DJPop wrote:

PreviewTime: 39,610

[attachment=0:589fd]ND Lee - Seoleim (lesjuh) [DJPopStyle].osu[/attachment:589fd]

Better quality MV

[attachment=2:589fd]Seoleim MV.part1.rar[/attachment:589fd]
[attachment=1:589fd]Seoleim MV.part2.rar[/attachment:589fd]

Ryuukun wrote:

[DJPop Style]
00:39:61 - i really dislike the sudden change of tact from here on.
But thats just my opinion.
Pass.
Also i think you used too much kiai mode.
2 Kiais are too much!? D:

Symbolic wrote:

[NormalStyle]

Use Slider Tick Rate 2 nah it's fine

00:07:09 (1) - Remove new combo. x
00:13:09 (1) - ^ x
00:39:610 (x) - Set a Timing Section here with Kiai Time. I never use kiai because it's distracting
01:04:578 (x) - Timing section here, and let Kiai Time stop. x
00:44:25 (2) - New combo. I guess thats fine
01:16:57 (1) - Remove new combo. x
01:30:707 (x) - Timing section here, with Kiai Time. x
01:55:674 (x) - Timing section here, and let Kiai Time stop. x
01:57:03 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Delete this part, sounds better when u stop before this part. no D:


[HardStyle]

00:39:32 (8) - Remove this note, it sounds crap imo D: nope
01:26:06 (5) - New combo here. maybe... maybe... no :3
00:39:610 (x) - Timing section here, with Kiai Time. x
01:04:578 (x) - Timing section here, and let Kiai Time stop. x
01:30:41 (8) - Remove this note, it sounds crap imo x
01:30:707 (x) - Timing section here, with Kiai Time. x
01:55:674 (x) - Timing section here, and let Kiai Time stop. x
01:57:03 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Delete this part, sounds better when u stop before this part. x


[DJPopStyle]

00:10:77 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:11:15 (2) - New combo.
00:39:32 (8) - Remove this note, it sounds bad imo
01:06:90 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:07:48 (1) - ^
01:08:06 (1) - ^
01:08:64 (1) - ^
01:09:99 (1) - ^
01:10:57 (1) - ^
01:11:73 (1) - ^
01:13:09 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:25 (1) - ^
01:16:57 (1) - ^
01:17:35 (1) - ^
01:56:49 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Delete this part, sounds better when u stop before this part.

I'll leave this to DJPop but I don't think he will change all the colours because he maps them in his own intuitive way. I like it. It makes sense if you really listen to te song

Nice map, was fun to play + mod, but don't really like the song
Starred *

Symbolic wrote:

[DJPopStyle]
00:10:77 (1) - Remove new combo.
Fixed.
00:11:15 (2) - New combo.
Fixed.
00:39:32 (8) - Remove this note, it sounds bad imo
X
01:06:90 (1) - Remove new combo.
X
01:07:48 (1) - ^
X
01:08:06 (1) - ^
X
01:08:64 (1) - ^
X
01:09:99 (1) - ^
X
01:10:57 (1) - ^
X
01:11:73 (1) - ^
X
01:13:09 (1) - Remove new combo.
X
01:14:25 (1) - ^
X
01:16:57 (1) - ^
X
01:17:35 (1) - ^
X
01:56:49 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Delete this part, sounds better when u stop before this part.
X

DaRRi MIx wrote:

Normalstyle
00:56:64 (1,2,3) - move 1/2 backward (and redo hitsounds) and add a clap on 00:57:804
01:47:73 (1,2,3) - same I think they are both good as they are.

Hardstyle
01:11:73 (5) - clap not finish (same on wherelse this appears) I used the finish as an 'accent' here.

lesjuh wrote:

DaRRi MIx wrote:

Normalstyle
00:56:64 (1,2,3) - move 1/2 backward (and redo hitsounds) and add a clap on 00:57:804
01:47:73 (1,2,3) - same I think they are both good as they are.

Hardstyle
01:11:73 (5) - clap not finish (same on wherelse this appears) I used the finish as an 'accent' here.

Thanks for taking your time

MoonFragrance wrote:

How about set custom colour?

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Normal]
00:03:99 (2) - Remove finish. I think too many finish is used. I suggest replace to whistle
00:07:09 (1,2) - ^
00:10:77 (5) - ^
00:16:38 (3) - ^
00:17:93 (6) - ^
00:24:12 (1) - ^
00:27:99 (1) - ^
00:28:77 (1) - (Whole slider) ^
00:30:32 (1) - ^
00:33:41 (1) - (Whole slider) ^
00:34:96 (5,6,7) - ^
00:39:99 (1) - ^
00:40:77 (1) - ^
00:42:70 (1) - ^
00:46:19 (1) - ^
00:46:97 (1) - ^
00:48:90 (1) - ^
00:50:44 (4) - ^
00:53:35 (2) - ^
00:54:90 (2) - ^
00:56:44 (1) - ^
00:57:22 (3) - ^
00:58:97 (1) - ^
00:59:54 (3) - ^
01:00:32 (1,2,3,4) - ^

DaRRi MIx wrote:

you forgot to update djpop's nice fix

DaRRi MIx wrote:

why this still not ranked