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AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO [OsuMania]

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Ayachi-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on March-29-15 at 1:01:14 PM

Artist: AKINO from bless4
Title: MIIRO
Source: 艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags: kantai collection -kancolle- opening minatoku west ground full version Fleet Girls Collection KanColle Animation Sequence
BPM: 195
Filesize: 6626kb
Play Time: 04:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 4Key (2.62 stars, 1551 notes)
  2. Normal - 4Key (1.99 stars, 1234 notes)
  3. Poi - 4Key (3.65 stars, 2248 notes)
Download: AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Short Version
Bubbled by Kuo Kyoka
Qualified by Starry-
mp3 from xChippy

PLAN POI BOOOOOOYYYYYS
Taiwan-NAK
冷飯翔炒
MEGAtive
Some Mod for M4M

Normal
00:01:392 (1392|0) - Move to 00:01:340 or delete the note. Kinda felt off there....
03:23:186 - Add two notes here? I hear sounds here clearly.
Hard
00:01:392 (1392|0) - Move to 00:1:340. Same reason as Normal.
00:22:725 - Two notes? I think one is enough here....
00:25:186 - ^
00:33:340 (33340|1) - Move to 00:33:186. I think the sound you follow previously on 00:28:263 is here....
02:02:725 - Add a note here?
02:06:571 (126571|1) - Move to 02:06:725
02:09:648 - Add note here? (Preferrably in 3)
02:10:263 - Add note on 1
02:17:648 - Add one or two notes here. There's a sound here....
02:27:494 - ^
02:34:879 - Add a note here. I still could hear the sound here.
02:48:725 - Delete? I can't hear any sound here....
03:04:417 - Add one or two notes here. There's a sound here
03:29:340 - Add a note here? There's a sound here....
03:43:802 - Add one or two notes here. I stil hear the sounds here....
Insane
00:01:443 (1443|0) - Move to 00:01:340. Same reason as Normal and Hard.
01:31:186 - Add more note here? Sounds same + a cymbal (?)
01:43:340 - Add a note here. I still hear the kick....
Wut, not completed yet.... o.o

Full version, like it.... OwO
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

MEGAtive wrote:

Some Mod for M4M

Normal
00:01:392 (1392|0) - Move to 00:01:340 or delete the note. Kinda felt off there....If you listen with 25% playback, there is clearly a sound
03:23:186 - Add two notes here? I hear sounds here clearly.Nice catch
Hard
00:01:392 (1392|0) - Move to 00:1:340. Same reason as Normal.same as normal
00:22:725 - Two notes? I think one is enough here....same sound as 00:22:263 -
00:25:186 - ^^
00:33:340 (33340|1) - Move to 00:33:186. I think the sound you follow previously on 00:28:263 is here....
02:02:725 - Add a note here?
02:06:571 (126571|1) - Move to 02:06:725
02:09:648 - Add note here? (Preferrably in 3)
02:10:263 - Add note on 1no change
02:17:648 - Add one or two notes here. There's a sound here....
02:27:494 - ^
02:34:879 - Add a note here. I still could hear the sound here.
02:48:725 - Delete? I can't hear any sound here....
03:04:417 - Add one or two notes here. There's a sound here
03:29:340 - Add a note here? There's a sound here....no change
03:43:802 - Add one or two notes here. I stil hear the sounds here....
Insane
00:01:443 (1443|0) - Move to 00:01:340. Same reason as Normal and Hard.no change
01:31:186 - Add more note here? Sounds same + a cymbal (?)no change
01:43:340 - Add a note here. I still hear the kick....
Wut, not completed yet.... o.o

Full version, like it.... OwO
thanks for the mod
juankristal
Hi Sakura ! From you M4M queue :P

General
Try to map more the Insane one. You can add LN's to map some sounds I think just like here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2836057
1186 is the offset?

Insane
00:01:456 - Errm... This note is misalinged I think
00:11:647 (11647|2) - I dont understand this LN and you should add a note for drums here 00:11:807 -
00:33:340 (33340|3) - Delete this one? I dont hear the drums here
00:37:802 - If you are mapping the guitar here I think here is a sound
I still hear some sounds here for the guitar, not sure if that is the sound you are following. If you are following that instrument you should map more notes here.
I think they are 7 notes, then 1 space, and 7 notes again (00:37:033 - 00:37:186 - 00:37:340 - 00:37:494 - 00:37:648 - 00:37:802 - 00:37:956 - and then 00:38:110 - empty, for example and repeat.) (Be careful, I can be deaf )
00:48:879 (48879|0,48879|3,49186|0,49186|1) - This are triples I think, because in 00:51:802 - they are.
00:53:802 - From here to 00:54:263 - cant be empty I think, it doesnt feel good. Maybe adding 2 simples in red and white ticks or maybe make one of them double.
From 00:56:725 - to 01:18:571 - I think it is too empty so maybe you should add more notes in red ticks or try and map more instruments at the same time or map the cymbal
01:00:879 (60879|1,61186|0) - I dont understand this LN's but well, :D
01:30:033 - Missing note I guess
01:40:571 - Missing note
01:42:725 - Missing drum xD

Hard
00:16:648 (16648|3) - Delete this one maybe? No drum
00:28:571 (28571|1,28725|3,28725|1) - Not sure about this pattern, in the insane one you have a different one and it is easier than this one I think.
00:57:186 (57186|1,57494|2) - As the way you are mapping this ones must be deleted. Or you can still add more notes or map more instruments to make this pattern better.
Same goes to most of the red tick notes in the first kiai. They feel like without sense if you dont map them with some consistence. Try to add notes in places like 01:02:417 - 01:03:033 - or 01:03:340 - Probably in all the red ticks xD
01:06:109 (66109|0) - I dont like when you use this LN's, I think you also should follow the drums. Follow it the way you want, but if you are following the drums in all the song, follow that one too.
You are missing some drums in parts like here 01:43:956 - check them if you want.
03:17:032 - Map piano here

Eerrm, this seems like it is really WIP. I can check this again if you map more things xD. I will also mod your other map :3

Will continue with the next ones in some hours, dinner time :D

Good luck Sakura !! ;D
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

juankristal wrote:

Hi Sakura ! From you M4M queue :P

General
Try to map more the Insane one. You can add LN's to map some sounds I think just like here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2836057
1186 is the offset?no

Insane
00:01:456 - Errm... This note is misalinged I think
00:11:647 (11647|2) - I dont understand this LN and you should add a note for drums here 00:11:807 -
00:33:340 (33340|3) - Delete this one? I dont hear the drums herepiano
00:37:802 - If you are mapping the guitar here I think here is a soundI didn't hear it, will try to find out
I still hear some sounds here for the guitar, not sure if that is the sound you are following. If you are following that instrument you should map more notes here.
I think they are 7 notes, then 1 space, and 7 notes again (00:37:033 - 00:37:186 - 00:37:340 - 00:37:494 - 00:37:648 - 00:37:802 - 00:37:956 - and then 00:38:110 - empty, for example and repeat.) (Be careful, I can be deaf )I don't want to put note for the really weak ones because people can not hear it with 100% playback and it feels strange when playing it
00:48:879 (48879|0,48879|3,49186|0,49186|1) - This are triples I think, because in 00:51:802 - they are.
00:53:802 - From here to 00:54:263 - cant be empty I think, it doesnt feel good. Maybe adding 2 simples in red and white ticks or maybe make one of them double.
From 00:56:725 - to 01:18:571 - I think it is too empty so maybe you should add more notes in red ticks or try and map more instruments at the same time or map the cymbal
01:00:879 (60879|1,61186|0) - I dont understand this LN's but well, :D same as 01:00:110 (60110|0,60263|1,60417|2,60725|3) -
01:30:033 - Missing note I guessdifferent from 01:30:110 (90110|1,90186|0) -
01:40:571 - Missing note^
01:42:725 - Missing drum xD

Hard
00:16:648 (16648|3) - Delete this one maybe? No drum
00:28:571 (28571|1,28725|3,28725|1) - Not sure about this pattern, in the insane one you have a different one and it is easier than this one I think.I think it is fine
00:57:186 (57186|1,57494|2) - As the way you are mapping this ones must be deleted. Or you can still add more notes or map more instruments to make this pattern better.I must be drunk lol
Same goes to most of the red tick notes in the first kiai. They feel like without sense if you dont map them with some consistence. Try to add notes in places like 01:02:417 - 01:03:033 - or 01:03:340 - Probably in all the red ticks xDno change for this, I added at 01:02:110 (62110|2,62725|1) - because they are piano which others aren't
01:06:109 (66109|0) - I dont like when you use this LN's, I think you also should follow the drums. Follow it the way you want, but if you are following the drums in all the song, follow that one too.
You are missing some drums in parts like here 01:43:956 - check them if you want.different from the others so I decide not to add
03:17:032 - Map piano hereI want to keep it simple here

Eerrm, this seems like it is really WIP. I can check this again if you map more things xD. I will also mod your other map :3

Will continue with the next ones in some hours, dinner time :D

Good luck Sakura !! ;D
thank you for the mod, not reply=fixed
your mod is really helpful!!!
Sky_Demon
意義不明
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

Sky_Demon wrote:

意義不明
Bad Apple
8-) Ohayo!

Mod from my modding queue! ^w^ (I've also posted it as a M4M request into your queue)
I'll focus mostly on following the drums and on hand-balancing.
As mentioned in the post in your queue, I'll only mod NM and HD, I don't feel experienced enough to mod Poi. :o

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

- Normal -
00:14:725 - i hear a bass-drum (kick-drum) here and here; 00:14:802 - , maybe add two notes like this?

00:14:879 - snare-drum here, I'd add a note on 3 (see image)
00:15:186 - snare here aswell, could add note on 2.
00:33:186 - bass-drum here, add on 3
00:49:033 - i hear a bass drum here, not sure whether to add a note or not (just wanted to point it out x) )
01:14:417 - same here
01:15:340 - and here, but I'd add a note on 3 here
01:36:110 - cymbal here, would add a note on 1
01:41:340 - snare-drum here, add a note on 2
01:43:033 - just a normal kick-drum here, remove one on 3?
01:45:186 - kick-drum, add on 4
01:45:648 - snare-drum, add on 3
01:47:648 - kick-drum again, add on 1?
02:06:571 - regular kick-drum here, remove one
02:06:725 - snare-drum here, add one!
02:10:263 - snare-drum here aswell, could add one on 3
02:25:110 - i think I hear a snare-drum here, you could rearrange this part like this maybe?

03:11:802 - kick-drum here, maybe add one and rearrange the doubles above or below
03:44:571 - kick-drum here, could add on 3
03:45:494 - same, could add on 3
03:51:263 - same as before, I think i hear a snare-drum here. maybe add one :)
04:05:494 - snare-drum here, add on 1?
04:05:648 - and kick-drum here, one on 3?

- Hard -
00:16:879 - move 2 to 3 maybe? Just to mix it up a little :D
01:03:340 - add on 3 to keep the pattern (double-single-double)
01:31:494 - you could add notes for every snare drum during this pattern. (on 2 here)
These would be; (01:32:110 - , 01:32:725 - , 01:33:340 - , 01:33:956 - , 01:34:571 - , 01:35:186 - , 01:35:802 - , 01:36:417 - , 01:37:033 - , 01:37:648 - , 01:38:263 - , 01:38:879 - , 01:39:494 - , 01:40:110 - ) In my opinion, these make the part more interesting to play while still following the song pretty well. :)
01:41:340 - add note on 3, snare-drum here
01:45:648 - add another note on 3, snare again
02:10:263 - you could add a note on 1 or 2 here for the snare-drum starting here.
02:20:417 - add a note on 3? (you've used 3-chords for kick+cymbal before)
03:16:879 - at this point, you could add 3 notes for the little piano-slide in the song, like shown below. (I dont know if it's okay to use 1/6 Divisior for that :/)

03:46:340 - same as in the Normal-Difficulty, I think I hear a snare-drum here, so you could add a note.
03:51:263 - ^ same
04:01:648 - I'd move the note from line 2 to line 4, but that's just my personal taste >w<
04:04:110 -and here, I'd move the one on 2 to line 1 (to avoid the mini-jacks I guess)
04:10:725 - Move the one on 3 to 2 :)

I have to say, I love how this mapset plays x)
Best of luck to get it ranked :)

Greetings!
Apple
RuberusuScarlet
hi ~

mod request from PM

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[Poi]
01:14:879 - 01:15:186 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2843045
01:15:033 - cymbal & strong drum. 01:15:186 - mainsound & weak drum

01:30:033 - add (drum)
01:40:571 - ^ 2 (^)

01:54:263 (114263|0) - end to 01:54:571 - (violin sound change)
01:54:571 - add 2 LN, end to 01:55:186 - (^)

01:57:956 - ^ 3 (piano sound)

02:37:494 (157494|3) - move to 2 ?

02:28:725 (148725|2) - delete
02:29:340 - add 1

02:43:802 - delete one note

03:20:879 - add (piano)

03:34:263 - add ? (hi hat)

[Hard]
00:17:802 - add 2
01:31:186 - ^1 (cymbal)
01:36:110 - ^ (^)

01:54:263 - 01:55:186 - it's the same as 'Poi' mod

02:10:263 - add 1 ? (cymbal)

02:19:340 - one note delete

02:33:802 - add 3 (drum)
02:54:879 - ^ 3 (cymbal)

03:36:417 - add 3 LN ?(end 03:36:725 - )

03:46:033 (226033|3) - delete ? (no drum sound)


[Normal]
01:43:033 (103033|3) - delete

01:54:263 - 01:55:186 - it's the same as 'Poi' mod

02:02:263 (122263|2,122263|0) - ? (not in Hard)

02:04:417 - add 23

03:04:725 - ^ 4 (cymbal)

03:25:648 - ^ two note

03:59:186 - ^2 (drum)

03:59:802 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2843199 ?

good luck >w</
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

- Bad Apple - wrote:

8-) Ohayo!

Mod from my modding queue! ^w^ (I've also posted it as a M4M request into your queue)
I'll focus mostly on following the drums and on hand-balancing.
As mentioned in the post in your queue, I'll only mod NM and HD, I don't feel experienced enough to mod Poi. :o

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

- Normal -
00:14:725 - i hear a bass-drum (kick-drum) here and here; 00:14:802 - , maybe add two notes like this?

00:14:879 - snare-drum here, I'd add a note on 3 (see image)
00:15:186 - snare here aswell, could add note on 2.
00:33:186 - bass-drum here, add on 3
00:49:033 - i hear a bass drum here, not sure whether to add a note or not (just wanted to point it out x) )
01:14:417 - same here
01:15:340 - and here, but I'd add a note on 3 here
01:36:110 - cymbal here, would add a note on 1
01:41:340 - snare-drum here, add a note on 2
01:43:033 - just a normal kick-drum here, remove one on 3?
01:45:186 - kick-drum, add on 4
01:45:648 - snare-drum, add on 3
01:47:648 - kick-drum again, add on 1?
02:06:571 - regular kick-drum here, remove one
02:06:725 - snare-drum here, add one!
02:10:263 - snare-drum here aswell, could add one on 3
02:25:110 - i think I hear a snare-drum here, you could rearrange this part like this maybe?

03:11:802 - kick-drum here, maybe add one and rearrange the doubles above or below
03:44:571 - kick-drum here, could add on 3
03:45:494 - same, could add on 3
03:51:263 - same as before, I think i hear a snare-drum here. maybe add one :)
04:05:494 - snare-drum here, add on 1?
04:05:648 - and kick-drum here, one on 3?

- Hard -
00:16:879 - move 2 to 3 maybe? Just to mix it up a little :D
01:03:340 - add on 3 to keep the pattern (double-single-double)
01:31:494 - you could add notes for every snare drum during this pattern. (on 2 here)
These would be; (01:32:110 - , 01:32:725 - , 01:33:340 - , 01:33:956 - , 01:34:571 - , 01:35:186 - , 01:35:802 - , 01:36:417 - , 01:37:033 - , 01:37:648 - , 01:38:263 - , 01:38:879 - , 01:39:494 - , 01:40:110 - ) In my opinion, these make the part more interesting to play while still following the song pretty well. :)
01:41:340 - add note on 3, snare-drum here
01:45:648 - add another note on 3, snare again
02:10:263 - you could add a note on 1 or 2 here for the snare-drum starting here.
02:20:417 - add a note on 3? (you've used 3-chords for kick+cymbal before)
03:16:879 - at this point, you could add 3 notes for the little piano-slide in the song, like shown below. (I dont know if it's okay to use 1/6 Divisior for that :/)

03:46:340 - same as in the Normal-Difficulty, I think I hear a snare-drum here, so you could add a note.
03:51:263 - ^ same
04:01:648 - I'd move the note from line 2 to line 4, but that's just my personal taste >w<
04:04:110 -and here, I'd move the one on 2 to line 1 (to avoid the mini-jacks I guess)
04:10:725 - Move the one on 3 to 2 :)

I have to say, I love how this mapset plays x)
Best of luck to get it ranked :)

Greetings!
Apple
fixed most, I didn't fix some because I did not want to map the sound to make the map too hard but some of the suggestions for a lower diff was added on the higher diffs.
Thanks for mod

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi ~

mod request from PM

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[Poi]
01:14:879 - 01:15:186 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2843045Decided to keep the same
01:15:033 - cymbal & strong drum. 01:15:186 - mainsound & weak drumthat was main on vocals

01:30:033 - add (drum)
01:40:571 - ^ 2 (^)

01:54:263 (114263|0) - end to 01:54:571 - (violin sound change)
01:54:571 - add 2 LN, end to 01:55:186 - (^)

01:57:956 - ^ 3 (piano sound)

02:37:494 (157494|3) - move to 2 ?no change, cuz you striked it

02:28:725 (148725|2) - delete
02:29:340 - add 1

02:43:802 - delete one note

03:20:879 - add (piano)

03:34:263 - add ? (hi hat)no change, cuz you striked it

[Hard]
00:17:802 - add 2
01:31:186 - ^1 (cymbal)
01:36:110 - ^ (^)

01:54:263 - 01:55:186 - it's the same as 'Poi' mod

02:10:263 - add 1 ? (cymbal)

02:19:340 - one note delete

02:33:802 - add 3 (drum)
02:54:879 - ^ 3 (cymbal)I didn't add for this one because I think it is too weak

03:36:417 - add 3 LN ?(end 03:36:725 - )

03:46:033 (226033|3) - delete ? (no drum sound)


[Normal]
01:43:033 (103033|3) - delete

01:54:263 - 01:55:186 - it's the same as 'Poi' mod

02:02:263 (122263|2,122263|0) - ? (not in Hard)

02:04:417 - add 23

03:04:725 - ^ 4 (cymbal)

03:25:648 - ^ two note

03:59:186 - ^2 (drum)

03:59:802 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2843199 ?
fixed all for normal

good luck >w</

thank you for mod and star >w<
no reply= fixed
schwarzvgrune
hi, from beatsaviour's modding queue.

1 2 3 4

Normal
SPOILER
00:14:725 - there is a beat here, and your previous pattern indicates that you're following the beat, so add one?
00:14:802 - ^
00:15:033 - ^

00:30:110 - a faint beat, try 25% playback
00:33:186 - ohh defiintely a beat here


00:52:725 - a faint low pitched beat, consider addig 1 note to here?
00:53:186 -
00:53:648 -
00:54:110 -

01:06:110 - add a nnote?
01:06:186 - also beat that you have been following before
the beat is the same with 01:08:879 (68879|0,68956|1,69033|2) -

01:28:571 - loud beat why not add one here?
01:28:879 -
01:29:186 -
01:29:494 -


01:54:571 (114571|3) - following the violin? if yes its 2/4 beat too short, it ends at 01:55:033 -

01:55:033 - and then here until 01:55:494 -
should only be 2 LN if you're following the violin

HD

SPOILER
00:01:186 - why not make it varied and different than the other diffs? http://puu.sh/glS1X/1ed8886d55.jpg
XD

00:51:802 (51802|0,51802|1) - use 3 notes? you do that here 00:54:263 (54263|3,54263|2,54263|0) -

01:11:648 (71648|2) - no sound? if you do that here, why not here as well 01:12:263 - 01:12:879 -

01:54:571 (114571|1,114879|3,115186|2,115186|0) - LN is also wrong if you're following the violin, its 6/4 x 2 not 4/4 x 3.

02:48:725 - also a beat here? (or guitar accompaniments, arguable)
02:56:110 - ^
02:57:648 - ^


02:54:879 (174879|3,175033|0) - are you following the beat? or instrument?


mod ends, good luck <3
nice map as always >w<b
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

schwarzvgrune wrote:

hi, from beatsaviour's modding queue.

1 2 3 4

Normal
SPOILER
00:14:725 - there is a beat here, and your previous pattern indicates that you're following the beat, so add one?
00:14:802 - ^
00:15:033 - ^mapping main beat

00:30:110 - a faint beat, try 25% playbacknot mapping cuz normal
00:33:186 - ohh defiintely a beat herepiano


00:52:725 - a faint low pitched beat, consider addig 1 note to here?
00:53:186 -
00:53:648 -
00:54:110 - mapping main beats only cuz normal

01:06:110 - add a nnote?no change
01:06:186 - also beat that you have been following before
the beat is the same with 01:08:879 (68879|0,68956|1,69033|2) - too hard to add those because there is 01:06:263 (66263|0) - coming

01:28:571 - loud beat why not add one here?
01:28:879 -
01:29:186 -
01:29:494 - main beats, or will be too hard for normal


01:54:571 (114571|3) - following the violin? if yes its 2/4 beat too short, it ends at 01:55:033 -

01:55:033 - and then here until 01:55:494 -
should only be 2 LN if you're following the violinok

HD

SPOILER
00:01:186 - why not make it varied and different than the other diffs? http://puu.sh/glS1X/1ed8886d55.jpg
XDI like the current one

00:51:802 (51802|0,51802|1) - use 3 notes? you do that here 00:54:263 (54263|3,54263|2,54263|0) - 00:51:802 (51802|0,51802|1) - there is a loud cymbal for this

01:11:648 (71648|2) - no sound? if you do that here, why not here as well 01:12:263 - 01:12:879 -

01:54:571 (114571|1,114879|3,115186|2,115186|0) - LN is also wrong if you're following the violin, its 6/4 x 2 not 4/4 x 3.

02:48:725 - also a beat here? (or guitar accompaniments, arguable)not mapping these
02:56:110 - ^
02:57:648 - ^


02:54:879 (174879|3,175033|0) - are you following the beat? or instrument?same as 02:53:340 (173340|3,173494|1) -


mod ends, good luck <3
nice map as always >w<b
Thank you for mod!

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

冷飯翔炒
IRC with NAK
SPOILER
2015-02-28 17:20 Taiwan-NAK: 01:28:879 - 這裡幹嘛不抓了 紅線有鼓
2015-02-28 17:21 [ S a k u r a ]: 那我insane就跟這一樣了
2015-02-28 17:21 Taiwan-NAK: ..
2015-02-28 17:21 Taiwan-NAK: 你這個音會捨得沒道理的
2015-02-28 17:22 Taiwan-NAK: 這是你In要去改的部分
2015-02-28 17:22 Taiwan-NAK: 前面你取的鼓不要在這裡斷 會怪
2015-02-28 17:22 [ S a k u r a ]: 加了
2015-02-28 17:23 Taiwan-NAK: 03:44:571 -
2015-02-28 17:23 Taiwan-NAK: 這邊我也建議加
2015-02-28 17:23 Taiwan-NAK: 如果你為了人聲的感覺而捨這個音 這裡還說得過 可以
2015-02-28 17:24 [ S a k u r a ]: 加了
2015-02-28 17:24 Taiwan-NAK: 03:50:879 -
2015-02-28 17:24 Taiwan-NAK: 這裡刪了LN 換成drum吧 尾段了不要怕 刺激點
2015-02-28 17:25 Taiwan-NAK: 03:54:417 -
2015-02-28 17:25 Taiwan-NAK: 前面你加了 那這邊也加上
2015-02-28 17:25 Taiwan-NAK: 04:00:879 - 這邊的
2015-02-28 17:25 Taiwan-NAK: 04:01:033 - add在4
2015-02-28 17:25 Taiwan-NAK: 或者
2015-02-28 17:25 Taiwan-NAK: 04:00:879 (240879|1) -
2015-02-28 17:25 Taiwan-NAK: 這顆換成LN 1/2的LN
2015-02-28 17:26 [ S a k u r a ]: 換LN
2015-02-28 17:26 Taiwan-NAK: 恩
2015-02-28 17:26 Taiwan-NAK: 04:01:648 (241648|3) - 移到2
2015-02-28 17:26 Taiwan-NAK: 這邊開始的鼓音你可以用排列來做出節奏感
2015-02-28 17:26 [ S a k u r a ]: jack?
2015-02-28 17:26 Taiwan-NAK: 小jack
2015-02-28 17:26 Taiwan-NAK: 不難
2015-02-28 17:26 Taiwan-NAK: hard來說很適合
2015-02-28 17:27 [ S a k u r a ]: cl3
2015-02-28 17:27 [ S a k u r a ]: ok
2015-02-28 17:27 Taiwan-NAK: 04:04:110 (244110|3) - 移到4
2015-02-28 17:27 Taiwan-NAK: *移到2
2015-02-28 17:27 [ S a k u r a ]: `ok
2015-02-28 17:28 Taiwan-NAK: 04:05:110 -
2015-02-28 17:28 Taiwan-NAK: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2835472
2015-02-28 17:28 Taiwan-NAK: 這邊我會這樣放
2015-02-28 17:28 Taiwan-NAK: 04:10:263 -
2015-02-28 17:28 Taiwan-NAK: LN刪了
2015-02-28 17:28 Taiwan-NAK: 04:10:417 - Add
2015-02-28 17:29 Taiwan-NAK: 04:10:571 - 這邊的雙鍵和04:10:725 - 一起換成3顆
2015-02-28 17:29 [ S a k u r a ]: 好了
2015-02-28 17:30 Taiwan-NAK: 00:03:802 (3802|1) - 移到1
2015-02-28 17:30 Taiwan-NAK: 然後加一個在3
2015-02-28 17:30 Taiwan-NAK: 不對 加不加都可以
2015-02-28 17:30 Taiwan-NAK: 那個音不清楚
2015-02-28 17:30 [ S a k u r a ]: 沒加
2015-02-28 17:30 Taiwan-NAK: 你可以移到1就好 不加
2015-02-28 17:30 Taiwan-NAK: 00:16:417 -
2015-02-28 17:30 Taiwan-NAK: 這邊和剛剛說的尾段一樣
2015-02-28 17:31 Taiwan-NAK: 刪LN 換三鍵
2015-02-28 17:31 [ S a k u r a ]: OKㄌ
2015-02-28 17:31 [ S a k u r a ]: 一開始
2015-02-28 17:31 [ S a k u r a ]: 移到1不會太難嗎
2015-02-28 17:31 Taiwan-NAK: 不會
2015-02-28 17:32 Taiwan-NAK: 能打hard只有讀譜的不夠問題
2015-02-28 17:32 Taiwan-NAK: 這類型的小jack在NM都會出現
2015-02-28 17:32 Taiwan-NAK: hard出現也是合理
2015-02-28 17:32 [ S a k u r a ]: 我沒打中過
2015-02-28 17:32 Taiwan-NAK: 00:25:956 -
2015-02-28 17:32 Taiwan-NAK: 這邊你會放好的SV的話可以放
2015-02-28 17:32 Taiwan-NAK: 不會的話 想放可以找pew問 或者參考其他SV
2015-02-28 17:33 Taiwan-NAK: 00:27:494 (27494|2) - 移到4 鼓聲在右邊
2015-02-28 17:33 [ S a k u r a ]: 我試試
2015-02-28 17:33 Taiwan-NAK: 00:28:725 (28725|2,28725|0) - 向右一格
2015-02-28 17:34 Taiwan-NAK: 00:30:879 (30879|3) - 這顆你跟的什麼音
2015-02-28 17:34 Taiwan-NAK: 這段跟鼓音的話這顆可以刪
2015-02-28 17:34 Taiwan-NAK: 00:36:648 (36648|1,36725|2) - Ctrl+J
2015-02-28 17:35 Taiwan-NAK: 00:36:571 - 這邊我會建議你轉向
2015-02-28 17:35 Taiwan-NAK: 右往左比較順手
2015-02-28 17:36 [ S a k u r a ]: 我相反
2015-02-28 17:37 [ S a k u r a ]: 我更新你看看SV
2015-02-28 17:37 Taiwan-NAK: 00:46:648 - 00:46:802 -
2015-02-28 17:37 [ S a k u r a ]: 其他修了
2015-02-28 17:37 Taiwan-NAK: 這個其實沒有piano在這
2015-02-28 17:37 Taiwan-NAK: 好
2015-02-28 17:38 Taiwan-NAK: 很多雖然翔 但是不少SV很神
2015-02-28 17:38 [ S a k u r a ]: 00:25:956 -
2015-02-28 17:38 [ S a k u r a ]: SV
2015-02-28 17:38 Taiwan-NAK: 不錯
2015-02-28 17:38 Taiwan-NAK: 但是我個人會多放點停頓感
2015-02-28 17:39 Taiwan-NAK: 高倍率可以做出停頓感 但是很麻煩 你要多調整才能調到剛好能按到
2015-02-28 17:40 [ S a k u r a ]: 改了移下
2015-02-28 17:41 Taiwan-NAK: 你參考這個看看
2015-02-28 17:41 Taiwan-NAK: 我喜歡這個
2015-02-28 17:41 Taiwan-NAK: QQ潔凃
2015-02-28 17:41 Taiwan-NAK: 截圖
2015-02-28 17:42 Taiwan-NAK: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2835514
2015-02-28 17:44 Taiwan-NAK: 這個好讚
2015-02-28 17:44 Taiwan-NAK: 射出來了
2015-02-28 17:44 Taiwan-NAK: 1.5 0.5這種1/2相間或1/3相間得很好用
2015-02-28 17:44 Taiwan-NAK: 很神
2015-02-28 17:45 [ S a k u r a ]: 我再看了
2015-02-28 17:46 [ S a k u r a ]: 有點可怕
2015-02-28 17:46 Taiwan-NAK: 你打一次
2015-02-28 17:46 Taiwan-NAK: 很剛好的Timing
2015-02-28 17:47 Taiwan-NAK: 沒打過太多可能會掉前面幾顆 第二次打一定射出來
2015-02-28 17:47 [ S a k u r a ]: 00:27:494 (27494|1,27494|2) - miss
2015-02-28 17:47 Taiwan-NAK: 03:55:186 - 03:55:340 -
2015-02-28 17:48 Taiwan-NAK: 00:27:494 (27494|2) - 你把這個移到4看看 說不定好打
2015-02-28 17:50 [ S a k u r a ]: 03:55:186 - ?
2015-02-28 17:51 Taiwan-NAK: 兩個drum
2015-02-28 17:51 Taiwan-NAK: 你漏了
2015-02-28 17:51 Taiwan-NAK: 或者你是沒抓
2015-02-28 17:52 Taiwan-NAK: 建議就這些
2015-02-28 17:52 Taiwan-NAK: 目前沒了
2015-02-28 17:52 [ S a k u r a ]: 好吧
2015-02-28 17:52 [ S a k u r a ]: 謝謝
2015-02-28 17:52 Taiwan-NAK: np
2015-02-28 17:52 Taiwan-NAK: 你們的hd都好人性
2015-02-28 17:52 Taiwan-NAK: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/613533 ETIA. - Nippon Shiki Kata Kaku -OukaRanman-]
2015-02-28 17:52 Taiwan-NAK: 你看看我
2015-02-28 17:53 Taiwan-NAK: 3.34star
2015-02-28 17:55 [ S a k u r a ]: 你判定太ㄏ了
2015-02-28 17:55 Taiwan-NAK: 閉嘴
2015-02-28 17:55 Taiwan-NAK: hhhh
2015-02-28 17:56 Taiwan-NAK: lv15 od8.5我自己都打不到
2015-02-28 17:58 Taiwan-NAK: ㄏ了好難
2015-02-28 17:58 [ S a k u r a ]: 嫩
2015-02-28 17:58 [ S a k u r a ]: 我來
Verniy_Chan
Hi Sakura-san >.<)/
Mod for M4M

General : ( )
Mapset : ( ? ) be careful for you star diff almost 2 star :3
Metadata : ( ) seem ok
Timing : ( )
Audio : ( )
Background : ( ) nice BG ^^b it will be nice if you add Hibiki/verniy that BG :v

4K = |1|2|3|4|


Normal
00:44:110 add note or LN, stream sound?
02:58:725 (178725|1) move to 1
03:02:725 (182725|3) move to 3
03:07:033 (187033|2,187186|0) it will be nice if you Ctrl + G (optional)
03:11:802 add note, consistency like 03:09:340
03:13:956 (193956|0,194110|2,194263|0,194417|2) remove, this sound still low pitch
03:50:263 (230263|1) - remove for consistency?
04:10:571 (250571|2,250725|2) move to 2 for balance hand
Hard
Uncheck widescreen support
00:11:186 (11186|1) move to 1 or 3?
00:35:340 (35340|1) move to 4 make it stair
01:44:879 (104879|0) move to 2
01:47:340 (107340|1) move to 1
01:59:110 add note?
02:03:494 add note for kick sound
02:03:802 ^
02:04:110 ^
02:04:725 ^
03:31:802 add note another sound here?
03:32:417 add note sound like 03:32:110
04:04:110 (244110|1) move to 1 or 4
04:05:186 (245186|1,245340|0) Ctrl + G
Poi
lol~ dat diff name :v
Uncheck widescreen support
00:21:648 (21648|0) move to 00:21:494
01:13:340 (73340|2) move to 1 or 4
01:17:186 (77186|0) move to 3, but no sound here -_-
01:29:802 (89802|0,89879|1,89956|2) Ctrl + G
01:33:033 (93033|2) move to 4
01:40:417 - 01:40:648 add note/LN stream sou d here
01:59:186 add note still bass sound here
02:15:417 add note sound still here
02:28:879 add more note here?
Nice song, because it's my favorite song/anime/game :3
Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ
[Alice-Liddell]
M4M Queue~
column(cl) 1 2 3 4

suggestion
modding
[Normal]
1.99 wow

00:01:392 (1392|0) - A little difficult. remove?
00:07:802 - Add note to cl3 (same this snare - 00:08:417)
00:33:186 - Add dram note cl3. (same 00:28:263 (this dram pattern 00:27:186 ~ 00:28:263)
00:37:186 (37186|1) - remove? (small sound)
01:03:802 (63802|2) - remove
01:03:956 - Add note cl3
01:05:956 - plz this pattern (02:19:802)
02:17:340 - wrong pattern. plz (01:03:494 ~ 01:03:956) or Keep pattern and change (01:03:494 ~ 01:03:956)
:arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877596
02:27:186 - ^
02:25:033 (145033|2) - remove?
02:29:956 (149956|1) - remove (same 01:16:110)
03:11:802 - add note (this pattern 03:09:033 ~ 03:09:494)
03:25:648 (205648|1,205648|2) - Add whistle?
03:43:494 - wrong pattern. (01:03:494 ~ 01:03:956)
03:51:033 - this pattern (02:24:725 or 01:11:033)
03:53:340 - .
03:55:802 - difficult plz 02:29:648

[Hard]
00:45:956 - 1/3 plz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877646
00:46:417 (46417|1,46494|2) - 1/3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877649
00:49:648 (49648|1,49956|1,50263|1) - move cl3
00:50:571 (50571|3,50879|3) - move cl3 (same bass sound.)
00:54:263 (54263|2) - remove?
00:57:033 - Add note cl2?
01:02:263 (62263|0) - remove? (same 01:02:879)
01:30:571 (90571|0) - remove??
02:29:956 (149956|0) - remove (same 02:27:494)
02:54:263 - Add note cl2?
04:09:648 (249648|3) - remove, no snare
04:09:802 - Add note cl4
04:09:956 (249956|0) - remove, no snare

[Poi]
00:02:263 (2263|1) - remove, no sound (check other Diff. This Diff only...)
00:21:648 (21648|0) - wrong timing. plz 00:21:494 (same 00:18:879)
00:45:956 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877698
00:55:417 (55417|3) - remove??
01:00:263 - Add note cl3?
01:17:571 (77571|1) - remove? no sound
01:30:033 - Add note, dram sound
01:31:186 - Add note cl3 cymbal sound (check Hard Diff. 2 notes)
01:40:571 - Add note cl1
01:40:648 (100648|0) - move to cl2
01:55:186 - Add note cl1
01:57:340 - Add note cl2. piano sound
01:59:417 (119417|1) - remove. wrong start
02:02:417 - Add note cl3
02:03:648 - Add note
02:03:956 - ^
02:07:802 - Add note cl3
02:07:956 - ^
02:09:263 (129263|3) - remove. no sound (same Hard Diff)
02:09:494 - Add one note?
02:09:956 - ^?
02:10:186 - Add note. dram sound
02:10:263 - Add two note? or one note
02:14:110 - Add note cl4
02:17:956 (137956|1) - remove? (same 01:04:110)
02:18:110 (138110|3) - remove
02:18:110 (138110|2) - remove clap
02:18:725 (138725|2) - remove? (same 01:04:879)
02:19:648 (139648|1) - remove?
02:27:802 (147802|1,147956|3) - remove? same 02:18:110
02:27:956 (147956|2) - remove clap
02:28:725 - remove one note (miss note)
02:28:879 - Add one note (^)
02:29:033 - remove two notes
02:31:417 (151417|1) - remove??
02:31:648 - Add note?
02:47:956 (167956|0) - move to cl2
02:52:417 - Add LN
02:52:571 - ^
02:52:417 (172417|3,172571|0) - remove
03:02:263 ~ 03:02:879 - Add LN and remove
03:08:725 - this piano is 1/3. not 1/6 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877767
03:12:802 - Add note cl2
03:25:648 (205648|0,205956|3,206263|0) - Add whistle
03:30:879 - Add note
03:30:879 ~ 03:31:802 - 1/3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877779
03:34:263 - Add note?
04:09:648 - remove. no snare
04:10:110 - ^

nice song :)
good luck

EDIT: Sorry Verniy_Chan, Sakura, I was too late. lol
shionelove
Don't give kudosu for not mod plz
depend on wiki mod=at least several things
Only one thing is not enough
Topic Starter
Ayachi-
shionelove

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3935982
Sorry
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

shionelove wrote:

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3935982
Sorry
No worries :)

[Alice-Liddell] wrote:

M4M Queue~
column(cl) 1 2 3 4

suggestion
modding
[Normal]
1.99 wow

00:01:392 (1392|0) - A little difficult. remove?
00:07:802 - Add note to cl3 (same this snare - 00:08:417)
00:33:186 - Add dram note cl3. (same 00:28:263 (this dram pattern 00:27:186 ~ 00:28:263)
00:37:186 (37186|1) - remove? (small sound)
01:03:802 (63802|2) - remove
01:03:956 - Add note cl3
01:05:956 - plz this pattern (02:19:802)
02:17:340 - wrong pattern. plz (01:03:494 ~ 01:03:956) or Keep pattern and change (01:03:494 ~ 01:03:956)
:arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877596
02:27:186 - ^
02:25:033 (145033|2) - remove?
02:29:956 (149956|1) - remove (same 01:16:110)
03:11:802 - add note (this pattern 03:09:033 ~ 03:09:494)
03:25:648 (205648|1,205648|2) - Add whistle?
03:43:494 - wrong pattern. (01:03:494 ~ 01:03:956)
03:51:033 - this pattern (02:24:725 or 01:11:033)
03:53:340 - .
03:55:802 - difficult plz 02:29:648

[Hard]
00:45:956 - 1/3 plz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877646 It is 1/4 here
00:46:417 (46417|1,46494|2) - 1/3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877649^
00:49:648 (49648|1,49956|1,50263|1) - move cl3keep
00:50:571 (50571|3,50879|3) - move cl3 (same bass sound.)I don't want too much jacks
00:54:263 (54263|2) - remove?cymbal
00:57:033 - Add note cl2?different from 00:54:263 (54263|2) -
01:02:263 (62263|0) - remove? (same 01:02:879)
01:30:571 (90571|0) - remove??
02:29:956 (149956|0) - remove (same 02:27:494)
02:54:263 - Add note cl2?not mapping that sound
04:09:648 (249648|3) - remove, no snarekeep
04:09:802 - Add note cl4
04:09:956 (249956|0) - remove, no snare

[Poi]
00:02:263 (2263|1) - remove, no sound (check other Diff. This Diff only...)piano
00:21:648 (21648|0) - wrong timing. plz 00:21:494 (same 00:18:879)no..
00:45:956 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/28776981/4
00:55:417 (55417|3) - remove??
01:00:263 - Add note cl3?
01:17:571 (77571|1) - remove? no sound
01:30:033 - Add note, dram soundkeep
01:31:186 - Add note cl3 cymbal sound (check Hard Diff. 2 notes)
01:40:571 - Add note cl1keep
01:40:648 (100648|0) - move to cl2keep
01:55:186 - Add note cl1
01:57:340 - Add note cl2. piano soundkeep
01:59:417 (119417|1) - remove. wrong startstarts here
02:02:417 - Add note cl3
02:03:648 - Add note
02:03:956 - ^
02:07:802 - Add note cl3
02:07:956 - ^
02:09:263 (129263|3) - remove. no sound (same Hard Diff)
02:09:494 - Add one note?
02:09:956 - ^?
02:10:186 - Add note. dram sound
02:10:263 - Add two note? or one note
02:14:110 - Add note cl4
02:17:956 (137956|1) - remove? (same 01:04:110)
02:18:110 (138110|3) - remove
02:18:110 (138110|2) - remove clap
02:18:725 (138725|2) - remove? (same 01:04:879)
02:19:648 (139648|1) - remove?
02:27:802 (147802|1,147956|3) - remove? same 02:18:110
02:27:956 (147956|2) - remove clap
02:28:725 - remove one note (miss note)
02:28:879 - Add one note (^)
02:29:033 - remove two notes
02:31:417 (151417|1) - remove??
02:31:648 - Add note?
02:47:956 (167956|0) - move to cl2
02:52:417 - Add LN
02:52:571 - ^
02:52:417 (172417|3,172571|0) - remove
03:02:263 ~ 03:02:879 - Add LN and remove
03:08:725 - this piano is 1/3. not 1/6 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877767
03:12:802 - Add note cl2
03:25:648 (205648|0,205956|3,206263|0) - Add whistle
03:30:879 - Add note
03:30:879 ~ 03:31:802 - 1/3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2877779
03:34:263 - Add note?
04:09:648 - remove. no snare
04:10:110 - ^

nice song :)
good luck

EDIT: Sorry Verniy_Chan, Sakura, I was too late. lol
Fixed some of those, thanks for mod!

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Sakura-san >.<)/
Mod for M4M

General : ( )
Mapset : ( ? ) be careful for you star diff almost 2 star :3
Metadata : ( ) seem ok
Timing : ( )
Audio : ( )
Background : ( ) nice BG ^^b it will be nice if you add Hibiki/verniy that BG :v
I will do that when I get yamato

4K = |1|2|3|4|


Normal
00:44:110 add note or LN, stream sound?Guitar sound, decided not to add
02:58:725 (178725|1) move to 1
03:02:725 (182725|3) move to 3no change, same as 03:02:417 (182417|3) -
03:07:033 (187033|2,187186|0) it will be nice if you Ctrl + G (optional)
03:11:802 add note, consistency like 03:09:340
03:13:956 (193956|0,194110|2,194263|0,194417|2) remove, this sound still low pitchnot low pitch, drums
03:50:263 (230263|1) - remove for consistency?
04:10:571 (250571|2,250725|2) move to 2 for balance hand
Hard
Uncheck widescreen support
00:11:186 (11186|1) move to 1 or 3?keep
00:35:340 (35340|1) move to 4 make it stair
01:44:879 (104879|0) move to 2same as 01:44:571 (104571|0) -
01:47:340 (107340|1) move to 1^
01:59:110 add note?
02:03:494 add note for kick soundkeep
02:03:802 ^keep
02:04:110 ^keep
02:04:725 ^keep
03:31:802 add note another sound here?keep
03:32:417 add note sound like 03:32:110 keep
04:04:110 (244110|1) move to 1 or 4
04:05:186 (245186|1,245340|0) Ctrl + Gkeep
Poi
lol~ dat diff name :v
Uncheck widescreen support
00:21:648 (21648|0) move to 00:21:494 no change because sound starts 00:21:648 - for piano
01:13:340 (73340|2) move to 1 or 4
01:17:186 (77186|0) move to 3, but no sound here -_-piano
01:29:802 (89802|0,89879|1,89956|2) Ctrl + Gkeep
01:33:033 (93033|2) move to 4
01:40:417 - 01:40:648 add note/LN stream sou d here
01:59:186 add note still bass sound herekeep
02:15:417 add note sound still herekeep
02:28:879 add more note here?vocal here
Nice song, because it's my favorite song/anime/game :3
Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ
Thank you for the mod! :3
Kayano
Offset -7
and I think HPOD6.5 is quite low for your Hard (even Normal has HPOD7), increase to 8 plz

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Ayachi-
fixed
Gravey-
[BN Check/Bubble Check]

Osu!mania Ranking Criteria wrote:

Overall Difficulty should be:
9-10 when using mainly notes and just a few amount of holds
7-8 when using a mix a balanced notes and holds
5-6 when using mostly holds
Normal = OD 8 (Has balance SNs and LNs so as what AiMOD says and the criteria it's necessary to be "8")
|1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
00:15:179 (15179|1,15179|2) - Move to |1| - |4| since they have the same sound with 00:14:872 (14872|3,14872|0) -

01:18:256 (78256|3) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency

01:28:718 (88718|3,88718|2) - Move to |1| - |3| because rhythm changed and start here (Alternating pitch)

01:41:333 Add note to |2| for pattern and external impact sound of drumbeat and snare

01:45:641 Make this 2 noted as it have snare sound. For pattern consistency and notice your pattern around this part (2 noted parts).

01:45:641 Make this 2 noted for drumbeat and snare. Notice 01:44:410 (104410|3,104410|1,105026|1,105026|0) - and the other 2 noted parts which they have the same beat/rhythm/instruments and the others.

02:07:949 Add note to |2| for drumbeat and pattern consistency

02:10:872 Add note to |4| for pattern and snare notice this 02:11:487 (131487|2,131487|3) - which they have the same beat/rhythm/instrument

02:18:410 Add note to |2| for pattern consistency (Drumbeat)

03:09:487 (189487|1,189641|3,189949|1) - Do this like this for pattern consistency and balancement notice this too 03:06:564 (186564|3,186718|2,186718|0,186872|1,187026|0,187026|3,187179|2,187487|3) -

03:11:641 (191641|1,191795|2,191949|1,192103|0) - Same reason as before^ do this like this desu-desu

03:19:487 (199487|0,199487|3) - Move this to |2| - |3| if you listen closely/clearly the piano/guitar pitch here is like entering/internal wave....

[Hard]
02:05:487 (125487|2,125487|3) - Move to |2| - |3| (Inner/Internal) then 02:05:641 (125641|1,125641|0) - move to |1| - |4| (Outer/External) it's because if you listen to it's rhythm the beats/pitch/rhythm of this two is not similar or the cooperate with 02:05:026 (125026|1,125026|0,125179|3,125179|2,125333|0,125333|1) - They are not necessary to be this pattern it's because the rhythm is not coordinating with this pattern. They are different to be 1 - 2 -1 - 2 pattern like in this rhythm.

02:05:949 (125949|3,125949|2) - Move to |2| - |3| for pattern

02:18:410 Add note in |3| (1/4 Beat Snap Divisor) for drumbeat and pattern consistency

03:11:487 Make this 2 noted in |1| - |2| then 03:11:641 (191641|0,191641|1) - Move to |3| - |4| for pattern and rhythm. Why the 1st one to be noted in |1| - |2| it's because if you listen to them closely the sounds/beats/rhythm here 03:11:179 is the same with 03:11:487 while the 2nd one is for pattern symmetry and the same reason with same sounds/beats/rhythm.

03:21:949 (201949|2) - Move to |2| for pattern

03:31:795 (211795|3,212410|2) - Shouldn't this 2 parts to be 2 noted?

[Poi]
Uncheck > Song setup > Design > Widescreen support (This only applies to storyboard)

00:06:564 (6564|3,6718|1) - Ctrl + G for pattern consistency. Since they have the same rhythm with previous patterns.

01:03:179 (63179|2,63179|1) - Move to |1| - |2| for pattern consistency notice this pattern 01:02:410 (62410|1,62564|0,62564|2,62564|3,62718|3) - more likely opposite of this.

02:09:487 Add note that makes this 3 noted for pattern and impact (Drumbeat - Piano - Cymbal/Guitar) and the same with other 3 noted pattern in the previous.

02:09:949 Same reason ^

02:28:872 This must be 3 noted for drumbeat - snare - piano. It have loud impact just like the 3 noted parts in the previous patterns..

02:29:026 While this is only 2 noted (Drumbeat - Snare) and compare to this^ it have low impact..

02:31:026 (151026|3) - Move to |3| for piano.

03:11:949 Make this 3 noted as for the sounds/beats/rhythm in here is the same with 03:11:641

Nice map!~
Zan-
poi
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

[GraveChaos] wrote:

[BN Check/Bubble Check]

Osu!mania Ranking Criteria wrote:

Overall Difficulty should be:
9-10 when using mainly notes and just a few amount of holds
7-8 when using a mix a balanced notes and holds
5-6 when using mostly holds
Normal = OD 8 (Has balance SNs and LNs so as what AiMOD says and the criteria it's necessary to be "8")
|1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
00:15:179 (15179|1,15179|2) - Move to |1| - |4| since they have the same sound with 00:14:872 (14872|3,14872|0) -

01:18:256 (78256|3) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency

01:28:718 (88718|3,88718|2) - Move to |1| - |3| because rhythm changed and start here (Alternating pitch)

01:41:333 Add note to |2| for pattern and external impact sound of drumbeat and snare

01:45:641 Make this 2 noted as it have snare sound. For pattern consistency and notice your pattern around this part (2 noted parts).

01:45:641 Make this 2 noted for drumbeat and snare. Notice 01:44:410 (104410|3,104410|1,105026|1,105026|0) - and the other 2 noted parts which they have the same beat/rhythm/instruments and the others.

02:07:949 Add note to |2| for drumbeat and pattern consistency same as 02:07:795 -

02:10:872 Add note to |4| for pattern and snare notice this 02:11:487 (131487|2,131487|3) - which they have the same beat/rhythm/instrumentadded on 1

02:18:410 Add note to |2| for pattern consistency (Drumbeat)too hard here

03:09:487 (189487|1,189641|3,189949|1) - Do this like this for pattern consistency and balancement notice this too 03:06:564 (186564|3,186718|2,186718|0,186872|1,187026|0,187026|3,187179|2,187487|3) -

03:11:641 (191641|1,191795|2,191949|1,192103|0) - Same reason as before^ do this like this desu-desu
I don't want to repeat same thing, it will be boring since this is already 4 minutes long

03:19:487 (199487|0,199487|3) - Move this to |2| - |3| if you listen closely/clearly the piano/guitar pitch here is like entering/internal wave....

[Hard]
02:05:487 (125487|2,125487|3) - Move to |2| - |3| (Inner/Internal) then 02:05:641 (125641|1,125641|0) - move to |1| - |4| (Outer/External) it's because if you listen to it's rhythm the beats/pitch/rhythm of this two is not similar or the cooperate with 02:05:026 (125026|1,125026|0,125179|3,125179|2,125333|0,125333|1) - They are not necessary to be this pattern it's because the rhythm is not coordinating with this pattern. They are different to be 1 - 2 -1 - 2 pattern like in this rhythm.

02:05:949 (125949|3,125949|2) - Move to |2| - |3| for pattern

02:18:410 Add note in |3| (1/4 Beat Snap Divisor) for drumbeat and pattern consistency

03:11:487 Make this 2 noted in |1| - |2| then 03:11:641 (191641|0,191641|1) - Move to |3| - |4| for pattern and rhythm. Why the 1st one to be noted in |1| - |2| it's because if you listen to them closely the sounds/beats/rhythm here 03:11:179 is the same with 03:11:487 while the 2nd one is for pattern symmetry and the same reason with same sounds/beats/rhythm.I think it is a bit hard here

03:21:949 (201949|2) - Move to |2| for pattern

03:31:795 (211795|3,212410|2) - Shouldn't this 2 parts to be 2 noted?not that strong yet

[Poi]
Uncheck > Song setup > Design > Widescreen support (This only applies to storyboard)

00:06:564 (6564|3,6718|1) - Ctrl + G for pattern consistency. Since they have the same rhythm with previous patterns.

01:03:179 (63179|2,63179|1) - Move to |1| - |2| for pattern consistency notice this pattern 01:02:410 (62410|1,62564|0,62564|2,62564|3,62718|3) - more likely opposite of this.

02:09:487 Add note that makes this 3 noted for pattern and impact (Drumbeat - Piano - Cymbal/Guitar) and the same with other 3 noted pattern in the previous.

02:09:949 Same reason ^

02:28:872 This must be 3 noted for drumbeat - snare - piano. It have loud impact just like the 3 noted parts in the previous patterns..

02:29:026 While this is only 2 noted (Drumbeat - Snare) and compare to this^ it have low impact.. 02:28:718 (148718|0,148718|2,148872|1,149026|2,149026|3,149026|0,149179|1,149333|2,149333|0,149333|3) - for these, I am trying to show the strong sounds of the vocals

02:31:026 (151026|3) - Move to |3| for piano.

03:11:949 Make this 3 noted as for the sounds/beats/rhythm in here is the same with 03:11:641

Nice map!~
Thank you for checking, no reply= fixed
Gravey-
[Recheck]

|1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
00:06:256 (6256|2,6410|0,6564|3,6718|1) - Make this pattern the same with 00:05:641 (5641|0,5795|2,5949|1,6103|3) - since they have the same rhythm. For pattern consistency.

02:01:949 (121949|3) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency and since the drumbeat here is like entering/centering. Then 02:03:179 (123179|2) - Move to |2| the drumbeat becomes external/expanding.

03:55:026 Shouldn't be this 2 noted rather than 03:55:179 it's because the drumbeat impact at the first one is dominant than the second one. And as i see in your pattern drumbeat impact like this have 2 noted.

Seems good to me~

Will continue the recheck after dealing with the cases right now.
Topic Starter
Ayachi-
Fixed all these
Gravey-
Sorry i'll not ne continuing my re-check. I'm sorry for ruining your beautiful map by my MOD.
Starry-
No need to deny the KD for it. If you're going to quit, it's preferred you don't be dramatic about it.

Anyways~

Quick mod.
Oh come on Sakura I already told you to change the Poi settings :v
Count 0123

[Normal]

00:18:564 (18564|2,19026|1) - I don't really feel these whistle hitsounds fitting, they sound kinda loud for me. Perhaps get your own sample.

00:19:641 (19641|2) - Move to 1
00:19:795 (19795|1) - Move to 2 or 3
(If moved to 3) 00:19:949 (19949|3) - move to 2.
Just flows better and helps the pattern be more consistent.

00:32:410 (32410|2) - Works better at 1
00:32:718 (32718|3,32872|2) - Move left by 1
00:33:026 (33026|1) - Move to 3

00:37:333 (37333|3,37641|2) - CTRL+G for pitch.
00:37:949 (37949|1,38103|3,38410|2,38718|0) - Then rearrange these to be more pitch relevant.
00:40:872 (40872|2,41179|1,41487|2,41641|0) - ^
etc.
Actually this whole slow section can be somewhat revised to help pitch relevancy.

00:55:179 (55179|1) - Move to 3
00:55:256 (55256|2,55333|3) - Move left by 1 -- feels less awkward.

--

EDIT: (ok finally I'm not modding at 1am)

--

01:26:872 (86872|3) - Move to 2 for balance.

01:31:179 (91179|1) - to 01:40:410 (100410|3) - -- few more parts can follow pitch relevancy better here. It doesn't need to strictly follow it, but it should be a bit more.

01:54:564 (114564|3,115026|0,115487|3,115487|2,115795|0,115795|1) - CTRL+H all for pitch.

02:25:333 (145333|0) - Move to 3, plays a lot better.
(Optional, if done, then move 02:25:641 (145641|3) - to 1, 02:26:256 (146256|1) - to 3 02:26:564 (146564|3) - to 1 02:26:872 (146872|1) - to 3)

Just a quick thing, why 03:45:949 (225949|0,225949|2) - 2 notes, 03:53:333 (233333|3) - 1 note? Most rolls only use 1 note.
Harbyter
??xd
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

Starry- wrote:

No need to deny the KD for it. If you're going to quit, it's preferred you don't be dramatic about it.

Anyways~

Quick mod.
Oh come on Sakura I already told you to change the Poi settings :v
Count 0123

[Normal]

00:18:564 (18564|2,19026|1) - I don't really feel these whistle hitsounds fitting, they sound kinda loud for me. Perhaps get your own sample.

00:19:641 (19641|2) - Move to 1
00:19:795 (19795|1) - Move to 2 or 3
(If moved to 3) 00:19:949 (19949|3) - move to 2.
Just flows better and helps the pattern be more consistent.

00:32:410 (32410|2) - Works better at 1
00:32:718 (32718|3,32872|2) - Move left by 1
00:33:026 (33026|1) - Move to 3

00:37:333 (37333|3,37641|2) - CTRL+G for pitch.
00:37:949 (37949|1,38103|3,38410|2,38718|0) - Then rearrange these to be more pitch relevant.
00:40:872 (40872|2,41179|1,41487|2,41641|0) - ^
etc.
Actually this whole slow section can be somewhat revised to help pitch relevancy.

00:55:179 (55179|1) - Move to 3
00:55:256 (55256|2,55333|3) - Move left by 1 -- feels less awkward.

--

EDIT: (ok finally I'm not modding at 1am)

--

01:26:872 (86872|3) - Move to 2 for balance.

01:31:179 (91179|1) - to 01:40:410 (100410|3) - -- few more parts can follow pitch relevancy better here. It doesn't need to strictly follow it, but it should be a bit more.

01:54:564 (114564|3,115026|0,115487|3,115487|2,115795|0,115795|1) - CTRL+H all for pitch.

02:25:333 (145333|0) - Move to 3, plays a lot better.
(Optional, if done, then move 02:25:641 (145641|3) - to 1, 02:26:256 (146256|1) - to 3 02:26:564 (146564|3) - to 1 02:26:872 (146872|1) - to 3)

Just a quick thing, why 03:45:949 (225949|0,225949|2) - 2 notes, 03:53:333 (233333|3) - 1 note? Most rolls only use 1 note.Different kinds of sound
Thanks, no reply=fixed
Zan-
selamat pagi!

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

ye
[Metadata]
Artist: AKINO from bless4 || http://bless4.jp/

[Normal]
OD = 7.5 || neater spread lol

00:07:795 - add at 3
00:15:949 (15949|1,15949|0,16103|2,16103|3) - optional: ctrl + H
00:25:949 (25949|0,26154|2,26359|0,26564|3,26769|1,26974|3) - i don't think these are suitable for Clap, hitnormal should be good
00:27:487 (27487|2) - move to 4
00:32:410 - http://puu.sh/gOzVk/0f5b40b0b0.jpg || (added note in 00:33:179 - at 2)
00:35:333 - optional: i prefer http://puu.sh/gOzZW/462ba433e6.jpg to LN
00:49:641 (49641|1) - move to 1
00:53:333 - optional: http://puu.sh/gOA8D/b085c95985.jpg
00:57:026 - add at 2 (if you apply all adding notes till here, ok i'll stop suggesting add note, it reached 1.99 now ;w;)
01:13:333 (73333|3) - remove?
01:19:333 (79333|0,79487|2,79641|1,79795|0) - clap maybe
01:31:179 (91179|0) - finish
01:41:949 (101949|1,102103|3) - optional: ctrl + G
01:45:179 (105179|3,105795|1) - remove? following same pattern like previous
01:55:487 - http://puu.sh/gOAs4/0b2a5b7115.jpg || (01:55:795 (115795|3) - more suitable for Finish)
02:10:256 (130256|3) - clap
02:22:872 (142872|2) - clap || like 02:13:026 (133026|1) -
03:39:179 (219179|2) - clap
03:49:026 (229026|2) - clap
03:57:949 (237949|2) - optional: move to 4 || 03:58:103 (238103|1) - move to 1
03:59:333 (239333|3) - clap

[Hard]
00:03:795 (3795|0) - move to 2
00:25:949 (25949|2,26154|1,26359|2,26564|1,26769|2,26974|1) - same with Normal
00:51:026 - add note at 3
00:54:256 (54256|2) - remove
01:31:179 (91179|0) - finish
01:50:872 - add at 4 || feels same with 01:50:103 -
01:55:487 (115487|3) - LN till 01:55:795 -
01:55:795 (115795|0) - finish
02:10:256 (130256|3) - clap
02:27:333 (147333|1,147410|0) - optional: ctrl + G
02:29:795 (149795|2,149872|3) - ^ ctrl + G
03:31:795 - add note?
03:32:410 - ^
03:39:179 (219179|3) - clap
03:49:026 (229026|2) - clap
04:00:872 (240872|1) - feels not fit (sudden LN) try http://puu.sh/gOBPe/82488cdb22.jpg
04:05:795 (245795|3) - remove

[Yuudachi Poi]
01:01:179 (61179|0) - stop at 01:01:333 -
01:31:179 (91179|3) - finish
01:55:487 (115487|3) - LN till 01:55:795 -
02:07:026 - add at 2
02:07:487 - add at 3
02:10:256 (130256|3) - clap
02:15:026 (135026|0) - stop at 02:15:179 -
02:25:641 - triple
02:25:949 - double
02:26:256 - triple
03:08:718 (188718|0,188769|1,188820|2,188872|3,188923|0,188974|1) - i doubt
03:39:795 (219795|1,219949|0) - ctrl + G
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

Zan - wrote:

selamat pagi!

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

ye
[Metadata]
Artist: AKINO from bless4 || http://bless4.jp/

[Normal]
OD = 7.5 || neater spread lol

00:07:795 - add at 3
00:15:949 (15949|1,15949|0,16103|2,16103|3) - optional: ctrl + H no change
00:25:949 (25949|0,26154|2,26359|0,26564|3,26769|1,26974|3) - i don't think these are suitable for Clap, hitnormal should be good
00:27:487 (27487|2) - move to 4
00:32:410 - http://puu.sh/gOzVk/0f5b40b0b0.jpg || (added note in 00:33:179 - at 2)didn't add for 00:33:179 - because it is piano
00:35:333 - optional: i prefer http://puu.sh/gOzZW/462ba433e6.jpg to LNit is drum roll so I want to keep LN
00:49:641 (49641|1) - move to 1same as 00:49:333 (49333|1) -
00:53:333 - optional: http://puu.sh/gOA8D/b085c95985.jpgI have too much of this
00:57:026 - add at 2 (if you apply all adding notes till here, ok i'll stop suggesting add note, it reached 1.99 now ;w;)ya it did
01:13:333 (73333|3) - remove?
01:19:333 (79333|0,79487|2,79641|1,79795|0) - clap maybe
01:31:179 (91179|0) - finish
01:41:949 (101949|1,102103|3) - optional: ctrl + Gno change
01:45:179 (105179|3,105795|1) - remove? following same pattern like previousnew guitar sound or what ever the sound is called
01:55:487 - http://puu.sh/gOAs4/0b2a5b7115.jpg || (01:55:795 (115795|3) - more suitable for Finish)
02:10:256 (130256|3) - clap
02:22:872 (142872|2) - clap || like 02:13:026 (133026|1) -
03:39:179 (219179|2) - clap
03:49:026 (229026|2) - clap
03:57:949 (237949|2) - optional: move to 4 || 03:58:103 (238103|1) - move to 1I did this on purpose
03:59:333 (239333|3) - clap

[Hard]
00:03:795 (3795|0) - move to 2
00:25:949 (25949|2,26154|1,26359|2,26564|1,26769|2,26974|1) - same with Normal
00:51:026 - add note at 3
00:54:256 (54256|2) - removecymbal
01:31:179 (91179|0) - finish
01:50:872 - add at 4 || feels same with 01:50:103 -
01:55:487 (115487|3) - LN till 01:55:795 -
01:55:795 (115795|0) - finish
02:10:256 (130256|3) - clap
02:27:333 (147333|1,147410|0) - optional: ctrl + Gno change
02:29:795 (149795|2,149872|3) - ^ ctrl + G^
03:31:795 - add note?
03:32:410 - ^
03:39:179 (219179|3) - clap
03:49:026 (229026|2) - clap
04:00:872 (240872|1) - feels not fit (sudden LN) try http://puu.sh/gOBPe/82488cdb22.jpgremoved LN
04:05:795 (245795|3) - remove

[Yuudachi Poi]
01:01:179 (61179|0) - stop at 01:01:333 - it actually goes on just like other kiai with same part
01:31:179 (91179|3) - finish
01:55:487 (115487|3) - LN till 01:55:795 - same as 01:54:564 (114564|1) - it stops 01:55:487, to 01:55:795 is another kind of sound
02:07:026 - add at 2different from 02:07:179 -
02:07:487 - add at 3^
02:10:256 (130256|3) - clap
02:15:026 (135026|0) - stop at 02:15:179 -
02:25:641 - triple
02:25:949 - double
02:26:256 - triple
03:08:718 (188718|0,188769|1,188820|2,188872|3,188923|0,188974|1) - i doubtfixed
03:39:795 (219795|1,219949|0) - ctrl + G
Thank you very much, no reply=fixed
Starry-
~

Normal: OD7.5 HP7.5
Hard: OD8.5 HP8
Poi: OD9 HP8.5


HP8.5 is really crucial to have in the last difficulty.

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03:56:718 - this is a really weird place to stop kiai.

[Normal]

00:02:410 (2410|3) - Should really try to make a pattern so this note starts on 3.

00:33:179 - Add a note here (pref at 2)

00:39:026 - here and 00:39:179 - should be filled in since it's missing guitar noises right now. Makes it consistent with 00:41:487 (41487|3,41641|0) -
Just look over this guitar section, I think a few notes are missing in general.

02:29:026 - this sound sounds more emphasised than 02:29:179 (149179|2) - , maybe best to move that note there instead.

[Hard]

00:11:641 (11641|2) - No use for this LN, I know why you put it, but it's just inconsistent with the rest of patterns here imo.

00:15:103 (15103|1) - Ghost

00:36:564 (36564|0,36641|2,36718|1,36795|3,36872|0,36949|1) - The stream here shouldn't be this complicated imo. Maybe just a standard 012321[01] or 013201[23] (poi diff has much simpler stream)

00:42:872 (42872|1,43026|3,43333|3,43641|1) - Pitch relevant pls

01:47:795 (107795|1,107949|2) - Move left by 1
01:48:103 (108103|0) - Move to 2. This makes 0col more balanced.
(If you want, you can 01:48:410 (108410|2,108564|0,108564|1,108718|3,108718|2) - ctrl+h, but optional , to make more balanced with change)

01:50:718 (110718|3) - Move to 1 instead? Gets rid of anchor

01:54:564 (114564|3) - Move to 0
01:55:026 (115026|0) - Move to 1 ,pitch
Zan-
recheck no kds

ye
[Normal]
00:33:179 - add note at 2 || same kick with 00:28:256 - 00:30:718 -
00:54:872 (54872|0) - remove? || not really strong sound
00:59:179 (59179|1) - clap
01:09:026 (69026|2) - clap
02:20:103 (140103|3) - clap || a bit snare isnt?
02:17:333 (137333|2) - remove || it only single at 02:27:179 -
02:28:872 (148872|0) - clap
02:29:641 (149641|2) - remove clap || like 02:27:179 -
02:32:718 (152718|1) - remove Finish
02:45:026 (165026|2) - remove Finish || it is kick sound isnt?
03:05:026 (185026|1,185333|3,185641|0,185949|2,186256|1,191487|3,191795|2,192103|0) - remove clap || it is kick isnt?
03:06:564 (186564|3,186872|1) - ^
03:07:487 (187487|3,187795|1,188103|2,188410|0,188718|3) - ^
03:09:026 (189026|0,189333|2,189641|3) - ^
03:09:949 (189949|1,190256|3,190564|0,190872|2,191179|1) - ^
03:11:487 (191487|3,191795|2,192103|0) - ^
03:12:410 (192410|3,192718|1,193026|2,193333|0,193641|3) - ^
03:25:641 (205641|1) - whistle
03:49:026 (229026|2) - remove Finish
03:53:333 (233333|3) - remove clap
03:55:795 (235795|3) - ^

[Hard]
00:54:872 (54872|3) - remove
00:59:179 (59179|0) - clap
01:06:256 (66256|3) - clap
01:06:333 (66333|1) - remove
01:09:026 (69026|3) - clap
01:19:179 (79179|1,79333|2,79487|1,79641|2,79795|1,79949|2) - clap
01:46:103 (106103|1) - remove
01:48:564 (108564|1) - remove
02:06:564 (126564|0,127026|2,127487|1) - remove clap
02:09:333 (129333|2) - remove clap
02:18:103 (138103|1) - remove clap
02:22:872 (142872|3) - clap
02:28:872 (148872|0) - clap
02:29:026 (149026|3) - remove clap
02:31:487 (151487|1) - remove clap
02:33:179 (153179|3) - remove
02:54:718 (174718|0) - remove
02:54:872 (174872|3) - remove clap
03:05:026 (185026|0,185333|3,185641|3,185949|0,186256|0) - remove clap
03:06:564 (186564|2,186872|2,187179|1) - remove clap
03:07:487 (187487|3,187795|1,188103|0,188410|0,188718|2) - remove clap
03:09:026 (189026|1,189333|2,189641|2) - remove clap
03:09:949 (189949|0,190256|1,190564|1,190872|2,191179|0) - remove clap
03:11:487 (191487|2,191795|3,192103|0) - remove clap
03:12:410 (192410|1,192718|0) - remove clap
03:13:949 (193949|3) - remove clap
03:26:872 - ~ 03:33:949 - remove all clap || kicksssss
03:45:179 (225179|1) - remove
03:49:026 (229026|2) - remove Finish
03:53:641 (233641|1) - remove clap || 03:43:795 -
03:56:103 (236103|2) - remove clap
03:45:179 (225179|1) - remove
03:49:026 (229026|2) - remove Finish
03:50:872 (230872|0) - remove clap
03:53:641 (233641|1) - remove clap
03:56:103 (236103|2) - remove clap
03:57:641 (237641|2) - remove clap

[Poi]
use Hard's mods

woc ninstar, i didn't know you checked this
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