nao.paradigm - Zero-One · forum

Dusty

Joined June 2009

Dusty 2009-11-22T00:00:39+00:00

Real modding this time.

[Hard]
00:19:019 (5) - Momentum killer, move (5)?
00:47:056 (1) - Shorten by 1/4?
00:47:056 (1) - Add whistle on white and red ticks? (double-click the 1 on the play field)/or on first and last sliderpoint?
01:07:097 (1,2,3,4) - Flip across y-axis or otherwise separate from (6,7)?
01:31:064 (1,2,3) - Move (3) up?
01:38:017 (3,4,5) - Move (5) up.
01:44:070 (1) - Finish+clap instead?

[Insane]
00:00:041 (2,3,4,5) - (2,3) down or (4,5) down?
00:26:013 (3) - Whistle+clap?
01:14:050 (1,2,3,4) - Get possessed by a demon lately?...
01:44:070 (1) - Finish+clap instead?

Kitty McWittles

141 posts

Joined September 2008

Kitty McWittles 2009-11-22T00:00:57+00:00

[Easy]
End kiai at 78,582 - dunno if you're supposed to end kiai or if it doesn't matter, but my OCD causes me to point this out

[Hard]
00:58:099 (1,2,3,4) - Clap spam seems sorta out of place compared to the rest of the song

[Insane]
00:58:058 (4) - Changing to normal here sounds odd to me

Nothing I can really mod here, just pointed out those odd parts. Also maybe you could use a custom sampleset with that little clap noise from the song? Though I'm sure it'd be a pain to get so... just have a star :3

You're too pro for my modding

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2009-11-22T00:40:44+00:00

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DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2009-11-22T02:18:32+00:00

MP3 is really sick, especially 00:39:398 - 01:05:521

Try this > http://up.ppy.sh/files/zeroone.mp3

~Easy~
Map whole song.
00:15:031 (3) - remove hitclap
00:17:076 (2) - ^
00:40:001 (2) - silence all sliderticks
00:43:027 (3) - ^
00:46:054 (3) - ^
00:49:080 (3) - ^

~Hard~
00:03:088 (1) - repeat 8 times
00:10:041 (2) - ^
00:38:058 (1,2) - too close
00:39:019 (4,1) - ^

~Insane~
Maps can be harder so I don't call this diff "Insane".
No major issues found.

No star for now

arien666

6,271 posts

Joined May 2009

arien666 2009-11-22T02:50:17+00:00

[Easy]
No issues :3

[Hard] Grid level=2
00:31:03(7) - How about move 1 grid right?

[Insane]
No issues :3

Not much issues XD
Good map and I hope it will be ranked soon.

Here's my star :3

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-11-22T02:53:46+00:00

Easy

The diff feels very cut off...

Hard

Try putting the spinners that follow notes 1/4 after instead of 1/2 after; Example: 01:29:194 (1)

00:15:317 (X) - Add note here
00:20:214 (X) - ^
00:50:623 (X) - ^ It feels awkward if you don't put a note between the notes in (00:50:419 (1,2,3) )
00:51:031 (X) - ^
00:58:990 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds awkward. Replace?

Insane
Some combos would sound better if you add a note in between some other notes

00:58:582 - Lower volume

01:35:929 - Add note

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2009-11-22T03:26:14+00:00

Changed the new MP3, changed all the offsets, mapped Easy to the end, and a whole bunch of other nice stuff. Check it out!

Thanks everyone.

JamesLeao

366 posts

Joined October 2008

JamesLeao 2009-11-22T11:29:42+00:00

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Dusty

870 posts

Joined June 2009

Dusty 2009-11-23T04:55:58+00:00

Sounds better.

[Hard]
00:04:057 (1) - Shorten?
00:11:010 (2) - ^?
00:24:098 (1) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/normal-hitclap.mp3 as a custom hitsound finish?
01:45:039 (1) - ^+ clap?

[Insane]
00:26:071 (2,3,4,1) - Looks funny, the (3) kinda juts out there.
00:34:098 (3) - Whistle?
01:45:039 (1) - same as Hard?

[Easy]
Did something weird happen with your sliders? Most of them seem off.

00:11:092 (1) - custom hitsound?
00:24:098 (1) - ^?
01:44:016 (1) - ^?

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2009-11-23T05:19:05+00:00

Dusty wrote:
Sounds better.

[Hard]
00:04:057 (1) - Shorten?
00:11:010 (2) - ^?
00:24:098 (1) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/normal-hitclap.mp3 as a custom hitsound finish?
01:45:039 (1) - ^+ clap?

[Insane]
00:26:071 (2,3,4,1) - Looks funny, the (3) kinda juts out there.
00:34:098 (3) - Whistle?
01:45:039 (1) - same as Hard?

[Easy]
Did something weird happen with your sliders? Most of them seem off.

00:11:092 (1) - custom hitsound?
00:24:098 (1) - ^?
01:44:016 (1) - ^?

I found the custom sound to be a bit weird, but other things were changed, thanks!

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-11-23T13:44:49+00:00

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

Slider Tick Rate: 2
00:04:168 - Add a circle

Starred~

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2009-11-23T19:40:47+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

Slider Tick Rate: 2
00:04:168 - Add a circle

Starred~

Done, thanks!

Kerensa

167 posts

Joined January 2009

Kerensa 2009-11-24T05:58:32+00:00

hellooo little child ^^

Insane:
00:26:617 [1]looks better if it goes up one tiny square and like it auto moves to the left o.o
00:30:494 [1]one tiny square to the right?
01:32:739 [2]wanna move it up one tiny square, it looks more even between the before and after note o.o

Hard:
fine.

Easy:
meh..just wondering
00:18:454 [2] why is this one so clsoe the the slider when the other beats are like same disctance apaart o.O just caught my eye,. looks weird i think to be in an easy. myabe it's just me o.o

wahh ~

star star for you you ^^

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2009-11-24T23:42:21+00:00

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Vanmonky

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Joined June 2009

Vanmonky 2009-11-25T12:09:11+00:00

As your request in my queue.

[Easy]
Fine. But there's one thing that make me feel crazy. 01:19:067 (1). Too close to the spinner. That's a bit too hard for beginner

player. If you want to change it, make the slider longer (on the (1) note) and delete the (1) note. But overall, nice.

[Hard]
00:04:057 (1) - Add one more repeat.
00:11:010 (2) - ^
00:36:082 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle.

[Insane]
00:11:010 (1) - Add one more repeat. Remove finish.
00:11:071 (1) - Remove finish.
00:13:096 (3) - Add finish.
00:26:041 (3) - Add clap maybe.
01:36:000 (2) - Add one more repeat.
01:42:053 (2) - ^

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However, you may ignore them all ^^
And *star~

Hanyuu

2,223 posts

Joined February 2009

Hanyuu 2009-11-25T18:38:17+00:00

o2jam !!!

Fuuko

486 posts

Joined June 2009

Fuuko 2009-11-26T07:37:35+00:00

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Kytoxid

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