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Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Taiko]

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katacheh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月20日 at 1:00:41

Artist: Emilia(CV:Setsunan)
Title: Unfinished START
Source: 前進吧!高捷少女Initiating Station
Tags: EAjRock (Ayre Records) Uniparity Hoskey 艾米莉亞 Reo shinia Stellarism 希萌創意 Shi Kuang Lee NGC224 SAFE HOUSE T Narrator 前進吧!高捷少女《進め!高捷(たかめ)少女!》 Simon moe Short Version LET'S GO! K.R.T. GIRLS stu00608 Fantazy
BPM: 175
Filesize: 1981kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fan's Oni (3.7 stars, 405 notes)
  2. Futsuu (2.3 stars, 176 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.43 stars, 99 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.92 stars, 321 notes)
  5. Oni (4.1 stars, 450 notes)
  6. stu's Oni (3.96 stars, 453 notes)
Download: Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked #1


未完成START




Kantan by me
Futsuu by me
Muzukashii by me
Fan's Oni by Fanlazy
stu's Oni by stu00608
Oni by me

Lyrics
  • 朝陽取代了燈火闌珊
    步下列車 抬頭望向湛藍的清澈天空
    就能泛起笑容

    即使迷失在熙攘人群 幸運有你的細心指引
    即使搭錯了方向 我卻看見更多風景

    一加一 笑顏的魔力 勇敢告訴自己 一定可以

    像晴天那般擁抱 所有煩惱不如意
    像雨天那般緊靠 只是安靜地傾聽
    奔忙於喧囂中 我總算遇見這首
    美好旋律 閃耀記憶 有你


Thanks
Modders:
  1. _kumakichi
  2. Fantazyee
  3. Nyan
  4. PoPoii
  5. Prophecy
  6. eeezzzeee
  7. Erika
  8. Smallwu
  9. kiminokokoro
  10. Ayyri
  11. Skylish
  12. xtrem3x
  13. LunaticP
  14. Jonawaga
  15. Kazaze
  16. frukoyurdakul
  17. _yu68
  18. 125601228
  19. Charlotte
  20. 404 AccNotFound
  21. mliencheng
  22. Xay
  23. jacky10186
Bubble/Qualified:
Skylishxfraczynho










_kumakichi
hi

sorry i cannot type chinese in this computer
if there is anything unclear please pm me...

misc
interesting choice of song
metadata - please check whether the artist name is in correct format...i thought only 1 name should be put in artist column, but not very sure
disable countdown and widescreen support
timing - delete the 00:14:130 red line
can move the background pic downward by editing .osu in notepad
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,40

futsuu
01:19:213 - add k (as in muzu)

muzu
00:15:463 (9) - delete. 5-lets should not appear in muzu. too difficult
00:28:713 (67) - k->d. add some variance as your pattern afterwards are all different
00:38:880 (119,120,121) - some BAT (did i spell it right) do not like triplets other than ddd or kkk in muzu. Personally I think it is accptable. maybe delete 00:38:963 (120) -
00:44:213 (144) - d->k. same reason as above
00:45:213 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - too long for muzu. delete 00:46:047 (154) - and 00:47:047 (160) -
01:03:547 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276) - too long:
01:04:713 (259) - and 01:06:047 (267) - delete
01:04:880 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265) - dkkdkkd -> kddkddk (add some variance)
01:19:213 - add k. complete the pattern?

oni
i like this map very much
00:46:630 (191) - d->k, to make the pattern clearer
01:04:880 (333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) - D k k D k k D k -> K d d K d d K d (as in muzu)

great map
good luck
Fantazy
嘛~~~~我或許不是改得很好 :P 而且有點多 >:(

kantan
00:05:979 (9) - k k d 感覺比較配030
00:18:874 - 放個k 後面那顆改d
00:23:541 (25) - d->k
00:28:207 (33) - k->d
00:29:541 - d
00:32:207 - d
00:32:874 (38) - d->k
00:37:374 - k
00:40:041 - d
00:40:541 (45) - d
00:42:707 - d
00:43:207 (47) - k
01:01:541 (71) - k
01:02:207 (72) - d

futsuu
00:11:465 (25) - k->d
00:27:874 (33) - 這邊改 k d d .
00:31:207 (42) - d->k
00:37:374 (56) - d->k
00:40:041 (59) - 後2顆k->d
01:02:707 (103) - d->k
01:17:541 (135) - k->d
01:19:874 - 這裡的話..樓上說+k 嘛 ....覺得D大比較好?? :P :P ~~

muzukashi
盡量別跟樓上的衝突~~~
00:00:836 (1) - 開頭改 kkd kdd d k~~
00:09:922 (25) - kd dd k d
00:25:707 (48) - d->k
00:27:874 - 00:30:541 - 00:33:207 - 這三個地方就配人聲吧??
01:03:541 (250) - 這邊 kddkddk比較配
01:04:874 (257) - 這邊則是ddkdddk
01:06:207 (264) - 而這邊kddkddkdd
01:10:374 (284) - dd dk
01:16:207 (302) - d d k 要不要大顆看你~
01:17:374 (305) - 這裡改小
01:18:041 (307) - 這邊d大
01:18:707 (309) - 這邊k大

Oni
00:56:213 (272) - 這邊改成 kdddd K 好像比較好?
00:59:713 (298) - 這邊 d k dkd 就好030
01:00:880 (307) - kkd-d-k-dkd-k-d-kkd-d-k
Topic Starter
katacheh

_kumakichi wrote:

hi

sorry i cannot type chinese in this computer
if there is anything unclear please pm me... it's ok. :) I have Google Translate

misc
interesting choice of song
metadata - please check whether the artist name is in correct format...i thought only 1 name should be put in artist column, but not very sure One is the name of the character , the other is the name of singer.
disable countdown and widescreen support Fixed
timing - delete the 00:14:130 red line Fixed
can move the background pic downward by editing .osu in notepad I see
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,40

futsuu
01:19:213 - add k (as in muzu) Fixed

muzu
00:15:463 (9) - delete. 5-lets should not appear in muzu. too difficult Fixed
00:28:713 (67) - k->d. add some variance as your pattern afterwards are all different I changed 00:28:041 (61) to d
00:38:880 (119,120,121) - some BAT (did i spell it right) do not like triplets other than ddd or kkk in muzu. Personally I think it is accptable. maybe delete 00:38:963 (120) - I deleted
00:44:213 (144) - d->k. same reason as above Fixed
00:45:213 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - too long for muzu. delete 00:46:047 (154) - and 00:47:047 (160) - I deleted 00:46:041 (152) 00:47:374 (160) and changed 00:45:874 (151) to k
01:03:547 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276) - too long:
01:04:713 (259) - and 01:06:047 (267) - delete Fixed
01:04:880 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265) - dkkdkkd -> kddkddk (add some variance) good!
01:19:213 - add k. complete the pattern? Fixed

oni
i like this map very much thx :)
00:46:630 (191) - d->k, to make the pattern clearer no.. I'm trying to make it harder
01:04:880 (333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) - D k k D k k D k -> K d d K d d K d (as in muzu) great!

great map
good luck
thanks for moding! :)
Topic Starter
katacheh

Fantazyy wrote:

嘛~~~~我或許不是改得很好 :P 而且有點多 >:( 永遠不嫌多

kantan
00:05:979 (9) - k k d 感覺比較配030 我改成了k d k 因為後面想要放藍色
00:18:874 - 放個k 後面那顆改d good! 再前面一顆我改成了k
00:23:541 (25) - d->k 不改
00:28:207 (33) - k->d 不改 我覺得k比較好
00:29:541 - d 太難(太長了)
00:32:207 - d 同上
00:32:874 (38) - d->k 修正
00:37:374 - k 不改 覺得大圓同一色比較好
00:40:041 - d 太難
00:40:541 (45) - d 不改
00:42:707 - d 太難
00:43:207 (47) - k 我在對人聲
01:01:541 (71) - k 已改
01:02:207 (72) - d已改 :)
太多了吧ww

futsuu
00:11:465 (25) - k->d good!
00:27:874 (33) - 這邊改 k d d . 覺得ddk比較好
00:31:207 (42) - d->k good!
00:37:374 (56) - d->k 我想要大圓同色
00:40:041 (59) - 後2顆k->d 同上
01:02:707 (103) - d->k 覺得D比較好
01:17:541 (135) - k->d 已修正
01:19:874 - 這裡的話..樓上說+k 嘛 ....覺得D大比較好?? :P :P ~~ 是在說放D吧 先不改 如果以後有人再建議我改 我再改

muzukashi
盡量別跟樓上的衝突~~~
00:00:836 (1) - 開頭改 kkd kdd d k~~ GOOD
00:09:922 (25) - kd dd k d 我改成 kd kk k d
00:25:707 (48) - d->k 已修正
00:27:874 - 00:30:541 - 00:33:207 - 這三個地方就配人聲吧?? 不好... 一下人聲一下音樂
01:03:541 (250) - 這邊 kddkddk比較配 ┐
01:04:874 (257) - 這邊則是ddkdddk ├ 好像這樣比較好耶 已修正
01:06:207 (264) - 而這邊kddkddkdd ┘
01:10:374 (284) - dd dk 覺得dk kk 比較好
01:16:207 (302) - d d k 要不要大顆看你~ 改成了dkk 小顆比較好
01:17:374 (305) - 這裡改小 不好..
01:18:041 (307) - 這邊d大 GOOD!
01:18:707 (309) - 這邊k大 我改成了KK

Oni
00:56:213 (272) - 這邊改成 kdddd K 好像比較好? GOOD!
00:59:713 (298) - 這邊 d k dkd 就好030 我改成 d k kkd
01:00:880 (307) - kkd-d-k-dkd-k-d-kkd-d-k 我覺得原本的比較好
抱歉有很多都沒改 :?

thanks for modding!!! 謝謝摟
Fantazy
ㄏㄏ 如果你真的要Oni 444combo 8-)

00:26:791 - 這邊改一下 3連擊
00:27:624 - 這邊也是
00:28:291 - 然後這裡的 前面換過來

00:40:957 - 這裡就不連擊了

你的預覽段落~~(ˊ。c。ˋ)


再找點別人吧 ?? 我到時看看如果能更好就給你 射~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AwA一顆星
(此處可當廢文owo
Topic Starter
katacheh

Fantazyy wrote:

ㄏㄏ 如果你真的要Oni 444combo 8-) 不是一定要啦 只是很好看!!! (7/12)已經不行了w

00:26:791 - 這邊改一下 3連擊
00:27:624 - 這邊也是
00:28:291 - 然後這裡的 前面換過來 我改成了 k ddd d k d d d k ddk d k

00:40:957 - 這裡就不連擊了 不好...

你的預覽段落~~(ˊ。c。ˋ) 剛才放了~


再找點別人吧 ?? 我到時看看如果能更好就給你 射~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AwA 一顆星
快射!!!!
(此處可當廢文owo
我才剛弄完 又有新貼文 當作跟上面一起的吧
謝謝囉! :)
Nyan
[Kantan]

01:03:541 (75,76,77,78,79) - d _ d _ k _ k _ d
01:08:874 (79) - add Finish

[Futsuu]

00:23:541 (23,24,25) - remove Finish
01:07:541 (114,115,116,117) - k k k k D

[Muzukashii]

00:23:541 (40,41,42,43) - remove Finish
00:25:041 (45,46) - remove Finish
00:30:541 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - k _ d k d _ d
01:14:874 (298,299,300) - K _ d D

[Oni]

01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kkdkkkdkkk

Actually a good mapset. ☆☆☆ I am satisfied now.
Topic Starter
katacheh

Nyan wrote:

[Kantan]

01:03:541 (75,76,77,78,79) - d _ d _ k _ k _ d Fixed.
01:08:874 (79) - add Finish Fixed.

[Futsuu]

00:23:541 (23,24,25) - remove Finish Fixed.
01:07:541 (114,115,116,117) - k k k k D Fixed.

[Muzukashii]

00:23:541 (40,41,42,43) - remove Finish Fixed!
00:25:041 (45,46) - remove Finish Fixed.
00:30:541 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - k _ d k d _ d I changed to k d k _ k _ d
01:14:874 (298,299,300) - K _ d D no... I think the original is better.

[Oni]

01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kkdkkkdkkk Fixed! Awesome!! I also added 01:17:457 (398) and 01:18:124 (403)

Actually a good mapset. ☆☆☆ I am satisfied now. Thank you! :)
Thanks for modding and stars!
Poii
:)Poii and Kuu NM service :)

|d for don| D for Big Don| k for katsu| K for Big Katsu|

Kantan
Mods
Demn good, EZ to play nice diff

Futsuu
Mods
00:08:722 (21) - why d ? you place k in all of your diff
00:24:041 (24,25) - d k or k d ? i think k d, <= you can ignore this
01:00:541 (99) - to d, the vocal is not strong enough, i mean loud enough

Muzukashii
Mods
00:21:707 - missing d ?
00:15:291 - add 1, make it triplets, the snare sound
00:23:874 (41) - change to k, its snare
00:24:374 (43) - change to d for a better sound, that is not snare (i think)

Oni
Mods
00:23:874 (47) - change to k
00:24:374 (49) - to d

8-) Free comment, Free reject 8-)


Good Lick Luck :)
Topic Starter
katacheh

PoPoii wrote:

:)Poii and Kuu NM service :)

|d for don| D for Big Don| k for katsu| K for Big Katsu|

Kantan
Mods
Demn good, EZ to play nice diff Thanks! :D

Futsuu
Mods
00:08:722 (21) - why d ? you place k in all of your diff Fixed!! and I changed 00:08:379 (20) to d
00:24:041 (24,25) - d k or k d ? i think k d, <= you can ignore this I think d k feels better. :3
01:00:541 (99) - to d, the vocal is not strong enough, i mean loud enough I think k fits vocal ...so I didn't change.

Muzukashii
Mods
00:21:707 - missing d ? Good! Fixed!!
00:15:291 - add 1, make it triplets, the snare sound I think it is enough... I didn't change.
00:23:874 (41) - change to k, its snare snare sounds not obviously,(compare with the other sound..) so I didn't change.
00:24:374 (43) - change to d for a better sound, that is not snare (i think) ^

Oni
Mods
00:23:874 (47) - change to k I didn't change.. same as muzu
00:24:374 (49) - to d ^

8-) Free comment, Free reject 8-)


Good Lick Luck :)
Thanks for modding!! :)
Prophecy
Hello, from chinese modding queue, as you didn't specify language, Using English as default.

d = don | k = kat

[General]
  1. You're using whistle in Kantan, Futsuu , Muzukashii. but not in Oni, please make sure you're using same kat sound.
  2. Please find more tags, it's not just about 3 or something like that.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:836 (15) - I am suggesting you to delete this note and replaced by a spinner , the sound it mostly like a spinner with a accompany
    piano sound.
  2. 00:24:041 (27,29) - I don't really suggest you to use 1/2 in Kantan as well, I know you're following the main heavy sound. Considerate to remove it or move it away.
  3. 00:26:207 (30) - It's a bit weird after a big notes sound, how about to add a finisher?
  4. 00:45:374 (50) - no pls, Kantan is for beginner, usually we put simple 1/1 in kantan, not complex 1/2.
  5. 00:46:207 (52) - this slider 00:45:874 - should be start at here?
  6. 00:48:707 (55) - same as above , 1/2
  7. 00:51:374 (59) - ^
  8. 00:54:041 (62) - ^
  9. 00:56:707 (66) - ^
  10. 00:58:207 (67) - add finisher.
  11. 00:59:374 (69,74) - same as before one.
Nice, good luck!
Topic Starter
katacheh

Prophecy wrote:

Hello, from chinese modding queue, as you didn't specify language, Using English as default. QwQ

d = don | k = kat

[General]
  1. You're using whistle in Kantan, Futsuu , Muzukashii. but not in Oni, please make sure you're using same kat sound. Fixed~
  2. Please find more tags, it's not just about 3 or something like that. Ok. I will find more tags.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:836 (15) - I am suggesting you to delete this note and replaced by a spinner , the sound it mostly like a spinner with a accompany
    piano sound. Fixed!
  2. 00:24:041 (27,29) - I don't really suggest you to use 1/2 in Kantan as well, I know you're following the main heavy sound. Considerate to remove it or move it away. I didn't change...
  3. 00:26:207 (30) - It's a bit weird after a big notes sound, how about to add a finisher? I added and feels weird too.. so I didn't change.
  4. 00:45:374 (50) - no pls, Kantan is for beginner, usually we put simple 1/1 in kantan, not complex 1/2.
  5. 00:46:207 (52) - this slider 00:45:874 - should be start at here? umm.. I didn't changed because vocal..
  6. 00:48:707 (55) - same as above , 1/2 Should I just removed it? I feel emptiness... I moved forward 1/2 but feels really weird... so I didn't change.
  7. 00:51:374 (59) - ^
  8. 00:54:041 (62) - ^
  9. 00:56:707 (66) - ^
  10. 00:58:207 (67) - add finisher. Fixed
  11. 00:59:374 (69,74) - same as before one.
Nice, good luck!
Sorry I'm not good at making Kantan... but seems many ranked kantan placed 1/2. (I think it is acceptable...)
Thanks for modding!!
Prophecy

katacheh wrote:

Hello, from chinese modding queue, as you didn't specify language, Using English as default. QwQ
eeezzzeee
Hi from my queue

[Oni]
  1. 00:31:124 - add something here? I can hear the cymbal
  2. 00:33:791 - ^
  3. 00:38:207 (140,141,142,143,144) - change to d kkd d http://puu.sh/pZYdn/2dc15d962c.jpg because the drum roll is at 00:38:457 -
  4. 00:40:874 (155,156,157,158) - change to k ddk http://puu.sh/pZYfe/a26dd0a2cd.jpg
  5. 00:43:957 (175) - i think deleting this would sound better
  6. 01:01:374 (312,313,314,315) - http://puu.sh/pZYsB/ccef5bc8e1.jpg like this sounds better to me
  7. 01:08:541 (353,354) - change to k? since they have the same instrument as 01:08:207 (351,352) -
  8. 01:11:707 - add d and 01:12:041 - delete this
  9. 01:14:207 (379) - change to k?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:541 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - can you try to make them different patterns
  2. 00:47:374 (159) - try deleting this because this chain of 1/2 notes is too long
  3. 01:12:541 - add k
  4. 01:15:874 - add k
[Futsuu]
Nothing!

[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:551 (4,8) - maybe delete these two since its right in the beginning it should be a little easier
osu 需要更多中文歌曲! lol my chinese writing/reading is so bad

good luck!
Topic Starter
katacheh

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi from my queue >w<//

[Oni]
  1. 00:31:124 - add something here? I can hear the cymbal umm... I think it's enough... so I didn't change.
  2. 00:33:791 - ^ ^
  3. 00:38:207 (140,141,142,143,144) - change to d kkd d http://puu.sh/pZYdn/2dc15d962c.jpg because the drum roll is at 00:38:457 - GOOD! Fixed!
  4. 00:40:874 (155,156,157,158) - change to k ddk http://puu.sh/pZYfe/a26dd0a2cd.jpg Fixed! but I moved 00:41:457 (160) to 00:41:624 (161) because ddk ddk ddk feel not good here..
  5. 00:43:957 (175) - i think deleting this would sound better Fixed!
  6. 01:01:374 (312,313,314,315) - http://puu.sh/pZYsB/ccef5bc8e1.jpg like this sounds better to me GOOD! Fixed!!
  7. 01:08:541 (353,354) - change to k? since they have the same instrument as 01:08:207 (351,352) - umm.. I changed to d ddk kkd(the drum sound)
  8. 01:11:707 - add d and 01:12:041 - delete this Fixed.
  9. 01:14:207 (379) - change to k? Ok.. Fixed.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:541 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - can you try to make them different patterns ok..
  2. 00:47:374 (159) - try deleting this because this chain of 1/2 notes is too long deleted!
  3. 01:12:541 - add k Fixed!
  4. 01:15:874 - add k Fixed.
[Futsuu]
Nothing!

[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:551 (4,8) - maybe delete these two since its right in the beginning it should be a little easier Good! Fixed!!
osu 需要更多中文歌曲! agree! lol my chinese writing/reading is so bad

good luck! Thanks! :D
Thanks for Modding!!
[ Erika ]
我愛這首歌ww

[Kantan]
00:07:351 (8) - k
00:11:465 (12) - k
00:18:207 (5,6,7,8,9) - k k d d k
00:22:207 (10) - k
01:00:874 (56) - k

[Futsuu]
00:03:922 (9,10,11,12,13) - k d k k d
00:11:465 (25) - k
00:18:874 (13) - k
00:20:207 (16) - k
00:23:207 (22,23) - k d
00:36:874 (55) - k
00:39:541 (58) - d
01:02:207 (102) - k
01:05:874 (110) - k

[Muzukashii]
00:04:951 (14) - k
00:11:465 (30) - k
00:24:041 (43) - k
00:53:541 (194,195) - k k
00:57:874 (220,221,222) - k k d
00:59:374 (228) - k

[Oni]
00:05:979 (19) - k
00:11:465 (35) - k
00:59:374 (297) - k

我mod的不怎麼好,還請見諒,但是這個map我很喜歡,加油!
Topic Starter
katacheh

[ Erika ] wrote:

我愛這首歌ww \(♡˙︶˙♡)是中文耶!!

[Kantan]
00:07:351 (8) - k 已修正
00:11:465 (12) - k 已修正 前面的(11)我改成d
00:18:207 (5,6,7,8,9) - k k d d k 後面的音是下降的感覺 所以沒有改
00:22:207 (10) - k 已修正
01:00:874 (56) - k 已修正

[Futsuu]
00:03:922 (9,10,11,12,13) - k d k k d Good! (14)(15)我改成了d k
00:11:465 (25) - k 已修正 (23) (24)我改成k d
00:18:874 (13) - k 沒有改 感覺之前的比較好
00:20:207 (16) - k 已修正
00:23:207 (22,23) - k d 沒有改 之前的比較搭音樂
00:36:874 (55) - k 我想讓大圓同一色:3
00:39:541 (58) - d ^
01:02:207 (102) - k 沒有改 D感覺比較好
01:05:874 (110) - k 沒有改 因為這邊節奏比較難 想讓他有規律一點

[Muzukashii]
00:04:951 (14) - k 沒有改 d感覺比較好
00:11:465 (30) - k 已修正! 我把(27)(29) 改成 d d
00:24:041 (43) - k 沒有改 d感覺比較好
00:53:541 (194,195) - k k GOOD!! 我也把(196)(197)改成d k
00:57:874 (220,221,222) - k k d 這樣改會讓1/4不同顏色 所以沒有改
00:59:374 (228) - k GOOD! 已修正

[Oni]
00:05:979 (19) - k 已修正! 還有前面有一些改變00:04:265 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - dkkddk
00:11:465 (35) - k 已修正
00:59:374 (297) - k 已修正 我加了一個d在00:59:291 (297) -

我mod的不怎麼好,還請見諒 沒有這回事@_@ ,但是這個map我很喜歡,加油! \\(=´ω`=謝謝你)
Thanks for modding!!
Smallwu
Hi, mod from my queue

藍色是"建議" 就是我覺得這樣會更好 可是我講不出原因的想法

[General]
bg往下效果會比較好

(.osu檔用記事本開啟 各個難度都要)


第三行的"0,0,"BG.jpg",0,70"我忘記畫起來了_(:з」∠)_
[Kantan]
00:15:541 (3) - K 你在Futsuu也有在這邊放大圓 (Muzu和Oni因為note太多所以就不finish了)

[Futsuu]
00:05:979 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - k k d k k d k 我自己聽歌聲音高是這樣 :3

00:19:207 (14,15) - Ctrl+G
[Muzukashii]
00:03:579 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kdk k d d k d
(接下)
00:05:979 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - k k d k k d k (同Futsuu) 最後一顆我覺得別大圓比較好

00:20:207 - 這裡原本是ddkdd 改成 dxkdd (x=沒有) 因為x的那個地方沒有什麼特別的音

00:23:374 - Add d

00:45:207 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - ddddkdkdkkddk

移除 01:08:707 (275)
↓DO IT IF U ACCEPT↓
01:08:874 (276) - D

可以很明顯的感受到你最後都在跟鋼琴 01:19:207 也有鋼琴聲 你忘記加了

其實我覺得 01:08:874 - 01:19:874 有點亂 考慮修一下?

[Oni]
00:08:722 (29) - 同Muzukashii 建議你這邊不要大圓

00:20:207 (31,32,33,34,35) - d kdd 原因同Muzukashii

00:23:541 - 00:25:374

有用藍色框起來的是大圓

00:32:291 (99) - 我覺得把它移到 00:32:124 會比較合節奏 :3

00:45:541 (182,183,184,185) - k d k d 個人喜好

加油喔>w<//
Topic Starter
katacheh

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue キタ━━━━(゚∀゚)━━━━ッ!!

藍色是"建議" 就是我覺得這樣會更好 可是我講不出原因的想法

[General]
bg往下效果會比較好

(.osu檔用記事本開啟 各個難度都要)

修正! 看到臉了:33

第三行的"0,0,"BG.jpg",0,70"我忘記畫起來了_(:з」∠)_
[Kantan]
00:15:541 (3) - K 你在Futsuu也有在這邊放大圓 (Muzu和Oni因為note太多所以就不finish了) 已修正!

[Futsuu]
00:05:979 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - k k d k k d k 我自己聽歌聲音高是這樣 :3 GOOD! 已修正:33

00:19:207 (14,15) - Ctrl+G 嗚喔! 原來會變成反色 我都不知道:33 已修正
[Muzukashii]
00:03:579 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kdk k d d k d 修正!
(接下)
00:05:979 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - k k d k k d k (同Futsuu) 最後一顆我覺得別大圓比較好 好:3 已修正!

00:20:207 - 這裡原本是ddkdd 改成 dxkdd (x=沒有) 因為x的那個地方沒有什麼特別的音 oAo.. 我有聽到鼓聲的說 你說的可能是ddkxd吧 好像也不是oAo.. 我沒有改 ddkdd感覺比較好

00:23:374 - Add d 加了:3/

00:45:207 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - ddddkdkdkkddk oAo... 變得比較好聽了 已修正

移除 01:08:707 (275)
↓DO IT IF U ACCEPT↓
01:08:874 (276) - D ACCEPT!:3

可以很明顯的感受到你最後都在跟鋼琴 01:19:207 也有鋼琴聲 你忘記加了 加了kd

其實我覺得 01:08:874 - 01:19:874 有點亂 考慮修一下?好\oAo..... 我稍微加了一些些note 應該比較不亂了.......吧(?

[Oni]
00:08:722 (29) - 同Muzukashii 建議你這邊不要大圓 已修正

00:20:207 (31,32,33,34,35) - d kdd 原因同Muzukashii 恩.. 沒改 跟muzu一樣

00:23:541 - 00:25:374

有用藍色框起來的是大圓 修正 好像很多人建議我這邊要改 我以為已經滿搭的了 然而只有我自己這麼認為:3

00:32:291 (99) - 我覺得把它移到 00:32:124 會比較合節奏 :3 我比較喜歡現在的 比較有變化(?) 不過其實兩種都可以

00:45:541 (182,183,184,185) - k d k d 個人喜好 我換成dkdk

加油喔>w<// \\>ε<
謝謝摸圖摟!!
kiminokokoro
不同意不用给kudoso

所有难度
00:00:494 考虑下加条0.9sv 绿线

摸不动低难度

Oni
真的不太建议在连续的歌声中按照歌声编谱>_<
另外别再做鬼畜谱了>_<
另外 大多数情况下 有女声的曲用k做结尾效果都比较好


00:25:124 - 加 d 背景鼓声
00:28:041(72) - 改成k 背景吉他
00:30:041(85,86,87) - 改成 kdd 为了符合之前背景鼓声的每一拍 d k d k节奏(看你喜好)
00:30:707(90,91,92) - 改成kkd 同上
00:33:374(108,109,110) - 改成dkd 同上
00:35:207(122) - 改成k
00:36:707(135) - 删除 为了强调后面重音
00:47:291(200,201,202) - 删除 一是鱼蛋过长不适合 二 为了强调后面
00:47:541(203) - 改为d ( d k d k节奏)
00:48:207(208,209,210,211,212) - 建议改为dkddk 或 kdddk
00:48:707(213,214) - 建议改为kk 强调00:48:874的d
00:49:207(218) - 改为k ( d k d k节奏)
00:50:207(225,226,227,228,229) - 建议改为ddddk
00:53:541(246,247,248) - 建议改为ddk ( d k d k节奏)
00:55:541(267,268,269,270,271) - 建议改为 kkkdk
00:56:207(273,274,275,276,277) - 建议改为两连 dk kd
01:00:957(310,311) - 改为kk
01:01:374(313,314) - 改为kk
01:02:207(319) - 改为d ( d k d k节奏)
01:02:541(322,323) - k d ( d k d k节奏)
01:04:207(330) - 改为k ( d k d k节奏)(并且不影响强调歌词)
01:12:707(375) - 改为k
01:14:207(383) - 从这里开始的5连建议改成以d 为开头的 k为结尾的3+1
01:15:041(390) - 改为d
01:15:374(391) - 改为k

最后 求摸https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/477855
Topic Starter
katacheh

kiminokokoro wrote:

不同意不用给kudoso

所有难度
00:00:494 考虑下加条0.9sv 绿线 增加了:D

摸不动低难度

Oni
真的不太建议在连续的歌声中按照歌声编谱>_<
另外别再做鬼畜谱了>_< ←鬼畜譜才是王道
另外 大多数情况下 有女声的曲用k做结尾效果都比较好


00:25:124 - 加 d 背景鼓声 沒改 我沒聽到鼓聲oAo 而且旁邊都是大圓
00:28:041(72) - 改成k 背景吉他 打起來感覺之前比較好 沒改
00:30:041(85,86,87) - 改成 kdd 为了符合之前背景鼓声的每一拍 d k d k节奏(看你喜好)我挺喜歡現在的感覺 所以沒改;w;
00:30:707(90,91,92) - 改成kkd 同上 ^
00:33:374(108,109,110) - 改成dkd 同上 ^
00:35:207(122) - 改成k oAoa 本來就是k
00:36:707(135) - 删除 为了强调后面重音 因為有鼓聲 所以沒刪
00:47:291(200,201,202) - 删除 一是鱼蛋过长不适合 二 为了强调后面 覺得這邊小串沒什麼問題 串也能強調後面
00:47:541(203) - 改为d ( d k d k节奏)我是kdkd節奏
00:48:207(208,209,210,211,212) - 建议改为dkddk 或 kdddk 覺得kkddk很好;w;...... 抱歉沒改
00:48:707(213,214) - 建议改为kk 强调00:48:874的d 這邊人聲很合欸 我沒改了...
00:49:207(218) - 改为k ( d k d k节奏) 我配合kdkd
00:50:207(225,226,227,228,229) - 建议改为ddddk ^
00:53:541(246,247,248) - 建议改为ddk ( d k d k节奏)^
00:55:541(267,268,269,270,271) - 建议改为 kkkdk ^ 配合1/2的kdkd
00:56:207(273,274,275,276,277) - 建议改为两连 dk kd 有點怪... 我沒有改
01:00:957(310,311) - 改为kk OK! 修正
01:01:374(313,314) - 改为kk 修正!
01:02:207(319) - 改为d ( d k d k节奏)沒改 覺得這樣很好
01:02:541(322,323) - k d ( d k d k节奏)^
01:04:207(330) - 改为k ( d k d k节奏)(并且不影响强调歌词)這樣不好..
01:12:707(375) - 改为k 修正!
01:14:207(383) - 从这里开始的5连建议改成以d 为开头的 k为结尾的3+1 .... 沒改 搭配鋼琴
01:15:041(390) - 改为d 覺得k好
01:15:374(391) - 改为k ^ 覺得d好


最后 求摸https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/477855
謝謝摸圖了!!
Ayyri
Hello there.

M4M from Bow Queue

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you! :)

[General]
  1. I'd recommend changing the overall volume to ~75% since the song was a bit hard to hear over the hitsounds.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:20:874 - Could be changed to D to follow the finish in the background here.
  2. 01:00:207 - Change to d to better emphasize the higher note at 01:00:874 -
  3. Extend the spinner at 01:19:874 - to end at 01:24:874 - since the guitar is held out longer than where it currently ends.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:01:522 - and 00:01:865 - Ctrl+G to better emphasize the vocals at 00:01:865 -
  2. 00:02:208 - and 00:02:551 - Ctrl+G. Same reason as above.
  3. 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - Ctrl+G. This pattern is the opposite of 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - (Since it rises through 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - then falls during 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - )
  4. 00:26:207 - This could be moved to 00:25:707 - to follow the beginning of the drums, but if you're following the vocals at 00:26:541 - then I would suggest removing 00:26:207 -
  5. 00:27:541 - and 00:28:207 - Ctrl+G to emphasize the rise in the vocal at 00:27:541 -
  6. 00:46:541 - Why isn't this section mapped? You mapped it in Kantan, and that difficulty is supposed to be easier than Futsuu.
  7. 00:47:541 - Change to D. You had it like that in Kantan, and it emphasizes the rise in vocals here too.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:041 - Move this to 00:22:207 - . It sounds rather awkward where it currently is, and there's a sound at 00:22:207 - which should be hittable.
  2. Using the above suggestion, you could change 00:22:207 - to k if you don't want to have ddk twice in a row.
  3. 00:46:957 - Add a d here to better follow the piano roll in the background here.
  4. 01:13:541 - Add a k. You're currently missing a piano beat here leaving it unmapped.
[Oni]
  1. 00:22:041 - Same suggestion as in Muzukashii.
  2. 00:46:207 - to 00:47:541 - This pattern is a bit hard for an Oni. Please make it a bit less dense here.
  3. Basically from 00:47:707 - to 01:02:707 - you should try and make these patterns a bit less dense, since density wise, this is quite the jump from Muzukashii to Oni.
Topic Starter
katacheh

Ayyri wrote:

Hello there. Hi~

M4M from Bow Queue

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you! :)

[General]
  1. I'd recommend changing the overall volume to ~75% since the song was a bit hard to hear over the hitsounds. Ok! Fixed!
[Kantan]
  1. 00:20:874 - Could be changed to D to follow the finish in the background here. Fixed!
  2. 01:00:207 - Change to d to better emphasize the higher note at 01:00:874 - Fixed!
  3. Extend the spinner at 01:19:874 - to end at 01:24:874 - since the guitar is held out longer than where it currently ends. [c 0BF00]Ok. Fixed[/color]
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:01:522 - and 00:01:865 - Ctrl+G to better emphasize the vocals at 00:01:865 - Fixed!
  2. 00:02:208 - and 00:02:551 - Ctrl+G. Same reason as above. Fixed!
  3. 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - Ctrl+G. This pattern is the opposite of 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - (Since it rises through 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - then falls during 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - ) no change. Feel rising during 00:24:041 to 00:24:374
  4. 00:26:207 - This could be moved to 00:25:707 - to follow the beginning of the drums, but if you're following the vocals at 00:26:541 - then I would suggest removing 00:26:207 - Good! But I deleted 00:26:207 instead of moving it. (feel weird after big kat)
  5. 00:27:541 - and 00:28:207 - Ctrl+G to emphasize the rise in the vocal at 00:27:541 - Ok. I also changed 00:27:874 (32) - to k
  6. 00:46:541 - Why isn't this section mapped? You mapped it in Kantan, and that difficulty is supposed to be easier than Futsuu. Oh..>< I added a Slider and changed some notes.
  7. 00:47:541 - Change to D. You had it like that in Kantan, and it emphasizes the rise in vocals here too. Fixed!
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:041 - Move this to 00:22:207 - . It sounds rather awkward where it currently is, and there's a sound at 00:22:207 - which should be hittable. I added d at 00:22:207 instead of moving 00:22:041(because 00:22:041 (35) should be hittable too.)
  2. Using the above suggestion, you could change 00:22:207 - to k if you don't want to have ddk twice in a row. No change. [/color]
  3. 00:46:957 - Add a d here to better follow the piano roll in the background here. Good! Added.
  4. 01:13:541 - Add a k. You're currently missing a piano beat here leaving it unmapped. Added!
[Oni]
  1. 00:22:041 - Same suggestion as in Muzukashii. Ok! I added to ddd.
  2. 00:46:207 - to 00:47:541 - This pattern is a bit hard for an Oni. Please make it a bit less dense here. ..I see.>< I changed/deleted some notes.
  3. Basically from 00:47:707 - to 01:02:707 - you should try and make these patterns a bit less dense, since density wise, this is quite the jump from Muzukashii to Oni. I see...but less changes. Feel not good with thin notes..
Thanks for modding!
Skylish
Hi, from my M4M modding queue. (In order to save your time on spending on Google translate, I would like to use Chinese to mod this time. In case Chinese mapper would like to get a Chinese mod, they should mention in the queue ~)~. )

[General]

> 看起來好像沒大問題,但會否考慮增加 前進吧!高捷少女的日文到Tags? Ref.: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/342327 , https://www.facebook.com/K.R.T.GIRLS/in ... =page_info Tags應該不只目前找到的…

> Note consistency 有待改善 :P

[Kantan]

> 01:13:541 - 刪掉,01:11:541 - 至 01:12:874 - ,及01:12:874 - 至 01:14:207 - 之間的音樂是類同的,所以前面用 k k ,後面就可以用 k d。中間不需要額外加音,一來不對著前面的節奏,二來這段音樂要map的話需要用off-beat patterns,這不是你的原意。

> 01:16:874 (72) - 轉成K,1.有明顯cymbal crash 2. k比較合音

[Futsuu]

> 00:37:374 (56) - 用K,請參考同時段的Muzukashii。

> 00:40:041 (59) - 用 D比較好,可以跟前面的D K D作一個強烈對比。 (可以看一下Muzu的mod再考慮)

> 00:42:207 (61) - 改成D,Muzukashii中你用了D,聽起來也是比較合適。

> 00:44:541 (64) - try this:

除了Futsuu外,所有難度在這裡都是跟歌詞來map的,不知為何你要用ddddk去map不知甚麼東西 :D

> 00:46:541 - 加slider? 因為你在沒有vocal的時候,在00:35:541 - 加了slider。

> 01:16:874 (135) - 用Finish,我忘了是否你一早就已經在用K還是我自己私加上去~_~,這裡都提一下有用Finish的需要。

[Muzukashii]

> 00:39:541 (121,123) - ctrl+G,這樣比較對音,同時請參考Futsuu的mod。

> 00:52:624 - 這裡可加k去弄一個3連音出來,就像00:47:541 (160,161,162) - 。

> 01:14:541 - try this? D KkkD

01:14:541 - 有很明顯的cymbal crash,應該是忘了加Finish吧?_?,後面的KkkD節奏是根據之前你在
00:24:874 (46,47,48,49) - 用的節奏而提議的。

> 01:16:874 - 用Finish,明顯的cymbal crash。(如果你改用Finish的話,前面01:16:541 - 請用d (like Futsuu)。)同時,後面的Finish是否有需要這樣用? 在Futsuu和Kantan都不見得有如此需要。

[Oni]

> 00:14:874 - 這stream overmapped了。如果仔細點聆聽音樂的話,應該map 成這樣:


> 00:25:041 (50,51) - 不用Finish的效果比較好,就如Muzukashii一樣。

> 00:43:541 - 至Kiai之前,請檢查 Muzukashii 和Oni 的consistency。

> 01:15:707 - try this?

01:16:874 (397) - 是Finish,改動的原因大致上跟之前提及過的一樣。

> 01:18:707 - 改善了stream的流暢度和依Muzukashii的音去調節:

應該比起一堆kkkdkkk好打,而且挺對準音調的,不合意的則當作參考。

Quite solid beatmap considering only single diff. Note consistency needs to be improved.

**點解港鐵都唔整番D代表人物啊我頂-,-**
Topic Starter
katacheh

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my M4M modding queue. (In order to save your time on spending on Google translate, I would like to use Chinese to mod this time. In case Chinese mapper would like to get a Chinese mod, they should mention in the queue ~)~. )

[General]

> 看起來好像沒大問題,但會否考慮增加 前進吧!高捷少女的日文到Tags? Ref.: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/342327 , https://www.facebook.com/K.R.T.GIRLS/in ... =page_info Tags應該不只目前找到的… 我再多找找

> Note consistency 有待改善 :P

[Kantan]

> 01:13:541 - 刪掉,01:11:541 - 至 01:12:874 - ,及01:12:874 - 至 01:14:207 - 之間的音樂是類同的,所以前面用 k k ,後面就可以用 k d。中間不需要額外加音,一來不對著前面的節奏,二來這段音樂要map的話需要用off-beat patterns,這不是你的原意。修正

> 01:16:874 (72) - 轉成K,1.有明顯cymbal crash 2. k比較合音 好 修正

[Futsuu]

> 00:37:374 (56) - 用K,請參考同時段的Muzukashii。 修正

> 00:40:041 (59) - 用 D比較好,可以跟前面的D K D作一個強烈對比。 (可以看一下Muzu的mod再考慮) 修正

> 00:42:207 (61) - 改成D,Muzukashii中你用了D,聽起來也是比較合適。 修正

> 00:44:541 (64) - try this:

除了Futsuu外,所有難度在這裡都是跟歌詞來map的,不知為何你要用ddddk去map不知甚麼東西 :D我在前一個mod修正了

> 00:46:541 - 加slider? 因為你在沒有vocal的時候,在00:35:541 - 加了slider。 ^

> 01:16:874 (135) - 用Finish,我忘了是否你一早就已經在用K還是我自己私加上去~_~,這裡都提一下有用Finish的需要。 修正

[Muzukashii]

> 00:39:541 (121,123) - ctrl+G,這樣比較對音,同時請參考Futsuu的mod。 Fixed!

> 00:52:624 - 這裡可加k去弄一個3連音出來,就像00:47:541 (160,161,162) - 。

> 01:14:541 - try this? D KkkD

01:14:541 - 有很明顯的cymbal crash,應該是忘了加Finish吧?_?,後面的KkkD節奏是根據之前你在
00:24:874 (46,47,48,49) - 用的節奏而提議的。 不增加finisher 主要跟的是鋼琴 而且不加finish比較可以強調後面.. 改成了d Kk D

> 01:16:874 - 用Finish,明顯的cymbal crash。(如果你改用Finish的話,前面01:16:541 - 請用d (like Futsuu)。)同時,後面的Finish是否有需要這樣用? 在Futsuu和Kantan都不見得有如此需要。 增加了finisher 換了一種樣式

[Oni]

> 00:14:874 - 這stream overmapped了。如果仔細點聆聽音樂的話,應該map 成這樣:

好,修正

> 00:25:041 (50,51) - 不用Finish的效果比較好,就如Muzukashii一樣。修正

> 00:43:541 - 至Kiai之前,請檢查 Muzukashii 和Oni 的consistency。 讓muzu配合oni了

> 01:15:707 - try this?

01:16:874 (397) - 是Finish,改動的原因大致上跟之前提及過的一樣。 GOOD! 已修正

> 01:18:707 - 改善了stream的流暢度和依Muzukashii的音去調節:

應該比起一堆kkkdkkk好打,而且挺對準音調的,不合意的則當作參考。 換了新樣式

Quite solid beatmap considering only single diff. Note consistency needs to be improved. 另外做了一些修正

**點解港鐵都唔整番D代表人物啊我頂-,-**
Thanks for modding!
xtrem3x
Random mods


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

BG image in 1366x768 (?)


Kantan

  • 00:46:207 - this Slider can finish in 00:46:874- to change rhythm in kiai time (and break)

    00:47:541 - Change color in this note...


Futsuu

  • 00:04:951 (12,13) - ctrl+g to follow pitch vocal sound.

    00:15:207 - Change this note to d .. have same sound as previous note.

    00:31:874 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - this part can be better with d k k d k d d k d k d ... same to follow vocal.

    00:46:207 - this Slider can finish in 00:46:874- to change rhythm in kiai time (and break)

    00:47:541 - Change color in this note...

    01:08:041 - Move this note to 01:07:874- to variety (?)


Muzukashii

  • 00:00:836 - Same kdk as Oni.

    00:11:636 (1) - spinner finish in 00:12:836-

    00:15:541 - Is possible add finish here (?)

    00:20:874 - add finish in this note.
    00:52:874 - Same ^

    01:02:041 - This -> This .. deleting 2 notes in triple and blue notes are big...


Oni

  • 00:03:579 (11,12,13) - change this for kdk as similar triple in 00:00:836-

    00:04:608 (15,17) - ctrl+g in these notes ... complementary with above point ^

    00:11:636 (1) - spinner finish in 00:12:836-

    00:20:874 - add finish in this note.

    01:02:207 - this section is better with this combination ... K ddd K

    01:07:207 (344,345,346) - this part change to D d D ... have more bass sound than high sounds.

    01:11:541- is possible add other note here ... preferally k
Topic Starter
katacheh

xtrem3x wrote:

Random mods


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

BG image in 1366x768 (?) Fixed!


Kantan

  • 00:46:207 - this Slider can finish in 00:46:874- to change rhythm in kiai time (and break) Good! Fixed!

    00:47:541 - Change color in this note... no change.(for consistency with other diffs and feels good with K)


Futsuu

  • 00:04:951 (12,13) - ctrl+g to follow pitch vocal sound. Fixed!

    00:15:207 - Change this note to d .. have same sound as previous note. no change.(for consistency with other diffs and feels good with k)

    00:31:874 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - this part can be better with d k k d k d d k d k d ... same to follow vocal. V

    00:46:207 - this Slider can finish in 00:46:874- to change rhythm in kiai time (and break) V

    00:47:541 - Change color in this note... ^
    01:08:041 - Move this note to 01:07:874- to variety (?) Ok, also added d 01:08:207 ()


Muzukashii

  • 00:00:836 - Same kdk as Oni. V

    00:11:636 (1) - spinner finish in 00:12:836- V

    00:15:541 - Is possible add finish here (?) V

    00:20:874 - add finish in this note. V
    00:52:874 - Same ^ V

    01:02:041 - This -> This .. deleting 2 notes in triple and blue notes are big...Changed to _ K d d K


Oni

  • 00:03:579 (11,12,13) - change this for kdk as similar triple in 00:00:836- V

    00:04:608 (15,17) - ctrl+g in these notes ... complementary with above point ^ V

    00:11:636 (1) - spinner finish in 00:12:836-V

    00:20:874 - add finish in this note. V

    01:02:207 - this section is better with this combination ... K ddd K Good! Fixed!

    01:07:207 (344,345,346) - this part change to D d D ... have more bass sound than high sounds. No change.. K d K feel better and look good (to me...)

    01:11:541- is possible add other note here ... preferally kV
I wonder if you will finish kantan and futsuu..>< Thanks again!
Thanks for your mod!
xtrem3x
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