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toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月25日星期一 at 下午3:45:51

Artist: toby fox
Title: Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye
Source: UNDERTALE
Tags: chiptune sahuang choikapo ost soundtrack radiation My Angel Azusa Compilation Anticipation Enemy Approaching Nyeh Heh Heh! sans snowy Snowdin Town Undyne An Ending Death by Glamour Another Medium Bergentrückung Fallen Down Once Upon a Time Hopes and Dreams SAVE the World
BPM: 175
Filesize: 28488kb
Play Time: 06:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Finale (4.96 stars, 1012 notes)
Download: toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye
Download: toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye (no video)
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First rank xdd

Collab with sahuang
05:20:573 - 06:00:528

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Kaitjuh
ProEzrea
wojcioool
_MiaoFUuU_
lazyboy007
Hey lululu
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-N a n a k o-
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Naxess

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By IaKwaN Thanks you very much :D
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ppgamer
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Joined October 2015
ppgamer
This is epic!!!
(Sorry I can't mod Insane diff or higher and I can't check at story board :( )
Nakano Itsuki
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Nakano Itsuki
wa pro
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StarrStyx wrote:

wa pro
wa pro
Rieri
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Rieri
Amazing map, I'm surprised you don't have a ranked mapset yet :O

Finale
  1. First of all, it seems like the whole background is empty until 03:47:824 - maybe you should make it so that the bg shows
  2. 00:17:858 (1,3) - blanket this better
  3. 00:22:658 (1,2,3) - there's nothing to emphasize here, you should make the distance same as 00:21:972 (1,2,3) -
  4. 00:30:201 (1,2) - blanket
  5. 00:37:058 (1) - pull the tail a bit closer to 00:36:715 (4) - for better blanket
  6. 00:45:801 (4) - why nc?
  7. 00:49:401 (5) - NC here not 00:50:087 (1) - here
  8. How come you NC here 00:59:001 (1) - but not here 00:56:258 (5) - ?
  9. 01:01:058 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm, I really don't understand what you're following here. You missed two notes that could have been mapped between these sliders 01:01:572 (6,8) -
  10. 01:12:545 (1,2,3,4) - same here
  11. 01:27:801 (1) - for this note, I would put a hitsound with an echo, sorta like this one. This is only a suggestion, but personally I think this sounds nice.
  12. 01:31:099 (1,1) - you choose to nc these but not this? 01:33:439 (3) - I recommend just not NC'ing there
  13. 02:44:346 (4,5,6,7,8) - woah, no wonder I broke combo here XD 02:44:437 (5) - getting rid of this could be a solution or you could turn 02:44:346 (4) - into a 1/4 slider
  14. 02:52:346 (2,3,4) - blanket
  15. 03:03:982 (2,3) - again, this gets hard to reach so I recommend making 03:04:255 (3) - into a 1/4 slider
  16. 03:30:157 - I see you tried to silence the end of the slider but actually we can still hear it. Maybe you could add the hitsound I gave you earlier and apply it on 03:28:989 - to cancel it out? I think it goes well too
  17. 04:56:906 (2) - nothing supports this repeat, make it into a low SV slider
  18. 05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything.
  19. 05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well
  20. 05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
  21. 05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well

Loved the hitsounds and the storyboard, just a little more work on this and bam, approved :D
Plus4j
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你做完這張時沒跟我講
ˋ^ˊ
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Hey lululu wrote:

你做完這張時沒跟我講
ˋ^ˊ
sorry XDD
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ProEzreal wrote:

Amazing map, I'm surprised you don't have a ranked mapset yet :O

Finale
  1. First of all, it seems like the whole background is empty until 03:47:824 - maybe you should make it so that the bg shows
  2. 00:17:858 (1,3) - blanket this better fixed
  3. 00:22:658 (1,2,3) - there's nothing to emphasize here, you should make the distance same as 00:21:972 (1,2,3) - fixed
  4. 00:30:201 (1,2) - blanket fixed
  5. 00:37:058 (1) - pull the tail a bit closer to 00:36:715 (4) - for better blanket fixed
  6. 00:45:801 (4) - why nc? fixed
  7. 00:49:401 (5) - NC here not 00:50:087 (1) - here fixed
  8. How come you NC here 00:59:001 (1) - but not here 00:56:258 (5) - ? fixed
  9. 01:01:058 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm, I really don't understand what you're following here. You missed two notes that could have been mapped between these sliders 01:01:572 (6,8) - fixed????
  10. 01:12:545 (1,2,3,4) - same here fixed????
  11. 01:27:801 (1) - for this note, I would put a hitsound with an echo, sorta like this one. This is only a suggestion, but personally I think this sounds nice. added
  12. 01:31:099 (1,1) - you choose to nc these but not this? 01:33:439 (3) - I recommend just not NC'ing there fixed
  13. 02:44:346 (4,5,6,7,8) - woah, no wonder I broke combo here XD 02:44:437 (5) - getting rid of this could be a solution or you could turn 02:44:346 (4) - into a 1/4 slider fixed
  14. 02:52:346 (2,3,4) - blanket fixed
  15. 03:03:982 (2,3) - again, this gets hard to reach so I recommend making 03:04:255 (3) - into a 1/4 slider fixed
  16. 03:30:157 - I see you tried to silence the end of the slider but actually we can still hear it. Maybe you could add the hitsound I gave you earlier and apply it on 03:28:989 - to cancel it out? I think it goes well too fixed????
  17. 04:56:906 (2) - nothing supports this repeat, make it into a low SV slider fixed
  18. 05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything. he said wait for 3 mods XD
  19. 05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well
  20. 05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
  21. 05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well

Loved the hitsounds and the storyboard, just a little more work on this and bam, approved :D
Thanks for moding my map !!!!!
and i lower the video quality. the video take too many space but i don't know what can i put there
Kaitjuh
856 posts
Joined December 2012
Kaitjuh
This map is really great!

Smol Mod
Blanket fixes on:
00:11:515 (1,2) -
00:16:830 (3,4) - this one is just slightly off, so I'm kinda nazi'ing rn
00:25:058 (2,3) - slightly off too, you could use the approach circles as a blanket guide so to speak:

00:31:058 (4,1) -
00:42:201 (5,1) -
00:49:744 (2,3) -
00:54:887 (1,3) -
00:59:858 (8,9) -
01:08:087 (5,6) -
03:07:163 (3,2,3) -
04:16:073 (4,5) -
04:28:907 (4,1) -

Might wanna take care of the blankets asap to avoid getting these things in future mods x)

00:30:715 (2,4) - Stack?
01:47:920 (4,1) - This isn't properly stacked either
02:44:073 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing threw me off while playing. Maybe make this a consistently spaced stream?

Your normal-hitnormal2.wav hitsound is too short for a hitsound, as every hitsound has to be at least 100ms long.
For your video file, Remove the audio from it. The audio track will not be used, so all this does is add more filesize.

And lastly for your Storyboard remove the Black image and rescale your white image to 1366x768. This is the maximum image size allowed according to Ranking Criteria. The Black image is not needed, because as long as you have a white image you can color code it to black
 C,0,startTime,endTime,0,0,0
the 0,0,0 at the end is the color code which is black :^)

Also as a side note you might wanna add some tags like "chiptune" or name some leifmotifs that are present in the song :>
And maybe you could provide an external link in the description for a higher res video for the people who want it?

*Throws Stars*
*Runs*
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Kaitjuh wrote:

This map is really great!

Smol Mod
Blanket fixes on:
00:11:515 (1,2) - Fixed
00:16:830 (3,4) - this one is just slightly off, so I'm kinda nazi'ing rn Fixed
00:25:058 (2,3) - slightly off too, you could use the approach circles as a blanket guide so to speak: Fixed

00:31:058 (4,1) - Fixed
00:42:201 (5,1) - Fixed
00:49:744 (2,3) - Fixed
00:54:887 (1,3) - Fixed
00:59:858 (8,9) - Fixed
01:08:087 (5,6) - Fixed
03:07:163 (3,2,3) - Fixed
04:16:073 (4,5) - Fixed
04:28:907 (4,1) - Fixed

Might wanna take care of the blankets asap to avoid getting these things in future mods x)

00:30:715 (2,4) - Stack? Fixed
01:47:920 (4,1) - This isn't properly stacked either
02:44:073 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing threw me off while playing. Maybe make this a consistently spaced stream? Fixed

Your normal-hitnormal2.wav hitsound is too short for a hitsound, as every hitsound has to be at least 100ms long.
For your video file, Remove the audio from it. The audio track will not be used, so all this does is add more filesize.

And lastly for your Storyboard remove the Black image and rescale your white image to 1366x768. This is the maximum image size allowed according to Ranking Criteria. The Black image is not needed, because as long as you have a white image you can color code it to black
 C,0,startTime,endTime,0,0,0
the 0,0,0 at the end is the color code which is black :^) ???


Also as a side note you might wanna add some tags like "chiptune" or name some leifmotifs that are present in the song :> i don't know what to add QAQ
And maybe you could provide an external link in the description for a higher res video for the people who want it? ialready change it :D

*Throws Stars*
*Runs*
*take ur stars*
*runs*
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Lully
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Joined September 2013
Lully
wanted to mod this

but i dun want to anymore.

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star.
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CookieKivi wrote:

wanted to mod this

but i dun want to anymore.

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star.
Thanks For your stars :)
wojciooo
28 posts
Joined July 2013
wojciooo
combo
00:39:801 (3) - Nc
00:50:601 (4) - might be NC
00:56:944 (1) - maybe delete nc ? (but its ok if you let it be)
00:59:001 (4) - nc
01:15:115 (1) - remove nc and move it to next slider?
01:15:458 (2) - NC
01:23:687 (3) - nc
01:39:290 (2) - you could add here nc to make it look better
02:49:164 (3) - nc
03:44:557 (5) - maybe nc?
04:41:240 (9) - move nc here
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybe
02:50:255 (5) - and here might be nc


circles
00:41:172 (1,2) - maybe small jumps instead of stack?
00:45:458 (2,3) - i would change the pattern here
01:06:887 (4,1) - this overlap feels bad
03:11:346 (2,3) - overlap looks ugly
03:14:255 (2,3) - also here
03:28:189 (2,3) - overlap ;-;
04:27:740 (8,1) - guess what
03:32:099 (3) - maybe slider here?
04:07:148 (1) - i would make it more cricle like
Good map, good luck :>
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wojciooo wrote:

combo
00:39:801 (3) - Nc Fixed !!
00:50:601 (4) - might be NC Fixed !!
00:56:944 (1) - maybe delete nc ? (but its ok if you let it be) Fixed !!
00:59:001 (4) - ncFixed !!
01:15:115 (1) - remove nc and move it to next slider?Fixed !!
01:15:458 (2) - NCFixed !!
01:23:687 (3) - ncFixed !!
01:39:290 (2) - you could add here nc to make it look betterFixed !!
02:49:164 (3) - ncFixed !!
03:44:557 (5) - maybe nc?Fixed !!
04:41:240 (9) - move nc hereFixed !!
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybeFixed !!
02:50:255 (5) - and here might be ncFixed !!


circles
00:41:172 (1,2) - maybe small jumps instead of stack?ummm... i think i will keep it
00:45:458 (2,3) - i would change the pattern hereFixed !!
01:06:887 (4,1) - this overlap feels badFixed !!
03:11:346 (2,3) - overlap looks uglyFixed !!
03:14:255 (2,3) - also hereFixed !!
03:28:189 (2,3) - overlap ;-;Fixed !!
04:27:740 (8,1) - guess whatFixed !! XD
03:32:099 (3) - maybe slider here? sorry but... no ;w;
04:07:148 (1) - i would make it more cricle likeFixed !!
Good map, good luck :>
finding NM mod is very hard.Thanks for you help ;w;
AngeLNarancia
AngeLNarancia
This is so Beautiful!
Good map!
Waiting Ranked. uvu
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Akasha-
OMG, video spoiler D:
remove it please
actually, this video quality is really bad

but this map is great, keep going
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

OMG, video spoiler D:
remove it please
actually, this video quality is really bad

but this map is great, keep going
I know the video quality is bad I really want to make it better.but 24MB is maximum.but I won't remove the video even it was spoilers XD
sahuang
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sahuang

ProEzreal wrote:

05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything.
i think so,so changed
05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well yes
05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well
remapped some of them,and ds is increased

wojciooo wrote:

combo
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybe
pls no,the bpm change is really small (<10),so no need to spam NC
thx

I also change some NC in the last part, cuz bpm change is so neglectable.

the code is from 05:20:573 - to the end of the song
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sahuang wrote:

ProEzreal wrote:

05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything.
i think so,so changed
05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well yes
05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well
remapped some of them,and ds is increased

wojciooo wrote:

combo
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybe
pls no,the bpm change is really small (<10),so no need to spam NC
thx

I also change some NC in the last part, cuz bpm change is so neglectable.

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Hi NM（Forum req）

Finale

  1. 00:06:887 (1) - put it to x：312 y：136 to blanket with 00:06:372 (4) - and 00:07:402 (3) - put it to x：432 y:212
  2. 00:20:087 (4,2) - stack
  3. 00:30:201 (1,2,3) - ↑
  4. 00:38:430 (5) - NC and del NC 00:39:115 (1) -
  5. 00:42:715 (6) - 00:42:887 (1) - ↑
  6. 00:44:087 (5) - NC
  7. 00:46:658 (1,3) - stack
  8. 00:50:087 (3,3) - ↑
  9. 00:56:258 (1) - take it to x：408 y：292 blanket
  10. 00:59:001 (1,6) - stack at 00:59:001 (1) -
  11. 01:01:744 - 01:02:430 - suggest do not pass this rhythm tick like 01:05:858 (1,3,4) - ，and this part 01:00:372 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - NC need fixed
  12. 01:09:115 (2) - take it to x：192 y：384 blanket？
  13. 01:12:545 (1,3) - same
  14. 01:15:458 (1,3) - stack
  15. 01:48:066 (1) - ↑
  16. 02:07:374 (5,1) - stack
  17. 04:14:907 - add a red line because here is strong sound's begin（big white tick）,so 04:41:573 (2) - NC，check this part NC
  18. 04:16:073 (4,5) - this flow suggest change
  19. 04:18:240 (4,2) - stack
  20. 05:29:739 - i think here should be have click， so you can change rhythm place 05:29:406 (6,7) - ctrl+g,05:29:406 - don't forget hitsound

Nice map,star,good luck！
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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

Hi NM（Forum req）

Finale

  1. 00:06:887 (1) - put it to x：312 y：136 to blanket with 00:06:372 (4) - and 00:07:402 (3) - put it to x：432 y:212
  2. 00:20:087 (4,2) - stack
  3. 00:30:201 (1,2,3) - ↑
  4. 00:38:430 (5) - NC and del NC 00:39:115 (1) -
  5. 00:42:715 (6) - 00:42:887 (1) - ↑
  6. 00:44:087 (5) - NC
  7. 00:46:658 (1,3) - stack
  8. 00:50:087 (3,3) - ↑
  9. 00:56:258 (1) - take it to x：408 y：292 blanket
  10. 00:59:001 (1,6) - stack at 00:59:001 (1) -
  11. 01:01:744 - 01:02:430 - suggest do not pass this rhythm tick like 01:05:858 (1,3,4) - ，and this part 01:00:372 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - NC need fixed
  12. 01:09:115 (2) - take it to x：192 y：384 blanket？
  13. 01:12:545 (1,3) - same
  14. 01:15:458 (1,3) - stack
  15. 01:48:066 (1) - ↑
  16. 02:07:374 (5,1) - stack
  17. 04:14:907 - add a red line because here is strong sound's begin（big white tick）,so 04:41:573 (2) - NC，check this part NC
  18. 04:16:073 (4,5) - this flow suggest change
  19. 04:18:240 (4,2) - stack
  20. 05:29:739 - i think here should be have click， so you can change rhythm place 05:29:406 (6,7) - ctrl+g,05:29:406 - don't forget hitsound

Nice map,star,good luck！
all fixed Thanks for your mod!! :)
lazygirl
506 posts
Joined February 2016
lazygirl
Hey from modding queue for NM!

00:55:401 (2,3) - blanket
00:59:858 (5,6,3) - banket
01:06:887 (4) - missing clap
01:30:514 (1) - damn that melody's so good
02:17:891 (5,1) - these two overlap a bit much but eh this is a 5* diff it's fine
02:21:528 (1) - I don't like this feels undermapped here ;p
02:24:437 (1) - ^
and same for 02:27:346 (1) -
03:04:800 (1,1) - maybe reduce stacking value to avoid this?
03:15:710 (2,4,5,6) - stacks weirdly
04:35:907 (5) - missing hitsound maybe on purpose doe ^^

SICK mapset. Take my stars :D
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lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey from modding queue for NM!

00:55:401 (2,3) - blanket fixed
00:59:858 (5,6,3) - banket can't banket anymore ;w;
01:06:887 (4) - missing clap fixed
01:30:514 (1) - damn that melody's so good Thanks lol
02:17:891 (5,1) - these two overlap a bit much but eh this is a 5* diff it's fine fixed
02:21:528 (1) - I don't like this feels undermapped here ;p I don't know what to map here :(
02:24:437 (1) - ^
and same for 02:27:346 (1) -
03:04:800 (1,1) - maybe reduce stacking value to avoid this? fixed
03:15:710 (2,4,5,6) - stacks weirdly fixed
04:35:907 (5) - missing hitsound maybe on purpose doe ^^ ?

SICK mapset. Take my stars :D
HOLY SHIT thanks for your 5 stars :)
Plus4j
Beatmap Nominator
1,069 posts
Joined March 2014
Plus4j
Hello from your game chat (NM)

:W: OWO OAO OUO ;w; Oxo OLO odo oHo

[Finale]
00:04:316 (2,3,4,5) - 距離太遠了，而且我覺得這不是個好擺放，follow如下圖，建議00:04:658 (5) - 把這個弄成直的
SPOILER
00:11:515 (1,2,3) - blanket沒弄好
00:26:601 (4) - 建議弄成直的
00:31:058 (4) - 滑條頭少了clap
00:49:744 (2,3) - blanket沒弄好
00:56:258 (1) - 這滑條沒有對稱也導致00:56:086 (4,1) - 這兩個blanket也沒弄好
01:08:601 (1) - 1滑條尾跟01:09:115 (2) - 這個距離跟01:09:458 (3,4) - 這兩個距離不一樣，弄成一樣的會比較好
01:05:172 (3,4,1) - ^
01:11:172 (6,1,2) - blanket沒弄好
01:11:344 (1) - 這裡的SV建議用0.8x這裡屬於比較慢的地方
01:30:514 (1) - 這邊開始如果是我我會把像這種的01:30:514 (1,2,3) - 每一段的第一個滑條弄得很快，第二個比較慢第三個就適當
02:45:891 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡造型沒做好，哪沒沒做好不用我說吧，你應該看得出來
02:48:800 (1,2) - 為何這邊有特別的NC?
03:15:346 (1,2,3) - 這裡造型也沒做好
03:28:989 (3) - 弄個藝術吧，直滑條這樣好乾
03:35:986 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好
03:47:824 (1,2,3) - 這邊犯了兩個我說的錯誤，可以往回看
03:53:041 (3) - 這波浪滑條也沒對稱
04:22:240 (7,1) - blanket沒弄好
04:28:907 (4,1) - ^
04:39:573 (3,4) - ^
04:42:240 (3,4,1) - 我想這邊是波浪讓兩個滑條blanket吧，但很明顯是失敗了
04:47:406 (3,4) - blanket沒弄好
04:56:240 (1,2) - ^
05:24:406 (1) - 這滑條為什麼這樣灣?我沒有看到任何這樣灣的用意
06:00:500 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好
06:01:480 (3,4) - ^
06:08:355 (1,1) - ^

總體來講滑條用得不錯，但很多造型沒弄好，還有小小的SV錯誤

這張圖很神奇的NC問題非常少
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Hey lululu wrote:

Hello from your game chat (NM)

:W: OWO OAO OUO ;w; Oxo OLO odo oHo

[Finale]
00:04:316 (2,3,4,5) - 距離太遠了，而且我覺得這不是個好擺放，follow如下圖，建議00:04:658 (5) - 把這個弄成直的 no
SPOILER
00:11:515 (1,2,3) - blanket沒弄好 K
00:26:601 (4) - 建議弄成直的no
00:31:058 (4) - 滑條頭少了clap K
00:49:744 (2,3) - blanket沒弄好 K
00:56:258 (1) - 這滑條沒有對稱也導致00:56:086 (4,1) - 這兩個blanket也沒弄好?
01:08:601 (1) - 1滑條尾跟01:09:115 (2) - 這個距離跟01:09:458 (3,4) - 這兩個距離不一樣，弄成一樣的會比較好 ?
01:05:172 (3,4,1) - ^ ?
01:11:172 (6,1,2) - blanket沒弄好 K
01:11:344 (1) - 這裡的SV建議用0.8x這裡屬於比較慢的地方 no
01:30:514 (1) - 這邊開始如果是我我會把像這種的01:30:514 (1,2,3) - 每一段的第一個滑條弄得很快，第二個比較慢第三個就適當 no,
02:45:891 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡造型沒做好，哪沒沒做好不用我說吧，你應該看得出來 K
02:48:800 (1,2) - 為何這邊有特別的NC? K
03:15:346 (1,2,3) - 這裡造型也沒做好?
03:28:989 (3) - 弄個藝術吧，直滑條這樣好乾 K
03:35:986 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好 K
03:47:824 (1,2,3) - 這邊犯了兩個我說的錯誤，可以往回看 no
03:53:041 (3) - 這波浪滑條也沒對稱 no
04:22:240 (7,1) - blanket沒弄好 K
04:28:907 (4,1) - ^ K
04:39:573 (3,4) - ^ K
04:42:240 (3,4,1) - 我想這邊是波浪讓兩個滑條blanket吧，但很明顯是失敗了 K
04:47:406 (3,4) - blanket沒弄好 K
04:56:240 (1,2) - ^ K
05:24:406 (1) - 這滑條為什麼這樣灣?我沒有看到任何這樣灣的用意
06:00:500 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好 K
06:01:480 (3,4) - ^ K
06:08:355 (1,1) - ^ K

總體來講滑條用得不錯，但很多造型沒弄好，還有小小的SV錯誤

這張圖很神奇的NC問題非常少
want to sleep zzz
-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
As requested

  1. Add "choikapo" to your tags since you ranked a map with old name
  2. 00:17:858 (1,2) - nazi, the blacket is slightly off
  3. 00:20:087 (4) - Turn into Circle+ 1/2 slider so follow the drum at the white tick
  4. 01:19:572 (1) - Maybe turn into 2 4/1 slider? having a long slider to have so many return arrows feels meh for me
  5. 01:25:058 (1) - ^
  6. 01:50:796 (5,6,1,2,3,1) - The 1/3 stream is easy to get missed because it can be misread as 1/4 as 01:49:821 (2,3,4) - , same goes to 01:54:502 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - and later patterns
  7. 03:04:800 (1) - Remove NC?
  8. 05:47:906 (5) - 05:49:239 (5) - NC? to make consistency

Sorry for short mod

GL~
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KuranteMelodii wrote:

As requested

  1. Add "choikapo" to your tags since you ranked a map with old name fixed !
  2. 00:17:858 (1,2) - nazi, the blacket is slightly off fixed !
  3. 00:20:087 (4) - Turn into Circle+ 1/2 slider so follow the drum at the white tick fixed !
  4. 01:19:572 (1) - Maybe turn into 2 4/1 slider? having a long slider to have so many return arrows feels meh for me that's alright
  5. 01:25:058 (1) - ^
  6. 01:50:796 (5,6,1,2,3,1) - The 1/3 stream is easy to get missed because it can be misread as 1/4 as 01:49:821 (2,3,4) - , same goes to 01:54:502 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - and later patterns fixed !
  7. 03:04:800 (1) - Remove NC? fixed !
  8. 05:47:906 (5) - 05:49:239 (5) - NC? to make consistency fixed !

Sorry for short mod

GL~
Thanks for your mod XD
ppgamer
85 posts
Joined October 2015
ppgamer
About your video. You should use vlc media player and follow these step: http://www.howtogeek.com/65505/how-to-s ... -with-vlc/ this should make your video use less memory without making your video render too bad!
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ppgamer wrote:

About your video. You should use vlc media player and follow these step: http://www.howtogeek.com/65505/how-to-s ... -with-vlc/ this should make your video use less memory without making your video render too bad!
Thanks!!!
i will do it before it rank :D
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