thanks^^Senritsu wrote:
oh God i'm really sorry for the late mod.. this okay
my exam just ended lols
here we go~
they're just suggestions, though, but, i hope they are helpful~
[Muzukashii]
00:39:856 (69) - i suggest you to change this to k. that shout is my reason. Hm, also did that in the parts after this.
00:54:856 (148) - change to k. the vocal keep getting higher and higher, and just pretend that they're going to the climax. d will ruin the fun here added a kat in the empty space instead
01:40:487 (13,14) - how about change them to D? hear that.. maybe the bass? or whatever it is, it is lower than the 01:41:119 (15) - nah
02:18:619 (70) - well.. i would prefer this as d, since the vocal of the pitch is a bit higher, and not as drastic as 02:18:619 (70) - to 02:18:856 (71) - hm yes
02:31:329 (131) - change to k? that "ka" at the end suit it.. k
[Oni]
00:17:592 (94) - remove this. oni is not all about streams. i didn't hear why do you must keep it here. and, why don't you give the player some break? lols no, wanted to have no 1/2 breaks for the 12 seconds
00:19:961 (112) - change this to k, and/or remove 00:20:119 nah, wanted d for vocals here and k for... well filling the breaks
00:29:908 (30,33) - hmm.. i prefer them to k, because the music is a little higher here sounds better with dons only
00:32:198 (45) - i wonder if you really place it here.. maybe you misplace this at 00:32:119? if yes, change to k, or no. vocals are delayed by a 1/16 note here (which is 1/4 in Osu)
00:37:803 remove this for the same reason as 00:17:592 (94) deleted one that comes later
00:50:277 (111) - change this to k? i hear you following the music here, and it sounds better as k imo changed 108 and 110 instead
01:01:013 (42) - isn't it better k here? it's lower than 43
01:43:645 (34) - d? hear the drum back there? I first wanted to do that, but the rest is k here (well K actually but I can't do that after a k stream)
02:02:592 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - what a stream.. o.o i suggest you separate them into pieces, with triplets.. this is too long, and a bit hard to read, judging from the approaching circles' speed. i'm really not good at choosing words. sorry x'D hm... I might change it a bit if more people say something about this but it's the only long 1/4 stream in the whole map and I actually want to keep that one^^
Uhh.. there are too many streams at Oni diff, and.. yeah, is this an inner oni or oni.. but it doesn't matter for me, at least :3
good luck~ ^^
Edit : done remodding this =w=;; God i didn't see the updates you upload lols :P
codes this time because windows being the crap it is
http://puu.sh/4I3wf.osu (oni)
http://puu.sh/4I3ws.osu (muzu)