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P*Light - YELLOW SPLASH!! [OsuMania]

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Lirai
I'm about to tell it tomorrow but thanks feerum

Also, I already recheck it. And no issues found by me
So this map should be ready

Bubbled.

Gl for rank :D
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DE-CADE wrote:

I'm about to tell it tomorrow but thanks feerum

Also, I already recheck it. And no issues found by me
So this map should be ready

Bubbled.

Gl for rank :D
Thanks Cadey :)
Arzenvald
more p*light please
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ajeemaniz wrote:

more p*light please
:) :D ;)
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self pop (fixed some pattern in SUMMER SPLASH)
Lirai
rebubbled
Spy
Well design ;)
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Spy wrote:

Well design ;)
thank you~ 'w')/ :D
Akasha-
SPLASH PRPRPR

[BASIC]
00:06:438 - till 00:09:032 - compared to medium diff here is much denser maybe try follow only those loud crash sound here
00:27:519 (27519|0,27843|3,28005|1,28330|3,28654|2) - http://puu.sh/ofwwG/9811294568.png this could be nice
00:31:411 (31411|2) - move to 2
00:41:951 - till 00:58:330 - i think make a 1/2 LN into normal note better.short LN kinda hard for beginner
00:42:762 (42762|2) - W
01:01:573 (61573|2,61735|0) - F
01:01:735 (61735|0) - maybe move to 2? like 00:20:059 (20059|0,20059|1,20221|2,20384|1,20708|3) -
01:40:492 (100492|0,100654|3) - CTRL+H? i think the crash sound should be different from 01:39:843 (99843|0,100167|3) -

[MEDIUM]
00:07:086 (7086|0,7330|0,7573|0) - it plays kinda odd for me, since u didn't follow this sound again after 00:07:735 - maybe change them into 1/1 kick
00:10:005 (10005|3) - W
00:27:843 (27843|1,28005|3) - CTRL+H? something different variation from 00:27:194 (27194|1,27194|0,27519|2,27519|3) -
00:42:762 (42762|3) - W
00:47:789 (47789|1) - C
01:01:573 (61573|2,61735|1) - F
01:03:681 - 01:06:276 - 01:08:870 - 01:11:465 - add for kick?
01:22:654 (82654|2) - W
01:25:248 (85248|2,85248|0,85411|3,85411|1) - CTRL+H?


[HARD]
00:14:384 (14384|2,14465|1,14546|3,14546|2,14708|1) - CTRL+H could be much more comfortable to hit
00:21:519 (21519|1,21600|2) - delete? feels better for pattern flow and u don't have note here in SUMMER SPLASH!!
00:35:951 (35951|0,36113|3) - CTRL+H?
00:51:681 (51681|3,51762|2,51843|1) - CTRL+G and 00:51:519 (51519|2) - move to 4 , easier to play
01:34:005 (94005|3,94167|2) - i think is better to make it into normal note
00:10:005 (10005|1) - W
00:42:762 (42762|0) - W
01:03:843 (63843|3) - W
01:01:573 (61573|0,61735|2) - F
01:04:167 (64167|0,64248|1,64330|2) - W
01:06:924 (66924|3) - W
01:09:519 (69519|3) - W
01:12:113 (72113|1) - W
01:22:654 (82654|1) - W

[Feru's SPECIAL]
00:02:870 (2870|1,2870|3) - make it into single since u only use double for vocal sound here
00:16:654 - double note for loud kick? here u have double 00:27:032 (27032|1,27032|0) -
01:05:384 - missing drum note?
01:35:627 - should be double here for vocal
00:10:005 (10005|2) - W
00:47:789 (47789|3) - C
00:42:762 (42762|3) - W
00:47:951 (47951|1) - W
01:01:248 (61248|0) - F
01:01:573 (61573|0,61735|0) - F
01:04:167 (64167|1,64248|0,64330|2) - W
01:09:519 (69519|1) - W
01:12:113 (72113|1) - W
01:22:654 (82654|1) - W


[SUMMER SPLASH!!]
00:09:276 - add?
00:10:005 (10005|2) - W
00:17:465 (17465|1,17627|0) - CTRL+G this for balance
00:22:816 - should be double here since u follow all vocal with double note
00:25:248 (25248|2,25248|3,25411|0,25573|1,25573|2,25735|3,25897|0,25897|1) - i think this pattern should be the same like you did at 00:14:870 (14870|3,14870|1,15032|0,15032|2,15194|1,15194|3,15357|2,15357|0,15519|1,15519|3) -
00:33:762 - add?
00:40:167 (40167|3) - W
00:42:762 (42762|0) - W
00:47:951 (47951|3) - W
01:01:248 (61248|2) - F
01:01:573 (61573|0,61735|0) - F
01:04:167 (64167|0,64248|1,64330|2) - W
01:04:248 (64248|1) - double for drum? u have double for this drum sound at 01:06:843 (66843|2,66843|1) -
01:06:924 (66924|3) - W
01:06:924 (66924|2) - W
01:09:519 (69519|2) - W
01:11:789 (71789|2,71870|3) - i think CTRL+G this play better
01:12:113 (72113|1) - W
01:22:654 (82654|1) - W
01:27:681 (87681|0,87681|3) - make into single note? there is no vocal sound here

this mod is a little fast mod, my apologies, i will come back to recheck as soon as you done fixing it, call me later then, good luck
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

SPLASH PRPRPR prprpr

[BASIC]
00:06:438 - till 00:09:032 - compared to medium diff here is much denser maybe try follow only those loud crash sound here hmm, ok i deleted those vocal note here
00:27:519 (27519|0,27843|3,28005|1,28330|3,28654|2) - http://puu.sh/ofwwG/9811294568.png this could be nice rearranged here
00:31:411 (31411|2) - move to 2 i think is nice to have them at the same column here since they have the same kick sound
00:41:951 - till 00:58:330 - i think make a 1/2 LN into normal note better.short LN kinda hard for beginner now u mention i think yea , ok i make it to normal note
00:42:762 (42762|2) - W
01:01:573 (61573|2,61735|0) - F
01:01:735 (61735|0) - maybe move to 2? like 00:20:059 (20059|0,20059|1,20221|2,20384|1,20708|3) - ok
01:40:492 (100492|0,100654|3) - CTRL+H? i think the crash sound should be different from 01:39:843 (99843|0,100167|3) - ok

[MEDIUM]
00:07:086 (7086|0,7330|0,7573|0) - it plays kinda odd for me, since u didn't follow this sound again after 00:07:735 - maybe change them into 1/1 kick ok i follow vocal here
00:10:005 (10005|3) - W
00:27:843 (27843|1,28005|3) - CTRL+H? something different variation from 00:27:194 (27194|1,27194|0,27519|2,27519|3) - nice
00:42:762 (42762|3) - W
00:47:789 (47789|1) - C
01:01:573 (61573|2,61735|1) - F
01:03:681 - 01:06:276 - 01:08:870 - 01:11:465 - add for kick? hmm i guess not, i preferr follow only vocal + a small 1/4 stream sound
01:22:654 (82654|2) - W
01:25:248 (85248|2,85248|0,85411|3,85411|1) - CTRL+H? sure


[HARD]
00:14:384 (14384|2,14465|1,14546|3,14546|2,14708|1) - CTRL+H could be much more comfortable to hit ya
00:21:519 (21519|1,21600|2) - delete? feels better for pattern flow and u don't have note here in SUMMER SPLASH!! best, removed
00:35:951 (35951|0,36113|3) - CTRL+H? that was actually nice, 'w')b
00:51:681 (51681|3,51762|2,51843|1) - CTRL+G and 00:51:519 (51519|2) - move to 4 , easier to play rearranged here
01:34:005 (94005|3,94167|2) - i think is better to make it into normal note changed pattern here
00:10:005 (10005|1) - W
00:42:762 (42762|0) - W
01:03:843 (63843|3) - W
01:01:573 (61573|0,61735|2) - F
01:04:167 (64167|0,64248|1,64330|2) - W
01:06:924 (66924|3) - W
01:09:519 (69519|3) - W
01:12:113 (72113|1) - W
01:22:654 (82654|1) - W

[Feru's SPECIAL]
00:02:870 (2870|1,2870|3) - make it into single since u only use double for vocal sound here
00:16:654 - double note for loud kick? here u have double 00:27:032 (27032|1,27032|0) -
01:05:384 - missing drum note?
01:35:627 - should be double here for vocal
00:10:005 (10005|2) - W
00:47:789 (47789|3) - C
00:42:762 (42762|3) - W
00:47:951 (47951|1) - W
01:01:248 (61248|0) - F
01:01:573 (61573|0,61735|0) - F
01:04:167 (64167|1,64248|0,64330|2) - W
01:09:519 (69519|1) - W
01:12:113 (72113|1) - W
01:22:654 (82654|1) - W


[SUMMER SPLASH!!]
00:09:276 - add? not really loud there so i didn't add it
00:10:005 (10005|2) - W
00:17:465 (17465|1,17627|0) - CTRL+G this for balance ok
00:22:816 - should be double here since u follow all vocal with double note ya good catch
00:25:248 (25248|2,25248|3,25411|0,25573|1,25573|2,25735|3,25897|0,25897|1) - i think this pattern should be the same like you did at 00:14:870 (14870|3,14870|1,15032|0,15032|2,15194|1,15194|3,15357|2,15357|0,15519|1,15519|3) - ok yes, i changed pattern here
00:33:762 - add? since there is a sv flow here i think follow vocal sound here will be more noticeable
00:40:167 (40167|3) - W
00:42:762 (42762|0) - W
00:47:951 (47951|3) - W
01:01:248 (61248|2) - F
01:01:573 (61573|0,61735|0) - F
01:04:167 (64167|0,64248|1,64330|2) - W
01:04:248 (64248|1) - double for drum? u have double for this drum sound at 01:06:843 (66843|2,66843|1) - opps, added
01:06:924 (66924|3) - W
01:06:924 (66924|2) - W
01:09:519 (69519|2) - W
01:11:789 (71789|2,71870|3) - i think CTRL+G this play better ok
01:12:113 (72113|1) - W
01:22:654 (82654|1) - W
01:27:681 (87681|0,87681|3) - make into single note? there is no vocal sound here good catch, remove a note here

this mod is a little fast mod, my apologies, i will come back to recheck as soon as you done fixing it, call me later then, good luck
thanks moe KK~ ;)
fixed all the HS for all diff :)
Feerum

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

SPLASH PRPRPR

[Feru's SPECIAL]
00:02:870 (2870|1,2870|3) - make it into single since u only use double for vocal sound here But i follow here the very clear melody with my doubles
00:16:654 - double note for loud kick? here u have double 00:27:032 (27032|1,27032|0) - Changed
01:05:384 - missing drum note? Whoops
01:35:627 - should be double here for vocal But there is no vocal
00:10:005 (10005|2) - W
00:47:789 (47789|3) - C
00:42:762 (42762|3) - W
00:47:951 (47951|1) - W
01:01:248 (61248|0) - F
01:01:573 (61573|0,61735|0) - F
01:04:167 (64167|1,64248|0,64330|2) - W
01:09:519 (69519|1) - W
01:12:113 (72113|1) - W
01:22:654 (82654|1) - W
Hitsounds fixed by CS'

this mod is a little fast mod, my apologies, i will come back to recheck as soon as you done fixing it, call me later then, good luck
Thanks Kuo
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Adinata28
Oh Yes!
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Adinata28 wrote:

Oh Yes!
(\'w')/\('w'/)
Verniy_Chan

lel
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Verniy_Chan wrote:


lel
xd
Akasha-
wanna to get irc with you but seems you're off so

[BASIC]
00:43:248 (43248|0,44059|0) - well, this shield is a little hard for starter, here my suggestion: http://puu.sh/oB81t/d5e2119187.jpg
well, that's all, great diff already

[MEDIUM]
00:27:843 (27843|3,28005|1) - those are wrong hitsounded, switch them
01:10:492 (70492|2,70654|1,70816|0,70978|3,71059|2,71140|1,71221|0) - this actually looks pretty hard to catch well, although the instrument are different so, here is my suggestion: http://puu.sh/oB8bS/d8d5d29c06.jpg

Well, that's all, the rest was fine anyway
More, i notice that soft-hitfinish.wav is delayed, here is the fixed: http://puu.sh/oB8xM/64f3a2a506.wav

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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

wanna to get irc with you but seems you're off so

[BASIC]
00:43:248 (43248|0,44059|0) - well, this shield is a little hard for starter, here my suggestion: http://puu.sh/oB81t/d5e2119187.jpg
well, that's all, great diff already

[MEDIUM]
00:27:843 (27843|3,28005|1) - those are wrong hitsounded, switch them
01:10:492 (70492|2,70654|1,70816|0,70978|3,71059|2,71140|1,71221|0) - this actually looks pretty hard to catch well, although the instrument are different so, here is my suggestion: http://puu.sh/oB8bS/d8d5d29c06.jpg

Well, that's all, the rest was fine anyway
More, i notice that soft-hitfinish.wav is delayed, here is the fixed: http://puu.sh/oB8xM/64f3a2a506.wav

fixed all, thank you KK~ :)
Akasha-
P*Light - YELLOW SPLASH!! [OsuMania]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Qualified
(wanna to stay)

Congratulations!
Maxus
Congrats star for cipratan kuning <3
Verniy_Chan
Congratulations, CStar & feerum
Feerum
Oh cool.
Grats CS' :D
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Congratulation and prprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprpr CS !
Dellvangel
Gratz my star-nya and feerum ~ <3
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

P*Light - YELLOW SPLASH!! [OsuMania]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Qualified
(wanna to stay)

Congratulations!
Moew~ \'w')/

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Congrats star for cipratan kuning <3
Banyak kasih diixon :)

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Congratulations, CStar & feerum
Thanks Verniy~

Feerum wrote:

Oh cool.
Grats CS' :D
Danke! You tuu ~ ;)

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Congratulation and prprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprprpr CS !
;w;) thanks xd and sprrrrlash Avalon >v<

Dellvangel wrote:

Gratz my star-nya and feerum ~ <3
Thank yuuuuu my angel~ <3
SpectorDG
yeeeey congratz cisi <3
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SpectorDG wrote:

yeeeey congratz cisi <3
yee thanks Spec-nyan~ 'w')
Wh1teh
[SUMMER SPLASH!!]

00:31:086 and 01:43:735 I don't understand how these split handed trills into a minijack are justifiable. I can understand the usage here 00:10:978 because the jumptrill before that is alternating hands. Just my opinion, I think the trilling on both hands into minijack is rage inducing.

Otherwise, nice map 👌
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Wh1teh wrote:

[SUMMER SPLASH!!]

00:31:086 and 01:43:735 I don't understand how these split handed trills into a minijack are justifiable. I can understand the usage here 00:10:978 because the jumptrill before that is alternating hands. Just my opinion, I think the trilling on both hands into minijack is rage inducing.
I think this shouldn't be a problem for it, the mini jack doesn't really feel hard to hit.
I did tested a lot of time for this pattern
:o
Otherwise, nice map 👌
:)
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Wh1teh wrote:

[SUMMER SPLASH!!]

00:31:086 and 01:43:735 I don't understand how these split handed trills into a minijack are justifiable. I can understand the usage here 00:10:978 because the jumptrill before that is alternating hands. Just my opinion, I think the trilling on both hands into minijack is rage inducing.
actually i think the mini jack is pretty easy to play and it doesn't feel hard to play it too. this shouldn't be a problem here
Otherwise, nice map 👌
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Critical_Moon wrote:

Wh1teh wrote:

[SUMMER SPLASH!!]

00:31:086 and 01:43:735 I don't understand how these split handed trills into a minijack are justifiable. I can understand the usage here 00:10:978 because the jumptrill before that is alternating hands. Just my opinion, I think the trilling on both hands into minijack is rage inducing.
I think this shouldn't be a problem for it, the mini jack doesn't really feel hard to hit.
I did tested a lot of time for this pattern
:o
Otherwise, nice map 👌
:)

lol? hi moon and yea thanks for agreeing :)
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i think we need Critical_Sun now
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