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COOL&CREATE - Locked Girl

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Ichigo-Sora
162 posts
Joined February 2009
Ichigo-Sora
You can probably get rid of "star.png" from the song folder since it's isn't actually used anywhere in the song (it's normally used to display the star difficulty of the song when used in a skin)

[All]
Add Kiai at 02:33:017 - 02:54:070?

[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
03:05:046 (1) - This note still has the normal hit whistle sample, not sure if this was intended. [Normal] has this note as a normal finish and [Easy] has it as a clap.

Star~
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Easy
02:40:947(4) - line up with 3

normal
00:33:370(5) - extend to white IMO

hard
01:16:062(5,6,7,8) - is this supposed to be lined up?
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[Easy]

00:47:023 (5) - Crooked slider.
00:51:093 (7,8) - Shift these so that 5-6-7-8 becomes a diamond?
01:19:029 (3) - Not lined up with 1.
01:19:097 (1) - Line up with the previous 2?
01:58:022 (1,1) - Combine these into 1? A bit fast as of right now.

[Normal]

02:19:000 (4) - Line up with 2,3?

[Hard]

Fine for what I can see at 3 AM.

Starred. :)
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hi~

Blue = Suggestion

[Easy]
01:07:066 (3) - Slider
01:10:006 (x) - Add Note
01:10:074 (x) - ^

[Normal]
Good

[Hard]
00:59:011 (1,2) - Delete this
00:58:009 (9) - +2 repetition

Good !
Sorry, I can't star again :Þ
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
kratoskitten
kratoskitten
I thought i star'd this already >_<
Hope you DO finish the insane though :)
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Spelling and Grammar]
0:17:423 - "will be hear" maybe should be "will be heard"?
2:06:891 - "a girls rhaspy voice" -> "a girl's raspy voice"?

[Easy, Normal, Hard]
Normally I'd complain about there being too much cymbal, but meh.
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Consider having the lyrics fade a bit more, rather than popping up and disappearing so suddenly.
01:16:057 - Friendship sign? Huh?

[Easy]

00:28:092 (3,4,5,1,2) - Blocking lyrics.
01:12:046 (3,4) - ^
01:28:013 - Consider adding a note here.
01:46:049 (1) - Covers up the last line. :(
01:55:033 (1) - Consider lowering the volume here.
02:39:093 (4) - Blocks lyrics.

[Normal]

00:48:091 (1,2) - Lyrics. :P
00:55:087 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Could be a nicer triangle.
01:02:069 (7) - Put this right where 2 was?
01:55:033 (1) - The slider hold sound is kinda irritating too, so lower the volume and consider removing that.
02:18:031 (2,3,4) - Make this a straight line?
03:05:045 (1) - Up a grid to align with 2.

[Hard]

01:39:086 (3) - Lyrics!
01:55:033 (1) - Same comments apply here as before.

/me disappears.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Got bored.

Disclaimer: Like always, these are suggestions, not commands

[Easy]
00:06:032 (1) - Whistle?
00:11:079 (1) - ^
00:17:025 (4) - ^
00:22:076 (1) - Whistle+finish?
00:23:044 (2) - Not whistle?
00:24:012 (3) - Whistle?
00:25:049 (2) - Whistle+finish?
00:28:023 (2) - ^
00:26:018 (3,4) - Not whistle, whistle?
00:28:092 (3,4) - ^
00:30:097 (2) - Whistle+finish?
00:44:055 (1) - Whistle?
00:49:092 (1) - ^
00:53:099 (1) - Remove whistle from end?
00:55:036 (1) - Whistle?
01:00:081 (1) - ^
01:05:026 (3) - Remove finish?
01:12:046 (3,4) - Not whistle, whistle?
01:14:051 (2) - Whistle+finish?
01:16:057 (5) - Add finish on end?
01:17:026 (6) - Add whistle?
01:22:001 (2) - Remove finish?
02:35:087 (2) - Add whistle?
02:38:058 (2) - ^
02:41:028 (1) - ^
02:43:099 (2) - ^
02:46:066 (2) - ^
02:49:033 (2) - ^
02:52:001 (1) - ^
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Insane is an absolutely flawless map. It looks fantastic! :D Have a well deserved star

or maybe rename it lunatic, to keep with Touhou tradition?
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,936 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
Oh one other minor thing while you're changing the difficulty name:

Insane/Lunatic:

03:05:80 (2) - Move this inherited timing section back 1/4 so it won't sound wrong when someone hits it early.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,936 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Everything appears to be in order.

Bubbled.
ft1717492
98 posts
Joined June 2009
ft1717492
Nice map,star~
Pasonia
osu! Alumni
1,199 posts
Joined October 2008
Pasonia
Rank. <3
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone
This is a timing disaster.

EDIT: To clarify, i had to play with -25ms, and shit was STILL late. On top of that, shit was now early, by like -25 ms now, maybe even more. This timing is all over the fucking place.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,936 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral

Cyclone wrote:

This is a timing disaster.

EDIT: To clarify, i had to play with -25ms, and shit was STILL late. On top of that, shit was now early, by like -25 ms now, maybe even more. This timing is all over the fucking place.
Are you sure? On all the playtest passes I made of this I was getting 21% mistimed and about 0-3ms late with an UO of 16ms.

I mean, it looked iffy, but it played out fine so I assumed it was all good.
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
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Joined July 2008
Cyclone
Yeah i'm pretty positive. It didn't play fine for me at all.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,936 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
This is the second time this has happened.

Bad Apple played fine for me, and Locked Girl does too.

Something is amiss.
Pasonia
osu! Alumni
1,199 posts
Joined October 2008
Pasonia
I assessed this beatmap passed to me and it plays just fine.

It's too much of a coincidence that even I find no problems with Locked Girl.

This can't do if we're going to repeatedly end up with offset problems.
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
Well I got 13 ms late when playing the start of [Normal]. Dunno what this means though.

EDIT: Holy crap that is a lot of timing sections.
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