arsrun wrote:

I thought the front part of the song(each difficulty) is still too noisy ,may be you should turn these note's sound from normal to soft.
Fixed.

Gladi wrote:

General / All diff's.
'little explorer' looks weird? Maybe L ittle E xplorer or L ittle explorer?
http://up.ppy.sh/files/mplayerc2009-12-1109-41-41-56.jpg

Insane.

1. 00:04:038 - I really would <3 to see an extra note here.
   Added.
2. 00:40:049 (1) - Hmm, weird note. It has to start 1/8 earlier actually, but I don't know if it will be 'easy' to get a 300 on it then.
   Suppose it's piano sound.
3. 00:40:081 (2) - ^
   X

frost-b-spec wrote:

Hard and Insane
00:40:811(2) - left 1tick
X

Shulin wrote:

Timing:
Try offset 415
Fixed.

Normal:
~ Has an additional timing section, why?
Where?

01:38:013 (3) - New combo.
X
01:39:084 (5) - ^
X
01:50:056 (2) - Very odd note... quite hard to hit this 1/6 part, maybe consider a longer slider to cover the odd notes?

Hard:
00:40:043 (1) - 1/8 part, I don't recommend putting it in 1/8 though, put 00:40:081 (2) on a red tick instead.
X
00:40:081 (2) - Stack with 00:40:049 (1) - like at 00:54:020 (1,2) - [It also feels like it should be back one tick]
X
01:50:041 (2,3,4,5) - The shift to 1/6 was easier to hit here than in normal.
X

Insane:
00:16:169 to 00:26:026 - Extremely odd starting on 1/4 then switching to 1/6 in the next beat, also hard to detect in a stack...
What?
00:56:056 (1,2,3) - Imo just have a returning slider the beats are too odd. 1/8 if you want to keep it.
X
00:58:043 (3) - 1/8 or place 00:58:054 (4) - on the red tick. [Sliders could solve these problems ]
X
01:50:041 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Really hard to detect this 1/6 change in normal circles.
X

Yes wrote:

i think better to start kiai time here- 01:24:041 ._.
I wanna spam Kiais in that part, but will be unrankable lol =_="
But anyway, added.

hard
00:10:070 (1) - finish at beginning?
Added in all diffs.

DJPop wrote:

Normal:
~ Has an additional timing section, why?
Where?

DJPop wrote:

00:16:169 to 00:26:026 - Extremely odd starting on 1/4 then switching to 1/6 in the next beat, also hard to detect in a stack...
What?

Shulin wrote:

01:50:129 and 01:50:558, both red timing sections not present in other difficulties.
Hide a slidertick.

Regarding the 1/8ths, how you have it is OK even if it is not following the music but 00:58:037 (3,4) - is seriously offbeat consider changing it (and slider is too small)
Fixed.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Tags: Yes. (Capitalize all the tags, please.)
Some tags shouldn't use capitalizes. All took from MV's cast.

Offset: 418 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
Fixed.

[Normal]
01:38:012 (3) - New combo.
Bad looking.
01:50:012 (1,2) - Sounds weird.
Changed into slider.

[Hard]
00:37:005 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:048 (1) - ^
00:50:077 (1) - ^
00:54:020 (1) - ^
Bad looking.
01:51:084 (1) - Unexpected speedy slider.
Will add some SB.

[Insane]
The intro of the song starts with all the streams on blue ticks. A bit hard to click the right timing?
idk, they're all synced to the music >_>

00:32:098 (5) - New combo.
00:37:005 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:048 (1) - ^
00:50:077 (1) - ^
00:54:020 (1) - ^
Bad looking.
00:56:055 (1,2,3) - This 1/8 stream sound really weird.
Bass sounds.
00:58:054 (4) - Hidden slider.
Fixed.

Xgor wrote:

[Skin]
The hit300, hit100 and hit50 is smaller than it's normally.....
It that internal or not?

DJPop wrote:

Do you mean "intend"? Then yes.
Smaller hitbursts are cool

Alace wrote:

Offset:404
I like this song