lol please... as always!!
when i hear manuxz name, then it must be a spanish song. but my friend told me that this is a french. welp x.x
[Platter]
00:00:270 (1,2) - hmmm personally. as beginning of the song, i prefer to have a low amount on their distance
00:02:513 (5) - maybe straighten this slider to left?
00:03:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - heeeeeh i don't think the music supports this 1/4 stream well, plus you add a HDash on (7) which make it heavy to notice cause of the clap sounds you add on every notes on stream. this is just doesn't go well with the music at all
00:04:981 (3) - x:368 to balance the movement
00:05:879 (5,6) - hmm i prefer to make a two 1/1 slider here. as well as 00:09:468 (4,5)
00:13:058 (4) - change it to 1/1 slider with reverse? i still hear a little beat at 00:13:507 and i guess this should deserves to have a fruit here
00:20:237 (1,2) - slightly reduce the distance here
00:25:397 (7) - x:192?
00:28:759 (3,4) - lower the distance pls. i don't see why there's a jump here. and also remove the finish on (4) cz there's nothing to do with the song it self
00:32:344 (3,4) - same as above. hmmm ok this goes apply to the rest pattern which have the same issue like this. this will reduce the total of HDash on this diff which i can say it's too much for platter
00:35:033 (2,3) - slightly reduce the dictance here
00:40:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this antiflow is ughhh... please change it to like this
http://puu.sh/d9K2J.jpg00:44:443 (3,4) - remove the HDash here
00:48:251 (2,3) - don't you think the distance here too far?
00:48:923 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - i don't understand the way you mapping this part and what you exactly follow. i mean the placement here, they're doesn't interpret the song well. considering replacement this part and make it simple with using general spacing and no HDash shown here
00:54:301 (2,3) - possibly a good spot for a HDash owo
00:54:525 (3,4,5) - reduce the spacing each of them
00:56:765 (2,4,6) - move them to the right by 16 points of x axis. just want to say that the distance of 00:56:093 (1,2) is quite far reminding the previous note is a HDash
00:57:885 (1) - remove finish
00:59:006 (4,1) - an another same as 00:32:344 (3,4) hueeee
01:04:159 (2,3) - not yet at this level, these anti flow isn't good. the main problem is the distance you put between 01:03:263 (1,2) is quite high which cause the flow here is completely broken. considering change the pattern more like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/229035401:10:426 (1) - add finish here? nah from this time you can igrone what i suggest on 00:32:344 (3,4) since this is on kiai. even tho im still highly suggest not to igrone, but the plays here isn't that bad if compared with the part on 00:32:344 (3,4)
01:12:221 (1) - finish here as well
01:13:567 (5,6) - x:160, x:32?
01:14:016 (1) - remove the clap on tail
01:16:259 (2,3,4,5) - recude their distance of each note a bit
01:22:092 (1,2,1) - awww this pattern is hurtful x.x
01:24:785 (1) - add finish here like you did on every big stanza?
01:31:066 (3,4,5) - just remove the finish sound and the HDash and change it to a regular pattern
01:39:143 (1,2) - make the distance same as 01:37:348 (1,2) for consistency
[Rain]
00:02:513 (5) - no clap on tail?
00:03:186 (1,2) - hmmm i prefer to change it to normal sampleset because i find the clap on normal sampleset more softer and not so loud
00:22:929 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ummm well. i hate this and ppl will hate this and you should know why orz
00:29:207 (1) - try x:328?
00:44:443 (1,2) - the movement could be better if you place them on right instead
00:50:716 (1,2) - you can add more distance here to emphasize a high pitch'ed vocal at 00:51:388 (2). try this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2290440. there i keep the distance between 00:50:716 (1,2,3) balance as possible
00:53:740 (3) - woops. nazi but better to minimalize the distance here for a better flow
00:56:765 (2,3) - change it to a normal 1/2 pattern instead. a combo triple here is kinda awkward to play
00:57:885 (1,2,3) - more distance pls
01:00:350 (2,3,4) - here as well
01:01:470 (1,2,3) - imo this part need movement and distance. try this pattern maybe?
http://puu.sh/d9MS5.jpg01:02:814 (3,1) - you can add a HDash here to emphasize the finisher
01:10:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - well im not against this kind of pattern. but the way you put that pattern it seems like you lost an idea to make a pattern here.
01:14:689 (4,5,6) - need moar distanceeee!!
http://puu.sh/d9NcZ.jpg01:18:503 (3) - ctrl+g and move to x:108?
01:22:878 (8,1) - the flow of this HDash doesn't go well with the stream. i suggest a pattern like this
http://puu.sh/d9Nor.jpg01:36:451 (3,4) - move these note to x:224, x:416
i think that's all
good luck