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Last Child - Diary Depresiku [OsuMania|Taiko|Osu|CatchTheBea

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Surono
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Surono
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 03 Maret 2017 at 20:49:38

Artist: Last Child
Title: Diary Depresiku
Tags: bahasa indonesia indonesian pop rock we are everything grow up Nishizumi Volta Grim Rapper Eraser
BPM: 132
Filesize: 8145kb
Play Time: 05:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Eraser's Crippling Mania Depression - 4Key (4,4 stars, 3295 notes)
  2. garbage (3,34 stars, 1354 notes)
  3. Grim Rapper's Broken Home (3,62 stars, 755 notes)
  4. Nishizumi's Bundir Oni (9,98 stars, 1444 notes)
  5. Volta's Depressing Rain (3,78 stars, 754 notes)
Download: Last Child - Diary Depresiku
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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13:37 suronoo: hidupku suram~
13:37 *suronoo joget
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OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
dem approval... good luck sir `L_`

my dog's name is taco
Surono
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Surono
;L_; i doubt about this.. this a man voice.. but its still like Artist "Last Chirderndefengme", ew.. dem i confused with bpm, and offset with -2- -2- +69 -4 -1 `L,,,` ah forget, dem song Indo. g

de dogs name is taco... man... dont kd ing.
Gemu-
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Gemu-
[ Depression Oni]

03:48:234 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 04:04:030 -
The slider must end here 04:51:757 - to follow the drums.

Congratulations on your Beatmap, really love it. The music is very beautiful and I almost cried of happiness, I really congratulate you, good job!

Beautiful Beatmap!!!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Surono
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Surono

game rock wrote:

[ Depression Oni]

03:48:234 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 04:04:030 - sure, yeah but is not have voice pitch.. but this I agree too. thx for look here
The slider must end here 04:51:757 - to follow the drums. ups my mistake XD

Congratulations on your Beatmap, really love it. The music is very beautiful and I almost cried of happiness, I really congratulate you, good job!

Beautiful Beatmap!!!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Terima Kasih Game rock! :lol:
Skeuddy
233 posts
Joined May 2012
Skeuddy
Hi, Surono, from my queue (sry for lateness)
Low BPM played not comfortable, but diff looks good

Depression Oni
  1. 00:41:870 (145,146) - Swap
  2. 02:25:165 (162,163) - ^
  3. 00:56:188 (206) to 00:56:074
  4. 02:40:052 (234) to 02:40:279
  5. 01:41:074 (80,81) - ^
  6. 00:47:438 (170) - d
  7. 00:49:711 (180) - ^
  8. 00:57:211 (210) - ^
  9. 01:17:097 (35) - ^
  10. 02:48:461 (278) - ^
  11. 03:21:983 (73) - ^
  12. 04:09:256 (23,24,26) - ^
  13. 04:40:620 (51,52,53) - ^
  14. 04:41:983 (60) - ^
  15. 01:03:802 (247) - k, like here 01:02:893 (241,244)
  16. 04:37:438 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think, here need something like this
  17. Spin to 04:53:120
  18. 04:59:711 (40) - This and next notes - delete

Byeee
Surono
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Surono

Skeuddy wrote:

Hi, Surono, from my queue (sry for lateness)
Low BPM played not comfortable, but diff looks good

Depression Oni
  1. 00:41:870 (145,146) - Swap
  2. 02:25:165 (162,163) - ^
  3. 00:56:188 (206) to 00:56:074
  4. 02:40:052 (234) to 02:40:279
  5. 01:41:074 (80,81) - ^
  6. 00:47:438 (170) - d
  7. 00:49:711 (180) - ^
  8. 00:57:211 (210) - ^
  9. 01:17:097 (35) - ^
  10. 02:48:461 (278) - ^
  11. 03:21:983 (73) - ^
  12. 04:09:256 (23,24,26) - ^
  13. 04:40:620 (51,52,53) - ^
  14. 04:41:983 (60) - ^
  15. 01:03:802 (247) - k, like here 01:02:893 (241,244)
  16. 04:37:438 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think, here need something like this
  17. Spin to 04:53:120 no, is from start instrumental
  18. 04:59:711 (40) - This and next notes - delete no, drain map not get 5 minute, btw is map marathon ;w;

Byeee lol
really nice mod, all accept. THX!
Skeuddy
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Skeuddy

Surono wrote:

no, drain map not get 5 minute, btw is map marathon ;w;
really nice mod, all accept. THX!
Oh, sure, need 5+ mins. Sry :з
Nishizumi
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Nishizumi
ANJENG GA PAKE BG ANIMU ? XDXDXDXD
Surono
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Surono

Nishizumi wrote:

ANJENG GA PAKE BG ANIMU ? XDXDXDXD
njir ini dah pake BG animu mas bruh XD cuma blablalblalb lol
berharap diterima mz kwkwkw :^)
EDIT: di mod kek :^) ew si skuedi nyuruh dlt note di akhir 5 mnt, ntar malahan ngemapset weka weka

*Anggep aja mod :V thx, cpt tembak star ccd
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Nishizumi
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Nishizumi
anjeng malah dikadas :V
Volta
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Volta
will be rejected because BG is not loli
Surono
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Surono

Flying Pan wrote:

will be rejected because BG is not loli
plox, must used lolis BG//??/?? dem lolizz BG with cute gauys vocalist band B^)
PatZar
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PatZar
AWKKAWKAWKWAKAW anjir ini orng
shionelove
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shionelove
M4M

delete widescreen support
Artist is LAST CHILD not Last Child?because official twitter is this...but idk
[Oni]
00:46:756 (165,166,167,168,169) - suddenly five 1/4 notes
02:14:256 (111,112,113,114,115) - ^
03:40:847 (25,26,27,28,29) - kkkkd?
04:01:302 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - k ddd k ddd k ddd k imo
04:21:529 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97) - kkddkkk imo
hmm
you may have to make full spread if QAT says you must delete notes from 04:52:211 (1) - (fade-out thing)
idk wat to do...
Surono
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Surono

shionelove wrote:

M4M

delete widescreen support forget lel
Artist is LAST CHILD not Last Child?because official twitter is this...but idk keep, in public.. never see with caps lol XD
[Oni]
00:46:756 (165,166,167,168,169) - suddenly five 1/4 notes already fiveplet
02:14:256 (111,112,113,114,115) - ^ ^
03:40:847 (25,26,27,28,29) - kkkkd? keep, kdkkd is fit imo. bcus 26 in slowplayback is feels down pitch
04:01:302 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - k ddd k ddd k ddd k imo about this.. in before is k ddd k kddblabla too.. but i change to follow pitch guitar.. not in don 04:02:211 - like this.. since 04:43:347 - this not ddd too, and 03:32:438 - this why i make ddd? bcus pitch guitar not started different
04:21:529 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97) - kkddkkk imo ok 93 kat, nice
hmm
you may have to make full spread if QAT says you must delete notes from 04:52:211 (1) - (fade-out thing) lel.. drain not get 5min huee XD
idk wat to do... XD
okay, lol.. btw offset right? lol idk... plox someone notice offset `L_`
shionelove
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shionelove

i don't think this timing point is needed,delete this
this song is simple BPM 132.000 imo
Surono
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shionelove wrote:


i don't think this timing point is needed,delete this
this song is simple BPM 132.000 imo
haha XD i just put red line again for nice metronome... in NC mod.. but ok i Delete it `L_`
EDIT: re-add red line, dem siwon realized this for metronome lol XD
plox TNA's... `L-` notiz senpay look on offset.. idk lel
Ameth Rianno
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Ameth Rianno


kwek. (` `)> request dari surrr. bg animu plez. wew hard difficulty

wajahilah saat iniii

[Deppresion Oni]
  1. 00:14:711 (25) - change to kat?
  2. 00:17:893 (40,41,42) - dkd? or is this following the drum
  3. 00:21:983 (63) - same, change to kat
  4. 00:33:802 (112,113) - reverse pattern, the drum's more high at (113)
  5. 00:41:074 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148) - suggest pattern:
  6. 01:16:983 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - wew pattern gaje
  7. 01:56:529 (25) - change to kat

Weks, great map. Maaf kalau gak helpful, good luck (` `)>
Surono
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Surono
FAKKKKK, i klik link comunity.. dem gone my word reply ;w; okay i gib summary

Ameth Rianno wrote:



kwek. (` `)> request dari surrr. bg animu plez. wew hard difficulty

wajahilah saat iniii Demm lirik!1!!! dem lidah jepun, dem celat :^)

[Deppresion Oni]
  1. 00:14:711 (25) - change to kat?
  2. 00:17:893 (40,41,42) - dkd? or is this following the drum
  3. 00:21:983 (63) - same, change to kat
  4. 00:33:802 (112,113) - reverse pattern, the drum's more high at (113) no, this break consistency with before don.. 113 is fit with don.. but fits too in voice pitch.. but till reject.
  5. 00:41:074 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148) - suggest pattern:
  6. 01:16:983 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - wew pattern gaje lololol. okay change to ddd k
  7. 01:56:529 (25) - change to kat already k

Weks, great map. Maaf kalau gak helpful, good luck (` `)>
00:14:711 (25) - is already k, 00:15:165 - and this i change to k for nice flow. 00:18:006 - and this thx.. nice pattern to hit, and i aplied in other too. thx
bla.
Raiden
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Raiden
dem mod med dom dem sir sed mir

dem sir `L_`

[ General]

  1. SV changes look a bit sloppy. I suggest either refining them or removing them completely. The song is really calm and I don't think it asks for SV changes anyway.
[ Depression Oni]

  1. 00:25:620 (82) - Could be a d to differentiate from 83
  2. 00:27:438 (89) - Same ^
  3. 00:28:915 (95) - This is a drum hit. Maybe swap with 94?
  4. 00:29:711 - Add a d for consistency like in 00:27:893 (91) - and 00:26:074 (84) -
  5. 00:30:165 - You might want to add a note here to avoid losing momentum
  6. 00:31:529 - Same ^
  7. 00:34:370 (115) - Drum hit. Change to d?
  8. 00:36:983 (125) - d for consistency?
  9. 00:40:165 (138) - Same ^
  10. 00:41:870 (145,146) - I think you should swap these as 146 has a higher tone and sounds like 143
  11. 00:46:302 (163) - Move to 00:46:074 - and change to d for consistency? Either that or add a note at 00:46:074 -
  12. 00:51:529 - I think it would flow better and have more consistency if you added a d here
  13. 00:54:029 (195) - This is rrather a deep hit, lower tone. Maybe switch to d?
  14. 00:56:074 (206,207) - Swap? I think it helps flow
  15. 00:59:029 - I think switching from uneven to even here sounds a bit awkward... consider filling this spot please
  16. 01:02:893 (241,242,243,244,245,246) - Same, sounds a bit sloppy. Consider filling 01:03:120 - . Ignoring a downbeat can lead to awkward patterns
  17. 01:03:802 (247) - This should be a d in my opinion for better flow
  18. 01:11:756 (8) - Move to 01:11:529 - for consistency?
  19. 01:19:029 (44) - Same. Move to 01:18:802 - for consistency
  20. 01:23:347 - 01:24:711 - feels empty. Add a spinner/slider?
  21. 01:31:756 (28,29,30) - This triplet seems out of place considering the rhythm. Maybe remove it?
  22. 02:00:165 (43) - d to keep flow?
  23. 02:00:620 (45,46,47) - These 3 sound better as dons imo
  24. 02:03:461 (61) - Switch to k? Would give more flow in my opinion
  25. 02:03:802 (63) - Same as 02:00:165 (43) -
  26. 02:05:620 (73) - Similar issue as above ^
  27. 02:07:438 (82) - d for consistency in rhythm?
  28. 02:11:529 (100) - d for consistency
  29. 02:13:574 (108) - Should move to 02:13:347 - and turn into a d. Again, consistency
  30. 02:28:120 (174) - Move to 02:27:893 - for same reasons
  31. 02:28:915 (178) - Can be a k, vocals are higher
  32. 02:31:188 (190) - The opposite: can be a d to contrast
  33. 02:32:438 (195,196,197,198,199,200) - Swap these? The vocal goes lower -> higher and to contrast better should be ddk kkk instead of kkk ddk
  34. 02:33:461 (202) - I think this sounds better as a d
  35. 02:39:029 (227) - Move to 02:38:802 - and turn to d for consistency
  36. 02:44:483 (256) - Remove? I don't think it fits the measure
  37. 02:45:961 (264) - I think this is unnecessary considering what you follow
  38. 02:48:120 (276) - Has clear lower tone than 275. Maybe change to d?
  39. 02:53:574 (301) - Move to 02:53:347 - for consistency
  40. 02:54:711 (306) - Change to d for consistency
  41. 02:56:302 (314,315) - They seem unnecessary for the measure...
  42. 03:00:847 (335) - Move to 03:00:620 - . Consistency
  43. 03:05:165 - 03:06:529 - Same as 01:23:347 -
  44. Same suggestions as first kiai
  45. 03:37:211 (14) - Consider replacing for a slider until 03:37:893 - for the held guitar note
  46. 03:44:483 (42) - Same as above ^
  47. 03:48:574 (58) - This sounds like 57. Change to d?
  48. 03:51:756 (71) - Same as 03:37:211 (14) -
  49. 03:59:029 (102) - Same as above
  50. Same suggestions as first & second kiai
  51. 04:52:211 - onward. The fadeout looks really awkward and out of place. Please reconsider this part as adding so many notes make it look and sound really bad. My suggestion is to reduce progressively note density.

Dem son............................. work on consistency. AND FIX THAT FADEOUT PLEASE
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