1. Eraser's Crippling Mania Depression - 4Key (4,4 stars, 3295 notes)
2. garbage (3,34 stars, 1354 notes)
3. Grim Rapper's Broken Home (3,62 stars, 755 notes)
4. Nishizumi's Bundir Oni (9,98 stars, 1444 notes)
5. Volta's Depressing Rain (3,78 stars, 754 notes)

game rock wrote:

[ Depression Oni]

03:48:234 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 04:04:030 - sure, yeah but is not have voice pitch.. but this I agree too. thx for look here
The slider must end here 04:51:757 - to follow the drums. ups my mistake XD

Congratulations on your Beatmap, really love it. The music is very beautiful and I almost cried of happiness, I really congratulate you, good job!

Beautiful Beatmap!!!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

Skeuddy wrote:

Hi, Surono, from my queue (sry for lateness)
Low BPM played not comfortable, but diff looks good

Depression Oni

1. 00:41:870 (145,146) - Swap
2. 02:25:165 (162,163) - ^
3. 00:56:188 (206) to 00:56:074
4. 02:40:052 (234) to 02:40:279
5. 01:41:074 (80,81) - ^
6. 00:47:438 (170) - d
7. 00:49:711 (180) - ^
8. 00:57:211 (210) - ^
9. 01:17:097 (35) - ^
10. 02:48:461 (278) - ^
11. 03:21:983 (73) - ^
12. 04:09:256 (23,24,26) - ^
13. 04:40:620 (51,52,53) - ^
14. 04:41:983 (60) - ^
15. 01:03:802 (247) - k, like here 01:02:893 (241,244)
16. 04:37:438 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think, here need something like this
17. Spin to 04:53:120 no, is from start instrumental
18. 04:59:711 (40) - This and next notes - delete no, drain map not get 5 minute, btw is map marathon ;w;

Byeee lol

Surono wrote:

no, drain map not get 5 minute, btw is map marathon ;w;
really nice mod, all accept. THX!

Nishizumi wrote:

ANJENG GA PAKE BG ANIMU ? XDXDXDXD

Flying Pan wrote:

will be rejected because BG is not loli

shionelove wrote:

M4M

delete widescreen support forget lel
Artist is LAST CHILD not Last Child?because official twitter is this...but idk keep, in public.. never see with caps lol XD
[Oni]
00:46:756 (165,166,167,168,169) - suddenly five 1/4 notes already fiveplet
02:14:256 (111,112,113,114,115) - ^ ^
03:40:847 (25,26,27,28,29) - kkkkd? keep, kdkkd is fit imo. bcus 26 in slowplayback is feels down pitch
04:01:302 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - k ddd k ddd k ddd k imo about this.. in before is k ddd k kddblabla too.. but i change to follow pitch guitar.. not in don 04:02:211 - like this.. since 04:43:347 - this not ddd too, and 03:32:438 - this why i make ddd? bcus pitch guitar not started different
04:21:529 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97) - kkddkkk imo ok 93 kat, nice
hmm
you may have to make full spread if QAT says you must delete notes from 04:52:211 (1) - (fade-out thing) lel.. drain not get 5min huee XD
idk wat to do... XD

shionelove wrote:

i don't think this timing point is needed,delete this
this song is simple BPM 132.000 imo

Ameth Rianno wrote:

kwek. (` `)> request dari surrr. bg animu plez. wew hard difficulty

wajahilah saat iniii Demm lirik!1!!! dem lidah jepun, dem celat :^)

[Deppresion Oni]

1. 00:14:711 (25) - change to kat?
2. 00:17:893 (40,41,42) - dkd? or is this following the drum
3. 00:21:983 (63) - same, change to kat
4. 00:33:802 (112,113) - reverse pattern, the drum's more high at (113) no, this break consistency with before don.. 113 is fit with don.. but fits too in voice pitch.. but till reject.
5. 00:41:074 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148) - suggest pattern:
   
6. 01:16:983 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - wew pattern gaje lololol. okay change to ddd k
7. 01:56:529 (25) - change to kat already k

Weks, great map. Maaf kalau gak helpful, good luck (` `)>

Raiden wrote:

dem mod med dom dem sir sed mir

i should stop doing indonesian drugs like u do dem sir `L_` `_J` hmm.. bleehh

[ General]

1. SV changes look a bit sloppy. I suggest either refining them or removing them completely. The song is really calm and I don't think it asks for SV changes anyway. a.. but its gud. idk lel
2. 04:01:302 - This uninherited is useless as it's in a downbeat. If it was a downbeat switch I'd understand, but it's not necessary. Remove it. for metronome NC mod plox. @_@

[ Depression Oni]

1. 00:25:620 (82) - Could be a d to differentiate from 83 lol my mistake to follow voice pitch
2. 00:27:438 (89) - Same ^
3. 00:28:915 (95) - This is a drum hit. Maybe swap with 94? my mistake.. ew i like jepen persun mepping.
4. 00:29:711 - Add a d for consistency like in 00:27:893 (91) - and 00:26:074 (84) -
5. 00:30:165 - You might want to add a note here to avoid losing momentum hmm.. no, bcus i follow 00:30:393 - drum.. for empashangawg. ew eh okay i add note XD dem sht reason
6. 00:31:529 - Same ^
7. 00:34:370 (115) - Drum hit. Change to d?
8. 00:36:983 (125) - d for consistency?
9. 00:40:165 (138) - Same ^
10. 00:41:870 (145,146) - I think you should swap these as 146 has a higher tone and sounds like 143 no... 00:41:983 - is don, and 00:42:211 - and this kat... 00:41:302 (145,147,149) - don don don...
11. 00:46:302 (163) - Move to 00:46:074 - and change to d for consistency? Either that or add a note at 00:46:074 - not change, and no add in 46. i not make long 1/2 in this instrumen, but in next change sv i add more.
12. 00:51:529 - I think it would flow better and have more consistency if you added a d here no, i follow don kat drum ;w;
13. 00:54:029 (195) - This is rrather a deep hit, lower tone. Maybe switch to d? 00:54:029 - this finisher kat *thats why i put kat*, and 196 197 is different with this
14. 00:56:074 (206,207) - Swap? I think it helps flow keep
15. 00:59:029 - I think switching from uneven to even here sounds a bit awkward... consider filling this spot please nice, 00:59:143 - dlt, and 00:58:802 - make ddd
16. 01:02:893 (241,242,243,244,245,246) - Same, sounds a bit sloppy. Consider filling 01:03:120 - . Ignoring a downbeat can lead to awkward patterns 01:02:893 - from here, i make kkd kdd d k
17. 01:03:802 (247) - This should be a d in my opinion for better flow
18. 01:11:756 (8) - Move to 01:11:529 - for consistency? :^)
19. 01:19:029 (44) - Same. Move to 01:18:802 - for consistency
20. 01:23:347 - 01:24:711 - feels empty. Add a spinner/slider? keep, for rest maybe lellelel. its epic if Im not add somethink..
21. 01:31:756 (28,29,30) - This triplet seems out of place considering the rhythm. Maybe remove it? okay dlt 28
22. 02:00:165 (43) - d to keep flow? okay, in before too :3 *dem, why u tell in this length.. not in before lololol. make me first feel confused XD
23. 02:00:620 (45,46,47) - These 3 sound better as dons imo :^| . 02:01:529 - this 3plet don, and ur mod is kdk is fit ;L_;
24. 02:03:461 (61) - Switch to k? Would give more flow in my opinion ok
25. 02:03:802 (63) - Same as 02:00:165 (43) -
26. 02:05:620 (73) - Similar issue as above ^
27. 02:07:438 (82) - d for consistency in rhythm?
28. 02:11:529 (100) - d for consistency
29. 02:13:574 (108) - Should move to 02:13:347 - and turn into a d. Again, consistency
30. 02:28:120 (174) - Move to 02:27:893 - for same reasons
31. 02:28:915 (178) - Can be a k, vocals are higher
32. 02:31:188 (190) - The opposite: can be a d to contrast
33. 02:32:438 (195,196,197,198,199,200) - Swap these? The vocal goes lower -> higher and to contrast better should be ddk kkk instead of kkk ddk
34. 02:33:461 (202) - I think this sounds better as a d
35. 02:39:029 (227) - Move to 02:38:802 - and turn to d for consistency
36. 02:44:483 (256) - Remove? I don't think it fits the measure
37. 02:45:961 (264) - I think this is unnecessary considering what you follow 02:45:961 - dlt.
38. 02:48:120 (276) - Has clear lower tone than 275. Maybe change to d?
39. 02:53:574 (301) - Move to 02:53:347 - for consistency
40. 02:54:711 (306) - Change to d for consistency
41. 02:56:302 (314,315) - They seem unnecessary for the measure...
42. 03:00:847 (335) - Move to 03:00:620 - . Consistency
43. 03:05:165 - 03:06:529 - Same as 01:23:347 - keep no adding somethink.
44. Same suggestions as first kiai
45. 03:37:211 (14) - Consider replacing for a slider until 03:37:893 - for the held guitar note no.. dem mod
46. 03:44:483 (42) - Same as above ^ n
47. 03:48:574 (58) - This sounds like 57. Change to d? no..
48. 03:51:756 (71) - Same as 03:37:211 (14) - no..
49. 03:59:029 (102) - Same as above no...
50. Same suggestions as first & second kiai
51. 04:52:211 - onward. The fadeout looks really awkward and out of place. Please reconsider this part as adding so many notes make it look and sound really bad. My suggestion is to reduce progressively note density. `L_` okay. EDIT: ah keep, idk where must to dlt. FADE OUT dem.

Dem son............................. work on consistency. AND FIX THAT FADEOUT PLEASE sry... i many follow voice pitch, forget drumdrum lel and little lazy to selfmod.. bcus i m nub? lol.. thx for helpful

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

[Blah]

00:46:983 - d hmmm, no change.. bcus this flow of voice pitch.. but i understand this fit too @_@ but i like to hit kdkkd for flow..
03:04:938 - d this kat finisher ;w; i hear sound pitch guitar and high pitch tss.. dem

T T how to mod the song like this..... ;w; yeah, bcus this style... hard to mod since this instrument just many voice and guitar pitch ;w; so put many xxx xxxxx pattern.. not xx xxxx like this ;w;

use this pattern as main note structure for kiai part ....


00:24:938 - ~ 00:51:302 - , 02:06:756 - ~ 02:33:120 -


00:54:029 - ~ 01:19:507 - , 02:35:847 - ~ 03:02:211 -


01:52:211 - ~ 02:05:847 -


03:34:029 - ~ 04:01:302 -


these note structure can help you a lot ^ lol nice hueheh XD dont know to reply.. but for reference

GL ....