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Tatsumi Megumi featured by Sano Hiroaki - Tsubomi (Long Vers

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Pururut
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年2月27日 at 23:34:51

Artist: Tatsumi Megumi featured by Sano Hiroaki
Title: Tsubomi (Long Version)
Source: GuitarFreaksXG3 & DrumManiaXG3
Tags: original soundtrack 2nd season jubeat yf_bmp
BPM: 184
Filesize: 31392kb
Play Time: 05:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Knospe (5.21 stars, 1418 notes)
Download: Tatsumi Megumi featured by Sano Hiroaki - Tsubomi (Long Version)
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两年飞图团,没毛病.

storybroad by yf_bmp

Special thanks Narcissu and gxytcgxytc's help




thanks
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lyrics
春風がふいて ゆれる恋心
あふれる想いを今 伝えたくて

つぼみ (Long Version)
達見 恵 featured by 佐野宏晃
Composition/Arrangement/Guitars/Other Instruments & Programming: 佐野宏晃
Lyrics/Vocals/Chorus: 達見 恵

いつもの仲間たちと
桜を見にいく話で 持ちきり

楽しそうに 笑った
あなたの指には 最近 リングが見つからない

ふと目があった瞬間
視線そらさないから
息がとまる

桜色づくよ 走り出す想い
彼女がいるって 聞いて
あきらめようと 決めていたのに

「いつでも 話をきくよ」なんて言って
やさしさをくれるから
素直に 信じてもいい
今にも 咲きだしそうな
淡いつぼみ

"彼女と 別れそう"だと
噂に聞いたけど
本当か 知りたくて

メールを たくさんしても
やさしさの ウラ側の
リアルな気持ちに
触れられない

「サクラが もうすぐ 満開だね」
隣に座って いつも 話してくる

咲きほこる花に みんなで はしゃいでる
友達のまま いたくなくて
偶然のフリして ついてゆく

舞いちる花びら つかまえられたら
願いが叶うという
桜の花にたくして
あふれる 想いを 今
伝えるから

桜の季節が 今年も おとずれ
髪をなでる 春風に
胸の奥が くすぐったくなる

去年とかわらない 仲間たちの笑顔
他愛のない おしゃべり

あの日の 並木を歩く
2つに重なる影

桜色づくよ 走りだす想い
彼女がいるって 聞いて
あきらめようと 決めていたのに

「いつでも 話をきくよ」なんて言って
やさしさを くれたから
素直に 信じたくて
桜の花にたくして 伝えたの
凛々しく 咲き誇るよ
淡いつぼみ
Narcissu
直線真是反人類 = =
Topic Starter
Pururut

Narcissu wrote:

直線真是反人類 = =
233 还好吧
Zweib
JLGB
Cyc17-
说着说着就掏出了P总
Narcissu
終於做完了……慢的讓人以為是ED

需要摸的話隨時找我 ::>_<::
Topic Starter
Pururut

Narcissu wrote:

終於做完了……慢的讓人以為是ED

需要摸的話隨時找我 ::>_<::
会的会的

你不要准备期考吗,还是学霸躺过. 我已失业
Narcissu
是學渣已經掛,心無雜念……



  • [General]
  1. 建議消音slider …… 額,在其他圖裏面應該很容易找到文件
  2. 加上自定義顏色麼……試試用我的↓↓↓
    SPOILER
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,128,255
    Combo2 : 128,255,255
    Combo3 : 255,255,128
    Combo4 : 128,128,255

    [Hitsound]
  3. 00:55:657 (5,6) - 因為soft-hitnormal 基本打空氣所以這些位置建議加上音效 ↓↓↓ ……直接當hitnormal 也可以
    http://puu.sh/ivAhA/11fb8e8edf.wav
    http://puu.sh/ivAiE/6c6cbda189.wav
  4. 02:11:799 - 02:12:940 (10) - 這些音色和默認的drum-finish 還有 drum-clap 很相似,可以考慮使用這兩個……
  5. 00:27:451 (7) - clap ? 我看00:30:059 (10) - 也有加

    00:41:636 (6) - 02:59:896 (4) - 02:52:070 - 03:05:114 (8) - ^
  6. 00:39:353 - 這裡比00:37:886 (7) - 要適合放finish……
  7. 00:44:244 - 這片安靜的部分也可以切底音為default drum-hitnormal 代替24clap
  8. 00:53:701 (6,7) - 建議加finish 或者clap……
  9. 01:08:375 - 這邊建議把clap換在01:08:538 - 01:08:864 - 01:09:190 - ,開頭finish……也是並沒有足夠的音效可用 LOL
  10. 01:30:059 (9) - finish
  11. 04:48:320 - finish應該在這

    [Knospe]
  12. 00:03:483 - 這個位置有人聲也有鋼琴,所以這邊的節奏建議這樣 ↓↓↓

  13. 00:43:918 (8,9) - 這裡紅線有鼓點所以建議這樣 ↓↓↓

  14. 00:53:701 (6,7) - 前面是1/4……這兩個是重音finish …… 都弄成1/2擺一個DS弧線裏面不太合適,建議前面換連打或者折返,後面放跳
  15. 00:54:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - 相對這邊的人聲沒有鼓點支撐放跳梗有點無力
  16. 01:18:483 (7) - NC應該在這裡
  17. 01:53:049 (5) - NC應該在這裡……所以這個圈就應該從DS 裏面切出去了……建議的排版↓↓↓

  18. 02:07:559 (6) - 這個比前面的響的多所以建議用三連而不是折返
  19. 02:21:337 (2,3) - 這個比較少見……考慮直接疊三上面麼?
  20. 02:26:799 - 02:27:125 - 節奏明顯的地方還是按照音樂來吧……這兩個應該有點擊
  21. 03:23:157 - 這個1/3多出來了,到白線就停了……
  22. 05:06:418 - 結尾這裡兩個圈有感覺一點,第一個轉盤這裡結束→05:06:092 -
Topic Starter
Pururut
Narcissu

Narcissu wrote:

是學渣已經掛,心無雜念……



  • [General]
  1. 建議消音slider …… 額,在其他圖裏面應該很容易找到文件 可以
  2. 加上自定義顏色麼……試試用我的↓↓↓
    SPOILER
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,128,255
    Combo2 : 128,255,255
    Combo3 : 255,255,128
    Combo4 : 128,128,255

    [Hitsound]
  3. 00:55:657 (5,6) - 因為soft-hitnormal 基本打空氣所以這些位置建議加上音效 ↓↓↓ ……直接當hitnormal 也可以 ...没有加,不过我都用了默认音效
    http://puu.sh/ivAhA/11fb8e8edf.wav
    http://puu.sh/ivAiE/6c6cbda189.wav
  4. 02:11:799 - 02:12:940 (10) - 這些音色和默認的drum-finish 還有 drum-clap 很相似,可以考慮使用這兩個…… 用了finish
  5. 00:27:451 (7) - clap ? 我看00:30:059 (10) - 也有加

    00:41:636 (6) - 02:59:896 (4) - 02:52:070 - 03:05:114 (8) - ^ 加了
  6. 00:39:353 - 這裡比00:37:886 (7) - 要適合放finish……
  7. 00:44:244 - 這片安靜的部分也可以切底音為default drum-hitnormal 代替24clap 没看懂 不过尝试了一下..
  8. 00:53:701 (6,7) - 建議加finish 或者clap……
  9. 01:08:375 - 這邊建議把clap換在01:08:538 - 01:08:864 - 01:09:190 - ,開頭finish……也是並沒有足夠的音效可用 LOL 其实我是懒得找音效...
  10. 01:30:059 (9) - finish ok
  11. 04:48:320 - finish應該在這 ok

    [Knospe]
  12. 00:03:483 - 這個位置有人聲也有鋼琴,所以這邊的節奏建議這樣 ↓↓↓ ...还是不改了..

  13. 00:43:918 (8,9) - 這裡紅線有鼓點所以建議這樣 ↓↓↓

  14. 00:53:701 (6,7) - 前面是1/4……這兩個是重音finish …… 都弄成1/2擺一個DS弧線裏面不太合適,建議前面換連打或者折返,後面放跳
  15. 00:54:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - 相對這邊的人聲沒有鼓點支撐放跳梗有點無力 ^
  16. 01:18:483 (7) - NC應該在這裡 fixed
  17. 01:53:049 (5) - NC應該在這裡……所以這個圈就應該從DS 裏面切出去了……建議的排版↓↓↓

  18. 02:07:559 (6) - 這個比前面的響的多所以建議用三連而不是折返 改成两个3连了..
  19. 02:21:337 (2,3) - 這個比較少見……考慮直接疊三上面麼? 很常见吧...
  20. 02:26:799 - 02:27:125 - 節奏明顯的地方還是按照音樂來吧……這兩個應該有點擊
  21. 03:23:157 - 這個1/3多出來了,到白線就停了……
  22. 05:06:418 - 結尾這裡兩個圈有感覺一點,第一個轉盤這裡結束→05:06:092 -
Cherry Blossom
Hentai mapper ;w;
Frey
the most hentai mapper ever !

but I love it (*・∀・)/
yf_bmp
support
Wanna collab storyboard with Narcissu. Wish you can accept. :D
Topic Starter
Pururut

yf_bmp wrote:

support
Wanna collab storyboard with Narcissu. Wish you can accept. :D
sure,thank you for your help :3 干嘛说的这么正式
Zweib
屁总你这换过MP3了?没有的话offset-50 (约224)

00:04:137 (1,2) - 不好看,把(1)旋转12°然后移到56,204?
00:07:397 (3,4) - 不好看,可以把(3)的红点去掉然后(4)移到比(2)高的位置
00:22:234 (6) - NC
00:13:104 (6,1,2) - 6跟1之间不跳而1跟2分开来是为什么
00:15:223 (4) - 可以NC
00:19:300 (3) - 可以NC
00:22:234 (6) - NC
00:24:028 (3) - NC吧
00:25:006 (4) - 这个不NC
00:25:821 (10) - NC吧,你摆的这些图形,如果还是老实按长白线NC是没法看的,后面的NC觉得你可以尝试参考类似规律认真整曲重新加一遍,我就不指了
00:31:365 (7,8,1) - 三连歪了点
00:30:876 (4) - NC
00:28:919 (5) - NC
00:32:180 (4) - NC
00:32:506 (6) - NC
00:49:789 (1) - snap错
00:36:664 (7) - 其实这里有个音

01:13:593 (2) - 前面都是折角滑条,你这里也不应该用弧线的

后面还好了,我也懒了233
04:37:071 (2,3) - 这种用复制对称比较好

串摆的挺漂亮。主要就是NC问题
Vert
路过

00:07:773 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:21:306 - 这不放个东西么
00:28:969 (5,6) - 分别ctrl+g
01:15:273 (4) - 这个放折返不太舒服啊,换个滑条+单点?
01:37:937 (4) - 如果是我的话我会往远了放。。然后后面接个转盘
01:42:991 (4,5) - 前面那么远怎么突然这个这么近。。建议放远点比如包01:42:013 (1) - 的滑条尾
02:08:100 (1,2,3) - 前面00:49:839 (1,2,3) - sv是1.0x这里怎么慢了。。
02:27:991 (2,3,4,5,6) - 真是反人类
02:29:295 (2) - 换成单点+3/2滑条?
02:48:045 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个不包3么

od8 plz
顺便ar也可以高一点比如9.3
Topic Starter
Pururut
Zweib

Zweib wrote:

屁总你这换过MP3了?没有的话offset-50 (约224) 好像换过.现在的offset应该是没问题的

00:04:137 (1,2) - 不好看,把(1)旋转12°然后移到56,204?
00:07:397 (3,4) - 不好看,可以把(3)的红点去掉然后(4)移到比(2)高的位置
00:22:234 (6) - NC
00:13:104 (6,1,2) - 6跟1之间不跳而1跟2分开来是为什么 拉近了
00:15:223 (4) - 可以NC 可以的
00:19:300 (3) - 可以NC 可以的
00:22:234 (6) - NC
00:24:028 (3) - NC吧
00:25:006 (4) - 这个不NC
00:25:821 (10) - NC吧,你摆的这些图形,如果还是老实按长白线NC是没法看的,后面的NC觉得你可以尝试参考类似规律认真整曲重新加一遍,我就不指了 我日 我怕被说乱nc
00:31:365 (7,8,1) - 三连歪了点 jb歪了
00:30:876 (4) - NC ok
00:28:919 (5) - NC ok
00:32:180 (4) - NC ok
00:32:506 (6) - NC ok
00:49:789 (1) - snap错 加了两个note
00:36:664 (7) - 其实这里有个音keep

01:13:593 (2) - 前面都是折角滑条,你这里也不应该用弧线的

后面还好了,我也懒了233
04:37:071 (2,3) - 这种用复制对称比较好

串摆的挺漂亮。主要就是NC问题
感谢猪尾巴.

Euphoria

Euphoria wrote:

路过

00:07:773 (4) - Ctrl+G 我把4拉高了
00:21:306 - 这不放个东西么
00:28:969 (5,6) - 分别ctrl+g 可以
01:15:273 (4) - 这个放折返不太舒服啊,换个滑条+单点?还好吧
01:37:937 (4) - 如果是我的话我会往远了放。。然后后面接个转盘太短了不喜欢放转盘 感觉坑人
01:42:991 (4,5) - 前面那么远怎么突然这个这么近。。建议放远点比如包01:42:013 (1) - 的滑条尾
02:08:100 (1,2,3) - 前面00:49:839 (1,2,3) - sv是1.0x这里怎么慢了。。因为想让滑条短一点233
02:27:991 (2,3,4,5,6) - 真是反人类还好吧...
02:29:295 (2) - 换成单点+3/2滑条?和前面统一吧
02:48:045 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个不包3么

od8 plz 7.8
顺便ar也可以高一点比如9.3
感谢h穴妹
:cry:
Okoratu
cool
Topic Starter
Pururut

Okoratu wrote:

cool
Okorachan /hug
wmtokok
留名佔位 :D
-Nanaka-
hi Lovely Pururutchan :oops:
View lightly、Mods

red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

Knospe

  1. 00:06:795 (1,2,3) - not good flow here.On the opposite slope
  2. 00:07:447 (3,4) - Consistent with patterns,looks better imo
  3. 00:08:752 - 00:09:078 - Missing sample Drum sound here, ur adding00:06:795 (1,2,3,4,1) -
  4. 00:13:072 - 00:13:235 - add note here Hard read to rhythm
  5. 00:12:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - vol50% all points add whistle? fit sound for me
  6. 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use Normar-hitwhistle versus when you use soft-hitwhistle.Plese revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern.
  7. 00:19:513 (2,3) - make a jump plz. I think fit sound, for example...00:19:513 (2) - 152/42 00:19:676 (3) - 382/208
  8. 00:30:110 (5,1) - This is probably readable, but it feels like bad spacing for the sake of bad spacing. Should probably be changed.
  9. 00:33:208 (2) - Ctrl+C to 00:32:719 (2) -
  10. 00:36:795 - Vol-20%? Strange NFinish
  11. 00:36:469 (1,3) - swap NC
  12. 00:37:937 (9) - Soft Finish here
  13. 00:37:937 (9,1) - Ctrl+G rhythm here? also 00:37:937 - 1/1slider、00:38:100 (1) - Remove 00:38:263 - add note
  14. 00:41:197 - Missing finish
  15. 00:43:317 (6) - NC ur adding 00:44:621 -
  16. 00:47:230 - I think soft finish fit
  17. 00:52:040 - add note here,fit drum sound
  18. 00:52:773 (2) - sample normal 00:52:937 - Soft Finish 00:53:426 - normal
  19. 00:54:567 (3,4) - Swap hitsound, I would 00:54:404 (2) - Remove whistle 00:54:241 (1,3,5) - add
  20. 01:08:589 - 01:09:241 (8) - add soft finish
  21. 00:55:056 - 01:30:110 - same as 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - no need Normal Finish, 00:55:056 - S 01:10:708 - N 01:05:491 - N 01:21:143 - S
    I can not know the difference
  22. 01:15:926 - Misshing Finish?
  23. 01:20:409 - add note? fit to piano
  24. 01:24:730 (4) - add Clap
  25. 01:25:545 (1) - add whistle 01:25:871 (5,7,8,9) - sample Normal 01:25:952 (6) - sample Drum?
  26. 01:27:013 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Very bad flow;; plz remake
  27. 01:31:578 - asame as 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - , 01:37:937 (4) - soft finish here00:19:676 (3) -
  28. 01:39:404 - Missing Finish
  29. 01:54:078 - ^
  30. 01:55:056 - ^
  31. 01:58:806 (5,3) - ^
  32. 02:11:034 - sample Nprmal
  33. 02:11:197 - soft finish
  34. 02:11:605 - 02:11:768 - add note
  35. 02:11:850 - soft finish fit imo
  36. 02:26:850 - Soft finish
  37. 02:27:176 (4) - change to 2circle. 02:27:502 - 1/1slider?
  38. 02:27:502 - finish
  39. 02:42:583 - add note here
  40. 02:47:230 (1) - remove Clap add Finish
  41. 02:48:371 (8) - add soft finish
  42. 02:52:937 (3) - same as 00:30:110 (5,1) -
  43. 02:55:871 (5,6) - ^
  44. 03:41:197 (1) - missing whistle
  45. 03:45:110 - ^
  46. 03:56:687 (3,2) - ^
  47. 03:58:969 (1) - ^
  48. 03:59:703 (3,4) - remove whistle, Silent part here
  49. 04:00:273 - add
  50. 04:00:763 - ^
  51. 04:01:007 (4,5) - remove
  52. 04:02:067 (5) - add
  53. 04:05:491 - add
  54. 04:06:795 (1) - ^
  55. 04:12:502 (2) - more distance 269/336?
  56. 04:25:708 (1,2,3) - straight?
  57. 05:06:469 (1,2) - plz Light jump

good luck :)
mod time: 1.5hour
Vert
P总快飞啊,sp早就够了(
Topic Starter
Pururut
nanakaaa

-Nanaka- wrote:

hi Lovely Pururutchan :oops:
View lightly、Mods

red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

Knospe

  1. 00:06:795 (1,2,3) - not good flow here.On the opposite slope hmmm,maybe fine
  2. 00:07:447 (3,4) - Consistent with patterns,looks better imo ok
  3. 00:08:752 - 00:09:078 - Missing sample Drum sound here, ur adding00:06:795 (1,2,3,4,1) - fixed
  4. 00:13:072 - 00:13:235 - add note here Hard read to rhythm 00:13:072 added
  5. 00:12:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - vol50% all points add whistle? fit sound for me ok
  6. 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use Normar-hitwhistle versus when you use soft-hitwhistle.Plese revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern. ok change all normal-hitwhistle to soft
  7. 00:19:513 (2,3) - make a jump plz. I think fit sound, for example...00:19:513 (2) - 152/42 00:19:676 (3) - 382/208 nice
  8. 00:30:110 (5,1) - This is probably readable, but it feels like bad spacing for the sake of bad spacing. Should probably be changed. hmm ok i made some changed
  9. 00:33:208 (2) - Ctrl+C to 00:32:719 (2) - ?
  10. 00:36:795 - Vol-20%? Strange NFinish ok
  11. 00:36:469 (1,3) - swap NC ok
  12. 00:37:937 (9) - Soft Finish here ok
  13. 00:37:937 (9,1) - Ctrl+G rhythm here? also 00:37:937 - 1/1slider、00:38:100 (1) - Remove 00:38:263 - add note hmmm
  14. 00:41:197 - Missing finish added
  15. 00:43:317 (6) - NC ur adding 00:44:621 - added
  16. 00:47:230 - I think soft finish fit added
  17. 00:52:040 - add note here,fit drum sound maybe 00:52:203 ?
  18. 00:52:773 (2) - sample normal 00:52:937 - Soft Finish 00:53:426 - normal ok
  19. 00:54:567 (3,4) - Swap hitsound, I would 00:54:404 (2) - Remove whistle 00:54:241 (1,3,5) - add ok,1,3,5 now
  20. 01:08:589 - 01:09:241 (8) - add soft finish added
  21. 00:55:056 - 01:30:110 - same as 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - no need Normal Finish, 00:55:056 - S 01:10:708 - N 01:05:491 - N 01:21:143 - S
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  22. 01:15:926 - Misshing Finish? yea
  23. 01:20:409 - add note? fit to piano noo i think is fine
  24. 01:24:730 (4) - add Clap added
  25. 01:25:545 (1) - add whistle 01:25:871 (5,7,8,9) - sample Normal 01:25:952 (6) - sample Drum? awesome
  26. 01:27:013 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Very bad flow;; plz remake ok
  27. 01:31:578 - asame as 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - , 01:37:937 (4) - soft finish here00:19:676 (3) - ok
  28. 01:39:404 - Missing Finish added
  29. 01:54:078 - ^ ^
  30. 01:55:056 - ^ ^
  31. 01:58:806 (5,3) - ^ ^
  32. 02:11:034 - sample Nprmal added
  33. 02:11:197 - soft finish added
  34. 02:11:605 - 02:11:768 - add note added
  35. 02:11:850 - soft finish fit imo ok
  36. 02:26:850 - Soft finish ok
  37. 02:27:176 (4) - change to 2circle. 02:27:502 - 1/1slider? ok
  38. 02:27:502 - finish ok
  39. 02:42:583 - add note here ok
  40. 02:47:230 (1) - remove Clap add Finish ok
  41. 02:48:371 (8) - add soft finish ok
  42. 02:52:937 (3) - same as 00:30:110 (5,1) - ok
  43. 02:55:871 (5,6) - ^ ^
  44. 03:41:197 (1) - missing whistle added
  45. 03:45:110 - ^ ^
  46. 03:56:687 (3,2) - ^ ^
  47. 03:58:969 (1) - ^ ^
  48. 03:59:703 (3,4) - remove whistle, Silent part here removed
  49. 04:00:273 - add ok
  50. 04:00:763 - ^ ^
  51. 04:01:007 (4,5) - remove removed
  52. 04:02:067 (5) - add ok
  53. 04:05:491 - add ok
  54. 04:06:795 (1) - ^ ok
  55. 04:12:502 (2) - more distance 269/336? hmm ok
  56. 04:25:708 (1,2,3) - straight? yea for pander to Stack Leninency
  57. 05:06:469 (1,2) - plz Light jump ok


good luck :)
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thank you nanakasan :3
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