1. ADVANCED Lv.12 - 4Key (3.04 stars, 967 notes)
2. EXHAUST Lv.15 - 4Key (4.41 stars, 1370 notes)
3. NOVICE Lv.9 - 4Key (1.89 stars, 543 notes)

Takane6 wrote:

hi kak LNP-
Simple Mod Ready

Novice Lv.5

>> 01:17:276 - add note for consistency ok
>> 01:19:676 - ^ ^
>> 01:22:077 - ^ ^
>> gk banyak yg jdi msalah disini

ADVANCED Lv. 12

>> 01:46:752 - move to column 3 ?
>> 01:46:752 - add note for consistency ? ok
>> 01:08:126 - ^ ok
>> 01:42:177 - ^ ok
>> 00:21:625 - add note ( the sound is same as 00:21:475 ) no
>> 00:26:575 - add note ( ^ 00:25:075 ) ok
>> Disini juga gk banyak yg masalah

EXHAUST Lv. 15

>> 00:02:125 (2125|0,2162|1,2200|2) - move back by 1/8 line ok
>> 01:33:327 (93327|1,93364|2,93402|3) - ^ kayak nya ini udh pass
>> 00:04:975 - i suggest to make it double note ...ok
>> 00:54:326 (54326|0,54326|2) - maybe both note move to column 3 and 4 and turn it to LN end at 00:54:626 nice
>> maybe at note in every 1/4 line at 01:08:126 - 01:08:426 ?? oh ok
>> 01:46:677 and 01:46:752 - add single note already
>> 01:23:277 - add note for consistency no
>> I like this Difficulty very much Thanks

Itu aja dari aku...
klo msih ada kesalahan dimaklumi aja ya...
Thanks..

Ryu Sei wrote:

As per requested
kolomnya 1234 ok?~
[General]
00:01:075 - tempat seharusnya inherited timing point hmm. . kayaknya udh pass, mungkin nunggu opini yang lain dulu
[EXHAUST]
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:01:037 - tambah di 2/3 ? no
00:02:837 (2837|0,2837|2) - salah snap? hmmm. . . ke white line dulu , butuh lebih banyak opini
00:03:512 (3512|2) - hapus no
00:54:888 - saran no , udh pass itu
01:04:526 - sekedar saran
01:34:714 (94714|3) - hapus no
01:35:089 - tambah satu no

Yah... aku saranin sih remap sedikit di bagian Kiai dan bagian yang mirip karena aku kira polanya mengikuti nada piano...
[ADVANCED]
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:09:925 (9925|2,9925|1) - pindah ke 14 ok
00:50:726 (50726|1,50726|3) - pindah ke 13 ~sama untuk not dan nada yang mirip~ ok
00:51:326 - tambah 2 not, ikuti snapping 1/4 ok

Cukup lah
[NOVICE]
Sudah bagus, aku kaga nemu apapun yang harus dimod :3 >w<


That's all. Kalau nggak membantu jangan dikasih kudosu~

-LASU- wrote:

Hi LNP-
General
BPM 199.995→BPM 200 fixed
Tag add 第一回ボルテキャラテーマ曲コンテスト or VOLTEX Character Theme First Contest added
source https://remywiki.com/Wish_upon_Twin_Stars

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mod

EXHAUST Lv.15
00:08:500 - add note 1 or 4 add note 4
00:08:650 - add note 3 ok
00:30:775 (30775|3,30850|2) - 1/6 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2241505 ok
00:31:225 (31225|0,31225|2,31225|1) - 1/6 (00:31:275-) already 1/6
00:32:950 - add note ok
00:33:100 - add note 2 ok
00:34:375 - add note ok
01:28:302 - add note 3ok

Good luck

Hawkward wrote:

Really fun map, can never have too much xi!
I can only play up to the ADVANCED, so I'll only mod the first two diffs.

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SPOILER

NOVICE Lv.5
01:33:027 - add note 1 or 2 ok
01:33:327 (93327|1) - move to 3? no
01:33:552 - add note 1 or 2 no
01:33:777 - add note 4 add note 3
01:34:077 (94077|3) - move to 3 ok
01:34:377 - add note 2 or 4 add note 2
01:34:677 - add note ok
01:34:977 - add note ok
01:35:127 - add note no

Here's a suggestion pattern... nice , but i dont apply it, i dont need more note because its novice diff, sorry


Very nice diff, just towards the end I feel it could use a few more notes at the bridge where the piano is in full control..



ADVANCED Lv.12
Same section as in NOVICE really. However I feel I should explain my suggestion first....
At 01:13:076 - we have LNs that focus on bass notes which add a nice flow
At 01:32:277 - however, I feel there is more "influence" in the main melody, so I feel adding some LN's for the melody, and standard notes for the bass would make it flow a little better.

01:32:727 - Add LN until 01:33:027 -
01:33:327 - move 4 to 3, change it to an LN until 01:33:777
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Remove note
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Add note
01:33:777 (93777|3) - LN until 01:34:077 -
01:34:077 - add LN until 01:34:377 -
01:34:377 (94377|2) - LN until 01:34:677 -
remap
Overall, another really nice diff, a lot of fun to play!
Keep it up ~

Sorry I can't help with EXHAUST, I could mod it, though I feel it's better to mod what I can play.
All the best with this map! Thanks

Reikosaka wrote:

My modding is focusing at the genre music itself.
Also i checked your note pitch and measure error.
note for beat is little suggest

[General]

try to follow step number while see my suggesting, it may be confuse you (me too)

not sure if background dimension are rankable from its dimension size, i suggest you to change background. fixed

[Novice]

Pitch note problem

00:03:775 (3775|0) - move this to 2nd column for ok

1. 00:04:225 (4225|3) - this note, move to 1st column ^

2. 00:04:375 (4375|1) - i think this should been placed to 3rd column, according to your note pitch ^

3. 00:15:775 (15775|1,15925|0,16075|2,16225|3) - how about move them to 4th-3rd-2nd-1st column (Piano key goes down) // 00:15:775 (15775|2,15925|1,16075|0) - move to 3 2 1

4. 00:13:675 - i suggest you to add note in 1st column, this part has chord (low key piano) i think better to make it double no

5. 00:14:125 - same things like above, add note to 4th column ^

6. 00:15:475 - add note to 3rd column ^

7. 00:16:525 - add note to 4th column ^

8. 00:16:975 - 00:17:275 - add note to 3rd and 2nd (has same chord btw) ^

9. 00:17:575 (17575|1) - i'm not sure if this had chord, so i just suggest move this to 4th column, its high key ok

10. 00:25:975 (25975|3,25975|2) - move this to 1st and 2nd column, and 00:25:825 (25825|0) - to 3rd column. its almost same with 00:25:375 (25375|3,25525|0,25525|1) - ok

11. 00:43:826 (43826|3) - move to 2nd note, double drum and cymbal roll ok

12. 00:45:626 (45626|0,45776|1) - move them to 4th column and 00:46:076 (46076|3) - to 2nd column ok

13. From 01:01:076 - till 01:02:126 - pitch are more like thismoved some note

14. 01:07:676 (67676|1,67826|2) - ctrl + H ok

15. 01:13:076 (73076|3,73076|0) - ctrl + H , this note has high pitch also 01:15:476 (75476|3) - should be in 1st column ok

20. 01:16:076 (76076|2) - move to 2nd column, i think its the proper pitch than 3rd

26. 01:18:476 (78476|2) - move to 2nd column

30. 01:19:676 (79676|3) - move to 2nd column ok

32. 01:20:277 (80277|2) - move this to 1st column and 01:20:277 (80277|0) - to 2nd column ok

37. 01:22:377 (82377|1) - move this to 3rd column

38. 01:32:427 (92427|1,92577|2,92727|3) - ctrl + h , pitch goes down moved to 4 3 2

39. 01:37:077 (97077|3) - move to 1st column

40. 01:37:677 (97677|2) - move to 01:37:527 - in same column ok

Measure note problem

16. 00:05:575 (5575|2) - start hold note should be here 00:05:500 - lead synth and piano are sounded in that place no

17. 01:15:476 (75476|0) - After you fixed #15 issue, this should can be highlighted. then this hold note end supposed to be 01:15:776 - or you can just change it to normal note ok

33. 01:20:277 (80277|0) - hold note end supposed to be 01:20:877 - no

41. 01:42:927 (102927|1) - hold note end supposed to be 01:43:377 - no

Note for beat problem

18. 00:07:675 - add note to 4th column and use finish sample sound

19. 01:15:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound, is not hard

21. 01:16:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

22. 01:16:676 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

23. 01:16:976 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

24. 01:17:576 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

25. 01:18:176 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

27. 01:18:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

28. 01:19:076 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

29. 01:19:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

31. 01:19:976 - add note to 1st column for symphonic synth sound

34. 01:20:577 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

35. 01:21:177 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

36. 01:21:777 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound
add some note

[EXHAUST]

Pitch note problem

1. 00:01:225 (1225|1,1525|2) - ctrl + H no

3. 00:03:437 (3437|0,3475|1,3512|2) - still same with #2 problem, note start from 2nd column ( 00:03:437 - ) , grace pattern still same. ok

4. 00:04:375 (4375|0) - move to 3rd column

5. 00:06:400 (6400|0) - move to 2nd column ok

6. 00:06:475 (6475|1) - move to 1st column ok

Piano Sliding, i see this pattern seems to following piano sound but i think it hasn't follow the proper pitch. 8 -
8. 00:52:000 (52000|0) - move to 2nd column

9. 00:52:075 (52075|1) - move to 1st column

10. 00:52:150 (52150|3) - move to 3rd column

11. 00:52:225 (52225|2) - move to 2nd column

12. 00:52:300 (52300|0) - move to 4th column

13. 00:52:375 (52375|1) - move to 3rd column

14. 00:52:450 (52450|3) - move to 2nd column

15. 00:52:525 (52525|2) - move to 1st column

16. 00:52:675 (52675|0,52750|1,52825|2,52900|3) - Ctrl + H

17. 00:52:975 (52975|2,53050|1,53125|0) - move to right

18. 00:53:200 (53200|2) - move to 1st column, and you can see the result heremoved some note

19. 01:33:287 (93287|1,93325|2,93362|3) - same like #2 & #3 issue , just the note started are from red measure line (1/2 beat) ok

Measure note problem

2. 00:02:087 (2087|0,2124|1,2162|2) - this grace isn't 1/8 beat, the grace used 1/16 as well it started from 1/4 00:02:087 - the things only you do is moving 00:02:125 (2125|1) - to 2nd column ( 00:02:106 - 1/16 measure ) and 00:02:162 (2162|2) - to 3rd column ( 00:02:125 -
1/16 measures )ok

7. 00:34:175 (34175|0,34275|3) - i see error note measure here it isn't 1/3, delete it and add note with this pitchits 1/3 `-` , check it with playback rate 50%

20. 01:22:425 (82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0) - again, error note #7 issue. fix it ^ with playback rate 25%

21. 01:26:175 (86175|0,86225|1) - error note , but i can hear from 01:25:975 - till 01:26:125 - it has 1/8 piano slide (or maybe 1/6) im not sure with 1/6 so i think you should make 1/8 ^[/box

[box=Note for beat problem]22. if you interest to make it more harder, you can put 1/12 piano slide (don't reverse the slide) from 01:55:675 - till 01:55:900 - no , i dont want to make it harder, because its fun map

[ADVANCED]

Pitch note problem

1. 00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3rd column ok
2. 00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2nd column ok

3. 00:01:525 (1525|2) - move to 3rd column ok

5. 00:25:375 (25375|2) - move to 4th column with 00:25:825 (25825|1,25975|2,25975|3) - Ctrl + H ok

6. 00:43:375 (43375|0) - move to 4th column, this part piano has same key being pressed no

Measure note problem

Clear

Note for beat problem

4. 00:18:325 - Piano chord, suggested add note to 4th column no

7. 01:08:275 - add note to 3rd column ok

8. 01:08:350 - add note to 2nd column ok

9. 01:31:825 (91825|2,92125|3) - delete this to make this note -> 01:31:975 (91975|1) - more clear to pressed as piano keyno

BilliumMoto wrote:

Oh hi there

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Hitsounds: EQ the low bass out of the kick sample, it will sound bad if the player hits that even slightly off perfect timing. Otherwise, very good.
Timing: Good.
Special FX: Kiai time good.

Novice

I'm no good at making easy maps, but here are some suggestions
00:08:275 (8275|3) - Fill in the empty space after this note with some 1/2, this occurs many times throughout the map um. . ok
00:13:375 (13375|0,13525|1) - LNs no, note is fine
00:53:425 (53425|0) - something here, it's too empty // 00:53:275 - add LN 1
01:17:275 (77275|1) - nothing in the music here really, do something else? idk
01:54:025 (114025|2,114175|3,114325|2,114475|1,114625|0,114775|1,114925|2) - make this pattern less generic ok

feel free to ignore any/all of the above lol

don't do that for the other difficulties though

Advanced

Patterning and layering:
00:02:125 (2125|3) - two notes here, preferably a grace note like you did in Exhaust ok
00:03:475 (3475|3) - ^ ^
00:03:925 (3925|3) - ^ ^
00:04:375 (4375|3) - ^ ^
01:33:325 (93325|1) - ^you already have a double here but if you are going to make the above grace notes, this should be too
00:02:875 (2875|3) - move to 3 ok
00:03:175 (3175|2) - move to 2 ok
00:06:775 (6775|2) - double note here to be consistent with surrounding layering ok
00:07:975 (7975|3) - ^ ok
00:07:075 (7075|3) - triple note no
00:17:875 (17875|0) - double note ok
00:18:325 (18325|0) - double note ok
00:27:100 - add note here for piano , i suggest column 3 ok
01:02:800 (62800|1,62875|0,62950|1,63025|2,63100|3) - make this generic pattern a little more interesting
01:08:275 (68275|2,68350|1,68425|0,68500|1) - ^
01:03:775 (63775|3) - make a double ok
01:10:525 (70525|3) - delete, not enough in the music to justify a double no
01:23:125 (83125|2) - make a triple no
01:23:575 (83575|2) - ^ no
01:24:025 (84025|3) - ^ no
01:24:475 (84475|2) - ^ no
01:24:925 (84925|3) - ^ no
01:25:375 (85375|2) - ^ no
01:25:825 (85825|2) - ^ no
01:27:250 (87250|2) - move to 1 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy move to 4
01:27:325 (87325|3) - move to 3 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy move to 1
01:30:775 (90775|2) - make triple no


Rhythms:
00:17:950 (17950|1,18025|2,18100|3,18175|1,18325|0,18400|1,18475|2,18550|3,18625|1,18700|2) - if you're following piano here, this is not completely correct, do this:
00:17:950 (17950|1) - delete
00:18:250 - add note here, i suggest column 2
00:18:400 (18400|1) - delete

00:27:100 (27100|1) - delete
00:34:150 (34150|1,34225|2,34300|1) - should be 1/3 not 1/4
00:36:100 (36100|2) - delete
00:42:250 (42250|3) - delete
00:43:150 (43150|0) - delete
00:44:500 (44500|2) - delete
00:55:900 (55900|1) - delete, or do LNs, or do what you did in exhaust
01:01:900 (61900|0) - ^
01:43:900 (103900|2) - ^
01:02:725 - needs a note here
01:09:100 (69100|2) - delete
01:22:375 (82375|3,82450|2,82525|1,82600|2) - should be 1/6 but that would be too hard wouldn't it.... I suggest LNs
01:26:200 (86200|1) - ^
01:26:725 (86725|3) - add note here
01:30:925 (90925|1,90925|2) - delete
01:37:900 (97900|0,97975|1) - delete
01:39:175 (99175|1) - delete
Remap

Exhaust

Pattering and Layering:
00:00:925 (925|2) - move to 4 ok
00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3 ok
00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2 ok
00:09:625 (9625|2,9625|1,9625|0,9775|2,9775|0,9775|1,9925|2,9925|1,9925|3,10075|1,10075|3,10075|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:13:375 (13375|1,13450|0,13525|1,13600|2) - make this more pitch relevant, i suggest 00:13:375 (13375|1) - move to 3 ok
00:15:475 (15475|0) - move to 2 ok
00:21:400 (21400|3) - delete for layering, there's no kick here ok
00:24:625 (24625|0,24662|1,24700|2,24737|3,24775|0,24775|2) - please realize that this pattern is much harder than 01:29:425 (89425|0,89462| 1,89500|2,89537|3,89575|0,89575|1) , either move 00:24:775 (24775|2) - to 2 or maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248071 no
00:36:625 (36625|0,36662|1,36700|2,36737|3,36775|0,36775|2) - ^ same issue no
01:43:825 (103825|3,103862|2,103900|1,103937|0,103975|2,103975|1) - ^same issue no
00:29:425 (29425|3,29500|2) - this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248080 no
00:44:500 (44500|3) - delete, there's only a kick here, no need for double ok
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - fix pitch relevancy, ctrl + H no
00:47:425 (47425|3,47500|2,47575|1,47725|2,47800|1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248104 ok
00:49:675 (49675|1,49675|0,49750|3,49750|2,49825|0,49825|1) - no need for doubles ok
00:51:175 (51175|2,51175|3) - the whole stream starting here needs to be redone to fit the pitch of the piano: for example, this note 00:52:675 (52675|0) should definitely be in column 1 because it is the highest point of the whole piano melody here
01:22:375 (82375|2,82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0,82675|1,82675|2) - way too dense for left hand, balance it out a bit more or release the LN in column 4 sooner ok
01:26:875 (86875|3) - make a double ok
01:28:300 (88300|2) - make a double ok
01:28:525 (88525|2) - make a double ok
01:52:075 (112075|2) - move to 4 no
01:52:675 (112675|2) - ^ no
01:53:275 (113275|2) - ^ no
01:56:275 (116275|1,116275|0,116275|3,116425|2,116425|3,116425|0) - these two triples should be the same ok

Some of these streams are a little awkward to play, up to you if you want to fix this and re-pattern some of them.

Rhythms:
00:01:075 (1075|0) - grace note like you did at 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2)
00:03:925 (3925|0) - ^
00:04:375 (4375|0) - ^
00:19:075 (19075|1,19075|2) - ^
00:03:425 (3425|1,3475|2,3525|3) - this grace note is faster than 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2) , so 1/8 snap instead of 1/6
00:05:950 (5950|2) - delete
00:06:400 (6400|1) - delete
00:07:150 (7150|1) - delete
00:07:600 (7600|1) - delete
00:09:475 (9475|3,9475|2) - delete
00:17:125 - add note here
00:17:950 (17950|0) - delete
00:18:400 (18400|0) - delete
00:20:500 (20500|2) - add a note
00:29:350 (29350|1) - delete
00:30:775 (30775|3,30825|2,30875|1) - i would just keep the 1/4 of the piano here but this is ok too
00:33:475 (33475|0) - delete
00:40:675 (40675|0) - delete yes there is a hi-hat but it sounds and feels so trivial compared to what's going on in the rest of the music)
00:43:525 (43525|1,43525|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248086
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - ^same issue
00:48:775 (48775|3,48775|2,48925|0,48925|1) - add 1/4 stream in this measure
between 00:49:525 (49525|0,49525|2,49525|3) and 00:50:125 (50125|3,50125|0) needs 1/4 streams
00:50:200 (50200|2) - add note
00:50:425 (50425|1,50425|0,50425|2,50575|1,50575|2,50575|0,50725|2,50725|3,50725|1,50875|3,50875|2,50875|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:56:425 (56425|1,56500|2) - delete
00:56:650 (56650|2) - delete
00:59:500 (59500|3) - delete
01:01:750 (61750|2) - delete
01:02:725 - needs note here
01:06:700 - needs note here. also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:06:850 - ^
01:08:200 (68200|1) - delete
01:09:100 (69100|3) - delete
01:23:050 (83050|1) - delete
01:23:950 (83950|2) - delete
01:24:250 (84250|1) - delete
01:24:700 - needs note here, also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:25:300 (85300|2) - 1/6
01:25:525 (85525|2) - delete
01:26:425 (86425|0,86500|1) - delete
01:26:650 (86650|1) - delete
01:26:950 (86950|2) - delete
01:28:000 (88000|3) - delete
01:29:200 (89200|2) - delete
01:33:325 (93325|0,93375|1,93425|2) - too early, push this back an 1/8 or so
01:37:900 (97900|0) - delete
01:47:500 (107500|2) - delete
01:49:525 (109525|2) - delete? or have a little 1/4 run
01:55:675 (115675|0,115675|3) - dude there's some awesome piano stuff happening here! don't just ignore it, it will feel lonely

Remap
Good map, hope you find this useful!

TBLKitten wrote:

very cool song nice map

good luck

Zan - wrote:

nyan nyan LNyanP- Meow ~

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[NOVICE Lv. 5]
00:04:225 (4225|3) - move to 2 bcs i think it has same sound with 00:03:775 (3775|1,3925|2) - ok

00:57:625 - add note to 2 no
01:06:175 - add note to 1 or 2 ^
01:16:375 - add note ^
01:16:675 - ^ ^
01:16:975 - ^ ^
01:17:575 - ^ ^
01:18:775 - ^ ^
01:19:075 - ^ ^
01:19:375 - ^ ^
01:19:975 - ^ ^
01:21:175 - ^ ^
01:21:775 - ^ ^

[ADVANCED Lv. 12]
00:04:975 - add note to 4, loud enough ok

00:07:975 (7975|2) - move to 1, avoid jack ok
00:08:275 (8275|1) - ^ to 3 ok

00:09:325 (9325|0) - i think not fit this note placed here, try to move to 00:09:400 - at 2nd coloumn
then 00:09:325 (9325|1) - move to 3 ok

00:20:725 (20725|2) - move to 2 ok

00:53:575 (53575|2,53725|1) - ctrl + G ok

01:01:225 - add note to 4, same sound with 01:01:075 (61075|2,61075|1) - ok

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
00:18:775 - add note to 1 no

00:38:275 (38275|1) - better remove this
then make 00:37:975 (37975|3) - to be Hold until 00:38:275 - ok

01:07:675 (67675|2,67675|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn ok
01:07:825 (67825|1,67825|0) - move to right by 2 coloumns no

01:50:875 (110875|0,111100|3) - bcs here are 3-noted so lets make these 3-noted too
01:50:425 - add note to 4 ok
01:50:575 - ^ to 4 ok
01:50:725 - ^ to 1 ok
01:51:325 - ^ to 4 ok

gl~~~

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

Uncheck:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen support

|1|2|3|4|

NOVICE Lv. 5

00:18:325 (18325|2) - Move to |4| then 00:18:775 (18775|3) - Move to |3| (Pattern & Hand balance) ok
00:31:225 (31225|1) - Move to 00:31:300 (Drumbeat | Correct placing of note) ah my bad, ok
00:43:675 (43675|1) - Move to |3| (Pattern | Not necessary to be stack bacause of the song's flow/rhythm)ok

ADVANCED Lv. 12

00:56:725 (56725|2,57025|1) - Ctrl + G (Pattern | Hand balance) ok
01:06:325 (66325|0,66325|2,66625|1) - Ctrl + H ^ ok
01:24:775 (84775|3,84925|1) - Ctrl + H (Pattern and because of the song's flow/rhythm not necessary to be stack) ok
01:25:225 (85225|0,85375|2) - ^ ok
01:25:675 (85675|1,85675|2) - Move to |1| - |4| ^ ok
01:51:325 (111325|1,111325|0) - Move to |3| - |4| ^ok

EXHAUST Lv.15

01:26:275 Add note to |1| (Drumbeat - Cymbal - Piano | Impact)ok
01:48:625 (108625|1,108625|0,108925|1,108925|2) - Ctrl + G (Better pattern | Hand balance)ok

Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b

hutunohito wrote:

from my queue
column 1234

[NOVICE]
00:04:225 (4225|1,4375|3) - move to 13? ok
00:04:975 (4975|0,5275|1,5575|2) - only NOVICE is this rhythm...don't make rhythm hmm. . delete some LN & add note
00:08:500 (8500|2,8950|1) - ?change please add some note
00:34:075 (34075|2,34225|1) - 1/3 ok
01:14:875 - add ok
01:17:725 - add ok
01:33:625 - ^ ok
01:48:025 - ^ ok
[ADVANCED]
00:08:350 (8350|3) - delete because EXHAUST doesn't have ok
00:24:175 - add some no
00:27:100 - add piano sound ok
00:31:225 (31225|3,31225|2,31425|2,31425|1,31625|1,31625|0) - 1/3 please my bad, ok
01:37:900 (97900|0) - delete ok
01:47:500 (107500|1) - delete,no sound ok
[EXHAUST]
00:01:025 (1025|0,1075|2) - use 1/16 please,to close two notes ok
00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2) - ^ ok
00:03:437 (3437|1,3475|2,3512|3) - ^ ok
00:06:475 (6475|0,6475|3,6700|2,6700|0,6925|3,6925|1) - you can add some,because it's easier than ADVANCED ok
00:29:425 (29425|3,29500|2) - 1/8? 1/4
00:31:225 (31225|1,31225|2,31225|0) - on 1/3 line please my bad again, ok
01:02:425 (62425|1,62425|2,62575|2,62575|1) - add 1? no
01:23:950 - add and you can make hammer here>< hammer. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . ok
01:24:250 - ^ ok
01:24:850 - add 3 ok
01:25:525 - add 2,piano sound ok
01:25:975 (85975|1,86050|2,86125|1,86125|3) - 1/6 starts here ok
01:26:350 - add ok
01:26:650 - ^ ok
01:26:800 - ^ ok
01:33:325 (93325|0,93362|1,93400|2) - use 1/16 ok
01:34:625 (94625|1,94675|2,94725|3) - ^ ok

good luck

chikitani wrote:

Hihi from modding queue~~

Sorry it took so long ;-;

4K
0 | 1 | 2 | 3

ADVANCED

These are for flavor!
00:02:087 (2087|2) - put note at 2. As grace note to chord.no
00:03:437 (3437|2) - ^ no

00:14:875 (14875|0) - add note to 0. in the background there's very low-pitch piano accompanying ok
00:15:025 (15025|1) - add note to 1 ok

This isn't strictly necessary, but to me this section feels catchier (and less empty) if you:
01:13:525 (73525|1) - add note to 1 for beat
01:13:675 (73675|0) - add note to 0 for percussion
01:15:925 (75925|1) - add note to 1 for beat
01:16:075 (76075|3) - add note to 3 for percussion
01:18:325 (78325|2) - add note to 2 for beat
01:18:475 (78475|3) - add note to 3 for percussion
01:20:725 (80725|0) - add note to 0 for beat
01:20:875 (80875|3) - add note to 3 for percussion

im just follow piano sound here

EXHAUST

Much in the same vein as Advanced... Except with a bit more
01:13:525 (73525|1) - add note to 1
01:13:675 (73675|1,73675|2) - add note to 1, 2
01:15:925 (75925|2) - add note to 2
01:16:075 (76075|3) - add note to 3
01:16:375 (76375|2) - add note to 2
01:16:525 (76525|1) - add note to 1
01:16:975 (76975|3) - add note to 3
01:17:125 (77125|1) - add note to 1
01:18:325 (78325|1) - add note to 1
01:18:475 (78475|3) - add note to 3
01:18:775 (78775|3) - add note to 3
01:18:925 (78925|2) - add note to 2
01:19:375 (79375|1) - add note to 1
01:19:525 (79525|2) - add note to 2
01:20:725 (80725|1) - add note to 1
01:20:875 (80875|3) - add note to 3
01:21:325 (81325|1) - add note to 1
01:21:475 (81475|0) - add note to 0
change another way

REDYUMiKA wrote:

really nice, I will focus on your chart later.

ichia7x wrote:

The gap between NOVICE and ADVANCED is too far >.>

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi LNP >w</
mod ready

[NOVICE Lv. 5]

00:01:225 (1225|1,1375|2,1525|1) - ctrl + h ok
00:03:475 - add note ok
00:03:925 - ^ ok
00:04:375 - ^ ok
01:10:225 - ^ ok
01:40:525 - ^ ok
01:48:625 - ^ ok

[ADVANCED Lv. 12]

00:46:525 (46525|1) - move to 3 no
00:47:275 - add note no
01:19:975 (79975|0) - move to 4 no
01:27:325 (87325|0) - move to 2 ok
01:32:725 - add note ok
01:51:325 (111325|0) - move to 3 ok

[EXHAUST Lv.15]

00:16:225 - add note ok
00:18:475 - http://puu.sh/ddNTW/3f54c0d615.jpg no , same sound with 00:18:025 -
00:52:675 - add note ok
00:57:325 (57325|2) - move to 4 and 00:57:325 (57325|3) - move to 3 no
01:48:925 (108925|1) - delete no

Good luck !!
xi <3

REDYUMiKA wrote:

Yumi's Shortly 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:GM, Language:

[General]
1. General Check : ✓
2. Metadeta Check : ✓
3. Resolution Check : ✓ // I recommend fixing the background ratio to typical values.
4. HP/OD FIX Check : ✓

- No guarantee -

[NOVICE Lv.5]
00:42:025 (42025|0,42475|1) -
I don't know you thought that putting LNs along the piano sound tho, it would be a strange usage of LNs.
okay first, you try to remove these objects indicated as the above,

next, add notes for..
00:42:025 - to 1 / 00:42:175 - to 2 / 00:42:325 - to 3 // Just express a first impressive piano sound then,

add LNs for..
00:42:475 - to 4 , end // 00:42:775 -
00:42:775 - to 3 , end // 00:43:075 -
00:43:075 - to 2 , end // 00:43:375 -
// Put LNs instead of the dense piano considering the difficulty was created as you purpose it will be played by novices.
..finally you will get the balanced objects to each sound like (e.g.1) wow nice , fixed


00:44:425 (44425|3,44875|2) - The same solution as the above but be careful to the different melody. (e.g.2) fixed

01:16:675 - I kinda feel an uncomfortable whenever pass this point which hasn't any sounds, I just suggest you add a note to 2 add to 3
01:19:075 - also it would be an uncomfortable itself, add a note to 4 ok

[ADVANCED Lv.12]
Almost perfect

01:53:425 (113425|2) - bad placement to hold that, please fix the start point at 01:53:575 - ok

[EXJAIST Lv.15] dat typo :U
00:17:575 (17575|0,17725|1) - Ctrl+J to clear the different pitches from 00:17:875 - ok

00:32:725 (32725|3) - remove, beat is comparatively heavy but just in this point making more simple would be good.
In addition to that, I suggest you arrange several notes like (e.g.3) to add a sound's relevance to each kick. ok

00:44:425 (44425|1) - mightn't be reasonable to remove it though, introductory part is already enough to catch the beat. ok

01:34:337 (94337|1) - wrong placement, should be at 01:34:356 - uses the 1/16 divisor.D: ok

01:54:925 - ~ 01:56:125 - Your idea is so nice, but I wonder why the start point which keep the piano ringing was set since 01:54:925 -
especially 01:54:925 (114925|3) - is really misleadingly note, just indicating the solution as a reference. (e.g.4)hmm. . ok

Good chart, I will entirely support you.

DE-CADE wrote:

Hi here's my review of your chart ~
My mod doesn't effect on your ranking process, feel free to reject but don't forget to reply/explain why you reject it okay , but my english so bad lol, so Indonesia aja deh

wow i like this songs ♥ Star for you lol ~ wow thanks

EXHAUST lv.15

00:03:437 (3437|1,3456|2,3475|3) - Ctrl+J, this grace is more comfortable if it's start on 1st/4th coloumn, i know it's againts the pitch, but comfortable is good for 4K than the pitch tetap aja deh

00:05:725 (5725|2) - anyway you can change this into a short LN, good for emphasize, and represent the synth better than the single note keep, memang cocok dijadiin short LN , tpi lebih enak single note aja

00:07:675 - add to 1 for cymbal, as you did before ok

00:08:500 (8500|3,8650|2) - These are for piano am i right? i think represent the drumpad on this section is great, so i suggest you to delete it, or you can move it down one line to make this chart still hard keep

00:13:375 (13375|1) - move to 2, the pitch is same as 00:14:575 aku pikir gk sama deh :/ , keep

00:18:625 (18625|0,18700|1,18775|3,18775|2,18925|0) - Ctrl+H, yeah repeated pattern i think best time to make it reverse keep

00:23:500 - add to 4
00:23:575 (23575|3) - move to 1
^ i hear a drumpad here so yeah ok & sedikit remap

00:32:575 (32575|3,32650|0,32725|3) - Ctrl+H, try this if you want to make it variety n this is more comfortable than the last one keep

00:34:325 - I got a feeling, there is a piano sound here (1/6)

00:40:600 - add to 2 n 3, i hear a snareno

00:41:575 - add to 2, miss snare no, sengaja dibagian itu dikosongin dan juga suara yg paling kedengeran aja yang aku notekan
00:43:975 - add to 2, this place is good for jack ^
00:46:375 - add to 2, ~ ^

00:57:625 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2314983
I hear 1/6 piano maybe try it, to make variety with 1/4 drumpad in before keep, ngikutin bass

01:06:700 (66700|1) - delete, represent only the loud piano here should be fine keep

01:08:575 (68575|0) - change this into short LN, it's well represented and fun to play to fun sih, tapi untuk gk mau memperbanyak LN o3o

01:09:025 - here too, 01:09:025 (69100|3) - delete and then add short LN on col 4 ^

01:25:975 - add to 3, double piano hit here ok

01:26:350 (86350|1,86650|1) - Delete
01:26:425 - add to 3
^ following the loudest instrument here should be better than before keep

01:30:475 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315000
^ Variety, more comfortable, and also drumpad represented so it will create 1/4 that's is fun to play keep

01:34:637 (94637|1,94656|2,94675|3) - Ctrl+J keep

01:34:975 (94975|0) - move to 2 ok
01:35:125 - add to 1 ok

01:35:500 - 01:35:575 - you can add note here no

01:40:825 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315020
^ LN on the left perfectly represented the synth and double is great with it's single jack on col 3, chart still hard as beforeok

01:45:775 (105775|0,105775|2,106075|1,106075|3) - Ctrl+H, shield here is awesome to play nice, ok

01:56:125 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315035
^ A nice Brutal Ending for this chart lol no, same sound, but nice :U

ADVANCED Lv.12

00:07:825 (7825|2,7975|3,7975|1,8125|2) - Ctrl+H, anyway you can make it different with the last one remap

00:08:800 (8800|0) - delete, following the drumpad here is really confusing because you add double on both piano high pitch keep

00:24:025 - here's my suggestion
^ 1/4 stream for piano, short LN for rapid beat(1/8).. this should be great to play, still easy tho keep

00:37:375 (37375|1,37825|0) -
00:39:775 (39775|1,40225|1) -
^ move up one line, to represent the kick+piano, 2 double isn't suitable here keep

00:40:375 (40375|1) - add to 2 no

01:01:075 (61075|1) - Move here 01:00:625 - to represent the cymbal add note

01:01:600 (61600|1,61900|0) - Delete, i know this is for kick, but if you follow the piano only, the jacks should be awesome
and also make this chart easier masih gampang kok :/ , Lv nya udah ditentuin juga, jadi keep

01:31:375 (91375|1,91375|3) - ctrl+H, place inb4 makes me confused, this should be good to create jack here lol i forgot to change that

01:39:475 (99475|1) - move to 1 no , udh pas di situ

NOVICE Lv.5 is great for me
Good Luck ~ This should be Ranked! if BAT notice my map :p