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Ramin Djawadi - The Children

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2 апреля 2015 г. at 9:21:16

Artist: Ramin Djawadi
Title: The Children
Source: Game of Thrones
Tags: got ost -bakari-
BPM: 144
Filesize: 6571kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakari's Normal (1,97 stars, 165 notes)
  2. Hard (3,1 stars, 269 notes)
Download: Ramin Djawadi - The Children
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Death is so terribly final, while life is full of possibilities.
riffy
Hi
osu file format v14

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Title:The Children
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Artist:Ramin Djawadi
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Creator:Sieg
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Source:Game of Thrones
Tags:got ost
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Shadren
[Hard]
00:48:294 - Нк? И пересмотри все места на главном белом тике, мне кажется, что именно там нужно ставить Нк. Для меня особая отдача идёт на них.
00:48:919 - поставишь сюда кружок? Просто когда так играешь, всю игру чувствуешь три тыка подряд, и хочется тыкнуть, вот
00:55:794 (1,2) - Не совсем удобное место в плане флоу, я бы предложил вот так: http://puu.sh/gIaz7/072fb81ccf.jpg
01:06:628 (3,4) - могу предложить что-то такое http://puu.sh/gIaMr/a9a8a9f1d0.jpg
01:22:461 - здесь должен быть обязательно круг, в плане трека идеально подойдёт
01:41:836 - и здесь тоже. У тебя по всей карте так три постоянных нажатия происходит, и не хочется ломать такую традицию
01:46:836 - ^
01:51:836 - а вот тут не нужно, как мне кажется (хотя зачем я это тут пишу)
01:59:961 - как вариант можно сделать с каждым кругом увеличенный спейснг
02:01:628 (2) - тут тоже как вариант заменить слайдер на 2 ноты, следуя традиции "тройки"
02:11:420 (2,4) - стак поправь
02:19:961 (6,7) - настоятельно рекомендую заменить этих двоих на 2 слайдера 1/2. Как бы там такой характерный звук идёт
В конце ещё можно спиннер

[Normal]
00:42:878 (5) - Не нравиться в плане флоу, предлагаю такой вариант http://puu.sh/gIbmv/0fe5d07659.jpg
00:59:128 (1) - как вариант можно заменить на слайдер 1/2
01:25:586 - хочу сюда кружок
01:46:211 (2) - заменить слайдер на круг, а вот от сюда 01:46:628 - поставить слайдер 1/2 ?
01:51:211 - ^
02:17:045 - ^
01:55:795 (1) - можно стакнуть с (2), но смысла нет
02:11:836 - и сюда кружок
Спиннер под конец не желаешь?
Topic Starter
Sieg

Shadren wrote:

[Hard]
00:48:294 - Нк? И пересмотри все места на главном белом тике, мне кажется, что именно там нужно ставить Нк. Для меня особая отдача идёт на них.
подумаю насчет нк, подожду еще кто что скажет
00:48:919 - поставишь сюда кружок? Просто когда так играешь, всю игру чувствуешь три тыка подряд, и хочется тыкнуть, вот
тут типо по скрипке да и пауза, хз вобщем, тоже подумаю
00:55:794 (1,2) - Не совсем удобное место в плане флоу, я бы предложил вот так: http://puu.sh/gIaz7/072fb81ccf.jpg
окай
01:06:628 (3,4) - могу предложить что-то такое http://puu.sh/gIaMr/a9a8a9f1d0.jpg
уху
01:22:461 - здесь должен быть обязательно круг, в плане трека идеально подойдёт
01:41:836 - и здесь тоже. У тебя по всей карте так три постоянных нажатия происходит, и не хочется ломать такую традицию
01:46:836 - ^
предпочту оставить как есть
01:51:836 - а вот тут не нужно, как мне кажется (хотя зачем я это тут пишу)
01:59:961 - как вариант можно сделать с каждым кругом увеличенный спейснг
или джампы, ага
02:01:628 (2) - тут тоже как вариант заменить слайдер на 2 ноты, следуя традиции "тройки"
02:11:420 (2,4) - стак поправь
подправил
02:19:961 (6,7) - настоятельно рекомендую заменить этих двоих на 2 слайдера 1/2. Как бы там такой характерный звук идёт
а мне хочется такие пропуски оставлять в ритме, хз даже
В конце ещё можно спиннер
можно но не нужно :3
спасибо
riffy
this will be checked tomorrow morning. if that's too slow - Sieg is free to apply any changes he wants
Topic Starter
Sieg

-Bakari- wrote:

this will be checked tomorrow morning. if that's too slow - Sieg is free to apply any changes he wants
no need in rush
riffy

Shadren wrote:

[Normal]
00:42:878 (5) - Не нравиться в плане флоу, предлагаю такой вариант http://puu.sh/gIbmv/0fe5d07659.jpg не-не, он из общего стился выпадет. а тут вроде норм. Если не понятно, как это работает, отпиши в ин-гейм.
00:59:128 (1) - как вариант можно заменить на слайдер 1/2 я не хочу ставить новые объекты, т.к. тогда рейтинг поднимется и придется искать изи :C извини
01:25:586 - хочу сюда кружок я тут кое-что поменял
01:46:211 (2) - заменить слайдер на круг, а вот от сюда 01:46:628 - поставить слайдер 1/2 ? да
01:51:211 - ^
02:17:045 - ^
01:55:795 (1) - можно стакнуть с (2), но смысла нет смысла нет же
02:11:836 - и сюда кружок не хочу :c
Спиннер под конец не желаешь? up to Sieg
code
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Thanks a lot! ♥
Topic Starter
Sieg
updtd
AlexaBM
вообще, тут изи не помешал бы. в нормале дистанция большая, да и скорость тоже. вот.
kd pls.
riffy
Не надо, мне кажется. Нормал вписывается по правилам, хотя и жестковат, но все же это нормал.

Я мапал его с учетом спреда, так что все должно быть ок. thank you for looking at the diffs, anyway o/
riffy
doublepost, sorry
Mortem
hello.

here we go. the pair of dreams are making a beatmap again~ :3 & dat hitsounds!!! <3
calm down pjecoo and start modding!

Normal:
01:10:378 (4) - I know, it's your style to have one straight slider and one curvy, but what about to make also curvy slider here as 01:09:544 (2) - ?
01:12:878 (5) - Make it straight.
01:42:878 (4,1) - Maybe blanket it better?
02:15:795 (1,4) - Stack?

Hard:
nothing to complain about. it's fine.

Sorry for poor mod.
Hope that at least that helps somehow.
I should really start watching GoT.
Good Luck!!
Topic Starter
Sieg
thanks Pjecoo
Pho
Thanks for reminding me that I actually wanted to watch this series about 8 months ago =w=
Ticket convert!

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
  1. ~
[Bakari's Normal]
  1. 00:35:794 (1,3) - 00:38:294 (1,3) -Switch the NCs at these points, since the 3-notes mark the points where the music is growing in intensity.
  2. 01:03:294 (1) - Tail's a bit off /me runs
  3. 01:28:920 (4) - I suffer from blanket ocd
  4. 01:41:211 - There's a beat missing here, where a circlebeat should be set on (or at least followed by a slider) to make it consistent with 01:45:795 (1,2) - 01:50:795 (1,2) -, which sound very alike.
  5. There are some backsliders which feel unnecessary to me since their reversearrows don't really cover up any beat in the track or following instruments and are just...there. I'll list them up, swapping them with sliders of the same length would fit better at these:
    00:48:294 (1) - 00:52:044 (2) - 01:09:544 (2) - 01:28:295 (3) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:35:378 - I'd really like it if you go with a similar NCing at the beginning like i suggested Bakari, but since it'd screw up your patterns... orz
  2. 00:48:294 (9,1) - NCing at 9 already. Same for:
    00:50:794 (8,1) - 00:58:294 (8,1) - 01:00:794 (7,1) - etc.
  3. 00:57:877 (6,7,8) - Minor: DS is getting smaller here for some reason.
  4. 00:58:711 (1,2) - Why is the distance so low here, it should be 1.5xDS too.
  5. 01:14:545 (3,4,5) - This plays a bit weird, i don't know for what purpose the distance between 3-4 has been made higher.
  6. 01:22:670 (4,5,6,7) - All these beats have the same intensity in the track, so it makes little sense to me why you spaced 01:22:045 (3,4) - so high again. It leaves the beat on 5 underpressured because you just jumped before and move in the nearly the same direction where 01:22:878 (5) - lies.
  7. 01:55:170 (4,5) - Could blanket /runs
  8. 01:59:545 (3,4,5) - Similar issue as 01:14:545 (3,4,5) -
I suppose hitsounds were just copied from hard to normal:

Hitsounds:

  1. Minor issue, but I feel the start could add softwhistles for the louder stringbeats like 00:35:794 - 00:37:044 - 00:38:294 - to have a slightly improved feedback for the player.
  2. 00:53:294 - 00:57:044 - To be honest, the bells sound really dissonant with the track at this point, I think switching soft- and normal-additions is more appropriate (just like you did at 00:43:294 - ).
    I know it's for variation, but this gives wrong feedback to the player imo.
  3. 01:13:295 (1) - I feel soft-additions are more appropriate here as these are low-pitched notes.
That's all from me. Solid mapset, nice song, idk what more to tell about it lol.
Call me back when you got more mods and good luck! /o/
Topic Starter
Sieg

Pho wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:48:294 (9,1) - NCing at 9 already. Same for:
    00:50:794 (8,1) - 00:58:294 (8,1) - 01:00:794 (7,1) - etc.
    don't really want to change comboing because of patterns, at least they are somewhat constant
  2. 00:58:711 (1,2) - Why is the distance so low here, it should be 1.5xDS too.
    symmetry :\ I'll think about this spot tho
  3. 01:22:670 (4,5,6,7) - All these beats have the same intensity in the track, so it makes little sense to me why you spaced 01:22:045 (3,4) - so high again. It leaves the beat on 5 underpressured because you just jumped before and move in the nearly the same direction where 01:22:878 (5) - lies.
    reduced spacing 4-7 but I prefer to keep 3-4 since there is some kind of new stanza in hitsounding\music
  4. 01:55:170 (4,5) - Could blanket /runs
    better to keep slider similar to others
  5. 01:59:545 (3,4,5) - Similar issue as 01:14:545 (3,4,5) -
    same here
everything else changed, thanks Pho
riffy
01:42:878 (4,1) - THey weren't supposed to b blanketed // everything else was applied @Pjecoo

Pho wrote:

Thanks for reminding me that I actually wanted to watch this series about 8 months ago =w=
Ticket convert!

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
  1. ~
[Bakari's Normal]
  1. 00:35:794 (1,3) - 00:38:294 (1,3) -Switch the NCs at these points, since the 3-notes mark the points where the music is growing in intensity. 00:35:794 (1,3) - I'll have a really hard time trying to remove the NC right before spinner. So - no for the first one, the second won't be changed for consistency.
  2. 01:03:294 (1) - Tail's a bit off /me runs k
  3. 01:28:920 (4) - I suffer from blanket ocd wish I could see those blankets :c I just don't see any difference, but k, I TRIED TO
  4. 01:41:211 - There's a beat missing here, where a circlebeat should be set on (or at least followed by a slider) to make it consistent with 01:45:795 (1,2) - 01:50:795 (1,2) -, which sound very alike. done
  5. There are some backsliders which feel unnecessary to me since their reversearrows don't really cover up any beat in the track or following instruments and are just...there. I'll list them up, swapping them with sliders of the same length would fit better at these:
    00:48:294 (1) - 00:52:044 (2) - 01:09:544 (2) - 01:28:295 (3) - I applied most of them, except the last one. It sounds kinda matcjing with the music to me
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Thank you for the mods, guys!
Topic Starter
Sieg
updated :3
fergas
Нормал
  1. а не лучше ли спиннер начать на 00:31:628 - ?
  2. 00:42:044 (3,4,5) - не нравится как паттерн лежит. но нет идей
  3. 00:45:794 (1) - идея http://puu.sh/gPigx/fb7dad9e87.jpg
  4. 01:09:544 (2) - ммм... в комментариях не нуждается. верни ка на место
  5. 02:00:795 (1,2,3) - на этом моменте я улетел на марс
  6. 02:12:045 (2,1,2) - почему захотелось тут увидеть более дуговые движения
  7. 02:19:961 (4,5) - мне не нравится идея вплетать слайдер на красном тике тут. Идея с конец слайдера - реверс на красном - след. слайдер (01:33:295 (1,2,3) - ) хорошая. Но нота - реверс на красном - след. слайдер смотрится тяжеловесно для меня. Ctrl g ритм?ъ
  8. 02:25:795 (1,2) - мне не нравится этот переход. Просто не нравится D:
Хард
  1. такая же идея со спиннером что и на нормале. Что поделать? я чувсвую, что так он органичней вписывается
  2. 00:35:794 (3,4) - какой-то переход стремный. почему ты просто не захотел продолжить флоу против часовой? только из-за симметрии? Посмотрел дальше карту вопрос отпал, но все равно переход можно было изначально лучше сделать
  3. 00:54:336 (4,5) - бланкет тогда уж
  4. 01:07:044 (4) - даже не пытайся поянть мою логику(мне просто не к чему придиратся). Такой слайдер более плавно под карту ложится, но при этом не меняет структру. Точечек можно на парочку меньше и по равнее. Но наличие их большого количества обязательно
  5. 01:09:544 (3) - -7 разворот
  6. 01:57:045 (1) - еще тише. я бы выстаил около 12
  7. вообще много о чем у меня руки чешутся написать, но после сегодняшнего wt не буду.
Зачем я это писал? рангайте!
Topic Starter
Sieg

fergas wrote:

Хард
  1. такая же идея со спиннером что и на нормале. Что поделать? я чувсвую, что так он органичней вписывается
    ну идея была в том, чтоб он появлялся уже после старта лирики там, но думаю пофиг, сделал
  2. 00:35:794 (3,4) - какой-то переход стремный. почему ты просто не захотел продолжить флоу против часовой? только из-за симметрии? Посмотрел дальше карту вопрос отпал, но все равно переход можно было изначально лучше сделать
    у симметрии нет большой возможности для крутых переходов, все деревянное \w/
  3. 00:54:336 (4,5) - бланкет тогда уж
    подправил
  4. 01:07:044 (4) - даже не пытайся поянть мою логику(мне просто не к чему придиратся). Такой слайдер более плавно под карту ложится, но при этом не меняет структру. Точечек можно на парочку меньше и по равнее. Но наличие их большого количества обязательно
    вот кстати, все думал как их лучше сделать в этом плане, заменил их
  5. 01:09:544 (3) - -7 разворот
    окей
  6. 01:57:045 (1) - еще тише. я бы выстаил около 12
    идет
  7. вообще много о чем у меня руки чешутся написать, но после сегодняшнего wt не буду.
    ну опять-же wt, это не мое не желание что-то менять, это скорее мое представление вещей, флоу в частности, this shit is overrated :3
Зачем я это писал? рангайте!
спасибо, все как всегда круто :3
riffy

fergas wrote:

Нормал
  1. а не лучше ли спиннер начать на 00:31:628 - ? исправил
  2. 00:42:044 (3,4,5) - не нравится как паттерн лежит. но нет идей а мне нравится :c
  3. 00:45:794 (1) - идея http://puu.sh/gPigx/fb7dad9e87.jpg я вообще разницы не увидел @.@
  4. 01:09:544 (2) - ммм... в комментариях не нуждается. верни ка на место лол
  5. 02:00:795 (1,2,3) - на этом моменте я улетел на марс \w/
  6. 02:12:045 (2,1,2) - почему захотелось тут увидеть более дуговые движения kurwad
  7. 02:19:961 (4,5) - мне не нравится идея вплетать слайдер на красном тике тут. Идея с конец слайдера - реверс на красном - след. слайдер (01:33:295 (1,2,3) - ) хорошая. Но нота - реверс на красном - след. слайдер смотрится тяжеловесно для меня. Ctrl g ритм?ъ sure :3
  8. 02:25:795 (1,2) - мне не нравится этот переход. Просто не нравится D: пусть пока живет, вряд ли я что-то лучше впишу
Спасибо!

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Topic Starter
Sieg
updtd
Peachtrees
I tried ><

Bakari's Normal

00:36:628 (2) - this one obviously works fine as a straight slider, consider curving this a little though to emphasize that little 'swing' kinda like 00:39:128 (2,3) -

00:41:628 (2,3,4) - very minor: see if you can have the the end of 2, 3 and 4 form a perfect triangle?

00:51:836 (2) - try adding a circle? you've mapped this sounds every time and now you suddenly you don't. I don't know how comfortable you feel about adding a circle though, maybe look at it as some sort of build-up for the following part?

01:14:128 (2,4) - I think these would work great as slightly curved ones, like having a little up-and-down swing with the slider-circle combo

01:53:295 (1,2) - this was the only spot that felt uncomfortable to play. Not really uncomfortable but considering how smooth the rest of this plays, this was the most uncomfortable one. See if moving it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2952695 works for you

02:05:795 (1,2) - hmm if you could try curving 2 a little more to have it perfectly blanket around 1 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2952720 hope that this doesn't bother you to much ><

A lot of things were very minor suggestions/subjective things based of my own opinions, this is a GREAT Diff ;w;

Hard

00:54:544 (5) - consider moving the head of this down a little? suddenly moving up like that feels a liiiitle bit disruptive coming from a curved flow

01:03:086 (6) - you could try moving this up and to the left a little for a drop from 6 to 1. Might work to emphasize the start of the vocals as they feel decently strong

01:15:170 (4,5,6) - any particular reason why the spacing between these is so uneven?

01:15:795 (1,3) - would consider de-ruving the tail of 1 a little if you want the head of 3 to perfectly blanket around it..or go parallel with it..you get the idea ><

01:29:545 (3) - try making this one a bit more symmetric/even? idk it just stood out to me while watching

01:55:170 (4,5) - I'm just going nazi on this ONE blanket because I don't feel like fixing this would require you to break up anything/would cause to much of a hustle

02:02:045 (3,4) - the flow between these two feels (if at all) a bit odd, moving into the direction 3 is facing and then having to jump back to 4. it's a very minor inconvenience so leaving it like that should be absolutely fine. Maybe try playing around with those a little if you feel like it, see if you can achieve an even nicer flow

02:03:295 (1,2,3) - again, any reason why the spacing would be uneven here?

again, GREAT Diff uwu

Welp I tried. You suggested doing M4M, I'll let you decide whether this is worth modding back c:
Topic Starter
Sieg
@Peachtrees thanks
fixed spacings and blankets
Squichu
hey there!
from my queue >w<

don't kd, it's not much and just some suggestions anyway .o.

General
all fine!
grey combo colour is a little hard to see sometimes, you could go with a lighter tone, but it's fine as it is. :3

Bakari's Normal
all optional! -
  1. 00:42:878 (5) - consider moving this up a little? the movement from 3-4-5-1 is so angular, it feels better if you place this at ~ 156|208 and adjust 00:43:294 (1) -
  2. 00:47:044 (3) - works fine as it is, but I think it matches a little better if you end it on the red tick and add another slider afterwards ( 00:47:878 - ). cause of the vocals >w<
  3. 00:51:836 - aah, I know this has to stay below 2 stars but I really miss a circle here. the sound's just too loud to ignore, imo. but ye, to keep it below 2 stars.. still.. aaah! D:
  4. 01:00:169 (4) - I don't really agree with having the reverse on the strongest beat. .o. works better if you remove the first part of the slider and leave 01:00:169 - blank.
  5. 01:12:461 (4,5,1) - movement could be improved a little if you flip 5 and place it like this - http://puu.sh/gWvUZ.jpg
  6. 01:18:295 (1,2,3) - I feel a little uncomfortable with the rhythm here. 2 sounds kinda off, because it follows this sound you ignored with 1 (cause 1 ends there, omg my explanation sucks, but I hope you get what I mean ;-; ...) not really sure how to change that, tho. cause changing this to the same rhythm as all the others is so monotonous.. I guss I'd go with

    but yah. maybe you can think of something better?
Hard
  1. 01:07:878 (6) - hmh, I'd prefer 2 circles over a slider here, cause the beat on the sliderend should have more impact than atm (imo) .o.
  2. 01:22:045 (3,4) - previous (mini-)jumps matched better with the song, imo. this one feels a little exaggerated, cause the beat on 4 is not significantly louder or different than before. maybe you can decrease the distance a little?
  3. 01:23:294 (7) - a short slider here works great with the melody, consider replacing the circle?
  4. 01:40:795 (1) - how about ending this on the previous red tick and adding a shorter slider on the white one? sounds better to me.. I get the idea, but ignoring so many beats.. >-< up to you, ofc!
    same for 01:45:795 (1) - and 01:50:795 (1) -
  5. 01:43:086 - add a circle? I don't see any reason not to put one here, considering it's only a little quiter than 01:42:878 (4) -
yup that's all. great song choice <3
*squee*
Topic Starter
Sieg

Squirrel wrote:

Hard
  1. 01:07:878 (6) - hmh, I'd prefer 2 circles over a slider here, cause the beat on the sliderend should have more impact than atm (imo) .o.
    prefer to keep current way
  2. 01:22:045 (3,4) - previous (mini-)jumps matched better with the song, imo. this one feels a little exaggerated, cause the beat on 4 is not significantly louder or different than before. maybe you can decrease the distance a little?
    sounds legit, changed
  3. 01:23:294 (7) - a short slider here works great with the melody, consider replacing the circle?
    huh, this will be pain to pattern :C
  4. 01:40:795 (1) - how about ending this on the previous red tick and adding a shorter slider on the white one? sounds better to me.. I get the idea, but ignoring so many beats.. >-< up to you, ofc!
    same for 01:45:795 (1) - and 01:50:795 (1) -
    a bit undermapped but follows vocals greatly
  5. 01:43:086 - add a circle? I don't see any reason not to put one here, considering it's only a little quiter than 01:42:878 (4) -
    prefer to keep current way
*squee* <3
riffy

Peachtrees wrote:

I tried ><

Bakari's Normal

00:36:628 (2) - this one obviously works fine as a straight slider, consider curving this a little though to emphasize that little 'swing' kinda like 00:39:128 (2,3) - yeah

00:41:628 (2,3,4) - very minor: see if you can have the the end of 2, 3 and 4 form a perfect triangle? I tried(the triangle was discussed with illiminati and approved by them)

00:51:836 (2) - try adding a circle? you've mapped this sounds every time and now you suddenly you don't. I don't know how comfortable you feel about adding a circle though, maybe look at it as some sort of build-up for the following part? that's my own (probably a little awkward) way to introduce long sliders to players, let me keep it, please (at least for now)

01:14:128 (2,4) - I think these would work great as slightly curved ones, like having a little up-and-down swing with the slider-circle combo I'd rather keep them straight, it makes lsiders feel faster and that's what I want to do with this part

01:53:295 (1,2) - this was the only spot that felt uncomfortable to play. Not really uncomfortable but considering how smooth the rest of this plays, this was the most uncomfortable one. See if moving it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2952695 works for you ahh, yes. that's one of those lder patterns I still love. it might not flow that great, but it's still interesting and playable to me

02:05:795 (1,2) - hmm if you could try curving 2 a little more to have it perfectly blanket around 1 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2952720 hope that this doesn't bother you to much >< done :)

A lot of things were very minor suggestions/subjective things based of my own opinions, this is a GREAT Diff ;w;
Thanks a lot!

Squirrel wrote:

hey there!
from my queue >w<

don't kd, it's not much and just some suggestions anyway .o.

General
all fine!
grey combo colour is a little hard to see sometimes, you could go with a lighter tone, but it's fine as it is. :3

Bakari's Normal
all optional! -
  1. 00:42:878 (5) - consider moving this up a little? the movement from 3-4-5-1 is so angular, it feels better if you place this at ~ 156|208 and adjust 00:43:294 (1) - if we listen to the music, the change s rather rough and unexpected, that's what I tried to reflect (now I don' feel so sure, though)
  2. 00:47:044 (3) - works fine as it is, but I think it matches a little better if you end it on the red tick and add another slider afterwards ( 00:47:878 - ). cause of the vocals >w< I don't remember using any similar sliders, so I prefer to leave it for more consistent rhythm
  3. 00:51:836 - aah, I know this has to stay below 2 stars but I really miss a circle here. the sound's just too loud to ignore, imo. but ye, to keep it below 2 stars.. still.. aaah! D: okay, it lookslike we can do it \w/
  4. 01:00:169 (4) - I don't really agree with having the reverse on the strongest beat. .o. works better if you remove the first part of the slider and leave 01:00:169 - blank. true
  5. 01:12:461 (4,5,1) - movement could be improved a little if you flip 5 and place it like this - http://puu.sh/gWvUZ.jpg we'll have a pattern like this, which may look weird to some beginners
  6. 01:18:295 (1,2,3) - I feel a little uncomfortable with the rhythm here. 2 sounds kinda off, because it follows this sound you ignored with 1 (cause 1 ends there, omg my explanation sucks, but I hope you get what I mean ;-; ...) not really sure how to change that, tho. cause changing this to the same rhythm as all the others is so monotonous.. I guss I'd go with I'll follow your advice, it sounds nice to me

    but yah. maybe you can think of something better?
*squee*
Thanks a lot!

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those mods are really helpful <3
Topic Starter
Sieg
updtd
Pho
Rechecking

[Bakari's Normal]
  1. 01:41:211 - I thought you fixed it before? There's still a beat missing here.
  2. 00:59:128 (2) - 01:15:378 (5) - 02:17:878 (4) - Optional, but setting sliders at these would follow instruments better.
  3. 01:19:961 (4) - Consider to switch this off with 2 circles instead.
  4. 01:28:920 (4) - I found this backslider really awkward last time already, wonder why I forgot about it oO Please consider to make it a usual slider starting at 01:29:128 - instead, this offbeat slider sounds really odd.
Call me back when above mod is applied.
riffy
Applied everything but the sliders from second suggestion. I prefer circles as it looks like they give lower star rating. Thank you for re-checking.

code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: The Children.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43190
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 31836,34545,43295,53295,63295,73295,83295,93295,98295,103295,108295,113295,118295,120795,130795,140795,150795
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:The Children
TitleUnicode:The Children
Artist:Ramin Djawadi
ArtistUnicode:Ramin Djawadi
Creator:Sieg
Version:Bakari's Normal
Source:Game of Thrones
Tags:got ost -bakari-
BeatmapID:664146
BeatmapSetID:291907

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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212,268,47044,2,0,P|196:224|304:60,1,240,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,120,48294,6,0,P|452:156|460:240,1,120,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,49128,2,0,P|272:212|240:192,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,49544,2,0,P|136:208|96:296,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,364,50378,2,0,P|244:340|248:308,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,260,50794,6,0,P|332:264|416:324,2,120,10|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,51836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,52044,2,0,P|120:252|100:176,2,120
296,360,53294,6,0,B|416:352|416:352|504:268,1,240,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,156,54544,2,0,B|272:164|272:164|184:248,1,240,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,340,55794,5,12,0:0:0:0:
64,184,56211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,28,56628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,124,57044,2,0,P|208:168|184:256,2,120,12|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,52,58294,6,0,P|376:56|412:48,2,60,12|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,20,59128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,172,59544,2,0,L|216:296,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,363,60378,2,0,L|357:298,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,236,60794,6,0,P|356:200|436:184,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,48,61628,2,0,P|452:52|416:44,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,20,62044,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,176,62461,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,116,62878,2,0,P|184:88|184:52,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,72,63294,6,0,P|272:124|120:156,2,240,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,52,65378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,180,65794,6,0,L|0:320,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,368,66628,2,0,P|156:336|152:292,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,244,67044,2,0,L|328:228,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,80,67878,2,0,L|300:88,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,120,68294,6,0,P|188:136|112:104,2,120,12|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,164,69544,2,0,P|416:212|412:296,1,120
376,340,70170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,300,70378,2,0,P|280:292|248:288,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,272,70795,6,0,P|152:240|144:152,1,120,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,40,71628,2,0,L|312:32,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,72045,1,10,0:0:0:0:
220,144,72461,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,244,72878,2,0,L|346:312,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,336,73295,6,0,L|260:200,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,248,74128,2,0,L|96:308,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,364,74545,1,10,0:0:0:0:
12,212,74961,2,0,L|24:144,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,76,75378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,32,75795,6,0,P|184:52|248:232,1,240,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,332,77045,2,0,P|416:324|512:164,1,240,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,78295,6,0,P|360:140|368:224,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,104,79128,2,0,P|460:72|436:40,1,60
368,28,79545,2,0,L|296:24,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,8,79961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,156,80378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,252,80795,6,0,P|325:308|313:366,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,356,81628,2,0,L|92:344,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,272,82045,2,0,P|104:260|200:288,2,120,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,83295,6,0,P|120:84|64:20,2,120,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,204,84545,2,0,P|308:188|384:208,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,340,85378,2,0,L|380:336,1,60
320,356,85795,6,0,P|280:368|124:256,1,240,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,124,87045,2,0,L|52:120,2,120,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,172,88295,2,0,P|340:136|340:100,2,60,10|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,316,89128,2,0,P|424:316|456:308,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,240,89545,6,0,L|504:120,2,120,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,212,90795,2,0,L|320:336,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,91628,2,0,L|216:132,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,72,92045,2,0,P|280:60|368:80,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,92878,2,0,P|396:248|372:288,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,292,93295,6,0,L|292:144,1,120,14|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,108,93920,2,0,P|244:88|244:44,2,60
216,180,94545,2,0,P|180:192|88:172,2,120,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,100,95795,5,12,0:0:0:0:
152,178,97045,5,12,0:1:0:0:
264,336,98295,6,0,P|304:320|396:328,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,268,98920,2,0,P|404:243|312:228,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,156,99545,2,0,P|324:136|412:116,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,44,100170,2,0,P|392:24|312:16,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,44,100795,5,10,0:3:0:0:
184,184,101211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,324,101628,2,0,P|278:320|330:328,1,60
364,264,102045,2,0,P|320:240|236:236,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,352,102878,2,0,L|84:344,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,296,103295,6,0,P|68:272|156:264,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,220,103920,2,0,P|236:188|252:108,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,52,104545,2,0,P|162:43|85:69,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,138,105170,2,0,P|73:178|134:232,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,244,105795,5,10,0:3:0:0:
344,172,106211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,116,106628,2,0,P|200:88|220:56,1,60
292,56,107045,2,0,L|432:68,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,196,107878,2,0,P|472:208|432:216,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,108295,6,0,L|376:328,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,356,108920,2,0,P|268:360|192:320,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,256,109545,2,0,L|156:128,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,92,110170,2,0,P|260:88|336:128,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,188,110795,5,10,0:3:0:0:
420,40,111211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,172,111628,2,0,P|504:204|500:248,1,60
424,220,112045,2,0,L|412:360,2,120,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,113086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,131,113295,6,0,P|306:143|258:219,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,272,113920,2,0,P|272:284|188:248,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,184,114545,2,0,P|175:146|248:92,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,115170,2,0,P|340:129|351:219,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,272,115795,5,14,0:3:0:0:
0,32,120795,6,0,P|68:24|220:100,1,240,10|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,121836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,97,122045,2,0,P|393:32|512:32,1,240,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,188,123295,6,0,L|364:160,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,144,123920,2,0,P|288:112|288:72,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,220,124545,2,0,P|315:247|245:308,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,68,125795,6,0,P|368:108|324:8,1,240,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,127045,2,0,P|216:112|380:188,1,240,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,268,128295,6,0,P|508:296|504:336,1,60,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,360,128711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,232,129128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,288,129545,1,12,0:0:0:0:
88,180,129961,2,0,P|76:144|76:108,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,130378,2,0,P|164:68|200:64,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,132,130795,6,0,P|213:176|145:222,2,120,12|8|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,80,132045,2,0,P|392:124|336:320,1,240,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,316,133295,6,0,P|196:272|248:200,1,120,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,76,134128,2,0,P|164:68|128:52,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,84,134545,2,0,P|64:132|96:220,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,135378,2,0,P|236:204|216:160,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,135795,6,0,P|168:264|236:304,2,120,12|8|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,72,137045,1,12,0:0:0:0:
300,204,137461,2,0,L|296:268,1,60
224,304,137878,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,296,138295,6,0,L|372:156,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,66,139128,2,0,P|503:98|511:138,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,188,139545,1,12,0:0:0:0:
356,84,139961,2,0,P|364:50|375:22,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,164,140586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,128,140795,6,0,P|256:112|196:52,1,120,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,212,141628,2,0,P|156:224|112:228,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,296,142045,2,0,P|116:320|204:344,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,260,142878,2,0,P|336:288|344:328,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,340,143295,6,0,P|444:308|468:228,1,120,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,88,144128,2,0,P|408:76|376:44,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,56,144545,2,0,P|296:96|300:184,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,320,145378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,276,145795,6,0,L|84:264,2,120,12|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,124,147045,2,0,P|208:136|232:24,1,240,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,124,148295,6,0,P|336:160|264:224,2,120,12|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,68,149545,2,0,P|500:88|512:128,2,60,12|8|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,76,150170,2,0,P|420:104|435:130,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,4,150795,1,10,0:3:0:0:
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