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typeMARS - Triumph & Regret [Taiko]

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Fantazy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年11月15日 at 下午 08:51:15

Artist: typeMARS
Title: Triumph & Regret
Source: Dynamix
Tags: Zyon 載音 Rhythm Game Marathon Lucky Lotus & Touitsu Recordings - Dawn of the Sol - Day
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8189kb
Play Time: 05:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Inner Oni (7.55 stars, 2554 notes)
Download: typeMARS - Triumph & Regret
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Fanlazy - Lazy & Crazy(?)




and Thank you all moders and players too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
katacheh

Fantazyy wrote:

which difficully is better for this map ??? :33
I will delete one 030
我覺得差不多的說...

然後順便來mod 因為很閒

General
你似乎放了兩個音檔 有一個沒用到(audio.mp3)?

Enable countdown 和 widescreen support 取消

然後你看一下aimod 把它修正吧
Fan'z Inner Oni
00:20:701 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,1) -
改成 dddk k d d k k ddkkddkkd d kkkd 這樣比較好打((被毆:33

00:54:815 (15,16,17,1) - 突然一個1/6 太難了ww 是不太搭

01:05:272 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - kkddkkd 這樣比較搭音樂的感覺

01:05:958 (1) 到 01:16:930 (1) 有點空虛... 多放一點到1/1? (現在是2/1)

02:09:044 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,1) - 這邊timing快一點 太擠了的感覺

03:16:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,1) - 好擠qwq 前面timing快一點


03:17:615 (1) 到 03:39:558 (1) 感覺休息好久 有一點無聊 放一點簡單的怎麼樣?

04:12:644 (2) - 這邊x1.3不會太快? (如何HR和DT?) 因為你滑條速率1.6已經很快了

有想到什麼再來補充吧
Topic Starter
Fantazy

katacheh wrote:

Fantazyy wrote:

which difficully is better for this map ??? :33
I will delete one 030
我覺得差不多的說...

然後順便來mod 因為很閒 = =

General
你似乎放了兩個音檔 有一個沒用到(audio.mp3)? 你應該是用到之前的檔案??

Enable countdown 和 widescreen support 取消 _(:3_|<)

然後你看一下aimod 把它修正吧
Fan'z Inner Oni
00:20:701 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,1) -
改成 dddk k d d k k ddkkddkkd d kkkd 這樣比較好打((被毆:33 AuA 你那9顆多了2顆

00:54:815 (15,16,17,1) - 突然一個1/6 太難了ww 是不太搭 好波 我刪掉一顆k

01:05:272 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - kkddkkd 這樣比較搭音樂的感覺 不過後面音效比較高 那我改成kkddkkk d kkkd 囉

01:05:958 (1) 到 01:16:930 (1) 有點空虛... 多放一點到1/1? (現在是2/1) 額..那就kd dd kd dk 這樣循環囉~~你看看唄

02:09:044 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,1) - 這邊timing快一點 太擠了的感覺 我這前面多放了幾個timming作漸進加速 02:09那裏放x1.00 後面1/6的放1.10 然後kiai就加到x1.20

03:16:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,1) - 好擠qwq 前面timing快一點 好咩~~我前面用到x1.00後面1/6加到x1.10


03:17:615 (1) 到 03:39:558 (1) 感覺休息好久 有一點無聊 放一點簡單的怎麼樣? 嘛 ....打那麼辛苦不累嗎??XD 那我就放了~~看一下喔 ((只剩後面一小段休息了OAO

04:12:644 (2) - 這邊x1.3不會太快? (如何HR和DT?) 因為你滑條速率1.6已經很快了 ㄚㄚ可能是我沒注意到多按一下:P

有想到什麼再來補充吧
嘛 謝謝阿 變得好簡單XDD

我之後還有一些修改 可能跟上面改的不一樣0.0
Smallwu
Hi, mod from in-game PM


[General]
沒啥問題(っ´ω`c)

[Fan'z Inner Oni]
01:05:272 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - 改成 kkddkkd 或 kkkkkkd ?

01:06:301 - 加一條x0.9的綠線 把 01:06:644 的綠線移到 01:08:701 原本的配置太突兀了 那顆藍好可憐QwQ

02:11:787 - Kiai Time起點

02:54:987 - 這條綠線別那麼快>3<

03:06:558 - Add d 然後 03:06:644 (88,89) 變成kk或kd

03:16:244(綠線) - 03:17:615(藍線)- just建議

03:17:701 - 03:22:758 - Spinner的起點和終點
因為這段時間都有"咻~~~~~"的那個音效 而且這樣給玩家休息的時間也長了一些

04:11:101 - 單純建議 這條綠線最好別變速 有點難讀:3

04:11:358 (86) - d

04:12:472 - Kiai Time起點

04:12:215 (98) - d

04:34:415 - Kiai Time起點

04:56:530 - 把這條線移到 04:56:444

另個難度我就不看了 因為光是看較簡單難度的1/6就快榨乾我了(´ω`)
祝Rank喔>w<
Topic Starter
Fantazy

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, mod from in-game PM

阿怎麼變6.98★了???

[General]
沒啥問題(っ´ω`c) 耶~~好棒棒>3< :)

[Fan'z Inner Oni]
01:05:272 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - 改成 kkddkkd 或 kkkkkkd ? 那就kkddkkd 這樣我的miss率比較低

01:06:301 - 加一條x0.9的綠線 把 01:06:644 的綠線移到 01:08:701 原本的配置太突兀了 那顆藍好可憐QwQ ㄟ黑XDDD

02:11:787 - Kiai Time起點 起了

02:54:987 - 這條綠線別那麼快>3< 速度才是王道!!

03:06:558 - Add d 然後 03:06:644 (88,89) 變成kk或kd kd ~~╰(⊙-⊙)╮

03:16:244(綠線) - 03:17:615(藍線)- just建議 我X 改這個害我飆到6.96★

03:17:701 - 03:22:758 - Spinner的起點和終點
因為這段時間都有"咻~~~~~"的那個音效 而且這樣給玩家休息的時間也長了一些 咻~~~~~~~~~~╭(⊙-⊙)╯

04:11:101 - 單純建議 這條綠線最好別變速 有點難讀:3 碰!!! 已用爆裂魔法炸了><

04:11:358 (86) - d dwb

04:12:472 - Kiai Time起點 起了

04:12:215 (98) - d dob

04:34:415 - Kiai Time起點 又起了

04:56:530 - 把這條線移到 04:56:444 跟起了是一樣的?030 可是速度也調 會看不到ㄟ??

另個難度我就不看了 因為光是看較簡單難度的1/6就快榨乾我了(´ω`)
祝Rank喔>w<
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Topic Starter
Fantazy
Fan'z Taiko is delete ~~~~~~~

The old one is here http://osump.net/mapsets/577f72204903ea4321f66526
Smallwu

Fantazyy wrote:

Fan'z Taiko is delete ~~~~~~~

The old one is here http://osump.net/mapsets/577f72204903ea4321f66526
╰(⊙-⊙)╮SM好╭(⊙-⊙)╯SM妙 ╰(⊙-⊙)╮呱呱叫╭(⊙-⊙)╯
Nyan

3rd try

[General]


SliderMultiplier:1.60383972523691 -> 1.4

[Timing]

01:16:930 - move this green timing point -1ms (76929)
02:33:730 - move this green timing point -1ms (153729)
02:54:987 - better remove the green point
04:56:358 - move this green timing point +1ms (296359)

[Pattern]

01:44:272 - add a kat
04:00:987 (83,84,85,86,87,88,1) - kkkddkk
Actually pattern is good.

☆☆☆
Topic Starter
Fantazy

Nyan wrote:


3rd try OMG????XDDDDD

[General]


SliderMultiplier:1.60383972523691 -> 1.4 V

[Timing]

01:16:930 - move this green timing point -1ms (76929) V
02:33:730 - move this green timing point -1ms (153729) V
02:54:987 - better remove the green point V
04:56:358 - move this green timing point +1ms (296359) V

[Pattern]

01:44:272 - add a kat V
04:00:987 (83,84,85,86,87,88,1) - kkkddkk V
Actually pattern is good. :D:D

☆☆☆
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nyan
ahh actually I intended SliderMultiplier 1.6 my mistake :ccc sorry
Topic Starter
Fantazy

Nyan wrote:

ahh actually I intended SliderMultiplier 1.6 my mistake :ccc sorry
Thats ok ( ゚∀゚)アハハ八八ノヽノヽノヽノ \ / \ / \ / \/
-byakuya-


3PC
Topic Starter
Fantazy

-byakuya- wrote:



3PC
到底在炫耀什麼wwwwwwww

好圖不能只給你一個FC (σˋ▽ˊ)σ
-byakuya-

Fantazyy wrote:

-byakuya- wrote:



3PC
到底在炫耀什麼wwwwwwww

好圖不能只給你一個FC (σˋ▽ˊ)σ


因為你很希望我fc這map 沒炫耀的意思
m421
Hi, MOD from mod queue!
I write MOD all intend to good better this map. But if you don't like few it, It doesn't matter you ignore it. :o
I'm not good at English, sorry if you can't understand my sentence. ><

[Fan's Inner Oni]
00:00:130 ~ 00:09:730 : Ringing much kick's 1/1, d d d d…. So picking up the kick is better ?

TO

OR

.

For the same reason, ?
00:11:701 (5) - k
00:13:072 (15) - k
00:14:444 (5) - k
00:15:815 (15) - k
00:17:187 (5) - k
00:18:558 (15) - k

00:21:044 (43,44,45,46) - same 00:20:701 (38,39,40,41,42):? dddk k (1/6 + 1/4)
00:21:387 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - dkkdkkd (1/6) That is more natural imo.


You should avoid continuing same color long.
00:22:758 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - dkkd kd ?(1/4)
00:23:444 (12) - d
00:24:815 (26) - d
00:26:187 (37,38,39) - dk k (1/4)
00:27:215 (45,46) - d k (1/2)
00:28:244 (52) - d
00:29:101 (59) - k
00:29:615 (63,64,65,66) - d k d k (1/2)
00:30:987 (72,73) - dk (1/4)
00:31:930 (79) - d?
00:37:587 (7,8) - dk? (1/4)
00:38:530 (14) - d
00:41:272 (37) - d

00:44:015: ~ 00:54:987:
On the first note of the measure, when pick up the kick, easy to find a rhythm.
Next, when last note of the measure and first note of the next measure is wrong color, player recognize easy. So, became pleasant.





TO like




is better imo.

01:02:873 (13,14,15,16) - ddkk (1/4)
01:04:244 (13,14) - dk (1/4)
01:05:272 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - kddkddk (1/6) That is more natural imo.
01:27:730 (34,35) - kk (1/4)
01:38:872 (99) - k


02:02:015 (10) - k
02:03:387 (20) - k and 02:03:472 - add k
02:06:215 (42,43) - kd (1/4)
02:06:215 (42,43) - add k and 02:07:672 (53) - d
02:11:101 (89) - k This color scheme is hard to hit. ><


02:13:158 (13) - d?
02:19:672 (71,72,73,74) - kkdk? (1/4)
02:22:415 (96,97,98,99,1) - kkkkd (1/4)
02:24:129 (13) - d?
02:30:643 (71,72,73,74) - kkdk? (1/4)

02:33:730: ~ If same pattern until now, player get tired. So variegate.
02:35:015 - add k
02:35:101 (13) - d
02:36:387 - add k
02:37:758 - add k
02:40:501 - add d
02:41:615 (71,72,73,74) - kkdk? (1/4)
02:43:244 - add d
02:44:358 (96,97,98,99,1) - kkkkd (1/4)

02:44:701: ~ Added kick, but there isn't change pettern, It's unnatural.
02:44:872 (2,3,4,5) - ddkdd (1/4)
02:45:987 - add k
02:46:072 (13) - d
02:46:244 (14,15,16,17) - ddkkd (1/4)
02:47:358 - add k
02:47:787 - add k
02:48:730 - add k
02:49:158 - add d
02:50:530 - add k
02:51:472 - add d
02:51:901 - add k

02:52:930 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - kddkddkdkddkddkd (1/4) It doesn't match melody.


02:55:672 (1) - d
02:56:358 (6) - k
02:56:958 - add k?
02:57:044 (11) - d
02:58:330 (23,24,25) - kdk? (1/4)
02:59:787 (34) - d
03:00:044 (36) - k?
03:00:301 (38) - k?
03:00:815 (42,43) - d k (1/2)
03:01:072 - add k
03:01:158 (44) - d
03:01:415 (46) - k
03:01:587 (47) - k
03:02:530 (54) - d
03:03:815 (66) - k
03:12:130 (131) - d
03:13:501 (141,142) - dk

03:16:587 (6,7,8,9) - kkkd (1/6)
03:16:930 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kddkddk (1/6)


03:28:244 (10,11) - k k d(1/1)
03:36:130 (24) - k?

04:01:501: ~ Pick up the kick, become much more fun.
04:01:158 (85,86,87,88,1) - kkdkd (1/4)
04:01:672 (2,3,4) - kkd (1/4)
04:03:215 (14) - d
04:03:386 (15,16,17) - kkd (1/4)
04:04:158 (21,22) - kd (1/4)
04:04:415 (23,24,25) - kkd (1/4)
04:05:615 (32,33,34,35) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:06:986 (45,46,47,48) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:08:358 (55,56,57,58) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:10:501 (75) - k

04:11:787 (91,92,93,94,95,96) - kddkdd (1/6)
04:12:301 (99,100,101,1) - kkkd (1/6) This color scheme is hard to hit. ><

04:12:644 (2,3,4) - kkd (1/4)
04:13:758 - add k
04:13:843 (13,14,15,16) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:14:872 (23) - d
04:15:129 (25,26,27,28,29) - kd kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:16:501 - add k
04:16:586 (38,39,40,41) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:17:957 (51,52,53,54) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:19:244 - add k
04:19:329 (63,64,65,66) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:20:358 (73) - d
04:20:614 (75,76,77,78,79) - kd kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:21:987 - add k
04:22:072 (88,89,90,91) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:23:614 (2,3,4) - kkd (1/4)

04:24:730 - add k
04:24:814 (13,14,15,16) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:25:844 (23) - d
04:26:100 (25,26,27,28,29) - kd kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:27:472 - add k
04:27:557 (38,39,40,41) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:28:930 (51,52,53,54) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:30:215 - k
04:30:300 (63,64,65,66) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4)
04:31:330 (73) - d
04:31:587 - add d
04:32:444 (84) - k
04:32:958 - d


04:35:787 (11,12) - dk (1/4)
04:36:815 (20,21,22,23,24) - kkdkd (1/4)
04:38:530 (34,35) - dk (1/4)
04:39:901 (47) - d
04:41:272 (57,58) - dk (1/4)



04:45:387: ~ Pick up the kick.
04:45:730 - add d
04:46:415 - add k
04:46:758 (43,44) - dk (1/4)
04:46:758 (43,44) - dk (1/4)
04:46:758 (43,44) - add d?
04:47:787 (52,53,54,55,56) - kkdkd (1/4)
04:48:472 - d
04:49:158 - k
04:49:501 (66,67) - dk (1/4)
04:50:530 (75,76,77,78,79) - ddkdk (1/4)

04:50:872: ~ Pick up the 1/2 kick d d d d d d d d…, better imo.

TO like

.

04:54:387 (114) - k

04:54:987 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,1) -

TO

. This one is easy to hit and beautiful.


05:08:015 - add k
05:09:387 - add d
05:10:758 - add k
05:12:130 - add d

05:12:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -

TO

. This one is better imo.

05:17:101 (39) - k
05:17:444 (44) - k
05:17:615 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - dkkdkkd (1/6) That is more natural.


And, scroll changes intensive are become hindrance of play.
00:00:130 - scroll change x1.00.
00:11:101 - delete scroll change.
00:19:330 - delete scroll change.
00:54:987 - delete scroll change.
01:06:301 - scroll change x0.75.
01:08:701 - delete scroll change.
01:16:929 - delete scroll change.
01:27:730 - scroll change x0.80.
01:27:815 - scroll change x0.90.
02:00:815 - scroll change x0.87.
02:03:558 - delete scroll change.
02:06:301 - delete scroll change.
02:10:415 - delete scroll change.
02:11:787 - delete scroll change.
02:11:958 - delete scroll change.
02:32:358 - delete scroll change.
02:33:387 - delete scroll change.
02:33:730 - delete scroll change.
02:55:672 - delete scroll change.
03:14:872 - delete scroll change.
03:16:244 - delete scroll change.
03:50:530 - delete scroll change.
04:01:501 - delete scroll change.
04:11:101 - delete scroll change.
04:12:472 - delete scroll change.
04:12:644 - delete scroll change.
04:33:044 - delete scroll change.
04:34:415 - delete scroll change.
04:34:587 - delete scroll change.
04:54:987 - delete scroll change.
04:56:359 - delete scroll change.
05:07:330 - delete scroll change.
05:12:815 - delete scroll change.


That's all. Thank you for reading this long MOD. Good luck on ranked! :)
Topic Starter
Fantazy

maziari1105 wrote:

Hi, MOD from mod queue!
I write MOD all intend to good better this map. But if you don't like few it, It doesn't matter you ignore it. :o
I'm not good at English, sorry if you can't understand my sentence. >< me too !!! DDDXX

[Fan's Inner Oni]
00:00:130 ~ 00:09:730 : Ringing much kick's 1/1, d d d d…. So picking up the kick is better ?

TO

OR

.
ah ah !!! THANKS!!!! i was never think about it!!!>0<
For the same reason, ? ~~OK >V<
00:11:701 (5) - k V
00:13:072 (15) - k V
00:14:444 (5) - k V
00:15:815 (15) - k V
00:17:187 (5) - k V
00:18:558 (15) - k V

00:21:044 (43,44,45,46) - same 00:20:701 (38,39,40,41,42):? dddk k (1/6 + 1/4) V
00:21:387 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - dkkdkkd (1/6) That is more natural imo. ((OAO it's start to harder again!!


You should avoid continuing same color long. =3=
00:22:758 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - dkkd kd ?(1/4) V
00:23:444 (12) - d V
00:24:815 (26) - d V
00:26:187 (37,38,39) - dk k (1/4) V
00:27:215 (45,46) - d k (1/2) V
00:28:244 (52) - d V
00:29:101 (59) - k V
00:29:615 (63,64,65,66) - d k d k (1/2) V
00:30:987 (72,73) - dk (1/4) V
00:31:930 (79) - d? why question mark? ^^
00:37:587 (7,8) - dk? (1/4) the sound feeling go down so.....
00:38:530 (14) - d V
00:41:272 (37) - d V

00:44:015: ~ 00:54:987: im very distressed this part Thx!!!!!!
On the first note of the measure, when pick up the kick, easy to find a rhythm.
Next, when last note of the measure and first note of the next measure is wrong color, player recognize easy. So, became pleasant.





TO like




is better imo. V

01:02:873 (13,14,15,16) - ddkk (1/4) V
01:04:244 (13,14) - dk (1/4) V
01:05:272 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - kddkddk (1/6) That is more natural imo. V
01:27:730 (34,35) - kk (1/4) V
01:38:872 (99) - k V


02:02:015 (10) - k V
02:03:387 (20) - k and 02:03:472 - add k V
02:06:215 (42,43) - kd (1/4) V
02:06:215 (42,43) - add k and 02:07:672 (53) - d V
02:11:101 (89) - k This color scheme is hard to hit. >< V


02:13:158 (13) - d? ah! that's better OUO
02:19:672 (71,72,73,74) - kkdk? (1/4) i think your right 0.0
02:22:415 (96,97,98,99,1) - kkkkd (1/4) V
02:24:129 (13) - d? V
02:30:643 (71,72,73,74) - kkdk? (1/4) V and (70) k->d

02:33:730: ~ If same pattern until now, player get tired. So variegate. QAQ thx! there has other people said it too
02:35:015 - add k V
02:35:101 (13) - d V
02:36:387 - add k V
02:37:758 - add k V
02:40:501 - add d V
02:41:615 (71,72,73,74) - kkdk? (1/4) V
02:43:244 - add d V
02:44:358 (96,97,98,99,1) - kkkkd (1/4) V

02:44:701: ~ Added kick, but there isn't change pettern, It's unnatural. :O
02:44:872 (2,3,4,5) - ddkdd (1/4) V
02:45:987 - add k V
02:46:072 (13) - d V
02:46:244 (14,15,16,17) - ddkkd (1/4) V
02:47:358 - add k V
02:47:787 - add k V
02:48:730 - add k V
02:49:158 - add d V
02:50:530 - add k V
02:51:472 - add d V
02:51:901 - add k V

02:52:930 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - kddkddkdkddkddkd (1/4) It doesn't match melody. oh no , i think you heard wrong??


02:55:672 (1) - d V
02:56:358 (6) - k V
02:56:958 - add k? V
02:57:044 (11) - d V
02:58:330 (23,24,25) - kdk? (1/4) V
02:59:787 (34) - d V
03:00:044 (36) - k? V
03:00:301 (38) - k? V
03:00:815 (42,43) - d k (1/2) V
03:01:072 - add k V
03:01:158 (44) - d V
03:01:415 (46) - k V
03:01:587 (47) - k V
03:02:530 (54) - d V
03:03:815 (66) - k V
03:12:130 (131) - d V
03:13:501 (141,142) - dk V

03:16:587 (6,7,8,9) - kkkd (1/6) V
03:16:930 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kddkddk (1/6) V


03:28:244 (10,11) - k k d(1/1) V
03:36:130 (24) - k? V

04:01:501: ~ Pick up the kick, become much more fun. ok>3<
04:01:158 (85,86,87,88,1) - kkdkd (1/4) V
04:01:672 (2,3,4) - kkd (1/4) V
04:03:215 (14) - d V
04:03:386 (15,16,17) - kkd (1/4) V
04:04:158 (21,22) - kd (1/4) V
04:04:415 (23,24,25) - kkd (1/4) V
04:05:615 (32,33,34,35) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:06:986 (45,46,47,48) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:08:358 (55,56,57,58) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:10:501 (75) - k V

04:11:787 (91,92,93,94,95,96) - kddkdd (1/6) V
04:12:301 (99,100,101,1) - kkkd (1/6) This color scheme is hard to hit. >< :O

04:12:644 (2,3,4) - kkd (1/4) V
04:13:758 - add k V
04:13:843 (13,14,15,16) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:14:872 (23) - d V
04:15:129 (25,26,27,28,29) - kd kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:16:501 - add k V
04:16:586 (38,39,40,41) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:17:957 (51,52,53,54) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:19:244 - add k V
04:19:329 (63,64,65,66) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:20:358 (73) - d V
04:20:614 (75,76,77,78,79) - kd kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:21:987 - add k V
04:22:072 (88,89,90,91) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:23:614 (2,3,4) - kkd (1/4) V

04:24:730 - add k V
04:24:814 (13,14,15,16) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:25:844 (23) - d V
04:26:100 (25,26,27,28,29) - kd kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:27:472 - add k V
04:27:557 (38,39,40,41) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:28:930 (51,52,53,54) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:30:215 - k V
04:30:300 (63,64,65,66) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:31:330 (73) - d V
04:31:587 - add d V
04:32:444 (84) - k V
04:32:958 - d V


04:35:787 (11,12) - dk (1/4) V
04:36:815 (20,21,22,23,24) - kkdkd (1/4) V
04:38:530 (34,35) - dk (1/4) V
04:39:901 (47) - d V
04:41:272 (57,58) - dk (1/4) V



04:45:387: ~ Pick up the kick. V
04:45:730 - add d V
04:46:415 - add k V
04:46:758 (43,44) - dk (1/4) V
04:46:758 (43,44) - dk (1/4) V
04:46:758 (43,44) - add d? you accidentally pressed ??
04:47:787 (52,53,54,55,56) - kkdkd (1/4) V
04:48:472 - d V
04:49:158 - k V
04:49:501 (66,67) - dk (1/4) V
04:50:530 (75,76,77,78,79) - ddkdk (1/4) V

04:50:872: ~ Pick up the 1/2 kick d d d d d d d d…, better imo. :OOO

TO like

.V

04:54:387 (114) - k V

04:54:987 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,1) -

TO

. This one is easy to hit and beautiful. XDD


05:08:015 - add k V
05:09:387 - add d V
05:10:758 - add k V
05:12:130 - add d V

05:12:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -

TO

. This one is better imo. all k ??:O

05:17:101 (39) - k V
05:17:444 (44) - k V
05:17:615 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - dkkdkkd (1/6) That is more natural. V :O


And, scroll changes intensive are become hindrance of play. sor i think im not good in timming using ^^
00:00:130 - scroll change x1.00.
00:11:101 - delete scroll change.
00:19:330 - delete scroll change.
00:54:987 - delete scroll change.
01:06:301 - scroll change x0.75.
01:08:701 - delete scroll change.
01:16:929 - delete scroll change.
01:27:730 - scroll change x0.80.
01:27:815 - scroll change x0.90.
02:00:815 - scroll change x0.87.
02:03:558 - delete scroll change.
02:06:301 - delete scroll change.
02:10:415 - delete scroll change.
02:11:787 - delete scroll change.
02:11:958 - delete scroll change.
02:32:358 - delete scroll change.
02:33:387 - delete scroll change.
02:33:730 - delete scroll change.
02:55:672 - delete scroll change.
03:14:872 - delete scroll change.
03:16:244 - delete scroll change.
03:50:530 - delete scroll change.
04:01:501 - delete scroll change.
04:11:101 - delete scroll change.
04:12:472 - delete scroll change.
04:12:644 - delete scroll change.
04:33:044 - delete scroll change.
04:34:415 - delete scroll change.
04:34:587 - delete scroll change.
04:54:987 - delete scroll change.
04:56:359 - delete scroll change.
05:07:330 - delete scroll change.
05:12:815 - delete scroll change. but.....now don't have any kiai time?? :<


That's all. Thank you for reading this long MOD. Good luck on ranked! :)

THX!! and....your map is....m.....
i will take some little long time to mod it ~~THX!!!
ddm
HI! Mod from modding queues!
:d OMG I saw you at muti game
and I pick this map, remember me :D?
So,

[Fan'z Inner Oni]

00:44:444 (6) - k lol that timing
00:45:815 (6) - k
00:46:072 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - kdkdkddd or kdkdkkkk or kdkdkddk
00:47:187 (6) - k

01:05:958 (1,3,5,7) - k
01:16:930 (1,3,5,7) - k?

03:06:215 - add d

03:50:530 - add scroll change 0.7x
04:01:330 - add scroll change 0.8x ?
04:01:415 - add scroll change 0.9x ?
04:01:501 - add scroll change 1.0x

04:50:872 (83) - d + finish
04:51:558 (89) - add finish
04:51:901 - add d?
04:52:158 - add d?
04:52:501 (97,100) - d
04:52:587 (98) - k
04:52:672 - add k

it is already awesome map 8-)
gl on ranked xD
m421
I forgot to write few Mods. ><
Don't kudos this post.

[Fan'z Inner Oni]
・Diff name : "Fan's Inner Oni"? or "Inner Oni"
This map's creator is you. You don't have to write your name in diff name?

・SV : 1.6 -> 1.4
Taiko's SV in general is 1.4, and many player easy to play.

・HP : 5 -> 4
Specification in osu!, marathon is hard to clear, so if you aim Approved, you should down HP IMO.


Mod is fin this time! Good Luck on Approved. :)
Topic Starter
Fantazy

DaDul Moyerrrrr wrote:

HI! Mod from modding queues!
:d OMG I saw you at muti game
and I pick this map, remember me :D? oh god!!! that's a insane map :o :o
So,

[Fan'z Inner Oni]

00:44:444 (6) - k V lol that timing :D I forgot delete
00:45:815 (6) - k V
00:46:072 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - kdkdkddd or kdkdkkkk or kdkdkddk i think is better to put here 00:48:815 -
00:47:187 (6) - k V

01:05:958 (1,3,5,7) - k oops~this two parts is better to put d for the low sound :>
01:16:930 (1,3,5,7) - k? ^

03:06:215 - add d ok~~

03:50:530 - add scroll change 0.7x start form x0.7 is too slow!! :o
04:01:330 - add scroll change 0.8x ?
04:01:415 - add scroll change 0.9x ?
04:01:501 - add scroll change 1.0x thx i put other kind scroll change :)

04:50:872 (83) - d + finish k is better for the sound and add finish???
04:51:558 (89) - add finish i feel little strange that only one finish is here 0.0
04:51:901 - add d? V
04:52:158 - add d? no~ no same sound here
04:52:501 (97,100) - d V
04:52:587 (98) - k V
04:52:672 - add k hm......not very well here

it is already awesome map 8-) haha Thx!!!! :)
gl on ranked xD
Thanks for MOD !!!!! :D
Topic Starter
Fantazy

maziari1105 wrote:

I forgot to write few Mods. ><
Don't kudos this post.

[Fan'z Inner Oni]
・Diff name : "Fan's Inner Oni"? or "Inner Oni"
This map's creator is you. You don't have to write your name in diff name? LOL XDDD

・SV : 1.6 -> 1.4
Taiko's SV in general is 1.4, and many player easy to play. ok! but i feel many parts that become so slow D: if it is possible can you give suggestions for scroll change ?;w;

・HP : 5 -> 4
Specification in osu!, marathon is hard to clear, so if you aim Approved, you should down HP IMO. oK~~:>


Mod is fin this time! Good Luck on Approved. :)
Thanks for MOD!!!! :) :)
m421
It is preferable that scroll change puts in rouse part.
So, for example, how about putting scroll change x1.1 on 02:11:787: ~ 02:54:301: and putting scroll change x1.2 on 04:34:415: ~ 04:56:358: ?
Also, 03:50:530: and 04:01:672: 's scroll changes is undistinguishble, so I recommendation change to 0.8x and 0.9x .

By the way, is 04:02:872 (11,12,13,14): mistake of "d kkd (1/4)"? :roll:
Topic Starter
Fantazy

maziari1105 wrote:

It is preferable that scroll change puts in rouse part.
So, for example, how about putting scroll change x1.1 on 02:11:787: ~ 02:54:301: and putting scroll change x1.2 on 04:34:415: ~ 04:56:358: ? V
Also, 03:50:530: and 04:01:672: 's scroll changes is undistinguishble, so I recommendation change to 0.8x and 0.9x . V

By the way, is 04:02:872 (11,12,13,14): mistake of "d kkd (1/4)"? :roll: V
Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :)
LunaticP
try this ?

1. Offset: 130ms BPM: 175.00
2. Offset: 130ms BPM: Inherited (1x)
3. Offset: 66,301ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
4. Offset: 68,701ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
5. Offset: 71,444ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
6. Offset: 74,187ms BPM: Inherited (0.6x)
7. Offset: 79,672ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
8. Offset: 82,415ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
9. Offset: 85,158ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
10. Offset: 87,215ms BPM: Inherited (1x)

or

1. Offset: 130ms BPM: 175.00
2. Offset: 130ms BPM: Inherited (1x)
3. Offset: 66,301ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
4. Offset: 68,701ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
5. Offset: 71,444ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
6. Offset: 74,187ms BPM: Inherited (0.6x)
7. Offset: 76,930ms BPM: Inherited (0.5x)
8. Offset: 79,672ms BPM: Inherited (0.6x)
9. Offset: 82,415ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
10. Offset: 85,158ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
11. Offset: 87,215ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
12. Offset: 87,558ms BPM: Inherited (1x)


02:44:273 (100) - remove
Topic Starter
Fantazy

LunaticP wrote:

try this ?

1. Offset: 130ms BPM: 175.00
2. Offset: 130ms BPM: Inherited (1x)
3. Offset: 66,301ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
4. Offset: 68,701ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
5. Offset: 71,444ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
6. Offset: 74,187ms BPM: Inherited (0.6x)
7. Offset: 79,672ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
8. Offset: 82,415ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
9. Offset: 85,158ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
10. Offset: 87,215ms BPM: Inherited (1x)

or

1. Offset: 130ms BPM: 175.00
2. Offset: 130ms BPM: Inherited (1x)
3. Offset: 66,301ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
4. Offset: 68,701ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
5. Offset: 71,444ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
6. Offset: 74,187ms BPM: Inherited (0.6x)
7. Offset: 76,930ms BPM: Inherited (0.5x)
8. Offset: 79,672ms BPM: Inherited (0.6x)
9. Offset: 82,415ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
10. Offset: 85,158ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
11. Offset: 87,215ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
12. Offset: 87,558ms BPM: Inherited (1x) i accepted some change and i will make some different :lol:


02:44:273 (100) - remove V
Thanks for mod!!!!! :) :) :)
Remus
Hello from my queue o/

Tatsujin
  1. 00:48:645 (7) - forgot about kat here or just did it specially?
  2. 02:43:244 (91) - the same as ^, but accroding to 02:41:873 (78,91) .
  3. 02:46:844 (22,25) - swap them maybe?


Oh, looks pretty. That map is very repeatable, so i can't even find something worth to improve D:
Ok, that's all i can suggest here ._.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Fantazy

Remus wrote:

Hello from my queue o/

Tatsujin
  1. 00:48:645 (7) - forgot about kat here or just did it specially? is it heard not pretty!? O: ok~i hv some change~~
  2. 02:43:244 (91) - the same as ^, but accroding to 02:41:873 (78,91) . I won't like to make same color 02:41:873 (78) - ,,,so i make 02:42:987 (88,89,90) - kdk here 030
  3. 02:46:844 (22,25) - swap them maybe? sorry i don't know what's this mean ;w;;;;;;;;; :o but (22)is better use kat so i make ''dkkdkdkkd'' 030


Oh, looks pretty. That map is very repeatable, so i can't even find something worth to improve D: :? :?
Ok, that's all i can suggest here ._.
Good luck!
Thx for mod!!!!!!!!!! :) :)
Lost The Lights
Hi, M4M requested in my queue!

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:03:472 - 00:04:844 - 00:08:958 - 00:06:215 - 00:07:587 - why are these k when you used d before, it's still the same sound and sounds better as d.
  2. 00:21:387 - This is unfitting and really bad playwise since it doesn't follow the sound at all. If you wanna keep this, make it a long 1/6 starting at 00:21:387 - Or just make a spinner/slider. What you have right now is really bad.
  3. 00:23:187 - Either use kk kd or dk kd. This way you'll be following the music correctly.
  4. 00:30:987 - kd ^
I'm sorry, but after seeing the rest of the map I don't want to continue modding this. First of all I hate whistle mapping, second, your streams are really randomly hitsounded, your rhythm is really weird and your 1/6's are really unfitting. Also I don't really like the song, so I'm really sorry.

Good luck.
Ayyri
o:
Topic Starter
Fantazy

Lost The Lights wrote:

Hi, M4M requested in my queue!

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:03:472 - 00:04:844 - 00:08:958 - 00:06:215 - 00:07:587 - why are these k when you used d before, it's still the same sound and sounds better as d. V
  2. 00:21:387 - This is unfitting and really bad playwise since it doesn't follow the sound at all. If you wanna keep this, make it a long 1/6 starting at 00:21:387 - Or just make a spinner/slider. What you have right now is really bad. that k is my miss , and i try the spinner/slider before but i feel that's not well ...
  3. 00:23:187 - Either use kk kd or dk kd. This way you'll be following the music correctly.V
  4. 00:30:987 - kd ^ V
I'm sorry, but after seeing the rest of the map I don't want to continue modding this. First of all I hate whistle mapping, second, your streams are really randomly hitsounded, your rhythm is really weird and your 1/6's are really unfitting. Also I don't really like the song, so I'm really sorry. im sure i am not good at 1/6 but it realy bertter to use it , and is it weird of my rhythm ? you sure?? @@?

Good luck.
.......... and Thanks!
Asagi Mutsuki
#late
hmmm 1/6等等的部分打不来,无法很好的从玩家的角度提供意见,如果找些会玩又会mod的大触(eg tasuke)来会比较好些

Inner Oni
  1. 00:09:044 - 这里是不是少了个don啊。。。明明从00:05:615 开始你就开始放kddk kd了这里忽然变回kd k kd稍显违和啊
  2. 00:20:701 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,1) - 这段嘛。。。editor听起来怪怪的但打起来却很自然,个人觉得不需要改些什么orz
  3. 00:24:130 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 这里一长串说实话感觉有一点莫名其妙,而且把过渡到下一个小节的感觉给减弱了额,个人建议把00:24:730 - 删掉然后把前面的改成ddkkkdd还是啥的?后面又看了一下,这段直到00:40:415 都只有二~三连音,但一开始却有着这么长的一串感觉实在有点奇怪啊,不然把这串缩短不然把后面改难一点吧,不然一下子难一下子容易感觉有点拿不定主意的感觉
  4. 00:45:215 (15,16,1) - 这里其实能放1/6 XDDD (逃)
  5. 00:48:130 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 00:50:701 (15,16,1,2) - ^
  7. 00:49:415 - 感觉把这粒改成d会好些,能够让之后的k强调背景的重音
  8. 我居然用了25%把这个鱼蛋听了三次。。。好累
  9. 01:05:958 - 关于这段的变速想说几句。嘛你这样放并没有什么不对,况且程度也非常轻微不至于很难看的程度。但问题是:有必要吗?owo 就是因为这里改变的程度太小了,所以玩的时候不免让人觉得其实如果没有变速的话其实也没什么差,并不算好的一个梗=w= (不会太凶吧。。。
  10. 01:27:901 to 01:38:872 - 个人很喜欢这点!k的位置的渐变做得蛮不错的而且有呼应到曲子本身,给个赞=w=b
  11. 01:47:101 (169,170,171,172) - 。。。为什么不用ddkdk啊就差最后一点了怎么把维持到现在的规律给打散 :roll:
  12. 第一个kiai嗯虽然用编辑器来看有些单调但其实玩起来感觉很带感也很舒服=w=b
  13. 03:00:472 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) 和 02:57:730 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - 根本就是一模一样啊段落啊怎么玩了两种完全不同的花样
  14. 03:03:215 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - 这个最富有跳跃感的一段用一个短stream来带过,实在有点可惜啊。。。但我也不知道该怎么写好==
  15. 03:13:501 (144,145) - 这种音调往下降的部分你之前都是用kd啊。。。这里不跟吗>_>
  16. 04:55:672 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - 个人感觉dkkdkkdkkd好些

暂时就先这样吧,我不想再拖了orz
曲子许多部分都有重复,而我列出的点是我觉得影响比较严重的,在曲子里有类似部分的话也一样适用
至于你最关心的1/6效果到底怎样,其实我感受得到你放的1/6都是有跟着音乐里的部分,只是这圈子的人大多不喜欢1/4夹杂着1/6的图>_>
这图有些部分我很喜欢也打得很爽但也有些地方能再做得好一些,加油=w=b!
Topic Starter
Fantazy
:?:

cdhsausageboy wrote:

#late
hmmm 1/6等等的部分打不来,无法很好的从玩家的角度提供意见,如果找些会玩又会mod的大触(eg tasuke)来会比较好些

Inner Oni
  1. 00:09:044 - 这里是不是少了个don啊。。。明明从00:05:615 开始你就开始放kddk kd了这里忽然变回kd k kd稍显违和啊 好好 不違和不違和DX
  2. 00:20:701 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,1) - 这段嘛。。。editor听起来怪怪的但打起来却很自然,个人觉得不需要改些什么orz .....= =? 我是想說00:21:815 (53) - 01:05:701 (33) - 這兩顆要不要改K
  3. 00:24:130 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 这里一长串说实话感觉有一点莫名其妙,而且把过渡到下一个小节的感觉给减弱了额,个人建议把00:24:730 - 删掉然后把前面的改成ddkkkdd还是啥的?后面又看了一下,这段直到00:40:415 都只有二~三连音,但一开始却有着这么长的一串感觉实在有点奇怪啊,不然把这串缩短不然把后面改难一点吧,不然一下子难一下子容易感觉有点拿不定主意的感觉 這裡就ˋ只能串了 除非你要連續的兩顆1/6 然後ddkdkkdkdd感覺比較好? <3
  4. 00:45:215 (15,16,1) - 这里其实能放1/6 XDDD (逃) 額.. 不太適合喔:O
  5. 00:48:130 (1,2,3) - ^ X
  6. 00:50:701 (15,16,1,2) - ^ X
  7. 00:49:415 - 感觉把这粒改成d会好些,能够让之后的k强调背景的重音 好(?
  8. 我居然用了25%把这个鱼蛋听了三次。。。好累 ......= =||| 辛苦了??LOL
  9. 01:05:958 - 关于这段的变速想说几句。嘛你这样放并没有什么不对,况且程度也非常轻微不至于很难看的程度。但问题是:有必要吗?owo 就是因为这里改变的程度太小了,所以玩的时候不免让人觉得其实如果没有变速的话其实也没什么差,并不算好的一个梗=w= (不会太凶吧。。。 D: 因為不知道要用什麼 燃後不放惠感覺非常無聊;w; 所以說 把変速差距調大??
  10. 01:27:901 to 01:38:872 - 个人很喜欢这点!k的位置的渐变做得蛮不错的而且有呼应到曲子本身,给个赞=w=b ((其實我做完這首最滿意的就是這裡XD ((誤
  11. 01:47:101 (169,170,171,172) - 。。。为什么不用ddkdk啊就差最后一点了怎么把维持到现在的规律给打散 :roll: 最後一段是變化段 是說這是照著鼓聲的030
  12. 第一个kiai嗯虽然用编辑器来看有些单调但其实玩起来感觉很带感也很舒服=w=b 打起來有一種奇幻感
  13. 03:00:472 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) 和 02:57:730 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - 根本就是一模一样啊段落啊怎么玩了两种完全不同的花样 哪有兒? 聽錯吧?:3
  14. 03:03:215 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - 这个最富有跳跃感的一段用一个短stream来带过,实在有点可惜啊。。。但我也不知道该怎么写好== ....?_?_? 抱歉不太懂你的意思 根上面那個一樣ㄟ??
  15. 03:13:501 (144,145) - 这种音调往下降的部分你之前都是用kd啊。。。这里不跟吗>_> 跟!! 都可以跟!!
  16. 04:55:672 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - 个人感觉dkkdkkdkkd好些 確定喔? ((我是真的有點搞不清楚這裡了>____>


暂时就先这样吧,我不想再拖了orz
曲子许多部分都有重复,而我列出的点是我觉得影响比较严重的,在曲子里有类似部分的话也一样适用
至于你最关心的1/6效果到底怎样,其实我感受得到你放的1/6都是有跟着音乐里的部分,只是这圈子的人大多不喜欢1/4夹杂着1/6的图>_> 偏偏有好多歌都有夾雜;w;;;;;
这图有些部分我很喜欢也打得很爽但也有些地方能再做得好一些,加油=w=b!
謝摸謝摸!!! :D
Vulkin
ok mod from queue
#sorryforbeinglate;w;

-Inner Oni-
00:21:730 (52) - make it a d? seems more player-friendly i think
01:05:615 (32) - ^
01:36:301 (74,80,86) - make them k? sounds better somehow
03:12:901 (140) - k?
03:56:015 (45) - make it a d for the pitch
04:11:101 - Why not like this?


Very fun map!
Lemme give some stars for ya
Topic Starter
Fantazy

Vulkin wrote:

ok mod from queue
#sorryforbeinglate;w;

-Inner Oni-
00:21:730 (52) - make it a d? seems more player-friendly i think ok?!! be friendly!! friendly!!!DDX
01:05:615 (32) - ^ more friendly!!!
01:36:301 (74,80,86) - make them k? sounds better somehow i don't think so D:
03:12:901 (140) - k? it's a low sound here :3
03:56:015 (45) - make it a d for the pitch ok~
04:11:101 - Why not like this? seem like not very well.. but still thinking about here


Very fun map!
Lemme give some stars for ya
THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
S a n d

Taiko mod request from: Fantazy
Request Type: M4M
Request Diff: -
Modding Content: Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*



- 00:11:615 - kk kdkd -> kkdk kd 因為如果你放慢成50%聽的話, 在 00:11:787 上有一個連續的1/1重低音
-- 00:14:530 - 跟上面同樣的道理
- 移動 00:13:587 到 00:13:158 - 理由同上, 也感覺比較不overmap
-- 00:15:901 - 加d? 跟上面同樣的道理
-- 00:17:272 - ^
-- 00:18:644 - ^
- 00:23:958 - 改成k? 因為你會發現這顆比前三顆的音還高
- 00:24:815 - 改成k? 因為你會發現這個kd跟 00:23:244 的音一模一樣
-- 00:26:187 - ^
-- 00:41:272 - ^
---如果改上面的話-->我建議 00:26:015 改成k, 這樣能更加凸顯00:26:272的轉折
-- 00:27:558 - ^^
- 00:32:187 - 改成k? 因為第二個音是高音
- 00:37:844 - dkd d -> dkddk 或是 dkddd? 比較跟音 也比較好凸顯 00:38:530 的d
- 00:44:958(12,13) - Ctrl + G, 因為高音在12
-- 00:47:701(12,13) - Ctrl +G, ^
- 00:46:244 - 改成 k? 明顯的音差
--如果改上面的話--> 00:46:586(15,16) - 都改成dd, 也是音差 也比較跟音
- 00:47:272 - 改成k, 是高音
- 00:49:244(14,15) - 改成kk? 跟背景的音, 後面的d是為了撇清下一段落
- 00:53:530(16,1) - Ctrl+G, 高音很明顯是在1喔, 1
- 00:54:987 - ddddkkd -> dddkddk 聽起來比較順
-- 00:56:358 - ^
-- 00:57:730 - ^
-- 00:59:101 - ^
- 00:58:930 - 改成k? 這三個音都應該是同樣的, 所以kkk比較搭 我記得你前面也有用過類似的
- 00:43:958 ~ 01:05:958 - 一個break都沒有很容易被嗆喔www 你中間多少加一點吧 例如: 00:54:901 中間點, 擺點誠意, 做個樣子
- 02:01:587 - 改成k? 因為這邊的音跟02:00:987 一模一樣啊 沒什麼理由不同譜面w. 下面很多都有這樣的問題, 我就不一個一個列了
- 02:00:815 - 應該是說節拍整個歪囉, 這樣比較像: 下面一段也一樣就不多說了
-- 02:11:958 - 整個kiai都同上^, 你每個2連 (例如dk 或是 kd) 都早了一個1/4拍 沒人找到我好訝異
- 02:03:558 - 節拍整個歪囉w, 這樣比較跟音: 下面同上
- 02:44:701 - 開始因為塞note所以看不太出來問題, 但是還是因為上一段擺錯了某些重音 例如: 02:49:158 - 跟重音的話是kdkdd不是kddkd
- 02:59:187(31,32) - 兩個都是高音喔 改k
- 03:03:472 跟 03:03:644 - 兩個都可以刪掉, 比較能凸顯單音的魅力, 也能避免overmap
- 03:31:330 - 改成d? 是低音 而且03:31:672的音比較高 該改為k
- 04:02:701 - 加d? 背景的重低音已經開始出來了, 可以開始塞滿1/2了
-- 04:05:444 - ^
-- 04:08:187 - ^
- 04:13:672 - 這邊有聲音, 所以從04:12:987開始 建議改成: 因為你04:12:472是用k, 但是後面的段落分隔都用d 一致性不夠. 整個段落都建議, 看你要不要刪一些, 給難度一點高低起伏
- 04:40:415 - 改成d? 前後有音差
就這樣
你加油wwww
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