Shulin wrote:

General:

- Find a new mp3? ~ I think a better quality mp3 would make the map awesome, plus you could turn the hitsound volume to max. It's no so bad lol.

Normal:

I enjoyed this.

00:14:037 (4) - Custom whistle should probably be on the start of this slider since its on every other one before it.done
00:18:022 (1) - ^ Because it sounds odd without it.done
00:42:022 (5) - Custom whistle seems out of place on the very last repeat.done
00:50:022 (4) - New combo imo (following the lyrics), remove new combo from 00:51:014 (1) - if you take this suggestion.done

Gameplay is great, no problems there imo.

Hard:

~ BG color to black on this difficulty.done

Some of the slider shapes here do feel a little random:

00:10:068 (3) - Looks out of place.done
00:11:091 (6) - ^ - At least try and make these to look alike lol they cover the same distance on the timeline.fixed
00:20:006 (4) - Place the start of this on the start point of 00:18:083 (2) -nah
00:33:045 (4) - Looks ugly?its "was" ugly
01:07:029 (3) - This was is random, I'd redraw this one.fixed

Nice no major issues, good gameplay

~ Star

ouranhshc wrote:

im srry but im really not liking it though. im probably not going to use it

AngelHoney wrote:

nice map~

star

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hard

01:00:083 (4) - 01:00:836 to 01:00:836?wut.

01:01:014 (5) - 01:01:143 to 01:01:451?wut.

01:05:060 (3) - repeat to this slider ?done

00:18:022 (1,2,3,4) - 0.5*bpm?nah

01:14:083 (1,2,3,4) - 0.5*bpm?nah

01:34:052 (1,2,3,4) - 0.5*bpm?nah

Crazy Jay wrote:

wow,it's really an awesome map,I like it.>w<~
[Normal]
nicethx XD

[Hard]
00:14:374(3,4,5) - how about change it like this?[attachment=0:251a1]example.jpg[/attachment:251a1]done
00:51:143(1,2,3) - how about add a note at 00:50:990done

Star~~~

1. 00:04:052 (3,4) - Little spacing issue

1. 00:02:083 (1) - Move it one grid down to make line with 2 and 3. Looks better imo.

• KIAI section is really long. I suggest KIAI from 00:57:605 to 01:17:297 and from 01:27:143 to the end.
  If you are not willing to follow that suggestion, at least fix the beginning of the KIAI section: it should start at 00:57:605

• .Opinions:
  Please capitalize the E in the name of the difficulty

• .Opinions:
  Map is good, but everything in the last part is 1/1 D:

• .Suggestions:
  00:14:35 (3) - missing hitsound at the beginning?
  00:47:074 (1) - ok, it's a new combo, but i still think that it would be better to move it farther

osuplayer111 wrote:

I can't rank maps for the first week, So I have to reject your request. Sorry