Irreversible wrote:

Hey, from my queue :3



[General]

I can't mod taiko, thats why i'll skip it :3

[Easy]

00:18:730 (4) - 4 should be placed under 3, not above 3 Fixed
00:49:946 (1) - replace this with 2 circles, to follow the rhythm I think slider is better at that point

Well, the diff is nicely done, but the rhythm placed in the kiai time is a bit weird. try to improve it yourself, if you need any further help feel free to pm me ingame ^^ i'll help you more there I think we may discuss it ingame

[Normal]

00:02:717 (5) - double reverse isn't a good idea :c Fixed
00:24:406 (3,4,5,1,2,1,2) - in this part, you used way too many sliders, try to reduce them, and place some circles. if you ran out of ideas, you can ask me still thinking about it, I may ask you ingame
01:22:176 (1,2,3,4) - number 1 looks a bit wrong placed, make it look like a diamond Fixed


[Sora]

00:22:784 (1,2,4) - This looks a bit weird.. maybe try another pattern, where the sliders don't touch each other like this It seems fine to me
00:40:419 (4) - make this look a bit rounder?1) delete it 2) make it new, but only with one white point Fixed
01:04:136 (4) - press ctrl + h, ctrl +j, and then place it to x: 348 and y: 352 It is weird in my view
01:24:406 (1,2) - i miss some finishes here Fixed


call me for a recheck if you made the changes, especially in the kiai time of easy!

0gre wrote:

Mod Req ~

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]

MOD information

* 00:28:054 ●
* 00:28:257 a gap
* 00:50:554 ● ● ●
* 00:52:379 ● ●　　● ● ◎
* 00:55:115 combo here added k between d dkd=>dkdkd
* 00:55:926 same above added d between d kdkdd=>ddkdkdd
* 01:17:717 ●
* 01:18:730 or 01:18:933 try to prevent having a gap looking like this => added d at 01:18:730
* 01:20:757 ●

please have a check ~

1. 00:02:109 - Add circle
2. 00:02:311 (6) - move to be symmetrical
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:05:960 (1) - move to y=48
4. 00:24:811 (5,6,7) - Out of the grid, can you move a bit?
5. 00:52:176 (3,4,5) - move to the right 1 grid

1. 00:25:217 (5) - Add NC
2. 00:51:771 (4) - Add NC
3. 00:51:973 (1) - Remove NC
4. 01:19:541 (1,2) - move 1 grid down

1. 00:08:190 (1,1) - Are theese 2 sliders suposed to be symmetrical? if yes, move any of them
2. 01:21:568 (3) - move to the right 1 grid (you maybe need to move 01:19:541 (1,2) aswell)

Drianel wrote:

Hello from my mod queue :3

[[[[ OVERALL ]]]]

Well, this map is almost perfect!! i love it but here are some suggestions and minor fixes okay? let's go

[[[[ Sora ]]]]

(grid level = 4)

1. 00:02:109 - Add circle No, it is not fit imo
2. 00:02:311 (6) - move to be symmetrical Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:05:960 (1) - move to y=48 It is already
4. 00:24:811 (5,6,7) - Out of the grid, can you move a bit? Fixed
5. 00:52:176 (3,4,5) - move to the right 1 grid Fixed

[[[[ Normal ]]]]

1. 00:25:217 (5) - Add NC Fixed
2. 00:51:771 (4) - Add NC Fixed
3. 00:51:973 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
4. 01:19:541 (1,2) - move 1 grid down Fixed

[[[[ Easy ]]]]

1. 00:08:190 (1,1) - Are theese 2 sliders suposed to be symmetrical? if yes, move any of them Fixed
2. 01:21:568 (3) - move to the right 1 grid (you maybe need to move 01:19:541 (1,2) aswell) Change some placement at this part

That's all, good luck with your map meetmeetdee



- Drianel -

EmingK wrote:

Mod Request from Poor Modding Team
懒死我得了。。= =
专注渣mod三十年>_<

[Easy]
00:00:082 (1) - 头加whistle 不太合適imo
00:02:717 (4) - 尾加whistle [color=#FF0000加了clap[/color]
00:54:811 (1) - Add a finish on repeat #1 (at 00:55:216). 加了
01:09:406 (4) - 【不改也行】bracket有点歪 Fixed
01:16:298 (1) - 头加finish Fixed

[Normal]
00:00:082 (1) - 头加whistle 不太合適imo
00:42:041 (1) - 头加finish 加了
00:43:460 (2,3) - (2)往上一点，(3)头部也往上一点，使整个轨迹在一条弧线上 Fixed
00:47:109 (1) - kiai的滑条体上适当加些whistle吧。。尤其是长滑条，没音效会很别扭，比如下面几个 再想想看
00:51:973 (2) 00:56:027 (2) 00:58:460 (1) 01:00:081 (1)
01:03:325 (1) 01:06:365 (6) 01:12:852 (3) 01:24:406 (1)

[Sora]
00:00:082 (1) - whistle. 不太合適imo
00:02:919 (6) - whistle. [color=#FF0000加了clap[/color]
00:20:149 (3,4) - (3)跟(2)没对上，动完 (3)动下(4) Fixed
00:21:365 (1) - 没叠好 Fixed
00:51:973 (2) - whistle. 不太合適imo
01:12:852 (4) - 长滑条没声不觉得很奇怪么0w0 加个whistle吧（同normal）Fixed
01:18:527 (7) & 01:25:014 (2) - ↑ （这滑条不长的喵。。 不太合適imo
01:24:406 (1) - 【不改也行】尾端结点往下拽一格 Fixed

and no black

1. 01:27:649 - 我覺得kiai在這裡停比較好 不用這麼早停
2. Audio Lead-In 2500就夠了 不必到3

1. 00:00:082 - 20%大概就夠了 30%把soft-hitnormal的聲音弄得很吵
2. 00:17:919 (9) - 去finish 挺吵
3. 00:34:946 - ^
4. 00:32:109 (4,5,6) - 等距
5. 00:40:419 (4) - 這好醜 建議重拉
6. 00:42:852 (3,5) - 頭都上finish 音樂裡有
7. 00:58:054 (6) - 這裡跳得太突然了 前面00:57:041 (2,3) - 也沒有跳 建議ctrl+G
8. 00:59:068 (2) - / 01:06:365 (8) - / 01:08:798 (6) - / 01:09:609 (8) - / 01:12:041 (2) - / 01:25:014 (2,3) - +finish
9. 01:23:392 (2,3,4,5,1) - 試著用polygon circles擺擺看 (ctrl+alt+D)
10. 01:26:433 (6) - 去clap 已經到後面的安靜段了就顯得很多餘

1. 00:40:622 (3) - 這個拉長1/2移到00:40:419 - (跟00:42:041 (1) - 差不多)
2. 01:06:365 (6) - 頭上Finish

1. 00:42:041 - / 00:44:473 - / 01:25:419 (2) - Finish

Flask wrote:

我也專注渣mod30年 ;__; XD
Mod request from my Mod Queue.

[General]

1. 01:27:649 - 我覺得kiai在這裡停比較好 不用這麼早停 OK
2. Audio Lead-In 2500就夠了 不必到3 Fixed

[Sora]

1. 00:00:082 - 20%大概就夠了 30%把soft-hitnormal的聲音弄得很吵 Fixed
2. 00:17:919 (9) - 去finish 挺吵 Fixed
3. 00:34:946 - ^ Fixed
4. 00:32:109 (4,5,6) - 等距 Fixed
5. 00:40:419 (4) - 這好醜 建議重拉 Fixed
6. 00:42:852 (3,5) - 頭都上finish 音樂裡有 Fixed
7. 00:58:054 (6) - 這裡跳得太突然了 前面00:57:041 (2,3) - 也沒有跳 建議ctrl+G Fixed，但不是ctrl+G
8. 00:59:068 (2) - / 01:06:365 (8) - / 01:08:798 (6) - / 01:09:609 (8) - / 01:12:041 (2) - / 01:25:014 (2,3) - +finish Fixed
9. 01:23:392 (2,3,4,5,1) - 試著用polygon circles擺擺看 (ctrl+alt+D) Fixed
10. 01:26:433 (6) - 去clap 已經到後面的安靜段了就顯得很多餘 Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:40:622 (3) - 這個拉長1/2移到00:40:419 - (跟00:42:041 (1) - 差不多) OK
2. 01:06:365 (6) - 頭上Finish OK

[Easy]

1. 00:42:041 - / 00:44:473 - / 01:25:419 (2) - Finish OK, 但最後那一個用了Whistle

做的滿好的 比起那個夏娜來講 o.o 加油!

• Unrankable
  You Need to Change/Add this
  It'll be better if you follow this
  Suggestions

- t e n n y a - wrote:

from my queue (request by Zero__wind)

Modding Guide:

• Unrankable
  You Need to Change/Add this
  It'll be better if you follow this
  Suggestions

General

1. Nothing

Easy

1. 00:54:811 (1,2)- : I'm sure you can make better shape of this 2 sliders. Like this perhaps? Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

   448,224,54811,6,0,P|464:272|448:324,2,100,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   360,272,56027,2,0,P|344:224|360:172,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:01:703 (4)- : remove whistle from the body, its noisy x_x Fixed
3. 01:07:784 (1)- : NC should be at 01:08:190 (2)- Fixed

Normal

1. Nice BG x_x XD
2. 00:03:325 (6)- : place this at x396 y160 would be good Fixed
3. 00:37:379 (3)- : Copy previous slider at 00:35:757 (1) and paste it here would be good! Fixed
4. 00:40:419 (3)- : Add Finish at slider's head Fixed
5. 01:01:703 (4)- : remove whistle from the body, noisy x_x Fixed
6. 01:03:933 (2)- : Unstack this slider. Player can confuse to play at this part since at previous part you didn't use stacked slider Fixed
7. 01:18:325 (4)- : copy previous slider 01:17:514 and paste it right here would be good Fixed

Sora

1. 00:03:325 (1)- : add Additions set to Normal and low the volume -5%? Fixed
2. 00:55:014 (3)- : remove finish from slider head and add finish at slider tail? Fixed
3. 01:12:852 (4)- : remove whistle from the body its noisy x_x Fixed
4. Good diff actually

that's all I can find, good luck

Naryuga wrote:

Hello! from my Taiko modding queue~

Marks:
"d" = don (red note)
"k" = kat (blue note)
"D" = Big Don (red + finisher)
"K" = Big Kat (blue + finisher)
"^" = "same as above"

here we go!

Nardo's Taiko Oni

1. 00:05:554 (18) - k..?
2. 00:14:473 - I want d here with the bass drum
3. 01:18:730 (343) - I prefer moving this to 01:18:933 - owo

That's all from me. Good luck!

Naryuga wrote:

SPOILER

Hello! from my Taiko modding queue~

Marks:
"d" = don (red note)
"k" = kat (blue note)
"D" = Big Don (red + finisher)
"K" = Big Kat (blue + finisher)
"^" = "same as above"

here we go!

Lunasa's Muzukashii

1. 00:18:831 (3) - delete this? sounds a bit excessive...
2. 00:22:784 (1) - a finisher here? You put finishes on 00:21:163 (1) - , 00:21:771 (1) - and 00:22:379 (1) - so I want here, too
3. 00:28:865 (1) - remove the finish? well here the drum sounds a bit louder than the other place but I don't like the big note here because the big KAT's sound is much lighter during playing than when you hear in the editor. Small k is enough here, in my opinion
4. 00:31:906 (2) - I'm not sure why finish is on this note
5. 00:33:325 (1,1,2) - I prefer d k k here
6. 00:34:642 (1,2) - delete these notes, no sounds follow here. follow the vocal.
7. 00:40:217 (1) - remove the finish -> 00:40:419 (1) - add it here instead. It sounds very weird to me...
8. 00:42:244 (1) - delete this in order to fit the vocal
9. 00:43:054 (2) - if you follow the ^ suggestion, maybe deleting this note sounds good to emphasize 00:42:852 (1) -
10. 00:44:676 (1) - delete this and add k k k like your Oni diff. The drumroll to spin sounds really devastating for this quiet part...
11. KIAI time - please stop abusing to use big notes, it really sounds bad when used wrongly, because too much big notes is too loud... I'll suggest removing finishers from some notes
12. 00:47:717 (1) - remove the finisher, small d is enough here. You can add it on 00:47:109 (2) - instead to fit the symbal
13. 00:49:338 (1) - remove the finish
14. 00:50:960 (1) - ^
15. 00:51:973 (3) - ^
16. 00:57:446 (1) - ^
17. 01:00:690 (1) - ^ and you can add it on 00:59:473 (1) -
18. 00:59:676 (1) - move to 00:59:879 - to emphasize 00:59:473 (1) -
19. 01:02:514 (2) - move to 01:02:311 - to follow the drum
20. 01:07:379 (2,3,1,1) - before[ddk d] -> after[ddd k]?
21. 01:11:433 (1) - add finish?
22. 01:14:271 - add k here (and remove 01:14:879 (2) - not to the stream too long?)
23. 01:20:757 (1,1,1) - this pattern may be hard for this Muzu diff even with the low BPM because many notes around this... I'll suggest making this ddd to be easier or deleting 01:20:859 (1) -

Lunasa's Oni

1. 00:22:784 (1,2,1) - delete 00:22:886 (2,1) - and add finisher on 00:22:784 (1) - ? triplets from white tick often doesn't sounds well and this is the case.
2. 00:42:244 (1) - delete this to fit the vocal?
3. 00:46:602 - you can add extra d here
4. 00:47:109 (4,5,6,1) - [kdd k] -> [k dd sounds better, as 00:49:946 (1,2,3,1) - does so
5. 00:55:622 (1,2,1,2) - [ddk k] -> [d kkk]?
6. 01:11:433 (1) - add finish

Nardo's Taiko Oni

1. 00:05:554 (18) - k..?
2. 00:14:473 - I want d here with the bass drum
3. 01:18:730 (343) - I prefer moving this to 01:18:933 - owo

I had a look at the standard diffs, just found a whistle at 00:54:203 (4) - (Sora diff) on the slider way sounds somehow strange to me o.o Others looks fine

That's all from me. Good luck!

1. Why different bg in all diffs? You can just use one and make file size a bit lower.
2. All BGs are 800x600. You can try to find a 1024x768 version so the quality won't be so low.

1. 00:47:109 (1) - Spacing
2. 00:51:973 (1) - Spacing
3. 01:06:163 (4,5) - This sounds bad. Invert the note/slider order to this:
   
4. 01:20:352 (2) - This slider overlaps with 01:18:325 (4) - Please fix it.

1. 00:56:027 (2,3,4) - This sounds bad. Try these notes:
   
2. 01:22:176 (1,2,3) - Too hard for a normal. Change (2) and (3) for a 1/2 slider

1. The spacing is so unconcistest in this diff. Hard/Insane diff must have some logical order too. Please try work a little on this.
2. Try to find a better bg for this diff. Look at the left side of this screenshot: http://puu.sh/36wxD.png That white spot looks really ugly in widescreen
3. 00:05:149 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same pattern but with different spacing. Use consisten spacing here please.
4. 00:37:581 (1,2,3) - Nazi. Move: (1): x:248 y:188 (2) x:192 y:288 (3)x:308 y:288
5. 00:51:973 (2,3,4,5) - Nazi again. Move (2)x:12 y:120 (3)x:104 y56 (4)x:200 y:120 (5)x:296 y:56
6. 01:04:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Such a bad placing. Try this code. It fixes all making a square with 1,2,3,4,5 and a triangle with 6 7 and 8.
   
   Code

   272,344,64744,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   152,344,64946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   216,240,65149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   96,248,65352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   216,240,65554,2,0,P|188:208|152:188,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   64,112,65960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   160,40,66163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   252,112,66365,2,2,P|316:152|372:248,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Zeroarg wrote:

Hi and sorry for huge delay. a lot of problems came to me.

Mod from my queue

[General]

1. Why different bg in all diffs? You can just use one and make file size a bit lower.
2. All BGs are 800x600. You can try to find a 1024x768 version so the quality won't be so low.

[Easy]

1. 00:47:109 (1) - Spacing
2. 00:51:973 (1) - Spacing
3. 01:06:163 (4,5) - This sounds bad. Invert the note/slider order to this:
   
4. 01:20:352 (2) - This slider overlaps with 01:18:325 (4) - Please fix it.

[Normal]

1. 00:56:027 (2,3,4) - This sounds bad. Try these notes:
   
2. 01:22:176 (1,2,3) - Too hard for a normal. Change (2) and (3) for a 1/2 slider

[Sora]

1. The spacing is so unconcistest in this diff. Hard/Insane diff must have some logical order too. Please try work a little on this.
2. Try to find a better bg for this diff. Look at the left side of this screenshot: http://puu.sh/36wxD.png That white spot looks really ugly in widescreen
3. 00:05:149 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same pattern but with different spacing. Use consisten spacing here please.
4. 00:37:581 (1,2,3) - Nazi. Move: (1): x:248 y:188 (2) x:192 y:288 (3)x:308 y:288
5. 00:51:973 (2,3,4,5) - Nazi again. Move (2)x:12 y:120 (3)x:104 y56 (4)x:200 y:120 (5)x:296 y:56
6. 01:04:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Such a bad placing. Try this code. It fixes all making a square with 1,2,3,4,5 and a triangle with 6 7 and 8.
   
   Code

   272,344,64744,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   152,344,64946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   216,240,65149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   96,248,65352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   216,240,65554,2,0,P|188:208|152:188,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   64,112,65960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   160,40,66163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   252,112,66365,2,2,P|316:152|372:248,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Lunasa's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:09:811 (2) Add NC to spinner? tbh I dunno anything about Taiko but this is what AIBAT suggested.

The map needs some more work, specially Sora diff. Good luck and bye o3o

Satellite wrote:

hi

[General]
BG (Lunasa's Taiko) is unrankable should be change 1024/768 Fixed
I think AudioLeadIn: 2500 is so long → change 2000 is better 2500 seems better imo

[Sora]
AR-1? OK
00:00:487 (2,6) - clap is not fit? change whistle is better OK
00:05:149 (4) - add whistle? OK
00:09:203 - add note? OK
00:16:298 (6) - first point add whistle? OK
00:20:757 (4) - last point add finish is better 00:21:163 - here OK
00:22:176 (3) - add clap 00:22:379 - here? OK
00:25:014 (6,7) - hummm.. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. current one is better in my view

00:27:446 (4) - last point 00:27:649 - here add whistle is fit. OK
00:32:514 (6) - add whistle? 00:32:514 - here OK
00:34:541 (1) - try this. sounds good

00:35:757 (4) - first point add whistle OK
00:39:000 (1,2) - first point add finish is better~ (00:39:000 - and 00:39:609 - )here Add for the first one
00:41:940 - add note. OK
00:44:473 (1) - last point remove whistle? OK
00:51:973 (2) - add finish OK
00:52:987 (1) - last point add finish 00:53:392 - here it isn't fit imo
01:04:946 (2) - add finish it isn't fit imo

I think. You should give more add whistle
but, really nice map~

[Hard]
00:00:082 (1,5) - remove clap change whistle? OK
00:08:190 (1) - ^ OK
00:25:419 (2) - remove note OK
00:51:973 (2) - add finish 00:58:460 - here OK

good

[Easy]
00:02:717 (4) - same other diff OK
00:08:190 (1) - ^ OK
00:17:514 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. OK

00:35:757 (2) - add NewCombo? your Pattern OK
00:58:460 (1) - add finish remove whistle OK

other good~

good luck~

SPOILER

224,328,41636,1,2,0:0:0:0:
229,299,41737,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,271,41838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,247,41940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,42041,6,0,P|152:176|184:120,1,128,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Setsurei wrote:

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some suggestions

[Easy]
00:01:500 (2) - slider's tail move 2 grid to the right (grid level 4)
00:02:311 (3,4) - move according to the snap if you change ^
00:27:649 (1) - slider's center move to the left 1 grid, slider's tail move 2 grids up and 2 grids to the left (a perfect blanket)
00:30:487 (2) - move all component of slider down by 1 grid
00:31:298 (3,4) - fix spacing

[Normal]
01:06:365 (6) - slider's tail move up 1 grid and right 1 grid

[Sora]
00:41:636 (5,6,7,8,1) - I think this placement is better

SPOILER

224,328,41636,1,2,0:0:0:0:
229,299,41737,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,271,41838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,247,41940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,42041,6,0,P|152:176|184:120,1,128,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

I think that's all, nice song and good luck!

mingmichael wrote:

heeyy meet here the mods that you requested to me

Nardo's Taiko Oni

1. how about 00:17:717 (37,38,39) - kkd? fixed
2. move 00:23:291 (63) - to 00:23:494 (64) - fixed
3. 00:29:879 (99) - k? for vocal sound there fixed
4. how about 00:34:946 (125,126,127) - kkd? fixed
5. 00:52:075 (208) - k? used kdk instead of kkd
6. 00:55:318 (223,224) - dk. it's too boring use dkdkd for stream fixed
7. 00:56:331 (231) - k
8. move 01:02:007 (258) - to 01:01:804 (257) - fixed
9. 01:05:960 (276,277) - k and d
10. dkdkd again here? 01:12:244 (306,307,308,309,310) - hmm how about kkdkk? fixed
11. 01:17:413 (336) - k? fixed

hope it's usefull >w<

Cream Vie wrote:

d=small red
D=Big red
k=small blue
K=big blue

Nardo's oni(突然发觉→.→~竟然是...~啊哈哈~)
00:13:054 (18) - k
00:20:554 (49) - D
00:37:987 (141) - D fixed
00:59:473 (246) - D fixed
= =
这已经很完整了WOW~

可以map一下我的吗?http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/123836

gideon5504 wrote:

Easy:
~00:42:041 - It's easy diff,try to stick to 1/1 beat notes. I think it is fine as there is enough time for player to react
~I dun see anything else

Normal:
~I dun see any problems here 0.o

Sora:
~00:38:291 (4) - A bit hard to read that,what about anapping it on to 1/1 beat? http://puu.sh/3oDGV.jpg The pattern now seems better imo, but i change a little bit on the placement
~00:41:636 (5) - NC here to make it easier to read stream. OK

That's all from me ^^ Good luck!

CDFA wrote:

OH NO =.=

Overall:
Idunno the green combocolor seems like a weird choice.

Hard:
00:00:690 (3) - Move the midpoint down so this is symmetrical. Fixed
00:02:919 (6) - Um you can just make this a blanketed note around (5) since like the spacing here is so misleading. OK
00:21:365 (1) - Add a hitnormal on the repeat of this slider, since there is a snare drum entering on this note. OK
00:54:203 (4) - Um make this perpendicular to (3). Fixed

Normal:
Idunno it seems very 1/1y in the verses, which is ok but it's not like very fun to play. OK I have change some pattern in this diff
00:00:690 (2) - Rather than doing this manually, take (1), copy-paste it, press CTRL + H, then CTRL + G, and fix spacing then boom, pretty pretty. Fixed
01:01:703 (4) - Construct this with just one sliderpoint Fixed

Easy:
00:00:082 (1) - Move the midpoint to x72y16 to make it more symmetrical Fixed
00:42:041 (1) - Move this downward so the beginning of the slider is horizontal to the end of the previous slider Fixed
00:57:649 (5) - Move to x296y96 to make a pretty pretty diamond shape thing Fixed

OEvil wrote:

Hi!
Sorry if my mod sucks

[SB/BGs]
Unused Image Files
bg (easy).jpg
bg (hard).jpg
bg (taiko muzukashii).jpg
bg (taiko oni).jpg
bg(normal).jpg Some files do not exsist

[All Difficulties]
Tags
- Consider adding "Lunasa" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags I think they are not needed as they are not the name for the GD mapper

[Easy]
Edits
- 00:53:595 (3) - Hold it and click Ctrl + Shift + R And This → → http://puu.sh/3wr3Q.png OK

[Normal]
Edits
- 00:14:271 (7) - Make it like this: http://puu.sh/3wrc9.jpg I perfer the current one
- 00:15:081 - Add circle here I want to make a rest there
- 00:26:433 (3) - Remove this circle. OK
- 00:26:433 - Add a slider from here until 00:26:838, with a clap on the start. OK

[Sora]
Edits
- AR: +1 Please OK

I am so sorry >//<

jonathanlfj wrote:

From my modding queue
oh its this song again ><

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
The white combo colour is too hard to see with the video and very flashy during the kiai, give it a shade of grey to tone it down a bit

[Easy]
sv a bit fast for Easy, but not a big problem
00:09:811 (1) - whistle on start
00:13:054 (3) - NC
00:29:271 (1) - maybe a finish on the start?
00:35:757 (1) - whistle on start
00:43:460 (2) - feels more comfortable if you shorten this to 00:43:663 to follow the vocals
00:51:973 (1,2) - arrange this so 00:53:190 (2) overlaps 00:50:352 (2)
01:16:298 (1,3) - the curves on these are overdone, make them flatter so the blanket on 01:17:109 (2) looks more natural

[Normal]
00:03:325 (6) - NC
00:18:730 (6) - place this here for a better flow:

SPOILER

00:31:298 (1) - take off NC
00:37:379 (3) - take off the finish on the start, the finish plays at 00:37:176 in the music which makes this finish sound weird
00:43:460 (3) - clap
00:45:487 - add a 5% volume inherited section here to mute the spinner spin sound, since the music halts here (you can restore the volume at 00:46:298 (1))
00:58:460 (1) - curve this so it blankets 00:59:676 (2)
01:08:190 (2) - use finish instead?
01:22:176 (1,2) - how bout a repeat slider instead? the flow is a bit difficult to grasp here since its closer to the end of 01:21:365 (3) which is a repeat slider

[Sora]
i would go with AR7 here, but up to you
00:03:325 (1) - up to 00:09:406 (7), the clap sounds you put on the 2/4 white ticks are not very fitting to the violin solo, i would say just remove them and use just whistles here
00:17:919 (9) - spacing, try overlap with 00:16:095 (5)
00:19:541 (2) - whistle sounds better than finish on the start here
00:27:446 (4) - ctrl+g gives a better flow here imo
00:29:271 (5) - add finish on start
00:38:291 (4) - try stacking this on 00:38:392 (5)
00:42:041 (1) - take off NC here and place it at 00:43:663 (5) instead
00:59:980 - add a note here to cover for the drums
01:02:919 (1,2,3) - these 3 should look the same (use ctrl+cv and then rotation by 120 degrees)
01:17:311 (4) - the flow here is disturbed by the pause on the overlap, try something like this:

SPOILER

01:20:352 (1) - take off the finish on start, sounds a bit unfitting here

Thats all, good luck on ranking~

meetmeetdee wrote:

OEvil wrote:

[All Difficulties]
Tags
- Consider adding "Lunasa" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags I think they are not needed as they are not the name for the GD mapper

yurunneram wrote:

EASY

Nothin here

NORMAL

I suggest you follow the voice more for the earlier parts of the song. If not then it gets a bit boring. Other than that, nothing much

HARD

00:18:122 (1,2,3) - Make it wrap around 00:17:919 (9) nicer OK

00:22:176 (3) - Delete repeat I think thaere should be a repeat

00:34:541 (1) - Shift to x252 y124 I don't see the reason of shifting it

00:38:291 (4) - Didn't see the purpose of this note. Delete I perfer keeping it, may consider it later

Not much :/ Sry

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram

HelloSCV wrote:

here's your ticket

General

1. 01:28:054 - try to move kiai end on this time, since there is an object on kiai start and end

Easy

00:43:460 (2) - finish on end( if you add finish on Noraml diff )
01:17:514 (3) - i think hitsounds on this slider are reversed
01:20:352 (2) - finish on end

Normal

00:43:663 (4) - finish on start?

Sora

00:20:757 (4) - clap on start? feels nice
00:34:946 (2) - if you want to fit with vocal, make 3/4 slider and 00:35:554 (3) - delete this note?
01:03:730 (3) - missed clap on start
01:12:852 (4) - finish on start?
01:20:352 (1) - delete NC and 01:21:163 (3) - add NC

not many problems lol

good luck~