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Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Rem

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Topic Starter
Alsty-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 2, 2017 at 2:23:25 PM

Artist: Aimer with chelly (EGOIST)
Title: ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix)
Source: 甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags: Koutetsujou no Kabaneri Ending Theme 1 Kabaneri of the iron fortress DnB SCL-1987 daydream SME Records hiroyuki sawano
BPM: 178
Filesize: 8163kb
Play Time: 03:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another Kabaneri - 4Key (3.94 stars, 2188 notes)
  2. Beginner Nue - 4Key (1.34 stars, 683 notes)
  3. Hyper Koutetsujou - 4Key (2.83 stars, 1685 notes)
  4. Intermediate Bushi - 4Key (2.01 stars, 1158 notes)
Download: Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Qualified by Critical_Star

Thank you Verniy_Chan for awesome BG!
Please visit REDSHiFT official page
HERE! :3


Changelog
21/07/2016 - submitted via in-game beatmap submission
22/07/2016 - Hyper Koutetsujou finish hitsounded and add Intermediate Bushi & Beginner Nue Diff
23/07/2016 - Ready for mods , Adjusting HP and OD rate for all difficulty.
24/07/2016 - repairing shitty SV on another diff's
04/08/2016 - just delete weird inherited time on Hyper @@
09/08/2016 - Compressing the mp3 quality and change the source
03/09/2016 - Changing hitsound , thankyou dudehacker!
12/09/2016 - Fixing Over storyboard hitsound , and BG changed!
18/09/2016 - BG changed again ! thankyou Verniy_Chan! and fixing metadata
29/09/2016 - fixed some SV and fixing hitsound issues
04/11/2016 - fixing hitsound
06/11/2016 - fixing meta data
01/02/2017 - fixing hitsound
Special thanks
- dudehacker for awesome hitsound
- Verniy_Chan for awesome BG
- Evening for SV checking =3=
- All modder that help this map
- Star giver
- And you that was playing and like this map
Amids
- Ly0572 -
hi~


NM | M4M

1|2|3|4|5

check aimod // ctrl+shift+a
maybe change the volume to 30-40



begginer nue
00:24:256 (24256|2) - delete
00:24:930 (24930|1,24930|0,25604|2,25604|3) - suggest change to an LN at col. 4
00:25:604 - add to 3
00:26:952 (26952|1) - delete
00:29:649 (29649|2) - ^
00:30:323 (30323|0,30323|1,30997|3,30997|2) - change also to an LN at col. 1
00:30:997 - add to 2
00:31:334 (31334|1) - move to 3
00:35:042 (35042|1) - delete
00:35:717 (35717|3,35717|2,36391|0,36391|1) - change to LN col. 2
00:36:391 - add to 4
00:37:739 (37739|2,38076|0,38413|2,38750|0,39087|2,39087|1) - delete
00:38:413 - LN to col. 3 ends here 00:39:087 -
00:39:087 - add also anote to 1
00:39:424 (39424|0) - move to 2
00:40:436 (40436|3) - delete
01:04:874 - forgot a note here
01:05:885 - ^
01:10:099 (70099|0) - this LN should maybe end here 01:11:110 -
01:16:840 - add note to 1
01:17:177 (77177|0) - delete
01:23:413 - add note here
01:24:761 - add to 4
01:26:110 - add to 1
01:26:278 (86278|0) - move to 2
01:26:784 - add note here
01:28:806 - ^
01:34:200 - ^
02:13:301 - add to 3 or 4
02:13:469 - add to 2 maybe.. coz u put doubles here 02:16:166 -
02:15:997 - add to 1
02:22:233 - add to 1 or 3
02:23:582 - ^ 3
02:24:930 - ^ 1
02:30:323 - ^ 4
02:31:672 - ^ 1
02:31:840 (151840|3,152177|1) - delete
02:33:020 - add to 3
02:35:717 - ^ 3
02:35:717 - ^ 2
02:39:761 - ^ 2
03:14:312 (194312|2,194649|1) - delete
03:14:481 - add here
03:14:986 (194986|3) - delete also
03:33:863 (213863|3,214368|0) - delete
03:35:379 (215379|0) - ^
Hyper Koutetsujou
00:03:188 (3188|3) - move to 3
00:03:357 (3357|0) - move to 4
00:03:526 (3526|2,3694|1,3863|3,4200|0,4368|2) - ctrl+h
00:05:548 (5548|0,5717|1) - ctrl+j
00:13:469 (13469|1,13638|0) - ^
00:16:840 (16840|1,17009|0,17177|2,17346|3,17514|1) - ctrl+h
01:11:026 (71026|2) - extend this LN here 01:11:447 -
01:28:806 - add note
01:29:143 - ^
01:31:840 - ^
01:32:867 - ^
02:16:166 - add to 4 maybe
02:26:110 - add to 4
Topic Starter
Alsty-

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi~


NM | M4M

1|2|3|4|5

check aimod // ctrl+shift+a
maybe change the volume to 30-40



begginer nue
00:24:256 (24256|2) - delete ill keep this
00:24:930 (24930|1,24930|0,25604|2,25604|3) - suggest change to an LN at col. 4 LN will make the consistency broken i didnt put it since early
00:25:604 - add to 3 triple not is not recommended for beginner diff's
00:26:952 (26952|1) - delete same as first
00:29:649 (29649|2) - ^ ^
00:30:323 (30323|0,30323|1,30997|3,30997|2) - change also to an LN at col. 1 same as second
00:30:997 - add to 2 triple not is not recommended for beginner diff's[/color
00:31:334 (31334|1) - move to 3
00:35:042 (35042|1) - delete
00:35:717 (35717|3,35717|2,36391|0,36391|1) - change to LN col. 2
00:36:391 - add to 4
00:37:739 (37739|2,38076|0,38413|2,38750|0,39087|2,39087|1) - delete
00:38:413 - LN to col. 3 ends here 00:39:087 -
00:39:087 - add also anote to 1
00:39:424 (39424|0) - move to 2
00:40:436 (40436|3) - delete
01:04:874 - forgot a note here
01:05:885 - ^ added
01:10:099 (70099|0) - this LN should maybe end here 01:11:110 - i take synth for that double
01:16:840 - add note to 1 nope its single bass
01:17:177 (77177|0) - delete ok
01:23:413 - add note here rejected
01:24:761 - add to 4 ^
01:26:110 - add to 1 ^
01:26:278 (86278|0) - move to 2 to much tap on middle course
01:26:784 - add note here i just make it drum and bass no other
01:28:806 - ^
01:34:200 - ^
02:13:301 - add to 3 or 4
02:13:469 - add to 2 maybe.. coz u put doubles here 02:16:166 - theres section change , pattern also change
02:15:997 - add to 1
02:22:233 - add to 1 or 3 umm , i take synth for this pattern , no drum and bass
02:23:582 - ^ 3 ^
02:24:930 - ^ 1^
02:30:323 - ^ 4^
02:31:672 - ^ 1^
02:31:840 (151840|3,152177|1) - delete ^
02:33:020 - add to 3 ^
02:35:717 - ^ 3 ^
02:35:717 - ^ 2 ^
02:39:761 - ^ 2 ^
03:14:312 (194312|2,194649|1) - delete
03:14:481 - add here
03:14:986 (194986|3) - delete also
03:33:863 (213863|3,214368|0) - delete ah this is , i missplace this
03:35:379 (215379|0) - ^ ok
Hyper Koutetsujou
00:03:188 (3188|3) - move to 3 nope
00:03:357 (3357|0) - move to 4 ^
00:03:526 (3526|2,3694|1,3863|3,4200|0,4368|2) - ctrl+h i will consider it
00:05:548 (5548|0,5717|1) - ctrl+j i make like that because of pitch relevance
00:13:469 (13469|1,13638|0) - ^ ^
00:16:840 (16840|1,17009|0,17177|2,17346|3,17514|1) - ctrl+h ^
01:11:026 (71026|2) - extend this LN here 01:11:447 - ok
01:28:806 - add note
01:29:143 - ^
01:31:840 - ^
01:32:867 - ^
02:16:166 - add to 4 maybe i add to 3
02:26:110 - add to 4ok
thanks for mod :D


UPDATED
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix) (Alsty-)

Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• 192kbps audio bitrate is a must, fix the mp3.

Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[Hyper Koutetsujou]
SPOILER
OD HP are quite high despite its hyper.
Suggesting: OD 7.5 | HP 7.5

00:02:683 (2683|1,2851|0,3020|1,3188|3) - I think it is better if this is the stair patterned or alternate stair one because of that stair changing pitch. Suggesting: http://puu.sh/qhokH/b2a1a7e9fa.png which fits along with the 00:03:357 (3357|0,3526|2,3694|1,3863|3) - . If accepted, you can use it as well on the other similar sounds after.

00:09:424 (9424|1) - move to 1 different pitch than 00:09:087 (9087|1) -

00:10:267 (10267|2,10436|1,10604|0) - ctrl H which fits more for the pitch going low and gives a clear vision before the LNs.

00:21:559 - until 00:22:908 - It is better to put LNs here as it has more long sounds and even stronger long sound than 00:10:773 (10773|2,11110|1,11447|0,11784|3) -

00:27:964 (27964|2) - move to 4 for the violin-like sound pitch shift

00:48:188 (48188|1) - would be better if its on column 3 for better execution of 00:48:526 (48526|0,48694|0,48863|0,49031|0) -

00:49:368 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/qhoyo/90c0b153b7.png for the percussion roll = stairs, and doubles on 2|3 as it differs on pitch than 00:47:177 (47177|1,47177|0,47683|0,47683|1) -

00:51:896 (51896|3,52065|2,52233|1,52402|0) - feels awkward as it doesn't actually follows any long sound within 1/2 measures. Would be better if you follow the vocal + the bass synth at the background which will be something like this: http://puu.sh/qhoHl/c4624f5e0a.jpg

01:00:997 (60997|0) - move to 3 to give a better view for 01:01:334 (61334|1,61503|0,61503|1,61672|1,61672|0) - also to avoid eerie feeling for left hand. If applied, might as well 01:01:334 (61334|1) - move to 1 for more comfortable execution.

01:08:919 (68919|1,69003|0) - I suggest to swap column so it can be 1 , 2 , 3|4 This will make the current phase more comfortable to players. Apply it as well for: 01:09:256 (69256|2,69340|3,69593|1,69677|0,69930|2,70014|3) -

01:18:694 (78694|0) - you can change this to LN until 01:19:200 - but with that, you need to rearrange 01:19:200 (79200|2,79200|0) -

01:28:469 (88469|0,88469|1) - ctrl H for more comfortable pattern.

02:17:514 - add note to 4 here, since same sound as previous notes. Also it won't be hard to shift to 3|4 and 1|2 since its on 1/2 measure line (red and white).

02:18:863 (138863|0,138947|1,139031|3,139115|2,139200|1,139284|0,139368|2,139452|3,139537|0,139621|1,139705|2,139790|3,139874|2,139958|1,140042|0,140127|1) - The snap should be 1/3 and must be fixed immediately

02:20:211 - until 02:21:559 - much better if there's an LN for that loud long sound effect.

03:52:739 (232739|2) - remove sudden double here without additional instrument. It should be atleast at 03:52:908 - since there's a "yeah" vocal similar to 03:52:233 (232233|0,232233|1) -

[Another Kabaneri]
SPOILER
Suggestind OD 8 | HP 8

00:10:773 (10773|0,10815|1,10857|2,10899|3,10941|0,10983|1,11026|2,11068|3,11110|0,11152|1,11194|2,11236|3,11278|0,11320|1,11363|2,11405|3,11447|0,11489|1,11531|3,11573|2,11615|0,11658|1,11700|3,11742|2,11784|1,11826|0,11868|3,11910|2,11952|1,11995|0,12037|3,12079|2,12121|1) - The right snap is only 1/4 for the violin-like sound. 1/8 is too much. Must be fixed.

00:47:177 (47177|0,47177|1,47683|3,47683|2,48188|1,48188|0) - These LNs length are not snapped on 1/2 measure lines. Same with the upcoming LNs of Synthesizers, Must be fixed.

00:48:652 (48652|3,48652|2,48820|1,48820|0,48989|0,48989|1) - These doubles are not snapped on the 1/2 measure lines as well. Correct them and must be immediately fixed.

02:18:947 (138947|1,138947|0,139073|0,139073|1,139200|3,139200|2,139284|0,139284|1,139410|3,139410|2,139537|1,139537|0,139621|2,139621|3,139705|1,139705|0,139832|2,139832|3,139958|1,139958|0,140084|2,140084|3) - same as Hyper, the notes should be at 1/3 snap.

03:10:099 - until 03:31:672 - you might want to buff/add more notes in this time section as it is really easy for the last difficulty not to mention its intense and fast part of the song. You can note for the 1/4 hihat and map every 1/2 red lines with singles. Your choice~

03:55:773 - add note to 1 or even at 4 since final sound is stronger than 03:55:604 (235604|2,235604|1) -

[Overall]
Really nice song pick~ Thank you for the M4M and Goodluck~
Topic Starter
Alsty-

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix) (Alsty-)

Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• 192kbps audio bitrate is a must, fix the mp3. i will compress the mp3 later u.u

Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[Hyper Koutetsujou]
SPOILER
OD HP are quite high despite its hyper.
Suggesting: OD 7.5 | HP 7.5 ok

00:02:683 (2683|1,2851|0,3020|1,3188|3) - I think it is better if this is the stair patterned or alternate stair one because of that stair changing pitch. Suggesting: http://puu.sh/qhokH/b2a1a7e9fa.png which fits along with the 00:03:357 (3357|0,3526|2,3694|1,3863|3) - . If accepted, you can use it as well on the other similar sounds after. re-arrange , the last part i place it on 3

00:09:424 (9424|1) - move to 1 different pitch than 00:09:087 (9087|1) - done

00:10:267 (10267|2,10436|1,10604|0) - ctrl H which fits more for the pitch going low and gives a clear vision before the LNs.i put the last notes on 1[/colo]

00:21:559 - until 00:22:908 - It is better to put LNs here as it has more long sounds and even stronger long sound than 00:10:773 (10773|2,11110|1,11447|0,11784|3) -

00:27:964 (27964|2) - move to 4 for the violin-like sound pitch shift i will keep this

00:48:188 (48188|1) - would be better if its on column 3 for better execution of 00:48:526 (48526|0,48694|0,48863|0,49031|0) - ok!

00:49:368 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/qhoyo/90c0b153b7.png for the percussion roll = stairs, and doubles on 2|3 as it differs on pitch than 00:47:177 (47177|1,47177|0,47683|0,47683|1) - accepted but it put bass on 3|4 :3

00:51:896 (51896|3,52065|2,52233|1,52402|0) - feels awkward as it doesn't actually follows any long sound within 1/2 measures. Would be better if you follow the vocal + the bass synth at the background which will be something like this: http://puu.sh/qhoHl/c4624f5e0a.jpg accepted !

01:00:997 (60997|0) - move to 3 to give a better view for 01:01:334 (61334|1,61503|0,61503|1,61672|1,61672|0) - also to avoid eerie feeling for left hand. If applied, might as well 01:01:334 (61334|1) - move to 1 for more comfortable execution.woah feels more good @@

01:08:919 (68919|1,69003|0) - I suggest to swap column so it can be 1 , 2 , 3|4 This will make the current phase more comfortable to players. Apply it as well for: 01:09:256 (69256|2,69340|3,69593|1,69677|0,69930|2,70014|3) - done

01:18:694 (78694|0) - you can change this to LN until 01:19:200 - but with that, you need to rearrange 01:19:200 (79200|2,79200|0) - i didnt put this at hyper diff. u.u

01:28:469 (88469|0,88469|1) - ctrl H for more comfortable pattern. ok!

02:17:514 - add note to 4 here, since same sound as previous notes. Also it won't be hard to shift to 3|4 and 1|2 since its on 1/2 measure line (red and white). ok!

02:18:863 (138863|0,138947|1,139031|3,139115|2,139200|1,139284|0,139368|2,139452|3,139537|0,139621|1,139705|2,139790|3,139874|2,139958|1,140042|0,140127|1) - The snap should be 1/3 and must be fixed immediately whaa , im a bit confusing at this parrt , thanks !

02:20:211 - until 02:21:559 - much better if there's an LN for that loud long sound effect.ok

03:52:739 (232739|2) - remove sudden double here without additional instrument. It should be atleast at 03:52:908 - since there's a "yeah" vocal similar to 03:52:233 (232233|0,232233|1) - ok

[Another Kabaneri]
SPOILER
Suggestind OD 8 | HP 8

00:10:773 (10773|0,10815|1,10857|2,10899|3,10941|0,10983|1,11026|2,11068|3,11110|0,11152|1,11194|2,11236|3,11278|0,11320|1,11363|2,11405|3,11447|0,11489|1,11531|3,11573|2,11615|0,11658|1,11700|3,11742|2,11784|1,11826|0,11868|3,11910|2,11952|1,11995|0,12037|3,12079|2,12121|1) - The right snap is only 1/4 for the violin-like sound. 1/8 is too much. Must be fixed.im being too rush at this part ahahha xD

00:47:177 (47177|0,47177|1,47683|3,47683|2,48188|1,48188|0) - These LNs length are not snapped on 1/2 measure lines. Same with the upcoming LNs of Synthesizers, Must be fixed.ahh im forget to re-snapping this after changing the offset

00:48:652 (48652|3,48652|2,48820|1,48820|0,48989|0,48989|1) - These doubles are not snapped on the 1/2 measure lines as well. Correct them and must be immediately fixed.here too

02:18:947 (138947|1,138947|0,139073|0,139073|1,139200|3,139200|2,139284|0,139284|1,139410|3,139410|2,139537|1,139537|0,139621|2,139621|3,139705|1,139705|0,139832|2,139832|3,139958|1,139958|0,140084|2,140084|3) - same as Hyper, the notes should be at 1/3 snap. fixed , thanks! xD

03:10:099 - until 03:31:672 - you might want to buff/add more notes in this time section as it is really easy for the last difficulty not to mention its intense and fast part of the song. You can note for the 1/4 hihat and map every 1/2 red lines with singles. Your choice~ okay i will try to add more in this section

03:55:773 - add note to 1 or even at 4 since final sound is stronger than 03:55:604 (235604|2,235604|1) - added

[Overall]
Really nice song pick~ Thank you for the M4M and Goodluck~
thanks arcwin , almost all of your mod applied , really helped xD thanksss

UPDATED
WolfyArmato-
Hi, from your mod queue
BG : find 1366x768 pic
Song file : seem like really big size. you should find 192kbps song file.
EZ
00:44:481 (44481|3) - maybe move to 2, to make it flow better for beginner players
01:10:099 - maybe do like this http://puu.sh/qiyVb/c06bb791e2.PNG
01:16:082 (76082|1) - I think remove this
01:27:627 (87627|1) - delete, it isn't emphasize sound here
01:49:537 - why not double here? because this 01:50:211
01:50:885 - ^
01:52:233 - ^
01:53:582 - ^
01:54:930 - ^
01:56:278 - ^
01:57:627 - ^
01:58:975 - ^
02:10:267 - make LN here and hold it till 02:10:773
02:45:829 - maybe do double here, it has cymbal sound
03:03:020 - feel empty here maybe change 03:03:020 (183020|0) to LN and hold it till 03:04:031
03:09:761 - you can make single or double notes here
03:15:492 - I really feel empty here, you should add more note here

NM
00:43:132 (43132|1,43301|1,43806|2,43975|2) - It isn't emphasize sound make it single
01:50:042 (110042|1) - delete, it just a kick not snare
01:50:548 (110548|1) - ^
01:51:391 (111391|2) - ^
01:51:896 (111896|2) - ^
01:52:739 (112739|2) - ^
01:53:245 (113245|1) - ^
01:54:087 (114087|1) - ^
01:54:593 (114593|1) - ^
01:55:436 (115436|1) - ^
01:55:941 (115941|3) - ^
01:56:784 (116784|2) - ^
01:57:290 (117290|1) - ^
01:58:132 (118132|3) - ^
01:58:638 (118638|1) - ^
01:59:481 (119481|0) - ^
02:18:863 - http://puu.sh/qizN0/d8cab87a1a.PNG I think do like this
02:25:436 (145436|2) - delete, and it's same sound with 02:25:773
Topic Starter
Alsty-

WolfyArmato- wrote:

Hi, from your mod queue
BG : find 1366x768 pic yeah my friend will make bg for this map later
Song file : seem like really big size. you should find 192kbps song file. i will compress it later xD
EZ
00:44:481 (44481|3) - maybe move to 2, to make it flow better for beginner players ok
01:10:099 - maybe do like this http://puu.sh/qiyVb/c06bb791e2.PNG i put single not
01:16:082 (76082|1) - I think remove this done
01:27:627 (87627|1) - delete, it isn't emphasize sound here its bass @@
01:49:537 - why not double here? because this 01:50:211 i will remove the double on this section
01:50:885 - ^
01:52:233 - ^
01:53:582 - ^
01:54:930 - ^
01:56:278 - ^
01:57:627 - ^
01:58:975 - ^
02:10:267 - make LN here and hold it till 02:10:773 nope @@
02:45:829 - maybe do double here, it has cymbal sound added
03:03:020 - feel empty here maybe change 03:03:020 (183020|0) to LN and hold it till 03:04:031 i follow the vocal on this part , rescaling the end of the LN's
03:09:761 - you can make single or double notes here added
03:15:492 - I really feel empty here, you should add more note herei just take the synth

NM
00:43:132 (43132|1,43301|1,43806|2,43975|2) - It isn't emphasize sound make it single ok
01:50:042 (110042|1) - delete, it just a kick not snare since this part seems hard , ok
01:50:548 (110548|1) - ^
01:51:391 (111391|2) - ^
01:51:896 (111896|2) - ^
01:52:739 (112739|2) - ^
01:53:245 (113245|1) - ^
01:54:087 (114087|1) - ^
01:54:593 (114593|1) - ^
01:55:436 (115436|1) - ^
01:55:941 (115941|3) - ^
01:56:784 (116784|2) - ^
01:57:290 (117290|1) - ^
01:58:132 (118132|3) - ^
01:58:638 (118638|1) - ^
01:59:481 (119481|0) - ^
02:18:863 - http://puu.sh/qizN0/d8cab87a1a.PNG I think do like this ok xD
02:25:436 (145436|2) - delete, and it's same sound with 02:25:773 done
thank you for usefull mod :D
Drum-Hitnormal
I'm not sure if my normal mod can be useful to you but here it is:
Column Guide : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Im not sure if Im making your Easy difficulty too hard, but in my opinion its not good to make easy pattern too simple and regular.
Easy star rating is max 1.50 anyway so might as well make use of it.

Beginner Nue
00:21:559 (21559|1) - delete
00:21:222 (21222|2) - make this LN that ends here 00:22:908 (22908|1) -
00:22:908 (22908|0,22908|1) - make this 1 LN and delete 00:23:245 (23245|2) -
00:23:582 (23582|3,23919|0) - make them three 1/4 notes instead.
For example
I'm not sure if stair pattern is best for this sound but my point is to have 3 notes regardless of the pattern to decide for this.
I think its more fun to have emphasis on this sound than having very consistent 1/4 beats
00:26:110 (26110|2) - add
00:26:278 (26278|0,26615|3) - same as 23:582
00:27:458 (27458|2) - add a note here, and arrange the 3 notes to be similar to 23:582
00:28:975 (28975|3,29312|0) - same as 23:582
00:29:649 (29649|2) - delete
00:31:166 (31166|3) - add
00:31:672 (31672|0,32009|3) - same as 23:582
00:34:368 (34368|0,34705|3) - same as 23:582
00:37:065 (37065|3,37402|0) - same as 23:582
00:38:245 (38245|1) - add
00:39:761 (39761|2,40099|1) - same as 23:582
00:42:458 (42458|1,42795|2) - same as 23:582
00:53:413 (53413|1,53750|2) - add
00:59:902 (59902|1) - add on 2 or 3
01:01:503 (61503|1) - add
01:08:919 (68919|3,69256|2,69593|3,69930|2) - add
01:16:082 (76082|1) - add
01:18:020 (78020|1) - add
01:22:908 (82908|1) - add
01:28:301 (88301|2) - add
01:29:649 (89649|1) - add
01:30:660 (90660|0) - add
01:31:166 (91166|3) - add
01:34:200 (94200|3) - add
01:49:874 (109874|1) - add
01:51:222 (111222|0) - add I feel ling 1 2 , 123 pattern sounds better for drum
01:52:570 (112570|3) - ^
01:53:919 (113919|0) - ^
01:55:267 (115267|2) - ^
01:56:615 (116615|0) - ^
01:57:964 (117964|2) - ^
01:59:312 (119312|2) - ^
01:59:986 (119986|3) - from here to 02:10:773 (130773|1) - I think might be more fun if you focus on piano sound instead
02:13:301 (133301|3) - add
02:15:997 (135997|0) - add
02:22:233 (142233|2) - add
02:23:582 (143582|2) - add
02:23:834 (143834|3,144087|0) - delete
02:24:930 (144930|3) - add
02:25:099 (145099|0,145267|1) - add
02:26:615 (146615|3) - delete
02:27:627 (147627|1) - change to 2 notes like these: 02:27:627 (147627|1,147795|2) -
02:29:312 (149312|1,149481|3) - delete
02:29:649 (149649|0) - change to 3 notes like this: 02:29:649 (149649|0,149986|2,150323|3) -
02:31:672 (151672|0) - add
02:31:840 (151840|3,152009|2,152177|1) - remove
02:33:020 (153020|2) - add
02:35:717 (155717|1) - add
02:36:728 (156728|1,157065|2) - add
02:38:413 (158413|1,158582|3) - add
02:39:424 (159424|0,159761|3) - add
--------------------------------------------------------------------------
02:45:829 (165829|3) - this part should be like this i think

02:45:829 (165829|3) - to 02:49:874 (169874|2) -

02:49:874 (169874|2) - to 02:53:919 (173919|1) -

02:53:919 (173919|1) - to 02:56:615 (176615|0) -
or same as your NM diffifulty but reduced chords?
------------------------------------------------------------------------
02:56:615 (176615|0) - same as above section
03:09:761 (189761|2) - to 03:26:278 (206278|0) - feels weird, i would just map it to the drum beats instead of having so many LN
same as 01:49:200 (109200|2) - to 01:59:986 (119986|3) -
03:28:975 (208975|2) - to 03:31:672 (211672|1) - all 1/2 beats
03:31:672 (211672|1) - to 03:33:020 (213020|1) - all 1/4 beats
add a LN from 03:33:020 (213020|1) - to 03:34:031 (214031|3) -

Normal and Hard difficulty seems perfect to me.

Another
Im newbie to SV, so feel free to reject if Im wrong. Overall your SV is really cool.
01:59:986 - to 2:10:773 - I think the SV in this part is a bit too slow. Maybe put like 0.90?
2:42:458 - to 2:42:964 add 4 points for glitching effect, like note freezing mid air then drop super fast.
For example take at look at this map (7K Glitch hop difficulty):
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/292078
03:40:436 (220436|3,220604|1,220604|0,220773|1,220773|3,220941|3) - add SV for this sound ?

I will be back for hit sound mod after you review this.
Topic Starter
Alsty-

dudehacker wrote:

I'm not sure if my normal mod can be useful to you but here it is:
Column Guide : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Im not sure if Im making your Easy difficulty too hard, but in my opinion its not good to make easy pattern too simple and regular.
Easy star rating is max 1.50 anyway so might as well make use of it.

Beginner Nue
00:21:559 (21559|1) - delete
00:21:222 (21222|2) - make this LN that ends here 00:22:908 (22908|1) - i will make ^ LN
00:22:908 (22908|0,22908|1) - make this 1 LN and delete 00:23:245 (23245|2) -
00:23:582 (23582|3,23919|0) - make them three 1/4 notes instead.
For example
I'm not sure if stair pattern is best for this sound but my point is to have 3 notes regardless of the pattern to decide for this.
I think its more fun to have emphasis on this sound than having very consistent 1/4 beats
00:26:110 (26110|2) - add single is fine
00:26:278 (26278|0,26615|3) - same as 23:582
00:27:458 (27458|2) - add a note here, and arrange the 3 notes to be similar to 23:582 this is have a different pattern
00:28:975 (28975|3,29312|0) - same as 23:582
00:29:649 (29649|2) - delete i think i will keep this
00:31:166 (31166|3) - add its just bass , make it double its just broke the consistency
00:31:672 (31672|0,32009|3) - same as 23:582
00:34:368 (34368|0,34705|3) - same as 23:582
00:37:065 (37065|3,37402|0) - same as 23:582
00:38:245 (38245|1) - add
00:39:761 (39761|2,40099|1) - same as 23:582
00:42:458 (42458|1,42795|2) - same as 23:582 i will apply this all
00:53:413 (53413|1,53750|2) - add
00:59:902 (59902|1) - add on 2 or 3
01:01:503 (61503|1) - add
01:08:919 (68919|3,69256|2,69593|3,69930|2) - add
01:16:082 (76082|1) - add
01:18:020 (78020|1) - add
01:22:908 (82908|1) - add
01:28:301 (88301|2) - add
01:29:649 (89649|1) - add
01:30:660 (90660|0) - add
01:31:166 (91166|3) - add
01:34:200 (94200|3) - add
01:49:874 (109874|1) - add
01:51:222 (111222|0) - add I feel ling 1 2 , 123 pattern sounds better for drum
01:52:570 (112570|3) - ^
01:53:919 (113919|0) - ^
01:55:267 (115267|2) - ^
01:56:615 (116615|0) - ^
01:57:964 (117964|2) - ^
01:59:312 (119312|2) - ^
01:59:986 (119986|3) - from here to 02:10:773 (130773|1) - I think might be more fun if you focus on piano sound instead
02:13:301 (133301|3) - add
02:15:997 (135997|0) - add
02:22:233 (142233|2) - add
02:23:582 (143582|2) - add
02:23:834 (143834|3,144087|0) - delete
02:24:930 (144930|3) - add
02:25:099 (145099|0,145267|1) - add
02:26:615 (146615|3) - delete
02:27:627 (147627|1) - change to 2 notes like these: 02:27:627 (147627|1,147795|2) -
02:29:312 (149312|1,149481|3) - delete
02:29:649 (149649|0) - change to 3 notes like this: 02:29:649 (149649|0,149986|2,150323|3) -
02:31:672 (151672|0) - add
02:31:840 (151840|3,152009|2,152177|1) - remove
02:33:020 (153020|2) - add
02:35:717 (155717|1) - add
02:36:728 (156728|1,157065|2) - add
02:38:413 (158413|1,158582|3) - add
02:39:424 (159424|0,159761|3) - add some suggestion is applied
--------------------------------------------------------------------------
02:45:829 (165829|3) - this part should be like this i think

02:45:829 (165829|3) - to 02:49:874 (169874|2) -

02:49:874 (169874|2) - to 02:53:919 (173919|1) -

02:53:919 (173919|1) - to 02:56:615 (176615|0) -
or same as your NM diffifulty but reduced chords? in easy , i take vocal sound for this section xD
------------------------------------------------------------------------
02:56:615 (176615|0) - same as above section ^
03:09:761 (189761|2) - to 03:26:278 (206278|0) - feels weird, i would just map it to the drum beats instead of having so many LN just in case , take synth , because if i make it all drum and bass , it will feel so bored , since this song is have a 4minutes duration.
same as 01:49:200 (109200|2) - to 01:59:986 (119986|3) -
03:28:975 (208975|2) - to 03:31:672 (211672|1) - all 1/2 beats
03:31:672 (211672|1) - to 03:33:020 (213020|1) - all 1/4 beats
add a LN from 03:33:020 (213020|1) - to 03:34:031 (214031|3) -

Normal and Hard difficulty seems perfect to me.

Another
Im newbie to SV, so feel free to reject if Im wrong. Overall your SV is really cool.its need 4hours straight without rest to make all of this stuff :c
01:59:986 - to 2:10:773 - I think the SV in this part is a bit too slow. Maybe put like 0.90? its okay , because this part seems really calm
2:42:458 - to 2:42:964 add 4 points for glitching effect, like note freezing mid air then drop super fast.i will consider it
For example take at look at this map (7K Glitch hop difficulty):
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/292078
03:40:436 (220436|3,220604|1,220604|0,220773|1,220773|3,220941|3) - add SV for this sound ? ok

I will be back for hit sound mod after you review this.
thanks for mod. u help the beginner diff's alot :)
Drum-Hitnormal

Alsty- wrote:

dudehacker wrote:

I'm not sure if my normal mod can be useful to you but here it is:
Column Guide : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Im not sure if Im making your Easy difficulty too hard, but in my opinion its not good to make easy pattern too simple and regular.
Easy star rating is max 1.50 anyway so might as well make use of it.

Beginner Nue
00:21:559 (21559|1) - delete
00:21:222 (21222|2) - make this LN that ends here 00:22:908 (22908|1) - i will make ^ LN
00:22:908 (22908|0,22908|1) - make this 1 LN and delete 00:23:245 (23245|2) -
00:23:582 (23582|3,23919|0) - make them three 1/4 notes instead.
For example
I'm not sure if stair pattern is best for this sound but my point is to have 3 notes regardless of the pattern to decide for this.
I think its more fun to have emphasis on this sound than having very consistent 1/4 beats
00:26:110 (26110|2) - add single is fine
00:26:278 (26278|0,26615|3) - same as 23:582
00:27:458 (27458|2) - add a note here, and arrange the 3 notes to be similar to 23:582 this is have a different pattern
00:28:975 (28975|3,29312|0) - same as 23:582
00:29:649 (29649|2) - delete i think i will keep this
00:31:166 (31166|3) - add its just bass , make it double its just broke the consistency
00:31:672 (31672|0,32009|3) - same as 23:582
00:34:368 (34368|0,34705|3) - same as 23:582
00:37:065 (37065|3,37402|0) - same as 23:582
00:38:245 (38245|1) - add
00:39:761 (39761|2,40099|1) - same as 23:582
00:42:458 (42458|1,42795|2) - same as 23:582 i will apply this all
00:53:413 (53413|1,53750|2) - add
00:59:902 (59902|1) - add on 2 or 3
01:01:503 (61503|1) - add
01:08:919 (68919|3,69256|2,69593|3,69930|2) - add
01:16:082 (76082|1) - add
01:18:020 (78020|1) - add
01:22:908 (82908|1) - add
01:28:301 (88301|2) - add
01:29:649 (89649|1) - add
01:30:660 (90660|0) - add
01:31:166 (91166|3) - add
01:34:200 (94200|3) - add
01:49:874 (109874|1) - add
01:51:222 (111222|0) - add I feel ling 1 2 , 123 pattern sounds better for drum
01:52:570 (112570|3) - ^
01:53:919 (113919|0) - ^
01:55:267 (115267|2) - ^
01:56:615 (116615|0) - ^
01:57:964 (117964|2) - ^
01:59:312 (119312|2) - ^
01:59:986 (119986|3) - from here to 02:10:773 (130773|1) - I think might be more fun if you focus on piano sound instead
02:13:301 (133301|3) - add
02:15:997 (135997|0) - add
02:22:233 (142233|2) - add
02:23:582 (143582|2) - add
02:23:834 (143834|3,144087|0) - delete
02:24:930 (144930|3) - add
02:25:099 (145099|0,145267|1) - add
02:26:615 (146615|3) - delete
02:27:627 (147627|1) - change to 2 notes like these: 02:27:627 (147627|1,147795|2) -
02:29:312 (149312|1,149481|3) - delete
02:29:649 (149649|0) - change to 3 notes like this: 02:29:649 (149649|0,149986|2,150323|3) -
02:31:672 (151672|0) - add
02:31:840 (151840|3,152009|2,152177|1) - remove
02:33:020 (153020|2) - add
02:35:717 (155717|1) - add
02:36:728 (156728|1,157065|2) - add
02:38:413 (158413|1,158582|3) - add
02:39:424 (159424|0,159761|3) - add some suggestion is applied
--------------------------------------------------------------------------
02:45:829 (165829|3) - this part should be like this i think

02:45:829 (165829|3) - to 02:49:874 (169874|2) -

02:49:874 (169874|2) - to 02:53:919 (173919|1) -

02:53:919 (173919|1) - to 02:56:615 (176615|0) -
or same as your NM diffifulty but reduced chords? in easy , i take vocal sound for this section xD
------------------------------------------------------------------------
02:56:615 (176615|0) - same as above section ^
03:09:761 (189761|2) - to 03:26:278 (206278|0) - feels weird, i would just map it to the drum beats instead of having so many LN just in case , take synth , because if i make it all drum and bass , it will feel so bored , since this song is have a 4minutes duration.
same as 01:49:200 (109200|2) - to 01:59:986 (119986|3) -
03:28:975 (208975|2) - to 03:31:672 (211672|1) - all 1/2 beats
03:31:672 (211672|1) - to 03:33:020 (213020|1) - all 1/4 beats
add a LN from 03:33:020 (213020|1) - to 03:34:031 (214031|3) -

Normal and Hard difficulty seems perfect to me.

Another
Im newbie to SV, so feel free to reject if Im wrong. Overall your SV is really cool.its need 4hours straight without rest to make all of this stuff :c
01:59:986 - to 2:10:773 - I think the SV in this part is a bit too slow. Maybe put like 0.90? its okay , because this part seems really calm
2:42:458 - to 2:42:964 add 4 points for glitching effect, like note freezing mid air then drop super fast.i will consider it
For example take at look at this map (7K Glitch hop difficulty):
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/292078
03:40:436 (220436|3,220604|1,220604|0,220773|1,220773|3,220941|3) - add SV for this sound ? ok

I will be back for hit sound mod after you review this.
thanks for mod. u help the beginner diff's alot :)
Ok , did you read my pm? I sent u 2 new piano set. do you want any of them ? I will do hit sound mod tomorrow.
Drum-Hitnormal
I just noticed the way you are doing hit sound is bad.

If you do not have a lot of hit sounds files, you don't need to use ALT+Left Click (custom hit sound) to hit sound a note using this window:


The reason why this is bad because you need do that for every note and it takes way too much time.

The right way to hit sound is first name all your hit sound files to 1 sample set.

For example, if you are using normal set:
normal-hitnormal.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitclap.wav

To apply them to a note, you click on the note then use the right side tools or use shortkey W E R for whistle, finish and clap.
The good thing about this is that you can have multiple sound on 1 note, which you cant if you use custom hit sound.
Remember custom hit sound will have priority over normal hit sound, so even if you use the whistle, finish or clap on a custom hit sound it wont do anything.

But say if you have more than 4 hit sounds, than you would put it in another set:
soft-hitnormal.wav
soft-hitwhistle.wav
soft-hitfinish.wav
soft-hitclap.wav

And there's also a drum set , u get the idea .

Additionally to this, if you still have more hit sounds, you can do this
normal-hitnormal2.wav
normal-hitwhistle2.wav
...

by adding an index at the end, and it has no limit of how many u can use.

Use timing section to control which hit sound set you use:

make sure you select Custom
the number below it is the index as explained above.

the green timing section will overwrite the red one.
and the timing section applies the same volume to all hit sound in that section.
If you want a certain note to be different volume than rest of section then you need use Alt+Left click to use custom hit sound. The volume of section wont apply on custom hit sounds.

I hope it was clear, if you have any questions PM me
Ochasan
Hi~

M4M as my req :3

Beginner Nue
Beginner Nue
00:04:031 (4031|1) suara, disusun ulang
00:08:076 (8076|1) ^
00:13:469 (13469|1) ^
00:20:211 (20211|2) ^
00:27:458 add circle disini
00:42:121 (42121|3,42458|0,42627|1,42795|2) susun ulang, kurang konsisten
01:10:099 (70099|0,70099|3,71110|1,71447|2) bagian seperti ini tolong salah satu dihapus ln nya
02:00:997 (120997|1,121334|0) buat yg gini, diff beginner ikut suara dengan pengecualian diff hard keatas tu boleh seperti ini. hapus
02:03:694 (123694|2,124031|3) ^
02:06:391 (126391|1,126728|2) ^
02:07:402 add circle
02:09:087 (129087|2,129424|1) ^^
02:51:559 (171559|2,171728|1,171896|2) stairs, beginner loh
02:53:582 (173582|2,173750|3,173919|1) ^
02:54:256 (174256|2,174424|0,174761|1,174930|3,175267|1,175604|0,175773|3) ngikut voice, tapi lebih baik instrumen nya saja
03:14:312 (194312|2,194649|1) note ini tidak disarankan, normal sih gpp. ganti circle
03:38:582 (218582|2,218919|1) ^
03:45:997 (225997|2,226166|1,226334|2) stairs
03:48:694 (228694|1,228863|2,229031|1) ^
03:51:391 (231391|2,231728|2) hapus
03:53:076 (233076|2) ^

Intermediate Bushi
Intermediate Bushi
00:09:424 (9424|1) diujung kanan biar konsisten sama lagu seperti 00:20:211
00:23:245 - 00:25:941 - 00:28:638 - 00:31:334 - 00:34:031 - 00:36:728 bukan jack, coba contoh 00:39:424
00:48:526 (48526|3,48694|3,48863|3,49031|3) jangan, dibuat zig zag atau apalah
00:51:728 (51728|2,51812|0,51896|1) 1/4 di normal dibuat stairs
01:03:188 (63188|2) hapus, gk ada suara sama sekali
01:03:526 (63526|1,64031|1) ^
01:36:896 (96896|3) place ke col 2
02:18:863 (138863|0,138947|1,139031|3,139115|2,139200|0,139284|1,139368|3,139452|2,139537|0,139621|1,139705|3,139790|2,139874|0,139958|1,140042|3,140127|2) ini juga tidak disarankan, lebih mirip hard. ganti ke snap 1/2 dan hapus yang bukan kena snap
02:40:099 ln ending di tick putih
02:40:773 ^
02:41:447 ^
02:42:121 ^
02:53:076 (173076|3) col 2
03:26:278 (206278|3,207795|3) pastikan bahwa ini tidak ada di normal, susun ulang
03:45:997 (225997|2,226166|2,226334|2) ^
03:48:694 (228694|1,228863|1,229031|1) ^
03:51:391 (231391|0,231559|0,231728|0) ^

Hyper Koutetsujou
Hyper Koutetsujou
00:48:863 (48863|0,49031|0) col 3
01:01:334 (61334|0,61503|0,61672|0) overdose jack, susun ulang
01:15:997 (75997|0,75997|1,76082|0,76082|1) tidak disarankan, jadikan 3|4 - 1|2 - 3|4
01:17:514 (77514|0,77683|0) col 3
01:24:256 (84256|3,84424|3) col 2
01:35:211 (95211|1,95211|0) ctrl+h
02:48:863 (168863|0) ^
02:55:773 (175773|2,175773|3,175857|2,175857|3) 1|2 - 3|4
02:59:649 (179649|0) ctrl+h
03:06:559 (186559|0,186559|1) ^
03:35:042 (215042|3) ^
03:41:784 (221784|0,221952|0,221952|1) susun ulang
03:42:795 (222795|0) ctrl+h
03:43:132 (223132|3,223301|3,223301|2) susun ulang
03:52:402 (232402|3,232570|3,232739|3,232908|3) overdose, susun ulang
03:53:750 (233750|3,233919|3,234087|3) ^

Another Kabaneri
Another Kabaneri
00:50:885 (50885|0,50885|2) ln end di tick biru 1/4
01:24:593 (84593|3) susun kelain
01:28:806 (88806|1) ^
01:35:211 (95211|3) ctrl+h, ganti dari susun kelain

DONE!!!
M4M lagi kalau mau :3
bye~
Draftnell
mark dlu deh...sambil nungguin lu update mod yang di atas ^
Topic Starter
Alsty-

Ochasan wrote:

Hi~

M4M as my req :3

Beginner Nue
Beginner Nue
00:04:031 (4031|1) suara, disusun ulang
00:08:076 (8076|1) ^
00:13:469 (13469|1) ^
00:20:211 (20211|2) ^
00:27:458 add circle disini
00:42:121 (42121|3,42458|0,42627|1,42795|2) susun ulang, kurang konsisten
01:10:099 (70099|0,70099|3,71110|1,71447|2) bagian seperti ini tolong salah satu dihapus ln nya
02:00:997 (120997|1,121334|0) buat yg gini, diff beginner ikut suara dengan pengecualian diff hard keatas tu boleh seperti ini. hapus
02:03:694 (123694|2,124031|3) ^
02:06:391 (126391|1,126728|2) ^
02:07:402 add circle
02:09:087 (129087|2,129424|1) ^^
02:51:559 (171559|2,171728|1,171896|2) stairs, beginner loh
02:53:582 (173582|2,173750|3,173919|1) ^
02:54:256 (174256|2,174424|0,174761|1,174930|3,175267|1,175604|0,175773|3) ngikut voice, tapi lebih baik instrumen nya saja
03:14:312 (194312|2,194649|1) note ini tidak disarankan, normal sih gpp. ganti circle
03:38:582 (218582|2,218919|1) ^
03:45:997 (225997|2,226166|1,226334|2) stairs
03:48:694 (228694|1,228863|2,229031|1) ^
03:51:391 (231391|2,231728|2) hapus
03:53:076 (233076|2) ^

Intermediate Bushi
Intermediate Bushi
00:09:424 (9424|1) diujung kanan biar konsisten sama lagu seperti 00:20:211
00:23:245 - 00:25:941 - 00:28:638 - 00:31:334 - 00:34:031 - 00:36:728 bukan jack, coba contoh 00:39:424
00:48:526 (48526|3,48694|3,48863|3,49031|3) jangan, dibuat zig zag atau apalah
00:51:728 (51728|2,51812|0,51896|1) 1/4 di normal dibuat stairs
01:03:188 (63188|2) hapus, gk ada suara sama sekali
01:03:526 (63526|1,64031|1) ^
01:36:896 (96896|3) place ke col 2
02:18:863 (138863|0,138947|1,139031|3,139115|2,139200|0,139284|1,139368|3,139452|2,139537|0,139621|1,139705|3,139790|2,139874|0,139958|1,140042|3,140127|2) ini juga tidak disarankan, lebih mirip hard. ganti ke snap 1/2 dan hapus yang bukan kena snap
02:40:099 ln ending di tick putih
02:40:773 ^
02:41:447 ^
02:42:121 ^
02:53:076 (173076|3) col 2
03:26:278 (206278|3,207795|3) pastikan bahwa ini tidak ada di normal, susun ulang
03:45:997 (225997|2,226166|2,226334|2) ^
03:48:694 (228694|1,228863|1,229031|1) ^
03:51:391 (231391|0,231559|0,231728|0) ^

Hyper Koutetsujou
Hyper Koutetsujou
00:48:863 (48863|0,49031|0) col 3
01:01:334 (61334|0,61503|0,61672|0) overdose jack, susun ulang
01:15:997 (75997|0,75997|1,76082|0,76082|1) tidak disarankan, jadikan 3|4 - 1|2 - 3|4
01:17:514 (77514|0,77683|0) col 3
01:24:256 (84256|3,84424|3) col 2
01:35:211 (95211|1,95211|0) ctrl+h
02:48:863 (168863|0) ^
02:55:773 (175773|2,175773|3,175857|2,175857|3) 1|2 - 3|4
02:59:649 (179649|0) ctrl+h
03:06:559 (186559|0,186559|1) ^
03:35:042 (215042|3) ^
03:41:784 (221784|0,221952|0,221952|1) susun ulang
03:42:795 (222795|0) ctrl+h
03:43:132 (223132|3,223301|3,223301|2) susun ulang
03:52:402 (232402|3,232570|3,232739|3,232908|3) overdose, susun ulang
03:53:750 (233750|3,233919|3,234087|3) ^

Another Kabaneri
Another Kabaneri
00:50:885 (50885|0,50885|2) ln end di tick biru 1/4
01:24:593 (84593|3) susun kelain
01:28:806 (88806|1) ^
01:35:211 (95211|3) ctrl+h, ganti dari susun kelain

DONE!!!
M4M lagi kalau mau :3
bye~
makasih ochaa , ntaps usefull banget di beginner ama intermediate xD
UPDATED :3
Topic Starter
Alsty-
Removed unchecked inherit time on Hyper
UPDATED

i dont even remember im adding that inherit , how can that inherit time can be add by itself @@
L A U R A
here my mods :D

hyper
00:51:896 (51896|1,51896|3,52233|0,52233|2,52570|1,52570|3) - like this maybe? soalnya cuma satu suara panjang gw denger jadi ga perlu di pisah gitu

00:56:110 (56110|1,56447|1) - satu note aja kayanya cukup buat di 3*


01:48:863 - tambahin ln pendek mungkin?

01:59:818 - di sini kasi satu note deh kayanya

01:59:649 (119649|0,119649|3,119986|2,119986|1) -like this?

02:42:627 (162627|3,163132|0,163132|1) - a bit jack maybe?


aku ada usul kasi sv dikit buat hypernya sayang lagu gini ga ada svnya >.<

sv
00:59:986 (59986|0,59986|3,60239|0,60239|3,60492|3,60492|0,60660|2,60660|1) - kayanya sv >.<
00:59:986 - speed x1,5
01:00:155 - speed x1
01:00:239 - speed x1,5
01:00:408 - speed x1
01:00:492 - speed x1,5
01:00:576 - speed x1

01:16:166 (76166|0,76166|3,76419|1,76419|3,76672|3,76672|1) - sv here as well i think XD
01:16:166 - speed x1,5
01:16:334 - speed x1
01:16:419 - speed x1,5
01:16:587 - speed x1

01:27:627 - speed 0,5
01:27:795 - speed x1


thats all i think.. Good Luck!!!!!
Topic Starter
Alsty-

L A U R A wrote:

here my mods :D

hyper
00:51:896 (51896|1,51896|3,52233|0,52233|2,52570|1,52570|3) - like this maybe? soalnya cuma satu suara panjang gw denger jadi ga perlu di pisah gitu ini di jadiin gini seolah" suaranya itu menurun xD

00:56:110 (56110|1,56447|1) - satu note aja kayanya cukup buat di 3* hmm ini biar konsisten sama ini 00:55:267 (55267|2,55267|3,55604|2,55604|3) -


01:48:863 - tambahin ln pendek mungkin? vocal samar' xD

01:59:818 - di sini kasi satu note deh kayanya oke

01:59:649 (119649|0,119649|3,119986|2,119986|1) -like this? dah pass

02:42:627 (162627|3,163132|0,163132|1) - a bit jack maybe?aku bikin LN jadi double aja xD


aku ada usul kasi sv dikit buat hypernya sayang lagu gini ga ada svnya >.<

sv
00:59:986 (59986|0,59986|3,60239|0,60239|3,60492|3,60492|0,60660|2,60660|1) - kayanya sv >.<
00:59:986 - speed x1,5
01:00:155 - speed x1
01:00:239 - speed x1,5
01:00:408 - speed x1
01:00:492 - speed x1,5
01:00:576 - speed x1

01:16:166 (76166|0,76166|3,76419|1,76419|3,76672|3,76672|1) - sv here as well i think XD
01:16:166 - speed x1,5
01:16:334 - speed x1
01:16:419 - speed x1,5
01:16:587 - speed x1

01:27:627 - speed 0,5
01:27:795 - speed x1
buat sv di hyper mungkin nanti , di kasih SV ringan aja , soalnya diff another dah full SV wkwk.

thats all i think.. Good Luck!!!!!
thankyou modnyaa , m4m nyusul yakk xD


UPDATED !
Draftnell
ok...as my promise ^^

[Beginner]
01:15:997 (75997|0) - mending jdiin LN aja terus 01:16:166 (76166|2) - delete nih

[Hyper]
00:53:413 (53413|2,53582|1,53750|1) - di bikin acak aja..kek gini >> http://puu.sh/qtCWd/fbc5ff04d0.jpg ( hand balance )
00:54:256 (54256|3) - move 1 ^^
01:04:200 - gak di bikin LN ? itu suara electric nya :V
01:18:694 - ^
01:37:318 - 01:37:655 - 01:37:992 - ko putus2 ? itu suara ny nymbung kk x.x
03:28:638 (208638|3) - move 1 ? pattern sebelum nya ente mehindarkan jack seperti >> 03:26:447 -

mungkin itu saja deh dlu :D wktu trbatas soal ny :( tapi nanti klo ada diff mu yg merasa gak cocok bngt lgi...ntar ak sambung deh mod nya ^^

Good luck ~
Topic Starter
Alsty-

Draftnell wrote:

ok...as my promise ^^

[Beginner]
01:15:997 (75997|0) - mending jdiin LN aja terus 01:16:166 (76166|2) - delete nih di hapus double nya aja xD

[Hyper]
00:53:413 (53413|2,53582|1,53750|1) - di bikin acak aja..kek gini >> http://puu.sh/qtCWd/fbc5ff04d0.jpg ( hand balance ) ok , di tambahin jadi double jg :v
00:54:256 (54256|3) - move 1 ^^ hmm ok
01:04:200 - gak di bikin LN ? itu suara electric nya :V di hard ga semua electricnya di jadiin LN
01:18:694 - ^
01:37:318 - 01:37:655 - 01:37:992 - ko putus2 ? itu suara ny nymbung kk x.x oke
03:28:638 (208638|3) - move 1 ? pattern sebelum nya ente mehindarkan jack seperti >> 03:26:447 - oke

mungkin itu saja deh dlu :D wktu trbatas soal ny :( tapi nanti klo ada diff mu yg merasa gak cocok bngt lgi...ntar ak sambung deh mod nya ^^

Good luck ~
thankyou modnya om draftnell :3

UPDATED
erlinadewi-
M4M

IRC
2016-08-09 14:52 erlinadewi-: hi.
2016-08-09 14:52 Alsty-: halo
2016-08-09 14:53 erlinadewi-: mod dari irc sekarang bisa?
2016-08-09 14:53 erlinadewi-: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1035001 Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix)]
2016-08-09 14:54 Alsty-: bisa
2016-08-09 14:54 Alsty-: sbntr
2016-08-09 14:54 Alsty-: dah
2016-08-09 14:54 erlinadewi-: oki
2016-08-09 14:55 erlinadewi-: untuk source nya bukannya dari anime koutetsu no kabaneri ya?
2016-08-09 14:56 Alsty-: sourcenya ganti aja?
2016-08-09 14:56 erlinadewi-: sebaiknya iya
2016-08-09 14:56 Alsty-: oke nanti di ganti di semua diff
2016-08-09 14:56 erlinadewi-: terakhir aja gpp
2016-08-09 14:56 Alsty-: iyaa
2016-08-09 14:58 erlinadewi-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1035000 Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix) [Beginner Nue]]
2016-08-09 14:58 erlinadewi-: 01:01:503 - missing note?
2016-08-09 14:58 erlinadewi-: ada kick disana
2016-08-09 14:58 erlinadewi-: 01:01:672 - sama seperti itu
2016-08-09 14:58 Alsty-: added
2016-08-09 15:00 erlinadewi-: 01:34:368 (94368|1,94705|3) - swap? lebih balance
2016-08-09 15:00 erlinadewi-: klo acc ini 01:35:211 (95211|1) - move to col 2
2016-08-09 15:01 Alsty-: di re-arrange lagi deh
2016-08-09 15:02 Alsty-: done
2016-08-09 15:03 erlinadewi-: 02:15:997 - add? kick disini
2016-08-09 15:03 Alsty-: okee
2016-08-09 15:03 erlinadewi-: 02:22:233 - 02:23:582 - saran disana add 1 note untuk suara snare nya
2016-08-09 15:03 erlinadewi-: biar engga kagok waktu diplay
2016-08-09 15:04 erlinadewi-: 02:24:930 - disini juga
2016-08-09 15:04 erlinadewi-: 02:28:975 - like this
2016-08-09 15:05 Alsty-: hmm oke , tambahin di semua part yg kek gitu ya
2016-08-09 15:05 erlinadewi-: 03:34:031 (214031|3) - ini col 2 aja biar gak terlalu berat
2016-08-09 15:06 erlinadewi-: 03:52:233 (232233|3,232908|1) - swap col? biar gak sama column sama ln yg bawahnya
2016-08-09 15:07 erlinadewi-: soalnya yg bawah di col 4 jg
2016-08-09 15:07 Alsty-: done
2016-08-09 15:07 erlinadewi-: free reject klo ada yg gak sesuai ya
2016-08-09 15:07 erlinadewi-: sekarang ini
2016-08-09 15:07 erlinadewi-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1035001 Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix) [Intermediate Bushi]]
2016-08-09 15:07 Alsty-: iyaa
2016-08-09 15:09 erlinadewi-: 00:21:559 (21559|3) - gimana kalau note ini diganti LN? 00:22:908 - sampai situ
2016-08-09 15:09 erlinadewi-: kaya diff hyper
2016-08-09 15:10 erlinadewi-: 00:27:290 (27290|2,27458|0,27627|2) - same pitch. gak dibikin 1 kolom aja?
2016-08-09 15:10 erlinadewi-: triple jack?
2016-08-09 15:11 erlinadewi-: hmmm tapi atas2 nya engga jack
2016-08-09 15:11 Alsty-: tadinya di bikin gitu , tp keknya terlalu berat di normal
2016-08-09 15:11 erlinadewi-: jadi bisa di ignore mod diatas
2016-08-09 15:12 erlinadewi-: 00:44:481 (44481|0) - col 2?
2016-08-09 15:12 erlinadewi-: 00:52:570 (52570|2) - col 2 biar gak terlalu berat
2016-08-09 15:13 erlinadewi-: 01:19:031 (79031|3) - col 2 biar lebih rapi :D
2016-08-09 15:13 Alsty-: oke
2016-08-09 15:14 erlinadewi-: 01:25:941 (85941|3,86615|3,87121|3) - terlalu berat di 4. 01:26:615 (86615|3) - ke col 3 aku rasa lebih enak
2016-08-09 15:15 Alsty-: re-arranged
2016-08-09 15:16 erlinadewi-: 03:44:143 - dari sini aku liat col 3 nya kosong bgt
2016-08-09 15:17 erlinadewi-: 03:46:334 (226334|3) - mungkin ini bisa di pindah ke col 3
2016-08-09 15:17 erlinadewi-: buat ngisi
2016-08-09 15:18 erlinadewi-: aku rasa itu aja
2016-08-09 15:20 erlinadewi-: karena durasinya agak panjang jadi aku mod 2 diff aja ya
2016-08-09 15:21 Alsty-: iya mba gpp , ini juga kurang banget di beginner ama normal

Goodluck~
Topic Starter
Alsty-

erlinadewi- wrote:

M4M

IRC
2016-08-09 14:52 erlinadewi-: hi.
2016-08-09 14:52 Alsty-: halo
2016-08-09 14:53 erlinadewi-: mod dari irc sekarang bisa?
2016-08-09 14:53 erlinadewi-: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1035001 Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix)]
2016-08-09 14:54 Alsty-: bisa
2016-08-09 14:54 Alsty-: sbntr
2016-08-09 14:54 Alsty-: dah
2016-08-09 14:54 erlinadewi-: oki
2016-08-09 14:55 erlinadewi-: untuk source nya bukannya dari anime koutetsu no kabaneri ya?
2016-08-09 14:56 Alsty-: sourcenya ganti aja?
2016-08-09 14:56 erlinadewi-: sebaiknya iya
2016-08-09 14:56 Alsty-: oke nanti di ganti di semua diff
2016-08-09 14:56 erlinadewi-: terakhir aja gpp
2016-08-09 14:56 Alsty-: iyaa
2016-08-09 14:58 erlinadewi-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1035000 Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix) [Beginner Nue]]
2016-08-09 14:58 erlinadewi-: 01:01:503 - missing note?
2016-08-09 14:58 erlinadewi-: ada kick disana
2016-08-09 14:58 erlinadewi-: 01:01:672 - sama seperti itu
2016-08-09 14:58 Alsty-: added
2016-08-09 15:00 erlinadewi-: 01:34:368 (94368|1,94705|3) - swap? lebih balance
2016-08-09 15:00 erlinadewi-: klo acc ini 01:35:211 (95211|1) - move to col 2
2016-08-09 15:01 Alsty-: di re-arrange lagi deh
2016-08-09 15:02 Alsty-: done
2016-08-09 15:03 erlinadewi-: 02:15:997 - add? kick disini
2016-08-09 15:03 Alsty-: okee
2016-08-09 15:03 erlinadewi-: 02:22:233 - 02:23:582 - saran disana add 1 note untuk suara snare nya
2016-08-09 15:03 erlinadewi-: biar engga kagok waktu diplay
2016-08-09 15:04 erlinadewi-: 02:24:930 - disini juga
2016-08-09 15:04 erlinadewi-: 02:28:975 - like this
2016-08-09 15:05 Alsty-: hmm oke , tambahin di semua part yg kek gitu ya
2016-08-09 15:05 erlinadewi-: 03:34:031 (214031|3) - ini col 2 aja biar gak terlalu berat
2016-08-09 15:06 erlinadewi-: 03:52:233 (232233|3,232908|1) - swap col? biar gak sama column sama ln yg bawahnya
2016-08-09 15:07 erlinadewi-: soalnya yg bawah di col 4 jg
2016-08-09 15:07 Alsty-: done
2016-08-09 15:07 erlinadewi-: free reject klo ada yg gak sesuai ya
2016-08-09 15:07 erlinadewi-: sekarang ini
2016-08-09 15:07 erlinadewi-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1035001 Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix) [Intermediate Bushi]]
2016-08-09 15:07 Alsty-: iyaa
2016-08-09 15:09 erlinadewi-: 00:21:559 (21559|3) - gimana kalau note ini diganti LN? 00:22:908 - sampai situ
2016-08-09 15:09 erlinadewi-: kaya diff hyper
2016-08-09 15:10 erlinadewi-: 00:27:290 (27290|2,27458|0,27627|2) - same pitch. gak dibikin 1 kolom aja?
2016-08-09 15:10 erlinadewi-: triple jack?
2016-08-09 15:11 erlinadewi-: hmmm tapi atas2 nya engga jack
2016-08-09 15:11 Alsty-: tadinya di bikin gitu , tp keknya terlalu berat di normal
2016-08-09 15:11 erlinadewi-: jadi bisa di ignore mod diatas
2016-08-09 15:12 erlinadewi-: 00:44:481 (44481|0) - col 2?
2016-08-09 15:12 erlinadewi-: 00:52:570 (52570|2) - col 2 biar gak terlalu berat
2016-08-09 15:13 erlinadewi-: 01:19:031 (79031|3) - col 2 biar lebih rapi :D
2016-08-09 15:13 Alsty-: oke
2016-08-09 15:14 erlinadewi-: 01:25:941 (85941|3,86615|3,87121|3) - terlalu berat di 4. 01:26:615 (86615|3) - ke col 3 aku rasa lebih enak
2016-08-09 15:15 Alsty-: re-arranged
2016-08-09 15:16 erlinadewi-: 03:44:143 - dari sini aku liat col 3 nya kosong bgt
2016-08-09 15:17 erlinadewi-: 03:46:334 (226334|3) - mungkin ini bisa di pindah ke col 3
2016-08-09 15:17 erlinadewi-: buat ngisi
2016-08-09 15:18 erlinadewi-: aku rasa itu aja
2016-08-09 15:20 erlinadewi-: karena durasinya agak panjang jadi aku mod 2 diff aja ya
2016-08-09 15:21 Alsty-: iya mba gpp , ini juga kurang banget di beginner ama normal

Goodluck~
tenkyuu mba elin :3

UPDATED
Topic Starter
Alsty-
MP3 QUALITY CHANGED , FIXING TIMING AND SV PLACE
UPDATED AGAIN XD
SPOILER
re-timing sv is the worst :(
Amids
waaaaahh kayaknya gak bisa mod deh :( ga ada waktu banget gila, tugas ngampus terus2an orz.. buat gantinya shoot aja deh, maaf banget alsty :(
Topic Starter
Alsty-

Hamids- wrote:

waaaaahh kayaknya gak bisa mod deh :( ga ada waktu banget gila, tugas ngampus terus2an orz.. buat gantinya shoot aja deh, maaf banget alsty :(
Oqeeeh tenang ajah wkwk, GL tugas"nya xD
Thanks juga shootnya :v
Protastic101
This is an amazing remix

Column 1|2|3|4

Mod
[General]
  1. I highly suggest adding a difficulty between Intermediate and Hyper because the diff gap is almost 2.5* so there's no diff in the 2* range.
  2. Uncheck widescreen support in all diffs.
  3. Why'd you sample import all your hs when you named them the correct way? I'd consider resetting everything and just applying use the clap, whistle, and finish function. So hitsounds would be named like so: soft-hitfinish2 -> soft-hitclap. soft-hitnormal -> soft-hitfinish. soft-hitwhistle2 -> soft-hitnormal. Remove soft-hitwhistle2 because it's the same as soft-hitfinish2
[Beginner]00:23:330 (23330|2,24341|2,26026|1) - Etc. For a beginner difficulty, I would highly suggest only mapping to clearly audible sounds such as the claps, snares, and kicks at 00:23:667 (23667|3,23835|2,24004|0) . The first notes I highlighted don't have any strong sound.
00:38:330 - Add a note here because the sound here is the snare like at 00:31:925 (31925|1)
00:51:813 - You could probably add a note here to represent the drum kick or whatever since 1/2 is already commonly used in this diff.
00:53:667 (53667|0) - It'd be better to move this note up to 00:53:835 where the 1/2 kick burst starting from 00:53:498 ends. It accents the upbeat.
00:56:363 (56363|3) - Move this down to 00:56:195 because the kick is here. 00:56:363 has no sound except for the synth which started at 00:56:195 . Probably better though would be to move this note up to 00:56:532 where there's a second kick.
00:58:386 (58386|0,58891|3) - No doubles for the snares here? Bit of a consistency issue since this section hasn't ended so you should generally map the snares the same way you map them throughout the rest of the section, which is with doubles like at 00:56:026 (56026|0,56026|1)
01:08:835 - Starting in this measure, because of how the drum changes the rhythm to use 1/4, I'd consider adding a 1/2 burst here, which means notes at places like 01:09:004 - 01:09:341 - 01:09:678 - 01:10:015
01:22:655 - Add another note here for the snare? It's louder than the kicks around it like at 01:22:318 (82318|1)
01:37:150 (97150|1,97824|2) - These are the same pitch, but I also understand why they're separate notes. To show they're apart of the same note, why not extend 01:37:150 (97150|1) to end at 01:38:498 ?
01:48:948 (108948|3) - Make this an LN and end at 01:49:285 for the bass? It helps to lead into the next measure because players will have a note that tells them when the next note is coming.
02:05:464 - 02:02:768 - Add notes here for the piano because you added notes at 02:07:487 (127487|0,127487|2,128161|0,128161|2) for the downbeat of the piano too, so consistency I guess.
02:13:386 - Add a note? The kick is strong enough to be heard and it transitions well into the next measure, plus, you mapped it at 02:16:082 (136082|1)
02:23:919 (143919|3) - This note is snapped incorrectly. It should either be on 02:23:891 which is 1/6, or 02:24:004 which is the offbeat. I'd recommend moving it up there since it's a stronger sound.
02:27:712 (147712|1) - Consider removing this LN, and instead adding a note at 02:27:712 - 02:27:880 cause of the break in the music.
02:35:802 - 02:36:813 - 02:37:150 - I highly suggest adding notes here to help the player keep the beat and know where they're at in the music.
02:38:498 - 02:39:509 - 02:39:846 - Same as above.
02:46:588 (166588|2) - Move this down to 02:46:419 because the kick is there.
02:47:094 - You should also consider adding a note here too for the kick since if you map one kick, you should map the next few kicks to be consistent.
03:03:105 (183105|3) - If you're not going to map the vocals at any other point in this song leading to this part, then don't map it here. It's a little confusing because you've already set the rhythm and structure of the map from the beginning, which is drum based, but then you suddenly break off into vocal here.

[Intermediate]00:28:554 (28554|1) - If you're just mapping the drums here, you should remove this.
00:25:858 (25858|2) - ^^
00:29:734 (29734|1,30071|3) - Same as above. These are only stringed sounds, and in the lower difficulties, you generally want to map the louder and more audible sounds which happen to be the drums most of the time.
00:55:015 - Add a note in 1 for the snare? You used this same kind of note structure here at 00:51:813 (51813|0,51897|1,51981|2,51981|3) too
00:57:206 (57206|1) - I'd consider moving this to 3 to make a jack with 00:56:700 (56700|2,56953|2) since they're all the same sound.
00:58:891 (58891|3) - Move this to 2 or something. It's more of an aesthetic thing, but the jack at 00:58:554 (58554|3,58891|3) doesn't look as nice imo.
02:18:273 - Add another note here for the kick like at 02:17:599 (137599|1,137599|0)
02:18:948 - ^^
02:23:919 (143919|3) - Needs to be snapped to 02:23:891 which is 1/3 because of the swing here.
02:24:257 (144257|0) - I think this needs to be snapped to 02:24:172 because it's short and staccato which tends to use 1/2.
02:29:313 (149313|2) - to 02:29:285 on 1/3
02:37:403 (157403|0,157487|1,157655|3) - You basically know what I mean now about the swing and 1/3.
02:42:206 (162206|3) - End this at 02:42:543 just so it's easier to read and also because the sound ends there just like at 02:40:858 (160858|3,161532|0)
03:04:285 (184285|2,184285|1) - Reduce this to a single note because it's a kick like at 03:03:948 (183948|1)
03:27:712 (207712|1,207880|0) - Why not control J this so that it looks identical to 03:28:217 (208217|0,208386|1,208554|2,208554|3) similar to what you did at 03:26:363 which I thought was really nice.
03:50:464 (230464|3,230464|2,230633|0) - Consider flipping these notes around with control H so that 03:49:959 (229959|0,229959|1,230212|0,230212|1) will be jacked with the jump.
Overall pretty good, just a few inconsistencies you need to iron out, and consider following mainly drums for the lower diffs just because it's easier to hear and predict for beginning players.
Topic Starter
Alsty-

Protastic101 wrote:

This is an amazing remix agreeeeeee

Column 1|2|3|4

Mod
[General]
  1. I highly suggest adding a difficulty between Intermediate and Hyper because the diff gap is almost 2.5* so there's no diff in the 2* range. i think i will try reduce SR at hyper a little bit xD
  2. Uncheck widescreen support in all diffs. oki
  3. Why'd you sample import all your hs when you named them the correct way? I'd consider resetting everything and just applying use the clap, whistle, and finish function. So hitsounds would be named like so: soft-hitfinish2 -> soft-hitclap. soft-hitnormal -> soft-hitfinish. soft-hitwhistle2 -> soft-hitnormal. Remove soft-hitwhistle2 because it's the same as soft-hitfinish2 oki
[Beginner]00:23:330 (23330|2,24341|2,26026|1) - Etc. For a beginner difficulty, I would highly suggest only mapping to clearly audible sounds such as the claps, snares, and kicks at 00:23:667 (23667|3,23835|2,24004|0) . The first notes I highlighted don't have any strong sound. applied , also make the bass double
00:38:330 - Add a note here because the sound here is the snare like at 00:31:925 (31925|1) its actually a different parts , but i applied it :3
00:51:813 - You could probably add a note here to represent the drum kick or whatever since 1/2 is already commonly used in this diff. considered
00:53:667 (53667|0) - It'd be better to move this note up to 00:53:835 where the 1/2 kick burst starting from 00:53:498 ends. It accents the upbeat. i placed another 1/2 notes there xD
00:56:363 (56363|3) - Move this down to 00:56:195 because the kick is here. 00:56:363 has no sound except for the synth which started at 00:56:195 . Probably better though would be to move this note up to 00:56:532 where there's a second kick. added more and re-arranged
00:58:386 (58386|0,58891|3) - No doubles for the snares here? Bit of a consistency issue since this section hasn't ended so you should generally map the snares the same way you map them throughout the rest of the section, which is with doubles like at 00:56:026 (56026|0,56026|1) im actually avoiding double at 1/2 notes , i will keep this
01:08:835 - Starting in this measure, because of how the drum changes the rhythm to use 1/4, I'd consider adding a 1/2 burst here, which means notes at places like 01:09:004 - 01:09:341 - 01:09:678 - 01:10:015 aplied
01:22:655 - Add another note here for the snare? It's louder than the kicks around it like at 01:22:318 (82318|1) added
01:37:150 (97150|1,97824|2) - These are the same pitch, but I also understand why they're separate notes. To show they're apart of the same note, why not extend 01:37:150 (97150|1) to end at 01:38:498 ? im sure this synth is getting higher on that place
01:48:948 (108948|3) - Make this an LN and end at 01:49:285 for the bass? It helps to lead into the next measure because players will have a note that tells them when the next note is coming. i will keep this
02:05:464 - 02:02:768 - Add notes here for the piano because you added notes at 02:07:487 (127487|0,127487|2,128161|0,128161|2) for the downbeat of the piano too, so consistency I guess. just re-arranged , im pretty sure the first one just a single tap
02:13:386 - Add a note? The kick is strong enough to be heard and it transitions well into the next measure, plus, you mapped it at 02:16:082 (136082|1) added
02:23:919 (143919|3) - This note is snapped incorrectly. It should either be on 02:23:891 which is 1/6, or 02:24:004 which is the offbeat. I'd recommend moving it up there since it's a stronger sound. applied
02:27:712 (147712|1) - Consider removing this LN, and instead adding a note at 02:27:712 - 02:27:880 cause of the break in the music.
02:35:802 - 02:36:813 - 02:37:150 - I highly suggest adding notes here to help the player keep the beat and know where they're at in the music.
02:38:498 - 02:39:509 - 02:39:846 - Same as above. aplied
02:46:588 (166588|2) - Move this down to 02:46:419 because the kick is there.
02:47:094 - You should also consider adding a note here too for the kick since if you map one kick, you should map the next few kicks to be consistent.
03:03:105 (183105|3) - If you're not going to map the vocals at any other point in this song leading to this part, then don't map it here. It's a little confusing because you've already set the rhythm and structure of the map from the beginning, which is drum based, but then you suddenly break off into vocal here. re-arranged

[Intermediate]00:28:554 (28554|1) - If you're just mapping the drums here, you should remove this.
00:25:858 (25858|2) - ^^
00:29:734 (29734|1,30071|3) - Same as above. These are only stringed sounds, and in the lower difficulties, you generally want to map the louder and more audible sounds which happen to be the drums most of the time. re-arranged
00:55:015 - Add a note in 1 for the snare? You used this same kind of note structure here at 00:51:813 (51813|0,51897|1,51981|2,51981|3) too oki
00:57:206 (57206|1) - I'd consider moving this to 3 to make a jack with 00:56:700 (56700|2,56953|2) since they're all the same sound. i keep it :3
00:58:891 (58891|3) - Move this to 2 or something. It's more of an aesthetic thing, but the jack at 00:58:554 (58554|3,58891|3) doesn't look as nice imo. re-arranged in the better place :v
02:18:273 - Add another note here for the kick like at 02:17:599 (137599|1,137599|0)
02:18:948 - ^^ done
02:23:919 (143919|3) - Needs to be snapped to 02:23:891 which is 1/3 because of the swing here. 1/6 same as beginner
02:24:257 (144257|0) - I think this needs to be snapped to 02:24:172 because it's short and staccato which tends to use 1/2. ^
02:29:313 (149313|2) - to 02:29:285 on 1/3 ^
02:37:403 (157403|0,157487|1,157655|3) - You basically know what I mean now about the swing and 1/3. ^
02:42:206 (162206|3) - End this at 02:42:543 just so it's easier to read and also because the sound ends there just like at 02:40:858 (160858|3,161532|0)
03:04:285 (184285|2,184285|1) - Reduce this to a single note because it's a kick like at 03:03:948 (183948|1) ah its wrong snapped @@
03:27:712 (207712|1,207880|0) - Why not control J this so that it looks identical to 03:28:217 (208217|0,208386|1,208554|2,208554|3) similar to what you did at 03:26:363 which I thought was really nice. woah nice , thanks
03:50:464 (230464|3,230464|2,230633|0) - Consider flipping these notes around with control H so that 03:49:959 (229959|0,229959|1,230212|0,230212|1) will be jacked with the jump. applied
Overall pretty good, just a few inconsistencies you need to iron out, and consider following mainly drums for the lower diffs just because it's easier to hear and predict for beginning players.
ah finally a helpfull mod for beginner and intermediate , thanks a lot ! :3
UPDATED
Fubukicat
hi there modsu

dadon
key=1/2/3/4
[Another]
00:41:532 (41532|2) - how about adding another note in 2 ? , drum sounds louder here and it had a jack that match pitch nicely

(note that it's really something I see this way , but your pattern are actually really okay , so feel free to keep the way you like it the most)
01:24:678 (84678|3) - move to 2 to avoid using the 4th collumn a lot
01:26:026 (86026|2) - move to 1 or 2 ^same reason
01:28:891 (88891|1) - move to 3
01:35:296 (95296|2,95296|3) - move one collumn to the left side
03:35:296 (215296|3) - move to 3 ? (the pitch is still correct if you leave it in 4 , up to you )

01:43:891 (103891|3) - this should be two notes according to : 01:38:498 (98498|1,98498|3,98498|2) - it's the same sound minus the cymbal hit
01:45:914 (105914|1) - ^ same suggestion
01:47:936 (107936|0) - ^ ^ same suggestion

02:20:212 (140212|3,140212|2,140296|0,140296|1) - the first one of thoose chords should be here : 02:20:169 (140169|2,140169|3) - 1/8 snap , then for readability I suggest Ctrl+J
basically I mean this , + added one more to the last one for the louder sound

[Intermediate]
00:40:858 (40858|1) - i'd see more a note here rather tham here :00:41:026 (41026|0) - , so I suggest you to move your note here : 00:41:026 (41026|0) - by 1/2 down (on the white line)
01:01:419 (61419|3,61757|1) - Ctrl+J , then move : 01:01:588 (61588|1) - to 1 or 3
01:10:858 (70858|1,71111|2) - the first LN should end 1/4 later , and the second one should start 1/4 later (both on white line)
00:57:712 (57712|0,57712|0) - There is a note under your LN here, (overlaping)

Also I suggest you to check Ai mod for this diff , there is some thingys you might want to fix

[Hyper]
00:10:858 (10858|2,11195|1,11532|0,11869|3) - this is really cool imo :o
00:50:970 (50970|1) - move to 3 ? to avoid this : 00:50:970 (50970|1,51307|1,51644|1,51981|1) -
01:03:442 (63442|1) - move to 4 to avoid : 01:02:599 (62599|1,63105|1,63442|1,63779|1,64116|1) -

Check Ai mod aswell there is some snap issue with the kiai

[Beginner]
01:16:757 (76757|1,76925|3) - how about Ctrl+J then move one to the left ?
03:01:251 (181251|0) - move up by 1/2 (white line)
03:49:285 (229285|3) - add note here for the drum ?
03:51:981 (231981|0) - ^

Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Alsty-

Eternalie wrote:

hi there modsu

dadon
key=1/2/3/4
[Another]
00:41:532 (41532|2) - how about adding another note in 2 ? , drum sounds louder here and it had a jack that match pitch nicely

(note that it's really something I see this way , but your pattern are actually really okay , so feel free to keep the way you like it the most) its looks good , i added that on every part on this section
01:24:678 (84678|3) - move to 2 to avoid using the 4th collumn a lot
01:26:026 (86026|2) - move to 1 or 2 ^same reason v
01:28:891 (88891|1) - move to 3 v
01:35:296 (95296|2,95296|3) - move one collumn to the left side v
03:35:296 (215296|3) - move to 3 ? (the pitch is still correct if you leave it in 4 , up to you ) i think i will re-new abit , make it harder on the last section xD

01:43:891 (103891|3) - this should be two notes according to : 01:38:498 (98498|1,98498|3,98498|2) - it's the same sound minus the cymbal hit adeed 1
01:45:914 (105914|1) - ^ same suggestion
01:47:936 (107936|0) - ^ ^ same suggestion

02:20:212 (140212|3,140212|2,140296|0,140296|1) - the first one of thoose chords should be here : 02:20:169 (140169|2,140169|3) - 1/8 snap , then for readability I suggest Ctrl+J ah i forget this, this is actually 1/6 sound , i forget to re-snap this one thanks for notice btw :c
basically I mean this , + added one more to the last one for the louder sound

[Intermediate]
00:40:858 (40858|1) - i'd see more a note here rather tham here :00:41:026 (41026|0) - , so I suggest you to move your note here : 00:41:026 (41026|0) - by 1/2 down (on the white line) its missplaced @@ thanks for notice
01:01:419 (61419|3,61757|1) - Ctrl+J , then move : 01:01:588 (61588|1) - to 1 or 3 seems good
01:10:858 (70858|1,71111|2) - the first LN should end 1/4 later , and the second one should start 1/4 later (both on white line) thanks nice notice
00:57:712 (57712|0,57712|0) - There is a note under your LN here, (overlaping) oops xD

Also I suggest you to check Ai mod for this diff , there is some thingys you might want to fix

[Hyper]
00:10:858 (10858|2,11195|1,11532|0,11869|3) - this is really cool imo :o
00:50:970 (50970|1) - move to 3 ? to avoid this : 00:50:970 (50970|1,51307|1,51644|1,51981|1) - re-arranged with other stuff , due to protect that consistency xD
01:03:442 (63442|1) - move to 4 to avoid : 01:02:599 (62599|1,63105|1,63442|1,63779|1,64116|1) - ^

Check Ai mod aswell there is some snap issue with the kiai

[Beginner]
01:16:757 (76757|1,76925|3) - how about Ctrl+J then move one to the left ? i think its okay
03:01:251 (181251|0) - move up by 1/2 (white line) i add 1notes there
03:49:285 (229285|3) - add note here for the drum ? i think its fine with single
03:51:981 (231981|0) - ^ ^^

Good Luck :3
thankyou etlie , this is very usefull , i think im to lazy to re-checking it properly :c

UPDATED
_RamiWins_
Hey just finished my mod for your last diff , sry I only did 1 diff but the map is a bit long and I am a bit buisy ...


Another Kabaneri
try making 00:32:852 (32852|2) - to x0,65
speed up (x1,3) from 02:26:700 (146700|3) - to 02:27:037 (147037|2) -
slowdown (x0,85) from 02:27:037 (147037|2) - to 02:27:712 (147712|2) - after the sd just make it x1,0 again
^ 02:28:049 (148049|0) - to 02:29:060 (149060|2) - ^
^ 02:29:734 (149734|3) - to 02:30:408 (150408|2) - ^
move 02:30:493 (150493|3) - to 02:30:535 (150535|3) -
move 02:30:661 (150661|1) - to 02:30:619 (150619|1) -
again sd (0,85) 02:32:431 (152431|1) - to 02:33:105 (153105|2) - after the sd agian x1,0
^ 02:35:127 (155127|2) - to 02:35:802 (155802|1) - ^
add speddup (x1,5) from 02:35:802 (155802|1) - to 02:36:139 (156139|2) -
sd (x0,85) at 02:36:139 (156139|2) - to 02:36:813 (156813|3) - after x1,0 again
move 02:37:403 (157403|0) - to 02:37:361 (157361|0) -
move 02:37:655 (157655|3) - to 02:37:698 (157698|3) -
sd (x0,85) from 02:37:824 (157824|1) - to 02:38:498 (158498|1) - after x1,0 again
^ 02:38:835 (158835|1) - to 02:39:509 (159509|3) - ^
make sv at 02:40:605 (160605|2) - to (x0,7)
add sv at 02:40:689 (160689|2) - x1,0
make sv at 02:41:279 (161279|1) - to (x0,7)
add sv at 02:41:363 (161363|1) - x1,0
make sv at 02:41:953 (161953|2) - to (0,7)
add sv at 02:42:037 (162037|2) - x1,0

yeah that is pretty much it gl with your map further on :)
Topic Starter
Alsty-

_RamiWins_ wrote:

Hey just finished my mod for your last diff , sry I only did 1 diff but the map is a bit long and I am a bit buisy ...


Another Kabaneri
try making 00:32:852 (32852|2) - to x0,65
speed up (x1,3) from 02:26:700 (146700|3) - to 02:27:037 (147037|2) -
slowdown (x0,85) from 02:27:037 (147037|2) - to 02:27:712 (147712|2) - after the sd just make it x1,0 again
^ 02:28:049 (148049|0) - to 02:29:060 (149060|2) - ^
^ 02:29:734 (149734|3) - to 02:30:408 (150408|2) - ^
move 02:30:493 (150493|3) - to 02:30:535 (150535|3) -
move 02:30:661 (150661|1) - to 02:30:619 (150619|1) -
again sd (0,85) 02:32:431 (152431|1) - to 02:33:105 (153105|2) - after the sd agian x1,0
^ 02:35:127 (155127|2) - to 02:35:802 (155802|1) - ^
add speddup (x1,5) from 02:35:802 (155802|1) - to 02:36:139 (156139|2) -
sd (x0,85) at 02:36:139 (156139|2) - to 02:36:813 (156813|3) - after x1,0 again
move 02:37:403 (157403|0) - to 02:37:361 (157361|0) -
move 02:37:655 (157655|3) - to 02:37:698 (157698|3) -
sd (x0,85) from 02:37:824 (157824|1) - to 02:38:498 (158498|1) - after x1,0 again
^ 02:38:835 (158835|1) - to 02:39:509 (159509|3) - ^
make sv at 02:40:605 (160605|2) - to (x0,7)
add sv at 02:40:689 (160689|2) - x1,0
make sv at 02:41:279 (161279|1) - to (x0,7)
add sv at 02:41:363 (161363|1) - x1,0
make sv at 02:41:953 (161953|2) - to (0,7)
add sv at 02:42:037 (162037|2) - x1,0

yeah that is pretty much it gl with your map further on :)
1/4 your mod is applied but im re-scaled it again for the best game play :u
thanks for mod :D
MrDorian
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Sorry for late mod ;;
Hyper Koutetsujou
00:03:273 (3273|2) - move to 4 for pitch?
00:14:060 (14060|2) - ^
00:15:071 (15071|2,15240|1) - ctrl+h for pitch
00:38:161 (38161|1,38498|1,38835|1,39172|1,39509|1) - anchor, maybe move 00:39:509 (39509|1) - to 4
maybe move 00:27:712 (27712|2,27880|1) - to 4 and 3 and, then 00:28:049 (28049|3) - to 2 and 00:28:217 (28217|1) - to 1 and do 234
00:38:161 (38161|1,38498|1,38835|1,39172|1,39509|1) - same anchor, maybe do something like this
00:43:554 (43554|3,44228|0) - aren't you missing notes?
00:51:981 (51981|3,51981|1,52318|0,52318|2) - maybe like this, because one of sounds is fainting, but evenly, and second one is fainting too, but it changes more, so it can be in separate lns
02:26:195 - 1/2 ln here?
02:18:948 (138948|0,139074|1,139158|3,139285|2,139411|1,139495|0,139622|3,139748|2,139832|1,139959|0,140085|2,140169|3) - these are 1/3th
02:23:919 (143919|2,144004|1,144257|3) - ^
02:29:313 (149313|2,149397|1,149566|3) - ^^
02:31:925 (151925|1,152009|3,152094|2,152178|1,152262|0) - ghosts, 02:31:981 - add note here (1/3th) and add 1/2 lns at 02:32:094 - and 02:32:262
02:37:403 (157403|0,157487|1,157655|3) - 1/3th
02:40:184 (160184|3,160268|2,160352|1,160436|0,160858|0,160942|1,161026|2,161111|3,161532|3,161616|2,161700|1,161785|0,162206|0,162290|1,162375|2,162459|3) - they're ghost, I suggest you this
03:35:127 (215127|3,215296|3) - move this to 3 or 2, keep consistent
03:43:723 (223723|1,223891|2,224060|1,224228|2,224397|1,224566|2,224734|1) - is there possibility, to move this more?
btw. Maybe add some easy svs, it's Hard diff, players can start from here learn how to read svs or sth

Another Kabaneri
00:32:442-00:33:611 - add svs?
00:56:911 (56911|0,56911|2) - wrong snap (1/4th) and 00:56:700 (56700|0,56700|2,56953|2,56953|0,57206|2,57206|0) - just want to be SV :3
01:00:282 (60282|2,60282|3,60535|1,60535|0) - again bad snap (1/4th)
01:11:195 (71195|0,71279|1,71363|2) - shouldn't it be 1/8th? like this?
What about little slowjam from 01:38:540 to 1:48:948, it would rise a bit (0,05x or sth) like every sound like in 1:41:195
02:37:655 (157655|3) - wrong snap
Okay, it's all
GL~~
Topic Starter
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MrDorian wrote:

Hi! I'm from Recycle Bin Queue!
Sorry for late mod ;;
Hyper Koutetsujou
00:03:273 (3273|2) - move to 4 for pitch? oke
00:14:060 (14060|2) - ^ ^
00:15:071 (15071|2,15240|1) - ctrl+h for pitch im okay with this
00:38:161 (38161|1,38498|1,38835|1,39172|1,39509|1) - anchor, maybe move 00:39:509 (39509|1) - to 4
maybe move 00:27:712 (27712|2,27880|1) - to 4 and 3 and, then 00:28:049 (28049|3) - to 2 and 00:28:217 (28217|1) - to 1 and do 234 re-arranged
00:38:161 (38161|1,38498|1,38835|1,39172|1,39509|1) - same anchor, maybe do something like this its same like aboves
00:43:554 (43554|3,44228|0) - aren't you missing notes? nope
00:51:981 (51981|3,51981|1,52318|0,52318|2) - maybe like this, because one of sounds is fainting, but evenly, and second one is fainting too, but it changes more, so it can be in separate lns i will consider it
02:26:195 - 1/2 ln here? if i put LNs there it seem bad if i didnt put more on the next section
02:18:948 (138948|0,139074|1,139158|3,139285|2,139411|1,139495|0,139622|3,139748|2,139832|1,139959|0,140085|2,140169|3) - these are 1/3th
02:23:919 (143919|2,144004|1,144257|3) - ^
02:29:313 (149313|2,149397|1,149566|3) - ^^ great notice , thanks !
02:31:925 (151925|1,152009|3,152094|2,152178|1,152262|0) - ghosts, 02:31:981 - add note here (1/3th) and add 1/2 lns at 02:32:094 - and 02:32:26 - i remove those notes instead of adding
02:37:403 (157403|0,157487|1,157655|3) - 1/3th asdsada
02:40:184 (160184|3,160268|2,160352|1,160436|0,160858|0,160942|1,161026|2,161111|3,161532|3,161616|2,161700|1,161785|0,162206|0,162290|1,162375|2,162459|3) - they're ghost, I suggest you this its have same layer with another
03:35:127 (215127|3,215296|3) - move this to 3 or 2, keep consistent re-arranged
03:43:723 (223723|1,223891|2,224060|1,224228|2,224397|1,224566|2,224734|1) - is there possibility, to move this more? i want to keep this
btw. Maybe add some easy svs, it's Hard diff, players can start from here learn how to read svs or sth maybe i will add it later , making sv is tired =3=

Another Kabaneri
00:32:442-00:33:611 - add svs? im okay with it let it empty
00:56:911 (56911|0,56911|2) - wrong snap (1/4th) ah its must be an error while i changing the mp3 thanks notice :3 and 00:56:700 (56700|0,56700|2,56953|2,56953|0,57206|2,57206|0) - just want to be SV :3 later , im still okay with those sv right now @@
01:00:282 (60282|2,60282|3,60535|1,60535|0) - again bad snap (1/4th) thankss
01:11:195 (71195|0,71279|1,71363|2) - shouldn't it be 1/8th? like this? re-arranged
What about little slowjam from 01:38:540 to 1:48:948, it would rise a bit (0,05x or sth) like every sound like in 1:41:195 the desity makes it worst if i place on it
02:37:655 (157655|3) - wrong snap oki
Okay, it's all
GL~~
thanksss for mod . very helpfull..
UPDATED
_Zenith
Hi! Requested in my queue!
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[General]
Looks good.
[Beginner Nue]
00:51:813 (51813|1,51981|2) - Actually i think you can use a ln to replace..
01:27:712 (87712|2) - Delete this one? Because you follow kick just use one note before.
02:36:813 Missing one note here? Or ignored by intentional. But missing note by intentional here just feel weird
[Intermediate Bushi]
00:24:341 (24341|1) - Ghost note? If you follow the vocal, It's should not on 2 to jack with this 00:24:004 (24004|1) - .
00:29:734 (29734|1) - ^?
00:34:662 Actually i prefer to add a note here to jack with 00:34:453 (34453|1) -
00:35:970 ^, jack with 00:36:139 (36139|2) -
01:03:442 Missing note? You follow that sound before.
01:09:004 Try using ln here. Don't ignore the continuous kick sound.
01:09:341 ^,
01:09:678 ^.
01:10:015 You ignored that continuous sound, or forgot to add it? You use ln to follow 01:10:184 (70184|0) - here, so why don't you follow here?
01:17:262 (77262|3) - Try double notes here? Because you using that to follow snare at here 01:18:611 (78611|3) -
01:23:498 Looks ignored sound? but you followed at 01:24:172 (84172|0,84341|0) - , so add
01:28:891 Add note?
01:34:285 hmm.. Missing note?
02:10:858 - 02:15:914 Dont always use [12] [34], Try use more variation like [13][24] or [14][23]

Feel free to reject :D..
If you have somewhere is intentional to ignored or pattern..
:) GL!
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