V5_[ARIA] wrote:

irc mod~

13:17 Athena Tennos: 哪個難度0.0
13:17 Athena Tennos: 又是大觸。。。
13:17 Hollow Wings: 哎，都行吧
13:17 Hollow Wings: 哎？
13:19 Athena Tennos: 。。。。。
13:20 Athena Tennos: 各種意義上mod這圖我都亞曆山大。orz
13:20 Hollow Wings: 怎么说。。。
13:20 Hollow Wings: 太渣了么orzzz
13:20 Athena Tennos: 。。。。。。這圖明顯注重hirsound方面。。。。
13:21 Athena Tennos: hitsound我是渣渣。orz
13:21 Athena Tennos: 我的hitsound都是只要聽的有規律就ok;w;...
13:21 Hollow Wings: 音效我可能还要有一些改动。。。
13:21 Hollow Wings: 那就排版吧。。。
13:22 Athena Tennos: 嗯。
13:24 Athena Tennos: 00:55:816 (8,9,10) - 這裡試試反跳？。。高速的SV+短的SD感覺移動上。。。
13:24 Athena Tennos: 有點不舒服。。
13:24 Athena Tennos: 01:10:816 (1) - 這東西好坑！~
13:25 Hollow Wings: 反跳
13:25 Hollow Wings: 就是反向么
13:25 Athena Tennos: 反正就是提高點SD~
13:25 Athena Tennos: 怎麼跳都可以~~~
13:26 Hollow Wings: 好
13:26 Hollow Wings: 这很坑么orz
13:26 Hollow Wings: 果然还是圆环？
13:27 Athena Tennos: 圓環也可以~~主要是那個魚型slider中間看不出來。。。
13:27 Athena Tennos: 有點空隙也好。。。;w;..
13:27 Hollow Wings: 原来如此
13:27 Athena Tennos: 打的時候稍微慌了一下。orz
13:28 Athena Tennos: 我說的全部都是suggestion。。。
13:28 Athena Tennos: 這根本不是新手圖。。。orz
13:28 Athena Tennos: 。。。。話說BG是自己畫的麼。orz
13:28 Athena Tennos: 好觸。orz
13:28 Hollow Wings: 这真的是新手图
13:28 Hollow Wings: 我做的第二张图啊
13:29 Hollow Wings: bg是自己画的
13:29 Athena Tennos: 瞎~
13:30 Hollow Wings: 一个难度嫌少的话就多mod几个难度吧，省的贴过去拿kd因为irc太少被人吐槽QVQ
13:30 Athena Tennos: 我不貼的;w;...
13:30 Athena Tennos: 我的999posts....;w;
13:30 Hollow Wings: orzzz
13:30 Athena Tennos: 要想SP的話我等會用馬甲去貼好了~
13:31 Hollow Wings: 好吧QVQ
13:34 Athena Tennos: 00:42:555 (2) - NC?
13:35 Hollow Wings: NC是什么orzzzz
13:35 Athena Tennos: 額?
13:35 Athena Tennos: ....
13:36 Hollow Wings: 咦，我真的不知道QVQ
13:36 Athena Tennos: ....我瞬間不知道說蝦米好了.........能做出這種水準的圖卻不知道......
13:36 Athena Tennos: 我已經被閃瞎了.
13:37 Athena Tennos: NC~new combo~
13:37 Hollow Wings: 哦哦QVQ
13:37 Hollow Wings: 哦这个建议不错~~~~
13:37 Athena Tennos: 00:41:903 - 加一個note?
13:37 Athena Tennos: 如果+的話這個note也NC...
13:38 Hollow Wings: 其实这里，很多人跟我说节奏难掌握
13:38 Athena Tennos: 你這裡一下子變節奏...讓人有點適應不過來.
13:38 Athena Tennos: 加個note調解下就好了.
13:39 Hollow Wings: 但感觉加前面后面都听着有点不对劲。。。
13:40 Athena Tennos: 00:42:120 (1) -
13:40 Athena Tennos: 那就把這個不要藏在slider尾巴上就好了~
13:40 Hollow Wings: 性
13:40 Hollow Wings: 行
13:42 Athena Tennos: 感覺你後面的NC有點亂亂的...
13:42 Athena Tennos: 故意的麼0.0?~
13:42 Hollow Wings: 哪里乱
13:42 Athena Tennos: kiai開始..
13:43 Athena Tennos: 我的問題..
13:43 Athena Tennos: 無視掉...
13:43 Hollow Wings: 唔，我再看一下
13:44 Athena Tennos: 沒..我剛剛沒理解你的放法..
13:44 Athena Tennos: 現在看明白了.orz
13:44 Hollow Wings: orz
13:44 Athena Tennos: 01:50:598 (15) -
13:44 Athena Tennos: NC?
13:44 Athena Tennos: 01:51:033 (1) - REMOVE
13:45 Hollow Wings: 好
13:45 Athena Tennos: 01:55:974 (4) - NC?
13:45 Hollow Wings: 好
13:45 Athena Tennos: 果然PC多了...做出來的圖就是不一樣麼.orz
13:45 Hollow Wings: 不知道呀。。。orz
13:47 Athena Tennos: submit一下吧~
13:47 Hollow Wings: 哎？
13:47 Hollow Wings: 还没改好orz
13:48 Hollow Wings: 不先看看其他diff么
13:48 Athena Tennos: 4個diff都是你的麼?
13:48 Hollow Wings: 对了，关于之前你说的那个ds太小了的地方
13:48 Hollow Wings: 是的
13:48 Athena Tennos: .;...
13:48 Athena Tennos: ...
13:49 Athena Tennos: 00:29:729 (3) - 這是個啥!~
13:49 Athena Tennos: ....
13:49 Hollow Wings: 那里我是这样想的，ds是逐渐变大的，在后面也有类似的梗，我也是这么摆的。。。
13:49 Athena Tennos: 看出來了..
13:49 Hollow Wings: 稍等orz
13:49 Hollow Wings: 等等
13:49 Athena Tennos: 但是打起來不舒服是真的..
13:49 Hollow Wings: 你重新下一下图。。。
13:49 Athena Tennos: 取決於你把~
13:49 Athena Tennos: 0.0
13:50 Athena Tennos: 蝦米~?
13:50 Hollow Wings: 你是新下的么？
13:50 Athena Tennos: 昨天下的..
13:50 Hollow Wings: 已经没有你现在看的那个难度了。。。
13:50 Athena Tennos: 額
13:50 Hollow Wings: 这两天每天都改了很多
13:50 Athena Tennos: np一下我把.orz
13:50 Hollow Wings: 所以还是下最新的吧QVQ
13:50 *Hollow Wings is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258342 Twilight Frontier - Hisouten [HW'']]
13:50 *Hollow Wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258342 Twilight Frontier - Hisouten]
13:52 Athena Tennos: 00:29:729 (3) - 這個奇葩物還在
13:52 Athena Tennos: !~
13:53 Hollow Wings: 这个不行么orz
13:53 Athena Tennos: 不是不行....感覺沒意義呀.orz
13:53 Athena Tennos: 而且形狀有點莫名.orz
13:53 Hollow Wings: 好吧，我去改掉QVQ
13:53 Hollow Wings: 这滑条纠结了半天QVQ
13:54 Athena Tennos: 分段或者短一點reverse就好了嘛.
13:54 Hollow Wings: 我打算直接搞单点orz
13:54 Athena Tennos: insane的鼓聲好大....試試調小點?~
13:54 Hollow Wings: 嗯
13:57 Athena Tennos: 01:55:974 (4) - NC~
13:57 Hollow Wings: ~
14:00 Athena Tennos: 01:46:685 (3) - 這個最好不要再easy出現...orz
14:00 Athena Tennos: 感覺會被揪...orz
14:00 Hollow Wings: 你在看的是hard？
14:00 Athena Tennos: easy
14:00 Athena Tennos: 差不多就這麼多吧.~
14:01 Hollow Wings: normal？
14:01 Athena Tennos: 噢噢哦.
14:01 Athena Tennos: 嗯
14:01 Athena Tennos: Normal
14:01 Hollow Wings: 为什么有人说好呢orz
14:01 Athena Tennos: 那個魚麼.
14:02 Hollow Wings: 对
14:02 Athena Tennos: 感覺BAT可能會揪...嘛...放著也沒事~
14:02 Athena Tennos: 反正到時候揪了就改一個就好了~
14:02 Hollow Wings: 这样啊。。。
14:02 Hollow Wings: 嗯QVQ

GoodLuck~
☆~ 哎，多谢V5姐姐QVQ

Lan wings wrote:

111这回的太偷懒了QVQ

1. Your kiai time should start at 00:54:511. The start is supposed to be at a place where the strong/heavy part of a song starts. 00:54:077 is too early by two beats.

1. 00:11:468 (5,1) - Swap the new combo (NC)'s position to keep the consistency of the combo pattern?
2. 00:12:772 (1) - Uhm, starting from this spot, you seem to apply NCs every one, then two, then four stanza(s). You have to be consistent; either apply them every one or two stanza(s) in the entire map, and apply them on the tall white tick. (Applies to other diffs too; Hard diffs and harder should preferably use NCs every stanza.)
3. 00:12:772 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Won't be a good idea to use circles continuously like this in a Normal diff. Change a few of them into sliders?

1. 00:06:251 (3,5) - Maybe you can move (5) so it won't be overlapped by (3)? Looks weird, you know.
2. 00:41:468 (5) - NC to indicate that this is the beginning of a new jumpy pattern?

1. 00:32:772 (10) - Since the spacing here changes and the later circles are spaced consistently, NC this to indicate the change?
2. 01:33:641 (1,2,3) - The jump is too big and breaks the flow, IMO. Make them smaller?

1. 00:45:381 (5,6,7,8) - Hmm, those sudden and wide 1/4 jumps... They can be unexpected and really flow-breaking.
2. 00:47:989 (5,6,7,8) - ^
3. 00:51:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (Applies to other 1/4 jumps except 01:40:816 (7,8,9); they actually work well.)
4. 01:17:555 (10,1) - I don't think this jump fits with the song...

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding for M4M.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. Your kiai time should start at 00:54:511. The start is supposed to be at a place where the strong/heavy part of a song starts. 00:54:077 is too early by two beats.i do the kiai time at that point on purpose thou...ok, i'll take ur suggestion anyway :3

>Normal

1. 00:11:468 (5,1) - Swap the new combo (NC)'s position to keep the consistency of the combo pattern?lol, hmm, i don't think this is a serious problem, i just make some 3-beats-pattern after that. But I will consider that~ :3
2. 00:12:772 (1) - Uhm, starting from this spot, you seem to apply NCs every one, then two, then four stanza(s). You have to be consistent; either apply them every one or two stanza(s) in the entire map, and apply them on the tall white tick. (Applies to other diffs too; Hard diffs and harder should preferably use NCs every stanza.)Oh, is that so? As a newbie mapper i don't know this rule, i'll apply NC more carefully from now on.:3
3. 00:12:772 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Won't be a good idea to use circles continuously like this in a Normal diff. Change a few of them into sliders?Lol, I played rarely easy and normal diff, don't have much impression on them as a newbie mapper as well. Thank you very much to your suggestion! Already fixed~ :3

>Hard

1. 00:06:251 (3,5) - Maybe you can move (5) so it won't be overlapped by (3)? Looks weird, you know.I see, fixed :3
2. 00:41:468 (5) - NC to indicate that this is the beginning of a new jumpy pattern?good suggestion! fixed :3

>Insane

1. 00:32:772 (10) - Since the spacing here changes and the later circles are spaced consistently, NC this to indicate the change?good suggestion! awesome! fixed! XD
2. 01:33:641 (1,2,3) - The jump is too big and breaks the flow, IMO. Make them smaller?hmm, that big jumping is just what i want to show, actually it's not a difficult pattern to the players trying to beat this diff, even it's easy to break the combo here. As for breaking the flow, maybe just regard this as a jump pattern with NC here. Thanks to your suggestion anyway~ :3

>HW"

1. 00:45:381 (5,6,7,8) - Hmm, those sudden and wide 1/4 jumps... They can be unexpected and really flow-breaking.I agree with you as well, didn't do well in these parts, i'll arrange them. :3
2. 00:47:989 (5,6,7,8) - ^
3. 00:51:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (Applies to other 1/4 jumps except 01:40:816 (7,8,9); they actually work well.)There are some part of 1/4 jumps sucks, i know. However, some of them are just like that, they're jumps, not flow. But as a newbie mapper, I'll consider ur suggestion carefully, maybe i'll take them one day by receiving changing suggestions from other modders. Thx to u anyway. :3
4. 01:17:555 (10,1) - I don't think this jump fits with the song...there's lots of jumps here, even lots of them are like this pattern... so sry, reject :3

That's it I guess.Your map looks well-made, although some jumps on Insane and HW" might come off as being too far and unfitting with the song's instruments.maybe...the jumps there were made carefully, but still can't do that well. I just need some experience XD

Good luck on the way thank you very much for your kind modding :3

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 m4m from my queue
怎么这么多mod 我喜欢2kd呀啊喂怎么给2kd的？

HW''
00:05:598 (1,2) - 突然反向增大间距不太舒服 因为曲子本身没有突然变强fixed
00:10:816 (1,2) - ^^
00:25:816 (7) - 为什么这里开始NC频率突然又变低了 前面都3个一NC呢^
00:27:120 (1,2,3,4) - 比较莫名的3/4 至少你把尾巴soft掉啊原来要这样下音效啊，这个我还真不知道呢，懂了。至于莫名3/4的话，其实和之前的3/4是一样的。:3
00:40:164 (4) - 莫名减速 还不NC好吧
00:42:120 (1) - 反而是这家伙你NC个什么劲这有个缓拍，NC一下看的清楚一点
00:43:424 (5,6,1) - 你这叮的声音也太大了吧拜托音效确实没好好弄呢
00:47:989 (1,2,3,4) - 也不太舒服 一下很近一下很远 又很近fixed
01:46:685 (1) - 这一段这么长不都NC^
01:51:033 (3,4,5) - 这么短还这么弯炒鸡难看^
一遍看下来 想说的就是图和曲子根本没啥关系 想近就近想远就远 完全沉浸在自己的世界里了 你自己看着办吧有吗orz，我只是跟着曲子在补一些节奏，太脱离曲子旋律了还是怎么

Insane
00:13:642 (3) - 太高了 碰血条哦~fixed
00:29:729 (3) - NC吧好
00:40:164 (7) - 还是一样 莫名减速 就算要减也要NC提示啊好的QVQ
00:42:772 (5,6,7) - 还是 无理3/4 后面还有雷同的QVQ
00:54:511 (3) - NC这个NC有点莫名。。。不过既然你这么说了。。。orz
01:02:772 (1) - 这个最后往下挪个一格什么的是说上面超出太多吧？我调整了一下形状
01:05:381 (1) - 这个要挪好几格 带着01:06:251 (2,3) - 一起 不然就不对称了^
01:06:251 (2,3) - 炒鸡蠢好吗 摆这样个形状 弄出莫名间距 而且炒鸡不连贯的 明明曲子很流畅^
01:15:381 (3,4,5,6) - 为什么一会儿突然就3/4呢嗯。。。确实有点违和
01:25:816 (1) - 不这么高会屎么=。=噗
01:29:729 (7) - ^这个感觉没问题
01:42:772 (2,3,4,5) - 3/4真心超级难听 你这个音效真心不知道3/4尾需要消音orz
01:53:207 (2,3,4) - 同样 而且间距还莫名大 都这么慢的part了还快完了 你闹哪样好吧
都是差不多的问题不想多说QVQ

Hard
stack太多了 没什么意思 而且老是在等 不流畅 尤其kiai段
00:21:903 (1) - 求保持NC一致性好么 移到00:23:207 (5) - 这里好的
00:54:511 (3) - NC哦哦
01:15:381 (3) - ^^
01:41:468 (1) - 略难看fixed
01:49:294 (1) - ^^

Normal
HP OD 4 AR5好，老实说对normal完全没概念
00:29:729 (6) - NC
00:39:729 (2) - 后面突然没东西真是奇怪很奇怪吗。。。好吧
00:23:207 - 这里开始有了其他的音轨可以根据不同的东西map啊难道不是么QVQ
00:54:946 (3) - NC~
01:04:946 (3) - ^~
01:17:989 (5) - 太高~
01:24:946 (1) - combo太长 啊？
01:28:424 (7) - 这里NC~
01:41:468 (1,2,3) - 这种stack在最低难度不要有 后面还有好几处原来如此
01:46:685 (3) - 真不是一般的难读加难看……噗。。。

基本都是那么些一样的问题确实，又知道了很多规则。。。QVQ
good luck remap thx for modding 谢调教新人

baldrace wrote:

Hi Hi~from my queue
m4m solt

昨天忙着改图和做新图了owo我刚回完凌风的mod就看见你的了。。。时间显示是35分钟前，有那么巧么orz，其实改完他mod的建议已经有很多变动了QVQ

general
我能吐槽只有两种combo颜色吗？ 1/8可能太鼓不好打，管什么太鼓(炸)哎，个人比较喜欢只有两种颜色，这不太好吗？我在看看其他人的意见QVQ

normal

00:46:621 combo长了fixed
01:15:490 这几个物件过于边角了一点，尤其5，normal这样不好这个因为拍子空的很多，应该是有时间移过去的吧？我再看看其他人怎么说的QVQ
01:21:251 这个1也是^
00:40:707 有点空fixed


hard

01:44:946(5)这个明显该是滑条有道理QVQ
01:11:251 这种3/4滑条尾端叠感觉打着别扭，你可以放远一点作了整体修改
01:03:316 (9)没叠好，差0.01...这你都能发现QVQ

Insane

00:08:242 开头这段可以叠得 更好一点 或者排的让hitbrust整齐老实说不太明白。。。
01:15:707 (345)应该是没摆好，不同滑条之间头尾距离不对这里我已经改掉了QVQ
00:54:946 (4)没叠在1上是故意的？是的，有人说遮挡了，再看看别人怎么说吧QVQ
00:13:642 (3)太上了fixed
00:46:685 这边的几个3/4感觉音效并不好，正好背景音乐(咦)轻，很明显稍微调整了一下音量
01:42:772 ^这里还好
01:53:207 ^这种把音量调低看看。。虽然不一定好。。后面音效也没多少了，没啥区别吧QVQ
01:21:468 (5) 和1 叠一起fixed，稍微改了下其他地方
01:24:390(3,7) 这个有点危险，3的hitbrust 炸到7了挖？~居然还要考虑到hitbrust的问题？！我又涨姿势了。。。QVQQQ
01:25:816 (1) 太角落啦 而且离HP太近这个还好

HW''

00:10:381 1/4滑条飞的有点屌。。已改QVQ
有些insane里说过的就不说了差不多都了解了QVQ
00:32:011 (10,11)二连莫名好吧，改了QVQ
00:42:120 这边压鼓点比较好吧崩溃啦崩溃啦~~几乎所有人都吐槽这个梗~~所以我还是改掉吧~~~QVQQQQQ

good luck
感觉可以啊orz不是看来众口难调呢。。。
不过我个人不太喜欢在一个区域原地放一波梗的摆法=。=是指各种stack吗，老实说自己毕竟是新人mapper，实在找不到适合摆接下来的物件的时候就只能原地接下去了。。。以后我会多注意的QVQ

Jemmmmy wrote:

Normal

01:29:294 (2,3,4,5) - 正一点 fixed
01:34:511 (4) - 放在凹槽正下方fixed
01:21:903 (3) - 移动下位置 圈放在凹槽正下方fixed

Hard

01:34:077 (9) - 减少一个折返这没什么大碍吧？

Insane

01:02:772 (1) - 按物体中心旋转30~45度fixed
01:06:033 (2,3) - 调换下顺序不太顺手呢，reject
01:34:946 (5) - 减少一个折返无碍

HW''

00:07:555 (1) - 让00:08:207 (1) - 对着凹处 fixed
00:08:859 (1,1) - 做相应的修改fixed
00:40:164 (1) - 这个形状有何用意。。稍微变了下形状，用意倒没有，减速滑条罢了

。。good mapset and sound eff. love triangle jump thx for modding

• "Normal" and "Hard" are very good. The only problem i really have with thses diff is when you have to suddendly turn back like 01:04:077 (1,2,1) in your "Normal" diff. You're map has a very good fluidity and when i play your map it's like following a smooth curve and so it seems weird to play these sudden "turn auround".
  About "Insane" i don't really like playing it because of the sudden jumps. A lot in this diff you're nearly motionless and right after you have a huge jump then after some notes you have to stop. It's really weird when playing it and i think you should make the jump less far. For the jump 2x take 1.7/1.8x and for the jump 3x (at the end of the map) go to 2.3/2.4x for example.
  About "HM" well it's much better because the jump aren't more difficult than the "Insane" diff but seems easier since your map has a fast rythm. And i like it even if it's kinda awkward to have a fast map for a quiet song. But you're not the only to do it.
  And the combo color are kinda hard to read. Maybe make them a litlle bit darker.
  Moreover, good map + song i like + You draw this yourself!!!!!! Wow. = Star ^^
  It's so good i've hardly find anything. Most of what i saiy is just suggestion but nothing really important (except for the spinner)

1. You need a spinner for nearly all your diff!For example you can put one from 00:29:729 to 00:32:337.
2. You have updated your beatmap after i've done some of my mod some maybe some things aren't good.

1. 00:15:381 (1) - I think a finish is a little too much and a whistle is enough here.
2. 00:22:337 (4,5,1) - It's one of these "turn around". But you just have to use CTRL+G on the big slider and it's way better to play it imo.
3. 00:29:729 (1) - Maybe a spinner here?
4. 00:33:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is way too long for a Normal. Maybe NC on the 4.
5. 00:38:424 (8,1,2) - I think that this plays better:
   
   In this case you keep moving your cursor at the same speed without havong to stop on the 8.
6. 00:42:337 (5) - NC?
7. 00:43:642 (8,1,2) - Same as 00:38:424 (8,1,2) and this time the shape is the same. You just have to use some CTRL+G and change the order of the sliders.
8. 00:49:294 (1) - Too high, it touches the accuracy and the life bar.
9. 00:51:903 (1) - Too short imo. Use a slider here instead of one at 00:29:729 (1) where the spinner fits better.
10. 01:02:772 (7) - The long blanck after feels awkward. Maybe put a 1 beat long slider instead of a note.
11. 01:04:077 (1,2,1) - ....Make a triangle instead of this "turn around"
12. 01:08:859 (6) - Another long blanck. Same suggestion as before.
13. 01:14:077 (5) - ^
14. 01:24:946 (1,2,1) - Guess....
15. 01:25:816 (1,3) - Little overlapping. Maybe you could avoid it.
16. 01:37:990 (3) - NC
17. 01:36:251 (2,3,4) - ....
18. 01:44:511 (6) - CTRL+G feels better when playing.
19. 01:48:424 (4) - NC (combo way too long)

1. 00:02:990 (2,3) - Imo it would be better if you would swap them. (and then turn 00:04:294 (4,5,6) as well)
2. 00:04:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
3. 00:18:424 (2,3) - With the same logic swap them then 00:19:294 (4,6) then 00:20:598 (1,2).
4. 00:24:511 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Stop/Jump 2x/Stop/Jump 2x etc... Feels really strange when playing.
5. 00:29:729 (8) - I remind you that you need a spinner in this diff.
6. 01:01:033 (5,6) - I don't know if it's done on purpose but the overlapping doesn't seems really good. Maybe avoid it (and do the same in all the copy paste of these there are in your map)
7. 01:23:642 (8,9) - Why the note on the end of the slider where there isn't one for 01:22:338 (6,7) and 01:21:034 (4,5)?
8. 01:41:468 (1) - CTRL+G?
9. 01:51:903 (1) - ^

1. 00:26:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here the jump are just 1.5x? So why are they 2x on the Hard diff?
2. 00:30:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Really weird to play.
3. 00:46:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You follow the violin, right? So you should use . Like you did at 00:49:294 (1,2,3,4).
4. 01:07:990 (6,7,8) - These anti-jump feels really awkward! Especially in the kiai time with all these jumps. These sliders should be way further from each other.
5. 01:26:685 (5,6) - CTRL+G plays better imo.
6. 01:33:641 (1,2,3) - Jump x3 WTF.
7. 01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Jump x3.31 and in a quiet moment. Seriously, i know it's insane but you don't need that huge jumps... Really...
8. 01:53:207 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Just to say that i really like this part and maybe you should do something like this too in the "Hard" and "HW" diff.

1. 00:16:685 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Compare what you use in your "Insane" diff and in your "HW" diff and guess what i think. ^^
   Insane:
   HW:
2. 00:40:164 (1) - ~You need a spinner~ (Besides this slider is really ugly)

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

M4M:

[Personnal Opinion]

• "Normal" and "Hard" are very good. The only problem i really have with thses diff is when you have to suddendly turn back like 01:04:077 (1,2,1) in your "Normal" diff. You're map has a very good fluidity and when i play your map it's like following a smooth curve and so it seems weird to play these sudden "turn auround".maybe that's a serious problem in normal and hard diff. actually i rarely play these diff, but insane or extra. so i'll consider your suggestion seriously D:
  About "Insane" i don't really like playing it because of the sudden jumps. A lot in this diff you're nearly motionless and right after you have a huge jump then after some notes you have to stop. It's really weird when playing it and i think you should make the jump less far. For the jump 2x take 1.7/1.8x and for the jump 3x (at the end of the map) go to 2.3/2.4x for example.sry, that's just like that. maybe it's difficult to fc or combo, even pass for noob players. but as a matter of fact, i just make them like this. YES, yes this a jumpy map with insane diff. but i'll consider ur advice seriously,too. D:
  About "HM" well it's much better because the jump aren't more difficult than the "Insane" diff but seems easier since your map has a fast rythm. And i like it even if it's kinda awkward to have a fast map for a quiet song. But you're not the only to do it.
  And the combo color are kinda hard to read. Maybe make them a litlle bit darker. is that so? may a darker combo color be a good choice? as a player i must say that maybe the bright ones' better. hmm, let's see if an other modder mentioned this. D:
  Moreover, good map + song i like + You draw this yourself!!!!!! Wow. = Star ^^thank you very much. painting's just my hobby, and i drawed the whole sb pics which is still wip. Wait and see! XD
  It's so good i've hardly find anything. Most of what i saiy is just suggestion but nothing really important (except for the spinner)I'll read ur mod very seriously for ur good suggestiion :3

[General]

1. You need a spinner for nearly all your diff!For example you can put one from 00:29:729 to 00:32:337. actually with my own feeling, the real opinion of mine is that I won't add any spinner in this map in any diff... but consider to the ranking list of normal and hard diff have so many closed scores just deviced by bonus getting from spinners, i'll consider to add each one spinner in normal and hard diff. thx for your kind suggestion anyway :3
2. You have updated your beatmap after i've done some of my mod some maybe some things aren't good.lol, u know what? i received an other modder's m4m at moment i remapping my map after received from yours. That means if i complete my remapping from your m4m and update, the modder send m4m after u didn't mod the fresh map as well~ how u gays requote so fast? i even don't have enough time to update :3

[Normal]

1. 00:15:381 (1) - I think a finish is a little too much and a whistle is enough here. fixed
2. 00:22:337 (4,5,1) - It's one of these "turn around". But you just have to use CTRL+G on the big slider and it's way better to play it imo. good!! fixed
3. 00:29:729 (1) - Maybe a spinner here? nope, this diff already has a spinner and i've said something about spinner in this map before. sry. reject D:
4. 00:33:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is way too long for a Normal. Maybe NC on the 4.fixed
5. 00:38:424 (8,1,2) - I think that this plays better:
   
   In this case you keep moving your cursor at the same speed without havong to stop on the 8.gooood! fixed
6. 00:42:337 (5) - NC?fixed
7. 00:43:642 (8,1,2) - Same as 00:38:424 (8,1,2) and this time the shape is the same. You just have to use some CTRL+G and change the order of the sliders.fixed and change some pattern
8. 00:49:294 (1) - Too high, it touches the accuracy and the life bar.fixed
9. 00:51:903 (1) - Too short imo. Use a slider here instead of one at 00:29:729 (1) where the spinner fits better. this spinner has more than 2 secs. idk... if it's too short for noob players, but i think it's just enough, and i won't add another spinner except this. sry, reject D:
10. 01:02:772 (7) - The long blanck after feels awkward. Maybe put a 1 beat long slider instead of a note. ok, fixed
11. 01:04:077 (1,2,1) - ....Make a triangle instead of this "turn around" good suggestion! fixed
12. 01:08:859 (6) - Another long blanck. Same suggestion as before.fixed
13. 01:14:077 (5) - ^fixed
14. 01:24:946 (1,2,1) - Guess....lol
15. 01:25:816 (1,3) - Little overlapping. Maybe you could avoid it. maybe no problem indeed :3
16. 01:37:990 (3) - NCok
17. 01:36:251 (2,3,4) - ....???
18. 01:44:511 (6) - CTRL+G feels better when playing.fixed and changed some pattern
19. 01:48:424 (4) - NC (combo way too long)fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:02:990 (2,3) - Imo it would be better if you would swap them. (and then turn 00:04:294 (4,5,6) as well) good suggestion! fixed
2. 00:04:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ u really excellent modder D:
3. 00:18:424 (2,3) - With the same logic swap them then 00:19:294 (4,6) then 00:20:598 (1,2). ok... thou that makes some of the jumps between them smaller... but ok :3
4. 00:24:511 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Stop/Jump 2x/Stop/Jump 2x etc... Feels really strange when playing.i've changed this part D:
5. 00:29:729 (8) - I remind you that you need a spinner in this diff. reject as I said before, but i'll try to add a spinner somewhere
6. 01:01:033 (5,6) - I don't know if it's done on purpose but the overlapping doesn't seems really good. Maybe avoid it (and do the same in all the copy paste of these there are in your map) I don't think these would cause a serious problem. D:
7. 01:23:642 (8,9) - Why the note on the end of the slider where there isn't one for 01:22:338 (6,7) and 01:21:034 (4,5)? that's the middle point of kiai time with special song's rhythm, so i made a special pattern, too D:
8. 01:41:468 (1) - CTRL+G?fixed
9. 01:51:903 (1) - ^fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:26:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here the jump are just 1.5x? So why are they 2x on the Hard diff? coz slider speed in hard diff is 0.5x and it's 1.0x in insane. actually they are the same at last D:
2. 00:30:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Really weird to play. hmm... it's just a pattern D:
3. 00:46:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You follow the violin, right? So you should use . Like you did at 00:49:294 (1,2,3,4).wow, good, i'll fix this :3
4. 01:07:990 (6,7,8) - These anti-jump feels really awkward! Especially in the kiai time with all these jumps. These sliders should be way further from each other. you are right, fixed :3
5. 01:26:685 (5,6) - CTRL+G plays better imo. nope, that'll be worse in jump, reject D:
6. 01:33:641 (1,2,3) - Jump x3 WTF. take it easy, just a difficult jump pattern, i don't think its an impossible one for pro players who can maybe fc this map or even with dt mode :3
7. 01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Jump x3.31 and in a quiet moment. Seriously, i know it's insane but you don't need that huge jumps... Really... you're right, the song's already finish its main part. i should make smaller jumps, thx for suggestion. :3
8. 01:53:207 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Just to say that i really like this part and maybe you should do something like this too in the "Hard" and "HW" diff. hmm, ok, i'll consider that, and i'm glad there's pattern u really like. :3

[HW]

1. 00:16:685 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Compare what you use in your "Insane" diff and in your "HW" diff and guess what i think. ^^
   Insane:
   HW: lol, i made them different on purpose. your idea is great, really, but i prefer not to fix them. sry, reject :3
2. 00:40:164 (1) - ~You need a spinner~ (Besides this slider is really ugly)sry for the ugly slider, i've change its shape, and hope it can be better. D: As for the spinner... nope and i've told u why before :3

My final opinion?
You Really like triangles ^^ Me too! lololol, another reason is that this is a 3/4 clap song. i just set notes like triangle by my feeling XD
And you need to rank this, seriously...... i'll try my best to get this map ranked

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

My Modsry for requesting late, u just sent your mod after rezoons in a short time, and i haven't enough time to remap a fresh one for u. So there'll maybe some points in your suggestion already fixed, thank u for your modding anyway thou :3
Normal

GREAT DIFF! This looks much, but infact these are just three or four things you COULD change.

00:10:164 (4) - I'd Flip it Vertically, leads better to next note imo. great idea, fixed :3
00:12:772 (1) - How about this positioning: great idea again! fixed D:

Click Me

00:25:816 - Add a Note here maybe. hmm...ok~ :3
00:27:555 - ^ nope
00:28:859 - ^ ^
00:41:903 - ^ I see you did this on purpose, but I think heres missing some Constance in the map. hmmmmm, maybe that's not one question. D:
00:44:946 (2,3) - I suggest the 2 leading towards the 3. i've changed this part :3
00:47:555 (2,3) - ^ If it is your special pattern, ignore this. ^, lol
00:54:077 - DEM HITSOUNDS *-*! aha...alright then. :3
00:57:990 - Again I am missing a couple of Notes, but it sounds great anyway, just keep it if u want! It is really only an alternativ way, but I think it is Kiai, the strongest part of the song, and this should be mapped completely. hmmmmmmmmmmm, after a long time consideration, i decide to make some of them reverse and fill some of the blank clap in kiai time, maybe it'll give a better impression. :3
00:58:859 - ^
01:03:207 - ^
I think some reversed sliders would be cool.
01:08:424 - ^
01:09:729 - ^
01:18:859 - ^
01:19:729 - ^
I think you understand what I mean, I'll go on with other things and let these beside.


Hard

Perfect in my Eyes, so perfect, that I started my perfectionism mode:

00:33:207 (1) - The perfect position is x: 88 y: 55, I know this comment sucks xD but you can do this by placing a new circle at 00:32:881 - , if u are close to the slider's end, it automatically snaps there. actually this is a good comment, and very useful to snap notes under slider's end perfect, thx anyway. fixed :3
00:51:033 (4) - ^ with x:139 y is correctxD damn how did I even see this O_O fixed, damn how did u even see this XD
01:03:316 (9) - x:284 y: 250 I just want this to be even more perfect than it is ! Soooooooorrryy that's just the meaning of modding, don't be worried, fixed :3
01:24:511 (9) - x: 197 y: 316 Damn what am I doing here? modding, bro, fixed D:
01:30:598 (1,2,3) - I think the three should be farer away by DS. u'r right, and this is really a serious problem in ds, fixed D:
01:41:468 (1) - Correct x is 169. fixed thou


Insane

00:29:729 (3) - Whistle sounds godlike here.alright :3
00:42:772 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - I suggest to overlap 5,6,7 at least, Fits more to the song imo.no overlapping here i think D:
00:49:294 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapp them? nope...
00:51:903 (5,6) - Here I think it would really be better to overlapp, since the song is not that speedy. actually i don't want to overlap anything anywhere, coz i don't like their shape. and don't forget this is insane diff... however, u said the reason: "since the song is not that speedy", that's correct and acceptable suggestion, let's see what other modders said then. :3
01:34:946 (5,1) - Timing Space is 1/8? Dont space them. why?
01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice Pattern!that's too far away from each other thou, i've made the distance smaller. D:
01:50:164 (3,4) - A space here? uh?
01:55:974 (1) - I suggest a Slider to 01:56:096 - With Whistle, optional a Green Line at 01:56:096 - With audio Change to 5%, but I think it sounds great with previous settings. Give it a try tried ur suggestion... However, the song's end there at 01:55:974 (1) - , the hit sound of slider's end is loud but unnecessary when there's no other sounds... and slider here would made a worse shape... so, reject D:


HW"

Click For A Journey

00:23:207 (1,2,3,1,2) - If you have things like the 1,2 (Both of them) I would not stack them, looks better without stacking.
Thats all alright, fixed :3
Did not say it will be a long Journey maybe it is... i'll try my best thou :3

All in all great work so far, could not find more, I overlooked the map about 10 times .-. I am sorry Very nice song btw, good luck to get ranked!
maybe have got lots of work to do with this map, thx for ur modding!

1. 00:04:946 (4) - add nc on this slider
2. 00:10:164 (4) - ^
3. 00:26:685 (4) - ^
4. 00:32:772 (2,1) - switch nc
5. 00:40:598 (3) - this slider would look and plays better if you do it like this http://puu.sh/3dLaH.jpg
6. 00:51:468 (4) - this note would look better if you move it to x:340 y:188
7. 00:57:120 (4) - add nc here
8. 01:01:033 (4) - ^
9. 01:07:555 (5) - ^
10. 01:12:772 (5) - ^
11. 01:17:989 (5) - ^
12. 01:21:903 (4) - ^
13. 01:33:642 (5) - ^

1. 00:02:990 (2) - move the 2nd slider point 3 grids down and 1 grid to the right
2. 00:08:207 (3) - move this slider to x:256 y:268, so the end can be stucked under 00:06:251 (3,6) - o.o
3. 00:08:859 (5) - add nc here
4. 00:09:729 (4) - this note will be more fun and playable if you move it to x:188 y:292
5. 00:11:468 (5) - add nc here
6. 00:17:990 (1) - move this note one grid up so it'll be lined with the other note
7. 01:33:642 (7) - add nc here

Hollow Wings wrote:

[Personnal Opinion]

1. "Normal" and "Hard" are very good. The only problem i really have with thses diff is when you have to suddendly turn back like 01:04:077 (1,2,1) in your "Normal" diff. You're map has a very good fluidity and when i play your map it's like following a smooth curve and so it seems weird to play these sudden "turn auround".maybe that's a serious problem in normal and hard diff. actually i rarely play these diff, but insane or extra. so i'll consider your suggestion seriously D: I would like to precise that i played these diff with DT so maybe it's not a big problem at a normal speed but it's what i felt when playing with DT
   
2. About "HM" well it's much better because the jump aren't more difficult than the "Insane" diff but seems easier since your map has a fast rythm. And i like it even if it's kinda awkward to have a fast map for a quiet song. But you're not the only to do it.
   And the combo color are kinda hard to read. Maybe make them a litlle bit darker. is that so? may a darker combo color be a good choice? as a player i must say that maybe the bright ones' better. hmm, let's see if an other modder mentioned this. D: Personally i think that bright combo goes with dark background and bright background with dark combos and since your background is really bright that's why i said that. But you can keep the combo like this. ^^

[Insane]

1. 01:33:641 (1,2,3) - Jump x3 WTF. take it easy, just a difficult jump pattern, i don't think its an impossible one for pro players who can maybe fc this map or even with dt mode :3 Well, in fact i got an S at this diff at the first try so, it's not about the difficulty but really about the feeling.

thank you very much for your good modding, your mod just amazed me! XD Well, i don't do that kind of mod often. It's really because i've seen that you made a really good map, that i really like the song and you did a M4M. But my mod are always less complete than this

Zweib wrote:

wpcap神图来支持下orz

其实看了下thread感觉有点出乎意料说的都很有道理的不是么

我觉得这个碉堡了a妈蛋mapping果然也是天赋游戏;w;我只是个新人mapper而已。。。

顺便大触手（各种意义上的）赐我一发mutual吧 噗，，，你是哪儿冒出来看到我的orz

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hi, Mod4mod from my queue ~ :3


Normal:

1. 00:04:946 (4) - add nc on this sliderfixed
2. 00:10:164 (4) - ^fixed
3. 00:26:685 (4) - ^fixed
4. 00:32:772 (2,1) - switch ncfixed
5. 00:40:598 (3) - this slider would look and plays better if you do it like this http://puu.sh/3dLaH.jpg good suggestion, fixed
6. 00:51:468 (4) - this note would look better if you move it to x:340 y:188 fixed, and fixed some ds problem
7. 00:57:120 (4) - add nc here all nc problem after are fixed, some hitsound problem as well :3
8. 01:01:033 (4) - ^
9. 01:07:555 (5) - ^
10. 01:12:772 (5) - ^
11. 01:17:989 (5) - ^
12. 01:21:903 (4) - ^
13. 01:33:642 (5) - ^

Hard:

1. 00:02:990 (2) - move the 2nd slider point 3 grids down and 1 grid to the right lol, why u can apply this suggestion? i'm curious... fixed anyway D:
2. 00:08:207 (3) - move this slider to x:256 y:268, so the end can be stucked under 00:06:251 (3,6) - o.o thou they're not stack at that grid, i'll fixed this pattern well, thx :3
3. 00:08:859 (5) - add nc here hmm, nope, it's just fine D:
4. 00:09:729 (4) - this note will be more fun and playable if you move it to x:188 y:292 hmm, nope, i just want to make a shape that this note is fit to the bent of 00:10:164 (1) - , reject D:
5. 00:11:468 (5) - add nc here nope...
6. 00:17:990 (1) - move this note one grid up so it'll be lined with the other note lol, fixed
7. 01:33:642 (7) - add nc here fixed

Insane:
good insane o.o thx :3



That's all i found.... Good luck with your map :3 thx for ur modding

Setsurei wrote:

[General]
source > Touhou should be with capital Tlol, fixed

some suggestions

[Normal]
01:23:642 (6) - change to slider that ends here 01:24:511 - and add finish on tail and clap on both head and tail

SPOILER

good idea, fixed
01:24:946 (1,2) - fix this if you change ^^

[Hard]
01:01:033 (5,6) - ugly, change to this]sry for this bad pattern, i've fixed them into an other style, not urs thou. thx anyway. fixed things after as well D:

SPOILER

01:02:337 (7,8) - ^

SPOILER

01:21:903 (5,6) - ^
01:23:207 (7,8) - ^

Normal and Hard was modded before you update this and I was too lazy to mod them (because the placements are perfect, I can't find any)
anyway, I've updated the Insane and HW" that's all right, ur suggestions were just not be mentioned by other modders :3

[Insane]
01:00:816 (5) - don't put this too far from 01:00:164 (4) - not suit with the music x 448 y 228 hmm...alright, i'll take ur advice, even make this jump smaller D:
01:02:120 (9) - ^ x 256 y 308 nope, this is just fine D:
01:23:859 (4) - stack to 01:23:642 (3) - I think it's better lol, nope, those are just jumping pattern here. worse if stack some where, sry D:

[HW'']
these placements are on the same pattern, too far the flow isn't good lol, nope, they're just like that. Maybe to far to u, but i think that jump feel good to most pro players, me either. btw, they're just jumpings, not flow. I know this is difficult for noob players, this is a harder diff than insane thou. all i want to do is make these jumps more acceptable and players will feel good with these jumping patterns. thx for ur suggestion anyway. :3
00:54:729 (2) - x 176 y 96
00:57:337 (2) - x 128 y 112
00:59:946 (4) - x 160 y 160
01:02:555 (2) - x 304 y 16
01:05:164 (2) - x 40 y 256
01:15:598 (2) - x 184 y 168
01:18:207 (2) - x 200 y 336
01:20:816 (4) - x 160 y 352
01:23:424 (2) - x 456 y 272
01:26:033 (2) - x 136 y 304

I think that's all

I love the song, good luck for ranked i'm glad u like the song, and thx a lot for ur modding :3

rezoons wrote:

Just some precision about my mod:

Hollow Wings wrote:

[Personnal Opinion]

1. "Normal" and "Hard" are very good. The only problem i really have with thses diff is when you have to suddendly turn back like 01:04:077 (1,2,1) in your "Normal" diff. You're map has a very good fluidity and when i play your map it's like following a smooth curve and so it seems weird to play these sudden "turn auround".maybe that's a serious problem in normal and hard diff. actually i rarely play these diff, but insane or extra. so i'll consider your suggestion seriously D: I would like to precise that i played these diff with DT so maybe it's not a big problem at a normal speed but it's what i felt when playing with DTlol, i think these patterns won't be any problems to the players playing normal and hard diffs with dt. but anyway, rules are rules, i'll pay more attention to these things, thx a lot. :3
   
2. About "HM" well it's much better because the jump aren't more difficult than the "Insane" diff but seems easier since your map has a fast rythm. And i like it even if it's kinda awkward to have a fast map for a quiet song. But you're not the only to do it.
   And the combo color are kinda hard to read. Maybe make them a litlle bit darker. is that so? may a darker combo color be a good choice? as a player i must say that maybe the bright ones' better. hmm, let's see if an other modder mentioned this. D: Personally i think that bright combo goes with dark background and bright background with dark combos and since your background is really bright that's why i said that. But you can keep the combo like this. ^^hmm, that's really an useful suggestion to me, i'll consider seriously :3

[Insane]

1. 01:33:641 (1,2,3) - Jump x3 WTF. take it easy, just a difficult jump pattern, i don't think its an impossible one for pro players who can maybe fc this map or even with dt mode :3 Well, in fact i got an S at this diff at the first try so, it's not about the difficulty but really about the feeling.hmm... actually i set these three notes by feeling, too... maybe we just different style at this part... let's see if other modders mentioned this jump pattern XD

thank you very much for your good modding, your mod just amazed me! XD Well, i don't do that kind of mod often. It's really because i've seen that you made a really good map, that i really like the song and you did a M4M. But my mod are always less complete than this Is that so? then that's my honor XD

Hollow Wings wrote:

Zweib wrote:

wpcap神图来支持下orz

其实看了下thread感觉有点出乎意料说的都很有道理的不是么

我觉得这个碉堡了a妈蛋mapping果然也是天赋游戏;w;我只是个新人mapper而已。。。

顺便大触手（各种意义上的）赐我一发mutual吧 噗，，，你是哪儿冒出来看到我的orz

ts8zs wrote:

约好的交网费wwwwww
背景质量提高了……图的质量也提高了那就好orz
HW
AR这么高用往返梗没问题么……比如
00:54:946 (3) - 这个在384,160是不是会舒服一点……？跳大了ar才需要高，这个图ar8老实说我读起来也有点累，本来我想bpm138用ar9是不是有点太高了，但经过很多人试玩后发现不然。正因为跳大，bpm又低，所以才需要高ar，为此我hp和od都设置得很低。至于这个跳，你那样摆虽然也不错，不过我还是倾向于原状
01:32:337 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里应该朝上舒服一点故意那么摆的，为了一个折返跳
IS
00:36:685 (1) - Ctrl+Gnope
00:37:120 (2,3,4) - 分别Ctrl+Gnope
00:59:294 (1,2,3) - 为什么突然顺时针了啊……突然么？
01:01:033 (6) - Ctrl+Gnope
01:01:685 (7,8,9,10) - Ctrl+H虽然看上去不错，但是和01:00:164 (4,5) - 感觉差距太大了，所以依旧reject
01:31:033 (1) - Ctrl+Gnope
HD
00:29:729 (5) - 这个东西想办法去掉就perfect了嗯没拿掉，改了下形状
NM
这是EZ吧！！！居然说这是easy？那我把cs改小一号
01:08:859 (3) - 第二个点128,80第三个152,120fixed
01:21:033 (3) - 诶……改一下吧……第二个点和第三个点适当改改后面都不用动这个怎么改。。。
01:23:642 (4) - 最好别这么做……如果你把这个名改成EZ？NM也不推荐其实……fixed
01:54:511 - 最后改成转盘怎么样nope
我来补个normal吧= =b第一张图不想要GD呢。。。以后吧

Sieg wrote:

Hallo

General:
BG quality is really poor try to find better one all right then

Normal:
OD+1fixed
00:54:077 (1) - NC here make no differences... but fixed
01:28:424 (1) - maybe try http://puu.sh/3fprn.jpg for better flowhmm... ok, fixed
01:33:642 (1,2,3) - this also not a great flow especially for normal, maybe http://puu.sh/3fpsR.jpg alright
01:55:486 (2) - add finish on slider's end nope

Hard:
OD+1 fixed
00:27:120 (1,2) - that fells strange, not really follows anything in music and suitable for overall style of your hard actually they follow the violin, and they are just patterns
01:10:816 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:12:120 (7,8) - ^^
01:31:685 (4,5) - and here too^
00:54:511 (1) - better to place NC on 00:54:946 (2) - instead of 1 nope
01:15:381 (1) - ^ ^
01:54:998 (4) - finish like on normal ^

Insane:
00:40:164 (1) - this SV changes seems for me not related too music at all :\ that notice for hard diff too but it's more noticeably on insane why u get notice like that D:
01:12:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - you made a good insane on calm music with good jumps and this stream is really overdone :\ same goes for repeat slider the only stream in this diff, just a pattern, take it easy
01:34:077 (3,4,5) - ^
01:55:974 (1) - finish here nope

well, I like this 3 diffs didn't like the last one? :3
oh and... good hitsounds :3 lol, maybe it is
Good Luck! thx for modding

1. Romanised title is: Sky of Scarlet Perception according to most famous Touhou websites
2. Two more combo-colors will be better.
3. It should be th10.5 in tags, I guess
4. I don't see the need of Tenshi Hinanawi in tags because it's just the title screen theme (btw add Tasofro to tags, because Twilight Frontier)

• 
  Uh.. you could rename it Lunatic, would fit better

1. 00:44:077 (1) - Remove this new combo

1. 00:54:946 (2) - Bad shape, make slider more symmetrical
2. 00:56:251 (6) - ^
3. 01:00:164 (4) - ^
4. 01:01:033 (6) - ^
   You should rework on sliders' shape, they seems they are done in a fast and unaccurate way

1. 01:19:077 (7) - Move a little on the right

• 
  CS-1

Leader wrote:

Hello, M4M from my Modding Queue

[General]

1. Romanised title is: Sky of Scarlet Perception according to most famous Touhou websites hmm... idk that before, and i think it'll be a diffcult work to change the romanised title... can u tell me how to change it?
2. Two more combo-colors will be better. hmm... i do this map only two combo color on purpose, and i don't think it troubled. D:
3. It should be th10.5 in tags, I guess fixed
4. I don't see the need of Tenshi Hinanawi in tags because it's just the title screen theme (btw add Tasofro to tags, because Twilight Frontier) u r right, all fixed

[HW]

• 
  Uh.. you could rename it Lunatic, would fit better lol, i just want make some of the diff's name special...

1. 00:44:077 (1) - Remove this new combo fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:54:946 (2) - Bad shape, make slider more symmetrical
2. 00:56:251 (6) - ^
3. 01:00:164 (4) - ^
4. 01:01:033 (6) - ^
   You should rework on sliders' shape, they seems they are done in a fast and unaccurate way fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:19:077 (7) - Move a little on the right fixed

[Normal]

• 
  CS-1 seems like a easy diff? lol

Very good beatmap, you mapped a particular (and quite boring) song in a way it makes the map enjoyable. It still needs some work but I want to see it ranked, so good luck :3 thx for ur modding! i'll try my best to get it ranked. :3

Hollow Wings wrote:

Leader wrote:

[General]

1. Romanised title is: Sky of Scarlet Perception according to most famous Touhou websites hmm... idk that before, and i think it'll be a diffcult work to change the romanised title... can u tell me how to change it?

It's simple

Leader wrote:

It's simple

Armin wrote:

....but it's not impossible
Try with uploading the map after you changed the title WITHOUT saving it.

1. 01:05:164 (4) - add 这难度是怎么回事 全是1/1 到底是normal还是hard.... 还是多塞点拍子吧 以现在这状态难以MOD

1. 00:47:555 (3) - ctrl g 00:47:990 (4) - 这个也换一下位置
2. 00:53:098 (7) - add, stack with 00:53:207 (8) -
3. 01:00:816 (5) - x 342 y 373
4. 01:10:164 (3) - HW2
5. 01:15:381 (3) - 我觉得这边开始用3/4的滑条比较好
6. 01:31:685 (2) -
7. 01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条

1. 00:06:903 (7) - HW1
2. 00:38:207 (8) - 移开别stack
   Good stuff

Chloe wrote:

hi there, as your pm request~

And just some suggestions, not necessary. : )

[Hard]

1. 01:05:164 (4) - add 这难度是怎么回事 全是1/1 到底是normal还是hard.... 还是多塞点拍子吧 以现在这状态难以MOD 这里要改什么。。。顺便，这个图移动不算小吧，多塞拍子也感觉有点多余。。。有些梗normal也不能有的吧，我再观望一下

[Insane]

1. 00:47:555 (3) - ctrl g 00:47:990 (4) - 这个也换一下位置 reject，这就是个梗
2. 00:53:098 (7) - add, stack with 00:53:207 (8) - 蓝线开打大丈夫？和8 stack因为有人说看不见8所以特意分开了，不过更多人建议stack，所以还是叠起来吧
3. 01:00:816 (5) - x 342 y 373 我也觉得这么摆比较好，奈何前面有人叫我改近一点。。。既然你这么说了那我就改回来
4. 01:10:164 (3) - HW2 嗯？
5. 01:15:381 (3) - 我觉得这边开始用3/4的滑条比较好 前面又有人说3/4不好。。。orz，我琢磨了一下这里相比3/4还是用1/2比较好，所以还是这样吧
6. 01:31:685 (2) - 嗯？？
7. 01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条 纳尼？？5,6是note吧？D:

[HW``]

1. 00:06:903 (7) - HW1 咦？老实说真心不懂orz
2. 00:38:207 (8) - 移开别stack fixed
   Good stuff

GL thx for modding

Hollow Wings wrote:

Chloe wrote:

hi there, as your pm request~

And just some suggestions, not necessary. : )

[Hard]

1. 01:05:164 (4) - add 这难度是怎么回事 全是1/1 到底是normal还是hard.... 还是多塞点拍子吧 以现在这状态难以MOD 这里要改什么。。。顺便，这个图移动不算小吧，多塞拍子也感觉有点多余。。。有些梗normal也不能有的吧，我再观望一下

[Insane]

1. 00:47:555 (3) - ctrl g 00:47:990 (4) - 这个也换一下位置 reject，这就是个梗
2. 00:53:098 (7) - add, stack with 00:53:207 (8) - 蓝线开打大丈夫？和8 stack因为有人说看不见8所以特意分开了，不过更多人建议stack，所以还是叠起来吧
3. 01:00:816 (5) - x 342 y 373 我也觉得这么摆比较好，奈何前面有人叫我改近一点。。。既然你这么说了那我就改回来
4. 01:10:164 (3) - HW2 嗯？ 啊 这个http://puu.sh/3gWQD.png
5. 01:15:381 (3) - 我觉得这边开始用3/4的滑条比较好 前面又有人说3/4不好。。。orz，我琢磨了一下这里相比3/4还是用1/2比较好，所以还是这样吧
6. 01:31:685 (2) - 嗯？？ 这边我想了下应该是建议取消滑条后面的那个NOTE 然后滑条移到后面的白线 红线加个单点
7. 01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条 纳尼？？5,6是note吧？D: 对 我的意思是这里换成一根滑条

[HW``]

1. 00:06:903 (7) - HW1 咦？老实说真心不懂orz 这边.. 我想不起来了
2. 00:38:207 (8) - 移开别stack fixed
   Good stuff

GL thx for modding