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Chaoslitz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月21日 at 下午 01:31:36

Artist: Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara)
Title: Seishun Satsubatsu-ron
Source: Ansatsu Kyoushitsu
Tags: Assassination Classroom opening Nagisa Shiota Kaede Kayano Karma Akabane Yūma Isogai Maehara Hiroto tv size
BPM: 146
Filesize: 17394kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Assassination (3.47 stars, 227 notes)
  2. Easy (1.27 stars, 68 notes)
  3. Hard (2.73 stars, 183 notes)
  4. Normal (1.71 stars, 102 notes)
Download: Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron
Download: Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5

Easy
Normal
Hard
Assassination

History
  1. 27/2: Added Easy diff
Special Thanks
  1. Shad0w1and for encoding the video~
Source
http://www.ansatsu-anime.com/discography/detail.php?id=1009321
Nathan
tiny mod ;w;

[Normal]
  1. 01:16:532 (1,1,1) - Could add a tiny bit of distance between these, feels a bit too easy
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:382 (1) - Make it curve like this for vocals
  2. 01:05:025 (1) - Could somehow modify this to blanket with 01:06:053 (2,3,4)
  3. 01:14:476 (7) - Forgot to snap it on tail :c
  4. 01:17:354 (2) - NC?
[Assassination]
  1. 01:18:998 (1) - Place this in between 01:18:176 (1,2) instead of under 01:18:176 (1)
Ciyus Miapah
IRC
16:45 Chaoslitz: :3/
16:45 Chaoslitz: send me those hitsound file? :D
16:53 Fort: wut
16:53 Fort: there's no need
16:53 Chaoslitz: owo
16:53 Fort: you have them
16:53 Chaoslitz: me? D:
16:54 Fort: yeah
16:54 Fort: you give me map
16:54 Fort: and in that map have custom HS
16:54 Fort: so i use that
16:54 Chaoslitz: ah ok I see that
16:55 Fort: you can Pass my map? :D
16:56 Chaoslitz: wait I have those sound files but I never put that in before D:
16:56 Chaoslitz: idk ;w;
16:58 Fort: can you FC my map?
16:58 Fort: hahahahaha >:D
16:58 Chaoslitz: where are those sound come from ;w;
16:58 Chaoslitz: never lol
16:58 Fort: ok testplay my map plz
16:59 Chaoslitz: later I am doing homework ww
16:59 Fort: oh okay
17:00 Chaoslitz: btw do you take mod req now?
17:00 Fort: it's secret :>
17:00 Chaoslitz: D:?
17:01 Fort: im not active, not semi active, but not inactive for modding :3
17:01 Fort: just what map?
17:01 *Chaoslitz is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610295 Sannen E Gumi Utatan - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron]
17:01 Chaoslitz: lolololololololol
17:02 Fort: need speedrank :D
17:02 Chaoslitz: but that is impossible :P
17:02 Fort: looks this map is good enough to do that
17:03 Chaoslitz: :o ok
17:03 Fort: but im not yet look this map :P
17:03 Chaoslitz: is that bat are avoid to speedrank? ww
17:03 Chaoslitz: vm ;p
17:03 Fort: nope
17:03 Chaoslitz: nvm
17:03 Chaoslitz: :O
17:04 Chaoslitz: but I only know few bats ;w;
17:04 Fort: me too
17:04 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610295 Sannen E Gumi Utatan - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron [Assassination]]
17:04 Fort: it's like my hyper diff
17:05 Chaoslitz: xD
17:05 Fort: in 2014
17:05 Chaoslitz: c:
17:05 Fort: eh 2013
17:06 *Fort runs
17:06 Chaoslitz: not even joined osu 2013 ww
17:06 Fort: this map cool
17:06 Chaoslitz: :D really?
17:06 Fort: at patterning
17:06 Chaoslitz: :D
17:07 Fort: 00:45:916 (6) - just add some reverse slider here
17:09 Fort: 01:18:998 - finish at this, look oh.... i miss some endings here :(
17:09 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2590385
17:09 Chaoslitz: you mean this?
17:09 Chaoslitz: dat already added finish :3
17:10 Fort: just add only 1 reverse
17:11 Fort: that looks overmap
17:11 Fort: your pattern*
17:11 Chaoslitz: ok~~
17:11 Fort: 01:00:094 (2) - ummm
17:11 Fort: NC
17:12 Fort: cuz..... SV change in here i think
17:12 Chaoslitz: ok :3
17:12 Fort: yeah same like 00:46:532 (1,1) -
17:14 Fort: btw why no Insane?
17:14 Fort: 4+ star diff
17:14 Chaoslitz: this is insane owo
17:14 Chaoslitz: ;w;
17:14 Fort: looks like hyper
17:15 Chaoslitz: I have a hard diff as well ._>
17:15 Chaoslitz: >_>
17:15 Fort: lel
17:16 Fort: 00:07:080 (2,3,4,5) - singletap pls...
17:16 *Fort runs
17:17 Chaoslitz: xD
17:17 Fort: 00:07:388 (5) - change this to circle
17:17 Fort: http://puu.sh/eUnTV/f3985d7ab5.jpg
17:17 Fort: try that
17:18 Fort: 00:09:238 - this one need circle too
17:18 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2590423 :D?
17:18 Fort: 00:09:340 (4) - and you can change this to 1/4 slider
17:18 Fort: feel much better
17:19 Fort: but i prefer polarisation there
17:19 Fort: but it's up to you :3
17:19 Chaoslitz: I prefer slider more owo
17:19 Chaoslitz: ah no
17:19 Chaoslitz: i mean
17:20 Chaoslitz: notes
17:20 Chaoslitz: as there are sliders already 00:08:724 (2,3)
17:20 Fort: it's okay
17:20 Fort: 00:09:238 - but this one needs clickable object
17:21 Fort: like 00:10:882 (4) -
17:21 Chaoslitz: okay added
17:22 Fort: try that http://puu.sh/eUoe7/2069d25084.jpg
17:22 Fort: idk but this map lots of blue tick pattern
17:23 Fort: double BPM detected
17:24 Fort: seems clear in Ass diff
17:25 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610297 Sannen E Gumi Utatan - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron [Hard]]
17:25 Chaoslitz: still want notess >_>
17:25 Chaoslitz: ok :333
17:25 Fort: idk
17:25 Fort: im just like your map
17:26 Chaoslitz: ?
17:26 Fort: so only add some notes
17:26 Chaoslitz: :o
17:26 Fort: oh you mean you want more notes for ass diff?
17:27 Chaoslitz: i mean this part 00:09:238 (4,5,6,7)
17:27 Fort: make so you need to make Extra diff here :D
17:27 Chaoslitz: keep those notes
17:27 Chaoslitz: xD
17:27 Fort: oh i see
17:27 Fort: ok back to hard
17:28 Chaoslitz: k~~
17:29 Fort: no comment for this
17:29 Fort: 00:44:272 (1,2) - but this one confusing me
17:30 Chaoslitz: 00:44:272 (1) if i change this to two reverse slider?
17:30 Fort: you can do that? really?
17:30 Chaoslitz: ah seems worse -w-
17:30 Chaoslitz: ?
17:31 Fort: 00:44:272 (6) - just make this slider have 1 rev arrow
17:31 Fort: 00:44:683 - add triplet here
17:33 Fort: okay just it, cool hitsounding, comboing and patterning i think
17:33 Fort: okay clear
17:33 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610299 Sannen E Gumi Utatan - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron [Normal]]
17:33 Chaoslitz: okk
17:33 Fort: 00:06:669 (1,2) - wat
17:34 Fort: 1/4 pattern in normal
17:34 Fort: ???
17:34 Fort: just change slider 1 slider end to 00:07:080 -
17:34 Fort: sounds better
17:35 Chaoslitz: ok my fault ww
17:35 Fort: 2 hard 2 map normal in this map..... >.<
17:35 Fort: in this song*
17:35 Fort: too much polarize
17:35 Fort: and do the same for same issue
17:36 Chaoslitz: ?
17:36 Chaoslitz: you mean? D:
17:36 Fort: 00:08:313 (3) -
17:36 Fort: 00:09:957 (5) -
17:36 Chaoslitz: ah fixed all then
17:37 Fort: 00:49:203 (5) - kek
17:37 Fort: 00:49:409 - u blank this part?
17:37 Chaoslitz: 00:49:203 (5) - how about 1/2?
17:38 Chaoslitz: oh i will add back notes
17:38 Fort: yeah sounds good
17:38 Fort: 00:54:546 (2) - lol
17:38 Fort: 00:56:190 (2) - hahahaha
17:38 Chaoslitz: ok ;w;w;w;
17:38 Fort: #yourmapping style
17:39 Chaoslitz: :<<
17:39 Fort: honestly i like it
17:39 Fort: but this is normal, so sad for this thing :<<
17:39 Fort: 01:12:217 (4) - yay this one good :D
17:39 Chaoslitz: ok I just change all of these then
17:40 Chaoslitz: :DDD
17:40 Fort: okay sector clear
17:41 Fort: Ranked~
17:41 Chaoslitz: btw
17:41 Chaoslitz: ww
17:41 Fort: umm yes?
17:41 Chaoslitz: do you know how to compress a video ;w;
17:41 Chaoslitz: the file size of video i have is too large D:
17:43 Fort: i dont know
17:43 Fort: cuz im not tv size mapper
17:43 Chaoslitz: ok nevermind then
17:43 Chaoslitz: mission cleared: modding maps
17:43 Fort: i never put video in 2 years
17:43 Chaoslitz: go forum to get your award: pp
17:43 *Chaoslitz runs
17:43 Chaoslitz: :o
17:43 Chaoslitz: i mean ....kds...
17:44 Fort: i want pp pls
17:44 Fort: :>
17:44 Chaoslitz: ;w;
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Fort wrote:

IRC
16:45 Chaoslitz: :3/
16:45 Chaoslitz: send me those hitsound file? :D
16:53 Fort: wut
16:53 Fort: there's no need
16:53 Chaoslitz: owo
16:53 Fort: you have them
16:53 Chaoslitz: me? D:
16:54 Fort: yeah
16:54 Fort: you give me map
16:54 Fort: and in that map have custom HS
16:54 Fort: so i use that
16:54 Chaoslitz: ah ok I see that
16:55 Fort: you can Pass my map? :D
16:56 Chaoslitz: wait I have those sound files but I never put that in before D:
16:56 Chaoslitz: idk ;w;
16:58 Fort: can you FC my map?
16:58 Fort: hahahahaha >:D
16:58 Chaoslitz: where are those sound come from ;w;
16:58 Chaoslitz: never lol
16:58 Fort: ok testplay my map plz
16:59 Chaoslitz: later I am doing homework ww
16:59 Fort: oh okay
17:00 Chaoslitz: btw do you take mod req now?
17:00 Fort: it's secret :>
17:00 Chaoslitz: D:?
17:01 Fort: im not active, not semi active, but not inactive for modding :3
17:01 Fort: just what map?
17:01 *Chaoslitz is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610295 Sannen E Gumi Utatan - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron]
17:01 Chaoslitz: lolololololololol
17:02 Fort: need speedrank :D
17:02 Chaoslitz: but that is impossible :P
17:02 Fort: looks this map is good enough to do that
17:03 Chaoslitz: :o ok
17:03 Fort: but im not yet look this map :P
17:03 Chaoslitz: is that bat are avoid to speedrank? ww
17:03 Chaoslitz: vm ;p
17:03 Fort: nope
17:03 Chaoslitz: nvm
17:03 Chaoslitz: :O
17:04 Chaoslitz: but I only know few bats ;w;
17:04 Fort: me too
17:04 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610295 Sannen E Gumi Utatan - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron [Assassination]]
17:04 Fort: it's like my hyper diff
17:05 Chaoslitz: xD
17:05 Fort: in 2014
17:05 Chaoslitz: c:
17:05 Fort: eh 2013
17:06 *Fort runs
17:06 Chaoslitz: not even joined osu 2013 ww
17:06 Fort: this map cool
17:06 Chaoslitz: :D really?
17:06 Fort: at patterning
17:06 Chaoslitz: :D
17:07 Fort: 00:45:916 (6) - just add some reverse slider here
17:09 Fort: 01:18:998 - finish at this, look oh.... i miss some endings here :(
17:09 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2590385
17:09 Chaoslitz: you mean this?
17:09 Chaoslitz: dat already added finish :3
17:10 Fort: just add only 1 reverse
17:11 Fort: that looks overmap
17:11 Fort: your pattern*
17:11 Chaoslitz: ok~~
17:11 Fort: 01:00:094 (2) - ummm
17:11 Fort: NC
17:12 Fort: cuz..... SV change in here i think
17:12 Chaoslitz: ok :3
17:12 Fort: yeah same like 00:46:532 (1,1) -
17:14 Fort: btw why no Insane?
17:14 Fort: 4+ star diff
17:14 Chaoslitz: this is insane owo
17:14 Chaoslitz: ;w;
17:14 Fort: looks like hyper
17:15 Chaoslitz: I have a hard diff as well ._>
17:15 Chaoslitz: >_>
17:15 Fort: lel
17:16 Fort: 00:07:080 (2,3,4,5) - singletap pls...
17:16 *Fort runs
17:17 Chaoslitz: xD
17:17 Fort: 00:07:388 (5) - change this to circle
17:17 Fort: http://puu.sh/eUnTV/f3985d7ab5.jpg
17:17 Fort: try that
17:18 Fort: 00:09:238 - this one need circle too
17:18 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2590423 :D?
17:18 Fort: 00:09:340 (4) - and you can change this to 1/4 slider
17:18 Fort: feel much better
17:19 Fort: but i prefer polarisation there
17:19 Fort: but it's up to you :3
17:19 Chaoslitz: I prefer slider more owo
17:19 Chaoslitz: ah no
17:19 Chaoslitz: i mean
17:20 Chaoslitz: notes
17:20 Chaoslitz: as there are sliders already 00:08:724 (2,3)
17:20 Fort: it's okay
17:20 Fort: 00:09:238 - but this one needs clickable object
17:21 Fort: like 00:10:882 (4) -
17:21 Chaoslitz: okay added
17:22 Fort: try that http://puu.sh/eUoe7/2069d25084.jpg
17:22 Fort: idk but this map lots of blue tick pattern
17:23 Fort: double BPM detected
17:24 Fort: seems clear in Ass diff
17:25 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610297 Sannen E Gumi Utatan - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron [Hard]]
17:25 Chaoslitz: still want notess >_>
17:25 Chaoslitz: ok :333
17:25 Fort: idk
17:25 Fort: im just like your map
17:26 Chaoslitz: ?
17:26 Fort: so only add some notes
17:26 Chaoslitz: :o
17:26 Fort: oh you mean you want more notes for ass diff?
17:27 Chaoslitz: i mean this part 00:09:238 (4,5,6,7)
17:27 Fort: make so you need to make Extra diff here :D
17:27 Chaoslitz: keep those notes
17:27 Chaoslitz: xD
17:27 Fort: oh i see
17:27 Fort: ok back to hard
17:28 Chaoslitz: k~~
17:29 Fort: no comment for this
17:29 Fort: 00:44:272 (1,2) - but this one confusing me
17:30 Chaoslitz: 00:44:272 (1) if i change this to two reverse slider?
17:30 Fort: you can do that? really?
17:30 Chaoslitz: ah seems worse -w-
17:30 Chaoslitz: ?
17:31 Fort: 00:44:272 (6) - just make this slider have 1 rev arrow
17:31 Fort: 00:44:683 - add triplet here
17:33 Fort: okay just it, cool hitsounding, comboing and patterning i think
17:33 Fort: okay clear
17:33 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610299 Sannen E Gumi Utatan - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron [Normal]]
17:33 Chaoslitz: okk
17:33 Fort: 00:06:669 (1,2) - wat
17:34 Fort: 1/4 pattern in normal
17:34 Fort: ???
17:34 Fort: just change slider 1 slider end to 00:07:080 -
17:34 Fort: sounds better
17:35 Chaoslitz: ok my fault ww
17:35 Fort: 2 hard 2 map normal in this map..... >.<
17:35 Fort: in this song*
17:35 Fort: too much polarize
17:35 Fort: and do the same for same issue
17:36 Chaoslitz: ?
17:36 Chaoslitz: you mean? D:
17:36 Fort: 00:08:313 (3) -
17:36 Fort: 00:09:957 (5) -
17:36 Chaoslitz: ah fixed all then
17:37 Fort: 00:49:203 (5) - kek
17:37 Fort: 00:49:409 - u blank this part?
17:37 Chaoslitz: 00:49:203 (5) - how about 1/2?
17:38 Chaoslitz: oh i will add back notes
17:38 Fort: yeah sounds good
17:38 Fort: 00:54:546 (2) - lol
17:38 Fort: 00:56:190 (2) - hahahaha
17:38 Chaoslitz: ok ;w;w;w;
17:38 Fort: #yourmapping style
17:39 Chaoslitz: :<<
17:39 Fort: honestly i like it
17:39 Fort: but this is normal, so sad for this thing :<<
17:39 Fort: 01:12:217 (4) - yay this one good :D
17:39 Chaoslitz: ok I just change all of these then
17:40 Chaoslitz: :DDD
17:40 Fort: okay sector clear
17:41 Fort: Ranked~
17:41 Chaoslitz: btw
17:41 Chaoslitz: ww
17:41 Fort: umm yes?
17:41 Chaoslitz: do you know how to compress a video ;w;
17:41 Chaoslitz: the file size of video i have is too large D:
17:43 Fort: i dont know
17:43 Fort: cuz im not tv size mapper
17:43 Chaoslitz: ok nevermind then
17:43 Chaoslitz: mission cleared: modding maps
17:43 Fort: i never put video in 2 years
17:43 Chaoslitz: go forum to get your award: pp
17:43 *Chaoslitz runs
17:43 Chaoslitz: :o
17:43 Chaoslitz: i mean ....kds...
17:44 Fort: i want pp pls
17:44 Fort: :>
17:44 Chaoslitz: ;w;
thanks~
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

sukiNathan wrote:

tiny mod ;w;

[Normal]
  1. 01:16:532 (1,1,1) - Could add a tiny bit of distance between these, feels a bit too easy Because this is a normal diff, it will increase the ds ;w;
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:382 (1) - Make it curve like this for vocals yea changed
  2. 01:05:025 (1) - Could somehow modify this to blanket with 01:06:053 (2,3,4) because that is not proposed to be blanket c:
  3. 01:14:476 (7) - Forgot to snap it on tail :c fixed ww
  4. 01:17:354 (2) - NC? okay it will follow the insane diff


[Assassination]
  1. 01:18:998 (1) - Place this in between 01:18:176 (1,2) instead of under 01:18:176 (1) wanna keep as I did the same thing for 01:18:998 (1)
Thanks for mod nathan <333
Starfall9908
Waaaaaai Chaos gave Nacchan a call ^w^ *shoots a star*

[General]
  1. Turn off the widescreen support. You're not making a storyboard
[Normal]

  1. 00:06:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You have a polarity problem here. Lear more about it and how to fix it here. here.
  2. 00:15:710 (3,1) - ^
  3. 00:18:998 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:25:573 (1) - Blanket
  5. 00:43:861 (1) - Is it really okay to end the spinner on a blue tick? O__o
  6. 01:16:532 (1,1,1) - Reverse point why isn't it on a tick? Is that eve okay ;-;
The map is pretty good. I just wondered about the distance snap a few times because some notes are really close to each others. which may make it a bit confusing to people who just started playing osu. You need to be a bit more careful when it comes to polarity. I ran into that problem to in this map. Since you usual make insane diffs so is it really easy to avoid getting in polarity problems but it get's harder on Easy and Normal since you can't make things like streams ;-; You get used to it after being told a few times though.

[Hard]
  1. 00:11:190 (4,2) - Stack the end of (4) with the head of (2).
  2. 00:31:327 (2,3,4) - Polarity.
Hard is well build and it's really good. Btw when making this map were you following the vocal or the background music? (I'm that kind who usually follow the background music, the map goes to hell if I follow the vocal Xd) There wasn't so much to mod here XD

[Assassination]
  1. 00:21:053 (4) - Blanket
  2. 00:58:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice star! ^u^
Why is that diff name so hard to spell? I bet there's a bunch of typos there >o<. This diff is "Typical Chaos" Your mapping style never fails to amaze me.

For the first time so does my mod not end up being a blanket and stack mod (Thanks god).

I was watching Ansatsu Kyoushitsu episode 3 before I modded your map. Still confused if Nagisa is a Boy or a Girl. Let's say He/She is Hideyoshi for now OpO

Edit: I just found this You can get help to get a high quality video here :3

Good luck Chaos and call me if you need me OwO
Kira Dakara
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

nadapan wrote:

Waaaaaai Chaos gave Nacchan a call ^w^ *shoots a star* thanks www

[General]
  1. Turn off the widescreen support. You're not making a storyboard ok fixed
[Normal]

  1. 00:06:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You have a polarity problem here. Lear more about it and how to fix it here. Discussed with Fort before, we think that a polarity is not needed in this parthere.
  2. 00:15:710 (3,1) - ^
  3. 00:18:998 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:25:573 (1) - Blanket fixed
  5. 00:43:861 (1) - Is it really okay to end the spinner on a blue tick? O__o I think there is no problem...?
  6. 01:16:532 (1,1,1) - Reverse point why isn't it on a tick? Is that eve okay ;-; thats following 1/6
The map is pretty good. I just wondered about the distance snap a few times because some notes are really close to each others. which may make it a bit confusing to people who just started playing osu. You need to be a bit more careful when it comes to polarity. I ran into that problem to in this map. Since you usual make insane diffs so is it really easy to avoid getting in polarity problems but it get's harder on Easy and Normal since you can't make things like streams ;-; You get used to it after being told a few times though.

[Hard]
  1. 00:11:190 (4,2) - Stack the end of (4) with the head of (2). ok
  2. 00:31:327 (2,3,4) - Polarity.
I prefer three notes instead owo

Hard is well build and it's really good. Btw when making this map were you following the vocal or the background music? vocal ww (I'm that kind who usually follow the background music, the map goes to hell if I follow the vocal Xd) There wasn't so much to mod here XD

[Assassination]
  1. 00:21:053 (4) - Blanket fixed
  2. 00:58:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice star! ^u^
xD

Why is that diff name so hard to spell? I bet there's a bunch of typos there >o<. This diff is "Typical Chaos" Your mapping style never fails to amaze me. that is assassaasassaasaasaasaassasssination

For the first time so does my mod not end up being a blanket and stack mod (Thanks god).

I was watching Ansatsu Kyoushitsu episode 3 before I modded your map. Still confused if Nagisa is a Boy or a Girl. Let's say He/She is Hideyoshi for now OpO

Edit: I just found this You can get help to get a high quality video here :3

Good luck Chaos and call me if you need me OwO
Thanks nacchan <33

LordGreg wrote:

You could use this video
ah the video contains extra subtitles inside
I think I will find another one
anyway thanks for help :3
Cerulean Veyron
Hello, litz~ Requested via PM :3/

[> General <]
  1. - Add "op" on tags? some people are too lazy to type "opening" in the search bar.
  2. 01:18:998 - You should continue mapping more until the end of the op. Since most anime opening/closing maps are mapped all the way.
  3. - Looks fine!
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:28:039 (5,1) - Since this diff is the easiest in the whole map, i guess you need to reduce slider length. Or remove the spinner and map a part of it.
  2. 00:36:875 (3,4) - You should follow the vocals here mainly, because it sounds more hearable for players than what you're trying to do.
  3. 00:49:820 (6) - Add clap.
  4. 01:00:094 (1) - Probably nazi, but recurve as the same position as 01:00:916 (3) - .
  5. - Seems perfect to me~ great job!
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:11:909 (2,3) - Are you trying to make a double blanket here? or not really making one?
  2. 00:13:039 (1,2) - Swap NC
  3. 00:14:683 (1,2) - ^, ehhh... there are more, so just find them.
  4. 00:25:573 (3,4,5,6) - Not quite symmetric enough, so recorrect?
  5. 00:31:635 (3,4,1) - This is a good triangle, but what a sudden jump. Players would think it's 1/4 beat like the previous notes you've did. Try to decrease the spacing.
  6. 00:35:436 (1,2,1) - Spacing looks unbalanced here, you've used 1.6x and changed another spacing in a sudden. I guess you should make the spacing the same for some perfect triangle.
  7. 00:51:053 (3) - Move to x:136|y:168 to perfect the triple parallel.
  8. 00:52:286 (2) - Weird-curved slider... o_o
  9. 01:05:025 (1) - Try to follow a bit of vocals here, how about removing the reverse and add two circles next to it?
  10. 01:14:683 (6,1,2) - Make a perfect triangle?
  11. - Some weird spacings found, but diff is likely fine.
[> Assassination <]
  1. 00:05:642 - You should map this part, since it's alike Insane. you should make a good rhythm here.
  2. 00:13:039 (4,1) - Imo, you probably need to make a jump here. Sounds intense enough.
  3. 00:24:546 (3,4) - Recorrect parallel? I can see it not perfect.
  4. 00:36:258 (3) - Ctrl + G?
  5. 00:43:861 (1,4) - Swap NC? just suggestion.
  6. 00:49:820 (6) - What does this slider actually follows? don't tell me the background music.
  7. 00:59:683 (1,1) - A jump should be here, like you've done in the previous track.
  8. 01:03:792 (2) - Ctrl + G?
  9. - Doesn't look so hard enough to be an Insane or Hard, and likely Hard+. I think you should make more jumps and a small stream to make the gap between diffs more correct and balanced.

I guess that's all, Good Luck Chaoslitz!
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, litz~ Requested via PM :3/ ~~~

[> General <]
  1. - Add "op" on tags? some people are too lazy to type "opening" in the search bar. ahh I updated and I forgot to add, will add it back later
  2. 01:18:998 - You should continue mapping more until the end of the op. Since most anime opening/closing maps are mapped all the way. I think thats okay
  3. - Looks fine!
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:28:039 (5,1) - Since this diff is the easiest in the whole map, i guess you need to reduce slider length. Or remove the spinner and map a part of it. I think there's no problem here, so I will keep this
  2. 00:36:875 (3,4) - You should follow the vocals here mainly, because it sounds more hearable for players than what you're trying to do.
  3. 00:49:820 (6) - Add clap. added
  4. 01:00:094 (1) - Probably nazi, but recurve as the same position as 01:00:916 (3) - . tried to fix
  5. - Seems perfect to me~ great job!
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:11:909 (2,3) - Are you trying to make a double blanket here? or not really making one? nice, I changed
  2. 00:13:039 (1,2) - Swap NC thats following the vocal so it is suitable imo
  3. 00:14:683 (1,2) - ^, ehhh... there are more, so just find them.
  4. 00:25:573 (3,4,5,6) - Not quite symmetric enough, so recorrect? ok
  5. 00:31:635 (3,4,1) - This is a good triangle, but what a sudden jump. Players would think it's 1/4 beat like the previous notes you've did. Try to decrease the spacing. my fault :xx changed
  6. 00:35:436 (1,2,1) - Spacing looks unbalanced here, you've used 1.6x and changed another spacing in a sudden. I guess you should make the spacing the same for some perfect triangle. fixed
  7. 00:51:053 (3) - Move to x:136|y:168 to perfect the triple parallel. ok
  8. 00:52:286 (2) - Weird-curved slider... o_o tried to fix
  9. 01:05:025 (1) - Try to follow a bit of vocals here, how about removing the reverse and add two circles next to it? that good, changed as what you suggest
  10. 01:14:683 (6,1,2) - Make a perfect triangle? ok
  11. - Some weird spacings found, but diff is likely fine.
[> Assassination <]
  1. 00:05:642 - You should map this part, since it's alike Insane. you should make a good rhythm here. done
  2. 00:13:039 (4,1) - Imo, you probably need to make a jump here. Sounds intense enough. increased the spacing
  3. 00:24:546 (3,4) - Recorrect parallel? I can see it not perfect. ok
  4. 00:36:258 (3) - Ctrl + G? spacing is large after that,so keep
  5. 00:43:861 (1,4) - Swap NC? just suggestion. thats pretty follow the vocal tho c:
  6. 00:49:820 (6) - What does this slider actually follows? don't tell me the background music. yes ;w;, same as Hard diff
  7. 00:59:683 (1,1) - A jump should be here, like you've done in the previous track. ok
  8. 01:03:792 (2) - Ctrl + G? keep the current one
  9. - Doesn't look so hard enough to be an Insane or Hard, and likely Hard+. I think you should make more jumps and a small stream to make the gap between diffs more correct and balanced.

I guess that's all, Good Luck Chaoslitz!
Thanks Veyron >w<
Krimek
Hey, mod as requested :3

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:382 (1) - If you Ctrl + G it, you can see that the slider ends on (x:109|y:62) so I would prefer move 00:05:025 (2) - on the same Y-Line. It would make no difference at the DS, moving '2' to (x:329|y:62).
  2. Suggestion: 00:43:450 (3) - Maybe move it to (x:332|y:48)? You probably know why.
  3. Move 00:46:943 (1) - to (x80|y:96) and make it a bit less curvy (like this) for better DS and to make 00:47:560 (1,2,3) - more linear.
  4. Move 01:11:190 (2) - to (x:356|y:116) for a triangle. Fix DS to 01:11:601 (3,4) - than.
  5. 01:18:998 (2) - Remove it a bit for triangle.
[Hard]
  1. Suggestion: How about blanketing 00:09:032 (3,4) - Example.
  2. 00:33:587 (1,2) - It's hard to read ;; I wouldn't stack it~ The other stacks were okay since there was no break between it.
  3. 00:52:286 (2,3,4) - Improve triangle.
  4. How about moving 00:57:217 (2) - (x:380|y:200) and 00:57:628 (3) - (x:348|108)?
  5. Suggestion: 00:58:245 (4) - Make a (better) triangle~ Fix DS to 00:58:450 (1,2) - than and make the ending of 00:59:272 (3) - stack with 00:58:245 (4) -
  6. 01:06:669 (1) - Improve blanket.
[Assassination]
  1. 00:15:299 (3) - Make it a bit more curvy.
  2. 00:18:587 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:943 (4,1) - Should be (x:170|y:80) if you want a prefect triangle~ Fix upcoming objects than.
  4. 00:41:190 (1) - Try to make the ending of the slider have the same distance to 00:40:368 (4) - as the beginning. Example.
  5. 00:54:957 (6) - Move it a bit upwards.
  6. 00:56:292 (4,5) - Improve stack.
  7. 01:12:217 (6) - Move it to (x:208|y:184) for better triangle.
  8. 01:12:628 (1) - This sounds much better to me, since there has to be a stream.
  9. 01:14:888 (1,2,3) - Move it to (x:154|y:252) to make 01:13:245 (7,9,1,2,3) - linear.
That's pretty much it! Great map, I enjoyed it :)
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Krimek wrote:

Hey, mod as requested :3

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:382 (1) - If you Ctrl + G it, you can see that the slider ends on (x:109|y:62) so I would prefer move 00:05:025 (2) - on the same Y-Line. It would make no difference at the DS, moving '2' to (x:329|y:62).
  2. Suggestion: 00:43:450 (3) - Maybe move it to (x:332|y:48)? You probably know why.
  3. Move 00:46:943 (1) - to (x80|y:96) and make it a bit less curvy (like this) for better DS and to make 00:47:560 (1,2,3) - more linear.
  4. Move 01:11:190 (2) - to (x:356|y:116) for a triangle. Fix DS to 01:11:601 (3,4) - than.
  5. 01:18:998 (2) - Remove it a bit for triangle.
[Hard]
  1. Suggestion: How about blanketing 00:09:032 (3,4) - Example.
  2. 00:33:587 (1,2) - It's hard to read ;; I wouldn't stack it~ The other stacks were okay since there was no break between it.
  3. 00:52:286 (2,3,4) - Improve triangle.
  4. How about moving 00:57:217 (2) - (x:380|y:200) and 00:57:628 (3) - (x:348|108)?
  5. Suggestion: 00:58:245 (4) - Make a (better) triangle~ Fix DS to 00:58:450 (1,2) - than and make the ending of 00:59:272 (3) - stack with 00:58:245 (4) -
  6. 01:06:669 (1) - Improve blanket.
[Assassination]
  1. 00:15:299 (3) - Make it a bit more curvy.
  2. 00:18:587 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:943 (4,1) - Should be (x:170|y:80) if you want a prefect triangle~ Fix upcoming objects than.
  4. 00:41:190 (1) - Try to make the ending of the slider have the same distance to 00:40:368 (4) - as the beginning. Example.
  5. 00:54:957 (6) - Move it a bit upwards.
  6. 00:56:292 (4,5) - Improve stack.
  7. 01:12:217 (6) - Move it to (x:208|y:184) for better triangle.
  8. 01:12:628 (1) - This sounds much better to me, since there has to be a stream. keep it I think the current one is better
  9. 01:14:888 (1,2,3) - Move it to (x:154|y:252) to make 01:13:245 (7,9,1,2,3) - linear.
That's pretty much it! Great map, I enjoyed it :)
others are all fixed :3 thanks >w<
Nyukai
Yo, as we did M4M.

[General]

  1. I've checked many official websites (amazon.co.jp, iTunes, and other japanese stuff) and I think we're a bit mistaken with title. It's 青春サツバツ論(TVサイズ) without any spaces. However, I'm not sure about Romanised Title, I mean, I don't know if it's (TV size), (TVsize)... So well, I'd ask to someone experienced with japanese metadata, but at least it has TV size on title, I think.
  2. 00:32:149 - Here should be another red point, didn't you notice here is like should be another stanza?
  3. Combo colours are not too bad buuuut I don't think green colour fits with the BG, I can't see anything green. What about a pink colour as we can see it on the BG?
  4. Song is not too slow, why didn't you added an Easy diff? It's a good mapset but it could be better imo ><
  5. You could also map all because 1:18 still feels really short for a TV size if you ask me.
[Normal]

  1. 00:09:957 (5,1) - Swap NC for a consistency with stanza, will look better.
  2. 00:48:587 (4) - Ctrl+H maybe for a better flow? You will need to move it to fix spacing.
  3. 00:50:231 (1) - I think I miss a finish hitsound here.
  4. 00:55:162 (1) - This NC is unnecessary according to the current consistency, remove it.
  5. 01:02:971 (6) - Missing clap?
  6. 01:08:313 (1) - Same as before, this NC is unnecessary.
  7. 01:17:354 (1,1) - NC spam is unnecessary as well imo, same in other diffs if it's the case o3o
[Hard]

  1. 00:08:724 (2,3) - Lol this is really unexpected, sudden, and too much for a Hard imo, just add Ctrl+G here 00:09:032 (3) - xD
  2. 00:24:957 (1,3) - I think swapping NC would fit better.
  3. 00:43:861 (5,1) - Same.
[Assassination]

  1. Nothing here.

Not bad but still need some improvements =w=
neonat
Just a quick look to check on hitsounds

Assassination

00:03:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the volume for this section could be louder, can't really hear the objects
00:06:669 (1) - finish on slider end
00:08:313 (1,1) - finish on slider ends
00:18:998 (3) - finish on slider start
00:20:642 (3) - ^
00:25:573 (1,3,1) - ^
00:36:258 (3) - ^
00:50:231 (1) - ^
00:56:806 (1) - ^
01:13:245 (4) - soft finish on slider start instead of the drum hitsound

Apply for all difficulties
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Inyuschan wrote:

Yo, as we did M4M.

[General]

  1. I've checked many official websites (amazon.co.jp, iTunes, and other japanese stuff) and I think we're a bit mistaken with title. It's 青春サツバツ論(TVサイズ) without any spaces. However, I'm not sure about Romanised Title, I mean, I don't know if it's (TV size), (TVsize)... So well, I'd ask to someone experienced with japanese metadata, but at least it has TV size on title, I think. Fixed the title, and for the romanised, I will add (TV size) first
  2. 00:32:149 - Here should be another red point, didn't you notice here is like should be another stanza? added :33
  3. Combo colours are not too bad buuuut I don't think green colour fits with the BG, I can't see anything green. What about a pink colour as we can see it on the BG? The green colour is appeared in here xD
  4. Song is not too slow, why didn't you added an Easy diff? It's a good mapset but it could be better imo >< maybe, but I am lazy :c
  5. You could also map all because 1:18 still feels really short for a TV size if you ask me. It is fine for me tho o3o
[Normal]

  1. 00:09:957 (5,1) - Swap NC for a consistency with stanza, will look better. fixed
  2. 00:48:587 (4) - Ctrl+H maybe for a better flow? You will need to move it to fix spacing. fixed
  3. 00:50:231 (1) - I think I miss a finish hitsound here. added
  4. 00:55:162 (1) - This NC is unnecessary according to the current consistency, remove it. ok
  5. 01:02:971 (6) - Missing clap? added
  6. 01:08:313 (1) - Same as before, this NC is unnecessary. ok
  7. 01:17:354 (1,1) - NC spam is unnecessary as well imo, same in other diffs if it's the case o3o okok owo
[Hard]

  1. 00:08:724 (2,3) - Lol this is really unexpected, sudden, and too much for a Hard imo, just add Ctrl+G here 00:09:032 (3) - xD ahh the blanket, fixed
  2. 00:24:957 (1,3) - I think swapping NC would fit better. fixed
  3. 00:43:861 (5,1) - Same.fixed
[Assassination]

  1. Nothing here.

Not bad but still need some improvements =w=

neonat wrote:

Just a quick look to check on hitsounds

Assassination

00:03:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the volume for this section could be louder, can't really hear the objects increased to 50%
00:06:669 (1) - finish on slider end I think keeping it without any hitsound is better for me
00:08:313 (1,1) - finish on slider ends ^
00:18:998 (3) - finish on slider start added
00:20:642 (3) - ^added
00:25:573 (1,3,1) - ^ using whistle here is better o3o
00:36:258 (3) - ^ added
00:50:231 (1) - ^ added
00:56:806 (1) - ^ added
01:13:245 (4) - soft finish on slider start instead of the drum hitsound changed

Apply for all difficulties
Thanks for mod >~<
Starfall9908
Okay. As promised I will now mod Easy :3

[Easy]
  1. Turn off the widescreen support
  2. 00:08:313 (3,4,1) - The player will think that You'll tap (1) first then (4) if it's like that. (1) is loser to the slider end of (3) than (4).
  3. 00:14:888 (2) - bow this a little bit.

lol this was all I found ;-;

Goddamn you Koro-sensei stop moving so freaking fast
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

nadapan wrote:

Okay. As promised I will now mod Easy :3

[Easy]
  1. Turn off the widescreen support
  2. 00:08:313 (3,4,1) - The player will think that You'll tap (1) first then (4) if it's like that. (1) is loser to the slider end of (3) than (4).
  3. 00:14:888 (2) - bow this a little bit.

lol this was all I found ;-;

Goddamn you Koro-sensei stop moving so freaking fast
all fixed xDD
Setsurei

[Easy]
00:18:998 (1) - blanket a bit off
00:33:792 (3) - a 1/1 slider that starts 00:33:587 - and ends 00:33:998 - ; also to not make confusion, change the polarity for next object a slider starts here 00:34:409 - and ends 00:35:025 - (or you want a 1/1 slider that ends 00:34:820 - , and keep 00:35:025 - as hitcircle)
[Normal]
00:10:676 (2) - curve the opposite direction much flow like. flip horizontal, and rotate 40° clockwise, and then move to 384|312
00:14:066 (3) - rotate 15° anti clockwise, move to 212|284
00:36:875 (3) - shift it to 00:37:080 - ?
00:41:190 (4) - change this to slider, that ends 00:41:806 -
[Hard]
00:07:902 (4) - curve this up, to blanket 00:07:388 (3) -
00:25:984 (2) - fix stack
00:34:923 (5) - ^
00:36:258 (2) - rotate 56° anti clockwise selection centre, to blanket 00:36:875 (1) -
00:38:210 (6) - fix stack
00:46:018 (8) - ^
00:49:306 (3,1) - ^
00:52:902 (4) - rotate 40° anti clockwise selection centre

good luck
Fikarghifar
I wonder why this beatmap not submited?
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Fikarghifar wrote:

I wonder why this beatmap not submited?
submited? .-.

or if you mean rank
Fikarghifar
Yeah, maybe that I mean. I think this beatmap is great. I hope it will be a "qualified" beatmap, amin
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Fikarghifar wrote:

Yeah, maybe that I mean. I think this beatmap is great. I hope it will be a "qualified" beatmap, amin
may be :33
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Setsurei wrote:


[Easy]
00:18:998 (1) - blanket a bit off
00:33:792 (3) - a 1/1 slider that starts 00:33:587 - and ends 00:33:998 - ; also to not make confusion, change the polarity for next object a slider starts here 00:34:409 - and ends 00:35:025 - (or you want a 1/1 slider that ends 00:34:820 - , and keep 00:35:025 - as hitcircle) i did the same thing in normal diff, so I wanna keep the rhythm easier in easy diff, so I prefer the current one
[Normal]
00:10:676 (2) - curve the opposite direction much flow like. flip horizontal, and rotate 40° clockwise, and then move to 384|312 fixed
00:14:066 (3) - rotate 15° anti clockwise, move to 212|284 keep
00:36:875 (3) - shift it to 00:37:080 - ? keep constant as 00:33:382 (2,3) -
00:41:190 (4) - change this to slider, that ends 00:41:806 - I use a note instead because 00:38:724 (1,2,3,4) with 4 sliders will be difficult for players to hold their cursor as it is a normal diff
[Hard]
00:07:902 (4) - curve this up, to blanket 00:07:388 (3) - keep instead
00:25:984 (2) - fix stack fixed
00:34:923 (5) - ^ fixed
00:36:258 (2) - rotate 56° anti clockwise selection centre, to blanket 00:36:875 (1) - the flow will be messed up x.x
00:38:210 (6) - fix stack fixed
00:46:018 (8) - ^ fixed
00:49:306 (3,1) - ^ fixed
00:52:902 (4) - rotate 40° anti clockwise selection centre same as 00:36:258 (2)

good luck[/color]
thanks >w<
zj0924
Hi!M4M.From your queue.May I speak Chinese?If I can't express clearly in sp.I may use chinese XD
[General]
  1. It seems that the song is very hard to 下节奏XD,In my opinion,there's some rhythm problems in your map

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:765 (1) - suggest to use a spinner?instead of the vocal?same to normal
  2. 00:06:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - polarity?this isn't normal and so few notes can‘t express 1/4 beat clearly really confused for easy player to play 00:07:902 (2) - ,drag to the white tick plz
  3. 01:14:888 (3) - don't use this kind of reverse1/2 sliders in easy,really confusing for easy player

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:834 (5) -should map this
  2. 00:26:190 (2) - curve a bit
  3. 00:40:368 (3) - ^
  4. 00:15:710 (3) - plz tell me why on the blue tick not white tick?
  5. 00:18:998 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:22:286 (1,2) - polarity?
  7. 00:26:806 (3) - try this?
  8. From 00:32:149 (1) - to 00:37:697 (4) - is the main problem in your map imo,It seems that you want to follow with both instrument and vocal,but it is really odd to play,suggest follow instrument00:33:382 (2,3) - and00:36:669 (2,3,4,5) - This mehtod may be better imo?
    or some harder
    and I suggest the rhythm here -
  9. 01:09:957 (1,2) - a better flow?
  10. 01:10:779 (2,3) - suggest curve a bit
  11. 01:11:601 (3) - suggest
  12. 01:14:888 (3) - I don't think it's good to use reverse at this time just common slider is better imo

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:436 (4) - add a spinner?
  2. 00:13:655 (3) - ctrl+g better flow?
  3. 00:18:587 (8) - suggest
  4. 00:32:971 (2) - I can't understand this slider
  5. From 00:32:149 (1) - to 00:37:697 (4) suggest follow instrument,it's hard to map vocal here
    http://puu.sh/grxf4/a256aec964.jpg
  6. 00:49:614 (4) - I don't think this fit
  7. 01:07:491 (3) - a little sudden,try

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:642 (1,2) - respectively ctrl+g flows better
  2. 00:07:286 (4) -rhythm doesn't fit imo suggest
same as 00:08:929 (3) - 00:10:573 (3) - you need a slider00:15:710 (4) - curve it a bit
00:17:765 (6,1,2) - distance confusing could you tell why are they same the beat is different though
00:43:655 (4,1,2,3) - bad flow
00:45:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest not stack like previous00:45:916 (6) -that's right rhythm imo
It's hard to master this song of rhythm imo,Well done in flow and spacing but still need to improve the rhythm I think.GL :)
A9M
Hi m4m from your queue

Easy
00:18:176 (5,1) - Improve blanket?
00:28:861 (1) - spinner end →00:30:505

Normal
00:28:861 (1) - spinner end →00:30:505

Hard
00:11:601 (1) - change slider1/2
00:11:909 (2,3) - Improve blanket
00:31:635 (3,1) - blanket
00:52:286 (2,4) - ^
00:46:840 - add green line volume5%
00:49:306 (3,4) - too close
01:17:354 (2) - remove NC

Assassination
00:07:388 (5) - suggestion http://puu.sh/gvybH/841a059ff0.jpg
00:18:176 (1,2) - Improve blanket
00:18:587 (2,3) - ^
00:46:840 - add green line volume5%
00:46:532 (1,3) - blanket

good luck >w<
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

zj0924 wrote:

Hi!M4M.From your queue.May I speak Chinese?If I can't express clearly in sp.I may use chinese XD
[General]
  1. It seems that the song is very hard to 下节奏XD,In my opinion,there's some rhythm problems in your map yea ;w;

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:765 (1) - suggest to use a spinner?instead of the vocal?same to normal nah I think slider is more suitable
  2. 00:06:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - polarity?this isn't normal and so few notes can‘t express 1/4 beat clearly really confused for easy player to play 00:07:902 (2) - ,drag to the white tick plz I am following the bgm, so I think it is fine o3o
  3. 01:14:888 (3) - don't use this kind of reverse1/2 sliders in easy,really confusing for easy player ok~

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:834 (5) -should map this
    keep
  2. 00:26:190 (2) - curve a bit
    keep
  3. 00:40:368 (3) - ^
    fixed
  4. 00:15:710 (3) - plz tell me why on the blue tick not white tick? that following vocal
  5. 00:18:998 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:22:286 (1,2) - polarity?
    nah it is fine
  7. 00:26:806 (3) - try this?
  8. From 00:32:149 (1) - to 00:37:697 (4) - is the main problem in your map imo,It seems that you want to follow with both instrument and vocal,but it is really odd to play,suggest follow instrument00:33:382 (2,3) - and00:36:669 (2,3,4,5) - This mehtod may be better imo?
    or some harder
    and I suggest the rhythm here -
    actually I follow instrument here, just leave this first
  9. 01:09:957 (1,2) - a better flow?
    fixed
  10. 01:10:779 (2,3) - suggest curve a bit
  11. 01:11:601 (3) - suggest
    i used a note
  12. 01:14:888 (3) - I don't think it's good to use reverse at this time just common slider is better imo
it is okay since it is following vocal

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:436 (4) - add a spinner? nope o3o
  2. 00:13:655 (3) - ctrl+g better flow? it will break the constant ds
  3. 00:18:587 (8) - suggest
    keep
  4. 00:32:971 (2) - I can't understand this slider its fine D:
  5. From 00:32:149 (1) - to 00:37:697 (4) suggest follow instrument,it's hard to map vocal here
    http://puu.sh/grxf4/a256aec964.jpg
  6. 00:49:614 (4) - I don't think this fit same as insane
  7. 01:07:491 (3) - a little sudden,try
keep constant o3o

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:642 (1,2) - respectively ctrl+g flows better
  2. 00:07:286 (4) -rhythm doesn't fit imo suggest
same as 00:08:929 (3) - 00:10:573 (3) - you need a slider fixed00:15:710 (4) - curve it a bit
fixed00:17:765 (6,1,2) - distance confusing could you tell why are they same the beat is different though
fixed00:43:655 (4,1,2,3) - bad flow
00:45:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest not stack like previous00:45:916 (6) -that's right rhythm imo
It's hard to master this song of rhythm imo,Well done in flow and spacing but still need to improve the rhythm I think.GL :)

NeK0Nyqn wrote:

Hi m4m from your queue

Easy
00:18:176 (5,1) - Improve blanket? fixed
00:28:861 (1) - spinner end →00:30:505 easy and normal diff needs time to recovery after a spinner, so it cannot be too close to next note

Normal
00:28:861 (1) - spinner end →00:30:505

Hard
00:11:601 (1) - change slider1/2 note works better
00:11:909 (2,3) - Improve blanket fixed
00:31:635 (3,1) - blanket
00:52:286 (2,4) - ^
00:46:840 - add green line volume5%
00:49:306 (3,4) - too close fixed
01:17:354 (2) - remove NC NC is needed i think

Assassination
00:07:388 (5) - suggestion http://puu.sh/gvybH/841a059ff0.jpgfixed
00:18:176 (1,2) - Improve blanket
00:18:587 (2,3) - ^fixed
00:46:840 - add green line volume5%
00:46:532 (1,3) - blanket

good luck >w<
thanks~~~~~~~~~~~
Gaia
-w-
23:54 Chaoslitz: baka ;w;
23:54 Gaia: lewd-kun ;w;
23:54 Chaoslitz: D:
23:54 Chaoslitz: :<
23:55 Chaoslitz: tmr is the last the of my exam :3
23:55 Chaoslitz: \:D\ \:D| |:D| |:D/ /:D/
23:55 Gaia: O:
23:55 Chaoslitz: :3
23:55 Gaia: GOGOGOGO
23:56 Gaia: why are u playing osu lol
23:57 Gaia: oh my
23:57 Gaia: are u busy now?
23:59 Chaoslitz: nop
23:59 Chaoslitz: osu + study at same time \:D/
23:59 Gaia: =w=
23:59 Gaia: WANNA IRC
23:59 Gaia: hue hue
00:00 Gaia: i found unrankable already
00:00 Gaia: =.=
00:01 Chaoslitz: D:?
00:01 Chaoslitz: where ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;;w;w;w;
00:01 *Chaoslitz cries
00:01 Gaia: =w=
00:01 Gaia: wanna do it?
00:01 Chaoslitz: yea :D
00:01 Gaia: okie
00:01 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651877 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron(TV size) [Easy]]
00:01 Gaia: ive only looked at easy too lol
00:02 Gaia: 00:28:861 (1,1) - 00:43:861 (1,1) - not enough recovery time
00:02 Gaia: you need 1500 ms
00:02 Gaia: which is 1 measure
00:02 Chaoslitz: 00:31:327 (1) delete this? :3
00:02 Chaoslitz: 00:31:327 (1)
00:03 Gaia: yeah it works
00:03 Gaia: 00:46:943 (1) - tho
00:03 Chaoslitz: i am think if i end the spinner in 00:45:299 instead
00:03 Gaia: 00:43:861 (1) - you could end it at 00:45:299
00:03 Gaia: or
00:03 Gaia: u could map it out
00:03 Gaia: XD
00:03 Chaoslitz: 00:45:299 :3
00:04 Gaia: oky
00:04 Gaia: yeah thats it for unrankable
00:04 Chaoslitz: ok ww
00:04 Gaia: although
00:04 Chaoslitz: 1500 ms is? o3o
00:04 Gaia: 00:06:669 (1,2) - this bugs me a lot
00:04 Gaia: this rhythm i mean
00:04 Gaia: 1500ms = 1 measure
00:05 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF7Ek/6ef8d99596.jpg
00:05 Gaia: 2 big white ticks
00:05 Chaoslitz: :o ok
00:05 Gaia: anyway
00:05 Gaia: 00:06:669 (1,2,3,4) - etc
00:05 Gaia: land on blue tick then white then blue
00:05 Gaia: is really really really bad ;w;
00:05 Chaoslitz: i should end it in white tick?
00:06 Chaoslitz: ;w;
00:06 Gaia: yeah imo
00:06 Gaia: especially since this is easy diff
00:06 Chaoslitz: ok ;w;w;
00:06 Gaia: it screws players over
00:06 Chaoslitz: alright :3
00:07 Chaoslitz: ok no more blue ticks o/
00:07 Gaia: ok o/
00:07 Gaia: now
00:07 Gaia: 01:16:532 (1,2,3,4) - too pls
00:09 Chaoslitz: waitt
00:09 Gaia: while you're at it fix the rhythms in normal too pls
00:09 Gaia: =3=
00:09 Chaoslitz: normal still cant? D:
00:10 Gaia: tbh
00:10 Gaia: even insane shouldnt have it =w=
00:10 Gaia: but
00:10 Gaia: in normal i suggest this
00:10 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF7RS/0bfb45f77f.jpg
00:10 Gaia: put it on reverse then its no problem :3/
00:11 Chaoslitz: where? o3o
00:11 Chaoslitz: ah and easy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902285
00:11 Gaia: 00:06:669 (1) -
00:11 Gaia: ok good
00:13 Chaoslitz: wait i still dont get in D:
00:13 Chaoslitz: in normal
00:13 Gaia: D:?
00:13 Gaia: hm?
00:13 Chaoslitz: waittt >w<
00:13 Gaia: okok
00:14 Chaoslitz: but should i stack 2 and 3?
00:14 Gaia: ?
00:14 Chaoslitz: your puush
00:15 Gaia: i wouldnt
00:15 Chaoslitz: oh ok
00:16 Gaia: something like this http://puu.sh/gF859/63a301521e.jpg
00:16 Gaia: ignore the 4
00:16 Gaia: XD
00:16 Chaoslitz: xd
00:19 Chaoslitz: ok done xd
00:19 Gaia: xd
00:19 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902295
00:19 Chaoslitz: but how about 00:14:066 (3,3) ?
00:19 Chaoslitz: 00:14:066 (3,3) -
00:20 Gaia: ok good
00:20 Gaia: and hm
00:20 Gaia: reverse http://puu.sh/gF8gg/bcc1a9dbbb.jpg
00:21 Gaia: 00:18:998 (1,2) - this might be fine actually
00:21 Chaoslitz: ok
00:21 Gaia: you could make them into reverses too though
00:21 Gaia: that'd probably be for the best
00:26 Chaoslitz: yea
00:26 Chaoslitz: all fixed with reverse
00:26 Gaia: okie
00:26 Chaoslitz: :3
00:27 Gaia: =w=
00:27 Gaia: ok update
00:27 Gaia: then poke me again
00:28 Gaia: i have to brb 10 mins
00:28 Chaoslitz: ok :3~
00:30 Chaoslitz: done~
00:38 Gaia: w
00:38 Chaoslitz: xd
00:38 Gaia: ok lemme redl
00:38 Chaoslitz: okok
00:38 Gaia: np for myself
00:38 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651877 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron(TV size) [Easy]]
00:39 Chaoslitz: ww
00:39 Gaia: ;~;
00:39 Chaoslitz: D:?
00:39 Gaia: i hope the soma anime will be good
00:39 Gaia: ;~;
00:40 Chaoslitz: soma?
00:40 Gaia: i love ansatsu kyoshitsu
00:40 Gaia: but the manga is better than anime imo
00:40 Gaia: D:
00:40 Chaoslitz: the latest episode
00:40 Chaoslitz: manga
00:40 Chaoslitz: DDDDDD:
00:40 Gaia: Dx
00:41 Chaoslitz: wanna cry ;w;
00:41 Gaia: ;w;
00:41 Chaoslitz: OAOAOAOAOAO
00:41 Gaia: i shipped her with nagisa lol
00:41 Gaia: DDDDX
00:42 Chaoslitz: that time when she showed off her
00:42 Chaoslitz: tentacles
00:42 *Chaoslitz cries
00:42 Gaia: ;ww;
00:42 Gaia: her face
00:43 Gaia: ;wwwww;
00:43 Gaia: rape face op
00:43 Chaoslitz: QAQ
00:43 Chaoslitz: nuu ;~;
00:43 Gaia: ;~;
00:43 Gaia: anyways
00:43 Gaia: back to map
00:43 Gaia: LOL
00:43 Chaoslitz: ok ww
00:43 Gaia: easy not much problems
00:43 Gaia: just
00:43 Gaia: stop going in circles
00:43 Gaia: XDDDD
00:43 Chaoslitz: plz ww
00:44 Chaoslitz: 15 circles :p
00:44 Chaoslitz: btw
00:44 Chaoslitz: 01:12:217 (4) -
00:44 Gaia: 00:13:039 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this is kinda long
00:44 Gaia: hm?
00:44 Chaoslitz: it is rankable for easy?
00:44 Gaia: yes
00:44 Chaoslitz: ok
00:44 Chaoslitz: and you mean? owo
00:45 Gaia: its fine
00:45 Gaia: lol
00:45 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610299 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron(TV size) [Normal]]
00:45 Chaoslitz: 00:13:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this one fine?
00:45 Gaia: 00:13:039 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this slider train
00:45 Gaia: probably needs a break in here
00:45 Gaia: like maybe replace 00:14:888 (4) - into 2 circles
00:46 Chaoslitz: or end slider in 00:15:710 - ?
00:46 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF9dU/413c994bac.jpg
00:46 Gaia: up to u
00:46 Gaia: but im just saying the player needs to rest
00:46 Gaia: XD
00:47 Chaoslitz: ok :3
00:49 Gaia: btw
00:49 Gaia: how are u doing ur ncing
00:49 Gaia: it looks pretty inconsistent to me
00:49 Gaia: :>
00:50 Chaoslitz: vocal D:
00:50 Gaia: :V
00:50 Chaoslitz: ;w;?
00:50 Gaia: nothing i just dont do it like that usually lol
00:51 Chaoslitz: ok ;w;
00:51 Gaia: 00:16:532 (1,2) - do this less often
00:51 Gaia: what i meant when i said circle flow
00:51 Chaoslitz: normal?
00:51 Gaia: yeah
00:51 Gaia: it looks boring ;_;
00:52 Chaoslitz: ;w;
00:52 Chaoslitz: leave it now or?
00:52 Gaia: its fine
00:52 Gaia: but for future maps
00:52 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF9qO/69c9ed3cd8.jpg
00:52 Chaoslitz: :D
00:52 Chaoslitz: ok
00:52 Gaia: yay not a circle p/
00:52 Gaia: o/
00:52 Chaoslitz: xd
00:52 Chaoslitz: circle
00:53 Chaoslitz: for
00:53 Chaoslitz: the
00:53 Chaoslitz: lose
00:53 Gaia: =w=
00:53 Chaoslitz: .-.
00:53 Gaia: 00:40:368 (3) - curve other way pls :D
00:53 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF9tA/e04764d45f.jpg
00:53 Chaoslitz: ok :3
00:54 Gaia: 01:13:245 (1) - inconsistent spacing
00:54 Gaia: and while you're at it change the pattern too
00:55 Chaoslitz: oh thanks ;w;w;w;
00:55 Gaia: maybe like this
00:55 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gF9yg/c35f162776.jpg
00:57 Chaoslitz: i will keep the current one i think owo
00:57 Gaia: owo
00:57 Gaia: ok
00:57 Chaoslitz: ~
00:57 Gaia: ok hard now
00:57 Chaoslitz: ok
00:58 Gaia: 00:05:436 (4,1) - u really shouldnt leave these unmapped imo
00:58 Gaia: cuz its a break but people clearly hear theres stuff in the bg
00:59 Chaoslitz: ah becuase
00:59 Chaoslitz: i did it in the insane diff
00:59 Chaoslitz: but not this
00:59 Gaia: 00:11:601 (1,2) - you know what to do =3=
01:00 Gaia: 00:14:477 - add circle here, there's drum sound
01:00 Gaia: 00:15:710 (4) - ^
01:00 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902369?
01:00 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902369
01:00 Gaia: yupyup
01:01 Chaoslitz: ok done ww
01:01 Gaia: 00:16:943 - circle here too maybe
01:01 Chaoslitz: ah and i change clap to the circle
01:01 Chaoslitz: ok~
01:01 Gaia: 00:18:176 (7) - wat is this spacing
01:02 Chaoslitz: ?
01:02 Gaia: werent u using 1.3x ds?
01:02 Gaia: or 1.2
01:02 Gaia: or i dont even know
01:02 Gaia: ==
01:02 Chaoslitz: wait
01:02 Chaoslitz: hard need to ? DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:
01:03 Gaia: yeah
01:03 Gaia: ....
01:03 Gaia: is this ur first time mapping hard
01:03 Gaia: or something
01:03 Chaoslitz: ..
01:03 Chaoslitz: yes .-.
01:03 Gaia: =3=
01:03 Gaia: ..
01:03 Gaia: u need to
01:03 Chaoslitz: all hard by GD
01:03 Gaia: use DS
01:03 Chaoslitz: anyway i chnage to 1.3
01:03 Chaoslitz: that circle
01:03 Gaia: well
01:04 Gaia: you're guna have to redo this diff
01:04 Gaia: and fix every non-jump into 1.3x ds
01:04 Chaoslitz: ok wait me ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;
01:04 Gaia: wait
01:04 Gaia: do it later
01:04 Gaia: im gunna keep modding
01:04 Gaia: u fix ds later
01:04 Gaia: =3=
01:04 Chaoslitz: ok OAO
01:04 Chaoslitz: 00:05:025 (2,3,4) -
01:05 Chaoslitz: this need to? D:
01:05 Chaoslitz: 1.3 for this is just
01:05 Chaoslitz: weird
01:05 Gaia: 00:22:902 (3) - 00:24:546 (3) - consider making into reverse?
01:05 Gaia: oh
01:05 Gaia: u changed sv
01:05 Gaia: thats why
01:05 Gaia: that's fine
01:05 Gaia: the hard should have equal distance
01:05 Chaoslitz: ?
01:05 Chaoslitz: you mean?
01:05 Gaia: but because you changed sv
01:05 Gaia: ds changes as well
01:06 Chaoslitz: ok
01:06 Gaia: but just make it the same distance apart and its ok
01:06 Gaia: because
01:06 Gaia: 00:05:231 (3,4) -
01:06 Gaia: is the same distance as 00:06:669 (1,2) -
01:06 Gaia: but the 2nd one is 1.3x ds
01:06 Gaia: its cuz u sped up thats why
01:07 Gaia: so in the kiai parts use 1.0x ds
01:07 Chaoslitz: ok
01:08 Gaia: 00:35:025 - circle
01:08 Gaia: 00:38:210 (6) - ^
01:08 Gaia: 00:49:409
01:09 Chaoslitz: added
01:09 Gaia: alright
01:09 Gaia: so just fix distance in this hard
01:09 Gaia: and ill take a look later
01:09 Chaoslitz: ok :>
01:09 Gaia: insane now
01:10 Gaia: 00:14:066 (4) - circle after
01:10 Gaia: 00:15:710 (4) - ^
01:10 Gaia: 00:34:614 (3,4) -
01:11 Gaia: 00:38:210 (5) -
01:12 Gaia: oh btw for al diffs
01:12 Gaia: 01:19:820 - consider a circle here
01:13 Chaoslitz: i dont think it is needed D:
01:13 Gaia: u can look at all the ranked maps with an outro
01:13 Gaia: most if not al have that last note mapped
01:13 Gaia: :V
01:14 Chaoslitz: ok then owo
01:14 Chaoslitz: lemme fix those ds first OAO
01:14 Gaia: 01:00:916 (3,1) - do u like this overlap?
01:15 Chaoslitz: i think it is okk...(?
01:15 Gaia: =3=
01:15 Gaia: well
01:16 Gaia: it overlaps the sliderend a bit much
01:16 Gaia: so try to avoid it
01:16 Chaoslitz: lemme try
01:16 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gFagJ/e952c50bdf.jpg
01:16 Gaia: this would look great though
01:16 Gaia: but
01:16 Gaia: ur slider isnt long enough to do that
01:16 Chaoslitz: ok moved
01:17 Gaia: 01:06:669 (1,2,3) - this slider pattern..
01:17 Gaia: u can do better than this!!
01:18 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gFalc/bd4b5eacd5.jpg
01:18 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902398 ? :3
01:18 Gaia: maybe something like that
01:18 Chaoslitz: oh wow
01:18 Gaia: hmm
01:18 Gaia: well
01:18 Gaia: that could work too
01:19 Gaia: anyway
01:19 Gaia: thats about it
01:19 Gaia: fix ds in hard
01:19 Gaia: get like 1-2 mods on it
01:19 Gaia: then poke me
01:20 Gaia: hard and insane *
01:20 Gaia: easier diffs look okey
01:20 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2902404
01:20 Chaoslitz: ok :3
01:20 Gaia: thats good too
01:20 Gaia: w
01:20 Chaoslitz: ww
01:21 Gaia: ok
01:21 Gaia: time to post log then sleep
01:21 Gaia: o///

see u in a few mods =w=
Keada

  • Assassination

  1. 00:44:273 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I see different spacing in this stream D: try to make a slider and click ctrl+shift+F on it instead and you'll get a nice stream :>
    not much else to say on this diff :D its well made! :3 Good job!

Really short mod ;w; im sorry D: but this map is too good. :D
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