1. Inner Oni (4,49 stars, 1836 notes)

Nofool wrote:

Well ez guess first part is from midinaiit then u guys normally alternated each part g g u should write it somewhere if you want pple to specifically mod for each mappers tho xd

[Inner Oni]
* - 00:16:861 (25,26,27,28) - sounds more like dkkd like - 00:20:553 (49,50,51,52) -. k
* - 00:26:438 - id add a k here and remove - 00:26:899 (92) - / - 00:27:130 (94) - and - 00:27:361 (96) - => emphasize those 3 k as you emphasized 3 single notes each time for the 2 previous structures. sounds good
* - 00:53:091 (101,102,103,104) - im not a picky guy but this is clearly 1/4, i see what you are trying to follow but idk, dkk 1/4 plays pretty ok too.
* - 01:00:707 (150,151,152,153) - something like ddd d or dkd d might plays better, getting - 01:01:168 (153,154) - out of 1/4 sounds good. if you make it dkd d maybe you could even add a k at - 01:00:591 -.
* - 01:12:822 - k ? to get a 4 note pattern like at - 01:09:245 (5,6,7,8) -. idk, doesn't follow anything imo lol
* - 01:40:284 - add d here and change - 01:43:861 (34) - to k ? well first because both spot sound more like it and second suggestion also for variety.
* - 01:53:207 - ^. Also 'bout this part overall which is musically the same than at the beginning, i suppose this isn't the same guy that mapped both. i rather prefer the first one at the beginning which emphasize some specific 1/2 and get sometyhing more consistent. i suggest you to try making something a lil bit more similar about that.
* - 02:25:861 - from here to - 03:10:168 - THIS DESERVES A KIAI PLS I'll thnk about it
* - 03:10:168 - id have prolly made that slow down smoother with like more SV/notes but great work still, especially on volums. I changed it a bit, slows every 0.02x
* - 03:33:822 (52) - / - 03:34:515 (57) - k ?? for the lil difference with both previous patterns and to reflect a bit what you did at - 03:37:399 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) -. changed
* - 03:49:284 (128) - k here ? ^. ^
* - 04:01:861 -hmm until there id make it smoother again....... this speed up is kinda weird, should be more progressiv. I was about to say the same for the following SVs but it's pretty cool while playing smh lol.
* - 04:12:938 (108,109,110) - ddkd 1/6 would somewhat fit here idk, cant exactly tell the correct snapping but the sound seems to be p-ok for 1/6.
* - 04:35:091 (96) - from here id make it crazier than just some sorta copy of the first half as the instruments get higher. like - 04:35:322 (97,98,99,100) - dkddk instead of ddd k, - 04:36:130 (102) - k instead of d, - 04:37:284 (110) - k instead of d again + k at - 04:37:745 - etc... well i hope u get me. Changed something
* - 04:54:015 (216,217,218) - those SV aren't really worth it imo, play weird more than reflecting the song. if u wanna use SV there i suggest you to make the incoming part faster then, like x1,15 instead of 1,05. I wanted to make this map playable with all mods lol
* - 05:04:630 - what i said for the similar part around 1:40, i would make this more similar to the beginning.
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id say weird map but the song sounds like it and it's pretty cool to play in the end lol.. good luck

Nofool wrote:

Well ez guess first part is from midinaiit then u guys normally alternated each part g g u should write it somewhere if you want pple to specifically mod for each mappers tho xd

[Inner Oni]
* - 00:53:091 (101,102,103,104) - im not a picky guy but this is clearly 1/4, i see what you are trying to follow but idk, dkk 1/4 plays pretty ok too. Ehhhh it doesn't feel right to me as 1/4, so I changed to to kdkk(kddk) to better emphasize what I was trying to map
* - 01:00:707 (150,151,152,153) - something like ddd d or dkd d might plays better, getting - 01:01:168 (153,154) - out of 1/4 sounds good. if you make it dkd d maybe you could even add a k at - 01:00:591 -. I see what you are trying to suggest here but I feel the flow of how it is mapped now feels better than the proposed suggestion. The way the dkd moves into the single k afterwards gives it a nice pop and I like how that plays
* - 01:40:284 - add d here and change - 01:43:861 (34) - to k ? well first because both spot sound more like it and second suggestion also for variety. I like that one! Changed!
* - 01:53:207 - ^. Also 'bout this part overall which is musically the same than at the beginning, i suppose this isn't the same guy that mapped both. i rather prefer the first one at the beginning which emphasize some specific 1/2 and get sometyhing more consistent. i suggest you to try making something a lil bit more similar about that. The reason for the discrepancy is because the second part (Starting where you timestamped) has a lot more synth going on in the background and overall feels like a more full section of music so I wanted to reflect that by adding in more notes in contrast to the first half
* - 03:10:168 - id have prolly made that slow down smoother with like more SV/notes but great work still, especially on volums. Mid is the SV wizard he can handle this how he chooses
* - 04:01:861 -hmm until there id make it smoother again....... this speed up is kinda weird, should be more progressiv. I was about to say the same for the following SVs but it's pretty cool while playing smh lol. Again, mid is the SV boi so he can tackle this how he chooses
* - 04:12:938 (108,109,110) - ddkd 1/6 would somewhat fit here idk, cant exactly tell the correct snapping but the sound seems to be p-ok for 1/6. Added it as dkkd!
* - 05:04:630 - what i said for the similar part around 1:40, i would make this more similar to the beginning. Same as the other suggestion, the synth here is a lot more full and it's also the ending of the song and there are a lot more pangs and other weird noises going on so it's got a different feel to it
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id say weird map but the song sounds like it and it's pretty cool to play in the end lol.. good luck

Thank you kindly for your mod!

komasy wrote:

I'm not good at using English, sometime I used google translation. sorry

Mod

Don = d │ Kat = k │ Big Don = D │ Big Kat = K

[General]

I thought there were some places where I could lower the volume.(for example: 00:00:010 - 01:38:663 - 03:24:817 - 05:05:433 - ) Will check onto that

I thought offset is a little early. 10->16~18? idk about offset, because I can play it well no problem ;w;

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:14:779 - From here the density has risen sharply. If I were, I will erase some notes in the first half to lower the density and gradually increase the density towards the second half. By doing it you can make the map have a good flow imo. Alright, deleted some notes
2. 02:07:394 - I think you can delete this note. There is no main synth. okay
3. 02:34:856 - 02:38:548 - 02:45:933 - 03:45:471 - change to k? There are many kd and dk pattern like kdkdk and dkd. It provides diversity imo. Changed all except 03:45:471 - since it's following the melody and being consistent with 03:45:471 -

Good Luck

komasy wrote:

I'm not good at using English, sometime I used google translation. sorry

Mod

Don = d │ Kat = k │ Big Don = D │ Big Kat = K

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:52:971 - 00:53:086 - If either is changed to d, the player becomes easy to hit. I like the way it plays currently, don't want to change the pattern for just the sake of making it easier
   
2. 01:38:779 - As the songs are very quiet and after the excitement, if I were you I erase some notes and lower the density of the map. And gradually increase the density toward here: 02:05:548 - . Now player may get tired because these are of similar density. The density is already scaling, albeit not as much as I guess it could be. I think it follows the synth pretty well here though, even if there isn't any supporting instruments, the synth is still pretty prominent and complex so I'd like to stick to following that. If more people mention this being a problem though, I could try to scale it back a bit more but currently I like where it stands
   
3. 02:57:010 - change to k? It may help enphasizing next big d note.(Similar reason:03:04:394 - )Changed!
4. 03:09:933 - You can change to d because the pitch is low.I changed 03:09:817 (97) - and 03:09:356 (93) - to d in keeping with your suggestion!
5. 03:17:894 - 03:18:586 - 03:19:279 - 03:19:971 - By erasing these, you can adapt to the atmosphere in which the song is going quiet. Also, because it can prevent the five consecutive patterns from continuing, players will not get bored. (same 03:21:240 - ) You can also emphasize the area where the sound from 03:24:933 - is large. Oh, I like that idea! I always did think that section was a bit strange with the desnity as it go quieter! I made it so the patters are x xxx x xxx x xxx. Thank you again!
6. 04:15:240 - 04:15:933 - As the pitch gradually increases, how about changing these to k and following it? Changed! I like the idea. I am thinking about making that one stream but that might be a bit much lol. Guess I'll see how it goes.

Good Luck

Thank you kindly for your mod!