. 03:58:953 (2) - holy http://puu.sh/rJTmt/cab1b82794.png is this real life xd omv D;

[Normal]

1. Good stuff :ok_hand:

[Advanced]

1. Is also fine but i m not kinda sure about 03:14:173 (4,5,1) - since this is the only place where u use this kinda of pattern and theres a high chance that newbies will click 03:14:835 (1) - too early thinking that its still a 1/4 Doesn't sound like a "high chance" imo, the leniency is pretty much noticeable even during gameplay, as long as it's still readable by approach circles or some players' way.

[Desolated]

1. 00:15:938 (2) - Maybe do a repeat slider here like 00:19:247 (2) - since both are almost the same sounds dad made some weird snapping tune difference in-between those though. Well, I didn't point out the exact division, but only the closest one that I've inputted at least. I'm pretty sure it suffices the current rhythm.
2. 00:45:497 (4) - This sounds really really early , maybe try stacking it the next 1/8th tick (yellow tick b4 white tick) like we did stuff in dope xdd while 00:49:026 (3) - Sounds good 1/8 is kinda a little late, I also tried 1/6 which would be a little more closer but not as what I expect it to be. at least for consistency with the next rhythm, complex snapping shouldn't really matter or implemented in my point of view.
3. 00:53:218 (5) - maybe silent this slider's end cuz it sounds unnecessarily loud since the song is really calm here no
4. 01:24:541 (5,7) - aa i know i m not supposed to do this but THIS overlap looks really bad , Atleast imo ~ moving it like 2 pixel will prevent hundreds of people from getting triggered xdd Uhmm on default skin, it somehow didn't quite overlapped with the circle even when looked closer. Even on my custom skin as well. I may be sure this should be okay~
5. 02:18:144 (7,1) - i dont agree with this stack tho cuz the head of 02:18:365 (1) - has a really intense vocal and the cymbal sound and stacking it under another note gives it no spacing emphasis at all Unstacking and making a jump for the piano track wouldn't make sense at all too tbh. It wouldn't even budge the emphasis though.
6. 03:13:732 (4,5,6) - Anti-DT triple xdd ikr
7. 04:14:835 (1) - Delete this NC? u didnt put it here in any other diff so yeah I already did because the combo looked too long and barely draining hp rate. So an NC would fit best.

bad mod , but i did what i could do~

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Easy:

2 minor things

01:13:070 (1,2) - v +
00:43:070 (1,2) - v +
00:51:894 (2,3) - v
01:21:894 (1,2) - v
01:25:423 (3) - v +
The overlaps in sections of same intensity should be the same I've probably improved three of the overlaps on one of the overlaps you mentioned and marked them as fixed with "+". The rest are intended for readabilities for beginners to introduce "halved-/quartered-covered sliders".

01:30:718 (2,3) - The sliderbody is too close to previous slider try move it roughly as far as the DS But it's not really that clustered through structure even when some notes are too close to awkwardly overlap or too far for some reason with the same distance spacing. As long as the cursor movement, or maybe flow, doesn't affect too much of the visibility of the objects.
03:21:012 (4,1) - ^


Normal:

Only the Overlap thingy again Sure thing, just a few of them I guess.


Advanced:

03:17:262 (4,5) - Would be nicer if the circles follow the curve of the slider instead of being straight I kinda tried making it a curve long ago, it doesn't really work for me even with looking out after the curved slider just after this. So, maybe keeping it straight might still keep up the structure.


Desolated:

01:28:512 (3,4) - These sliders are too close too each other compared to others Barely noticeable, but not a bad catch though!


Well pretty minor things in general but maybe it helps (^.^)/

Luma

davidminh0111 wrote:

Mod:
Desolated:
-00:28:512 (7, 1): Overlap Due to the distance spacing being a little more complex in the highest diff, overlaps may be inevitable to avoid solid or undermapped patterns.
-01:33:806 (5, 1): Overlap The same thing as above though.
-02:03:585 (7, 8): Too far away If you mean by this jump that it's too big, I may change.
-02:45:276 (6, 1): Don't stack them, your timing is not closer with No. 6, it may get confuse. In case of how the drumroll on the song track is building up for the kiai, it can possibly be jumpy. But I didn't want to further the patterning away from each other, so I stacked instead.
-03:07:335 (5, 1): Overlap Same thing
-03:09:100 (4, 6): ^

Advanced:
-01:39:982: Use spinner here Why a spinner here though? I've never done a consistency on the other difficulties by adding a spinner here, so following the ride sound, and maybe the vocals, doesn't seem to be the best thing to do here.
-01:58:953: The slider looks ugly, make it more beautiful Well, if you only provide a solution in order to improve the slider, what would it be? There's nothing in mind that I could do some curving or straightening or anything other than this one, so yeah....

I'm the last person to get your beatmap qualify soon, Congrats lol congratz

Mod:
Normal:
According to this beatmap, it has too many curve sliders, like 03:21:894 (It's okay to use the circle or straight sliders)
-02:53:214: Add circle here
-03:09:087: Add cirlce here
-03:58:512: ^
-04:12:629:^
-04:16:157:^