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Tokyo Machine - OKAY [CatchTheBeat]

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WildOne94
581 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
WildOne94
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 February 2017 at 21:17:34

Artist: Tokyo Machine
Title: OKAY
Tags: Monstercat Electronic 8-bit Xinely uproar supremacy
BPM: 128
Filesize: 5375kb
Play Time: 03:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. A-OK (5.08 stars, 675 notes)
  2. Cup (1.41 stars, 270 notes)
  3. Platter (2.84 stars, 420 notes)
  4. Rain Collab (3.54 stars, 471 notes)
  5. Salad (1.95 stars, 310 notes)
Download: Tokyo Machine - OKAY
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[centre]OKAY!


Cup - Myself
Salad - Myself
Platter - Myself
Rain Collab - Collaboration with Xinely <3
A-OK (Overdose) - Myself


Thanks Modders
Hibari_Yagyu
Myle (x2)
Jusenkyo
murutattack
RoseusJaeger
Sorcerer
Kurokami
Paranoid Grapes
Deif
JBHyperion
ZiRoX
- Magic Bomb -

Thanks Testplayers
-Twistyy-
CLSW
JBHyperion
Jusenkyo
Ascendance
- Magic Bomb -
alienflybot
BennyBananas
And I guess all modders too as they would testplay to mod kek

Extra Big Thanks
lLinutionHD - For the awesome banner <3
Xinely - For the awesome collab with me <3
ZiRoX - For Bubbling and rechecks
- Magic Bomb - - For Qualifying and rechecks
Last edited by WildOne94 , edited 148 times in total.
Hibari_Yagyu
396 posts
Joined August 2013
Hibari_Yagyu
Hi~

So, this is a little (so little) NM for Not Okay

Try with AR 9,4 and OD same, feels better. 9,5 it's fine too
00:08:564 (1) - X72
00:08:681 (2) - X16
00:08:798 (3) - X96
00:08:915 (4) - X184
00:09:032 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - X344
00:46:532 (2) - X456
00:46:767 (3) - X232
00:47:939 (1) - Slider end in X504/Y72
00:50:282 (2) - X64
00:56:142 (3,4) - X256

All is okay xD, i like and maybe u can rank this fast, :3
GL♥
WildOne94
581 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
WildOne94

Hibari_Yagyu wrote:

Hi~

So, this is a little (so little) NM for Not Okay

All is okay xD, i like and maybe u can rank this fast, :3
GL♥
Duuuuuuuude This is too early D:.
I mean I am thankful for the mod as any mod is great to improve the beatmap but I only started this recently and I have many changes I want to apply ;w;.
So I will probably end up applying this mod when all diffs are done.

(Also just a note for next time. Try to put an explanation in your mod because if you just add in "X:123" then appliers will not understand why this is needed so please put in some detail as to why you are suggesting putting it there. It honestly also makes it look like a real lazy mod too just for KD).
lLinutionHD
lLinutionHD


centre,img,photo
WildOne94
581 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
WildOne94

lLinutionHD wrote:



centre,img,photo
Oh man is this for me for free to use O: ?
If So I would love to but you should tell people before making it for them or else it could be a waste of time XD.

If I can is it possible for maybe a few changes ? the "OKAY" part. The K almost looks like a "V" and is a little unclear with the font.
Possibly the bottom writing too could be a different colour or at least a border around the edge with different colour in the middle as it's hard to read.

Will put you in description too
WildOne94
581 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
WildOne94

Hibari_Yagyu wrote:

Hi~

So, this is a little (so little) NM for Not Okay

Try with AR 9,4 and OD same, feels better. 9,5 it's fine too - I actually never noticed I had it on 9AR on the dot. I was making a rain to start with and completely forgot to up the speed for overdose. I didn't do what you suggested but I did put it to 9.2
00:08:564 (1) - X72 - Err.... it already is on this O_o ? (maybe I changed earlier ... but it seems weird how I got it exactly on what you suggested)
00:08:681 (2) - X16 - Okay now something is definitely wrong. I think you're trying to help with my stream I guess?
00:08:798 (3) - X96 - It's fine as it is
00:08:915 (4) - X184 - ^
00:09:032 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - X344 - Nah because this would be against the wall and very bad for players.
00:46:532 (2) - X456 - This makes no difference at all.
00:46:767 (3) - X232 - No because the jump would be so much harder
00:47:939 (1) - Slider end in X504/Y72 - No ty.
00:50:282 (2) - X64 - no but I did nudge because it was not distance snapped correctly
00:56:142 (3,4) - X256 - Really ? just one nudge XD? Sure I guess but I don't see how this helped in anyway

All is okay xD, i like and maybe u can rank this fast, :3
GL♥
Dude I ain't going to lie. You need to work on your mods because you can't just post a notes coordinates and not explain why I should do this. This felt extremely lazy and most of the stuff was fine as it is. Please give an explanation next time or else people will wonder why they need to take your suggestions.

Thanks for the mod though
Lacrima
Beatmap Nominator
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima
Heey~ | oh it's my 100th post well k
[Cup]
  1. 00:47:939 (1,2) - this pattern is kinda flow breaking ;c
[Salad]
  1. 00:11:845 (4,1) - I think that's fine to reduce a distance here a little bit
  2. 00:19:814 (1,2) - same^, pretty clear strong sound
  3. 00:23:564 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:27:314 (1,2) - ^
  5. 02:38:564 (1,2) - ^
[A-OK]
  1. 00:26:845 (4,5) - well it plays well, but there are too many of these stacked notes, change them into something for fun ;c
  2. 00:30:126 (3,4) - I REALLY think a HD would be really nice here, so try to moving 00:30:360 (4) =>x320
  3. 01:16:767 (2,3) - pls decrease a distance a little bit
  4. 01:54:032 (2,3) - aw, these 1/1 jumps are annoying >o<
  5. 02:14:189 (1,2) - nu
platter is pretty good though!
WildOne94
581 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
WildOne94

Myle wrote:

Heey~ | oh it's my 100th post well k - Hue hue congratz XD
[Cup]
  1. 00:47:939 (1,2) - this pattern is kinda flow breaking ;c - Well I think the player even for beginners have enough time to catch this as there is quite a big wait time to get it. Also there are quite a few notes like this like at 02:56:845 (3,1) - which I still find fine.
[Salad]
  1. 00:11:845 (4,1) - I think that's fine to reduce a distance here a little bit - Wait... From the notes you say below it seems you mean increase spacing? If so either way I won't budge this at all as it's too hard to jump or weird to reduce.
  2. 00:19:814 (1,2) - same^, pretty clear strong sound - True but I don't want every one of these sounds to be a jump otherwise it would be too hard for a salad. And there are a lot of these around.
  3. 00:23:564 (1,2) - ^ - I'll do this one but only by a little bit just because I want to give 00:25:439 (1) - a little more room.
  4. 01:27:314 (1,2) - ^ - I actually changed this a little around but yeah I did increase it a little I think.
  5. 02:38:564 (1,2) - ^ - ^
[A-OK]
  1. 00:26:845 (4,5) - well it plays well, but there are too many of these stacked notes, change them into something for fun ;c - Fixed
  2. 00:30:126 (3,4) - I REALLY think a HD would be really nice here, so try to moving 00:30:360 (4) =>x320 - Nah as it would hyper into a quiet sound which I don't want. I could consider a little spacing but no hyper (I won't change until it's mentioned again though for the little spaccing).
  3. 01:16:767 (2,3) - pls decrease a distance a little bit - Literally if I reduce anymore it will not hyper anymore. So I only reduced a VERY tiny bit.
  4. 01:54:032 (2,3) - aw, these 1/1 jumps are annoying >o< - Reduced a bit
  5. 02:14:189 (1,2) - nu - Reduced also
platter is pretty good though! - Thanks >w<
Thanks for mod Myle :D
Cowboy
472 posts
Joined November 2011
Cowboy
M4M okay?

[General]
  1. Don't forget to uncheck Widescreen Support, doesn't matter, but to avoid problems in da future!
  2. You will add (on description) something about the artist like this: https://soundcloud.com/tokyo-machine
  3. The rest seems fine!
[Cup]
  1. 00:15:595 (2,1) - These notes are a little stacked, you give them a little more movement, 00:16:064 (1) - will be moved a bit to the right.
  2. 00:51:689 (1,2,3,4,1) - It is a good pattern, but it may be better if you do the following: (2) x: 328 (3) x: 224 (4) x:376 (1) x: 480
  3. 02:19:345 (2,1) - I see a little strange these sliders, (2) try to tilt slightly to the tail of (1) an image:
    Image
  4. 02:34:345 (2,1) - Notes stacked, move a (1) a bit to the right.
  5. 02:47:939 (1,1,2,3) - ^, 02:49:814 (1) - x: 144 02:50:282 (2) - x: 254 02:50:751 (3) - x: 144
  6. Nice cup, i like it.
[Salad]
  1. 00:15:595 (4,1) - It would be great if you add a jump here.
  2. 00:17:470 (2,1) - Jump here too. But it's better if you Ctrl+H this and move a bit to the right.
  3. 00:22:860 (3,1) - Jump here to mantain consistency with previous patterns.
  4. 01:22:392 (2,1) - I feel like a jump here would fit.
  5. 01:49:345 (3,1) - Notes stacked, move a bit (1) to the left.
  6. 02:19:345 (4,1) - Jump feels better.
  7. 02:55:204 (3,1) - Notes stacked too, feels better if you give more movement to these notes.
  8. 02:56:845 (4,1) - A jump here would fit, due to the start of a new section imo.
  9. 03:03:876 (2,3,4) - Do it something like this:
    Image
  10. Nice diff too! :3
[Platter]
  1. 01:04:814 (1,2) - You could do Ctrl G and move a little to the left, but be careful to not stack with following 01:05:751 (3,4,5,6) - notes.
  2. 01:19:345 (4,1) - It is a little strange, try to do something like:
    Image
  3. 01:52:157 (2,3,4) - It may be better that way:
    Image
  4. 03:04:110 (5,6) - Will be add a h-dash for a great ending!
I will finish the mod when Rain is complete and include the mod of Overdose.

Good luck on ranking!
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
SPOILER
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Title:OKAY
TitleUnicode:OKAY
Artist:Tokyo Machine
ArtistUnicode:Tokyo Machine
Creator:WildOne94
Version:Rain
Source:
Tags:Monstercat Electronic 8-bit Xinely
BeatmapID:1087185
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WildOne94
581 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
WildOne94

Jusenkyo wrote:

M4M okay?

[General]
  1. Don't forget to uncheck Widescreen Support, doesn't matter, but to avoid problems in da future! - Alright but might have SB names in Rain collab eventually
  2. You will add (on description) something about the artist like this: https://soundcloud.com/tokyo-machine - It's not really essential to do this
  3. The rest seems fine!
[Cup]
  1. 00:15:595 (2,1) - These notes are a little stacked, you give them a little more movement, 00:16:064 (1) - will be moved a bit to the right. - I honestly quite like these like this so I might keep unless mentioned again. Gives good emphasis.
  2. 00:51:689 (1,2,3,4,1) - It is a good pattern, but it may be better if you do the following: (2) x: 328 (3) x: 224 (4) x:376 (1) x: 480 - Confused here because there is no (4) unless I got rid of it before applying this O.o
  3. 02:19:345 (2,1) - I see a little strange these sliders, (2) try to tilt slightly to the tail of (1) an image: - Nah I think this fits nice and its fine for flow and play.
    Image
  4. 02:34:345 (2,1) - Notes stacked, move a (1) a bit to the right. - Done this on purpose
  5. 02:47:939 (1,1,2,3) - ^, 02:49:814 (1) - x: 144 02:50:282 (2) - x: 254 02:50:751 (3) - x: 144 - Only changed one because I like the rest
  6. Nice cup, i like it.
[Salad]
  1. 00:15:595 (4,1) - It would be great if you add a jump here. - I did O-o ? I might a fraction bigger though but VERY little.
  2. 00:17:470 (2,1) - Jump here too. But it's better if you Ctrl+H this and move a bit to the right. - ^
  3. 00:22:860 (3,1) - Jump here to mantain consistency with previous patterns. - ^
  4. 01:22:392 (2,1) - I feel like a jump here would fit. - I would but I don't want to add too many jumps here for a salad and it's a different direction so it could be very anti-flowy here.
  5. 01:49:345 (3,1) - Notes stacked, move a bit (1) to the left. - I like this stack. Gives a nice emphasis blast into the next section of the song imo
  6. 02:19:345 (4,1) - Jump feels better. - There is a jump here already
  7. 02:55:204 (3,1) - Notes stacked too, feels better if you give more movement to these notes. - Alright I agree with this one
  8. 02:56:845 (4,1) - A jump here would fit, due to the start of a new section imo. - I don't want any jumps around here where it's quieting down to the end
  9. 03:03:876 (2,3,4) - Do it something like this: - Although true it would play better.... I just wanted the last slider to end in the middle like some other diffs
    Image
  10. Nice diff too! :3
[Platter]
  1. 01:04:814 (1,2) - You could do Ctrl G and move a little to the left, but be careful to not stack with following 01:05:751 (3,4,5,6) - notes. - I think it's fine as it is and I also don't want to Ctrl + G because I thought it would get too left > right > left > right and wanted something that I didn't place down before.
  2. 01:19:345 (4,1) - It is a little strange, try to do something like: - There is nothing really wrong with what I have now.
    Image
  3. 01:52:157 (2,3,4) - It may be better that way: - Wanted to make different from 01:47:235 (3,1) -
    Image
  4. 03:04:110 (5,6) - Will be add a h-dash for a great ending! - No no no! It's far too quiet for a hyper
I will finish the mod when Rain is complete and include the mod of Overdose.

Good luck on ranking!
Thanks for the mod Jusenkyo :3
Moeruattack
762 posts
Joined June 2014
Moeruattack
#quickmod just for fun :)

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Rain Collab

00:44:657 (3) - Kinda sudden anti-flow, but only my opinion :p
02:10:673 (2) - Really hard, but really nice if this can be H-Dash to catch 02:10:907 (3).
02:15:360 (4) - Hard too, but still can make this one H-Dash to 02:15:595 (5).
02:34:110 (4) - Really expecting to add more distance between (3) and (4) and next (1).

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A-OK!~

00:30:360 (4) - I really expecting H-dash fruit on 00:30:126 (3) to catch 00:30:360 (4) with that beat but not sure, just idea :p
00:54:892 (6,7) - Not really a big deal but moving (6) to x:432 and (7) to x:384 seems clean.
01:54:970 (6) - Prefer if it looks similar like 00:54:892 (6,7) like moving 01:54:970 (6) to x:424.
02:01:298 (2) - Still passable, but might be a bit questionable in this section.

Other meh, very clean map :3

Platter, Salad and Cup is 👌
Good luck for ranking :)
WildOne94
581 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
WildOne94

murutattack wrote:

#quickmod just for fun :)

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Rain Collab

00:44:657 (3) - Kinda sudden anti-flow, but only my opinion :p - Oh yeah I think this was not snapped correctly so the spacing made it seem weird to catch. Fixed now though.

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A-OK!~

00:30:360 (4) - I really expecting H-dash fruit on 00:30:126 (3) to catch 00:30:360 (4) with that beat but not sure, just idea :p - Reason I didn't add a hyper or a dash here was because it was a very quietly said "Okay" voice. If it gets mentioned again though I will add a little dash as hyper is too much imo
00:54:892 (6,7) - Not really a big deal but moving (6) to x:432 and (7) to x:384 seems clean. - Just a little different from your positions as I thought I wanted a little more walking ease.
01:54:970 (6) - Prefer if it looks similar like 00:54:892 (6,7) like moving 01:54:970 (6) to x:424. - Oh yeah that was weird why it was spaced like that. Fixed.
02:01:298 (2) - Still passable, but might be a bit questionable in this section. - If mentioned again I will give it a Ctrl + G

Other meh, very clean map :3 - Woot woot :D

Platter, Salad and Cup is 👌
Good luck for ranking :)
Thanks for the mod Murutattack :3
Hareimu
611 posts
Joined March 2014
Hareimu
placeholder for a M4M~

[Rain Collab]
  1. Turn off the widescreen storyboard thingy on this diff.

[A-OK]
  1. 00:32:704 (4) - Having this stacked on top of the previous repeat slider could be changed by moving this object to the left or the right (or actually changing the repeat slider to 2 sliders, deleting this note and keeping the hyperdash between 00:32:704 (4) - and 00:32:939 (1) - ) so that there's more movement on this pattern overall. This is a catchy, danceable song you've got here, I think we all want all the movement we can have while playing it!

gotta finish it at some point, don't give kudos or apply changes until finished.
Last edited by Hareimu , edited 1 time in total.
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
all fixed

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256,128,172392,2,0,L|72:144,1,172.500006580353,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,208,173095,2,0,L|312:184,1,86.2500032901765,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,256,173564,6,0,P|115:197|197:209,1,172.500006580353,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,174267,2,0,L|152:208,2,172.500006580353,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,175673,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,112,176142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,216,176610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,176845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,136,177314,6,0,P|128:208|192:240,1,172.500006580353,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,241,178017,2,0,P|387:185|328:136,1,172.500006580353,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,178720,2,0,L|104:120,1,86.2500032901765,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,179189,6,0,L|440:208,1,172.500006580353,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,179892,2,0,P|168:128|128:216,1,172.500006580353,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,180595,2,0,L|384:224,1,86.2500032901765,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,181064,2,0,L|96:48,1,172.500006580353,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,181767,2,0,L|296:256,1,172.500006580353,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,182470,2,0,L|96:240,1,86.2500032901765,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,183173,2,0,L|352:160,1,86.2500032901765,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,104,183642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,96,184110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,80,184345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,88,184579,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,216,185048,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,185282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
WildOne94
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WildOne94
Updated :3

(That fresh new page smell.... HYPE)
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From lazy queue. (some of my suggestions may have been sniped)

General

You could make the AR on Cup 6 so the spread is consistent with the rest of the map.

Comment: You're spacing is very consistent but also the death of me because I'm very lazy when it comes to repeated issues as you'll see for Cup and Platter.

Cup

You're using very inflated spacing at times reads as dashes or is ambiguous whether it is a dash or not. For example at 00:01:064 (1,2) it feels like you have to dash here even when it's walk-able. Also, the spacing is intimidating for new players as well. The maximum spacing you should be using is 1.20x to 1.30x spacing to ensure everything is readable and catch-able for beginners.
In short, every where you used 1.50x spacing could read as a dash and needs to be nerfed a bit so it's not so catcher heavy just to catch is by plate-walking.

00:19:579 (2,1,2) – The anti-flow on slider one is hard for a new player to suddenly have to change direction to catch. To fix, I'd Ctrl+H this pattern 00:19:814 (1,2) and put it on X=272 so the anti-flow is removed and is no too taxing.

01:50:751 (3) – I don't think the anti-flow fits here because the song is building up here and the player won't expect this pattern. Ctrl+G the slider and move to X= 304 to fix, or at least how I'd fix.

02:19:814 (1,2) – Okay, 1.50x spacing definitely reads as a dash here, reduce distance so it's on X=64 for optimal results since the anti-flow is a bit hard on the player as well. Also, I'm not a fan of the anti-flow here when on the next pattern of the same sounds, you didn't do anti-flow as you did with this one. So even flipping the slider so there's not anti-flow would be a good idea as well to keep consistency.


Salad

00:02:470 (4,1) – This dash is a bit hard to read because the spacing visually looks walk-able while playing but it's not. Perhaps make (4) slightly more vertical so the dash is clearly readable.

01:45:595 (2,1) – This is a bit similar to the previous one, the horizontal-ness on (2) is a bit deceiving and could appear as walkable when it's not an making it slightly more vertical could give the player more of a queue you're supposed to dash, if that makes sense.

Nice Salad you got there.


Platter

Some of your h-dashes are a bit heavily spaced but they're playable at least, an example would at 01:45:595 (2,1) – since 3.35 spacing is more on the level of Rain and a bit intimidating for someone just starting with h-dashes. I'd recommend you going back and re-evaluating the spacing used on your h-dashes to have them be around 3.10x at most or to the point they trigger so players don't feel intimidated by them.

02:00:829 (4,1) – This hyper is very over-spaced and goes into anti-flow. 3.71x is more of Rain or Overdose level of spacing so nerfing this quite a bit will restore balance.

02:04:814 (1,2) – Same here with this crazy 3.81x spacing, needs nerf.

02:06:220 (8,1) – Hypers of 1/3 are not rankable in Platters with BPM higher than 120, unfortunately. Hopefully I didn't miss any previous 1/3 hypers, this was the first one I noticed, before this one but make sure you're not using these.

02:10:282 (9,1) - ^ A 1/3 hyper.

02:14:032 (6,1) - ^ Here too.

02:17:782 (10,1) - ^ RIP h-dash.


Rain

This diff is good, very balanced. Same for A-OK


Good luck with your map.
WildOne94
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RoseusJaeger wrote:

From lazy queue. (some of my suggestions may have been sniped)

General

You could make the AR on Cup 6 so the spread is consistent with the rest of the map. - Don't know why I had it on 5.5 tbf. Changed

Comment: You're spacing is very consistent but also the death of me because I'm very lazy when it comes to repeated issues as you'll see for Cup and Platter. - why would consistent spacing be bad in anyway O_o ? It would look a little odd if not.

Cup

You're using very inflated spacing at times reads as dashes or is ambiguous whether it is a dash or not. For example at 00:01:064 (1,2) it feels like you have to dash here even when it's walk-able. Also, the spacing is intimidating for new players as well. The maximum spacing you should be using is 1.20x to 1.30x spacing to ensure everything is readable and catch-able for beginners.
In short, every where you used 1.50x spacing could read as a dash and needs to be nerfed a bit so it's not so catcher heavy just to catch is by plate-walking. - There really is nothing wrong with the spacing at all. I found that people would have plenty of time to catch notes with the distances they are rn.

00:19:579 (2,1,2) – The anti-flow on slider one is hard for a new player to suddenly have to change direction to catch. To fix, I'd Ctrl+H this pattern 00:19:814 (1,2) and put it on X=272 so the anti-flow is removed and is no too taxing. - Fixed but put positioning differently

01:50:751 (3) – I don't think the anti-flow fits here because the song is building up here and the player won't expect this pattern. Ctrl+G the slider and move to X= 304 to fix, or at least how I'd fix. - Yeah good point. Fixed

02:19:814 (1,2) – Okay, 1.50x spacing definitely reads as a dash here, reduce distance so it's on X=64 for optimal results since the anti-flow is a bit hard on the player as well. Also, I'm not a fan of the anti-flow here when on the next pattern of the same sounds, you didn't do anti-flow as you did with this one. So even flipping the slider so there's not anti-flow would be a good idea as well to keep consistency. - I moved to the distance but will only Ctrl + G if it get's mentioned again.


Salad

00:02:470 (4,1) – This dash is a bit hard to read because the spacing visually looks walk-able while playing but it's not. Perhaps make (4) slightly more vertical so the dash is clearly readable. - Sure

01:45:595 (2,1) – This is a bit similar to the previous one, the horizontal-ness on (2) is a bit deceiving and could appear as walkable when it's not an making it slightly more vertical could give the player more of a queue you're supposed to dash, if that makes sense. - I honestly think this one is alright

Nice Salad you got there. - Thanks :D


Platter

Some of your h-dashes are a bit heavily spaced but they're playable at least, an example would at 01:45:595 (2,1) – since 3.35 spacing is more on the level of Rain and a bit intimidating for someone just starting with h-dashes. I'd recommend you going back and re-evaluating the spacing used on your h-dashes to have them be around 3.10x at most or to the point they trigger so players don't feel intimidated by them.

02:00:829 (4,1) – This hyper is very over-spaced and goes into anti-flow. 3.71x is more of Rain or Overdose level of spacing so nerfing this quite a bit will restore balance.

02:04:814 (1,2) – Same here with this crazy 3.81x spacing, needs nerf.

02:06:220 (8,1) – Hypers of 1/3 are not rankable in Platters with BPM higher than 120, unfortunately. Hopefully I didn't miss any previous 1/3 hypers, this was the first one I noticed, before this one but make sure you're not using these.

02:10:282 (9,1) - ^ A 1/3 hyper.

02:14:032 (6,1) - ^ Here too.

02:17:782 (10,1) - ^ RIP h-dash.

Fixed all for platter :D (DAM THE RULE OF 1/3 HDASHES THOUGH ;W;. So close to 120bpm.)

Rain

This diff is good, very balanced. Same for A-OK


Good luck with your map.
Thanks for the mod RoseusJaeger :D. Very nice mod.
wonjae
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I like tyranny better in uproar
Sorceress
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OKAY

[Cup]
  1. So you've used vertically stacked notes in this diff quite a few times but I feel it doesn't quite work emphasis wise. When notes are stacked in CtB it requires no input from the player, hands off keyboard, go for a walk, make a cup of tea. It's essentialy zero epmhasis on the stacked note. However doing this does make for good emphasis on the notes after where you're making movement again so it certainly has it's use but you've used it a lot on quite loud and strong beats.
    00:44:189 (1,2,3) - This is a good example of where I believe it both works and doesn't work. 00:44:892 (2) - is a strong sound and should really have some movement from the tail end of 00:44:189 (1) - Having it to the left so there's a direction change would fit nicely. However 00:45:360 (3) - being vertical I feel works really nicely. There's no strong beats here, just the vocals so it works well there and then helps to emphasise the movement to the start of the Kiai 00:46:064 (1) -
  2. 00:15:595 (2,1) - Heavy lack of movement here! Considering adding a vertical slider at 00:15:360 - for the "okay" sound somewhat to the left of 00:14:189 (1) - and then unwinding 00:16:064 (1) - so the head is more to the right of the playfield.
  3. 00:20:517 (2) - This sound deserves some movement, try x:160
  4. 01:00:595 (2) - Some itense sounds here that aren't really emphasised too well with the vertical slider and small distance to 01:01:064 (1) - I'd suggest something like this. I've split 01:00:595 (2) - into two seperate notes to increase the distance between them due to the low SV. Then moved 01:01:064 (1) - across so it's equal spacing to and from 01:00:829 (3) - The idea is to emphasise all the notes here with direction changes and a bit above average spacing.
  5. 01:14:189 (1) - Feels odd with the lack of movement from the tail end of 01:13:251 (2) - Try having 01:14:189 (1) - at x:152 01:14:657 (2) - at x:352
    and 01:15:126 (3) - x:152
  6. 01:19:345 (2) - I'd move this to x:376 and have it full horizontal going right
  7. 01:25:907 - You've skipped the sound here but mapped it earlier at 01:24:032 - I'd suggest to make 01:25:439 (1) - a fully horiztonal slider going left ending at 01:25:907 -
  8. 01:30:829 (2) - I'd move this either left or right of where it currently is. Either left for a direction change or off to the right to contrast with all the direction changes earlier on 01:29:189 (1) -
  9. 01:49:110 (3) - Okay? This almost works but it's stacked with the tail end of 01:48:173 (2) - so there's absolutely no movement for it. x:256 fits nicely but it will mean adjusting spacing on the notes following to make it fit however you'll probably want to consider the next point before you do anything.
  10. 01:53:564 (1) - This should really have equal emphasis as other notes such as 01:54:032 (2) - If you Ctrl+H 01:53:564 (1,2,3) - then this gets rid of vertical double whammy on both 01:53:564 (1,1) -
  11. 02:19:345 (2) - Here I'd do something similar to what I suggested at 01:00:595 (2) -
  12. 02:29:657 (2) - You know where this is going, needs some movement from 02:29:189 (1) -
  13. 02:34:814 (1) - Let's get some movement hyyyype! Try something like this I guess
  14. 02:49:814 (1) - Try this at x:136 for some movement
  15. 02:56:845 (3,1,2,1,2) - Ctrl+H this section to remove the stacks on 02:56:845 (3) - and 03:00:595 (3) -
[Salad]
  1. 00:22:860 (3) - Some more stacked notes here that seem out of place, try something like this
  2. 01:30:595 (2) - You could split this into two circles and slap a cheeky dash in here. 01:30:595 (2) - at x:416 and 01:30:829 (3) - at x:224
  3. 01:49:814 (1) - There's no movement to this when a dash would actually go very well. If you move 01:49:345 (3) - to about x:480 it gives you a lot of room to play about with 01:49:814 (1) - and make a dash here.
  4. 03:02:470 (2) - Try at x:464 for that movement hype.
[Platter]
  1. 00:53:095 (3) - Bit of an awkward flow stopper here as it's a very small distance from 00:52:157 (2) - Try adding some more distance here.
  2. 01:43:017 (2) - aaaaa no movement
  3. 01:46:767 (2) - aaaaa no movement
  4. 02:02:939 (1,2,3) - aaaaa no movement. Here I'd move this to x:456
  5. 02:38:564 (1) - This slider tail is pretty soft so it's not really a problem being vertical but I'd give it just a slight tilt to the right for aesthetic reasons or something like that.
  6. 02:49:814 (1) - aaaaa no movement
[Rain Collab]
  1. 00:19:345 (4) - Like in the platter it's a bit awkward here with the low distance from 00:18:642 (3) - Try to increase it
  2. 01:07:392 (3) - Would probably tilt this a bit
  3. 01:45:595 (3,4) - Hmmm, don't think these work particularly well, probably best of as individual notes
  4. 02:31:532 (2,3,4) - I'd throw some inwards tilt onto these rather than pure vertical
[A-OK]
  1. 00:04:579 (5) - More vertically! Try moving 00:04:579 (5) - to x:176 and 00:03:876 (4) - to x:88
  2. 00:07:860 (5) - Keeping up with my onslaught against these stacks, try moving this to x:104
  3. 00:20:517 (3) - I'd angle this like so for that movement(tm) without getting rid of the hypers.
  4. 00:32:704 (4) - x:40 for movement hype?
  5. 00:38:564 (1) - Quite a strong beat, certainly needs some movement
  6. 00:46:064 (1) - Distance from 00:45:360 (5) - feels too small, try having 00:46:064 (1) - start around x:40 and have it tilting off to the right
  7. 00:47:939 (1) - Add a teeny tiny bit of inward tilt to this?
  8. 00:54:501 (4,5) - This is a pretty tight dash, either reduce the distance between these two a bit or increase to make a hyper if you want
  9. 02:02:939 (1,2) - Try 02:02:939 (1) - at x:72 and 02:03:095 (2) - at x:88 to spice it up
  10. 02:34:345 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try rearranging this like so. It adds some movement from 02:33:876 (3) - and builds up to the dash to 02:34:814 (1) - nicely
  11. 02:58:954 (5) - Throw some movement in here!
Hope it's of some use to you Sarah.
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